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Bio:
Hmmm... what do you want to know about me? Let's see,
I'm 31 years old and live in Baltimore MD, aka MobTown, aka Charm City. I moved here 5 years ago for a job and have really grown to love this dirty blue collar town. The only downsides are the high crime rate, the lack of state parks within 20 minutes drive from my house, and oh yeah, Johns Hopkins University undergrads who live in my neighborhood and make my life difficult. (Great place for graduate studies, or if you are going into music at Peabody Conservatory, but for the general undergrad experience, I prefer my small liberal arts school where we were expected to Think Independently and apply knowledge, not regurgitate bullshit for an exam.)
I work in molecular biology, doing research. My lab focuses on Retinoblastoma, a pediatric eye cancer. I really am a mad scientista!
I got turned onto this site and I adore reading all the stuff out there. Some of the writers here are really talented. However, it is my personal pet peeve that people don't use proper english and constantly misuse "your and you're; there, their, and they're; affect and effect," among many others. I'm more than happy to read for people and help work out the typos anytime. Just message me and we'll work it out.
I recently started writing my own story with a co-writer, Pheonix1855, and a side shot to the original story: Obsessed and Victims of Rage. Come check us out, I'm now totally addicted to reviews and it's made me review so much more than I ever used to.
I'm in an 9 year LTR with a great guy who puts up with all my shit, as well as all the hours I spend reading other people's work. I have a completely cracked sense of humor and absolutely no filter. It gets me in trouble but seems to amuse people.
Anything else? Guess you'll just have to ask yourself if you're that curious.
***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***
The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.
Isn't Selita grand? Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.
This is my first fan-made banner! SamasaurusRex did a great job!! Thank you!!!
This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!! michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me! Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?
michelleab09 did it again!! Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Ch 23 - Surprises
Awww, he's got everything he ever wanted. Very sweet. Surprised Esme took things so well though. Don't know where else the story has to go, but I'm trusting that you have it worked out. I do hope that Bella continues school and doesn't give up, though.
See you when you've got the next chapter of this saga ready for us.
Cheers, Balti K
Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes?
Rated: M (18 and over)
AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Possive, dominant Edward is hot! Well done. I have a feeling that Aro might be less of a problem here than James. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Hee hee hee, ordering Bella doesn't often get you what you want, even if it's in her best interests. Kind of like most women. Glad she gave in though.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Boy, these two just can't get a moment's peace, can they? Trouble around every corner.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
So glad they got James. Now how are they going to catch Aro?
Cheers, Balti K
Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89652
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Hey, I'm really enjoying your story and thought I'd take the moment to share some thoughts. I really enjoy seeing everything through Jasper's POV. I do have a little bit of constructive criticism though. I understand the desire to write Jasper's accent into all his speech, but I think you can be a little more subtle with it. We all know he's southern, and it comes out in little ways. Remeber that he hasn't actually lived in the south in 50 years or so. When you overwrite the dropping of consonants and ends of words, it can get confusing and acually detract from the story and pull the reader out of it, in order to figure out what you're saying. Let the readers minds do more of the work. I know I automatically put in Jasper's drawl, regardless of whether it's explicitly written or not. Hope this is helpful to you. Other than that, just keep writing. I think you have a great story and I'm looking forward to seeing where you'll take it.
BTW, is Edward coming back soon?
Happy Typing,
karina
Balti K
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are enjoyin' the story and I do understand what you are talkin' about with the droppin' letters and such but that's how I talk so it's easy for me to do and not even think about it. Sometimes I do go back and edit but at this point I think it's important to stay consistent. I have another ten chapters written and I will get 'em posted here eventually but I can't say when. As for Edward he will return but not yet. Not for a while. In 10 chapters he has yet to return. So it's a long process.
I hope you'll stick around and not find my writin' too horrid. Thank you and I'll take that into consideration in the future.
xoxoxox
M-
“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Revelations
Oh, how cute! Bella has her first crush... Sweet.
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: I'd Rather Be With You
Good chapter. Bella's actually becoming a woman. How cute when they grow up! Edward is right to take the physical stuff slow, but I wish he would kiss her!
Cheers!
Balti K
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Charlie
How sweet with Charlie. She's right about her thinking on his disease, at least she still has a dad, even if he's unaware. I want a tasty sweet Edward to wake me up in the morning too, btw. Know where I can get one?
