So good - I like how it's showed that Bella can't quite figure stuff out, it has to be explained...makes sense.  I also like the 'don't know what you got till it's gone' statement.  I hope you can keep there two safe and happy - but some how I think Tanya has a trick or two up her sleeve.  I am curious to see what you're going to do with the Emmette/Rose/Vicky situation.  Thanks for the update, as always - it was enjoyed as soon as I was notified!

Tanya will never learn.  I am hoping she will play by the rules, but this is Tanya we're talking about.  Jake is reallt a pain in the side.  But I am glad the whole coupling is over...there is no doubt now.

Thanks for your update - thirsty for more, as always!

I am glad she is finally opening up to Edward.  He needs to learn his limit according to her and her situation too.  I hope you do more longer chapters...I like them.

Can't wait to see what happens with the apartment...and Garrett and Kate.

Thanks for the update.

I wish I could have the articulation of Bella when put on the spot to actually expel what is in my brain?  I am very happy they are starting to get the issues worked out.  Edward will be going on set soon, so we'll have to wait and see how, not just these two, but all of the group react.  I enjoy reading this story - and not just for the sex...more of the time I skip over that...I love the way you write and make the characters real.

Thank you for the update.  Have a great weekend.

Happy Holidays to you too!  Please do what you need to do to feel comfortable with YOUR story!  I would hate for you to look back at it and not like what you wrote.  Holidays are a busy time for any normal person/family!  I hardly get to read as much - so what you do update, I will appreciate it even more!  Thank you for everything.

I love how you have progressed your characters into living (almost human) tangible people.  I can't wait for the next chapter, but love how they are working on actual situations instead of 'way out there' things that only happen - like never!  Thank you again for your dedication to this story.  Also your beta is a pretty great too!

Bella's Back! 

I was a little teary and then was cheering!  I hope she can see that they do love her - flaws and all!  None of them are pefect..nobody is perfect!

Thanks for the update!

I agree - too soon for a scene with Edward.  I do love that Bella has 'read' Alice, and tells hes she knows him...duh, duh, dummmm.

Thanks for the update - I can't wait to see what the plan is going to be...I just hope Bella stays and doesn't go all SuperHero!

Esme really needs to slap her own daughter...pregnant or not!  So the whole college thing is another mystery of one ms. Bella Swan!?!  What's up your sleeve...hmmmm?  Can't wait to find out what's next.  Thank you for the update...loved it!

Well, I guess James is about to get busted...but is Edward going to notice??  How could he not...right?  I hope Victoria is sane enough to go back and call James on his infidelity.  Looking forward to see what you have in store for us - great job and thank you.

Don't try to understand football...just cheer when everyone else does!  It's worked for me for YEARS! 

I am happy you got these two together - finally.  I am also pleased to read of Edward reaction - much the same feelings Bella is having.  What is going to happen when they see each other with out knowledge of the play-D/s segments of their 'secret' lives?  They are going to have ot see each other prior...right?  can't wait...hoping for sooner then later...thanks!

OK, I don't know who he called...to make 'that call...'. Is it his mentor?  Is he going to be punished for being neglectful to his girlfriend and sub?  He seems to think one way and she another.  Obviously they both failed.  I missed this story...hope you can come back soon...your writing is very clear and intelligent.  I'm not nessecarily into this lifestyle, but I enjoy the characters and their stories.  Thank you for the update.

I hope he slaughters Char! 

thanks for the update!  I was hoping things would go a little easier, but this is Twilight, Edward and Bella!  Of course something has to go haywire!

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Congratulations!  Stay healthy for the little baby.  Thanks for the update, loved it and can't wait for more.

I love that you revisited us with your beautiful story.  I can't imagine growing up in the old west and having to do what was done to survive.  Doctors were always pompous, the whole god complex thing...and then ask for payment!  I would have hit him.  Looking forward to your cap on the story...it probably kept you up at night thinking of a way to 'end'.  Thank you.

