Reviews by momma2fan
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

OK, so I kind of exepected Edward to react, especially since she wants to leave. I really hope that he can convince her to stay and get rid of the job, or maybe do freelance, write a book, anything but leave him.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

She better be going back! That is all!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Oh my damn! Really neither have contacted each other?? These two need to get their heads out of their asses! and fast!!!

 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

And how soon is next time?? OMG!

Tick Tock by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She wanted a baby, but didn't exactly go through the conventional way to have one and now she has to deal with the family, including Edward. Written purely for laughs.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34998 Read Count: 69591
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

It's possible that I am suffering from sleep depravation so ignore my earlier review. Great story. Loved it...

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So I'm confused, when did they get married?? Bella was 27 weeks in chapter 12, but here you said she was 24, how far along was she?? I guess I'll just keep reading....lol!

Summary:

Bella is a regular customer at an ice cream shop, is she going there for the ice cream or the boy behind the counter. When certain events come out, who will be there to pick up the pieces?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8502 Read Count: 10736
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great job. Any plans for a future take??



Author's Response:

maybe

 

Saving Bella by Lost Twi Sisters Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Sixteen year old Bella, chained to the wall and left for dead. There's no hope of someone finding her, until a certain bronze haired guy comes to the rescue. But how did he find her? And why was she chained and left to die? Discover this and much more.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Want to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5510 Read Count: 1472
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it!!!

Summary:

Every year Edward and Bella hope to meet the love of their lives, but every year love eludes them. With any luck, this will be the year that they find each other and discover that love was always right in front of them.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Want to read
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5449 Read Count: 5656
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Cute. Just needs one thing...maybe an epi to tell us how they fared...

Elf by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's had a rough year and is ready to turn her back on the holidays until a chance encounter leads her to find someone to take care of ALL of her needs. Soft BDSM E/B

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14571 Read Count: 25313
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great job. I am not ususally a BDSM fan but this was good.



Author's Response:

Yay!  Thank you so much momma2fan!  Thank you for reading and enjoying.

xoxo

texasbella

People Change by kuntrygal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was the bane of Bella Swan's young existence until her mother unexpectedly moves her away. What happens years later when she moves back? Do people really change?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82271 Read Count: 32257
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great job. This story was fantastic. For your first fic this was a great one. I don't think a sequel is necessary, I think you told all that you could. Thanks...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! glad you enjoyed it! I may post some more of my completed stories, so if you liked this keep an eye out!

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Bella and Edward met when she was 18. Now 4 and a half yrs later they meet again. Bella is a teacher and Edward works for the fire department. Will they let love in or be burned? AH. M for language/lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44330 Read Count: 41627
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hadn't thought about it, but I'll consider it if there is enough interest.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward just got dumped, Bella just got dumped. These two best friends are about to find out what the real meaning of friends is. Loosely based on friends with benefits.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20769 Read Count: 3050
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: I only want to make you Smile

What a fantastic story. Great job.

Summary:

Bella needs a break from her busy life. When she heads to a beach house for a week, relaxing times are not all she finds. AH, ExB.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13315 Read Count: 643
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Warm Nights

Interesting. I never thought that they were already married. I thought maybe her husband had died and she was having a fling. Great job.



Author's Response:

Hi  there:

Thanks for stopping by and I'm glad you liked this story.

It's interesting the way you thought abou it, most of the people freaked out for about 5 seconds that Bella was cheating on her husband with Edward. Love your faith in Bella. :-)

Thanks again.

Love, CL82

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661137
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 160: Edward

Can't wait for tomorrow. I am so hoping that Jake gets his ass kicked!!

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 118: Edward

Jasper is right. The hard part is over. Now they can get back to work and the time will fly...Thanks girls.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 117: Bella

That was crazy sad. I have a really large lump in my throat. Off to Edwards side...

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

Okay...um...first, yay she sent him a care package and told him a little about herself.

Second...:( poor Edward. He really is all alone.

I hope that Bella tells him that even though he has no family that he has her...;)

Great update. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :) You'll see Bella's reaction today!

