Reviews by Roon1
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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Lets hope they can make a truce.  Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews, I value every one of them! I am glad you like the story!

To Keep You Safe by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Brilliant scientist Bella McCarty has been getting life threatening letters: someone wants her dead. Jasper Whitlock is determined to do anything to keep her safe.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223472 Read Count: 16456
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Fantastic chapter.  I love Edward in this chapter. lol.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Edward is a sweetie after all...somewhat! lol

 

Thanks for reading!

 

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Human Pet by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 213]
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Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.

 

**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Poor Bella, James is certainly bipolar at the very least.  I wonder if the Cullen's will get to her in time?  Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It was good to see this through Carlisle's eyes, esp., to see how much they cared about Bella.

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Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

James is a total phsyco.  How in the world will poor Bella survive his abuse?  Having said that I cannot wait to find out.  Good job with the story.

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Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This was an excellent chapter. What is that pyshco going to Italy for?  Cannot wait for the next update.  

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Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, Aro is more devious than James.  Poor Bella is it out of the frying pan into the fire?  What about the Cullen's what will happen to them?

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Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well thank goodness that James is toast but Aro is really bad news.  Looking forward to the next update.

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

As long as he doesn't hurt any of them but they won't want to be split up.  Naughty Aro.

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Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Excellent chapter.  Edward and Bella fell into Aro's trap. 

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Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yay Bella is now changing.  Lets hope she will be powerful enough to knick Aro's arse and the rest of the guards.

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Human Pet

I have really enjoyed this story and am looking forward to the sequel.

Snow White Queen by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

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He straddled her, pinning her struggling form to the mattress. "Shh... my love. You will give into your feelings. I will show you how." Song fic to the song Snow White Queen by Evanescence. Extremely dark, with vague mentions of non-con.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6194 Read Count: 2291
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought this was excellent.  I am sorry that there is not more of it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123434
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
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Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Second Year - The Second Six Months

Great chapter thanks.

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Third Year - The First Six Months

Good chapter.

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Christmas Break - The Third Year

I wonder who was in Bella's apartment?  Could it have been Tanya?  

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Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Third Year the Second Six Months

Esme is really having a problem with Bella, rather unfairly.  Whose Bella's stalker?

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Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

I am so glad that Edward got his school stuff sorted out.  Bella was totally right to tell Esme what's what.  There is something seriously wrong with Esme.

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Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

That was a lovely marriage.  As for the lemon that was hot.  I hope his mother is not going to make too much of a scene.

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

It seems to be coming together for them.  Lets hope Esme sorts her head out soon .

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Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Sixth Year The First Six Months

Triplets! These two never do things by half. LOL.  Loved the chapter.  Glad that Edward and Esme are working on their relationship.  So looking forward to the babies arriving.


 


Until the next time.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

That was lovely.  Its going to be interesting to see how they cope with 3 newborns.  Wonderful stuff.

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

Firstly happy New Year.

A wonderful chapter.  They are doing so well as a couple and family.  Its nice to see things working for them.   This despite all the problems that beset them.  I just love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Ten Years Later

Loved the chapter and usual.  Its so wonderful to see them going so strong.  At 51 i thought surely Edward is going to have a hard time keeping up with his young wife but no, there is still life in the old dog yet. LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

This last chapter made me cry.  The last thing I expected was Bella to die. Poor Edward he took it so hard.  I loved the very end when they were reunited. That was so very sweet.

I have really enjoyed this story and am sorry its ended. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76139
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Good on you Bella. LOL.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Tanya, what are you like.  Poor Bella seems to be a magnet for trouble. LOL.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love this story.  I am sort of dreading Edward getting her into his play room but I suspect he will sooner or later.

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Bella, she really is between a rock and a hard place.  I am looking forward to seeing Bella and Edward meet up again.

 

As for the Denali Clan, none of them looked as I imaged them, esp Tanya.  She is too small and sweet looking.  Esme, is the best looking, I think.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!

And I agree. I don't picture Tanya as the actress they have choosen. :/ Hopefully, though, she does her part right! :)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Noooo, she hit the wrong car. LOL.  I must admit if is or was Edward following around Folks that would have been super creepy.   I am still smiling because she ran away from Edward because she saw his "torture room".

I just love this story and was so happy that you updated.  Hope to have another update soon.

TTFN

 

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Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I have been trying to review on ff but its throwing a fit.  

 

Loved the chapter.  Loved that he went looking for her.

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Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Poor Bella, she had a hell of a bad day.

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I really enjoyed this chapter and would like a Tayna pov.  Bella is so jumpy but then from her pov you cannot really blame her.  Edward is so stalkerish, she is so jumpy how does he plan to tell her he wants her as a sub.? LOL.  I wonder if he will get a face full of pepper spray?  He might. LOL

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32994
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a really good and creepy start to your story.

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh no, the bad vampire is back.

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This was good.  I am impressed you used Alistair, he's not a vampire I come across a lot in this type of fiction.

