Reviews by twifam1
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: The Real Cinderella

I just started reading your story a day or two ago. I love it and cannit wait for more!!!

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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details

Loved the chapter and I hope Edward and Bella will be able to talk and clear Edward with his friends some'. I mean how hard would it be for her to be Edwards girl for a few hours?



Author's Response:

Exactly! I mean, no harm no foul, right? As long as Edward gets his head together and figure out the Rose situation, I think things will simmer down...hopefully ;)

Thanks for the review, Hun!!!

~K

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What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I read your little drabble and I love it!!! I hope you will  omplete it. I dont ubderstand why Bella went back to Seattlr and never even call3d Edward. She hqs not inviteed him to thr OB appointments knowning the story with Tanya and their baby I would have thought Bella would do better.. lo9king forward to more.

Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I read your little drabble and I love it!!! I hope you will  omplete it. I dont ubderstand why Bella went back to Seattlr and never even call3d Edward. She hqs not inviteed him to thr OB appointments knowning the story with Tanya and their baby I would have thought Bella would do better.. lo9king forward to more.

Puzzle of my Heart by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella leads a promiscuous life: no relationships, no last names, no numbers. After meeting a certain green-eyed man, she begins to break her carefully set up rules. In a steamy friendship both their pasts and insecurities will be revealed. Will Bella give in to love? And what will happen when the past catches up to her? A story about lust, love and trust. AH, rated NC-17 for a reason

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122361 Read Count: 106077
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2014
Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Futuretake - Happy Birthday!

Okay. I am enjoying your other story. Two Blue Lines sooo much. It was killing me to wait every otherweek so

I just decided to see if you had any other stories. I love ....love. ...love this story. I have read tons of fan fiction with lots of marriage popossals. This one is my absolure favorite!  Their wedding was perfect.  I hated getting to the end. I am loving TBL as well. Always looking forward to updates. Thanks for writing and entertaining me.!!...



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I'm so glad you liked the wedding. I have to admit that, if I was to get married again, I'd like to do it just like that ;). The next TBL update will be Monday. See you then.

Chain Reaction by araeo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
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A chance encounter with a stranger on the ferry is the spark that sets off a chain of events. By the time Bella realizes what's happening, is it too late to change her mind? What happens when fate grabs you and won't let go? AU.

 

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I met Edward on a boat. A very large boat -- the morning ferry commute from Bremerton to Seattle.

Content with my life, I wasn't looking for anything...I was happy in my safe little rut. But that's the funny thing about Fate -- it often strikes when you least expect it. Mine came in the form of blazing toffee-colored eyes, a wicked smile, and a mane of unkempt golden and chestnut hair.

What I didn't realize at the time was that Edward is a paradox.

Edward is not the man of my dreams. It's sort of impossible when I can't have them anymore.

This isn't a love story. This is a seduction. A complete persuasion of mind, body, and soul. Of behavior and beliefs. And I wouldn't change it for the world...I think.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 158365 Read Count: 20233
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2014 Updated: 26 Mar 2014
Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I just found your story and started reading. I love this Bella. Looking forward to the end. I hate that Alice and Jasper.are stuck for a century with Aro. Looking forward to whats next!

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - Fever

yay they finally had sex !! But now want to kill Bella!!! Poor Edward!! I love your story! I just hate we have so long in between updates I am anxious to know what happens next!! Love...love...love it!! I can't understand why she's afraid that they'll be in a relationship will be bad.I know you explained it before but they're all but in a relationship now. Cant wait for more!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review. Well, damn, they finally did it. And I'm glad you liked it :D. I was afraid that, after all these months, it wouldn't measure up to your expectations. As I said, I'm sorry about the cliffie, but I promise everything will be okay. See you Monday.

Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Outtake - How It Began

Loved it!  I am looking forward to the next story! 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. Somehow I must have missed it earlier. I'm glad you liked it, though. See you over at Tie the Knot.

Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Surrender

Sad that this is almost over.  Loved the chapter. Do you have another story planned? I would love to read more of your work. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm sad too, but I'm glad I did my best to do my characters justice. Yes, I do have another story planned. In fact, there's a big teaser out there somewhere but for now I'm not allowed to tell you where :(. Anyway, I just finished writing the epi for TBL and the next day, I started chapter one of the next story, but it's going to take a while before it'll start posting, I'm afraid. My Facebook group members will be the first to know once there's something to tell. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Living Arrangements

Ughhh.the frustration....no next button at yhe bottom of this page. I love the story!!! Cant wait for more!!



Author's Response: I'm glad you decided to read on instead of waiting for the story to be completed. The next chapter will be up on Monday and it will be a "Surprise!". See you then.

Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate

I read the sample of your story and decided I would favorute it and wait until iy was completed to read it. So many times I start reading an incomplete story only to be disappointed when the author abandons it. Pleas dont quit writing this one. I am offically sucked in and I cannot wait to see where you will take us! I love that the the characters are not in together in the same old way...ie bella with riley....eiley with victoria amd we dont hate jake!!  I love the story so far!!



Author's Response: I totally get your disappointment with the abandoned stories. I have too many of those on my alerts as well and for most of them it's a real shame. But I'm currently writing chapter 16, so I have a little buffer and I'm quite sure the worst thing that could happen here is that the interval between two chapters will be a little longer than two weeks of I can't keep up with writing. But I have the final chapter pretty clear in my head already so I definitely plan on writing it ;).

Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

I love amd adore this story! I am always anxious for the next update. I hate that Bella is being so stupid. I mean I understand her fear of hetting hurt again and all. But really obviously she amd Edward will not be single forever.  Would she rather someone else have him? Plus if she gets with domeobe else who os not the baby's daddy and things go bad wouldnt that be way worse??

anyway I love love love this story..  looking forwatd to next chapter.

 



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I know you're frustrated with Bella, but She just had a bad break-up, and on top of that, her hormones and feelings are all over the place. She just hasn't reached the point where she thinks that it's better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all. I know it's hard to believe, but she's actually rather willing to see Edward with someone else and stay his friend than to risk losing him altogether. But we'll see if it actually gets to that ;). Next chapter, we'll finally meet Esme. See you Monday.

Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Where I Belong

I dont always review every chapter but I felt like it was time for me to give you an over all review of your story. I am obsessed with this story and I bte my nails every day waiting on the next chapter!! It is a long two weeks... I want more...lol. I love....love ....love ...your story.  Also I have nevee read a story where Carlise and Esme are not loves or loving. Looking forward to the next installment.!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciated every opinion even if it's not voiced regularly. Thank you so much for your wonderful words. They mean a lot to me. See you next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082143
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

I just started reading a couple of days ago I love your story can't wait to see what happens next

Summary:

Bella is in love!!

Shes been in love befor but never like this. This is pure passion

The only problem is that she does not know him.

What should she do to get in touch?
And he loves her back?

With a little help from friends, she might get the man of her heart wants!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 184 Read Count: 99
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2014 Updated: 06 Nov 2014
Reviewer: twifam1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more! Sounds intriguing!