Reviews by beachlover
Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I am so glad they got James...Glad Edward got to get him.

I bet they have geogeous wedding even if it is at the house.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh no James found her! Hurry home Edward!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow is right!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153110
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Times Are Changing

I have missed this story. I had to reread to get get in the groove again :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Family Time

Thanks for posting!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! lol

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Decisions

Large man hands! Nothing sexier!!!



Author's Response:

I know right! It's something that Bella and I share a love of :) Thank you for reviewing - Aurora

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Swan

Well that makes 3 of us!



Author's Response:

:) thank you for reviewing and welcome to 'Sight'! Aurora

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995723
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great Story, I am just reading away

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Go check out my blog for teasers, outfits, pictures and more!
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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

I liked the Edward / Caleb meet!  Please update sooner! Why must it be a week??

PLEEEASE

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183997
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

Why so long???



Author's Response:

So long for what ? For an update ? Even if I have time to translate another chapter within 2 weeks time, it might take another 2 to 3 week for my beta to return it to me. Plus, like I said, half the people who used to read my story have given up on it(or so it seems), so I feel I'm writing for only ten people. Not very motivating, I'm afraid... So now I translate only when I feel like it... The good news is, since this story is complete in French, sooner or later it will be complete in English as well :0)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Interlude in the good doctor’s apartment, part 2

Intersting dream, I am surprised no one watching noticed!

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105125
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!

Ben nd Angela?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

Oh your Edward is is is just Ahhhhh. So perfect!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Love your story Please tell us about the vampire SOON

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68247
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What is she going to do???? Can she survive in the woods? Itseems it would be hard for Edward to adapt to the city!

Have a great vacation! Will miss your posting!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Hmm. That doesn't seem like it should be all to the story?

See you soon.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Sweeeeet! So happy Rose and Emmett know and are gonna help her.

He is gonna be okay!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your support by reviewing.

Here is your teaser

A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Well the reporters suck!! Post soon!!!!

So does the story stealing! Who The F does that anyway??



Author's Response:

Apparently someone who wanted more wolfpack sstories but didn't want to write them so she took popular stories and changed the names.

 

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh where will you take this??  Good story.



Author's Response:

not telling. LOL

 

I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!

Here is your teaser

The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river.  Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.

 

Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop.  He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too.  Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Here is your teaser

Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.

 

Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get.  Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.

 

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I can't wait for them to move.

I hope Edward does OK!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate you reviewing.

Here is your teaser

Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs.  He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.

 

When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.

 

“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”

 

Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.

 

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Emmett and Rose don't seem fased by Edward but we will see



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.

Here is your teaser

Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside.  But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.

 

There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do.  She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.

 

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh no the chickens!
Wouldn't it be easier to tell them he was mentally challenged

Author's Response:

LOL

 

I really appreciate your review!

Here is your teaser

With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait



Author's Response:

I really appreciate your review!

Here is your teaser

With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I hope the wolves still accept him. Bella needs to find a special "meadow" for them on the property!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing, here is your teaser

 

Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awe Jake left him a good bye present. Kind of sad but Edward does belong with his own kind. Somehow, with Bellas help!!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

 

Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awesome story! I Loved Loved this chapter and can't wait for your outtakes!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

MINE yes Edward yours!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Futuretake- The Proposal

SWEEEEET Post anther one!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.

Antiques Roadshow by aerobee82 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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I took an antique in for appraisal, only to find a much rarer treasure.  I met Bella Swan on Antiques Roadshow, and PBS would never want for funds again. Canon Couples, Vamps/Humans.

Credit goes to forthelongestday for the incredibly lovely banner.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82797 Read Count: 28259
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very different Rose so far, good change

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112168
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward is coming full circle. Fear will do that!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This Should let Bella see a few things too.

Hopefully over the top Alice doesn't cause a scene!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh shit. How old is Edward? Not that it matters. Is he Mob?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Intersted so far. Need a little more info on Edward

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Whwn will Edward be a little more caring with her. Maybe spend some quality time and they can just talk. Except that Bella doesn't know how to do that either!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

cliffy yuck!  Post soooon

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

He has almost come full circle

Losing It by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After years of saving herself for that one special guy only to have him turn her down, Bella is on a mission to lose her virginity. Can the lucky guy she chooses hang on to her, or will he lose everything in her game?

High School Drama
E/B

Banner by MDealsWithIt and Blinkie by Angedelaube


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37171 Read Count: 39751
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 **The Twilight Zone Pt. 1**

!!!!!

Slither by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

    

Banner by the wonderful Mehek18. Check her other amazing banners on Mehek18.tumblr.com

OOC. AH. An outcast who had everything, but eventually lost the one thing that was truly important to him. She was back and her presence would turn his world upside down again. 'He needed her but she left him.' Mature content. E/B    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46224 Read Count: 8034
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 01 Mar 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Kiss me and lie

I trust you but please post soon.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I'll update soon.  Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Card

Looking forward to the rest in a couple days!



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Glassed heart

So Alice could tell him the story of Bellas marriage situation?

