Super gross... if he fingers her underwater, I may seriously throw up. The picture of Aro on your banner gives me the creeps- and it fits perfectly- it's just how I would imagine him in the story.

Gross... I seriously just vomited in my mouth. I'm ready for Charlie to find her already... and for Felix or whoever it was (can't remember) that he ran into to lead him there.

I also would love more Edward/Bella interaction- we've gotten teases so far, but I would like to see them interact more.

I would have also loved to get into Aro's head in terms of how he started this cult and everything... obviously, he's a sociopath,  but how did he begin it? How did he originally convince his first followers? You've cleared it up for me that  he knows he is crazy, instead of really believing every single thing he is putting out there.

Thank you for the break from Aro's pyscho bullshit. I needed a little hopeful chapter to keeep me going til the next update. I love me some Charlie. I sorta wanted him to go in guns blazing though... Although he would have been outnumbered. It coulda been like fucking Scarface. (sans his death at the end)

Dude, Edward needs to get his ass kicked. I totally want Bella to just go balls out and slap the shit out of him- only problem is, the way this Edward is written, he might actually hit her back in a fit of rage. I think I need to see Edward tone it down just a little... he is actually scaring me! And to whoever asked you whether or not your husband is like Edward, that makes me laugh. Not only is that a deeply personal question, but as if you would actually answer in the affirmative on this board! Anyway, look forward to the next update of the "crazy Edward" show! :)

And I actually think it's Emmett in the car, just being an ass... just my thought. or Seth, but I don't think he'd be that stupid. Or a new guy- maybe I really don't know :)

"I just wanted to see if she tasted good..."- gross! I really hope she isn't preggers, but who is to say? Or is Bella going to be preggers on accident? She hasn't manifested the symptoms, but that doesn't mean anything. Now that would be drama....

Damon's fucking nuts... but let's see if Edward takes the bait and blames Bella somehow. He is quick to pull the trigger after all.

They are so cute! And the last line was priceless. I like how their relationship is developing, and I like the tone you've set for it. Bella is so sweet, awkward, and sincere, and their "courtship" seems to mirror that.

I have enjoyed this story from the beginning, and it gets better with each subsequent chapter. Look forward to next update.

Great chapter- Edward and Bella are too sweet for words. I really like the Emmett POV this chapter- It was great reading his thoughts and feelings about Rose and everything that is going on with them. I look forward to him attempting to come to terms with all of it.

i like longer chapters better- you can fit more in, and as a reader you're not pissed that you cut it off at a certain point. And it doesn't feel like you rushed the chapter just to get it done. I think updating every 10 days- 2 weeks is fine.

I'm not impatient or anything, but I feel like their "situation" has dragged on for a long time. I'm not trying to be rude in any way (please don't take offense, it's just an opinion). For me, as a reader, I sort of lost interest in them getting together. Maybe it hasn't been that many chapters where this miscommunication has gone on- but it just feels like it has been.

I can't wait to get Edward's take on the last five years. As always, I still think Bella is an immature nitwit for cheating on him in the first place. Eye for an eye? Seriously? She never gives him the chance to explain. And she knew he was a bastard back then anyway! And "disbanded the group'? I'm pretty sure he didn't have time at first, cause when was the last time he was at school? I think with being kidnapped and Bella being changed, and the Volturi, he really didn't have time to screw Tanya et al. She has really driven me insane in this story.

Anyway, can't wait for next update... I hope it's soon! Even though it's not a cliffie, I am so interested in knowing Edward's thoughts and to see what he's been up to. Great chapter.

Bella is the one that needs to get hurt- badly. Her naivete knows no bounds. Last chapter I wanted to slap the shit out of her. I'm actually glad she gets to see all the destruction that she created. Cause she is so freaking dumb. And a sadistic Jacob is a sight to behold- he is EVIL. And I can't wait to see who the "he" is at the end of the chapter.

It's official- I hate Emmett. He's a liar- he told Bella to leave, went off on her, and then when she does what he wanted, he still tries to paint her as the bitch? He's still being a douchebag of a brother. And I hope Edward finds out and calls his ass out.

