Reviews by Lisalou
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514673
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Bella - DAY 6

Where can I find The Training School Retained Edward's POV?

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19229
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Contest Nomination

Will there be any more chapter? I really hope so!! Thanks for writing,
Lisa

Author's Response:

I've thought about how to finish their story. I put this story on hiatus so long ago I'm not sure if I'll come back to it or not. I haven't completely given up the idea of finishing it, but I have so much other writing on my plate right now between CAM & LOMO, plus my 3rd novel, and that's just my writing list. I also work full time, have a disabled husband and my mom is having medical issues now that require my help in my "free" time. Keep it on your alerts and you never know, but don't count on it any time in the near future.

Mic

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have put on you on favorite author so I will get all of your updates. I will check out your published novels. I didn't realize you had published.
When is the next book coming out?
You are an awesome author!! Thanks for writing and sharing.
Lisa

Author's Response:

My published work is under Michael Schneider . Blind Faith and The Darkness of Perfection. Before you ask, neither novels are "pulled to publish" fanfics. They're both original works. DOP is similar in cncept to Perfect Wife, but there isn't one line in the novel that was in tpw. Assume nothing. My novel I'm working on now is the sequel to dop. It will be next year sometime. 

Thank you so much for the wonderful complement. I'm glad you like my writing. If you purchase a book let me know what you think.

Mic

Two Worlds Collide by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary:

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Edward Mason is the leader of Mason Corporations. Isabella Swan is set to take over leadership of Swan industries from her ill father Charlie Swan. He wants Swan Industries, she wants Mason Corporations, but their Father's have a different plan for the two to get what they want...how will they take it and how will it all work. SOME CONTENTS ARE FOR THOSE WHO ARE, AT LEAST, 17 AND OVER.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237944 Read Count: 56378
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2022
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 30 May 2019 Title: Chapter 23: When the opportunity arises…. Take it swiftly

I would be happy with either option. What ever you are most comfortable will would probably be best!

Author's Response:

thank you

Summary:

This is the sequel to my story Intimate Ties

 

Dom Edward finally has his submissive, Bella, right where he wants her. But when Rose decides she wants to enter their world, they start to feel their ties come undone. Can their relationship survive Rose's attempt to sabotage? OOC/AH LEMONS, BDSM


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 not updated in 6mo reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11580 Read Count: 8773
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Are you going to finish this story?
Thanks
Lisa

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389576
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Thank you so much for the update. I can't wait for the next one. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...

I was so excited to get an update!! I have missed this story so much. I loved the chapter. Thanks for writing. Can't wait for the next one.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:

Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”

 

My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.

 

Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!

 

He was right there!

 

Right fucking there!

 

Suddenly, I felt overdressed.

 

My clothes felt too tight, constricting.

 

All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.

 

I blame that bitch, Eve!

 

Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.

 

What?

 

No!

 

Give it to me!

 

Don’t tease me!

 

Pleaseeeeeee!

 

At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.

 

 

One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.

 

He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.

 

Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.

 

Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.

 

Right?

 

Wrong...

 

Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.

 

Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”

 

Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.

 

Hey, don’t judge me...

 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...

I was so glad to get the update. I can't wait to see what happens as her punishment. I hope it is something pet can handle. I am nervous for her. I can't wait for the next update. I am looking forward to the teaser. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay, but I took a much needed vacation, and my parents wouldn't allow me to write any smut while I was visiting them! Lol... Here's a peek at the next chapter! See you Tuesday!

Krazi

xoxo

 

 

Before knocking on the door, I took a moment to get in the right headspace. Once I walked through that door, I would no longer be the confident Dom I professed to be, my submission would belong to my mentor and former Master. Resigned and ready, I wrapped the heavy wooden door three times. “Come in,” Master Peter’s deep voice called from inside the room.

 

As if walking before a firing squad, all three of us entered the room with our heads tucked to our chests, and our hands clasped behind our backs. At first glance, one would think that we were three naughty students summoned to the headmaster’s office.

 

“Edward,” Master Peter said solemnly. “As good as it is to see you again; I am by no means pleased at the circumstances. Do you have anything to say for yourself?” Master Peter and I had already had this conversation, but he was still following protocol for the sake of the others that were present.

