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I am a 55yr+ old Mother/Grandmother and avid reader. My daughter is the one who introduced SM's Twilight to me in 2009. I loved them; couldn't read them fast enough or enough times. I even had them on audible to listen while I worked.. Oh, yeah definitely obsessed. I found Fan Fiction after hearing a interview with Peter Facinelli once a few years back, talking about the Twihard fans and all the stories on the internet. I did some searches and found FanFiction.net and of course Twilighted and then TWC. I must say I have such an addiction now, can't you tell...
E.L. James - Fifty Shades Triology (FanFiction MOTU I & MOTU II) OMG!!! Love "My Fifty" Just saying! Movie coming soon, hopefully!!!!
Sylvain Reynard's Gabriel's Inferno Series (FanFiction UOEM) "Professor Emerson" he just couldn't be more tortured and sexy if he tried. I would love to see this made into a movie as well...
These Two Highly successful Published Author's, were first FF writers! I humbly join the Millions of fans world wide in offering my heartfelt love and good wishes for their continued success as well as love and encouragement to all those Writers/Authors who so unselfishly give of your creative minds with the use of written word. I however am not one of the lucky who have the talent to do so, but love love love reading.
╔══╦══╦══╗ I have been diagnosed
║╔╗║╔═╣╔╗║ with Obsessive Cullen
║╚╝║╚═╣╚╝║ Disorder put this on your
╚══╩══╩══╝ profile if you've caught it to!
I so totally borrowed that from Shannon aka mustlovertp YUP very OCD here
I have many many favorite reads and authors: Just a few shout outs would be
- Robshandmonkey - love ya Drea EEK/Shhhhhh/Taboo/ (Just on TWC)
- SexyLexiCullen - OMG can we say MobWard QS/WS or DoctorWard TSOU/INI
- CaraNo - too flipping many to count :-) (Just on FF)
- Sarges Girls - Deb and Jen OMG can we say check out drtuno for the sexiest Mercenary on the planet
- mustlovertp -- hot hot InkWard a new story posted 6/15/12
- justginger/peoplelikeus -- Such a awesome writer! Poeple Like Us and Hope Springs
- Savage7289 - When Michael Sheen did the reading of Unexpected Circumstances I was enthralled.. what a story ...
- rbsschess - House of Hope and Be My Master Headmaster and Human Sexuality 101 - it's not just the lemons but the humor, depth of story plot all around great reads
- lmlx8 - Diamond in the Rough - does she ever get inside our heads and Bella and Edwards.... Louise really makes one think...
- littlecat358 - Unplanned Perfection and The Demons in My Dreams (Just on FF)
- Jenny0719 - Everything again by her is just enthralling and endearing making you read them over and over (Just on FF)
- JenGreen03 - Everything she does is AWESOME (Just on FF, maybe on Twilighted)
Again just a very small handful of over the top talented writers. Sadly more and more have left the fandom because of various reasons, I just wish to voice I appreciate everyone for their Talents regardless of where they are in the development of their abilities; cultivate that Talent! You are all enormously talented individuals and THIS reader/reviewer definitely appreciates everything you write...
Please please don't be offended if your not on my list above, I love all the stories I read and review... and some I don't .... Yes, I'm also a closet perv ***giggles and chuckles at self***
Oh, I am very much Team Edward and Bella - Love Taylor - not a fan of Jacob and Bella - but fine with those that do, just not my thing.... I love the HEA's just because I didn't have that in my marriage(s) doesn't mean I don't wish that for everyone else.... See I'm charitable.... :-) Laters All!!! Muah! Kathy
FYI: Can't wait for next months release of Cosmopolis!
SWATH was wonderful! Canne was such a treat if your a Robsten fan as I am... Kristen rawked the Red Carpet in that Red Dress, Geez I couldn't believe it....Rob is alway killer in a Tux...OMG!!! Heartfail! LOL!
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All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
cliffie hey...I really like the story and think you're really good and have talent hope you stay encouraged and motivated in your writings,
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
awesome
Author's Response:
Hey sweets, I really love you reviewing chapters. =) glad you're liking the story. Thank you! =)
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Bella darlin when will you learn that your husband has your best interest at heart!!!!
Sneaky little vixen!!!!
This was a GREAT, HOT chapter!
Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Holy Shit Batman talk about a cliffie! Glad I already have the next Chapter Thank you V!
BTW did I tell you how much I love this story! Who doesn't love this Edward? Hey Hey!!!! Sexy boy! Isn't this the first too that we are fully aware of his Tattoo with Baby Girl on his forearm. When did he get that?
Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Such a good story! Was it Leah that was close to having a panic attack? I'm confused.. sorry about that. Love the story. Going to the next chapter!
Later Kathy xoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I had been so wrapped up in the story I had not even digested the fact Bella has been calling him MASEN or MASE at times. Naturally I hadn't even given consideration as to what the outcome or response would be from Emmett when this was revealed.. Oh Brother
Explosive times!
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Bless B's heart she thought he left her without saying goodbye.
Another thing I like about your writing style is you let Bella acknowledge the choice she made, regardless of other circumstances which led her to making that choice, it was still a choice, poor as it may have been, she is accepting responsibility for her actions.
Great story, going on to the next chapter... Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I thought it was Leah, stupid stupid girl!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Hells Bells if that's what she gets when he gets angry with her, HE best look out, SHE will make sure to Piss him off just for his reaction. HAHAHA!!!
Can't wait for the next update, please soon....... Great Story!
Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Much love to you girl! You basically flooded my mail with your reviews...and I loved it. Thank you for taking the time, really appreciate it. =) don't worry, the next chapter is with my beta already..so the update will be soon.
See yah then. *hugs*
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Dear Lord Above --- Yes, Loved - Loved this chapter.. Holy Hell! Can we say insatible?
Can't wait for the next chapter
Later Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
thank you bb. Glad you liked it. =)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Thanks for the Chapter update, I love this story!!!! I think I have said that a time or two perhaps in my reviews of other chapters.
Pretty Interesting, so ... he put a hit out on Emmett huh?! Well that's pretty normal for this type of storyline, but what was nicely unexpected is the fact that someone else outside of the Cullen Organization did it. Hummmm!!!! She really loves him doesn't she, I would have thought she would have been gone and then asked questions later.
Great Chapter we really see that they are passionate people, volitle too, but they do have an eminse love for one another.....
Ready for another Chapter this one was just a little shorter than I would have liked, but I understand that they all can't be looooonnnnnnggggggg!
Your great with your writing abillites. Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. This was an important chapter as it explains how he learned she was in the mob.
I hate it when the main character walks out...because that never solves anything so I made her stay.
Thanks for the compliment on my writing. Really appreciate it. ;)
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I love this story and have been seeing alot of other writers recommend this one too! Your rocking the Mafia Edward and Baby Girl that's for sure. Hum now to figure out the who done it!!!!
