Penname: Twifan1228 [Real name: Kathy Hansen
Member Since: 30 Oct 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a 55yr+ old Mother/Grandmother and avid reader.  My daughter is the one who introduced SM's Twilight to me in 2009.  I loved them; couldn't read them fast enough or enough times.  I even had them on audible to listen while I worked..  Oh, yeah definitely obsessed.  I found Fan Fiction after hearing a interview with Peter Facinelli once a few years back, talking about the Twihard fans and all the stories on the internet.  I did some searches and found FanFiction.net and of course Twilighted and then TWC.  I must say I have such an addiction now, can't you tell... 


E.L. James - Fifty Shades Triology (FanFiction MOTU I & MOTU II) OMG!!!  Love "My Fifty" Just saying!  Movie coming soon, hopefully!!!!


Sylvain Reynard's Gabriel's Inferno Series (FanFiction UOEM) "Professor Emerson" he just couldn't be more tortured and sexy if he tried.   I would love to see this made into a movie as well...


These Two Highly successful Published Author's, were first FF writers!  I humbly join the Millions of fans world wide in offering my heartfelt love and good wishes for their continued success as well as love and encouragement to all those Writers/Authors who so unselfishly give of your creative minds with the use of written word.  I however am not one of the lucky who have the talent to do so, but love love love reading. 


╔══╦══╦══╗ I have been diagnosed
║╔╗║╔═╣╔╗║ with Obsessive Cullen
║╚╝║╚═╣╚╝║ Disorder put this on your
╚══╩══╩══╝ profile if you've caught it to!  


I so totally borrowed that from Shannon aka mustlovertp YUP very OCD here


I have many many favorite reads and authors:  Just a few shout outs would be



  • Robshandmonkey - love ya Drea    EEK/Shhhhhh/Taboo/  (Just on TWC)

  • SexyLexiCullen - OMG can we say MobWard QS/WS  or DoctorWard  TSOU/INI

  • CaraNo    - too flipping many to count   :-)   (Just on FF)

  • Sarges Girls - Deb and Jen  OMG can we say check out drtuno for the sexiest Mercenary on the planet

  • mustlovertp -- hot hot InkWard  a new story posted 6/15/12

  • justginger/peoplelikeus   -- Such a awesome writer!  Poeple Like Us and Hope Springs

  • Savage7289  - When Michael Sheen did the reading of Unexpected Circumstances I was enthralled.. what a story ...

  • rbsschess  - House of Hope and Be My Master Headmaster and Human Sexuality 101  - it's not just the lemons but the humor, depth of story plot all around great reads

  • lmlx8  - Diamond in the Rough  - does she ever get inside our heads and Bella and Edwards.... Louise really makes one think... 

  • littlecat358  - Unplanned Perfection and The Demons in My Dreams  (Just on FF)

  • Jenny0719  - Everything again by her is just enthralling and endearing making you read them over and over  (Just on FF)

  • JenGreen03  -  Everything she does is AWESOME (Just on FF, maybe on Twilighted)


 Again just a very small handful of over the top talented writers. Sadly more and more have left the fandom because of various reasons, I just wish to voice I appreciate everyone for their Talents regardless of where they are in the development of their abilities; cultivate that Talent!  You are all  enormously talented individuals and THIS reader/reviewer definitely appreciates everything you write...  


Please please don't be offended if your not on my list above, I love all the stories I read and review... and some I don't .... Yes, I'm also a closet perv ***giggles and chuckles at self***


Oh, I am very much Team Edward and Bella  - Love Taylor - not a fan of Jacob and Bella - but fine with those that do, just not my thing.... I love the HEA's just because I didn't have that in my marriage(s) doesn't mean I don't wish that for everyone else.... See I'm charitable....  :-)      Laters All!!!   Muah!  Kathy


FYI:  Can't wait for next months release of Cosmopolis! 


SWATH was wonderful!   Canne was such a treat if your a Robsten fan as I am... Kristen rawked the Red Carpet in that Red Dress, Geez I couldn't believe it....Rob is alway killer in a Tux...OMG!!! Heartfail! LOL!


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Summary:

Banner by: the amazing and talented  ivoryhairbela... you rock!

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Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza!  A million and one thank you´s!!

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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS.  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

holy hell woman this is going to be an extremely wild ride I fear!!!! going on to more of the story and I really hope you feel inspired to add to it soon..thanks for sharing this story with us all...  Kathy



Author's Response:

It´s going to get a bit rough at times, but the end will be well worth it!  Welcome aboard!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

this is really good  but i love your writings



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Somethings... You Cant Take Back...