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183997
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Caring for Bella

The whipping was not good but having Edward, kiss it better was. LOL

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A great evil has awoken in Forks and is Bella’s curse to bare. Can Bella and Edward overcome the obstacles between their worlds in order to defeat it? Will their love survive it?  

Adult content and language.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45743 Read Count: 5237
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 May 2010
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstar
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is an interesting start to your story.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstar
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1.

So is Edward human?  What then is Carlisle, a vamp?  He has obviously not taken Bella to the convent.  Could it be to the volturi?

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstar
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2.

Goodness me what are these horrors going to do to poor Bella?

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Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3.

I am a bit surprised that they caught Bella and Alice so quickly.  Obviously Edward is in lust with Bella and she is not totally adverse to him herself.  It also looks like Alice and Jasper may have some attraction.  I really like the way Alice handled herself but she is right because not only is Bella a prisoner but now so is Alice, more potent blood for Cullen

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Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4.

Wow that was a powerful vision and poor Bella had to relive it twice.  I wonder what Cullen is going to do with them?

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Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5.

Poor Bella, Cullen doesn't want to let her go.  Edward is attracted to her but cares more for his master - not a good position for her.  Alice is great stuff.

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Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6.

Love Alice - Vampire stiffy indeed. Her and Jasper are a scream  Edward certainly wrapped up in Bella.  Very interesting and enjoyable story.

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8.

Jasper is certainly very hot.  I just love feisty Alice.  Jasper is attached to her I wonder if she will get changed. I just love this story. 

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9.

Jasper seem to get over the newborn phase quickly, Alice and Jasper are good together.  I also like Edward and Bella (I wonder what Carlisle will make of it).  Looking forward to next chapter.

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10.

Well Bella had no real choice once Edward decided that was more or less it.  Alice is in the same position with Jasper who is even more possessive than Edward.  At least both Edward and Jasper are really really hot!

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Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11.

Good chapter. Telling Carlisle went fairly well considering.  I wasn't expecting 

Carlisle to be Edwards brother, I wonder why he does not want Edward to know?

Alice and Jasper have to be my favourite couple.  I love how she stands up to him.

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Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12.

Very intense chapter.  I am really enjoying this story.  Jasper and Alice still make me laugh.

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The newest Malfoy may not be in Slytherin but he still hates Ron Weasley. Scorpius is nothing like his father, however. When he finds something he wants, he takes it. He's got his sights set on Hermione Weasley and she won't escape!


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Scorpius Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46467 Read Count: 18225
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 05 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This very creepy but interesting. I cannot wait to see where you go with this.

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, poor Hermione, not only being scared witless but also finding she liked his kisses.  Oh boy is she in trouble.

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What a cliffy.  I wonder how Draco, will react to finding Scorpius had kidnapped Hermione?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ha ha.  I love it and so might Hermione in the end. LOL

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I must be twisted but I am liking the idea of Hermione,  as mate of Scorpius and Draco.  I hope they win. LOL

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This is a wonderful chapter.  Thank you for sharing.

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Date: 31 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

All I can say about your flamers is some people are stupid.  This is a great story and if they do not like it they do not have to read it.  I really like this story and hope you can finish it.  Just remember it takes no effort to destroy but lots to build.  You are the builder.

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Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I thought this was a wonderful chapter, we got to see how much Draco had suffered.  I am so looking forward to the next chapter where (hopefully) Rose causes Ron a lot of hassel. :)

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Date: 21 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yay for Rose, Ron needed that kick to the bottom.  Wonderful chapter.

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Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Welcome back and with such an enjoyable chapter.

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Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I imagine that Scropius has learnt his lesson.  Thank you for a awesome and very hot chapter.

 

Belated Happy Birthday.

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Date: 10 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wonderful. I will miss this story as I enjoyed it so much.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64699
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-The Plan

Loved it.  I particularly loved the list out of How to Win Back the Love of My Existence Number 4 Review possible sexual repression issues; made me laugh the most.  I loved the books Jasper and Emmett piled onto a reluctant Edward LOL.



Author's Response:

Thanks Roon1. Edward has some reading to do....

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

Great start to your story.  I hate stories where Bella mops and whines away for Assward.

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Of all the Airports in the World....

Their meeting went well.  I wonder why Bella is nervous about her man meeting Edward or vis versa?

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Edward Meets Julian

Bella's reaction to Julian and Edward meeting was odd, esp., she has "moved on" and in with Julian.

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Incapacitate...Don't Decapitate

How every funny.  Poor Julian and Bella, ha ha.



Author's Response:

Roon: thanks for reading and giving this story a chance. I'm glad you found it funny!

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-WTF?

This is so funny.



Author's Response:

Glad you are laughing. Is that worth one more coffee cup at least? LOL

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Consenting Adults

Still funny.

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here

If only assward would listen to Emmett.

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

Gosh Edward really is a numbity isn't he?

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?

Great chapter.  Edward is so lucky he has his family.

