Reviews by pianogirl05
Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41877
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, they are a little twisted! Can't wait to see how it all plays out.

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Devil in Disguise

Oh, Edward, I think you just got your future scrambled.

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Phantom Desire

Hmmmm...I'm feeling a little Possesiveward appear.

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Death By . . .

I have the feeling Alice is going to be trouble.

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Angel of Death

I think Alice is jealous or will be soon.

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Torture

Woah, Edward and Bella seem to be perfect for each other.

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Consumed

I'm so glad this isn't a cliffy where I have to wait for the next chapter to be completed. The suspense would kill me.

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Wicked Angel

I knew Alice was evil and conniving!!

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

Wow, what an ending! I definitely would read a "part two". Great job!!!!!!!!!!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Sorry, but Edward has issues. First, he wants Bella to open up to him. He knows she has issues and no proper upbringing. She finally gets the courage to tell him how she feels and now he is going to punish her??? Wow, that will really make her want to open up the next time. NOT!!! Now, she really needs to tell Edward about Jim and she is holding back because she knows he will get angry. Maybe if he didn't react so harsh every time she might be more comfortable opening up.

Great story. I can't seem to put it down.

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Can't even find the words, but wow, Alice sure did lead our poor Bella down the wrong path tonight!!!!

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

This was a great chapter. I just simply don't agree with Edward's actions at the party. He went all caveward when she simply danced with someone at the club. I'm mean totally lost it, but it's okay for him to let someone kiss him on the lips in front of her. Then have another sub at his feet? I'm sorry, but that was cruel. I'm don't know the rules, but the kissing part was so hurtful and disrespectful to her and then his "smirks"????

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I'm glad that things are smoothed over. He needed to know how angry some of his actions made her. And she is right, he would have gone balistic if some guy had done that to her.

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Oh my gosh, my heart was pounding through this entire chapter!!

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I love your story. Can't wait to see what happens with Bella's dad. I hope Edward puts him in his place if he gets out of line.

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I hope Charlie doesn't think he suddenly has earned the right to play the all caring father.

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

Yeah, I'm still not on the "Charlie" train, not yet anyway. Charlie was so out of line reprimanding Bella. Did he really think he could do that? First she is a grown woman, and second he has NEVER been any kind of a father.

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Loved this chapter and what you did with Edward.

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Murder....really??? The guy had a gun, beat her and was going to rape her again. What a joke! Poor Bella!

As for Edward, I must say I'm disappointed with him. Bella never said she was going to keep the "Ali" thing from him. She simply said that she gave her a couple of days to come clean on her own and then she was telling Jasper and Edward. Now, she is being punished for encouraging Alice to be honest. All he seems to hear is she didn't run and tattle the moment she found out. He really disappointed me with this situation.

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Every chapter just leaves you wanting more!!!!

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Great chapter. I wondered how he would handle the scene without breaking his own limits.

As for the Riley situation. Wow!!! I'm glad Bella told Edward, but she did ask him not to say anything to anyone else due to his mother's extreme embarrassment. What does he do, he calls Emmett and tells anyway. Brother or not, he should have kept that personal information to himself. Plus, he stuck his nose in someone else's business. Can't wait till Bella finds out he opened his mouth.

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Another great chapter!

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

He definitely was harder on Bella and she did get caught up in her work and neglect herself, but Edward's job has had him keep some impossible hours too. He can raise his voice to her and overreact and that's fine, but if she does it it is disrespectful. She has a journal and is to write her feelings down, but when she does she is scolded for feeling that way. It is a journal. I just think sometimes he doesn't apply the same rules to himself. I mean, he forgot to tell her he betrayed her confidence and Bella lets him off the hook, but when the last incident with Alice occurred he didn't even truly listen and had her believe she really should have been punished. Now he is going to use what little time they have together to teach her a lesson about neglect. It's a great story I'm just venting at Edward for some of his decisions. Perhaps Mr. Bristles needs to get acquainted with Edward's rear end. LOL!!!

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Yes, I'm so happy!!!!!!

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

I loved this chapter. Edward didn't pull his Dom card on her and was the sensitive fiancée she needed.

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I think everyone should read your story. I just can't seem to get enough!!!

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Wow!!!! That was one emotional roller coaster.

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Great chapter. I'm glad to hear they won't turn 24/7. I don't think it would fit the characters. I'm glad to hear she will eventually become pregnant.

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Renee is just evil. I can't believe Charlie tried to pull the "protective father" crap. It really irritated me. I mean, come on the guy was never a father and who knows what would have happened to Bella if she hadn't met Edward. He hasn't earned that right and I found it to be very disrespectful to both Edward and Bella. I'm glad Sue at least tried to rein him in.