OMG Krazi- I was sobbing... what a chapter.... TY  for this chapter dear one... I love this story by the way.... now I have fo go read the other story updated today too....Laters dearie!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

oh yes, heck yes, still here and so sorry that life has been out of wack for you lately...koas is sometimes something we learn to live with and through, right?!?!? Hang in there and know that I, for one will be here reading when you post...onky the grave will prevent me from that.... all the best and deepest regards.... Kathy.....

Yippee!  Mac! for your Young Female "in-training" Oscar performance.....well done little one!!!

Summary:

This is just your basic New York City love story. Crappy apartments, menial jobs, and low standards place Bella Swan in the pathway of love. Rated M. Canon couples with my usual OOC cast. AH. eventually E/B

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71053 Read Count: 26606
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2011 Updated: 25 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: They Shoot Single People, don't they?

Lexi- this is a fantastic story had me laughing in all the right places!  You are on sick puppy!!!  hahahaha!!!  Seriously I am sorry that it's taken me a bit to get to this one....But I'm on it now!!!!

On to the next chapter!

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Hoes in Different Area Codes

Holy Shit - I nearly wet my pants laughing over this chapter! 

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Don't Stop Bielebing

Both Edward and Bella are so typical of REAL people!  Life can make you jaded and very skeptical of others... they will slowly come around to one another.

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Odd Bird

wow

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Edward Scissorhands

this just keeps getting better and better

Summary: Past Featured Story

love

Edward left Bella the day after he makes love to her for the first time. Join Bella on her journey of love, laughter, pain and tears. Will love be enough to bring him back? Will the love of his baby be enough?

 

Warning:  at times there will be lemons and language. Bella will be unsure of herself, she will doubt herself. Edward will be an ass at times, but this is life and life is not always pretty. Will love really be enough?

 

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72137 Read Count: 34972
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2011 Updated: 26 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

Once more this is really a good story and love the twists and turns in it.  Different than anything I have read before... Very original... Can't wait for more.

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Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Epilogue

omg   wow  that was awesome!!!!!

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Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

oh my goodness!!!   that was really good

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Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Now you know that anyone reading this story will never again see or hear of a earthquae without thinking of this story..  Hell yes!!!  Awesome

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Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

so loing this story and Mason is so cool!!! He Rocks!!!

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Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

Well what a twist!  Love it!  Never even thought about that scenerio, very ingenius on your part to think that up.  Love, Love, Love the story!



Author's Response:

Thanks , i alwasy wanted them to have it all. This way Edward gets what he wanted deep down, but he was so worried about taking so many things away. I love this pairing.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

darn this is such a great story... love the outfit it Vegas BTW....   cant wait to see if she does get preggers or not... should be interesting considering the Voulteri...  great writing

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Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

awhhhhh  that was beautiful  

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

Incredible!  Loved the lightly scripted D/s type of Role Play for their honeymoon, that was pretty awesome, perfect actually!  Bella has always wanted him to take control over her... Okay now question time:  So Edward has fangs?  What does it take to change a human into a Vampire?  So Tanya huh?!  That's can't be good....

Great chapter and yes, so ready for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

Mason bit who?  OMG this is getting good!  That wicked witch!  Tanya the Vampwich!



Author's Response: love the review here is a bit of a teaser Just as Tanya lunged for Bella Mason jumped down from Edwards arms and ran to his mother. Just as she picked him up Mason looked at her and bit her.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

its still too early in the story for them to be safe... Yes, Tanya finally got what she deserved that's for sure. 

 

Such a good story!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well she is 16 (lots and lots of kids are sexually active by that age) so I am not going to cateorgerize E as a Pedi! BUT he is going to force her soooooooo I hold my opinion in reserve toward our MeanWard!  StrictWard!  Yeah thats going to be what I call him StrictWard!

 

Good story, interesting how he doesn't care if he ever falls in love, and how he doesn't want to listen to the word of Experience in his brother Jasper!

Good story!

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Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

this is such an engrossing story and now even more so... thanks for clearing up Edward's parentage..

I was just thinking last night that you hadn't updated recently and hoped all was well...  

love the story and love seeing Edward come around with his feelings and emotions for Bella!!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yes, no hiccups at  the wedding!  Oh my how is Sr. gonna handle this one!  I love Edward's evolution in the story!   :-)  :-)  Can't say I can see him letting her go, ever, though!  thank you for the new chapter!

