Penname: twilightgirl224 [Real name: Leeanne Jaymes Lemaster
Member Since: 05 Oct 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

My name is Leeanne and I am from Jacksonville, Florida. Hopefully won't be in the city for much longer because I have some serious dreams that I need to have come true and this city doesn't do anything to help make that happen. Next year, I will hopefully find myself on the steps on Hollywood. Yeah Baby!!



I have always wanted to be in the film industry and I am determined more now than I was before to see that happen. I love to write, but more than anything I love to make movies. I like to be the center of attention and I enjoy entertaining people. What a better place to do that in?!



I graduated from the University of North Florida with a bachelor in Communications with an emphasis on electronic media. Basically, I should be working in the News; so not happening. I am trying to go back to school at either UCLA or USC to get my masters in Film. *crossing my fingers*



After reading many of the fan fiction stories, I decided to write one of my own. Like I said before, I like to write, but I am used to short stories, treatments and scripts. This is a whole new genre for me and I hope that everyone enjoys!!


 


***My story - Matters of the Heart - is on temporary hiatus right now.  Work is totally kick my butt and I really don't have time to write.  I am working on a new chapter as I speak, but I can't get enough time to just sit down and concentrate. I WILL SEE THIS STORY TO THE END!!! It's my baby and I want to finish it. Don't give up on me, please.  I promise I will be back***







 


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PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Holy shit....Carlisle and Esme are being as stubborn as Edward and Bella...how fitting...anywho...I don't see this going down very well...I can't wait to see what you have in store for the gang...I totally love this story...I get so immersed when each chapter comes out...thank you!!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review and comments and don't worry (or do worry) the KIDS have got the E & C situation under control (heaven help us all). more fun up next chapter xoxo

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

I got so giddy at the end with Bella and Edward sharing their news...now Em and Rosie are having another...WOW!!

I'm glad Esme and Carlisle got their shit together, but I find Esme's situation almost like Bella's...I hope they can help each other out...I think Esme talking to someone is great and having someone who has gone through the same things, kind of, will help both of them...

I really love this story...have been reading it forever, sorry if I don't leave comments that much, but I totally get lost in this story and I forget...keep up the awesome work!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review Darling - I appreciate the review, you know it's not why I write, but I enjoy feeling the love, so thumbs up for your review and comments.

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

*giggle* Poor Edward *chuckle*
I feel bad for his um, situation, but I couldn't stop laughing at his reaction. I still laughing as I type this review.
I am glad that Bella decided to let Edward in, give him a little of her past. And I totally loved her introduction to his father. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

Yes! She finally called herself his girlfriend and I think it was well deserved. She broke his dick. My hub's didn't see the humor in this chapter. I swear, men. They don't get funny ;))

Thanks for reading, Hun!!

 

~K

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Five - Desire The Fire

Oh...that was pure evil....evil I say....it was getting SOOOOOOO good!!! Damn it...I can't wait to read more...



Author's Response:

I know, I know...but I promise some loving in the epilogue. I'll send CBLW out with a bang. Thanks for reading xoxo

~K

Summary: Past Featured Story

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.

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MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 51167
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2011 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I was SO glad to see the update alert in my email box. I was so attached to this story when you began writing it. I'm happy you're back. Charlie and Renee, hmmmm. They could be truly worried about Bella, concerned how she is handling everything. Not sure. Can't wait for the update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman.  A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH

First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning. 

 

image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138710
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2016
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Haha...love that Esme is the Domme in this....cracked me up.

I hope Edward figures out his issues...ugh for Tanya...

Update soon! :)

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wild

Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184429
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - Caught

Haha...Oh damn...Renee...oh well...no loss there, karma can be a bitch sometimes.

Glad that Bella and Edward are okay...can't wait for the next two installments...truly enjoyed this story!!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Wild

Uh, this is a duplicate chapter

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - Outtakes and Futuretake Teasers

Okay for the future teaser...that was just wrong...lmao...but, I was wondering...I'm not sure if you have told us before or not...are you going to do a sequel...continuation or is the fandom compilation going to pretty much cover the rest?  



