Reviews by MarAmi
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421236
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Please tell me Edward didn't throw up on Bella's head?  I just love this story:-)

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923518
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I have to admit this is quite possibly the most horrifying story I've ever read and yet, I can't wait for each new chapter.  I fell behind on my reading, I was up till 4am reading this story, I was up by 5:15am and by 6am I was back in front of my computer getting caught up.  I so hope that Aro, James, & Demitri get their's in the end.  Actually, I'd like to see Edward, Bella, Jasper, Alice, & Tanya hogtie the rest of them in that "lesson" room covered in clamps and chains and leave them their to starve to death in complete agony.  Is that horrible of me?  Can't wait for more:-)



Author's Response:

I hope that you write one of the alternative endings!!!!!!!! Great review!!!!!!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That was great!  Not enough but definitely a start;-)   I love the way Alice was in this chapter, I knew she wasn't as clueless as Aro and James think.  When will Edward and Bella realize that she's Edward's long ago kidnapped baby sister?  Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Tuesday?!?  You're gonna make us wait till Tuesday?  OOOOOH, you evil, evil woman;-)  I just turn into a puddle of goo whenever I see update alerts for IR and MC-yeah!!!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Definitely more of that!  Let's just say it's a good thing tomorrow is laundry day in my house;-)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I was so glad that it was Jasper who found them.  I'm glad that Bella is catching on to how things have to appear in front of the likes of James.  Alice is so adorable, I'm beginning to wonder if Jasper isn't thinking about Alice being Edward's sister although I can't remember he actually knows about the kidnapping.  I think Bella told Tanya but I can't remember if she told Jasper.  Can't wait for the next chapter;-)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

What a place to leave it!  I soooo hope it's Edward.  If it's James that would be bad on so many levels.  Of course you didn't say if it was male or female, it could be Victoria which wouldn't be any good either.  Oh, all the choices.

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Pics are always awesome, never turn down a great pic to go with a great chapter ;-)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

As relieved as I am that the day is approaching that Bella will "belong" to Edward, the idea of the "consummation ceremony" is kind of freaking me out.

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

That pic is perfect for this chapter!!!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I can honestly say, I don't think I've laughed so much with this story as I did with this chapter.  Especially after Alice said "squishy", I'm still laughing at that.  Then the whole conversation between the girls with Edward and Jasper listening in and adding their own jibes at each other.  Thanks Noc, this is one of the best stories I've ever read  :)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

You are such a tease!  But in a good way ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Emmett, Jasper and Edward have been in the Army for the last 9 years together. Bella is Em's little sister. One package to Em changes everything. AH. HEA

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44063 Read Count: 93682
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2013
Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love this story.  As far as where you take each character, I think that any of the possibilities available for choosing would be great so have at it:-)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awesome!!!  I look forward to every chapter:-)



Author's Response:

LOL thanks!

Summary:

 

 

Following your dream

 

Bella, whose beauty is legendary and who sings like an angel, is successful in films, but in her innocence she has fallen into the clutches of the nefarious and abusive James Hunter. When Hunter is killed, Bella is charged with his murder; in desperation, she turns to Edward. She is found innocent, but her career is in ruins, and she returns to her childhood home pregnant and alone as she has no desire to drag Edward down with her.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28984 Read Count: 10130
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Mar 2014
Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Following Your Dream

I just knew Tanya was going to end up pregnant.  I have my doubts that it's Edward's but if it is, I'm sure Tanya will not only milk it for everything she can but probably not even want the baby after it's born.  I want to be mad at Emmett for keeping them apart but I know he's only doing what he thinks is best for both Bella and his best friend, but still.  UGH!!!!  Can't wait for #9:-)