Waiting for my next taste of devoted Edward,
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Stepping Forward
Great Chapter. I love how niave Bella is about everything. It's adorable. Poor Charlie though.
Hope RL gets a little easier.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Undisclosed Desires
Hehehe. Is it just that Edward can't handle a Bella who looks like a woman? Is that the problem? I think it might be. Can't wait to see how that dinner is going to go.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I've Got You Under My Skin
Yay! Now are they just going to cuddle and make out, or are they going to do a bunch more? Great chapter. Glad they got things out in the open.
Cheers,
Balti K
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, as to your question, you'll have to wait and see. I'm not cruel, I won't leave them waiting too long.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: At Last
Ha. Nice on Angela showing up. I imagine that will be office gossip in the morning. Or not, since Bella's been nice to Angela and helped her with Ben. Hmm. Can't wait to see what you do with it.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Everything
So Sweet! I want an Edward for my very own!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The Best Is Yet To Come
Awesome. Is Bella going to become insatiable now? Ha ha.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Complications and Awkward Conversations
Great chapter. I know guys are supposed to be totally weirded out by girls' cycles, but like Edward, I've found that the good ones are just caring and supportive and try to help. One thing I'll also add, orgasms are a great way to relieve cramps. Just saying.
For the outtake, I think I'd love to see what Edward was thinking when he first met her, and somewhere along the line, I'd love to see the panty debacle from his POV.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Absolutely, I agree with you, which is why I wrote Edward like I did. Thanks for the 'cramp' tip, may have to include that in future chapter, Bella will be very grateful!
For the outtake I've decided to do their first meeting from his POV, and then slowly work up to where Bella POV is at the moment. I've really wanted to write the panty scene from his POV though, so that should be fun.
Thanks for the review and have a lovely weekend,
Aurora
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Element of Surprise
Great chapter, glad Edward got some lovins. He's been such a sweetheart through all this.
Sounds like Bella's going for blood against James. Can't wait to see that play out.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Indeed, it was well overdue for him.
I don't think there'll be too much of JJ left to tell the tale...
Thank you for the review, Aurora
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Awesome. I love a bad ass Bella. And she certainly kicked ass and took names in this one. Great job. And glad she finally figured out her feelings for him. I get the idea he's been waiting for her to catch up to him this whole time.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hey :) I'm really glad you liked the chapter, thank you for the kind words, it really means a lot.
Tell me about it, it took her long enough, but once she's made up her mind that's it :)
Thanks for reviewing, Aurora
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Friends and Foes
Well now, that's a wonderful way to wake up. I'm jealous; I want a naked Edward in my bed too.
Glad they got the 'I love yous' out of the way. I had a feeling he was just waiting on her, so she didn't feel pressured. Good boy.
His reaction over James was better than I expected. But then again, he may have been slightly distracted.
Nicely done. Have fun in Moscow. I've never been, but I hear it's beautiful.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hey Balti thanks for the review :) What I wouldn't give to wake up to a man like that, I feel your pain...
He's ever so patient, but I couldn't make him wait much longer, that would've been cruel.
Distraction is key, even though she didn't say it for that purpose, it certainly worked. Thank you for your kind words. Moscow will be very very cold but I'll be in conferences for most of it so not outside at least.
Until next time, Aurora
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Emmett
Emmett's hilarious. Totally fun andd adorable. Love it.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Substance
Aro is a sketchy asshole. I knew there had to be something happening. Perhaps Carlisle can help, or they can get tape of him trying to blackmail Edward. There has to be something that can be done to get rid of that slimeball. But kudos to Bella for the support.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: The Benefit of Candid Conversation
Oh, I'd love to see what Edward thought of her all dressed up. Perhaps thanking Rosalie and the gods?
Glad the benefit went well, and I can't wait to see what surprise he has for her.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hey :) thanks for the review. I'm sure he was very, very grateful, it's something I plan to include in a future outtake.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter and looking forward to more.
Aurora
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Rapture
So freaking sweet! How adorable is Edward? And to have written and recorded the song that long ago? So sweet.
But when are they going to go public, and how to deal with the blackmail?
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hey Balti it's good to hear from you again :) I'm really glad you liked this one. I love writing adorable Edward but I find myself wanting to go overboard...a lot, so I have to reign in the fluff now and then. The things you mentioned are going to be discussed in the next chapter, I have to pop their little bubble and send them back to work.