Author's Response:

Hi there :)
While I'm sure I could develop a new storyline to do a sequal for Wild, my heart just wouldn't be in it because I feel I've really reached the end with these characters... so the fandom compilation will be it. The futuretake is quite comprehensive; hopefully it will satisfy the Wildlings, as one of my readers refers to the fans. After 60 days, I will post the outtakes and futuretake here and on fanfiction.net and twilighted.net.
Thanks so much for your support :)
Peps

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - Futuretake One

Oh. My. God. I'm beyond hot here. Need a cold shower now! LOL.
I'm so glad for this update and I can't wait for the next installment. I will definitely be donating when the time comes for the fandom as I volunteer for that group in my hometown. My company raises money and walks for it every year, it's a great cause. I'm glad you contributed. Keep up the wonderful work!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Oh damn!!  This is going to be an interesting story for me...love these kinds....

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god....................................update please!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

OMG....Damn it....Okay....Argh....okay I'm done...oh please please update soon!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

love

Edward left Bella the day after he makes love to her for the first time. Join Bella on her journey of love, laughter, pain and tears. Will love be enough to bring him back? Will the love of his baby be enough?

 

Warning:  at times there will be lemons and language. Bella will be unsure of herself, she will doubt herself. Edward will be an ass at times, but this is life and life is not always pretty. Will love really be enough?

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72137 Read Count: 34972
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2011 Updated: 26 Sep 2011
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

Oh shit.....oh.my.god.....hurry and update....please, pretty please!!!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

GRIN.....thank you for updating quickly....but I am dying to understand Bella's quick change and what her secret is....

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

Cool....I ready for more....lol....this story is freaking addictive....

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120 Spa

OMFG, I almost died laughing. Bella saying all that in front of her mother, I don't know if I could ever be that forthcoming about my man's sexual prowess with my mother. But hot damn for Bella! Way to go girl!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it - I think I should have put more of a reaction from her mom in it! - maybe I still will . . .

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99 Restored

I have a feeling it has to do with Bella's milk for the repair of Edward's arm, just like his, um, fluids *cough* helped heal her.  I can't wait to see what happens in the future...more kids or will she finally become one of them.  Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103 Reunions

Oh crap...what is Bella gonna do...did Renee hear about the kidnapping some other way...Can't wait to see how Renee reacts to everything...

I hope they have another baby...that would be awesome...I think Edward might have some reservations but he usually can't deny Bella anything...



Author's Response:

True, he's such a pushover whee she is concerned!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94 Arrival

*tear*  

I'm so happy for them....

I can't wait for the next installment......

*Big Grin*

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93 Delivered

I'm so glad that they are together...now I am on pins and needles about Masen's birth...Alice saw everything was fine...but the no Bella thing is tripping me out, but the other senerio, additional children...oh what's gonna happen....you know how much I love this story...you keep my interest piqued all the time...so good!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  One birth, coming up!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111 Delusions

I honestly think Renee could handle the truth, my only concern is the Volturi.  Renee "sees" more than anhyone truly realizes, even Edward.  So it will be interesting to see how this pans out.  Keep up the good work, you know how much I LOVE this story!!!  I'm sorry to lose the daily updates, but being a writer myself I know how crazy RL can get...as far as the days..Sun, Wed and Fri should be good (if that works with your schedule of course!)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the encouragement!  It really does matter!

renee can't know, it breaks volturi law, but she is sure to come up with something . . .  and soon!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

LOL...circumcise - cleanliness issues...

I loved Jasper's reaction - I would have never expected that out of him - lmao.

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123 Simple Question

I know she loves to make love with Edward...but honestly I would have held out...he was acting like a child, not even asking her that vital question.  I love that Alice is blocking him, she knows that it wasn't that guy.

Payback is a bitch...I hope Bella lays into him...he deserves it!!!



Author's Response:

Alice was right, she can't help him with every lesson!  lol

He needs to trust his wife! (asking and not asuming would be nice as well!)