Cant wait for more and thanks for the blog... very sweet!!!!
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you sweetie. Glad that my Edward and Baby girl are entertaining lots of readers.
If ever you remember the names of the authors/readers who rec'd this, please drop me a tweet/mail/message so I can thank them.
Thank you for visiting my blog (it's been up just recently so not much posts added yet.)
Hugs and kisses bb. =)
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Shit Shit Shit is right!!! OMG Bella what on earth are you thinking deary! You're the BOSS'S wife! Holy Shit!!!! Oh this is so good! Poor Rose and Em, they lost the baby! awhhhh!
Can't wait for the next chapter, Thanks so much for this chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie. ;)
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
phew now Snake had my skin crawling and I was only reading the story **chuckles** thanks for the chapter update ... I know we stiil have lots more to learn about who has done what, really looking forward to more of this story... TTFN Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you. Until next chapter. =)
These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Beach Ball
this is so flippin funny I can only imagine what he would do to her if this was during their usual time... Aunt Bella worked it good Mr All-State Baseball player... LMAO
Author's Response:
lol... i thought it was funnier that even Esme was in on the scheme...lol
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Charlie's Surprise Visit
Happy Thanksgiving tommorrow Ms Louise!!! Thank you very much for the outtake of Charlie and his view on all he learned.... wow as a parent I am telling you..Loved how you show the complexity of emotions Charlie goes through in the realization of what the relationship of Bella and Edward is or might be..then his discussion with Officer Hawkes, mercy.. loved how Charlie let him know in a very impressive Charlie-esk way just how he took what the officer was trying to imply about his daughter, and the implication of obtaining the SRO under less than legal means... just Wow! that was something!!!
You just have to chuckle at Charlie in the end especially when he says "Edward tells her to do something and she jumps to fulfill it." If that's what Charlie thinks of Bella well hell he's got a hell'va lot to learn about our girl here....Charlie did have his eyes and mind opened quite a bit here and made great strides in his view of "Alternative L/S" but its only because he can see how good Edward is to his daughter.... Love Love Love DomWard he is just beyond words!!!! your writing has it's own unique style and feel of our dearly loved characters but you constantly pull the readers in with each chapter.... Please enjoy all your family for the Holidays and will be patiently awaiting the next chapter!!!!! toodles!!! Kathy
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Early Morning Chat
Louise & His Domliness **chuckles at the name** thank you both for this honest Outtake...Louise you as the writer really took some heavy hits on reviews and Mr Domliness really were berated about your abuse...**hey reviewers words, not mine** I think I said your a strict Dom and exact lessons and punishments swiftly, and with purpose... I think I also pointed out that Isabella has to show and exhibit Trust in her Dom, she did not Safeword.... Why? that's Isabella's to answer...myself, as the reader can presume and I do presume her reasons....But..I look forward to hearing and seeing in the next chapter more of her thoughts and logic... No' No totally agree Bella is spunky and Isabella has shown it too, as a matter of fact what about when he did apologize to her for tne time he Unintentionally gave Jessica the Dom look in Isabella's presence. No she is not stupid or weak at all, but she is a pleaser which taps into her submissive personality... I do stand by my thoughts and feelings that she seeks to not disappoint and sometimes it does cause her to pause.......I'm going to go back and read but when they were at the hotel did 't she finally safeword then? But it took true emotional blocking on his part to get her to see but she did safeword because she had reached her limit....He's right she is tough and she is a thinker, she will get there... and he has always said he did not want a slave...I never felt he raped her... First he would Never ever do that, and secondly ... no hell no ..no second he just flatly would never do that.... Okay...enough now... TY for this Outtake, and look forward to Chapter 84 and more..... Kathy Love ya "L" and Mr Sexy Domliness!!!!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Ladies Luncheon
I personally loved this outtake, if you will. We have garnered a greater insight into Esme here, yep, she was definitely sneaky in her agenda....showing Bella where a wedding reception could be held...yep sneaky alright.... I also seriously hope Esme takes ner own words and thoughts to heart and puts a plan into action and make things right with Jane, she is a wonderful woman, and Aro adores his wife....that alone should make Esme want to give her respect...however Late to that particular Cause, Esme may be, nevertheless the fact remains Esme does have corrections and misconceptions to repent of, where Jane and Aro are concerned.
till next time... Happy 4th!!! Kathy
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Alice in her own Wonderland
oh my, well I still think she "Alice" is being snobbish......Jasper is going and to be the calming influence here and take the middle ground I feel. I guess I need to re-read me some chapters but I don't recall him taking the Cane to her backside, if anything she's been fearful of it. I do need to go back to the night of the Club Anniversary, I think that might be the chapter it's in....
I still think that Edward was being sterner than usual over his discussion with Alice earlier in the day. Yes, agreeded hands down he is a formidible Strong Strict Dom... and she was being a little bratty, sometimes I think we all fail to remeber how new she is to all this... she had a very stressful day back at work AND menus mess with your hormones... so I'm just asking "Are Edward's expectations too high for Bella, at times?" Would love opinions from anyone on that comment too! Louise, as alway you amd "M" are the best and I love this story as well as how you request honest feedback, as well as explain EPOV and Masters POV.... Kathy
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas
This is a terrific story and I really am intrigued by it, first off that Edward can hear Bella's thoughts, Well for the most part!!! I simply could not believe Esme and Carmen several chapters.. Holy Shit! I have rarely liked Tanya in a FF story, but she I mean get the Volturi and burn her up!!! Shit she is devious!
And the Sex Class with all the siblings Shit that was hysterical, I couldn't stop laughing, poor Jazz!!!!
Later BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Okay I was laughing so hard at Emmett, Rose and Diana's (Not to mention the inner dialouge of Bellla, Rose and Alice) bantering.. I thought I was going to have to call for oxygen.. Seriously that was something! Your a fan-fucking-tastic writer!
Later BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Geez Jealous Edward is right! Shit! was that hot or what
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Awesome! Hum! this is still intriguing the crap out of me. Why is he hearing only bits and pieces of her mind. Who killed her father and what is the connection with all this.. Questions, Questions!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The new playroom
wow! Loved how he finally revealed how he feels about her, and she heard him too! Interesting twist. The outtake was wonderful, so now I do get that she knows about the Pack and the Shape Shifters, but knows nothing of the Vamps! Interesting!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Interesting, why doesn't she want to tell Jake about her Master? Many questions but love this story!!!
Banner by: edwards_girl_1918... Author & Co-Author of some great Fics... check ´em out!!!
4yrs After leaving Forks Bella is ready to face the past. Faithful to her true love she sacrificed her happiness for his future. Now she s returning to Seatle in hopes to soon practice law. He`s moved on sort of, but can Edward forgive Bella´ s secret or is it to late for their ´Happily Ever After´ rated for languge and very lemony lemons!!!!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44252 Read Count: 6166
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!