He has to fight for her!!



Author's Response:

Don't worry, he will. 

Edward and Bella needs to heal before they could forward. 

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - White blank canvases

Well don't you give all of us team Edwards a soft spot for your Jake.

I think I got James is gay, Yeah the reasons for thier marriage??



Author's Response:

I don't usually make my Jake a good guy in my stories, but it seemed I did (unconsciously at that) to make him sweet in this one. lol

Yes, you got James is gay...and...this is one great factor as to why he is married to Bella. 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Friends and enemies

I don't know what to think, I am like a burger on the grill flipping!



Author's Response:

lol. 

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Hellos and goodbyes

Bella has a lot of demons.

Author's Response:

Yes, she does. A lot of things to deal with before she could actually with E again.

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - FY, Em!

What is the deal with James??

Author's Response:

You will find out soon. Thanks for reading. =D

My Surrender by KareBear1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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ALERT: POLY & Bd/Sm  Carlisle/Bella/Jasper

18 year old Bella has always been at the top of her class even graduating early from high school and getting accepted to Dartmouth on a full scholarship. She enjoyed two years of great grades and loved college. For the first time during her junior year she starts to struggle not in one class but two. She makes a plan to go and confront the two professors who just happen to be cousin and share an office even though they are in separate departments. What she did not know was that they have been scheming to get what they want the innocent Miss Swan.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75116 Read Count: 57627
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2011 Updated: 13 Dec 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Missed your stories so much. Are you back!

Author's Response:

Yes I'm back writing but with having to do the ranch chores it's a little slower.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I like your story. I read where you had taken them all of before. I am sorry to here that. I am glad you are reposting. Don't let them get to you. If people don't like a story they should stop reading it!



Author's Response:

I agree with you and I wont be letting people get to me like that again. I was just in a bad mind set first.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Well this is a little complicated. But I am sure Jasper and Carlise will keep it all under control!!



Author's Response:

Yes they will...

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Your different character profiles are interesting. I like them.

Although I am a die hard Edward freak it is hard to see him in the story without Bella but I am still loving your story!



Author's Response:

Thank you.. I do have another poly that is E/B/A/J that will be posted soon.  I just have a thing for poly's and doing something different with them than what is the norm.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Thanks for updating so oftrn. I know it was already written but still greatly appreciate the time you spend



Author's Response:

Thank you and the next chapter is the last one I had written so posting will slow down some.

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Awwwe. Is she ready for Carliles baby now? I am thinking not yet.



Author's Response:

I agaree with you and we will see which way I take it hehe.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

So glad you are back to this story too! And glad they are back to the playroom!



Author's Response:

It was fun writing this chapter. I felt it was the right way to go with it coming from Carlisle's POV next we will have Jaspers.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

Missed you so much!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for missing me.  I'm back. RL took a turn for the worst. Mom got sick with cancer and it took her real fast.

 

HUGS

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so sorry!! I lost my dad to that monster of the worst kind!

Author's Response:

Yup that moster has now taken both my parents. And shockingly my hubby has survived lung cancer next month will be 12 years.

 

HUGS

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff

So you put it all together very nicely. This is sure to be a good story. Keep at it!



Author's Response:

Hi beachlover!

I too am a beachlover. :)

Glad you like how I've put things together. There's more great stuff ahead. At lest I think so. Hope you like chapter 5. Edward's day just got a little worse. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49800
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I want Edward for a teacher...even if I am too old too even remember schooling. You are never too old too learn



Author's Response: Only if he teaches like that...hell yeah.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Whats in the water? Is Bella next?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

3 babies and a wedding. They are going to be busy!

Common Ground by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Banner moved to chapter 1 to comply with Google Ad-Sense requirements

Bella has come to accept that her unusual fetish may mean she spends her life alone, that is, until she meets handsome OB Edward.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11008 Read Count: 23179
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2011 Updated: 13 Feb 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well he is happy!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow this could be really good.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Is the talk another month away?

Summary:

 

 

Banner by lovely and talented  Mehek18!

Checkout her awesome work: Mehek18.tumblr.com -

grass

Summary: 33 yr old billionaire tycoon, Edward Cullen is engaged to his childhood sweetheart and Chicago´s cutthroat DA, Isabella Swan; it would appear they were the perfect power couple, but everyone has secrets, some a little darker than others.  Enter 17 yr old Jasper Whitlock, recently orphaned and emotionally troubled he leaves his home in Texas and moves in with his cousin Rosalie and her husband Emmett McCarty, he too has a few skeletons in his closet.  As a favor to his friends; Edward hires Jasper to be his yard boy for the summer. What happens when just after two weeks more than just the hedges are being trimmed at the Cullen/Swan Esate?  And just how does DA Swan fit into all of this? Poly/Slash/Kink, OOC, E/B, E/J, E/BJ

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45044 Read Count: 36393
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

So you have left us with a quickie and we will probably have to wait weeks for the next chapter! Thats sucks!

