Reviews by Pricklypearess
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Ultimatum

I enjoy a dark Edward.  Like this story so far!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Saving Grace

Excellent story!  Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well, knowing how selfish Edward is, I would say he's gonna change her.  Right?  Will be pretty funny to see newborn Bella kick his ass.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow! I was completely surprised by the ending! Great job. Thanks for the story!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading my story.  I'm glad you liked the ending.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella lives a charmed life, Edward has skeletons in his closet. They are drawn to each other but fight the pull, how could two people so different ever make things work in the real world. Dark themes and Canon Pairings.

 

Thank you to Decode Banners for the wonderful banner.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58248 Read Count: 12974
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Wait.  So let me get this straight.  She won't have sex without love, but she fantasizes about being raped?  Time for a psych eval, Bella.  Yeesh.  If I were Edward, I'd be running for the hills.  Just sayin'.  lol



Author's Response:

Yes and she knows it.

Thanks for reading

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What's up with Edward?  Is it the fight with Bella?  She better just put out and make him feel better.  Ha!



Author's Response:

*giggles* IKR? she should just put out.

Great guess, but you'll see. My beta told me yesterday that she's looking my chapter over, sooooo I should be posting soon.

Thank you, =)

xxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow, this chappie was extra packed with info!  I do despise the cliffies.....not really, just anxious to see what happens with Tanya.  Curious about Bella's blood infection.  Going to check out "Wolf in Sheep's Clothing" now.  Thanks for another excellent chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.

Thanks again, I appreciate it! =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 29 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Feral Edward.....yum.  Ben's dad is a real pain in the arse.  God!  Thanks for the update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129735
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Grand Funk

Oh my God!  That was hilarious. 



Author's Response:

Lmao! Thanks. We were crackin' up writing it.

 

Good news, real chappy, which is quite big, will be posted this week. 99% is complete. =)

 

Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

Here we go!  Curious to see if Edward is going to change like Emmett did.  Loving these frequent updates.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Well, I can't wait to see if it happens too  *evil grin*

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Gauntlet Pt 2

This is one of the few times that I want Edward to squash Jasper like a bug!  He's pissing me off.  Speaking of pissing.....I cracked up that Edward peed on Bella's leg.  Oh my God, that was funny.  Poor Bella.  Thanks for the excellent update!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response =(

LMAO! I was giggling the entire time during the pissing scene. I guess a vamps gotta do what a vamps gotta do. lmao

Thank you. We'll have the next chappy up very soon.

Jells

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Hate

Ooh, definitely dark.  I like it.



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

No way would Edward let Bella roam around picking apples unattended.  Not Bella.  JMO.  Lulkis could give Edward a run for his money in the looks dept.......almost. 



Author's Response:

I'd lick both of them to be honest *laughs*

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Urge

Oops!

Author's Response:

*grins* Yep a BIG oops

Thank you for reading

xo

Jells

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

Oh my God, he does have a soft underbelly!  Who knew?  This is one of the few stories in which I like Tanya. ;p.  thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Ok, I take back what I said about Edward's soft underbelly.  Ha!  I do like that Bella tried to stand up to him.  I don't care for shrinking violets.  Poor Tanya is now a robot basically.  Yikes.  Nasty venom.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

God I really dislike Jasper in this one.  Bella's going to get screwed over no matter what......too many obstacles to overcome.  Can't wait to see what goes down with Emmett.



Author's Response:

I dislike Assper too. He's such an arse lol 

 

Thanks for reading!

xo

Jells

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

Ooh, that's an interesting twist.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

Yep, definitely confused.  Looking forward to discovering the answers!



Author's Response:

Just hang in there, it will make much more sense soon lol

 

We’ll have more soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

~Jells and Tyggy

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bad move Edward!  He should've manned up and confessed.  When she does find out, it will be doubly worse.  I'm bracing myself for the shit to hit the fan.  Great story so far!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well, THAT was a heavy chapter.  They needed this.  Edward needs to hit bottom so he can get off the drugs and take a good look at himself.  Bella needs to become independent and run her life on her own.......that'll be hard with James running the show.  I love this story and it's flawed characters.  Can't wait to read more.

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55730
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, James is a crazy man.  Is Maxine dead?  Where is James' other wife?