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Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well poor Bella   yes he is insistant   great story

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Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh my, Edward has come a very long way.  Now, say Yes!  Bella! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

oh my - my heart was pounding so hard fearful of who, what and why..... this is so good...

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well i very much like your concept and this chapter is such a tease of what could be forthcoming

cant wait for more

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Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

this is very good you have a tough yet tender side to this mobward   cant wait for more

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Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

well your right, it was short  - but I forgive you, your prety good about fast updates  thanks for that BTW; as for me i apreciate them...   its a very good story and I know that Edward will come around and soften up sooner or later..  He isn't 200% evil  :-)  just 90%!!! for now anyway..  JK LOL!!!  I do like the story though..  TTFN  Kathy  xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yea! this is going to take a little time for her to trust him and feel comfortable with him to pleasure him because she wants to rather than because she has to...  he will figure it out.  He should listen to Jazz!   Good story

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good job with the Chapter, I think that we are seeing a slight melting of Edward in the sense that he's not wanting to beat her, he sees her beauty and her innocence!  He sees what real monsters are and doesn't want to be like them.....  

Good story....  I do think that Bella is fighting her feelings for Edward, but then again who wouldn't want to be with Edward - she will warm up!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love it, I think we are starting- ever so slowly - to see that Edward is seeing Bella in a different light!  After all he did see the bruises he left on her and that did not make him feel good.  So that's slow!  But then he forced her to do something for him...  we shall see ... love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.  I love reading what people think of the story ... whether it be good or bad.  I'm so glad your liking the story.  :)

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Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

what on earth is Aro asking about Bella for?  hum  Edward is still so clueless poor fella

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Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

He has feelings for her and he doesn't know what to do about them.  Not so much to understand really.  he's just confused and he will come around.

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Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh boy this should be good with Rose and all-  thanks for another chapter

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Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMG  Edward has come so far, and then this!!!!

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Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I wondered if that is what she was doing..and thinkimg... can't wait to find outnwhat they want her so badly for...  Edward has grown by leaps and bounds!!!  womderful chapter

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

so happy for another chapter, I really like this story and have missed it....  Yay! she is feeling less pressure and Edward is trying hard we can tell!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

TY for the chapter! 

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mli

After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

****doing the head bang to the pillow, frustrated I can't figure this out****  Arrrg!!!!  okay so we do know beyond any shadow of a doubt that Beth really is dead and just not trying to screw with Edward right???  I mean   gawwwhhh what is up with Carla!!!!  if she is not Beth then she is connected to her skanky prisoner Dad!  Okay so Jimmy must be the person attacking Leah and Emmett, that's my guess any how... still not sure why he would but... I know your going to reveal the truth to us all that are patient...  I Can Be Patient...  I just don't like being... LOL!!!!   

Wonderful suspense building or should I say drama building chapter!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hmm...Okay, 1st-Carla is NOT Beth...Sadly, Beth is dead. As for Carla's connection to Marcus (or anyone else) you will have answers after the next chapter. Everything will be answered :)  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

well definitely something funny about Carla.... hummmm!!!!  I've got think thi k on this some..  goodness it's getting better and better



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm happy to hear I haven't confused you to the point of giving up! Keep an eye on Carla. Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts!

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Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Okay the pranks were all pretty funny, from last chapter and this one.  At first I was trying to figure it all out then all of a sudden my brain snapped to what was going on and I figured it out about the time that Edward fessed up..  Most definately a good time was had by all I would think...  what a cute and wicked mind someone has in writing this... LOL!!!

Now as for Aro and Jane lawyers extradorinaires... and needing to talk with dear Bella.. easy  Bella and Edward need to get married pronto, then she can't testify period... spousal priveldge and all... Come now, they love one another, want to live together, she did after all drive the very precious Chevelle, surely she is worth a lifetime committment... :-)

Marcus is a scum bucket looking for any sort of monetary gain off of the tragedy of his own child, that he failed to think about previously.  I hope you have some very creative ideas in store for him.  Good for Bella talking with Edward and helping him see that he can't (JUST CAN'T) go to that very dark place again.

Thanks this chapter TTFN   Kathy xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the pranks; I thought it was funny, too. I see you've put some thought into this lawsuit issue...I like that. There is a bit more going on here, however and is about to be revealed....  You are right though about a couple of things, Bella does deserve the lifetime commitment and Marcus is scum. Thanks so much for reading and leaving me your thoughts! I do love to hear (read) them!