Love the story!



Author's Response:

 

Oh ye of little faith... Saturday will be here before you know it! I told you, reviews encourage me to write! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Krazi

Xoxo

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Two´s Company... Three´s So Much Better...

You be the fly and tell us all about it.....soon



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 It´s Not Easy... Being Me...

I wanna be a Edward and Jasper sandwich!



Author's Response:

You and me both!  Lol! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  Be sure to check out the blog for teasers and picspiration!  Chapter three's teaser has already been posted!

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

Damn, I wish your updates weren't months apart!

Author's Response:

I'll try to make it sooner, but sadly, the bills keep coming and RL takes first priority, I just hope that you will continue to stick with me!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

BannerBanner

 

This is the very first Fan Fic I wrote. It was written during the summer of 09. I know that it is riddled with errors and I have no intentions of fixing these errors as this story is being posted to show my growth as a writer.

 

 

This is the story of how the night Janitor falls in love with the CEO.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 111 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116539 Read Count: 82638
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2011 Updated: 09 Oct 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

I hope this goes well for Bella

Author's Response:

We will see.....

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

She did great standing up to Tanya!!



Author's Response:

Yup...... but is that the last of Tanya?

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Where have you been? I have missed your stories! Thanks for the multiple chapters and resolving the James thing.

Author's Response:

Life is crazy and going to get crazier for a while around here. Hubby has a bad heart valve, which they will replace on the 20th and then he will be down for the rest of the year. That mean I have to take care of all the farm animals myself. Learn how to drive a tractor so I can give them hay this winter oh how much fun that will be.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

OH NO. Now what??



Author's Response:

You will find out very soon I promise.... I'm going to post tomorrow.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

It does seem that Bella is awfully quiet.



Author's Response:

she will find her voice very soon.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

You have been wonderful about posting regularly so don't worry about a small lapse.
I hope Rose can get over her problem with Bella and Edward.

Author's Response:

Rose won't be getting over her problem with Bella and Edward any time soon. 

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Somehow I am not sure Tanya is gone for good?



Author's Response:

We will see her a few more times. 

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Wow Bella is soooo insecure. How long before she starts to change?



Author's Response:

You will find out it will come and go depending on what's going on.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

They are moving by leaps and bounds. I hope the weekend goes well for both of them!



Author's Response:

You will love the weekend, or at least I hope you do.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

No you are not going to fast for me but maybe for Bella



Author's Response:

We will find out if this is all two much for Bella soon enough.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

That Alice.



Author's Response:

Alice will always be Alice.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

She handled that well. I can't believe it.  Yeah Bella



Author's Response:

She is going off of feelings and feelings alone.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Poor Bella can't get away from Edwards girlfriends or her insecuritys

Author's Response:

Yup, but trust me it will all work out.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

So glad you are back!



Author's Response:

Thank you. It felt good to be back in the saddle today. 

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I wish my husband was that attentive when I'm sick! He's good but not that good.



Author's Response:

once upon a time elton was like that.... I think young love has something to do with it.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Kind of hoping Sophie is a nice person and can befriend Bella? Any chance??



Author's Response:

Sophie will be her friend.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

No worries, It worked out. I di like yours better! Just saying.



Author's Response:

Thank you, and you will have more of me real soon.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

The plot thickens!



Author's Response:

yup.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Edward finally gets his wish! Poor guy. LOL



Author's Response:

why poor guy?

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Alice is such a pain in the ass, isn't she!



Author's Response:

She can be.  I won't hate to have someone like her in my life.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Back to the den of the Alice monster!



Author's Response:

Yup.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

James! Did Rose have something to do with this? Of course

Author's Response:

We will find out tomorrow when I post the last three chapters.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Alice can't be too happy about this scene.

Author's Response:

Nope.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Ooops, I don't think you finished that last paragraph

Author's Response:

It didn't copy the full chapter over.  I'll fix it here in a bit dang dang dang.  I was tired last night and didn't check it and todays been one busy day.

 

Hugs

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44791
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Everyone is in on it, they don't stand a chance!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love Love Love the story!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmmmm Edward jealous already!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

My favorite kind of Jake! Gay!

The Inheritance by iambeagle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three stipulations are keeping Edward from receiving his inheritance money, one of them being he must obtain a serious relationship. His solution? Pay Bella to pretend to date him. There's absolutely no way this plan can backfire. AH, EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64211 Read Count: 36646
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2011 Updated: 12 Oct 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

Alice to the rescu again! And yeah Gram!!



Author's Response:

Gram kinda came through big time.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Only 4 chaps left? Bummer

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

Well this is fucked up!
Hurry get Alice! Fix this.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

Well she sure knows he's jealous now!  Too bad he didn't take Seth's advice?

Anxious for the next chapter. Thanks for writing.

 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

Alice sure got to Edward!! I am so glad she showed up!

Hopefully he does a lot thinking tonight.



Author's Response:

Alice can be helpful when she wants to be!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

I really liked this chapter. He forgot to tell her about the job though.