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Kinky.  That's what I'm thinking.  Ha!

Ruthless and Ivory by MujerN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.

–Ruthless and Ivory
The full story to the Red Ribbon assassin. Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest




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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251248 Read Count: 40671
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Want

This story is excellent.  It has it all......action, intrigue, romance.  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Greatness

Give 'em hell, Bella!  I absolutely cannot put this story down. 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Guardian Angel

She was sooo  close to getting away!  Wonder if jasper will report back to Edward, hmmm?  Thanks for update!  Love this story.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Fate

Ok, sex with Aro made me nauseous, but Edward coming for Bella makes me giddy!  Thanks for the update!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Well, that just pisses me off that the media got the story.  Poor Edward.  Hope he doesn't start to feel like a circus freak.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Eh, what the hell, I'll try it.  lol

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I crack up every time Edward runs on all fours.  Well, at least Bella got him some decent clothes.  Wonder where she's heading next?



Author's Response:

Yes, she got him clothes, now lets hope he doesn't have to wear them. LOL

 

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hooray!  Is it weird of me to hope they go back to the woods and live there?  Edward has no family.  Bella is unhappy with her life.  I say go live in the woods like the kid from "My Side of the Mountain", f**k like rabbits, and be happy.  Ha!



Author's Response:

LOL

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Somehow I knew he'd come back. ;-)  Hope Bella's on birth control cuz ya know, having a baby in the wild would be a whole 'nother ball of wax.



Author's Response:

She is

 

I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!

Here is your teaser

The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river.  Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.

 

Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop.  He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too.  Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.

 

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Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm thinking Bella needs some antibiotic ointment also.  Egads.  Have a great vacation!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hmmm. So his parents were killed by a bear while they were out in the woods? Enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Perfect job! On a farm where Edward can get a little of the outdoors and Bella can make money and have a roof over her head.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Here is your teaser

Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.

“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.

“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.

“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.

 

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Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

The shredded tree was funny. Excited to see Bella and Edward starting a new life at the farm. Enjoyed this chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Here is your teaser

When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love.  The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture.  They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.

 

“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular.  They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”

 

“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”

 

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Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Uh Oh!  What did he get into now?!  I really think Bella ought to come clean with Rosalie and Emmett.  They seem to be fairly open minded.  Can't wait to see what Edward was up to in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I really appreciate your review!

Here is your teaser

With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Looking forward to the getaway in the woods.  Wonder what Edward is having nightmares about?  Emmett cracks me up, even when he's an old geezer.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing, here is your teaser

 

Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Feel bad for Edward. Good boy, Jake.

Author's Response:

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

 

Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Excellent story. Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

God!  I'm dying to know what's happened with Josie.  Even though Edward was a total prick at the beginning, I feel really bad for him now.  He's a lost soul. 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Bella really needs to find her voice and backbone.  Good God.  Her life will continue to be a dull existance if she doesn't.  Edward said he won't come back.  I'm curious to see what Bella's next move will be.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

That was intense.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Oh!  That was a surprise!  So, was she taken away? Is she permanently incapacitated in some way?  Hmmm.  I like the end when they just jog together.  Can't wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

She's starting to thaw.  I actually believe she's more screwed up than he is and that's saying something.  Thanks for the update!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh good.  I like stories that stick to one point of view.  Leave the rest to our imaginations!  Interested to see how this story unfolds.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward, Edward.  He's a little slow on the uptake, no?  His inner musings crack me up.  He's really clueless to Bella's plight.  Look forward to next update.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yeah, Edward is still acting like a caveman.  At least he let her get some books to read.  Wonder what Aro is up to?  I'm suspicious.

Just Breathe by jtmd24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens when the man you've loved for 6 years starts to change right before your eyes? Bella is forced to question her heart when the black sheep of the family returns. In the end, will she put her trust in the right person?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106360 Read Count: 20206
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2011 Updated: 07 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Battered and Bruised

Wow, Alice is mega bitch!  Jasper's just a snivelling wimp.  Can't wait for Edward to open up a can on both of them. ;o)



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Kiss The Pain Away

Oh man, I'm liking this story.  It's great that you've made Alice the manipulative bitch and Rosalie the caring friend.  Yep, I'm figuring it's been Jasper killing people all along........Edward left to keep the family intact.  Enjoying the chemistry between Bella and Edward.  Was it Rosalie who asked Edward to come back or someone else?  Hmmm.