Thanks for reviewing!
Aurora
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - I Want To Hold Your Hand
Hee hee hee. I love that Edward played her until she came out and said what she wanted. For all the teasing and the energentic joining in, there's something about initiation that makes a difference. Good for her taking the lead. I'm sure Edward loved it too.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hey Balti! I'm so glad you pointed that out, it's something that I really wanted to come across to the readers, that Edward wanted her to make the first move. And I'm also glad you liked the chapter - hoping to see you next time, Aurora
I found a secret hiding in the Alaskan wilderness while on summer vacation. Now I need to keep that secret safe and protected. But what affect will it have on me? What will happen if its exposed? What will I sacrifice to keep it safe? AU,REG PAIRS EXB
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79986 Read Count: 22413
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Very cute. I totally picture all the girls standing with Bella on the "no booty" policy. And Edward having to be dragged from her side.
Well done.
Cheers, Balti K
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue
I loved this story. Some historical inaccuarcies, but nothing that really detracted from the story itself. Your Bella and Edward are the kind of rulers the world should have. Your epilogue made me cry.
Thank you for a great story.
Cheers,
Balti K
**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**
Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.
A dark journey of love, power and death.
All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD
Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.
A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son
Totally digging this story. Found it and have read it all this weekend.
What the hell happened to Jasper? Was this a "divide and conquer" scheme to distract him and lure him away? Edward better get in there and find her. Hope you'll update soon and not leave us with this cliffy!
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: None So Corrupt as Those with Power
Who would have thought Edward, assassin extraordinaire could be so sweet and loving. Watch out Carlisle, I fear your empire is going to fall...
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Good to be Home
Yikes, they're all such creepy sadistic fucks. I'm truly loving this dark twisted tale. Can't wait to see what Tanya has cooked up with Demitri, though I have an idea.
Cheer,
Balti K
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night
Wow, bonus chapter! Yay! You weren't kidding about the gross out factor of the two killings. Truly twisted. Great job.
One note about the breath play during sex; You said to go out and read about how to do it safely. There is NO SUCH THING as SAFE breath play. I am a firm believer in "to each, their own" and I condone almost any act between consenting adults but I must stress that in no BDSM guide will you ever find a safe way to practce that one. It truly works for your vision of Edward, but I just had to say this, for my own conscience.
Loking forward to your next update!
Balti K
Author's Response:
Thanks. I sent you an email. :-)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping
He He He. Esme is really totally off her rocker, isn't she. Fucked up. And fabulous. Brava to Bella for taming the wild beast and to Edward for letting her. What a surprise about Charlie. Ca't wait to see where this goes.
Cheers,
Balti K
karina
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: My December
Yikes. Will Esme clue in Aro that Edward and Bella are in Japan? She's getting more crazy by the hour, it seems. Can't wait to see how Bella handles the proposal.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You
Oh, please tell me he's going to add far too much soap, bleach the darks, and flood the whold laundromat? I would love to see Edward fail at something so basic.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares
What a dichotomy of a chapter. The Tokyo trip is light and frivolous, the ring perfect. Loved the barefoot grass walking. On the other hand, Demitri is so dark, so twisted, like the opposite side of a coin. Well done.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
Damn stupid Edward! Fool!
I can't tell if I'm glad he's going away, or mad about it. I hope he does kill them all though. But to leave her now? Not sure how to feel.
Good to see Carlisle coming around and trying to be better, and to be a dad. Maybe there's hope yet.
Can't wait to see what's next.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hey Balti! Edward.... such a confused fellow. Thanks for the review :-)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Rut Roh Shaggy. The shit's going to hit the fan, I think.
Love it. Not surprised this is the last happy chappy for a while though, I was starting to wonder about all the drama and where it was hiding.
Can't wait to see what's up your sleeve.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make
Oh man, I am a little afraid of what's coming next. But I'd be more afraid if I were Demetri. I can't even imagine the revenge the demon will wreak on him. Hope you won't leave us hanging for too long.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hey Balti, Nah, I wont leave ya hanging. lol. Im working on the new chappie as we speak. thanks for the review :-)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places
Redemption for Esme, possibly. Good for her. I hope that Edward doesn't kill her for her part in this. She doesn't deserve the peace that would come with death.