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 116: Edward

Thanks for the tissue warning...I needed it. Poor Sarge and Bella...I know they can get through this. They've made it this far...Can't wait for tomorrow.

 

 

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 36: Edward

Maybe I'm wrong here, but that read like he said the L word. When he said 'I won't share you with prying eyes when we're making love, beautiful. Period. When I'm in love with someone, I don't want anyone else seeing her but me.' That almost reads like a confession to me....Can't wait until tomorrrow!!

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 43: Bella

FOUR!!! I am so excited. The card he sent was beautiful! Off to the next one!!!

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 44: Edward

I can't click next...there is no NEXT....Where is the NEXT??? ARGGG!!

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 158: Edward

Great job girls. Can't wait for tomorrow, or the meeting with Jake!

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 46: Edward

YAY!!! They said it, they said it. I loved the way that Bella revealed her feelings. She didn't even have to think about it, they just came. I wonder if she even realized it until Edward said it back. LOVED IT!!! Thanks...

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45: Bella

I think she can handle it. She's stronger than she knows. Now where the hell is my next button???

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

That was great. I loved how he got his revenge. I would loved to have seen Tanya's expression when she recieved all of those pics. Update Soon!



Author's Response:

Hehe Thank you! :)

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Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

I'm glad that the easy banter is going to be present with these two. One question..Are we going to get to 'see' their reactions to each other's words?? I am loving this by the way...Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) Not for a little bit. Eventually we'll wander off from the written word alone. But for a bit, it's solely going to be emails. And as their relationship grows, you'll see the reactions more and more in the emails themselves. :)

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 8: Edward

Great update. Two in one day...Can we expect the same tomorrow?? I love it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Most will be 2 posts a day. The short short short chapters (specifically the first few emails) were combined. We're posting on Twilighted, too, and they don't allow chapters shorter than 500 words. The first few emails were shorter than that, so to be consistent here, we combined the first few chapters. :)

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 10: Edward

Great update. I can't wait until tomorrow.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! :)

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 14: Edward

Thanks for the update...Um, is it my imagination or did you post yesterday's chapters again? I had to hit next twice to get past my bookmark from yesterday. Just checking. I am loving the dynamic between these two. I can't wait for the Skype convo...till tomorrow!



Author's Response:

Hmm, no, I don't see anything like that... Weird! :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

Must just be me. I have been going a little crazy the last two days, with my husband out of town and my kids driving me nuts. Thanks for my escape.



Author's Response:

Aww, you're welcome! :) Thank you!

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Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 16: Edward

Great updates. They are opening up more and letting those feelings out. I hope that it doesn't hurt them in the long run. However, if this is based on Jen's life then I think that all will be okay.

On another note, I just read An Island in the Sun and let me just say, WOW! That was one of the best stories I have read in a while...

Till tomorrow ladies...



Author's Response:

Hehe No, it won't hurt them in the long run. ;) And it's not really based on Jen's life. ;) Her husband wasn't military...just in a different college in a different state! :) Thank you very much!

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 18: Edward

Ahh, man! I can't wait until Saturday...how ironic is that. I am so excited to read tomorrow. I hope that it's up before I go to work...

 

 



Author's Response:

Hahaha I'll try to get it up early! :)

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 22: Edward

Yay! They tallked and they both fell. I think its great. I hope we don't have to wait until Monday for more, but it is Fathers Day on Sunday so....

I am so glad that these got up before I had to go to work. Now I have to get ready. Thanks girls...Loved them!

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 24: Edward

Thanks for the updates. I'm glad that he made it back. Time seems to be passing quickly now, I hope that means he'll be home soon...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 26: Edward

Well, wow. Great updates thanks. I am loving this story.

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 28: Edward

I just have one question...How much time has elapsed here? When thay started talking, I think Edward told her he had six months to go. So how much longer until they meet in person? I keep thinking thats it only like two months. Can't wait for tomorrow.