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying it!  Yes, Rose is the one who asked Edward to come back. 

 

Thanks for the review!

 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: The Truth Hurts

Wow, Jasper sucks!  Hope Edward gets to beat the shit out of him.  How about Alice and Jasper getting it on the first day they met?  What a tool!  Whew.  It felt good to vent.  Ha!



Author's Response:

LOL thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Consequences

Oh my.  The shit's hitting the fan now!  Feel bad for Bella.  I'm sure she heard what Edward said and misconstrued it.  Now she's in the clutches of a wack job.  Next chapter should be very interesting.  Is it the prologue portion?

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Ugh.  That was depressing.  Looking forward to the bright and glorious day when Bella sees Edward again.  Ha!



Author's Response:

Aww, I didn't want to depress you and I do hate that I had to kill Garrett. I wanted to keep him in the story but it just wasn't going to work with Edward coming back into Bella's life. Thanks for your review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Love you tons - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Edward's next chapter which will be up later today:

Sitting alone watching the sky change colors, I thought of Bella and our lives together growing up. I replayed every moment and let the love we felt back then wash over me. I knew I couldn't, but I wanted to feel that again.

I wanted to look into her eyes again and see the love I used to see when she looked at me. I wanted to wrap my arms around her and promise that I would never let her go again. Assure her that if she still wanted me, if she still loved me, we could be together forever. It was possible now and I could take her with me.

As the sky above me grew dark, I made my decision. I had to see her and if she was happy, I would leave quietly and never return. I would find Carlisle and Esme and live my life with them.

But if happiness had not found her in all these years, I would go to her in the night, take her someplace where I could explain everything and beg for her forgiveness. And if by some miracle she still loved me, I would take her back to Carlisle so he could change her and I could keep her with me for the rest of eternity.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I love where you're taking this story.  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it. Keep your eyes open because the best is still to come. Thanks for the review. I really, really appreciate it. Much love to you - D

Until next time...let's take a peek at what Edward and Carlisle have been up to:

Henry was regretting his decision to talk to me so I quickly continued, keeping the smile on my face to keep him from feeling guilty.

"One word of advice from someone who's been there before. Whatever you do, do not let them know that you think they've gone crazy." I chuckled. "We'll keep that between you and me. All you have to do is sit back and enjoy this time while it lasts. Oh and one more thing, make sure you learn what my father used to call 'the three magic words.'"

I stopped walking and held his shoulder, staring at him as if this was of some great importance.

"You must learn to say 'yes my dear' and leave it at that."

That had him laughing again. "I think your father was a smart man, Edward."

"Yes he was," I said, remembering the great man my father was.

Henry and I spoke of safer topics as he finished his route for the day. It was a great morning and after we had said our goodbyes, I realized that Carlisle's shift was scheduled to end at least an hour ago and he should have found me by now. As I made my way to the hospital to find him, I caught his frantic thoughts.

Please let her live. Please let her live. She can't die, not like this. This can't happen. I won't let it happen.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yep, I've been crying for 3 chapters now. This is an excellent story so far. Look forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

I hate making you cry. Unfortunately, it had to be done. Bella's definitely had a tough time without Edward. Who wouldn't when the love of your life dies. But she's in the city now and she's going to have to grow up pretty quick or she won't make it. I promise she'll have help though. Thanks for the review, darlin. Much love to you - D

Here's a quick peek at what Edward's been up to while he's been away:

"Edward...Son, please stay calm and let me explain."

"Do not ever call me that," I growled, as I grabbed his hand. "I am not your son."

I threw his hand away from me and was completely taken aback when his body flew across the room.

"Edward," his voice was still calm, "I know you don't understand, but I need you to calm down and let me explain. There's so much to tell you and we need to tend to your thirst."

"Tend to my thirst?" The words didn't match with his previous statement. "How will you tend to my thirst if you claim water will not help?" I growled. "And what promise did you make? To whom? How did I not die along with my parents?" In my anger, each question came out faster than the one before it. "Where am I? What did you do to me? How can I...?"

"Enough!" His voice rang with authority, cutting me off mid-sentence.