Okay prompt the sniffles and tears!! OMGosh! this is gonna be good, but fear sad.. You're really talented and Love " FTLOD" that's just as spectaular.. I just found this one, so thought I would get started...
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Dirty Little Secrets
I alway love the texting in a story, some pretty funny stuff. Great Story!!! Poor Bella sorry no other way around it giving up the V-card (as you say) hurts!!!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love
Hot Diggity Dog!!!! You rocked it. This was hilarious - "Okay lover boy, here's the deal. You gotta brush, floss, rinse(at least three times), and exfoliate before you can kiss me and earn your surprise.” There I said it." Man I would have loved to have seen Rose and Alice whippin up on Tanya!!!! Great Story!!!!
Yes, all of your recommendations are Right on! A couple more just if your interested is Edwards Clan by Greenway Violent as Shit, but wickedly good Edward.. I mean Monestery Wicked Edward, but the inner dialog of His Monster is really quite humorous after you get further into the story. Your Cooch dialog is pretty cute too!!!
I can't wait for more updates on this and your other Stories!!!
Yes, I must admit Icy is one of my favorite authors, she really gives us a wonderful Fifty... Love, Love Fifty!!!
Keep on writing and using your wonderfully creative mind!!!
Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?
Dark Edward.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow what a piece of work Phil and Renee are! that's horrible ~ very good story nevertheless! reading on!!!
Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91318
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
well TY for two chapters, OMG! she fell down the stairs!
Edward Cullen is a world famous actor and singer. At just twenty-four he has received several awards for his acting and is currently in the running for a Grammy for his debut album. What happens when he meets Bella Black; a thirty-five year old wife and mother who is in town on a business trip? Anything can happen…if you let it.
This is a one-shot I wrote for a friend as a birthday gift. She has begrudgedly granted me permission to share it with you all.
My banner and blinkie are thanks to my banner goddess Misskingatyourservice. check out all her creations at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3261 Read Count: 1831
Date: 25 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Chance Encounters
well I loved it....
Author's Response:
I am so glad!!! Thanks for the rating and review!
Come follow me on my Facebook author page! 'Nickeyd26'
All my best,
Nickey
Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Adult movies
Gelix -
I never get tired of telling you my favorite parts of the Chapter!!! My favorite part was when he told her that Porn was really the right kind of research and then when she asked him about his sexual experiences and he admitted to her Yes, indeed he had tried it, but then felt slighty embarrassed over it. That just tells me that he is truly invested in her. Oh Hello, when he asked her if she wanted him to help her, and she wasn't really sure that she understood that she was excited... That was my favorite parts, WELL ASIDE from him bringing her to her first "O" of course... Yes I would have to say pretty much the hum....WHOLE ENTIRE CHAPTER!!!!
Till next update and thanks for the frequent updates BTW I appreciate it.
Laters BB
Kathy xoxo
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Rocking Car
Gelix-
I liked this so far, I see that this Edward has a Bad Boy James Dean sort of persona and that's fine. I think it will take some time to understand where he is coming from and that will be okay, ALL Edwards don't have to reveal their LUST for Bella from the first sight. I am more than willing to give this a chance. I love MTTE...so I am sure that this will be just as great..
Kathy
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Party
I Like this story and hope that you are going to continue it once MTTE is complete.
Thanks for taking the time to write, I for one do appreciate your abilities!!!
Kathy
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Life as we knew it
Gelix -
Nope, not wanting to kill you off because you OFF'D Jakey Pooh; but I was surpised by his an Edwards final moments. I'm presuming here that this is going to open up both our Edward the Assward and Shy Quite Bella.
I think the grief and quilt feelings they are both having is nomal and it's good to bring this out and show sometimes things and accidents just happen and no one should be to blame.
On to the next Chapter
Laters BB
Kathy
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Could it be any harder?
Okay, Now we are going to start moving a little, it's not that I'm being insensitive to the lose of Jacob, just that I'm tired of crying too, that was pretty damn sad..
Enough said, on to the next chapter
Kathy
xoxoxo
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: New Girl
Gelix-
Kathy, giggles at the ending...sneaky Edward, but you must admit that's pretty smart.
So our Bella is coming out of her shell just a little. Wonderful, love the gradual evolution of her less demure persona. I knew she was just guessing about the Drugs that was pretty awesome. I also forgot to add on the last review that I loved it when Edward showed up at her house and pulled out her out bed. It didn't work but that was okay he was trying.
Ready for the next Chapter
xoxo
Kathy
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Life from a new perspective
My favorite part was when he told Lauren off, and at the park when he said he was sorry at the end.
On to the next chapter
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Hum - - so they are Not officially together yet, okay good information! Yes I definately thought that was pretty funny when Esme caught them. I don't have one favorite place I loved the whole Chapter, if it's just one thing though it would be the school parking lot where they admitted how they felt and the kiss.
Can't wait for Wednesday now!!!
Kathy
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Rumors vs Truth
Yes, this was a great Chapter too! I think my favorite part(s) were when he gave into the different games so that she would forgive her, getting up on the table @ lunch and making the announcement. Bella telling the Principal she was with Edward. Bella telling Lauren off! Priceless! Edward taking the silly picture of her for the cell phone ID. Bella finding the Condom and the picture. Then Edward at the end saying that he would always find a way for them to sleep together at night! So Yea, the whole flippin Chapter...
HEHEHE!!! Can't wait till next week....Yes,Yes,Yes!
Have a good one!
Laters BB
Kathy xoxo
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Fighting
Gelix -
You ask an impossible question, "What's your favorite part?" The whole thing was my favorite with the exception of maybe the shopping trip yeah, that could have been shorter, I love my B & E time like they are getting the last part of the story. She needs to over come her fear of his tongue on her precious lady bits, she will be in for a Big Surprise.
Your the best, can't wait till next week. Take care have a good remainder of the and a fantabulous weekend.
Laters Kathy xoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Camping
Gelix -
So excited for your wonderful news, so much going on all positive. Fantastic! Oh BTW you do NOT use the F word too much for this Edward.. That is who he is! There are tons and tons of other FanFics out there where he uses alot more severe, and foul language than your stories do. Again, this is YOUR story not SM, your rating is NC-17 not T. Very excited about your Married to the Enemy news, wouldn't that just be incredible if it is published...
I loved them cuddling @ the fire too, however, I really liked the part where she went down to the water to only discover they were as naked as the day they were born, then Emmett left, she opens her eyes to him standing right in front of her face with his God like features in full view. That was pretty funny...
Loved the whole chapter, ready for more and ready for your new story as well!!!
Best of luck!!!
Later BB Kathy xoxo
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Give and Take
Great Chapter Gelix - you do not disappoint! Love the story and Love how caring Edward is becoming more and more with Bella. Bella I hope is over reacting and not something else like a cyst or something.