Author's Response:

You can see via the dates on their first letters that she wrote him for the first time in early March. Chapter 28 was the middle of May, so they've been writing for about 2 months. And in chapter 14, Edward told her he had AT LEAST six months to go. It could be longer. We can't tell you the exact time that they'll get to meet in person. You'll just have to keep reading to find out. ;)

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 30: Edward

Aww, poor Christopher. I hope that the pics help cheer Bella up. I'm glad she's finally telling Charlie. I hope Edward can stand the heat...LOL! Thanks for the updates.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 32: Edward

Aww, he's so sweet. I want one...

The man is obsessed with cookies. He's probably gonna gain 50 pounds. Poor Emmett eating a scorpion..what is this..fear factor?? LOL! Thanks for the updates. Great job as always. Have I mentioned that I love this story...I look forward to tomorrow...

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 34: Edward

Great update, thanks. I'm sure that Charlie will approve. Can't wait until tomorrow!

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 38: Edward

I really hope that she doesn't freak out about being made his emergency contact. He can put me down! LOL! Can't wait for the update, thanks ladies!

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 40: Edward

TS Debby needs to go away. I can't not have my Sarge fix. I hope they get to talk soon, preferably through Skype so that they can reveal their feelings. Thanks for the update!

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 42: Edward

A surprise?!?! Mike is an idiot. I mean hello she showed you a picture! I think he has a stupidity leak that needs plugged up. Can't wait for tomorrow!!!

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 48: Edward

Wow! He really put himself out there, but she did ask. Great updates!! Do you girls know how many rec's you've been getting on other stories that I am reading?? I think at least 4 of my WIP's that I am reading have suggested you. Mine will have one on it on Monday....Thanks for writing a great story!

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 50: Edward

Thanks for the updates!! Love this.

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 52: Edward

Well then I hope that these months fly so that he can make those places sacred. Thanks for the updates. I was so happy to see them when my power came back on...it was off for 24 hours..:( But I am back up and reading now!!!

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 54: Edward

I love me some dirty Sarge! I can't wait until tomorrows Double posting. Thanks girls and Deb I hope you get to feeling better!

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 58: Edward

SQUEEEE!!!! They are coming stateside! I am so excited, but wwill they get to see each other??? OMG! Can't wait for tomorrow! Oh, yeah and uh, I could use a ShamWow about now!!

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 60: Edward

Loved it and I am so glad that he is coming back stateside. Will they get to see each other? I mean she is going to visit her mom in Florida....just saying. Can't wait for tomorrow.

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 62: Edward

WTF! Why didn't he answer her about seeing them at the airport? And um hello, if they are renting a house, I would think that while their wives (girlfriends)are on summer break they would be able to stay with them. As to why Bella got quiet...I can only imagine that she was disappointed he didn't answer her question or that he was ditching her for a beer....Can't wait until tomorrow!!!!

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 66: Edward

Yay! I was right about the house! They get to go see them....lets just hope for sooner rather than later! Can't wait for tomorrow!

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 68: Edward

Thanks for the updates. Once again, another story where Renee is a selfish mother and doesn't make an effort to see her daughter. I really hopw that doesn't blow a hole in their meeting. I eould hate for them to havfe to wait longer. Oh please let them go to Florida. Bella's summer job did say that she can work at her own pace...perhaps she can work anywhere as well. Can't wait for tomorrow!

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 70: Edward

Ooh, I wonder what he is gonna be thinking about laying on those blue sheets, or should I say who....Thanks for the updates ladies!

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 72: Edward

So, we are gonna surprise Sarge for his birthday! Can't wait. Thanks for the updates girls!

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 74: Edward

That was HOTT!! I have a feeling that when these two finally get together, they are gonna break shit! C-ya tomorrow!

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 76: Edward

Aww, sweet words from both. I loved it. Can't wait for tomorrow!

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 96: Edward

Oh my! I think that the no panties thing means he is gonna fullfill one of their fantasies. Can't wait until tomorrow!

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Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 78: Edward

Thanks for the updates ladies! Can't wait for tomorrow. I probably won't get to read them until I get off work at 9pm, but at least I know that something will be waiting for me, besides screaming children.

