Reviews by Sunshine
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

ohh, ed can meet charlie!

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

I'm so excited to see how this ends! 

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625251
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Amazing story!!! 

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171527
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I LOVE this story.  You have done an amazing job and to know that this is a true story being told is unbelieveable.  I'm so glad your friend was comfortable enough to share this story with so many is great.

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I really like how she is gradually adjusting and trusting.  Not just the instant changes you read so many times.  It makes it so real.  Great job!

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Interesting little twist.  I really enjoy this story.  Good work!

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19. Taking the First Step

definitely wait.  too much going on with her to process.  especially with all the dreams.  she'll have a breakdown

Set in Stone by Psyche001 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward saved the life of a girl he was not supposed to save. Bound by secrecy and by the terms of his sentence, he has no choice but to stay away from her. What happens when she accidentally finds him three years after her rescue? What she finds out will turn her life upside down. His time is running out. Will their fate keep them together or tear them apart?

Nominated for an Indie Award!

Romance/Angst/Adventure/No Vampires

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191619 Read Count: 13324
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - The Messenger

This story is amazing! The first to really keep me anxious for the next chapter.  It is truly a dark and unexpected turn to the original character plots of many.

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Twilight

Who is the other woman? It seems it is Edward that's accidentally smothering her.  Could the other woman be Leah or someone mean like that instead of the only other I could think of as Esme.



Author's Response:

Yikes! I'm gonna have to upload the other chapter quicly so that you find out! I'm updating tonight!

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - The Princess and the Pea

This was an awesome chapter! Hilarious!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I posted the outtake for this chapter today. It's just as funny. Edward is just too sarcastic....lol!

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Twister

definitely didn't expect that!

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: EPILOGUE

Great work.  I am loking forward to part 2.  Interesting little tidbits of history.

Without Love by edwardsisobel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

This is a story about LOVE.  It’s the eternal love of a parent for their child.  It’s the steadfast love for your best friend. It’s the passion of your first love and it’s the spice of forbidden love.  This is a story based on the immortal music of Elvis Presley and in his words, “Without love, we have nothing at all.”

 

 

 

Edward and Bella attend their son's wedding.  It is also their 25th wedding anniversary and throughout the day they reflect on events leading up to their own wedding day and what could have been, if only they had the courage to stand up for what they believed in.  Is it too late?

 

 

 

This story is rated NC-17 for lemony scenes of a slash and polyamorous situations in later chapters.

 

ExB  ExJ  ExBxJ

 

Medium Banner - Without Love


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20369 Read Count: 6086
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2010 Updated: 13 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Without Love

just a beautiful story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and your review.  I enjoyed writing this story so much, it really came from the heart.  I cried a lot too usually on the way home from work when I would listen to Elvis to get me into the right mood for writing it and all these ideas would bombard me.  When I thought of the phone call between Edward and James and their crying over their workmates death and because I knew it was Jasper - crying like a baby at the traffice lights.. I did get a few strange looks!

Suzanne

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

What if she endeed up pregnant from her trip back in time?

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

Absolutely loved it!

Summary:

Bella thinks she has her life figured out. She has the best father and brother but all too soon her life comes shattering down around her. Will Edward be able to help her? E/B, Em/R, J/A AH & NC-17 for lemons.

Banner by Mkystich

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156928 Read Count: 120029
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I am so glad that we are past everyone asking how she can do it.  I know that's probably a very common question and all but I was jst waiting for her to explode.  I mean now we are to the honesty of it all... yes, she very well may die.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

I love this lighthearted fun!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by xrxdanixrx

Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'd like to hear his pov.  I really liked the Tanya twist

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 33003
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Please do continue this story.  I am still enjoying reading it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation.  Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago. 

Thanks to evilangel813 for my beautiful banner!!

TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124446 Read Count: 34252
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Burn it Down

Wow.  Didn't seen Garrett coming into it this way!



Author's Response:

Yeah, he was originally supposed to be the knight in shining armor, but this was more shocking and interesting to write.  It pained me to turn him to the dark side...

Thanks for the review

Here's the sneak peek I promised:

EPOV

Hang on baby, please hang on… I kept repeating this over and over in my head as I made my way back to Los Angeles.  I was exhausted and yet my brain wouldn’t shut off with the events of the morning rolling around in side of it.