Author's Response: Hi thanks for the review. I really enjoy reading them Here is a teaser for chapter 9 I got into my volvo and started engine. I drove and drove not knowing or caring where I was going. I suddenly felt a pull and stopped the car. I got out and I saw a trail. I started walking through the woods following the trail. After a hour of walking I came to a meadow that I could only think of as heaven. It was so beautiful and so peaceful. It was full of flowers such as roses, daisies and tulips. I walked over towards a tree where there was a swing hanging from it. I sat down on the swing and put my head into my hands and cried like I did when I was a 6 year old boy. I cried for the loss of charlie swan, for the loss of my friendship with Emmett and most of all I cried for hurting the love of my life. All I had to look forward in the future is a lifetime of misery without my love or my best friend. Just then a plan came to mind but the million dollar question is will Bella wait for me?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028970
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 175

Getting good???   It's been good, it's getting GREAT!!!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

I am so loving this extended version of Midnight Caller--thank you, thank you, thank you...You get the idea:-)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

I think she's a little of both, I know I would be;-)  I have to admit I'm uneasy with Tanya working there and knowing Bella by name.  I just can't shake the feeling that she's someone not to trust because Edward handed her over to James because he wanted Bella.  Maybe I'm just being paranoid, can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

With each new chapter I'm more and more grateful you decided to expand your os, thank you, thank you, thank you:-)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

I don't trust Tanya, maybe I'm being paranoid but I just don't trust her;-)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

I can't wait for them to meet!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Can't wait till she meets Edward as "Sir" and realizes that she correctly recognized his voice with just hello;-)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Yeah!!  Lucky us!  I can't wait to see how you expand their first meeting as Sir and Butterfly:-)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

I'm hoping he wants to meet her:-)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

I pimp this sucker out every chance I get because it's a helluva read and although I'm not getting my update alerts from this site (any of them) this and IR I check regularly to see if and when it's updated, they're just too damn great to not get my fill as soon as new chappies are available.  I would think that Bella will recognize Edward's voice when she hears it in person.  She made the similarities with it to Sir's voice on the phone the first time she met Edward at work, but now she'll be in person at both places, I would think that she would make the connection soon.  Can't wait to find out!!!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

I don't usually review every chapter, I only normally do about one a week mainly because I'd be saying the same thing each time:  I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!  So just cause you might not get a review from me for a while don't think you lost this reader because there's no chance in hell that's happening.  I generally check for updates 2-3 times a day since I can't seem to get any alerts from this site on any of my fave stories or fave authors.

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

I love MC and I sooooooo LOVE IR.  I can't wait till they discover Alice is really Mary Alice, Edward's little sister who was kidnapped all those years ago.

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

LILY!  LILY!  LILY!!!!!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

I don't know but I think after my 7th, I'd be on such an orgasmic high that I would lose count.  Just keep those chapters coming! (pun totally intended)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 191: Chapter 191

You could never let us down, sweetie ;-)  You do what you need to do to cut the overwhelmed feeling and look forward to Sir and Butterfly when you return :-)

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 216: Chapter 216

I don't think I've laughed so hard at this story ever before.  Priceless!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

I'm still laughing over yesterday's chapter and today's was nearly as refreshing.  Poor, poor Emmett, do you think this will teach him a lesson?



Author's Response:

He is going to learn something!

Summary:

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When life gives you lemons, you make lemonade. But, what happens when life throws you a bad-boy biker, an uptight neighbor, and a couple of kids? You cross your fingers and hope for the best! AH-Rated 'M'.

Beta: Sunflower Fanfiction


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89 Read Count: 13545
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2017
Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

I absolutely LOVE Masen.  I just knew before the end of the ch that he'd call Tanya "Son of a bitch" because he thought it was her name--priceless!  Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

I love this story!  I love seeing both Bella and Edward let their true self be open with the other, almost like their "learning to live" all over from scratch.  Yay!!!

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167465
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I do wish that Bella would have confronted Edward or at the very least that Edward would have told Jasper the truth but then it wouldn't be much of a story if everything was happy-happy.  I love this story and even though the thought of such a long wait for the next update I hope you have fun in Australia:-)



Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248525
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: MarAmi Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

This is where you leave it???