He began pacing again, one arm across his chest and the other resting on that arm while his fingers pinched the bridge of his nose.

"You must feed, Edward. It is the most important thing right now. So I'll tell you the one thing that will be the hardest for me to explain."

"Feed?" I asked, confused by his word.

He ignored me and continued.

"You asked me what I've done to you. You asked me why you didn't die with your parents."

The speed of his pacing increased as he continued to speak, not once looking at me while the words flowed from him.

"The simplest answer is...you did."

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I was waiting for that to happen! What's he going to do? Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Well that was terribly sad.......thanks a lot.  Ha!  Great chapter.  Look forward to more.



Author's Response:

I felt really bad for keeping Edward's memories of Bella away from him. In my mind, since Carlisle's never had to take responsibility for another vampire before, I felt that he needed to have that uninterrupted time alone with Edward so he could teach him and give him the guidance he never received. Now that Edward does remember, all he wants to do is get to Bella. Unfortunately, Carlisle had to stop him, but he did it with Bella's safety and Edward's sanity in mind.

Sorry no teaser today but the next chapter will be posted soon. So you won't have to wait too long to find out what Bella's been up to and how she's handling herself in the city.

Thanks for the review, darlin. I really, really appreciate it. Until next time...much love to you - D

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Carlisle?  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

I wish I knew who the doctor was. It could be Carlisle...it could not be. We just don't know. Bella never thinks of him again after she leaves the coffee shop. Thanks for the review, darlin. I appreciate it so much. Much love to you - D

Until next time...here's a quick peek at chapter 14:

I sat down at the counter right in front of her and she stared at me with her hands on her hips. I knew better than to say a word before she did, so we sat in silence for several minutes. She was definitely better at this game than Mrs. Jones was, she would have cracked by now and told me what she wanted. I was getting nervous, fidgeting on the stool and wringing my hands together until finally she took pity on me and spoke.

"Sweetie, what are you doing with kids like that?" She shook her head. "You're a good girl, sweetheart, and they're nothin' but trouble."

I didn't know how to answer without telling her the truth. I had to think fast.

What would Lizzy say?

And then it came to me. "I met them on one of my trips to the city with my Aunt. We became friends and I come and visit them all the time now."

She narrowed her eyes at me and I knew she didn't believe my story.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was mean!  On the up side, I'm glad Bella got a job.  If only Edward could know what she's going through and come save her somehow.  *sigh*  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

I couldn't let her suffer for too long. I had to do something to help her and her friends out a little bit. Unfortunately, just when things started to get better for them, things go really, really wrong.  And as for that gunshot... we'll find out what happens in chp 16. I know that's evil and I'm sorry. I can tell you that Edward is going to really be fighting hard against his guilt once they do find each other again and he learns everything that Bella went through without him. Thanks so much for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love to you - D

Until next time...here's a quick peek at what Edward's been up to:

"Careful, Edward."

Carlisle's voice startled me, bringing my focus back to the park. Sitting next to me quickly, he reached out and pulled my hand from the park bench and smoothed out the grooves made by my fingers. I hadn't realized I was holding on so tight.

"Is everything okay, Edward?" I heard his concern.

I sighed. "Yes, just thinking."

"About Bella?"

"As always."

"I am truly sorry, Son." Carlisle leaned forward with his elbows on his knees, hands clasped in front of him. "Unfortunately, never having shared that kind of love myself, I can't begin to imagine the pain and heartache you're going through. I wish there was a way..."

"No, Carlisle," I said, halting his sentence. He looked up at me. "I understand and I'm not asking to go back. Bella deserves to live her life to its fullest and if I can give her that gift by staying away, then that's what I must do. It is my only way to honor her as I would have done as her husband."

Such a hard decision to make.

"The hardest one I'll ever make in my life," I answered his unspoken words.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hmmm.  What's causing the pain?  Feeling sorry for Edward.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Edward and Bella have a strong connection and, just as she felt the pain of his transformation, he's able to feel hers as well. I feel really bad for them because I couldn't imagine having to go through the pain once, but to have to feel it all over again without knowing why or even how it's possible has to be torture. He'll make it through it though. Don't worry about him. Thanks, as always, for the review. I always love to hear what you're thinking. Love you tons, darlin - D

Until next time...let's sneak a peek at Bella's life:

"Bella." Lizzy's voice and touch startled me.