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Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Not JUST car sex, But in a SEXY Assed Chevy Chevelle!!!! Shit!  Wet Dreams right!



Author's Response:

I totally agree.....LOL  A lot better than the Volvo, huh?  Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Yes sir're ME thinks the same thing... Mr. Edward is in for it!  Not much but some....



Author's Response:

Ahh you're right, just a little bit. Thanks for reading! I appreciate hearing your thoughts

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I really like this story and am very interested to read more of your completed works I am so ready for more of the story.... Whats the deal with creepy Jacob - and what about Charlie and Renee are they going to try and interfer with our little love birds?!  Just so many questions to keep us further enthralled in the story.... Your good that is all I can say. 

I love the way you show the sterile environment of this wonderful "tatt" shop and pointed out how some places don't .... (Carlilse's talk with Edward regarding infections from Tatt's) 

Loved how Bella wanted to get a tatt of the Chevelle on her Lower Lady Region, wow that was pretty perfect huh!

TTFN   Have a good weekend!   Laters BB  Kathy xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you...really. I'm happy that you are so into this story! And I do appreciate the compliments. I'm not really into stories that have a 'message' per se...but I figure that, if nothing else, anyone prompted to get a tattoo after reading this-would make sure the place is clean  lol  Thank you again for your kind words!! I really enjoy hearing (reading) your thoughts!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

well apparently Jacob was just as big a creep as I thought, great chapter... Yes, Yes, Oh Yes both Bella and lucious Edward told Renee off and I loved the way  Edward told Tanya about  Bella... loved that dearly!

Can't wait for more.. great story



Author's Response:

Thank you for the nice words....I am so glad you are getting into these characters so much! Thanks for reading/reviewing!!

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Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I loved Edward's words to Ms Rude Mommie Dearest!!!   What an amazing date...  love this story thanks for another wonderful chapter....



Author's Response:

Wonderful! Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts! I appreciate them greatly.

 

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Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Oh my goodness I loved this chapter!  I haven' laughed this hard in sometime.. Emmett's reaction was priceless!  Dropping to his knees giving a praye of Thanks!!!  LMAO

Why do I have this terrible feeling that Jacob Black still up to something very rotten...

Loved the girls night and then yes, of course the guys night too!!!  I also loved Edward's quick wit.... he figured that out pretty quickly...Alice gagging at talking with Edward  LOL!!!!

Can't wait for more as always you have me hook line and sinker!!!!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you! I'm glad you found it so funny. Poor Em, eh?  I figured that if it was my brother, I'd gag...so yeah  lol  Next chapter oughta really tickle you....  Thanks so much!!  :)

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Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I love this story I kinda feel behind a little I'm so sorry   can't wait to see what's up...  think I know but will keep quite anyway



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am so happy you like it! :)

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Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Okay first let me say that is what I thought he was doing..  but not like that...  Hey that was hot realistic or not... very hot!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm so gald you enjoyed it!

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Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

very good jumping to conclusions leads to more heartache in a relationship... getting to the root of a issje to crucial...  good for Alice, Rose and Jazz... way to go with the chapter... Hey Bella the amount of  money in his trust can easily be gobbled up in the real estate market, so lok at it that way... yes it's alot but not over the top..when your frugal and econimical!!!  Loved the chapter...



Author's Response:

I agree, communication is a must. Their friends helped a lot. You're right about the money, but I claim creative license!  lol  Thank you for reading/reviewing!!

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Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

well i'm thinking conspiracies therories, sadly for my slow witted brain... not sure what those might be... great chapter though and ready for more information for the puzzle pieces to fit together more for me....  have a good one



Author's Response:

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Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Jasper  ---- You rock!!!  Well stated son!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL Yep, he totally owned that chapter! Thanks so much!

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

good luck with surgery!!!!  thanks for tieing this all up and no again, I didn't think about a brother from another mother....  New fic sounds great can't wait!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. I'm happy you enjoyed the story!

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Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Definitely think that there is more to that attack than we know, but honestly I don't think it was Black PERSONALY, perhaps he had someone do it.  But, I don't think he is going to get his hands dirty with the deed himself honestly...  Caveman Edward yummy!  But I know our little Bella will give Eddiekins holy hell over this, but she knows he's right deep down she should be worried and I think she is...  Great chapter....  Our girl kind me kinda of prideful at times.  But we love and respect her anyway!!!!  I love the world of FF and the creativity that you bring to the story...  Thanks so much for giving us Inkward and all his glory, and yes, yes, I love strong emotionally struggling Bella was well... don't misunderstand me, I love our E & B...