 

“Master Peter,” I started, swallowing around the sudden lump in my throat. “This one has failed to remember his teachings, and in doing so, has failed his collared submissive. This one comes before you fully aware of the ramifications of such an offense, ready to receive whatever punishment Master sees fit to dole out upon him.”

 

Try as she might, Isabella could not help but to react to my revelation. Her sharp intake of air came as no surprise, and did not go unnoticed by Master Peter. “Isabella,” Master Peter asked, addressing my submissive for the first time. “Is there something you’d like to say?” Just like I knew she would, Isabella remained as quiet as a church mouse. Peter, who had yet to get up from his chair, hummed in appreciation of her obedience before saying, “Well, Edward, you haven’t failed her too bad, she’s quite the respectful little one.” He then returned his attention to my girl. “Thank you for your obedience and respect for this Dom Isabella. Now, little one, you may look at me and speak. Having heard your Master’s declaration, do you have anything you’d like to to say?”

 

“Yes, Sir, Master Peter,” Isabella said in a quiet yet respectful tone. “This girl would simply like to say that she trusts her Master blindly, and if Master has chosen to bring this girl here with him tonight, for this purpose, then so be it. Master knows best, and would never knowingly or purposely put his girl in harm’s way. Master knows what is needed for me to become a better submissive, and this is it.”

 

“After hearing that, Edward, there should be no doubt in your mind that this little one is meant for you.” My heart clenched at his words, I couldn’t have said it better myself. “Come; let us not waste any more time.” With that, Master Peter led us all downstairs to his dungeon.

 

No stranger to Master Peter’s playroom, I made my way to the large ensuite bathroom to change. A modest black leather thong that would leave my ass bare was lying on the counter, and I wasted no time shedding my clothes and encasing my now deflated dick in the less than comfortable black pouch. As I made my way to the whipping bench, I could see Isabella and Charlotte kneeling on each side of the room.

 

Master Peter didn’t speak a word as he tended to the cuffs that would hold my wrists and ankles. Since we previously discussed what my punishment would be, Master Peter’s explanation was for his audience’s ears only.  “First, I will warm up the flesh with my leather paddle, and then the real punishment will commence. Edward has already chosen a rattan cane for his punishment, so once the skin is warmed and ready, I will administer ten licks which Edward will count out loud.” Returning his attention to Isabella, Master Peter gave her a command. “Isabella, for no reason are you to take your eyes off of this whipping bench. If at any point and time you feel unable to continue, you are to use your safe words. And they are…”

 

“Red, yellow, and green, Sir,” was Isabella’s quiet response.

 

“And what color are you now, Isabella?”

 

Silence hung thick in the air and for a moment, I thought she was going to say red.

 

Trust me, Isabella!

 

You need this!

 

I need this!

 

We need this!

 

I was having a mini meltdown when a sudden calm washed over me, almost as if I could feel Isabella touching me from the other side of the room. But it was her strong and steady voice that sealed the deal. “Green. I’m green, Sir. My Master knows exactly what we need.”

 

My girl was fucking awesome, and would rival any seasoned submissive with the way she carried herself. There was nothing left to do, but take our punishment and put this whole unfortunate ordeal behind us; if nothing else, Isabella and I had definitely grown in our relationship, both vanilla and D/s.

 

“Very well,” Master Peter said matter-of-factly. “Shall we get on with it?”

 

Lunar Eclipse by Ren68 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

 

 Existence is hard, harder than I would have believed even a few years earlier. Being involved with Bella opened my world to things I wouldn’t have thought about before. Being human was far more difficult than I’d given them credit for, knowing now how wrong I truly was. And even after all of this… I wouldn’t change one thing.

Having her was the most important thing, and anything that came with that I would deal with. As long as she was with me, we’d be all right. Together we could conquer all. She was my existence now, and I couldn’t wait to exist.

 

 

                                                            Edward Cullen.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141121 Read Count: 5308
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2011 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 DANGER

This is a repeat of chapter 22

Author's Response:

Thanks for the notice. All fixed. Hope you enjoy. Thanks for reading.

Summary:

 

 

For those of you who read "The Perfect Wife" this takes place twelve years after the epilogue. You do not need to read TPW, but an understanding of the story is helpful.