How in hell are they keeping Charlie alive? Seems almost unreal that he can live through so much torture for so long.
I hope Edward gets to Bella soon. I think she may go mad otherwise.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hey you! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Charlie is still alive through a series of drugs and careful planning on Demetri's part. It is actually quite surprising just how much torture and pain one person can live through, especially if their wounds and whatnot are being treated. How Charlie is still sane is beyond me...... He's just a tough cookie I guess. LOL. Thanks again for the reviews. :-)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells
Yay!! I can't wait to see them take on the Volturi! Glad to see Edward's back in his right mind.
Esme may just win herself a small bit of honor for her sacrifice. I sure hope she can pull it off. Though it won't make up for her betrayal.
On pins and needles, waiting for your next update!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Edward's Clan
How odd that for once, his demon is the rational one. Too bad he's not more in control. Then Demetri would already be dead. I can't imagine that all this will stop now that Aro is dead. The three that got away won't give up. I just hope Edward can get his head out of his ass soon.
Good job on this chapter, btw. I can see why it was so hard to write.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose
Well now, I hope he's got the bullshit out of his system. Maybe now he can be a partner for her.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose
Finally! Yay for him acting human. And for them working it out, kind of. Why is it that when we're hurting, we often ask for exactly what we don't want. Bella didn't want space, just Edward. But because boys listen to words rather than hidden meaning, he gave her space. And it just hurts her all the more. Rough. But at least they're past that now... I hope.
Cheers, Balti K
It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64145
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Great job. I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and all the witty banter throughout. Not every story has to be full of angst.
Cheers, Balti K
Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade?
OOC, AU, Future Citrus
Twilight...with a twist...
~COMPLETE~
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Time Passes
I'm on pins and needles to see what happened with Eward. But I'm so glad he found her again and got away. Great job, sweetie!
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Thank you Balti for hanging in there and also thank you for your consistent support. You have been amazing ;)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Uninvited
Well Hello! Welcome back, it's been a while. Great chapter, but I can't understand why no one else attacked James. Especially once he let go of Edward. You made it seem that the other two were not interested in fighting, so 7 on 1 should have been easy. Oh well. Can't wait to see where you're taking this.
Cheers,
Balti K
Author's Response:
ThanK you so much for your review, I believe you are my 100th :)) My beta asked the same question you asked, lol. My answer is that unless Bella gave the word, her family would not attack. She is too concerned that Edward would still be the victim and she cant risk that. She is not aware of his strength, or that he would have attacked if not for the broken leg thing. Bella also did not fight back because she still harbors guilt for James' transformation, she feels she deserves punishment, even with the knowledge that Esme actually changed him, Bella will not let it go. The Cullens could have definitely taken on James and his coven, but we needed it to happen this way so that other events can still take place. Dont worry James is going to get his...just like canon. That is one thing I will not change, lol. Thanks again and I hoped I answered your question.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Checkmate
Yay. You're back!
Great chapter, glad it all worked out, though I imagine that there's still business to take care of (*cough Esme cough*. Can't wait to see Edward take care of that bitch. Also to see him rip Bella a new one for not trusting him.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
There is definitely business that still needs to be taken care of, lol. But Esme is not yet done wreaking havoc. Her little trip is about to bring uneeded attention to one of our lovable characters ;) So glad that you liked the chapter and thank you so much for your support!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:The End
Oh, so happy to see an update on this! YAY!!
Man, Bella is just way to masochistic. Stupid ass.
We knew it was going to happen, but that doesn't make it better. She's a fool.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Thanks for understanding that this had to occur. And as always thank you for reviewing!!! Bella is definitely an ass...I'm thinking Edward shouldnt be so willing to take her back;)
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Truth
Wow. That was a definite twist! Very unexpected that Aro would be in cahoots with Asrael and actively looking for Edward. Eek. Now what's in store for these two?
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
So glad you liked that spin on this crazy story. Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. The last and final chapter will be up in the next few weeks. Thanks for sticking around :)) it means so much!!!
Brilliant scientist Bella McCarty has been getting life threatening letters: someone wants her dead. Jasper Whitlock is determined to do anything to keep her safe.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223472 Read Count: 16456
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Wow, tough, scary Jasper. Intense. But finally a break in the case. Hmm, what does Riley know? Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Cheers,
Balti K
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! Hopefully Riley will feel like talking in the next chapter!