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Vampire

I am thoroughly enjoying the story...I can't wait to see what happens next....



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying my thoughts on Edward and Bella!  I have lots more!  Thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Mother & Daughter

I totally love this story...I can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!  I really appreciate reading them!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Adjusting

I'm glad to see that Charlie had a change of heart...but I am dying to find out what is in store for Bella and Edward....thanks for the upates!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review!  There is a great deal more story to come!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Flight

Oh damn...this is gonna be interesting!!  

Keep them coming...I totally love this story...



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review!  Yep, we're adding the werewolves!

There is a great deal more story to come!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Meadow

Oh hell to the no....Leave it up to Edward to say some crap like that....making decisions for her AGAIN! He's the one that went all Caveward on her after she told him NOTHING happened....ARGH....I still love him though, but he needs to learn to stop doing this....



Author's Response:

Not to worry, the little human that owns him is about to go all cavewoman on him and let him kow what's up!  Thank you for taking the time to review!  There is a great deal more story to come!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Mending

I'm glad that they didn't stop making love...it would just seem all kinds of wrong...I was almost in tears when he took her back to where he left her....damn, didn't see that coming...I love where this is going....can't wait to see more....



Author's Response:

You made my day!  If I described how she felt, and how he was acting with enough details for you to be in tears, then I did my job!  love it! Thank you soooooo much for telling me that!  I hope there are quite a few more occasions that get you that emotional, both good and bad, Thank you for taking the time to review!  There is a great deal more story to come!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Blood

Okay....omfg, ewwww on the first part, lol.
Is Edward sleeping....I have a theory but I'm not sure....can't wait till the next chapter.
Sorry I didn't review on the last....I didn't get a chance...but it was fabulous as well.
Keep up the awesome job!

Author's Response:

Remember, Blood isn't ewwweeee for a vampire, in whatever form he can get it!  Add sex, and you have a seemingly winning combination!  As for sleeping . . .

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Past

I'm glad they figured it out....I am worried about Sue though...she's going to make it interesting or she will make it easy...

I really enjoy this story and I can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

True, Sue could make everything easier or harder in the long run!  Hope you like the choice!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Happenings

Man, I always disliked Jessica...oh well.
As far as the vampire...it could be one of the Volutri...Or Victoria....hummm.

Author's Response:

I know, right . . . if someone had to buy the farm, it might as well have been Jessica.  Of course, Edward was thinking about it . . .

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock

Okay...since this doesn't seem like the traditional pregnancy from the series, I'm going to assume it won't be as bad, but, knowing Edward, he's going to freak out and try everything to make sure she's safe...not sure what going thru his mind.

Author's Response:

No. not the traditional pregnancy from the series, but our edward will freak out in his own way, none the less!  Thank you so much for taking the time to respond!  Here is a snipit of how he acts -

 

I was scared to death. Carlisle assured me she was safe for now and I didn't want to disappoint her or bring in all the gloom and doom, but I knew the legends all too well and I wasn't sure Carlisle had shared those with her. I would have to, though . . . I had promised her no secrets. I understood her delay in telling me about the baby, having me here on our own island alone was just the right setting to tell me so that we had to face each other and I would see her joy and be able to control my fear instead of rushing her back to Carlisle to have it removed from her. This baby was a danger to my wife and though I already had feelings for the unborn child she carried, I refused to take any chances with Bella.

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance

I am so glad that Edward took the news well...I laughed my ass when he fell off the stool...I could just picture his reaction...I'm excited for the both of them, just hope there isn't TOO much drama in the near future (yeah right, lol)

Keep up the great job, you know I love this story!!



Author's Response:

I'm soo sooo sooooo glad you could picture him falling off the stool!  The one thing I go for is creating a visual that the reader can respond to, and I think Bella's words wee strong enough to get that response from him!

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward

Edward sleeping is completely tripping me out...I really want to know what is bringing that on...love insatiable Bella...complete opposite of what I'm used too...but hey, they do say women become increasingly sexual during pregnancy...such fun!!!