Carlisle ran a human trafficking ring. He was an abusive husband and father. Esme suffered cruel and horrific atrocities at her husband’s hand. Her sons, Emmett, Jasper and Edward were raised to treat her no better than a slave; undeserving of love and respect. Rosalie, Alice and Bella are brought into this life as their wives and together these women fight to change their outlook on life and women. At the end of TPW, Em/J/E have learned to change and passionately love and respect their wives.

Carlisle is finally killed when he attempts to hurt Bella, freeing Esme from a lifetime of abuse. His will stated he wanted to be cremated so his ashes would remain with his family, forever a symbol of his power over his family. Esme refuses to let him control her life any longer and takes his urn from the house returning empty-handed hours later.

TPW was Bella and Edward’s story. This is Esme’s story.

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4083 Read Count: 7761
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You never did say what she did with the ashes. Will you ever let us know?

Author's Response:

I got so many pm's suggesting so many different things readers would have done with his ashes that I've left it to the reader's imagination. My personal take would have been to dump them in the landfill (garbage dump) or find the nastiest gas station in town to flush them down the toilet.

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

Banner by vbfb1

Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

That was sweet! Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Feel better. Thanks for the update!
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I hope the kiss Edward gave her last time will bring her around.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I woke up yesterday and today and there was no update. I hope you are well and you made it home safely from your vacation!!! Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing. Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Yay, the meadow! Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Thank you for writing. I really hope your son gets better.
Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/48835/images/Sperm_Donor_Wanted_Banner.jpg

Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I bet he throws up on her back. That would be gross! Please don't keep us waiting too long. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

That is what thought!! Thanks for writing. Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

BARN SEX!!!!! That's what we have been waiting for. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I'm so sorry to hear about your mom. I lost my mom 4 years ago, so I know how hard it is to carry on with life. Thanks you so much for writing and sharing with us. You are awesome! I loved this chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ATL

Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491582
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I wonder who it could be. They need to get caller ID on their phone and call blocking for any unknown number. I can't wait to see what happens next. I felt so bad for Bella having to hear Lauren talking that way about them. That would really suck!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh no! her dad is probably going to snatch her up or something.
Thanks for writing...Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Thanks goodness she is free!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

That was so sweet!!!! Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Yay!! Its baby time! Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Renee is really a piece of work! Bella sure had the worst parents possible. Its a wonder she turned out so good. I'm wondering if Renee was all the hang up calls they have been getting. Thanks for writing,
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Yay!! They are at their own house with both of the babies. I'm glad no one was really hurt. Thanks for writing and giving us 2 updates this week.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

I'm really not liking Alice right now!! I hope she does get help. That was just so mean. I don't know if I could really forgive her if she was my sister-in-law. I would just have to put up with her when we had to be around each other. Thanks for writing. I love this story.

Simply Promised by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

award

Edward and Bella, best friends since kids, have promised to have each other's baby someday. Now, Edward is married and Bella has a Fiance. Edward reminds Bella of their simple promise, when he learns that his wife is unable to conceive. HEA E/B Lemons. Drabble

Banner created by: Mina Rivera

Beta: HollBeth

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28014 Read Count: 105595
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank you so much for all the updates tonight. I am really enjoying this story. I'm looking forward to tomorrow to read some more. I hope Bella sees that she is in love with Ed soon, and he drops Tranny. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Author's Response:

Hi, Lisa. It'll be a while for Bella and Edward to get their heads out of the clouds, but it will happen. Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thanks for the 3 updates tonight. I hope Bella doesn't go through with the wedding. Poor Ed :(
Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Author's Response:

Hi Lisa,

I keep forgetting to update since the story is already complete. LOL, weird, I know. You'll just have to wait and see about the wedding. Thanks for reading. 