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Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11-Damn AT&T To Hell

Another good chapter.  So glad Bella told Edward off and put him in his place.  He is such a baby :-)



Author's Response:

You will find grown up Bella is rarely unwilling to stick up for herself.

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Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12-Julian Meets The Cullens

Wow Julian is really kicky.  She's gone from one that won't to one that can and certainly would with whips and everything LOL.

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Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-Over My Already Dead Body

Something not working right?   Good question Edward if its not your private parts its certainly your head.  Maybe he's getting the idea now?



Author's Response:

I like the head comment....lol.

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Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-The Road to Hell....

Poor Edward he is such an ass.  I am not too sure I am liking this Julian either but at least she is not frustrated with him. LOL

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15-Bella's Toys

Excellent chapter I am still laughing I am not sure which made me laugh more, Emmett and the nipple clamps or Esme wanting Edward to ask Carlisle about nipple piercings LMAO.  I also loved the environmental friendly vibrator ideal however I fear by the time you crank the thing up you could very well lose all interest :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you Roon. I'm glad you enjoyed it and it had you giggling.  Notice you are still stingy with the coffee cups....lol

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Research

Though Edward can be an ass I prefer him to Julian, so go for it Eddie boy.   loved Emmett's continuing fascination with nipple claps  and totally approve of a vampire sex shop called  Sodom and Gomorrah fantastic. ha ha

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17-Fall

Loved the CFM songs.  I always thought that Carlisle had hidden deapths.

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18-One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

Ha I wonder how Bella will react to Tanya?  Not well I think.

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19-Wicked Games

Good old Tanya. Love Edwards plans to save Bella  "Kidnap Bella; Castrate Julian; Find a priest to perform a quick exorcism"  The last bit especially.

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Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Double Dating with Vampires

God forbid Edward gets friction burns!!!

PS an overdose of caffeine is bad for you but since you are an adult and an amusing one at that, I will gladly give you extra coffee :-)

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Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

I just loved "Operation Edward Eats Pussy--Finally.”  AKA "Operation Cunnilingus." I have laughed my head off over the conversation between Edward & Emmett " I fail to see how Julian not performing cunnilingus is somehow going to win me back Bella.”  “Cunning what? Dude, we're talking about eating pussy."   "Do we need to back up and explain what eating pussy means?” Oh yeah, Eddie bady, needs to learn and learn quickly. :-)

You can have 10 cups for making me laugh so much.



Author's Response: I'm so excited I finally earned a full row of coffee cups! Thank u! And thanks for your kind words. I like hearing that this story gets a few giggled every now and then...

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Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?

OMG "I assure you pussies don't have neon signs or written directions."  Bella's will need one if Eddie let loose on it.  LOL 

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24-Testing Boundaries

Good Rosalie go.  I loved Alice offering up her bottom in the aid of true love!.  Go on you made me laugh again so have 10 cups on me.

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25-Place Your Bets

Loved the betting.  If I was betting I would think the odds on poor Edward getting down to business to be rather long.

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Second Chances

I liked this chapter.  I thought it was rather sweet.

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Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27-Welcome to Orlando, Now Strip!

OMG Edward is so funny.  I loved the striptease, Rosalie good one!

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Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28-At Last

Nice lemon.  I want to congratulat Edward on his first pussy feast.  LOL.



Author's Response:

What can I say? It seems the boy has skills!!!  Glad you liked the lemon

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Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29-A Peach By Any Other Name...

Bella said cock indeed.  I  loved the peach story.  OMG E is just so funny.

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Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30-To Spank or Not To Spank

Oh bless.

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Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31-Bella's Real Fantasy

Poor Edward and his hang ups.

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Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32-Halloween Horny Nights

At least progress.  All it needed was a good spanking!

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Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33-Fear No More

Edward has lost is v card.  Woopie.  Nicely done too.



Author's Response:

Thank you Roon.  Let's see if you like deflowered Edward better!

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Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34-The Morning After

Edward seems to have taken to "lovin" like a duck to water.  I like the bit about Bella's parents.

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Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35-Time

You have to love a woman who knows what she wants :-)



Author's Response:

I'm with you on that one sister...lol

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Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36-Goodbye Orlando

What a peachy chapter!  Loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Glad you liked it!

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Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37-And It All Comes Tumbling Down

Poor Edward. 

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Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38-Hanging On

Poor baby Edward.



Author's Response:

Dont' give up on B&E yet...thanks for reading!

Summary:

I have consolidated the out takes of People like us into one place!  These are the sub stories born out of the pages of PLU. 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54321 Read Count: 226540
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

LOL. What is it with these Cullen men?  Is BDSM in their blood?  Was it dripped feed to them with their mother's milk? 

Carlisle,you are one bad assed dude.  

Personally, I think the whole thing with Riley was blown way out of proportion. 

Bella quit her job over it and Esme, became a sub because of it.  WTF? LOL

 

I hope you have a great Christmas and will have a happy and healthy New Year.

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great photos thanks.