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Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 82: Edward

Thanks for the updates girls. I'm glad I got to read them before I went to work. I feel bad for Edward, but at the same time I am excited for him. I can't wait until they meet! Soon I hope, going by your countdown. See you tomorrow!!

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 84: Edward

SQUEEEAALLL!!! They get to meet tonight (tomorrow)...Unfortunately I have to be at work at 8:45 AM and will have to wait to read their meeting until I get home :(!! Oh well, at least I'll have something to look forward to. I don't suppose it will be a 4 chapter day instead of 2, will it?? I think their meeting deserves 4....just sayin'! Can't wait!

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 88: Edward

SQUEEEE! Yay they met. Best meeting ever!!! Can't wait for tomorrow!!!

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 92: Edward

These were the BEST updates...so far! I'm so glad they are together. And a piano...what a great surprise! Can't wait for tomorrow!!!

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 94: Edward

Oh happy day! Great updates. Thanks ladies. See ya tomorrow!

 

 

 

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 98: Edward

I love Possesiveward! Great updates. Can't wait until tomorow!

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 102: Edward

I loved the date. I laughed about the car. The zoo was fun....20 questions was oh so sweet. Great job. Thanks for the updates. Can't until tomorrow!!!

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Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 104: Edward

Okay, his conversation with Charlie brought tears to my eyes. It was very fatherly and I loved it. Especially now that they are on a first name basis....Can't wait until tomorrow!

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 106: Edward

Damn! Tanya is one messed up bitch. I can kinda understand where Bella is coming from...I mean Edward has a LONG history with her, and the way they met was unconventional. But I think Edward has assured her enough that she should be secure in their relationship. She was strong for part of the phone call...what happened? Surely that vile woman telling her that she had some of his things didn't cause that much doubt. Can't wait to see what she says tomorrow....

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 108: Edward

That was fun. I'm glad they got the hard stuff out of the way before the innuendo began. Can't for tomorrow. Thanks ladies!

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Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 112: Edward

Great updates. It got a little hot in here. Are we gonna skip ahead a little after they go home? I hate to have the separation longer for us (them). Thanks ladies....

 

 

 

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 120: Edward

Jake is a douche, I am glad that Charlie stepped in. Hmm...the worst pick up line I ever heard...I actually was hit with TWO in one night..

ONE: When they made the alphabet, they should have put 'U' and 'I' together....GAG!!

TWO: Do you have a  mirror in your pocket, cause I can sure see myself in your pants.

Thank God I met my husband and didn't have to hear anymore...C-ya tomorrow!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 124: Edward

Great updates. I love that their Skype dates are getting more....well just more. I was also lmao when I was reading some of the pick up lines. Loved it...C-ya tomorrow ladies.

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 126: Edward

I really hope that there are no surprises in store for Bella whn Edwards possesions arrive. No Tanya, or drama of any kind...right? Thanks for the updates. See you tomorrow!

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 128: Edward

Great update girls. It was great of Irina to keep stuff that she thought would be imporrtant to Edward...memories of his life with his family as he starts a new on with Bella. Great job. Can't wait until tomorrow!

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 130: Edward

Great update. I wonder what he's gonna do for her b-day? See ya tomorrow!

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132: Edward

SQEEE!!!! Is he gonna where a red bow??? Can't wait!

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 134: Edward

I was really hoping that Mike would piss his pants. Yay! He's there...(yes I jumped up and down like Alice)...Can't wait for tomorrow!

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 136: Edward

Awesome! I loved the bow...did Bella even notice? Can't wait for tomorrow!

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 138: Edward

Thanks for the updates. I'm glad I got to read them before I went to work. I love a little possesive Sarge. I wonder if they'll have the elevator to themselves on the way back...

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 140: Edward

Thanks for the ShamWow...because WOW!! That was HOTT!! C-ya tomorrow...Should I have a tissue ready?

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 142: Edward

I'm glad that I got the tissue warning. I teared up a bit there. I love his gift...C-ya tomorrow!