~Norma

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thanks for all the updates today. I really want Ed and Bella to end up together. I'll keep my fingers crossed and keep reading.Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Author's Response:

Hi Lisa,

Edward and Bella will have a HEA, in my stories at least. Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Well, I'm glad Riley and Bella broke up. I can't wait until Tranny and Ed do the same. I think Bella will feel an attachment after she feels the baby kick. That makes it seem real. Can't wait until tomorrow. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I was hoping they would get closer...not him staying away. I am so looking forward to the next update. Thank you for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Thank you for all the updates today. I am really loving this story. I hope all is well with you. I will keep you in my prayers. Thanks for writing and sharing. Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Thank you for all the updates today! I'm so glad they are together finally. I can't wait for the next updates.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I really love this story. All of my babies were born c-section so it brings back memories. I will be real sorry to see this one end. It is one of my favorite stories.
Thank you for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I am really sad to see this one end. I really loved it. It was cool that they had twins and an older child, just like I have!
I loved your writing style. I will definately read anything else you write. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Lisa

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923120
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Yay, the babies are on their way!!! I was so happy to see an update for this story. I have really missed it. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Wow!!! Its about time Edward got the better of them. Poor Jasper :( I feel bad for him. Thanks for writing and getting the update to us so soon.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 69

Thanks for the update. I hope Edward shows up next week. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I loved that Bella escaped into her own head and didn't really have to live through what they were doing to her. A beach is a happy place. I loved how it ended. That was so sweet.
Thank you so much for updating again so soon. I'm glad we will be getting weekly updates. I really miss MC every morning, so this was a nice surprise to wake up to this morning. Thanks for writing.
Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Are the chapters posted here the same as the ones on fanfic? I have been reading this there. I will go back and read them here if there is a difference. Thanks for writing. - Lisa

Author's Response:

exactly the same... word for word, including the author's notes, which are outdated, but are near to my heart and I can't bear to change them. :)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

How many more chapters until we are back where you were on FF? Was it in the low 30s? Thank you for writing.
Lisa

Author's Response:

you are waiting for chapter 32, though I promise that 34 is the one that will make u laugh and cry all at once :)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Yay!! Thats a start. I just hope Bella and Edward get revenge on all of them too. Thanks for the update.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Poor Bella. I hope they can come up with a way to have the wedding night be just the 2 of them. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Thank you for updating. I can't wait for the next chapter. I couldn't believe Tanya was doing that to Edward. That was a good twist. After that, this was a real sweet chapter. I liked their vows... but they ended them with while we are on this island. I hope by the time they get off, they will really be a couple.
Love this story,
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Oh, that was so good!! Thank you so much for the update. I am so glad they told each other how they feel. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I think Bella is upset because Edward didn't get into the bed with her. I think her feelings were hurt. The wedding night turned out easier than I thought. Thanks for writing and sharing. I love this story.
Lisa
(Gail Cullen)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

That was heart breaking and sweet all at once. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Noc,
Wow!! That was fucking awesome!!! I think they will still have to deal with James though. Charlie should have killed him, but maybe Bella or Edward will get the chance to kill him. So Laurent, Demetri, Aro and Victoria are all dead? I loved it. Thanks so much for writing. I can't wait for the next update and the teaser to your next book.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 63 (back to IR)

I hope it doesn't take Edward too long before he talks to Bella. They need to be together! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 64

You really had me scared at first. I thought I missed an update somewhere. I knew a lot would have happened to everyone in a month.
I'm so glad Bella is thinking straight. She is putting her life in order. I was so afraid Emmett would mess everything up for Bella and Edward and for Rose and himself. Edward needs to talk to Bella. No one is really giving him any support. No one picked up on his assumption that Bella aborted their baby. My heart breaks for him. I really hope they are all safe when they go back to the island to end the rest of those monsters. Thanks for writing. I'm sure there are way more than 4 of us reading this story!! It is one of my favorites.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 65

Poor Edward! Everyone seems to be healing except him. Thanks so much for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 66

I'm glad to see Alice adjusting to life off of the island. You just have to love Jasper. Alice has the best family! I hope Edward can find James soon so he can be there for Bella. Thanks for writing. Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 70

Edward was a little slow! I wish he would have called her name out while she was sitting on the bench.
Thanks you so much for the update. I can't wait for the next chapter when they actually talk (I hope)
I love the bottom picture of Rob!! It is one of my all time favorites! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 71

Can't James die already?! I really hope Edward shows up and kills him in a horrible way. Or better yet, Bella gets to do the honors. Please don't let him hurt Bella or the babies! I can't wait till Friday. You have been on my favorite list for a long time now! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

oh what's gonna happen is much better than him dying!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 72

Way to go Bella! I love that she got to stab James and I loved where she cut him. I really hope he dies. I know burns are really painful. That is what he deserves. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 74

That was awesome!!!! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 81

That was so sweet! I have missed this story so much. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


banner by SoapyMayhem



banner by JA Mash


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 44068
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Awakening

Well, that was intense. Was she trying to say red or yellow at the end? I hope she is ok. He should have been easier with her being as though it was her first time doing anything. I think he wasn't paying good enough attention to her. I hope you update soon. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324370
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day

Well that went well...better than I expected. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner

When a secret is revealed, just days before her wedding, Bella leaves her fiancé Edward, as well as her sisters, in a panic, wondering: will she be able to forgive him in time, or leave him standing at the altar. June Drabble War entry.