Take care and hope your RL gets better or easier soon.  Busy can be good but exhausting....  But makes us remember we are ALIVE.. :-)  Toodles for now!  Kathy



Author's Response:

Your words warm my heart! It sounds like you understand these two pretty well. Jacob doesn't have the balls to do the deed himself, I'll give you that.  Life has gotten a little easier (ie: sloower) LOL  Thanks!

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Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

ohhh this is so good, i'm so frustrated with myself because I just can't figure it out...   so good...



Author's Response:

Thank you, but don't get too frustrated. The answers will come with the next chapter. (or, most answers, anyway) Thanks!!

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Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

so tantalizing!!!! love love love this story



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! I'm so happy you like it!

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Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

I loved it very much I will have to admit I will miss InkWard and his beautiful Bella!!!

Great job!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm getting caught up on my reviews, and will then post an outtake I wrote. I hope you'll take a look!

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Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

that was more than perfect...Especially them having a little blonde Angel to remind Edward of Beth even more... then to have two as a added bonus well that was perfect...maybe not that they can't have more but after all what is important is to have a healthy wife and mother at home to raise those precious children.....  so happy you are doing better and are back to writing... look forward to whatever you come up with in the future....., take care   Kathy!!!



Author's Response:
Thank you! I thought it brought everything full circle and gave Edward the redemption and peace he still needed. I'm so happy you enjoyed the story and thank you for the kind words. <3 

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Revelations

wow  lots of information in this chapter... I knew there was more to the accident at the pizza parlor.... I am venturing a guess here that perhaps Maybe that Edward's sleeping might have something to do with Bella's special abililites... hummmm we shall see ... such a good story...



Author's Response:

So excited that you love the story!  Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in!  lol!

There is lots more, and you encourage me to continue!

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Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Oysters & Hot Springs

Sorry it took me sometime to read this and review, ISP issues... Hopefully ALL better!  Anyway another great chapter and since it took me sometime to get back up I also have another chapter to read... Yea! for me. 

I hate moving too!  Sucks to move... Oh, well hopefully that's not something you will have to do again anytime soon... Have a good one and continue on with your wonderful creative mind. 



Author's Response:

I loved all  my trips across the country, and i wanted to share this with Edward and Bella!  I thought the Cold Plunge would be fun!

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Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96 Breastfed

I hope Dr C's treatment is going to help his arm...Gosh, they have been through so much!

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Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94 Arrival

Oh how fantastic!!!! Little Masen is here.. Charlie is rather humor in such slight little ways!  Your writing of the birth like this is just wonderful; Again I must re-iterate I love your mind and how it's taps into the uniqueness of this precious little new baby and how those abilities brought about a normal delivery "well to an extent" anyway. 

Great Chatper!!!  Well done our wonderful author, Well done indeed!  I have been wondering about Tanya and Aro so thanks for the heads up!

Till next chapter  Take care ***oh, isn't it exciting over 500 reviews now***

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97 Burned

yes i'm very interesred in seeing where we go with his arm too!!!!  I too had been wondering about circumcission thanks for the wonderrul explanation....



Author's Response:

More coming up about the circumcision!

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Making Ourselves at Home

Yes, love this Edward!  The sweetest part was when he said he couldn't go hunt and feed because just her being in the other room with Alice was too far from him and he did not know how he could take leaving her to hunt!!!  Awwwwhhhh!  Now that was the woooo factor right there I tell ya!



Author's Response:

I tru;y hope you continue to like this Edward!  He is so attached and devoted to her, glad he found her again!  HYe starts to show his love for her in a more physical way in the next few chapters, and I tried to have them be really caring as well, just physically!



Author's Response:

I tru;y hope you continue to like this Edward!  He is so attached and devoted to her, glad he found her again!  HYe starts to show his love for her in a more physical way in the next few chapters, and I tried to have them be really caring as well, just physically!

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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Promises

wow that was close



Author's Response:

Ha!  More to this story every day!  Hope you enjoy it!

Victoria

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions

that was wonderful - I Loved how she insisted that they get married right then... smart girl!  No since in taking chances right?! After all Our Bella has taken way, way too many chances .....  can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  I think i was great that she jumped at the chance as well, she knew her feelings, no need to be coy!  thank you for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Routine

Well dear heaven's I love this story and I hope you're getting reviews because I really LOVE this story and can't personally wait for more.  This Edward is wonderful!!!!!