Anyway, kind of curious as to what Rose keeps calling Bella for.... should be interesting...
Well till the 16th then.. Have a good week and weekend.
Later Kathy xoxo
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News
Gelix-
You are right I did not see Rose and Emmett with news of a baby that's for sure. Favorite part, I think it was Edward telling Bella that she could talk to him about anything and that just seemed so endearing to me.
Okay, so we get a Sequel to this, will it be like another full story or more like MTTE with just being added on at the end of the other chapters. This has been terrific story and hope your moves goes well.....
Later BB Kathy xoxo
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All Human. OOC. A model striving to reach a goal that was once her mother's. A young prodigy that has everything and is unwilling for change to happen. The attraction is there. Will it be enough?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86502 Read Count: 12304
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty. She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog. Instead at twenty eight sh
e breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family. With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.
I have a banner!! I want to give a shout out to Mehek18 for creating it. I think it's pretty nice. You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com and take a look around. She is amazing and I want to thank her for taking the time to create my banner! Thank you!!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
im so excited for another weekkend for e and b not a j fan but he seems pretty nice in this story so i will endure through more jacob in the future chapters as you assure us that is coming :-) i feel sure in the end our girlie Ms B will favor our hollywood hunk Edward at least I am hopeful here good story
Author's Response:
Hello and I am so glad you found my story and are enjoying it. I am not a huge Jacob fan either, but I don't enjoy how people write him all nasty and mean, so I promise he will be all right in the story. Bella and Edward are in for a ride...that''s all I am going to say. Enjoy!
-Lisa
One love. One destiny. Can you change what's meant to be? AU/OOC NOT related to Rob Pattinson's movie of the same name.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126600 Read Count: 8254
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: No Faith In Medicine
Holy Shit this is so good, what a twist and Yes, very "Lost like" in a very supernatural sort of way..... oh so good
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading & reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy it! :-)
~Noelle
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
OMG Intriguing Prologue on to Chapter 1
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389610
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2
oh hell Tanya is soooo damn bonkers I'm scared why the psychotic "B%&$#!" is going to do.. I love this story and thanks for another chapter so quickly....Love Love Love DomWard!!! OMG Marly is so adorable!!!! Dr. Sexy is one smart cookie!!!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1
Holy Shit! So happy for the update, sorry it's taken me a few days to get it read, but I am sooooo very happy you had the chance to write and update.... I love FTLOD and will be happy to check out the tomato soup awards blog and vote.
Can't wait to find out what the Heck our wonderful Edward has to say to Ms. Denali! Girlfriend my A$@!!! More like Crazy Stalker BIOTCH! right?! Just saying!!!
Okay Laters Krazi and Mojo!!!
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Holy Freakin Hell! Krazi what a chapter!!!! welcome back with all the delish!!!
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
This is going to be really good, if this first Chapter is any indication!!! Big smile!!! On to the next Chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
This just keeps getting better and better, I certainly hope your getting great reviews to give you lots of inspiration to keep writing you are really great. Love the way your laying all the background, so we can understand where they (Bella and Edward) are coming from. Yes look out JB, nothing worse than a woman scorned. Keep writing more please. On to the next Chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
I can't wait to find out who safe worded either. This is a great story!!! I think it was in the first Chapter you said something about "Blue Bell" and I thought how does this writer know about Blue Bell Ice Cream? Way cool, best Ice Cream ever, my mom's favorite is Butter Pecan too! Anyway! More Chapters Please....can't wait to get back to where they were at the end of Chapter 1 The Blind Date......Till the next update!!!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
haha! of course I know about Blue Bell I´m from the south.. We Eat All We Can and We Sell The Rest!! lol.. Yeah I´m a butter pecan freak.. I miss it living in Spain though!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Thank you so much for this Chapter, Loved it! Always knew that Crazy Biotch Tanya was just that Craaaazzzy!! This should get pretty good very soon with that drama. Now how sweet that he asked his mother to marry him. Awwwhhh! More Chapter's Please... okay I won't beg but pretty please. Oh and Happy Thanksgiving to you. On a side note, I am reading and following all of your Rec's. those 4 stories are pretty awesome. Till your next Chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... Whats Done In the Dark...
Great chapter! Thanks! Yes, I was trying to figure out how on earth she was going to say something to Bella too, but I really love the way we found out how Alice knew about Bella, I surpised Alice didn't say something right away, but I can see why she didn't. This is going to be so good when Edward gets back!!! Ohhhhh just can't wait for more of the story!
I am being patient with the story development, just anxious for more... But that's a good thing that your readers are so invested in the story.... Have a good one till next time......
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
Krazi - I love this story!! My new obession I fear!!! 7 chapters and I'm jumping up and down ready for them to find out the truth!?!? Tanya few nuts short of a PayDay is right!?!? Things are going to be fantastic with this story! Happy Holiday's and will anxiously and Patiently I might add, wait for the story to progress... Laterz BB
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
Dear Heaven Above Krazi - YOU RAWK
This was a kick ass chapter!! Loved The Voice: "Mojo was giving me a look that said, I don´t fucking think so". Way too comical, which we definately need. Its great you have such wicked mind **smirks at screen while typing**
Seth is precious, loved how he has inner acted with Edward and Carlisle.
I never ever would have guessed or expected for Will to be no other that asshat himself Jacob Black!!! Holy Hell, I wanted to pass out with poor Bella too! Your characterazation of the Leah is just fitting and perfect for this Jacob as well. They deserve each other that is for sure.
Oooohhhh now we get some Sir Pet time. I had almost forgot about that at the end of the last chapter.
I really wish to thank you very much for your responses on your reviews, that's really nice. I know you must get alot and you still make the time, that's pretty awesome. Never expected, but nice. I never fault a author for not replying, Heck you guys are writing, as well as trying to live a life, and then to try and find time to respond to reviews also, well, that's just alot!!
2011 is almost upon us in this time zone, HOPE your having a NICE and SAFE New Year where ever you maybe this night.
Looking forward to your next update when you have it ready, until then Patience is a Virtue that I will hone. Toodles till next time Kathy xoxoxo
Author's Response:
Sorry, but I didn´t want to let the New Year ring in without giving you one last chapter of 2010! Lol! I haven´t had alot of time to write, and I wanted to be able to do the phone conversation justice. Plus I just think it will be better from Sir´s POV. I promise you that it´s the next chapter and from here on out it´ll be nothing but floggin and snoggin! Lol! Also, I´m going to do my best to get it up in the next couple of days!
Thanks so much for sticking with me, reading and taking the time to review! Please make sure to check out the blog! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Happy New Year!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi & Mojo
xoxo
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
Wow and they aren't even in the playroom yet!!! I'm so anxious and curious to see how you reveal to them who they are... That should be soooooo interesting!