Author's Response:

I really could never get enough when I ws pregnant.  Five children.  I figured i woulod write what I know!  lol  thank you for taking the time to review and please let me hear from you again and tell me what parts you find the most fun!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 Investments

*giggle* OMG, if my mother walked in on me and my husband like Renee did with Bella and Edward, I would completely die of embarrassment...*giggle snort*

I love it...keep up the good work!!



Author's Response:

I think they handeled it well, considering they arre only teenagets!  lol  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 Confidants

I like the interaction between Rose and Bella...I knew how much Rose dislike Bella at the beginnin because of her choices...but now that Bella is going to keep the baby, she seems quite happy.

 

I loved the vision Alice showed Edward...the thought of them having more than one child is awesome!!



Author's Response:

You have got to love Alice!  Hope you keep enjoying the story!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 Christmas Eve

Oh hell....I can't wait to see what Jacob says...

btw, I loved the line...I didn't want Bella's entry into my world to be because we had to use venom to save her life...so non-Breaking Dawn...

Keep up the good work...can't wait for the update!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for commenting!  I really appreciate knowing what lines the readers like in particular!  No one has ever commented on that line and that excites me to know that you liked it so much!

I never liked Edward's lack of dialogue about the baby - he never showed that he cared for it and then all of a sudden he could communicate with it and he cared?  Oh Hell no!

I think you will like the birth - at least i hope so, and I love that edward is so in love with the baby already!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 Presents

Um, this is a repeat chapter....I got this with chapter 60



Author's Response:

SOOO Sorry!   I posted chapter 61 insatead of 60!  Please reread and it will make better sense!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67 Jacob

Okay...Jacob becoming Jacob Eclipse style....damn, kinda hoping he wouldn't but oh well...

Can't wait to read more...love it!!



Author's Response:

Ec;i[se style?  But Jake is friends with Edward and across the country from La Puxh?  Oh My!  Hope you like the rest of the story!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Genes

I loved the scene between Jacob and Edward....I was laughing very hard....just picturing Jacob freaking because he's a wolf and not knowing how to turn back....can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

Well, it's gotta be kind of disturbing to look down and find that you have fur and paws!  lol!

Hope you continue to enjoy the story, and thank you for letting me know the pats you like!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Taken

OH MY GOD...you're killing me with the cliffy....oh this is getting nail-biting good!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87 Demands

Ok...you've done it...my nails are pretty much non-existent.  Errrr....I need another chapter...lol...this is killing me!!



Author's Response:

I don't want to be responsible for you loosing your nails! 

You have been so amazing with the reviews - here is another chapter for you!

That will make 2 chapters a day two days in a row!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90 Tracks

Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God....I'm giddy with anticipation here....I hope they find her, alive, well and in one piece....I would hate to see Edward if something happened to her again.  



Author's Response:

No, Edward really won't survive if he looses her!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91 Fire

Okay woman, you have officially killed me....lol....damn cliffhanger....please oh please hurry with the update!!!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100 Morning

I feel for Emily, but Sam's ignorance is going to be his downfall.  Jacob's got a huge decision to make, wow.  

Love Emmett...his mouth gets him in sooo much trouble but he's very honest, but I would be a beet red as Bella was after his little comment, LMAO!!!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110 Plans

I love it, just keep adding.
I have always wondered how the characters of these stories react to watching the Twilight movies, seeing as they have the same names and all. (I just find it funny)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked that.  they are going to be forced to watch Eclipse and Breaking dawn as wwell, I think since you like it they will talk about it a little more!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112 Playing Nice

Oh this is going to be interesting...glad Charlie spoke up on Bella's behalf...I can't wait to see the "more children" senario!!!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129 Leaving

LMFAO...Tanya is such a slut and cow...I can't stand her.  I LOVED, absolutely loved Edward pushing her into the lagoon.  I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

I enhoyed him tossing her as well!

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/48835/images/Sperm_Donor_Wanted_Banner.jpg

Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Damn it!!! Well, he said first...now let's see how this plays out...god why did you have to stop it there, lol.

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

OH MY GOD!!! I'm as speechless as Bella...it explains a lot now...