I  loved Etched so seeing more would be great. Sorry you lost interest in your  other stories- they were great too, but I totally understand.

That's so what happened on the show Private Practice... did you see it? Exact same scenario. Interested to see how it will all play out in your story. Anyway, just found this story- like it alot. And I like the fact that it's moving at a nice pace... you aren't going over every single moment of her pregnancy. Anyway, look forward to next update.

Bella is a little too much for me at times. She really annoys me. Maybe it's her insecurities, I don't know. But her running away from anything she might perceive to be  hard is getting old. I also want Jacob to go away. He is vile.

Great chapter- glad to see Bella is taking her head out of her ass. You definitely have me anticipating what Tanya has to say... she will definitely tell Edward things that he probably wasn't aware of. Consider me intrigued.

Freaking LOVE that Esme is the bad guy... seriously... I think it adds a great dimension to the story, as well as Carlisle basically being a pussy and being so naive. He's usually so thoughtful and wise... not so much in this story. LOVE it.

I am so sorry for your loss. The prayer at the end- so poignant, no matter the religion. My prayer for you is that you and the rest of your family would find peace in the midst of such circumstances.

I don't want Aro's point of view just yet- it's a little premature. I'm obsessed now with whether or not Bella is going to tell Edward about Aro, and what other drama Tanya can create, and more about their relationship. I don't want to see Bella get too insecure. I want her to be her bad ass self and check Tanya and let her know what the deal is, and let Aro know that she is indeed a threat. And then how the Masen's fit in to all of it will be interesting.

I liked this chapter alot! Suspenseful, but also with wit and humor :) Glad to see Aro dead.

I love this story a lot! Just found it, really into it. I like that it is about their relationship and the kids, not just the lemons (which are still wonderful, haha). I just like the balance. Crazy sex can still have a plot mixed in. Esme is a strange bird...still wondering what her full deal is.

Love this story- a good mix of love,  laughter, lemons, and actual plot! Esme is crazy- and I love that you did not make her change overnight. I still don't think their visit together will be a game changer- I could totally see Esme just continuing on about how Bella took her family away from her. I also love the kids- it's been a nice progression for them- seeing Em at 16 now, as opposed to so young, and being the protector of her brothers. Anyway, always happy when this story updates- look forward to the next one.

So Jake is schizophrenic?

Loved how he finallly told her everything; and honestly, for the amount of shit they both have gone through, they deserve to find love. I'm obsessed with this story.

I just found this story and I really like it! Look forward to more.

too soon! but it should make them both realize that they do want a kid sooner rather than later...and that they are ready to take that next step when the time comes.

she seems totally pregnant though based on her behavior. And what is Jake's deal?

I need more backstory on Tanya,  cause it seems like she probably had some grand plan to get pregnant. I need to know the setup, so to speak. James  is gross; I can understand how he feels, but he was innocent in  it just like Bella was... and to hurt her just to spite Edward? A total dick move. And if Edward doesn't want to be with Tanya, why would he bring her to the wedding? Are they living together now?

Is there something wrong with the story, or my computer? All I see each chapter are your author notes, not the  actual story. Weird.

If he leaves Bella AND the baby, I will lose  all respect  for him. What really needs to  happen is that he tell Bella what he did so that he can begin to absolve himself of the guilt he feels. In the end, he saved so many lives by ending theirs. Not to say that murder is right, but I still call it self defense- if any of the guards had gotten out, they'd all be dead. And there is no one in that camp that would ever turn Edward in. No way. E needs some serious therapy. For him to see what his absence did to his family, what his zone out did to his friends, only to have him hurt them permanently all over again? I think that is a greater evil than what he did to the guards.

Yes, I am much happier! But I'm happier to get the full backstory on Laurent. Really well written and engaging, and heartbreaking. Great chapter.

oh no! I hope it doesn't turn out to be a miscarriage; that would devestate everyone, most of all E/B. One hurts, they all hurt. I can't remember though at this point how far along she is. Can't wait to find out next chapter if everything is ok.

I wish I had some huge critique to give you, but all I can say is that I like your story a lot, and I am looking forward to the next chapter.