I lifted my head to see her kneeling in front of me. She handed me the handkerchief I always kept in my bag. Edward's handkerchief. It added further guilt to rest upon my heart.

"Are you okay?" she whispered.

I shook my head. "I can't stop thinking about him."

"Me either." She hugged me. "It's hard enough for me to handle. I can't imagine what you must be going through. You two cared about each other so much."

I pulled away. "What?"

"The two of you really had something good, but me and Johnny will make sure to get you through this."

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So close!  I'm crying for her and EdwRd to run into each other.  I was surprised that Garrett was the vampire that changed her.  I had assumed it was James.  Thank God it wasn't.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Garrett. I know everyone expected it to be James but he didn't fit in that role. He needed to be a companion to Bella and since I'm keeping this as close to canon as I can, there was no way James could have been. And they're close, just not quite close enough. It's coming though...I promise. A major jump in time in the next two chapters will bring them closer to finding each other again. Thanks for the review, darlin. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at the next chapter to be posted later today:

In the six years we'd been together, I'd never seen Carlisle so happy. Finally finding love had changed him completely and he was a whole new man. He actually reminded me of myself years ago when I was with Bella. She simply brought out the best in me and it was exactly what Esme did for Carlisle.

They could barely contain their love for each other so, after years of posing as husband and wife, they made the decision to make their relationship official. As they readied themselves to take this step together, Esme pulled me aside for a quick word.

"My dear Edward, for years you've played the role of brother to us and I have been proud to accept you in that role, but I want something more." She gripped my hand tightly as she spoke.

"Esme, you've brought so much happiness to Carlisle's life and I am grateful to you for making him the man he is today. So please, ask for anything you wish."

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Too bad Edward is falling off the wagon!  I'm anxiously awaiting his reunion with Bella.  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Let me ease your mind. Even though it was in the book, in my world he never intended to feed from humans when he left. He said that as an excuse so Carlisle wouldn't try to stop him when he left. He only left to get away from Carlisle and Esme before he lost it completely. He'll explain what was going through his head in his next chapter. Thanks for the review, darlin. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Bella's next chapter:

With a devilish smile on his face, he whispered, "Are you ready for more, my dark angel?"

Just as I was about to answer, his eyes widened and his hand flew to my mouth. My normal reaction would have been to struggle against his hand but the worried look on his face stilled me. He took a deep breath, tasting the air but when I tried to do the same, all I could smell was the scent of his skin.

His arms wrapped tightly around me. "Leave now." His whispered warning was just for me.

I tried to pull away but he gripped me tighter.

"Use the rooftops and run for the trees."

Sensing his sudden fear, I held onto him just as tight. "What is it?"

He loosed his grip and took one step back. One hand touched my cheek and his eyes bore intently into mine.

"Please, Bella, just go," he urged. "Now."

"But what about..."

He cut me off, knowing what I was about to ask. "I'll join you soon. I swear it. But you must go now." His eyes glanced over my shoulder toward the main street before meeting mine again. "You have only seconds, please go."

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I just want him to find her already!  Patience is not one of my virtues.  Lol



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Could it be Edward that's growling?  Thanks for update!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: An Eternity to Love

Hopefully Bella will snap out of it now.  Edward said he wanted her to move on after he had turned, but then gets pissed when she did.  Tsk, Tsk.  Excellent chapter.  Very emotional.

The Archer by Camilla11 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Centauro

 

No, this is not a vampire story, but supernatural all the same. It is the tale of a princess in peril and the mythical creature who saves her. They will love each other passionately but, as it is the case with other cross species mating, it will not be easy. The time? Oh, some 2700 years ago. BTW, Kallisté and Alexios have the same meaning of Bella and Edward, in ancient Greek.

 

o65;λθε, Κp59;πρι,
Χπρυσp55;ασιν o52;ν κυλp55;κεσσιν o40;βραισ
συμμεμιγμp51;νον θαλp55;αισι νp51;κταρ
οo84;νοχp57;εισα. 