MADE BY: LUNARECLIPSE1

Banner

MADE BY: MINA R.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20084 Read Count: 104378
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This seems like a train wreck waiting to happen...and you know you have to stay to watch. I am really loving this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks so much for writing.
Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Either one would be good.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Good luck at work. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Thanks for the update.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Yes, I am so glad you are writing this. I look forward to each update. Please don't quit on this one. I wonder who his master it. I didn't think he had one. Do Doms have masters? Edward is deffinately not a sub...or did he used to be? I can't wait to find out.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Thanks for writing. I am enjoying this story. I really like when we get a few a day!
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

I get the updates. I have you as favorite author and favorite story.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 191: Chapter 191

We just appreciate what you do give us!! You could not let us down. :)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 266: Chapter 266

The picture is blank. I wish I could see it. As always...I love this story and everything else you write. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

mhnf


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131907
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Well, I'm so curious as to what exactly Alice did to Jasper!! Thanks for writing. Can't wait for the next update.
Lisa

Orange Crush by OzellaMarie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

stories/48835/images/BeFunky_OrangeCrushBanner3.jpg

 

Bella Swan's life is turned upside down when a hunky new guy moves in next door. Will she be able to handle 'Sex on Legs'? Or will he think she's a complete fruit cake? 

Edward/Bella/Drabble/Romance/Humor

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3003 Read Count: 5203
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Let Me Lick Yer Lollipop!

This is starting out very interesting. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

I think maybe Jacob is there. I would love to see what Carman wrote in the letter to Bella. I would love a teaser. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Author's Response: hi. thank you for the review. I am sorry for the late update but here is a teaser for chapter 20 this is unbeta'd I watched as Edward walked away and headed towards his own home with a big grin on his face. I suddenly drifted into a dreamworld where everything was perfect with Edward and hopefully some day it will be. I was painfully unaware of my brother and friends stand around me until I felt a pinch on my left arm. "So are you going to tell us what is going on or am I going to have to torture it out of you?" Alice squeeled, jumping up and down. I started to feel dizzy simply by looking at her. "Well, Edward and I decided to go slow in our realtionship and he wants to do all the daddy things when it comes to our babies," I said enthusiastically. Suddenly the three of them were looking at me shocked with their mouths wide open. "What's wrong? Go I have ketchup on my face or spinach in my teeth," I asked. The three of them continued to stare at me and surprise, surprise, it was Alice that started talking first. "Bella, did you just say babies? As in more than one," she asked. "Shit," I muttered to myself. I wanted to tell everyone about the twins all together and with Edward by my side. I was about to answer her when I heard a crash coming from a few houses down. I looked down and saw a chair flying through a window. What frightened me more was that the chair came flying out of Edward's window and I could clearly hear the shouting and screaming that followed. Jasper looked at me and then went running towards Edward's house with Alice, Alec and I following closely behind.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

I think they will have a boy. Edward still has a way to go before he is redeemed. Thanks for writing. Can't wait for the next update (or teaser).
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

I still don't like Edward too much yet. I'm glad he is finally going to set the record straight, but he still ruined her life in Forks. He needs to answer why he thought it was a good idea to trash her to the media. He had to know no good could come of it.
I can't wait to see Esme confront Carmen. I would love a teaser. Thanks for writing and sharing!
Lisa