Author's Response:

It just thrills me to have someone else think this Edward is wonderful!  i was beginning to wonder what I had done wrong that no one seemed taken with him!  Thank you so much for taking the time to review!  i hope you continue to like him!

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Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Hope, Love & Sex

now that was wicked (a good wicked)  I just love this story and the fiercness of Edwards love for Bella    Happy Memorial Day to you too and thanks for the chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!  Hope you had a lovely Memorial Day!

Fierceness is a good word, they have a day or two of "fierceness" before they settle down a bit!  lol  Not that Edward ever really settles down when it comes to bella . . .

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Home

Hot Damn this was good!  Loved how he was finally able to explain more things to her.  Now the really interesting part of their marriage begins... Living each day!

Great story



Author's Response:

Ha!  I like hot chapters, they need that sometimes!  thank you for reviewing!

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Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Vampire

Wow-no recovery time, wouldn't we ALL love for our mates to be a Vampire?!!!!  Love this story!



Author's Response:

I could definately go with some 'no recovery time'!  The fun of writing a story is adding some fantasy, right?

Thank you for always reviewing - there are just a few people that are keeping me going here, apparently I really do need encouragement to keep writing!  LOL

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Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Confessions

well that went a whole lot better than it could have gone...  still not sure why Charlie is being rather rude and cool to Edward after all shouldn't he be happy Bella is happy   come on Charlie get on board man....  Love the story... way to go...  see you next update   :-)   Hang in there



Author's Response:

Wow!  Charlid is so going to annoy you!  Be prepared, he isn't an eaxy sell and he is fiercely protective of his daughter . . . but so is Edward!

Thank you for reviewing!

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Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Charlie

oh that was great  I see More reviews, thats awesome! I knew the story would catch on... Please feel encouraged...  

Thanks for the "teaser" of sorts with your resonse about Charlie!  I'm kinda tickeled with about his attitude, he sees how happy Bella is but just cant't let it go...  too cute....

Well have a good one.. until the next update   Kathy xoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

I love writing Charlie, he reminds me of my Dad!  He is so predictable, and stubborn!  Thank you for taking the time to leave me a message!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Early Surprises

its gonna take something  drastic I fear since he told Carlilse during their talk that he was here to take his daughter home..   Seriously he is delusional if he thinks Bella would leave and even more BONKERS if he foe once second thinks that our Edward would let her go!

DAMN IT I am so engrossed in this story...  till next update-   TTFN  Kathy xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

I absolutely adore that you call him "our edward"! Thank you for the review, and the encouragement!

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Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Sisters (Dishing)

Well that was good and I loved the insight that Bella brought to Jasper regarding his self evaluation of his weakness, as he called it, versus Bella telling him how strong he is... That was PERFECT!!!!

Loving this story!  Okay now... till next chapter  hang in there and never give up this story your doing wonderfully!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I always thought Jasper didn't get enough credit!  Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts with me by reviewing!

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Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Birthday

Good Grief will Charlie ever catch a clue! Soooooo true!  The ending of the chapter was pretty funny! I can't even imagine hearing one of your children in the throws of passion!

Till next Chapter update!  TTFN - Laters BB xoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

I know, I have never heard my kids, thank goodness!  lol (I wouldn't mind hearing edward, though . . .)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife

Wow!  I would say that Edward is for sure coming out of his shell!  The Boxer's was pretty funny!  "Bite Me"  pretty cute!  Poor Edward, it's a good thing that vampires can concentrate on numerous things at once, especially seeing as Bella was doing wicked wicked things to him with his father in law right outside the door!!! Yea, pretty embarassing wouldn't you say!?

 

TTFN  Kathy xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

I just thought it would be funny for him to be so nervous about naked or dressed, on the bed, on the futon where should he stand . . . and then have him not remember what those particular boxers said - laughter for a 17 year old with a hard on would be quite tramatic!

Really glad you thought it was g funny as well!

Charlie deserved to be embarassed!  He's being overly protective and obtuse . . . and really really stupid if he thinks she will ever leave Edward!

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Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Mom

Yes, I am glad that Renee and Phil seem to be supportive of our little couple, because Charlie is still living in LaLa Land where these two are concerned..  TTFN  Kathy xoxoxo



Author's Response:

True, true . . . but he is just being Charlie! lol  Something will bring him around,m at least temporatilly!  Thanks for always leaving me some discussion!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Adjusting

Wow what a chapter, I love the humor you show in your writing and feel as a writer you seem to be growing with each and every chapter.  I love this story and love your feed back from my reviews each time.