Come hither foam-born Cyprian goddess, come,
And in golden goblets pour richest nectar
All mixed in most ethereal perfection,
Thus to delight us. (Sappho)

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9744 Read Count: 1208
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Colchis/Epilogue

Lovely story. Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and telling me. Till next time, then.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

Ok, I'll bite. Always looking for a unique story and this seems to fit the bill!

Author's Response:

I had a lot of fun writing it. Only, I warn you, as a bite is a small one, as it is not overlong.  But also some delicacies have to taken in small bites... Thank you for the review.

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Flaunting

I know there are readers who don't like Edward or Bella to have flaws (ie: Edward having a mistress), but I for one like the characters to be flawed and have interesting layers to their personalities.  It makes the story more believable and interesting.  Thanks for bringing us a flawed Edward.  I adore him! :o)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. King Edward will be a flawed character in how he responds to Bella and his treatment of her. I agree with you in that it makes the characters and story much more interesting; it also provides me with more opportunities to write angst :D Thanks for reviewing!
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding

I have to say, I hope Isabella exerts some of her royal power to make Renee and Charles' life miserable.  Oh Edward.  He definitely needs some lessons in the fine art of seduction.  I'm sure this is true to how the first night would have gone down in those days.  Thank God we live in the 21st century!  Bella just needs to work her magic on him.....he'll come around.  By the way, I'm glad Edward at least turned down the Stanley slut.  LOL



Author's Response:

Bella will exert her power, however she also has her 'queenly' image to maintain now. King Edward will soon learn his lessons in pleasure ;) I seem to have made a lot of readers happy by the turning down of Lady Jessica! Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Lacking

I enjoy period stories.  Look forward to reading this one.



Author's Response:

Period stories are fun to read...not so fun to write as it means I have to research little bits and pieces of things. I hope you enjoy reading my story! Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is the story of Pierce. She used to think she was a normal girl, but normal is not the norm in her family. She is a freak among freaks, almost unnatural...

To put it mildly, with out giving anything away... she doesn't fit in with the family business, or half her town.

She thought that after she left for college, things were going to get better. She couldn't be any more wrong.
Instead of going to medical school, she should have been a Vet.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77148 Read Count: 11950
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 28 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Really liking this story!

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Pre-game

Alright Bella, you've got him all alone.  Time to give him a tiny taste of what he's missing.  Right?!  Please continue.  I love this story.



Author's Response:

What I wouldn't give to have him all alone... 

And continue I will, we have a long way to go. Thank You.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: For Her

Aww.  I love when they kiss and make up.........well, make up at least.  Looking forward to a kiss.  Ha!  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Edward definitely needs to pucker up again. But it may be a while... :(

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Fire

Oh boy, Jasper is finally figuring it out.  Feel a little bad that Bella is leading Riley on, but he's a big boy.  He can handle it.  I do like a jealous Edward.  ;-o

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Nice and Not

I like watching all the pieces fall in place!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Shame

Yep, I'd say he's a little screwed up in the head.  Should be interesting.



Author's Response:

Aren't we all on some level?  ;)  ~CM

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 : Illicit Behavior

Wow. Edward is seriously screwed in the head. Liking this story. Feel bad for Bella right about now.

Author's Response:

He has some issues, perhaps ;) Thank you for reading. I hope you're still with me :)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 : Ruin

Good Lord! She is an adult. I'd hate everyone treating me like a child. Really those boys need to back the hell off.

Author's Response:

You tell 'em! 

But, she loves them nonetheless. As do I. ;)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 : Strategy

Yea!!  I see a little light at the end of the tunnel.  Getting harder and harder for Edward and Bella to keep up the pretenses.  Glad to have some explanation for the overprotectiveness they all have towards Bella.  Now, she just needs to step up and be her own woman and Edward needs to get over his self-flagellation and make a move.  Easier said than done, right?