Fantastic chapter!!! I loved his banter within is own head, that was pretty funny when he was thinking about how Tanya never made him feel like Pet does, yet that was pretty flippin funny!!!
Till next update,
Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee! So here´s to TGIF! Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers! Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for! Laterzzzz:) Krazi and Mojo xoxo www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
Woohoo!!!! almost there!!! This is so good!!!
Author's Response:
Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
Hi Krazi - TGIF to you & Mojo!
Wow that was FuckAwesome! Love the pic at the very top when he is tugging at his hair when he discovers she stilll holds her -V- Card! Priceless picture and perfect for what he must have thought in that instance.. Hahahahaha!
So now he fully understands what went down with Asshat Jacob and Leah that is wonderful!
I thought it was so interesting the whole time he is thinking, just how he is going to convince her that this is not just a weekend thing he will want with her. I think now, at least I hope he knows now...since hearing here sleep talk that he will realize she feels deeper, much deeper for him... Unless he just doesn't want to believe it and blows it off, in any case he will eventually get there... after all he is a pretty intelligent man for Goodness Sakes...
Instead of being mad at the little Pixie (yes, he did have a right to be at first) he needs to buy her something REALLY special after this....
Can't wait for more.. Such a good story.. You are very very talented in your writing..
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxo
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Its Playtime...
Oh this was so good Krazi; Seriously good!!!! Okay I have to admit that the wait was WELL worth the wait...Oh, I can't wait for the Chapter where they find out who they are dealing with. Is that going to be drawn out throughout the whole story? I mean I know that Crazy Stalker Psycho Ex-Sub Tanya will have to be dealt with somewhere in the story line, so I was just wondering if they are going to discover each other's identities or not...
No Way to Say Goodbye by: Robshandmonkey is seriously a terrific story, I read all of her stories and "The Quite One" is off the hook as well..
You have several more listed that I have been reading and following as well, Thanks for the recommendations. I do check your blog frequently too by the way... Awesome pics if I do say!!!!! :-)
You have a AWESOME week and can't wait for more as always!!!!
Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Whos Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
Krazi - They walked out and left Mojo!!! What the heck is up with that, Oh, I guess Mojo will just have to stay with Grammy Esme! :-)
Oh this was wonderful they finally met. I knew the second he touched her what happened, hopefully we will hear from EPOV what happened in that instants for him as well. Because Alice jumped up from the Table and then Edward followed her out, then the text came... Alice knew right then and Edward did too and saw the look on Alice's face, yeah! that sounds plausible...
Well now, I'm so proud of Bella for not turning tail and running after hearing them in the office arguing over her, you know she could have easily run, but I'm really glad she didn't.
Come on how could you leave me this way hanging!!! Well not exactly hanging you did allow them to actually acknowledge each other and they did leave together.
The Grammy's were pretty good. Would have been Better had they had RPatz as a presenter but we can see him at the Oscar's in a few weeks right... :-) Okay so ready to have the next chapter. Oh, really enjoyed the Rose POV on your blog that was great and LOVE all the pics.
Till next update, lots of your recommends I have read or are currently following... good taste in reading. hummmm imagine that. Later BB Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
I know right! What the hell? I can´t wait to hear what Mojo has to say about all this nonsense; I can´t believe he´ll be a happy camper! Sir is cutting in on his turf and Bella cuddle time! Lol! Yeah the Grammy´s had so high and several low points, but all in all I stuck with them almost but not quite til the end! Lol! I´m always looking for a good read, so yeah, those are some pretty awesome stories! Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story! I had no idea that ppl would love it so much! You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody! Laterzz:) Krazi & Mojo xoxo
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Holy Hell!!! That was something You are offically the Mistress of Cliffee chapters Krazi
Wow all those Pictures were killer!!! Seriously! Wow! I had no idea that the poor guy was thinking all that time that Isabella was still married, the entire dinner and drive back to Escala wow... then for her to have to tell him in the way she told him, no wonder he was sadly confused.. Bless her heart and His Huge Hard as Cement Cock LOL!!
Then she Safe Words I cant even phatom what his inner demon must have thought in that one instance. Seriously he is talking finally getting into some really wet warmth and she says RED... OMG..
Can't wait for the next chapter... You ARE the Queenie!!!!
Kathy x0x0x0x0
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Glad your liking your new JOB, (I take you are anyway!) Things will settle down and will become old hat before long, then we will have our wonderful Author back with us again, We (your loyal fans) can be patient...your worth it...
What a well done Chapter! Wow, the emotions that we see coming from our Oh, So Sexy as Hell Dom Edward is overwhelming. He is the Sexiest Man Alive that's for sure. You certainly made their first time together something very very special and romantic indeed. Bless her heart she was so fearful she would disappoint him. I loved it when he told her the only thing that would disappoint him was if somone else were in the bed with him.. Awwwhhh now that was killer, sorry but it was...
I know we are going to need to visit with the messed up psycho ex-submissive of Edwards before long, and I just feel the dread coming. They are so blissfully happy right now...
Okay have good days at work and hopefully without stress and anexity! Till the next chapter, (OH BTW, I personally love, love, love all the pictures in the story and that is the Main reason I use TWC over FF most of the time.) You are the Rock'n'est!!!!
Laters to you! Krazi and Mojo take care! ~Kathy xoxoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks I love it! It's tough getting back into the groove, but I love my job! Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you enjoy the pics. I fixed the ones not showing and added a few more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cats Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...
never a disappointment!!! need new panties... thanks so much for the chapter... you and I love all the same stories.... :-) please take care till next post... oh loved the pics on the blog!!!
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Whats Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...
Damn what a chapter ending... Leah is so flippin clueless...
Author's Response:
Lol! Isn´t she! I just think she has no self-esteem and just like a battered wife, she´d rather put up with Jacob than be alone. Glad you liked it! Check out the blog for a teaser to chapter 18!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...
Krazi- Thank you deary for another chapter! OMG I was worried that perhaps you had writers block or worse .... like RL was kicking your butt or something, no one is immune to that kind of thing. Well whatever know that I was so happy to see this chapter ***shhhh don't tell anyone*** but I sneaked and read this chapter on my cell phone at work, everytime I had to be on hold during different phone calls I had to make... only problem was I had to wait till I got home to post my review, my silly Android doesn't let me review from there.... Anyway, yes,yes pet made it through the weekend.
Ms. Leah and Mr Jake deserve each other, I wonder if Tanya can develope a crush on Jake and leave Edward alone... that would be perfect, although don't think that is going to happen huh!? Oh, well... poor Bella really has esteem issues ... my heart was breaking for her during alot of this... especially the panic attach she had thinking that Sir was made at her.... He is a Strong and Very Strict Dom isn't he?! Not that I am experienced in this, but it just seems that he is.... very strict.... I'm sure you can enlighten us more if it's a issue, but personally I love the way you write this, it gives it depth and passion and a greater sense of accomplishment in the submission it seems... Again that's just my take... He does have to establish presidence with his training of her also, so he can't be lax if he is going to be the type of strong Dom she needs... He does seem to consider ALL of her needs.. look at Mojo and how he planned ahead for that deary!!!!