 

Sorry I have had some ISP issues with responding the last few days, hopefully with this new modem all will be well.  Thanks again and have a good day



Author's Response:

Thank you for that!  i have started to try and go over the first few chapters because I am starting to see the mistakes!  Hopefully I will continue to improve, this writing thing is new to me!

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Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Meadow

No I can not see that happening!!! Just stop having sex till she is changed????  What have they been smoking that's all i'm saying.

 

LMAO  can't wait for the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Well, Edward still over reacts, and Bella is going to have to put him in his place soon,

Thank you for taking the time to review!  There is a great deal more story to come!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Mending

So sorry I wrote a nice review then lost my ISP and lost the post.   Just wanted to say you did a wonderful job with this chapter!  What a wonderful thing to do with B and E in the woods..  My heart went out to Bella thinking about what he did previously and what me might have been coming from Edward (for her own good of course!)  Just glad it came off like it did

Good job with this story and I do see that reviews are coming in for you.. Hang in there.  TTFN  Kathy xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the post, and the outcome of their trip back to that spot. I hated to have Bella scared, again, but it seemed like she needed it to heal!

Thank you so much for the wonderful, long teviews.  The encouragement really helps!  There is alot to this story, and we have only just begun!  I can update fairly easily for now because I am a couple dozen chap=ters ahead!

Victoria

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Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Blood

Well that was interesting to say the least.... I realized that I skipped the earlier chapter, apparently there were two chapters today, my bad... but I shall go back and read that one....  OMG what is wrong with Edward????... Yep he is a vampire just like Bella says, so why would that be gross for him?  It wouldn't .... just say'n Bella has always understood that vampires drink Blood.. she is his singer...blood is blood...

Hope no one is mean to you over this chapter... I love the story.... TTFN  Later Kathy xoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Yep, blood is blood!  Edward REALLY liked it, and he will continue to . . .

Thanks for the good wishes!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Happenings

Well that was more than interesting, what another little twist you have going here... Love it !!!  Each chapter is pulling the reader in more and more....

yay!!!!  more and more review... only 20 away from 150!!!!  You can do it....



Author's Response:

So so glad you are enjoying the chapters!  The plot thinkens as we go!  Thank you for always leaving a review!

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Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks

great chapter   (migraine today, not too chatty)



Author's Response:

Hope you feel better!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Yellowstone

Well I am feeling better today (no more headache)  Fun chapter, I was wondering the same thing as Bella I must admit with Edward being overly affectionate, not that he can't be, but it just seemed like something was wrong... He wants her to see him hunt.. Holy Shit that should be good, but seriously People (as Alice Says) she is not going to be sickened or grossed out by it... LOL!!! Like Bella said, he was her substitute tampon after all...LOL!!!   Such a good story, never know what might be coming next.... that's what is so interesting...  Till Next Chapter....

Oh, and sorry I did not make any comment on 32's last line either... Sorry, but of course Our VamWard LOVES to make his Bella wet, he makes ALL of us that Drool over him WET!!!!! LOL!!!   :-)



Author's Response:

Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in!  lol!

Sorry to hear about the headache, but glad it's temporary!  Edward's readtions are always a little strange, to humans, but then so are Bella's!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Hunting

LOL!  Your so funny, "I suppose food can have that effect on you!"  Right ...LOL... I think so..  But this line: "secure finally, in the way our lives were supposed to go . . . or so we thought . . ."  Now that sounds pretty ominous.... I am soooooo looking forward to the next upcoming chapters....have a good evening...



Author's Response:

Hopefully t he following chapters will not disappoint you!  Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in!  lol!

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Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock

wow  holy shit this is great...  oh can't wait....



Author's Response:

Ah!  Sounds like you like it!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance

I love SM, but I love this version of Bella being pregnant and Edwards reaction to the whole thing..  this just keeps getting better and better   double woot!!!!



Author's Response:

You're awesome!  i always look forward to reading your reviews!  i love to hear the parts of the chapter you liked best, as well as any advice for improvements!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward

Another wonderfully written chapter   Sad, but true with this wonderful crazy family - your right not every chapter can be just about them.  We have to know and see lots regarding the rest of the Family....Waterfalls   and Sex with Edward hummmm she has it pretty hard...  :-)



Author's Response:

Yep, she has it pretty hard alright (no pun intended lol).  Thank you for commenting, I love hearing what you think!  Still look forward to each review when i see your name on it - I love that you tell me specific things that you like.  Don't be afraid to tell me the things you didn't like, I want to know!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family

Great chapter!  LOL in some parts and in other's just wanted to shed some tears with her - Edward is so sweet...  Okay till next chapter   hope your getting all settled into your place. 