Author's Response:

Easier said than done, yes, but I think some progress is at this point soon to be made. If I weren't so behind, I might remember if you know that or not. But I promise I'm trying :)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart

OK, I couldn't stop reading this 'til I was all caught up.  Love this story.  Flawed characters are my favorite.  Yep, Edward needs to fire the slutty secretary.  Look forward to the next update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so flattered! And flawed, too, perhaps. Or definitely ;)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice

Loved how Bella put Edward in his place and forced his hand a tad bit. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

I think she's the only one that he would take that from. Good for her for letting him have it! :)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 : Masochists

Glad to see Bella is still determined as ever to snag Edward.  Really, that man needs to keep it in his pants.  He's the boss.  He can't be screwing his employees......sexual harrassment suit waiting to happen.  Thought he was smarter than that.  I cannot wait to see what happens during game night.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Shame on you, Edward! See how upset you make everyone? Isabella should crack open another bottle and give you a spanking! Hmmm... or a hair tug, at least ;)

Thanks for sticking with us!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 : Slammed

Oh my.  Yep, that's a good chapter.  Please God let it be Emmett and not Jasper that walks in.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Hmmm... no one wants it to be Jasper... wonder why? ;)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing

Oh, Edward just pissed me off.  He doesn't deserve Bella if he's going to be harsh like that.  She should get 4 shots at the line 'cuz that was like a technical foul!  Ha!



Author's Response:

oooooooh... Everyone is so mad at Edward. I understand why, but we all know he didn't mean it. :(

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drafted

That Bella is a sneaky one!  Edward picked the wrong girl to play with.  Ha!



Author's Response:

Let's face it, the man doesn't stand a chance ;)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Breaking Point

I'm glad she's going out with Riley.  Edward needs a little competition.  Now, if I were Rosalie, I'd be totally pissed at Bella for making such an ugly assumption about me.  Thanks for the update.  Your story never lacks for angst.



Author's Response:

Riley is a good thing for all. I wish more readers saw that. As for Bella's assumption... I think it was fair, but that's just me.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Dirty

Rose is such a bitch!  Thank God Edward came to his senses.  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Revelations

Nice to see jasper is coming around.  Not sure he Bella resists attacking Edward.  Yum.  Lol

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 7: VIP party

Time to hunt on the Savannah, Bella!  Glad she looks good tonight.  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Second chance

This is going to be good!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Surviving the fisrt day

Edward needs a swift kick to the family jewels.  What an asshole!  Having said that, I love this story!  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Adaptation

Damn cliffie!  Ha!  As usual, I enjoyed this chapter.  Have a Happy New Year!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Contact

How she keeps herself from smacking him, I don't know.  Loved what she did at the end.  Thanks for the update.  It's misery waiting a month for another.  Ha!



Author's Response:

Don't worry too much for Bella. She has guts, she said it herself :0)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Infernal rise

I swear almost very chapter I want to kick Edward in the family jewels.  Bella really needs to flaunt another man in front of him and see how he likes it.  Lol

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Murderous thoughts

Revenge will be sweet!!  Bet Edward will be there.  Thanks for update!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Provocations

What's good for the goose is good for the gander!



Author's Response:

:0)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Reality bites

I'm glad she walked away.  He needs to fix his shit.

Summary: Past Featured Story

For new Detective Isabella Swan, protecting the recluse professor of music from a stalker, sounded easy enough. They find themselves mixed in forbidden romance, filled with hidden ink and red lipstick kisses from a deranged stalker. AH/OOC 18&Up ONLY.

The Banner was made by Christag Banners...She is phenominal...Thank you, Christag.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82761 Read Count: 35244
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: A Meeting with Billy

Ha!  That backfired on the stalker.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Oh Yeah...But the stalker doesn't know it yet... *Insert EVIL chuckle*

Lots more crazy coming soon.  The stalker has their work cut out for them, and Bella and Edward will be drawing much unwanted attention if they keep up the way they are going.  I am guessing the next couple of chapters will rock some people and their guesses as to WHO the stalker is to the ground.  See ya next Wed.

Kasi (&Jess)

TeamAllTwilight and Jess2002

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: A Realization

I'm thinking it's Angela right now, but that's probably too obvious.  Cracking up over how oblivious Edward is.  How 'bout Bella just grabbing the bull by the horns and inviting him over for dinner?  I like that!



Author's Response:

A lot of people are tossing it up between Jessica, Angela and of course Tanya...I love Edwards sense of humor, I love that he is enjoying being laid back and goes with the flow.  Love the strong willed Bella, I get sick of seeing her as a whimpy character.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, see ya next chapter!

Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Bella's Night Out

Awww, she held his hand.  Love that he took her to the deli.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, we both hope that you continue to like the story, and we look forward to hearing more from you again.  Kasi (&Jess)