Oh boy, next chapter should be even better.... what on earth has he done now!?
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 17 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
You never ever let us down with a wonderful HOT or panty soaking chapter!!! (Oh the pic-spirations on the blog were again, Over the top wonderful. Loved Mojo and the briefs... LOL!
So Renee did not disappoint, she is something and happy to see that she is going to be supportive of Bella and Edward. Can't wait to hear what Phil has planned for the Blacks, but it's not the major portion of the story to me one way or the other, just love that you at least pointed out that Phil was Pissed and wanted venegance for our girl.
So the Collaring is coming hopefully soon. Lovely! "Master" does not fail in surprising our Girl, does he? No, No he is a "Over the Top" Dom and can't wait to see what more he has in store for his Pet....
Loved your choices of recommends, Most all are some of my FAVORITES!!!! Love WeeKittyandTeamAllTwilght and Jessicanov201; samekramer (Lisa) and Ginger from PLU; You have a wonderful week and look forward to more of this story and ALL your others when you post next, Please take care of your Naughty Pervy Self **snickers** and till next time. Love YOUR works Kathy
Author's Response:
That was actually, Marley...Mojo is black! Lol! When I found the pic online, I thought it was adorable! Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review! Yeah...those stories totally own me right now!
Krazi
xoxo
FYI... Next up! Master collars his pet, and they make their official debut at Breaking Dawn...also there's the Valentine's Ball at the hospital!
Hope to see you soon!
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...
Love ya Krazi, all your loyal fans are still here! Loved the chapter! Hot, hot, hot!
Author's Response:
First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:
Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”
My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.
Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!
He was right there!
Right fucking there!
Suddenly, I felt overdressed.
My clothes felt too tight, constricting.
All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.
I blame that bitch, Eve!
Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.
What?
No!
Give it to me!
Don’t tease me!
Pleaseeeeeee!
At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.
One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.
He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.
Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.
Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.
Right?
Wrong...
Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.
Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”
Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.
Hey, don’t judge me...
Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's
Wow!!! Terrific Chapter loved it!!! So glad they confessed their feelings and are going to move things along, of course we know this will not be easy, as these things never are, but really looking forward to more. It was terrific, no matter if our wonderful Kitten was trying to be a friend to Ang or not, but it was wonderful that Angela opened her mouth and inserted her foot so to speak, with Spartan just under the bed to hear her confessions.. (she says smirking at the screen!!)
Its Very sad and difficult to loose a sibling, personally happened to me 20 months ago, regardless of age, or cirumstances and religious beliefs it's difficult to have them missing in your life. My prayers and thoughts go out to Ari and all the family!!!
The fans of this wonderful story will be here ready for more when more is posted, until then you both have "This Fans' Understanding and Patience!!"
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Author's Response:
Merry christmas and happy new year to you too.....xoxoxoxoo and yes.....Angela MAY have put her foot in her mouth too soon....we shall see????
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance
Welcome back Ari - DLIR thanks for this wonderful Chapter you two. Ari hopefully you will have a fast recovery from your surgery! So I think it's Angela! I went back and read that portion several times and that's just who it has to be... sad as it may be that she did turn around and help Bella in the end, now E won't have to divorce her at all.
Wimpy Eric well that Shit just needs to be locked away for a long time.... Laurent they need to get them too! Carlilse is funny Seriously now!
Okay going to see WFE this weekend or Monday at the latest anyway... Thanks for telling us that it's Fan Fucking Tastic! I figured it was going to be... RP just keeps growing in his talent that is for sure.... Laters You two!!!! Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thank soooo much for the review.....is it Ang? lol........
and WFE UNF................thats all I have to say,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think
Now that was worth it. What a Elevator ride! hahahaha! In true Bella fashion thinking of others. Not to say that's wrong but....Hey it's her Sex-God after all and she is his Kitten... goodness these two need a break!!! Love the story I'm still reading!!!
Author's Response:
Ohhh an elevator ride it was...LOl....I hope hope hope to update this wknd....xoxox DLIR AND ARI
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house
Well now we are getting into the deep shit!!!! Esme is Angela's mother?!?! Wow! Did not see that one coming AT ALL! Hope I wasn't being a sucker here, BUT I was really starting to like Angela with her finally realizing that Bella and Edward were good people and she has not treated them either one fairly..
No it didn't really shock or surprise me that Bella was able convince Dip stick Eric that she was sorry; for all the good it did, she still didn't get away!!! Flip Flip Flip!!!! uggghhh.. Such a good chapter... Of course no Lemons, but this chapter didnt necessarily need it with all the suspense and drama going on. I would love for someone to introduce "Karma" to Laurent!!! Venom pools in my mouth... ohhhh hate rages in my mind over that monster.
Way to go FBI, CIA, ABC, XYZ...whatever... that was cute...
Okay, till next chapter and update, hope wifey recovers nicely... Hang in there with the RL, some days!!! we wonder huh?! Now that DLIR is winding up and like you said a new one will be in the works, which is awesome!!! Love to read more from you... Have a good one... Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
MUAH MUAH MUAH......love tp see ur reviews......yes a lot happened in this chapter. I hope u like the rest we have planned...xoxoxooxoxo and the next story is kinda something that was in the back of my mind...im just jotting it down slowly...LOVE YA
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Mile High Club
Wow! And I see Em just had to get in there with the jokes (on the honeymoon no less) too cute!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Of course Em needed his spotlight...lol....HOT HOT HOT is just the beginning...just the beginning of LEMONS LEMONS LEMONS
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Wow,Wow and Wow that is all I am saying for now.. got to read more...
Author's Response:
hehehehe.....enjoy......DLIR AND ARI
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent
Heck lots of action in this chapter. This is getting better and better all the time. I would love to keep encouraging you in your writing as you certainly are gifted in writing. Thank you for this story and can't wait to read more. Please let them find each other and divorce those dip sticks they are married to Eric and Angela....
Author's Response:
your review was awesome....you keep reading and and enjoy the rest of the story....I hope to have my chapter updated sometime this wknd..Its just being beta'd now. xoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life
Shit Shit Shit!!! What a life poor Eddie!! Oops I mean Edward! That poor boy just can't win for loosing can he? I mean seriously. Did he or didn't he has sex with Angela? She better not be preggers I'm gonna be ticked... arrggghhh!!! Love, Love, Love the story and so excited for the next Chapter!!!