 

TTFN  Kathy xoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  I think you'll really get a kick out of the next two chapters, you have a great sense of humor!

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Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90 Tracks

Kick Ass and very smart moves I might add!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you thnk so!

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Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91 Fire

For the Love of all that's Holy....  Shit!!!!  Now I have enough faith and trust in your story to KNOW that you did not let them die in the fire... I know this...  your going to treat us to another chapter today right!? for a humpday treat!!!! and for our reviews...  Man you have one vicious mind.  That ranting of Victoria was pricless how she likes to play with her food and talking about humans as Cattle... Wow!!! 

Okay till next update then.... Have a good one



Author's Response:

Thank you for telling me specifically that you liked the dialogue from Victoria about the food!  I love to know exactly the things that readers like.  I thought it was funny, but if no one tells me they agree, I kind of wonder!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92 Discovered

Holy Shit I could not read fast enough!!!!  I knew she had to get out.  I just knew she would make it out.  Love all the Phone Tech stuff and the LL button!  Yeah the part about Sam attaching Edward well that was wrong on Sam's part, but Thank Heaven's for Jake taking over and doing the right thing...  Geezzzzz this is sooooo good!!!!!  Glad reviews were good and kind.....  :-)  Till next chapter



Author's Response:

I absolutely LOVE that you tell me just the parts you liked (or disliked)!  I wondered if anyone would like the phone tech stuff, I never really know!

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Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93 Delivered

Phew!!! Edward that was so close Bro!!! Seriously thought you were gonna fall off into darkness there for a few!!! **nope, I had faith** **giggles, chuckles**

Okay why didn't SM seem to think this through like you did when writing the birthing scene, okay I get that she wanted to show the pain of Childbirth, however, I love, love, love how you are taking into consideration the intellect of this new amazingly talented little breed of humanvampire baby... See how your pointing out that DaddyWard can read Masen's thoughts (not unlike in BD version) this TOTALLY makes sense to me that they talked the baby through the birth..  Really love your version and yes, read he notes the drama is not over yet...  Still a little put out with Sam in all honesty... But then anyone that hurts EDWARD is not nice... nervy I dare say....Just the very mention of his injuries as Bella notices the bandages she will notice the bite marks later I am sure...  Okay again totally Rocking with your version of the birth!!!! 

Laters Kathy xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

You're too good to me!  I love your reviews!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99 Restored

hum was it Masen that did the healing or the mothers milk  interesting

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Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

mercy   that was killer...  I know what you mean with packing and unpacking... I'm the same way... hate it!!!!   Masen is getting so big!!!! Take care!! till next time!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137 Content times Two

Yay, I was worried about you... hope your job is still going well too!!! Great chapter...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139 Complacent

yay!!!!  your back.....  ty for the update.....

Slither by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

    

Banner by the wonderful Mehek18. Check her other amazing banners on Mehek18.tumblr.com

OOC. AH. An outcast who had everything, but eventually lost the one thing that was truly important to him. She was back and her presence would turn his world upside down again. 'He needed her but she left him.' Mature content. E/B    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46224 Read Count: 8034
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 01 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Love it!   This seems intriguing... Naturally it's going to be good you only write GREAT stories!!!!  Can't wait for more of this and MP of course....

 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked this as well as you liked MP. ;) (I'll try to update MP as soon as possible.)

Anyway, thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope to see you when I update this next time. =)

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Thank you Mehek18 for another awesome banner!  Check out her site at Mehek18.tumblr.com


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

I loved how they opened up to a Major Degree, yes, Bella still has misgivings about opening up about Baby Daddy but she will if she is giving time to develope the trust.

As for Edward lets keep in mind that he too has MAJOR trust issues.  I hope our Girl heard the full scope of that fact....Hence Dr. Carlilse......Love this story....

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commetning!

Bella does have major issues when it comes to trust, but it's more than that.  She isn't just putting herself out there, she feels like she is puttingMolly out there too and doens't want to do that at all.  Edward too has some major issues when it comes to trust.

I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story!  The next update will be soon!

-Lisa