Author's Response: Hi. thank you for the review. i love reading them all. the only thing that i can tell you about the rest of the story is that it is going to be a bumpy ride for both Bella and Edward but i promise you a HEA. Here is a teaser for the chapter 16 There was one sentence that Jasper said which was repeatedly going over in my head but I could not figure out why. “I know for a fact that she wishes that you could be here with her but you will have your work cut out for you if you want her to forgive and trust her again.” I wish I knew why that I kept repeating that particular sentence in my head until if finally dawned on me. “I know for a fact that she wishes that you could be HERE with her but you will have your work cut out for you if you want her to forgive and trust her again.” “SHIT” I yelled, jumping up off my chair. HERE, means that she was staying with Jasper. She is only fifteen minutes away from me. I could be there with her while we both watch the interview together,” I thought, but just as quickly, as my excitement came it just as quickly evaporated. I sat back down in my seat in defeat and thought, how can I earn back her trust back if I go rushing to her before she is ready. She needs to see the interview first and then decided whether she wants to see me. “From this moment on, everything is going to be on her terms and I’ll just have to be patient if I was ever to have the chance to win her back. “The ball is in her court and I will be happy to take whatever she gives me,” I thought.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

I think the person that showed up is Emmett. I don't think she should forgive him very quickly. He has done some really rotten things to her. Especially by denying that the baby was his and letting the whole town know her business. That was terrible. Edward has so much to make up for, and that should take time. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21

I am glad they brought the police in to protect them. I like that they are getting closer. thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I don't think the person on the phone was telling the truth. I love the story. I would love a teaser. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I am loving this story. I can't wait for the next update. I am glad Angela got to come along. The other kids at school are so mean. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I really love this story! I just came across it and read it straight through. I really would love a teaser for the next chapter. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: All Alone

That was a very good lemon. Bella was so stupid for lying about being on the pill though. I love this story. Thank you for writing. I would love a teaser.
Lisa

Author's Response: hi. thanks for your review. I love reading them all. I hope that you continue to enjoy the story. here is a teaser for chapter 5 "Bella, what is wrong? Did you just come from Edward's room?" Jasper got up off the floor and put his arms around me. "What happened darlin," he asked. I started crying and told them both the whole story. Jasper eyes filled with fury when I told them that he was trying to think of a way to leave me so that I would'nt be little miss clingy. He got up and started pacing the room. "That bastard. I know that he is a manwhore but this is a new low even for him. I see the way he treats girls but they are experienced and they usually have a different guy in their bed every night and don't get me started on Tanya Denali. I turned a blind eye before but never again," he yelled angrily.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I think she should not have ran away again. She should have confronted Edward. He really acted like an ass though with Jasper and Alice. I'm usually on his side, but I was glad that he got beat up a little. Bella did lead him to believe that she was on the pill.
Thank you for writing. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm loving this story. Please send me a teaser of the next chapter.
Lisa

Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Oh, man!! That really sucks. I think I hate this Edward. Poor Bella. I can't wait for the next update. Thank you for writing. I am so glad you updated today!! Love it.
Lisa

Author's Response:

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I still don't like Edward. Did Emily have a baby too? Bella's parents are the worst parents ever!!!! I'm glad she has someone to be on her side. Can't wait for the update. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Author's Response:

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Poor Bella! I've never hated an Edward as much as I do this one. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22

I never like seeing Jacob! I just hope Bella's night isn't ruined. I want her and Edward to have their own after party with a lot of sexing. Thanks for writing. I would love a teaser.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: hi. thanks u so much for your review. here is a teaser for chapter 23 this is unbeta'd She slowly opened her eyes and gasped as she looked around the penthouse. The entire room was covered in different color flowers and a path of rose petals led the way to the bedroom. I walked over and opened the door. The bed was covered in more rose petals and roses. champagne and apple cider were lay in the ice bucket next to the bed along with chocolate truffles and strawberries. I could feel Bella coming up behind me and wrapping her arms around my waist. "Why Edward? Why did you do all of this," she asked. I turned around and took her face in between my hands. "Because I love you baby and I wanted to spoil you, even if it is only for one night," I said, pressing my lips softly to hers. I swept my tongue across her lower lip seeking access into her mouth which she willingly gave. I left her lips and travelled down to her neck sucking and kissing it before pulling away. I rested my forehead against hers, still breathing heavily. "I love you so much Bella," I purred. "I love you too Edward, forever," she whispered. "Bella there is something I want to give to you love," I said, sitting her on the bed. I took out the little box that I had close to my heart for the last month and kneeled down in front of her. Her big brown eyes went wide and she started to shake a little when she saw the little black box in my hand.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: All Alone