I am glad you updated...I realize you all are not paid and it is something you do, for you.  I am just really glad there are people who like to share!  I am really impressed at how all of the characters are coming put of their 'roles', per say.  The big meany, is really a soft pussycat, etc!  I hope there is a time when the shrews will finally give up, but I have a feeling that will not happen.  Jacob Black is a real 'winner'!  And, of course, the family is still a family...we can't pick them!  I hope to hear move from the story, but only when you're ready.  Thank you.

I think Carlisle needs to have an accident of some sort...I'm just saying!  What a mean SOB he is.  Are we going to hear any of his back story as to why he is like he is?  I'm not sure I want to know.  It is disturbing to have cameras in the house without knowing!  He must get off on the controll.  Thanks for the EPOV..he is really in a bad place.

Billy Joel's song...'only the good die young' keeps popping into my mind!  I hope everyone survives!  I can't wait for the next installment of riders...thanks.

Yea!  Lauren's gone.  It's nice when loose ends are tied up, shot and buried.  Blood is thicker than water...I remember Carlisle and Edwards fights.  Time will be a definite healing factor. I so love this story, and the others.  Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Stealing from a dead man!  I love it.  Thanks for Edward POV...I've missed him.  I think the small island of Antigua/Barboda is in order. The plane ride is relatively short, and you can go on an all inclusive, relax and drink to your hearts content!  

Thanks for the update, always looking for more.

Well, Edward is definitely going to encounter a lot of roadblocks...he already has.  He is going to have to be honest with BBella, even if he thinks it's going to hurt her.  I am surprised Carlisle didn't not inform Edward of Emily and the relationship they have with her mother.  The sick demented plans that were made and the ideas in those sick heads...to many players, not enough direct or any rules.  I hope there are twins...I'd also love one of each, please?!  Can't wait for the next chapter...love it so far.

Love it!  The T and J show along with a demented Emily....no wonder Bella is a little stressed.  Aros treatment is all words, but marcus' treatment was physical...he may come back at him.  My hope is that they can stop Bella's contractions with bed rest.  Aro and his hussy Lisa are caught by wife Heidi.  Jake and Tanya are busted doing something really stupid in a public forum with lots of people recording it on their cell phones!  Oh, and Emily should be there too!  Anyway, always looking forward to updates...thank you!

Women are a evil sort...oh yes we are!  What's the saying...about a scorned woman?  All true.  Anyway,  I believe Bella should of course let him in slowly.  She can't just forget what happened, she may forgive...but that's a big step.  Carmen is in for a shock, apparently.  I can't wait to read what happens with Jacob too.  Seems he is in the mix with carme and Kate...what a sour soup they make.  What's going to happen when Esme gets involved?  Can you imagine what Eleazar is going to think...and then keeping it a secret?  When will Emily come out of her hole?  So many questions...thanks for the update.

What a delusional group of kids you got!  I can't believe Bella is the most mature out of them all.  I do believe the poo is about to get deeper.  Why isn't Edward being truthful with Bella?  We all know that's going to back fire on him.  Maybe Bella needs to read the paper and find out what's got him so upset.  How far along is Bella at this point?  She can totally do without this stress...maybe when the time comes, Edward leaves Hollywood and becomes a yard man?!?  His temper is worrying me...anyway, thanks for the update, always love them.

Nope...James is still weird, but I still think Bree is mad.  A crush is a hard thing to get over....and then he's right in front of your face, with a co-worker.  It's got to hurt.  Looking forward to more clues.  Thx for the update.

Maybe James and agree are in this together?   Hmmmm...weird!

Alec is a dick...and thinks with it too!  I hope Bella isn't too mad at Edward...she has to know he's just talking tough in front of Alec.  Looking forward to the debriefing, Aro seems to have many, many surprises for them!  Thanks for the update...as always.