Author's Response:
I love your enthusiasm...heheh yah poor edward...but sometimes things happen to you becuase u asked for it...hahah baby??? thats a good theory.....is she preggers ARI??? not sure myself...xoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness
Glad Bella finally decided to leave Eric!! Good Chapter. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you.....im actually writing the part where she is telling ERic.....LOL....ohhh soooo good....xoxooxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings
Yes, Way to go Bella finally getting brave enough to tell Eric she wanted a divorce! The whole naked Eric thing was pretty funny (sad but funny)
Now what is going to happen with her under the same roof as Spartan??? hummm should be interesting..
I love this story, very addictive for sure. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Heheh were glad ur addicted....and yes sad...but so funny u have to laugh...Hope u enjoy the next update DLIR AND ARI
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: t eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
now that was awesome....Ang must Go!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
:) aww thannk you BB! And yes Ang must go, like yesterday! We appreciate all of your support! Thanks so much for your review...
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Swing My Way
I always think each Chapter is great BUT I must say this one is BY FAR the BEST!!! Wow it really RAWKED!
What a way to start the New Year's off. Incredible. Loved the POV and information on what Edward did while Bella was sleeping on the bed. That was something with Eric, he soooo deserved a whole hell'va lot more done to him.
Then Condo search, and Bella's playfullness in trying to cause our Spartan to go CRAZZZY, just saying it was HOT!
Loved the playfullness of the movie night and them falling asleep on the couch.
Didn't we so know this blowup was coming, YES, one would liked to have guessed and hoped to see it happen; Yet at the same time, you out performed on this scene...Wow..what a way to start the new year off with his Episode, cause I feel like I'm watching some sort of Erotic Soap Opera...hehehe! That's not necessarily a bad thing. Anyway, thanks again, and OH, SOOOOO EXCITED for the next installment of Swing My Way!!!!
Later BB
Kathy
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
OMG I can not believe what a total manic Bitch Angela truly is. Okay have some pride even if it's just knowing that your not going to beg someone to stay with you whom doesn't want you. Seriously Ang!!!
Bella was right is her thoughts, they do need to be clear of her divorce and his before they can fully move forward, NOT TO SAY that they can't have some Juicy Lemony Goodness along the way, OH!!!what am I saying!!! hehehehe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hummmm what is Eric and Laurent up to? Doesn't sound good.. Thank Goodness for Em and Rose saving the day at the hotel.
Can't wait for more. Have a good one.
Laters BB
Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
WEll you wont have to wait much longer ....u have great questions.....laurent and eric at hotel....im not sure??? and We love Emmett and Ro...they will be in the story a bit more now....xoxoxooxox
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2
DLIR- Now that was HOT and Hell Yes!!! Well worth the wait!! I thought the computer was going to combust just being on for me to read this... :-)
Seriously creepy element going on here with the phone calls; one can't help but think that its crazy Eric and that Angela is having Edward followed, I know with Edward being a lawyer and all he knows he does not need her signature, but I'm sure he wants it to be settled with less of a fight & quicker, because after all they do have ASSETTS that need to be considered in a favorable manner, since they discussed that there was no Pre Nup! But he needs to get the ball a rolling here...
Can't wait to see what else you have in store for our lovely couple now..If she is not going to be working at the Spa anymore what is she going to be doing I wonder!!!
Well thanks again for the double treat of 2 Chapters sooo close together... they were well worth it.
Till next time
Laters BB
Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review...and we hoped it came across as HOT HOT HOT.....he does know he doesnt need a signature but he was hoping to settle it out of court....Ari will be writing that in the next chapter. Bella is still working at the spa but she needs to cut down her hours.....and were working as we speak on the next chapter xoxooxoxo love ya DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners
Ari - DLIR - What a treat!!!! This chapter Rocked....Columbus and uncharted lands was so hiliarious seriously. It was so nice having a Full Chapter without our wicked crazed Ang and pencil dick Eric! Em was pretty funny too! Of course, he always is...
When Edward was talking to Emmett about shopping for Angela's engagment ring, well that was down right sad, if you ask me. Even though everyone that reads my reviews KNOWS I have a strong dislike for her character.....but I digress; the conversation Edward had with Emmett reminds me and all the readers of just how NOT INVESTED Edward was from the very first of the marriage with her. Sad as that may be......Everyone deserves some happiness and she could find it if she wasn't so Psycho!!!!!
So glad that Edward mentioned the phone calls to Emmett, hope we get to the bottom of that before too much longer, but even if it takes a while it's intriguing to guess and presume who it be.
Thanks for the clarification in your last author's response to me that Bella is NOT leaving the Spa completely that's nice to know.
Hummm can I make a guess or prediction here? With Kitten being so insatiable as it were, hummm could it be....just saying, it wouldn't hurt my thougts or feelings any if this were the case, but.....could she be oh, lets say......preggers????!!!!! That would be a nice and interesting plot into this wonderful story..........
Let's picture this, we have a Vixen Kitten and Devilish Spartan.....with raging hormones in tow, Wow!!! Couldn't you do alot with that????
Till next chapter, please know how wonderful your writing style and creative minds just THRILL the readers, this one for sure!!!
Have a nice weekend, Cheers!
Laters BB's
Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Im sooo happy u liked the columbus part...i wasnt sure how people would take that scenario.....maybe TMI for some people but people like it. Yes we wanted to have some part without Ang....next part does...but I personally love the next one. And Bella pregnant....honestly few people have asked...and we could put that in the story...I think it will be a last minuter...if it feels right it feels right. Yah bella is just cutting down her hrs and stuff.. Hope you enjoy part 2
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2
Hummmm yes, where is that miserable mongrel!!! Oh, I'm sorry not Mongrel that was rude, I meant WEAZLE!!!!
Okay Emmett was too funny in the Jewelry Store, that was cute. Kinda hard to imagine that Ang and her friend just ACCIDENTLY dumped into Edward... Cant stand her either. It was so nice that he told that friend soon to be EX don't ya mean... Maybe we will get really lucky in this story and Ang will drop off the face of the earth or someone will wack her and then he won't have to worry about a divorce at all. :-) hehehehe!!!
Loved the Chapter can't wait for more, and DLIR, I have become a BIG fan of your story DLIR as well... so looking forward to updates on this story and the other one too. Ari hope all is getting easier for you... You two are very talented and enjoyn your work emensley!!!
LatersBB
Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks honey...xoxoxoxo......we love writing this story....and we enjoy writing the two POV's . Thats why we need to both be in writing mode. I havent talked to Ari in a bit so Im hoing she is okay. Im so happy you have been enjoying both the stories. My sister is working on the next DLIR so u should have that next. xoxoxox not sure if u want a teaser so Im giving it to u anyways LOL
soxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxo DLIR AND ARI MUAH MUAH
"Bella?"
I stopped walking and turned to look at who was calling me. "What’s he want?" Jessica whispered to me.
"I don’t know." I walked towards the security desk. I smiled at the guy I have said hi to on more than one occasion.