I love this story. I can't wait until we  get Edward's point of view about what he's been doing since Jack went missing, and what his family has had to endure. Just to see how it all plays out. I wonder why it's been so hard to find him. I would think once his son went missing he would put out a wide search... but regardless, I want to hear his side.

I'm all worked up for the meeting now... I know Bella's dream is a little foreshadowing, because I have a feeling that Victoria and whoever are going to show back up at some point (though I hope not- my heart  can't take it!). I hope that Bella, in the midst of the reunion, has the intelligence to share with the Cullens all of the infomormation that she dug up, so that they can understand that Victoria is responsible for the whole mess. I could totally see her trying to play the sympathy card that her son is back, and she wants him, blah blah blah. If she's a money hungry bitch, child support would look really appealing to her.

Bella and Jack really are soul mates (I saw that you wrote someone said that in a review). And I can't imagine them taking him away from her. Even though it's fictional it breaks my heart to even think about that. But short of one moving to Seattle or to Chicago, it's going to be complicated.

Is the story going  to be BPOV the whole time? Or are you going  to throw in a little EPOV?

I hate that you left it there!!!! :) You're killing me, seriously. You always know just where to leave a chapter to make your readers lose it with anticipation for the next chapter.

I can't wait for the next update. I feel like Edward is going to assume that she is the one that took him. And I know they are going to try to stearoll over Bella, but I know she won't give up without a fight. But I love that Jack defended her, and if  they all have hearts, they should know that they can't take Jack away from her without traumatizing him forever.

I love this story! Super romantic at the end- and I can't even call it cheesy cause I liked it so much! I know you get awards for the character Jack, but Edward and Bella are just as great- They are just so sweet- and like I said, I can't even feel bad about it! :)

I've been on the ride since Chapter 1, so I can't wait to see how you wrap things up. This has definitely been one of my "drop everything and read" stories.

Wow... I think this Domme Bella is going to be more brutal than I've ever read in the  story. The prologue alone had me thinking that... sixty lashings, and  to  think he gets off on it! That is some serious freaking pain. No joke.

As a side note, so now I'm wondering who in my building could have some sort of secret life :) I'm a teacher, and for some reason, I bet there are a lot, haha

Text  of story did not show up- It's happened to every story I've gotten an update notice for today.  Just wanted to let you know. It's a site issue I guess, I wouldn't know who to report it to.

I'm pretty sure now that Bella owns the business that Victoria is working for... She's the fibber she is referring to. And that would explain why the big reveal hasn't been made in the story yet.

I really wish you would've said more than "a bitter pill" and that it was utterly graphic and horrifying at the end.   I'm assuming that the next few chapters will be quite graphic in detail as well so I'm going to take a break from the story and come back in a few chapters and hope that we're in the aftermath.

I love this story and always look forward to updates. Excellently written and truly engaging!

I look forward to every update! 

Love this. Makes me happy that they are happy!

Love you story still! Sorry we don't always review but I enjoy your writing greatly. 

Great chapter! So happy the story is progressing and I'm wondering about Olivia...she just seems so off about this pregnancy...almost.  It's weird I'm still trying to figure it out.

Omg- I thought you might go in this direction, because as a reader, timelines weren't matching up for me. Now I see why! This is heartbreaking- and of course leads to the drama you foreshadowed in the synopsis. I can't even breathe- this going to wreak havoc. I have so many questions. First, will we find out who spilled the beans? Second, I truly wonder what they will do. To have a child that is a constant reminder of horror, but also is a part of you. Wow.  And like Olivia says in the story what has she done to deserve all of this?!  And to what extent is Xander going to go off the deep end because we know he will. Excellent chapter. I'm horrified on behalf of Olivia  and can't wait to see where this information takes them both individually and as a couple.  Finally can you please kill off the defendants they are absolutely vile and disgusting and just the visual of them sitting there smirking while her life falls apart absolutely disgusts me.  Can't Nick call in some favors somewhere and take care of them?

Great chapter as always!

Wonderful stories and I so enjoyed reading them all. You are very talented and I wish you all the best in your new endeavor!