I can believe he was to be something bigger...I hope Edward was not double crossed by Aro, that would be totally messed up.  Please, please update sooner!  I made red velvet cupcakes!!!  Do you want some...hummm?

I'm glad all are safe...at the moment!  Alec really needs to go down, and go down hard.  He killed Aro and blames Edward, just as planned.  I was wondering why Jake let James off with a warning?  Why not shot first and ask questions later?  I guess I will have to wait and find out.  I hope Edward gives his real family a chance...I think he will as long as Bella and his guys are with him...they have been his rock for so long now.  Thanks for the update, looking forward to Thursday.

Well, when Alec is gone, and his assets will be Edwards....hummmm.  I wonder if Heidi will be a problem...Edward seems to really be strong against it, but we'll see.  Love to see was coming next.  E and I/B both have to have a sit down and talk about their feeling...maybe.  Bella is hurt and in love,  Edward is is hurt and in love..not just a bet, for either if them.

Thanks.

I still wonder why someone can't accidentally murder Alec?!  Thanks for the update...always looking for more.

I think Emmett is now in on the secret!  Love this story, thanks for the updates.

I didn't catch anything about a wedding...you were great.  Looking forward to see what you have in store for us...everything is going smooth, and a date night?  Thanks for the update.

Sorry...I was knee deep in trick or treat stuff!

I love the whole family dynamics coming together...I believe there will definitely be some drama to come.

Thanks for the update.

Edwards story is so sad...but, he did exact revenge, fear!    I like time jumps...some stories are 18 chapters long and it was like 4 days!  I love this story -maybe because I'm old and angst is not my thing.  Looking forward to the next installment.  Thanks.

How very cryptic.  Can't wait to hear more of the story...I love a mystery! Thank you.

I hope she got through to Ang...not to bad for Bella.  She just needs to cooperate and then make a run?!?  Who is her kidnapper??  Can't wait for the next...thanks for the update.

I still think G And P..and maybe Jasper need to knock him out.  I think Jasper has tried, but is just fed up.  I really hope Edward does listen, but moreover, Bella actually talks to him.  Can't wait for more...thanks for the update.

Edward is showing his true colors again.  He should have gone to Emmett right away with his suspicions.  He is going to getting himself into more trouble.  I'm glad Lexi and Jack can get along well enough...their party sounds kind of cool.  Thanks for the update of the crazies coming...sounds like things are going to get totally crazy soon! I was getting a little confused so thank you for clearing my path.  Great update...thank you.

I'm glad there was an adult in the room...and I hate to say it,a level head?  Edward did good.  He kept his stuff together as well as setting everyone else straight.  I'm kind of glad we are getting into the mob by stuff...like you said, dime a dozen, and I have read dozens, but I like this one...I've read enough hard core sex to last a lifetime.  Thanks for the updates...you do YOUR thing.

Maybe she should walk out then...let's see what nastyward has to say.  Angela...ugh!

I hope Seth has a talk to Charlie...he really needs to know so he doesnt look too hard...for Jacobs sake.  Thanks for the extra!

She needs to totally avoid both Edward and Angela.  She needs to stay away from the bad and go for the good.

I like Eleazar!  What a breath of fresh air... I dislike a man with a badge using it to be a bully!  Did he not hear what Jacob said about his daughter?  

I'm glad she has an open invitation to Alice.  I love that Alice is more of a normal American girl!  Jake is one of many bullies that I've ever met.  Ant wait to see what Bella finally decides.

I think she is the one that contacted Charlie and Jake...she would be the one to do something so childish!

I hope he sooths her fears!  He's been an ass too, so I guess she is just use to being treated badly...sad, really!  I hope he just doesn't blow it off...I hope he's honest with her!

Yeah, right!

They are so made for each other.  She seems kind of quiet lately!  Is she still in shock?  

Can't wait!

I think she is holding on to any bit of normalcy she can...good for her!

PIE hope its either jasper and/or Alice....but who knows until you tell us!