T
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
What the hell does Alice want? Why is she all up in J's business after being out of his life for 2 years?
And are both Bella and Rose pregnant or just Bella? Eek, so many questions! Can't wait for your next chapter, to give me some answers!
Cheers,
Balti K
Author's Response:
All questions will be answered in due time my lovely reader! hehehehehe! LOL ;)
Thanks for reading!
T
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I'm so very glad Bella isn't pregnant. That would just suck. And it's adorable how matter of fact J is about carrying around a pee stick for days. Maybe this visit with Edward could be good? A joining of forces? Of course, how the hell did Rose let him in, is she nuts?
Can't wait for the next one.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Aww, Bella with a baby would have been cute! And Jasper would have been a great dad!
Thanks for reading and we'll see what's up with Eddie boy next!
T
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
What a raging BITCH!!! Who would dream of inviting an ex to dinner at someone else's house? Pure evil bitch! Well done.
Cheers,
Balti K
Author's Response:
Yes, Maria is pure evil!
I smell a cat fight brewing, so stay tuned!
T
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Hee Hee! I guess that Jasper was right to not trust James after all! And this situation workds out perfectly for industrial espionage. I knew he was too good to be true. That's why he wanted her to run from Jasper.
On a side note, this isn't the end is it? Your beginning author's note made it sound as if this was the final chapter, but there is obviously some unfinished business here. Looking forward to more!
Balti K
Author's Response:
No no no! Most definitely not the last chapter. There's too much I have to wrap up!
Thanks for reading.
T
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Oh my gracious, what a date! I'm not a fan of John Mayer but if I was... Swoon anyways. So jealous. I want romance like that. I certainly hope Jasper is still ok and not hurt form the explosion. Rosalie really should cut Emmett a break, by the way. If she doesn't give him some hope soon, he's going to give up, and she'll be 6 months pregnant, alone. Can't wait for the next one!
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
I know what ya mean, I want a romance like this too! LOL :)
Glad that you liked it!
T
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Personally, I'm glad you didn't hurt Jasper too badly. After all, what good is a dead Jasper?
Great chapter. Loved the dream sequence. Should have guessed something like that with Maria. Clever.
Can't wait to see what's in James' office!
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Thanks hun for reading!
Glad that you like the dream.
We'll see what James has been up to next!
T
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Yikes, I assume that he was not Jasper, and instead was Stefan? Where are Paul and Jared? The boys better come running.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
No worries, Paul and Jared are on the job and Bella will be okay!
Thanks for reading!
T
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Great Chapter, nice lemonade. Can't wait for the showdown with James. I'm really looking forward to hearing that bucket of crazy.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun!
T
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Dun dun duh.... And we finally get some answers! Yay!
What is it with women who obsess over men who don't want them? So messed up. Get over it and move on. But stupid Victoria, if there's security tapes, then there's license plates to be tracked. They'll get her... right?
Can't wait to see what's next.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with me on this one hun.
No worries, Bella isn't gonna let V & A get away with taking her man.
T
Bella was a shell after Edward left her. She hated men. She was disgusted by them. She wanted revenge. What better way to get revenge than to use them? The plan works well…until Edward comes back. Bella’s POV.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68969
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Alex
I'm digging it. She's got the total "woman scorned" attitude and taking the revenge that would probably hurt Edward most. Nice.
BTW, noticed a mistake up above. You used conscious instead of conscience. Simple typo, no doubt. May want to edit that if you ever have a free second.
Cheers,
Balti K
Author's Response:
Ooh, thanks for the catch!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Bella
Well now, is he watching her in person, or through Alice? I think he must be close, since she's dreaming him again. Just my thoughts.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chris
I wonder how he's doing with not being spotted in sunny LA? Hiding in her neighbors yard no doubt.
Moving on!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Jacob
Good for Bella. She needs to get hers too. Too many schmucks leaving her unsatisfied, though I was beginning to wonder if it was a psychological block on her side at the beginning of the chapter.
Keepin' truckin'!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Scott
Is he trying to drive her insane or get back into her life? He's a bit fucked.
Onward and upward!
Balti k
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bella
Hmm, why would he be hurting her old flames while standing by and letting her hookups happen at all? Crazy vampire!