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 144: Edward

Great chapters ladies. I'm so glad that they will be back together soon. C-ya tomorrow!

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Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 146: Edward

5 days! I can't wait for the homecoming, but part of me dreads it too. I am so worried that Tanya is gonna try something...What needs to be brought full circle??? Can't wait for tomorrow!

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Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 148: Edward

HE'S HOME!!!! So freaking excited! Can't wait for tomorrow! I also can't wait until Edward meets Charlie....and Jake!

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 150: Edward

Great updates. I'm glad that he's home and that he got misty-eyed knowing that Bella had his things around. Can't wait for tomorrow!

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 152: Edward

This was the sweetest chapter. I loved it. I am so glad that he is acclamating well! C-ya tomorrow!

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 154: Edward

Can't wait for tomorrow! Great updates. I love that they went back old school! So sweet...

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 156: Edward

I teared up when Charlie called him son! Great job ladies!

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 164: Edward

Okay, so Jake is a total tool and Paul is no better. I'm still torn on them going to see Renee....See ya tomorrow!

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Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 166: Edward

I will never be able to look at a piano the same again. Thanks ladies!

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 167: Chapter 168: Edward

Great update. Thanks ladies, see ya tomorrow!

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 170: Edward

I want to cry knowing that this is almost over. Especially sonce I didn't get to read it until today and I got the email that the next chapters were up. Great job on this one!

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 172: Edward

Aww...his proposal was so sweet.. I am anxiously awaiting the next one. Thanks ladies.

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 173: Bella

*sniff* I can't believe its almost over!Can't wait for the epi!

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Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 174: Epilogue

I have been putting off reading this because I didn't want it to end. I LOVED this story. I love it that you ended it the way it began. Two beautiful kids, one just happens to be named after me. That's right, I am an Elizabeth Marie, I just happen to go by Liz, not Ellie....

Thanks for writing such an amazing story!!

Summary:

Silent interactions. Blank stares. Avoided rooms. I don't know if you need me, but I know you blame me. I know I need you and I blame myself. I can live with that, can you? AH. *Written as an entry for the 'Season of Our Discontent' Contest.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10427 Read Count: 337
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: momma2fan Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Down The Hall

That was intense. Do you have any plans to continue it??



Author's Response:

Hi there:

Thanks for stopping by, I'm glad you liked this story. I do have some plans for it, but not in the near future, as I'm concentrating in other things at the moment.

You never know, though. Thanks for taking an interest. :-)

Love, CL82

Summary:

For the Etched In Ink Fest. Tiny drabble. Bella has a broken heart, see what Edward does to repair it. Tattoo inspired, link for tat at the end. AH/OOC.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1790 Read Count: 4480
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OMG! LMAO! That was great and the pic of the tat was classic...Awesome!



Author's Response:

*smiles* thanks, glad you enjoyed it, that tat is too great

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When a secret is revealed, just days before her wedding, Bella leaves her fiancé Edward, as well as her sisters, in a panic, wondering: will she be able to forgive him in time, or leave him standing at the altar. June Drabble War entry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20084 Read Count: 104378
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jul 2012
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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Awesome! I can't believe all the drama. I thought my family was bad!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419158
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great update. I cannot believe that Jasper is still such a bastard!! Good for ALL of them standing up to him on Bella's behalf. Can't wait for the next update.

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Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

The last time we thought Jasper had turned over a new leaf, he had the wool pulled over our eyes. Its hard to trust him now. I would like to give him the benefit of the doubt, but time will tell. Garrett is awesome! I love him and I think that he and Alice are gonna be really happy.

Lauren....well hmm, I think she revealed what I have known. Charlie was using Jacob to get drugs. Now that his source is gone, I have a feeling that the shit is gonna hit the proverbial fan....in the ER. I hope that no one gets maimed or killed in the process.

Great job. I'm glad that I am all caught up now!!

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Why do I get the feeling that Jacob Black is somehow involved in Charlie's release? Great couple od chapters can't wait until the next ones!!!