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923126
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Oh shit!! Go Edward...I know James was pissed, lmao.  There is going to be hell to pay for Victoria, karma's a bitch.  I knew she would try to have the last word. I can't believe she told Edward about what James and Dimitri did to Bella. Argh! I wonder how Edward is going to bring it up to Bella, if he even does.  I know Edward's pissed beyond all reasoning, and I understand why. I just hope he doesn't do something stupid to jeopardize him or Bella.

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh thank you...I've been waiting for this chapter ever since this was taken down from FF (Still pissed about that).  I'm glad that Jasper shut Victoria up, she's a pain in the ass. I also really dispise James and Dimitri (I hope they both fall off a cliff). I can't wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

HAHAHAHAHAHA....about damn time....but it didn't teach him the lesson he needed....we need something else entirely - and I can't wait to read about it!

I love Alice, although she's supposed to be "innocent", she knows what's going on.  She knows that everyone involved - Bella, Edward, Jasper, Tanya and herself - don't want to be there. I felt bed for Jasper in the last chapter - but then to see him face Alice. Poor Jasper. 

Now, I wonder how Edward is going to tell Bella what he knows, or if she will admit it to him first. I dying for the conversation.

I can't for another update!! Hurry soon, please.

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Second Elizabeth Ch 2

Um, now I'm getting way confused. I'm thinking some very interesting things. Not sure how to take it. 



Author's Response:

keep reading :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Oh hell. This may or may not be good. It'll give Edward a chance to get what he wants, in one form or another, and it may give Bella the kick in the ass she needs to see what's right in front of her. This could pan out in either direction and it'll be interesting to see how this works out. 

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

I love this story truly. Regardless of some people's opinions, I believe Bella is scared of letting herself love Edward fully. She loves him, she knows it, but she is having a hard time putting herself out there. She's had a couple failed relationships and her friendship with Edward means the world to her. I'm glad Edward sees what he wants and is willing to risk everything to achieve it. I know Bella will come around. As a woman, most of us lead with our emotions/heart, and are terrified to put them at risk. 

She just got out of a relationship where she didn't have the emotional and sexual attachment, she wants to experience that before going for the gold. I can understand that, and obviously there are a couple out there who don't. Oh well, their issues. 

I can't wait for the moment that Bella's mind and heart sync themselves, because then, all I have to say is....Edward, watch out!!!

I can't wait!!! *jumping up and down, clapping* (I feel like Alice right now, without the squealing)

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

I left this on your facebook page, but I thought I should leave it here as well.

I guess people are forgetting the HEA that is part of this story. And I am so over one of your 'critics' Tufano. That person kills me on the reviews. Sorry you get those. Anyway, I loved the update as always. And you gotta have your eyes 'opened' to what can be lost before you get your head out of your ass, as you say. I feel for both. Going from friends, to FWB to possible lovers in a relationship can cause a lot of heartache, headache and pain. I hope to see them both overcome the obstacles.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159748
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

GAH!!! I can't believe it stopped there!!

Oh wow!!! Um, yeah. I'm glad Bella stood up for herself. Edward needs to get it together and this maybe his "eye opener". 

I hoe Bella is okay in every way.

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ugh, I'm all over the place with this chapter. 1st) I want to castrate Jacob and give him a lobotomy. 2) Poor Bella, she's getting screwed in so many ways, Jacob's nastiness and cruelty, and Edward's "I'm married to my job" BS. And 3) Edward, I'm losing confidence in him. I know he's in denial, but he's aging to cause Bella a lot of heartache if he doesn't figure his mess out soon.

I know Bella is not innocent in all this, cause she agreed to the relationship type, but, she's the one who's gonna suffer the most. 

 

Cant wait a it to read more! 

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

'My girl' huh?? Yeah, he's so in denial. Funny that they 'met' before they really met. I hope he figures out that she is the one he needs. She knows what goes into the job, and I believe she will be the perfect match for him. If he'd would just open his eyes/mind a little more. 

 

Great update. Can't wait for me!!!