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

This chapter had me in tears.

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Oookaaayy, this explanation should be interesting.

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Well, I'm glad they seem to have mended their problems, but I must say I'm extremely disappointed in the way Edward handled Bella coming to him about becoming pregnant. How quickly he forgets the fact that he pushed her away during their honeymoon because he was too afraid to admit his fear. He then left her without discussing it but had no problems discussing such a serious matter with Jasper instead of his wife. After he got shot, he had is little "peen malfunction" and with held that info as well. During both times she was exceptionally patient. She did come to him and maybe she told Alice first but it was only because she had a sudden realization then broke down. The point is, they both have issues, but he doesn't realize that he does the same thing sometimes. Just to let you know this in no way reflects your writing. I'm absolutely hooked, but sometimes I'd like to through the characters through the window!

As for their current pregnancy news, I can't wait to see how this plays out.

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Wow!!! So much excitement in this chapter.

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

You are doing a fabulous job with this story!!!

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

I can't believe I'm almost to the end. I'll miss these two and their crazy family.

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

I'm curious to see if he controlls himself during his next movie or abuses his control.

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Short but still very good!

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Okay, I'm concerned.

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I'm glad they worked things out so quickly. Loved the way Bella handled the guy.

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Loved it!!!

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

This was a great chapter, but I'm sad now because I only have one more to go before the story is over.

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

This has been an amazing story to read. It really says a lot about you as a writer when your readers cry with the characters and also get angry with them at the things they do. I have loved reading every chapter of this story and I truly look forward to reading the sequel. Outstanding job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Valentine's Day had been the most magical day of Bella's life, everything was perfect. That is until Edward left. Now four years later on Valentine's Day, she's about to marry another man. Can Edward make Valentine's Day theirs again? Thank you Noelle Seven for the awesome banner!!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22741 Read Count: 2742
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Hi, So glad you enjoyed this little love story. I have a brand new story that I just started posting called Somewhere I Belong. So if you are looking for something to read, maybe you will give it a shot.

 

Thanks again for reading,

EA

A Fresh Start by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 588]
Summary:

Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 339512
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
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Date: 03 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue

Great story! I don't think there has been any story you've written that I haven't liked. You put so much emotion into your characters. I look forward to reading the sequel.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532961
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
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Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

Little Kylie cracks me up!!!! I'm glad Bella and Edward are trying to get on track again.

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

Loved it!!!

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

Awesome!!!

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Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Great chapter. I can't wait for Peto to return.

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Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Awesome!!!

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77470
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Forever

Great story!!! I loved the instant pull she and Edward felt for each other.

Author's Response: Thank you xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
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Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Well done! Hot chapter!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After guest hosting on a morning show, Isabella becomes the new co-cost for the show. Her husband James leaves her out of spite and jealousy and Bella swears off men to focus on her new career change. Edward Cullen was known for being a portentous, arrogant, SOB while running a branch of Masen Enterprises. After the death of his grandfather, Edward becomes the new CEO. His soul focus is on the expansion of the company, and to find out who has been stealing from and framing his grandfather. When Edward visits the morning show to defend the honor of his grandfather's legacy, he finds his self extremely attracted to the beautiful co-host Isabella. In the occurrence of unexpected events the pair cannot seem to stay away from each other. How long can they resist the inevitable? Reviews for this story on fanfic 1,672

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Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the lemonade stand

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, The Inevitable, Shena's Storys to Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 306607 Read Count: 206578
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: In My Blood

Great chapter!

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Addiction

Hot chapter! I'm thinking I've got my earlier guess at who the guilty party is.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Can't Escape

Yeah, awesome lemons but killer cliffy!!!!

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: More surprises than a little bit

James is just as crazy as Maria.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Nothing short of a miracle

Who knew bedtime stories could be so fun!!!!

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Moving Forward

Love the twins but physco Maria has to go.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Smokey Mirror

Yes, I agree their lemons are definitely hot!!! Great story so far.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Thankfulness

Love it!!!

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Crossing the line

James is delusional and sick.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Stormy with a ray of Hope

Glad this chapter ended on a happy note.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Naughty and Nice

So glad there is a sequel because I'm not ready for it to be over either.

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: The Inevitable

So glad Maria is history!

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: An ending is just another beginning

James is in desperate need of therapy! Great story. I love how you kept Edward and Bella a strong team and didn't have Alice as a rude controlling person. Looking forward to the sequel.