Cheers,
karina
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Zack
Dun dun dun! About time he man'd up and revealed himself.
Now what's she going to do about it?
Movin' on!
k
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Edward
Edward's back! And seems to have grown a set while he was gone! And a libido too!
Goodness Gracious!
Moving on....
k
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Lance
Well, he's certainly working it, isn't he. At least he's giving her the time she needs. Can't wait to see what he's got up his sleeve next.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Jeremy
Now would be a good time for him to give in to the monster and kill Jeremy. Where was he earlier anyway? hmmm.
Onward,
Balti k
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Edward
Intriguing. Is Edward going to hunt deer, or Jeremy? But some good lovin's for Bella! Yay!
Onward,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bella
Aww, shucks, Bella, could you do that again?? Uh huh. (I''m sure that sounds funnier in the Droopy Dog/Edward voice in my head, than on the screen)
Cute! Lovin' it!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Alex & Jacob
Yup, pissed off Jake = out of control werewolf. I don't trust that that's going anywhere good.
Onward,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Edward & Bella
I want an Edward between my thighs! Hot!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Jessica & Alex
Aha! I was right, he did get Jeremy! Good, asshole deserved it.
Nice to see Edward without the redwood tree up his ass. I like your version.
Onward, ho!
Balti
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Bella
Rut roh, Shaggy! What's going to happen in the morning when he finds the bruises? I hope there's no self-loathing vampire shenanigans, like removing himself from her life again, or not having sex anymore.
Great job on this one.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chris
Yay for no angsty emopire! Handled like adults.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Edward
Damnit! I was afraid of that, but you lulled me into a false sense of security with the last chapter. Damnit!
Moving on!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Alice
Fantastic! And look, it worked!
Awesome.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Bella
I'm glad she's not pregnant. Thaat would suck.
Good that he's thinking of forever too. He should be selfish and change her.
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Rosalie
Well, I'll guess she'll just have to watch out for shower sex. Bummer, that's lots of fun. But again, communication is key.
Onward,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Alice
Oh, so sad. Too bad he has to stay away for a while.
Boo.
Balti k
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Charlie
Ah, everyone's in love with Bella. And she still has low self esteem? Silly girl.
Moving on!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Edward
Yay, he's back!!
Now for presents!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Bella
Yay! No more angsty Edward! And he's going to get over changing her too!
Love!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Alice
oh man, these two just can't catch a break and have some peace, can they?
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Bella
Oh my god! So not nice to end there! I'm glad the sequel is almost done, I'm heading there now!
Cheers,
Balti K
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Sequel to Bella’s Revenge. Bella has been abducted by Edward’s brother. Edward wages war on anyone who stands in his way of finding his one true love. Brother against brother. Can he save her before she’s killed? Before she’s turned? Or before she falls in love? How can Edward ever forgive his brother? The one he trusts. The one known as…Jasper.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81658 Read Count: 24568
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
They're not burned, they can't be dead. Argh! What's Jasper up to?
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
What the hell is up with Jasper? I feel like he must be possessed or something. And like he had more to do with the initial attack than he's letting on. Hmm....
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Hmmm... Victoria must have some kind of gifted help. She's so twisted! I wonder what she's hoping to accomplish here....
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Does she have the real Jasper? Or the real Rose? This is very intriguing and I'm loving it!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
What on earth is going on with everyone? So twisted, but certainly pulls you in!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Ha! I knew it couldn't be the real Jasper with Bella!! Oh, I hope he holds on a little longer. This is heartbreaking!
Onward for me,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
More complex every chapter! Great job with this, I am totally roped in!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Is there a castle in Iceland they're going to? Was it Rosalie or Charlotte in the vision? Hmmmmm..........
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Who IS this?? Who has really got Bella and what's he doing with her?
I'm guessing it was Victoria on the other line, to give the fake Jasper more orders.
Onward,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Finally! So glad they're going to check it out. It's about time!!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Oh no! Not jasper dead! I hope they get there in time!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
This isn't the first prophetic dream she's had. Why isn't she listening to them? And why hasn't she picked up yet on the fact that he hasn't fed? She knows how often Edward needed to hunt in order to keep her safe. Her intuition is a bit off right now, i think.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I really hope he's still alive. They need his help to figure this whole mess out, sooner rather than later.
Cheers,
Balti K