When Victoria took me off of speaker phone all I could do was listen to the crackle and roar of the fire that overtook Bella’s house.  I was already on the hotel phone dialing Emmett trying to figure out some way to rescue her.  When he told me he was actually working tonight and was en route to a house fire that had been called in, my stomach rolled.  I was happy that someone had called it in so quickly, but nauseated that the fire was big enough for someone to have already noticed.

“Bro are you there?”  I reflected on Emmett’s words from earlier.

“You’re going to ninth and California, aren’t you?”  I could barely speak, tears streaming down my face, knowing there was absolutely nothing I could do.   I never knew what it felt like to be impotent until that very moment.

“I am.  How did you know?”

“Emmett, its Bella’s house!  She’s inside.  Please hurry…” 

“Fuck, are you sure?”

“Emmett, Victoria just torched her place; please let the firefighters know that there is a woman inside that house.”  I was surprised that for as panicked as I was, I managed to sound calm and coherent.

“I gotta go.  I’ll call you later.”   He hung up quickly, not even letting me respond.

Fracture by KatieJane4815 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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What are the chances of meeting your soulmate? What if you meet them at the age of 4? Edward and Bella have known each other since kindergarten. A fateful late night call opens their eyes to potentials they never thought of. AU, B/E, A/J, R/Em. Lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62958 Read Count: 27936
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Outtake: Keys

I liked the alternative wedding.  Very creative.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Takes place after Edward leaves in NM.

 Follow Bella as life takes her through twists and turns that eventually lead her back to a strangley different Edward. Can true love overcome all lifes jagged twists and sharp turns?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119541 Read Count: 24756
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Epilogue

Was not expecting that at all!  Awesome story



Author's Response:

Ty sweets. Glad you enjoyed this. I look forward to hearing from you possibly in the futre on another fic.

xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42789
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Regret

Didn't see them coming.  I'm so glad he is now finally opening up to her. 



Author's Response:

it seems like everything's pretty much out in the open now, at least between bella and edward.  and there will be some drama up next chapter with the return of the surgeons!!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467324
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: At a loss

That was a pretty huge rollercoaster of emotions. Well written.  Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Thor, Loki, and the gang

I love this story! Keep up the great work. 

Changes and Surprises by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 183]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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 Bella is moving back home to work with her father at his medical practice. She and his best Carlisle become secretly romantically involved. Once their cover is exposed, life changes and spirals for Bella in unexpected different directions.

 

Thank you to Julie for making me a banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186286 Read Count: 30287
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 26 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I know this is a story and all.  But just for the sake of asking, was there a reason they couldn't attempt to prolong her pregnancy, did they try and it didn't work?  It is not common practice to walk a premature rupture of membranes at 32 wks.  Maybe I'm just wrong with the gestational age. 



Author's Response:

Sunshine,

Thanks for the comment.  When I had orginally written this story, it was a little different (and not a fan fic). In that orginal story the woman who gives birth did go full term and simply I got some of the facts of pregnancy wrong when writting this version. You are totally right.  However, for the case of this story I am going to continue to go down teh path that i have written.  Thanks for catching it.  I actaully looked up some information this evening and basicly i am totally wrong!  Oh well, this is a work of fiction after all!

 

In way, I hope you will still stick with the story and hope you will enjoy the rest of it.

 

-Lisa

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue Part Two

I really enjoyed all the ups and downs of this story.  Good work

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading th story andI'm glad you enjoyed it!

-Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135059
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

how old are they?



Author's Response:

Almost eighteen.

Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Wow, it's just one thing after the other!  When will it ever end?



Author's Response:

Eventually:(

Summary:

 

Written for Friday Free For All. Bella's had a long day at work, the last thing she wants to deal with is drama when she gets home...or does she? Rated M for lemons and language. BellaxMaggiexEdward


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5364 Read Count: 784
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Liked it.  Good job



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  And thank you very much!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Sunshine Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Like it a lot! 



Author's Response:

We're so glad! I'll have the next chapter up in the next few days! Thank you so very much for your review...Ari & DLIR