Figure Eight by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a nationally ranked paired skater with Jacob Black. Edward Masen is beautiful British skater paired with Tanya. However, both of their partners fall into hard times. These two try to navigate their way through life, both on and off the ice.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235336 Read Count: 144428
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
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Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Finals and Proposals

Great chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491644
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Aug 2013
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Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

I bet she is pregnant again.

White Lightning by Shahula Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Past Featured Story


Bella is a young woman forced to move with her father as he strives to defeat heathens selling illegal spirits. Edward is the best known bootlegger in Tennessee. When their worlds collide, more than just moonshine will burn between them. 


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12006 Read Count: 698
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love a story with a happy ending.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Summary:

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Young lovers torn apart by circumstances out of their control. Yet, neither time, nor oceans can quell their desires. Cap'n Redbeard will sail the seas till he finds his girl. E/B mangoes!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12612 Read Count: 8907
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

Love the picture. It really adds to the story. Edward as a pirate......yum!!!!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Charting the Course

Good chapter! I hope he finds her and I also hope she isn't with Jacob. I'm so not a fan.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Company's Coming

Go get her Edward.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Pirates!

Ah, seems I missed important information. Like the fact that Jacob is her brother. Oops!!!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Proper Reunion

Glad they are reunited.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Conquered Hearts

Love a happy ending.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying pianogirl05!

 

xoxo

texasbella

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661137
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

Love the outtakes!!!

The Next Chapter by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward Masen had their fresh start and are beginning a new chapter in their lives: raising triplets, one of which doesn't speak. Follow along with their families as they learn to deal with a child with special needs. However, a blast from the past lurks in the corner. Who and why are they choosing to come back into the Masen's lives? ExB, AH

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195079 Read Count: 142024
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2014
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Date: 03 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Reconnections

That's exactly that happens at my house when there is a big storm too! LOL!!! Great first chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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While on a much needed vacation, Bella discovers that it's not easy to leave work behind... and that this time, she doesn't really mind.

An endearing tale of trust, growth and love... all because of one special little girl and one little word.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18941 Read Count: 146957
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 20 Jun 2012
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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Beautiful story!!!

Summary:

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Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730

Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119928
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: The Awakening

Yay!!!!!

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: A Nightmare

Please find him.

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: No secret is a secret forever

What a chapter!!!

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: When the storm hits

No way!!!!

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Revealed

Great chapter! Poor Edward can't even trust family.

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: My love My life

Nice light chapter.

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Cullen's

Sounds like Mac and his wife might cause problems.

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Another day another Masen, or Culen

Priscilla is just plain inconsiderate for inviting Jane. Faith needs to get her mouth taped shut. Perhaps she will mess up and gets taste of what the papparzi can do. Ugh!!!!

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: An Ordinary Day

Maybe a large object will fall on her head. Faith has got to go!

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Getting to Business

Gotta love Bella!

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: In a Bubble

If I could just stop everything in my life and just read this story it would be soooo awesome. I love it!!!! I hope you are working on future chapters because eventually I'm going to reach the end of what you have written.

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Fate is more than a 4 letter word

The kids are too cute!!!!!

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Surprise!

This is simply awesome!

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: The mind of the enemy

Wouldn't surprise me if his crazy woman friend was Faith.

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: A happy family is an earlier heaven

Ethan is already taking after Edward. Loved it!!!!

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: My family makes me better

Loved Bella's classy attack on Faith.

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Family First

Glad everything turned out okay.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Home

Loved it! I noticed you marked the story complete. Was that an oops or is that truly the end??? Should we expect another adventure with these two? Considering the baby hasn't been born yet and Faith is still floating around it leads me to believe there is more to come. Plus it takes at least three to make a series, true??

Author's Response:

No the story is not complete that was actually an accident marking it as complete I hadn't noticed until I read the reviews. Sorry for the confusion. 

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Breaking the News

Yes, I can't wait for more!!!!

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: The Perfect Day

I love this story and that silly rabbit too.

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Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Media Madness

Eric is evil!!!

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Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Damage Control

The interview went great. I'm not surprised about Faith since Eric was hinting around about eliminating her. And, we know he did it!!!

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Trial and Error

Intense is an understatement. You had by heart pounding and my stomach in knots through the entire chapter. I guess that speaks well of you as a writer that you would have such a profound impact on your readers. I'm so glad she and the baby are alive.

When In Romania by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the proprietor of Bran Castle in the heart of Romania. He carries a heavy burden which torments him. When Bella crosses paths with him will she be the one to help shoulder his grief, or will her presence only make it worse? NC-17 for mature situations.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25599 Read Count: 26449
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2012
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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

Wow! So he killed her mother! What an opener!