Reviews by Alabastdelf
Summary: Past Featured Story



Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

Thanks very much to Cared for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 123150
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

YESSSS, that is the Bella I like and respect.Thank you for bringing her to life.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Epilogue 2

I don`t know for sure why are we so impressed with the way the other creatures of God can love us but this chapter reminded me.I couldn`t stop my tears when I read Jack`s point of view.Amazing chapter, amazing story.I can`t wait to read what you`ll write next.Thank you.



Author's Response: i am fascinated with animals. I'm always trying to read my cat's mind...but, in the end, I've decided I probably don't want to know what she's thinking...i suspect they may have something to do with planning my demise. lol. Thanks very much! I've grown quite attached to Jack and the humans as well.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421236
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Such a sad story, but an amazing chapter because this is a story that is from real life.Keep writing,please.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

It was an incredible chapter.Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Funny and hot!This Bella is amazing,and Edward is....i don`t know what word would be enough.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Again,so much fun reading this.And Edward is begining to come out of his shell,hopefully.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I liked this chapter very much, thank you.Keep them coming!:)

 

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

:).I can`t begin to express how wonderfully funny I find your story.Don`t stop writing.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Tough chapter, Bella is hurting so much.I hope your next chapter will make things better.Amazing story.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

It was magnificent the way Rose dealt with those skanks.Thank you very much.I`m very curious what you`ll do about Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I can`t even begin to hope.I just can`t.But at the same time, I hope that they take the shower together.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Oh my God!Thank you!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

There`s only good,very good, finally.Keep going with the good.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I`m sorry but I can`t wake up from this amazing dream.I`ll come back with something when I`ll be  awake.Thank you.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Hopefully the next chapter is coming very soon.This is a story so enchanting that I can`t wait to read what will happen next.Please hurry with the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Yupiiiiiiiiiii!Finaly we have another chapter.It`s amazing.Please write again soon.Thank you.

Feral by opalaline Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella signed up for a summer archeology program, she thought she'd be exploring fossils and sedimentary rock. Little did she know, she would find herself the primary caretaker for a man with no verbal capacity or human interaction skills-a feral man.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115615 Read Count: 42934
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I`ve just read the amazing chapters you`ve written.Thank you for this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661146
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 58: Edward

Yuuuuuppppppeeeeee!:).

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 60: Edward

As usual with your story this chapter was amazing.I can`t wait to read the chapter of their reunion.Thank you.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 72: Edward

Another amazing chapter.Keep them coming, please.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 82: Edward

I can`t wait for them to be together finally.Great story.Thank you.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 84: Edward

Thank you, I`ll be here tomorrow waiting to read another amazing chapter.I can`t wait to see Edward`s reaction.Yuuupeeee!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 134: Edward

I`m so happy for this chapter.I know is fiction but the work of both of you, is so amazing and so real that everytime I can`t wait to read another chapter.Thank you for your story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324451
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter

Interesting story.At the first glance the subject mimics stories that come across every time in real life media.But, at a closer look,I find this story refreshing,maybe because of the tone, or the way the words are written.It doesn`t matter in the end.The result is amazing.Keep writing.

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104537
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10- Explanations

Ever since I`ve began reading your story I`ve been wondering when or if these Edward and Bella will be together again.I know that in the presentation there is HEA mentioning but I wasn`t sure if it was for them.I`m still not sure but somehow I`m feeling better as the story progresses.Because I`m always for a HEA between Edward and Bella.This story is one of the most realistic ones I`ve ever read.Thank you for the insight.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19- Eagerly awaiting... not!

I can`t wait to see what is coming next.Great story.Thank you.

Glimpses by Shahula Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

 

 

 

Glimpse- noun: A very brief, passing look, sight, or view. "These are the snapshots of marriage, stopped in places."-Anne Sexton


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9448 Read Count: 4398
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2012 Updated: 03 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Time

Thank you for writing.

Summary:

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Edward overhears Bella complaining about her lack of ‘O’ at a party and he offers to help.  Too bad Bella’s never thought of him as being anything but her geeky lab partner.

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8082 Read Count: 2608
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I`ve just finished reading this amazing little story and I can`t help thinking that it would be a great start for a beautiful love story.Could you consider the idea of continuing this story?I really hope so.Thank you for the sory.



Author's Response:

I have considered the idea.  I have several other stories I am focusing on right now, but once they wrap up I will keep it in mind!  Thanks so much for the nice review.  I really appreciate it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248525
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I hope they will not waste so much time for their chance to happiness.This is an amazing story.Thank you.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Maybe a little kiss?I can only hope.Amazing story.And,yes, pretty please,another update as soon as possible.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Please,pretty please.

Into The Deep by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After an accident took Bella's parents, she is forced to live with her new guardian, family friend Edward Cullen. She's been drifting through life for the last year in a daze. Will Edward be able to get through to her and wake her from her living nightmare? Will her looming eighteenth birthday separate them, or bring them closer together?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11496 Read Count: 13092
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You have described Bella`s suffering very thorough.I`ve hesitated before I decided to write this little message.I think you`ve got a great talent that you should not allow waisting.I hope Bella will be happier and will find her place near Edward.Ever since I read first about Edward and Bella I hope that every Edward and Bella are together in the happily ever after;thank you for writing.

Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

thanks to christagbanners for the banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95390
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is a very interesting story.I like how you portrayed Bella.It`s very easy to understand why she is doing what she is doing and as a reader I can`t help but to sympathize with her.I hope she will find her happiness near Edward.Keep writing.

Kidnap101 by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 626]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has just one mission; to save her childhood best friend from the clutches of Hollywood. She's got her work cut out for her, but she'll do it, even if she has to do things that she really doesn't want to. Written purely for laughs.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11080 Read Count: 119895
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2013 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

My oh my,this story is just amazing.Thank you and I`m waiting for the next chapters.