I still don't feel sorry for Edward at all!! He is such an ass. I'm glad Carlisle and Esme got some dirt on him to use against him. Thanks for writing

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12

I'm glad Edward didn't see Bella. I still don't like him at all. I am not usually a fan of Jacob, but in this story I hope he is a good guy. Bella needs someone good. Thanks for the update.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

So how does she have a daughter that Esme doesn't know about? I Emily a lot older than the other girls? I can't wait to see what Edward has to say to Bella.
I would love a teaser. Thanks for writing. Lisa

Author's Response: hi. thanks for the review. chapter 17 is almost finished but here is a teaser to keep u going fiona xo “If you have another child then how come Eleazer never told us and how come we never even met her?” She paused as she thought. I knew that she was trying to think of a right answer. “I never told him. I had an abusive boyfriend before we ever met and I had a daughter out of that relationship. He disappeared when she was on six months with her and we were only reunited five and a half years ago,” she said sadly. I shook my head knowing that I had enough. Carlisle took my hand and told me with his eyes that he has also had enough and that it was time to leave. I turned to leave this house but not before saying my parting piece. “You better leave my daughters alone otherwise things will not look good for you,” I spat and left the house with Carlisle. We got into the car and drove back to Jasper’s home with only one thought in mind. Should I tell Bella or let Edward explain his side of everything.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

I don't hate Edward as much as I did. He still has to do more though. I think Bella will let him be a part of their lives, but I don't think she will let him be her boyfriend yet. I can't imagine what plan B Carmen has in store. I am sure it won't work though. Thanks for writing. I would love a teaser for the next chapter.
Lisa

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 28

I'm glad everyone is ok. Thanks for writing,
Lisa..Gail Cullen

Missing by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

missing



Edward vanishes after a night out celebrating his brothers birthday. Bella has to deal with the consequences of his actions from one night that has resulted in his abduction. Will he find his way back to her? Can she forgive him? Bella's POV of my story Taken.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7481 Read Count: 771
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2012 Updated: 02 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Will you be completing this story? I really hope so. Thanks for writing.

Summary:

This is a video story about when Mummy comes home and claims kitten. It is for adults only.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2583 Read Count: 265009
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2012 Updated: 27 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Are you going to continue this with Daddy for tomorrow night? I would love to read that. Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Author's Response:

I did, here is the link http://l3.image.pornpassforall.com/picture/promophoto/8454/10/

 

Summary:

After a night of training with Mummy, kitten pleases Daddy by willingly accepting him in her tight rosebud. This is another picture drabble. Very short chapters with pictures. Please read Yes Mummy first. :)  This is a poly fic.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1383 Read Count: 199274
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2012 Updated: 27 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Thanks for the story!
Lisa

too quiet by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

tq

 

 

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Summary: Edward left to give Bella a better life. A life full of beautiful noise. This is what she was really left with.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49311 Read Count: 49542
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2013 Updated: 16 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm glad Bella is letting her anger out. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Bella needs to get away from Jacob wolf so Alice can see. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

He will be too tempted to have sex with her if he lets the animal in him loose? Is that what he is afraid of now? Thanks for writing. I am with you till the end.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

I loved Dared to truth. I hated Alice and somewhat Jasper, but I loved your story. I hope things get better. You are an awesome writer!!!!! Thanks for writing and sharing with us.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Summary:

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Edward Masen is a normal 17-year-old boy who dreams of becoming a soldier, but when tradegy strikes his family, his entire life changes. Edward is introduced to the supernatural world he had no idea even existed, and he certainly doesn't want to live in it.

It was during the month of March in the year of 1918 that the first signs of the influenza was revealed to the public, although no one ever imagined the damages this historic event would have on the American people.
One citizen in particular faces an irrevocable change that cause a chain of e...vents to unfold through the twentieth century. The price was to give up his old life, but he would later gain more than he ever thought he would.

A Pre-Twilight Canon story about the life of Edward Cullen


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: Angst, Family, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Twilight Origins
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117254 Read Count: 14589
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 20 Aug 2019
Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2015 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

I can't wait to see how he lives his life for the next couple years. Thanks for writing
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

Poor Edward is all alone with no hope of a mate in the near future. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response: Yes, this is the point where he slowly falls deeper into his angsty, broody self...