He smiled at Jessica and lifted his hand to her. "Hi, I'm Mike," he introduced himself.
Mike, that’s his name.
Jessica giggled as she shook his hand. I knew that giggle. She was crushing on Mike. "Hi, I’m Jessica."
I stood beside her, deciding to stay quiet until they were done their introductions. "So you wanted to talk to me Mike?" I placed the bags I was carrying down on the desk top as did Jess.
His facial expression turned serious, his smile wiped away as he stood up from his chair and leaned closer to Jessica and I. "Um, well," he looked at Jessica.
"Whatever you have to say you can say in front of Jess," I clarified, feeling my heart race. He was starting to freak me out.
He looked at me now, nodding his head. "I don’t know you that well, but I'd like to think were kinda friends since we say hello every day. I mean, you have always been nice to me so I only find it right for me to tell you this."
I furrowed my brows as he looked over my shoulder, and then his, clearly making sure no one was around.
"An Angela Masen came to me today."
My heart dropped to my stomach. I stood still lungs deflated, no attempt to fill them.
"What the fuck did she want?" Jessica grabbed my hand as I said nothing. I barely functioned, let alone, comprehended what he was telling us.
"She actually tried to come on to me." He laughed a little which quick started my heart to life. I need to breathe to live. "Well after that failed attempt I noticed her staring at the monitors." He turned and pointed to the six screens that videoed various parts of the building. "She asked me if I had access to all the videos that were recorded and if we actually keep them. I had no idea why she was asking until she mentioned her husband."
I gasped, placing my hand over my mouth. "She wanted to know if I personally could help her. Maybe if I have seen Mr. Masen with any type of woman."
I shook my head not wanting to hear this.
"She offered me a lot of money. I mean A Lot." He started fidgeting with some papers. My eyes came down to see a small video cassette sitting under the papers he was purposely moving. He folded the paper, slipping the tape in the middle, placed it on the desk, sliding it towards me. "No one else has seen it and I plan on keeping it that way."
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick
Holy Shit!
Author's Response:
LOL holy shit is right. It's about to hit the fan with some hardcore force.
Thank you for your review!
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Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period
Hi -
Another fantastic Chapter thanks so much! Yay!!!! He filed for default... so now he's pissed, it's about time. Ang and her wicked ways, sorry ho had been cheating on him from the beginning of this story and now that he wants a life she wants to be a Biotch. I don't think so.... And Eric what's up with that, Oh Oh!!! Just can't wait for the next part of this chapter.
Always so mysterious!!!d :-) As always much love to the both of you and looking forward to more!!! Hang in there and know that this story is truly loved.
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies
Damn Ladies: Didn't even make it past the AN before you had me waking the neighbors laughing here: "After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles." Now that is hysterical shit! Are you two moving into stand up comedy now???
Oh and in response to: Men should be like Kleenex, soft, strong and disposable. HELL YES AMEN!!!!!
Welcome back ARI, you were Missed but DLIR does great work so things didn't suffer, however YOU WERE MISSED.. Wow that Ang is the craziest of Bitches! I just loved it when Edward called Ang a money grubbing Whore! Priceless! ;-) She is!
Eric hummmm I wonder where he really is. this is kinda a creepy! Glad Edward is going to set Momma straight...
Nighty Night all, as always this was fantastic,
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxo
Author's Response:
LOL huh what do you think DLIR? Should we move on to comedy? Nah then we would have to give up SMW and that just aint goin happen :) Awe thank you I've missed everyone on here so damn much! Ang is a money grubbing whore. I'm not sure where Eric has been hiding out. But he's just creepy anyways! Oh yes Edward is goin sit Momma straight and not be so nice about it.
Hope you had a good nights rest!
Thank you for your review!
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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Hi DLIR and Ari - Great kick ass chapter here. My My My I just did not see that coming at all! Really! So Shrew is not Edwards Mother, well that's really something! I am so hoping that he can get the upper hand on "The Shrew" and not have her getting over on him with some Damn Technicality or another. That would truly suck rocks, big time.
I think the Masquerade Ball is a set up of some sort not sure about that. I can tell you think, SMW keeps you on your toes with the intrigue and wondering what the hell is coming next, I love it.....
Okay till next chapter and I'm very grateful for all of your updates BTW. Have a good one, Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks babe...we like twisting things up and throwing things around..honestly we have a outline of where and what happens but even when we read one anothers parts we are both surprised and excited to read what the other conjured up. Part 2 is great and I cant wait for u to read it
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2
Ari - I should say you are back with a Wonderful Fierce Full Throttle!! Mercy heaven's sakes alive, Kitten was HOT, and Spartan was Hotter, he was... Well look at this picture for this chapter, shit that tells it all.
Guys this was a fantastic chapter and love seeing our Little couple get all kinds of kinky fuckery going on.
Loved the tips on what not to say to a Police Officer, No, YOU assume the position. then shall we not leave out DLIR: How long is this going to take? Your wife is expecting me.
So funny all - Hey have a good one and glad your back ARI....
Till next time - Laters BB Kathy xoxo
You both are my hero's You rock!!!!
Author's Response:
Did you hear that DLIR?? We're Kathy's heros! Hot damn that's just awesome! We are so glad you loved the chapter and the not to tips LOL. I'm so happy I'm back!
Thank you sweetie for your awesome as hell reveiw! We love hearing the pure awesomness that is your reveiws :)
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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted
Wow! Well now it's Esme, that's the "she" they were talking about at the end. Ijust know it. Okay so I was wrong about the Bitch Ang, but you must admit you set US ALL up pretty good. We are all suuuucccckka's are we?! Pretty much, think so.
Damn, I don't blame E for thinking that Ang took B, but because of his actions now the phones battery is dead and no telling how much longer before they find them. Esme did say that she would get Edwards Money since that's all she has ever been interested in.
Drats, Drats and Triple Drats!!!! Okay .... deep calming breaths, calming down some... More Please.... More chapters Please.... yes, yes, Im not too proud to beg....
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Hiya Kathy!
Esme is pretty out there. But do you relly think she is smart enough to pull that off? We did sit everyone about Ang. Nah y'all aren't sucka's LOL The next chap is done...well I just need to add a few words here and there then it will be done!
Thanks for your review sweetie!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl
Wow! Thanks for the wonderful chapter update!!! Yes, I am impressed for sure. Almost felt sorry for Esme! Notice I said ALMOST! Well so Carlilse did sacrifice for Esme's daughter in the end didn't he... At least we know that Esme truly love somone in her life, Angela!
Great chapter, I bet you make the 1k mark with reviews.... crossing fingers, toes, eyes and all body parts hoping you do...
TTFN - Kathy xoxoxoxo
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale
***laughing to hard to write**** "Run ARI…their coming…SAVE YOURSELF."
Seriously now~ I hate that Carlilse is dead and how it happened, and that Bella diddn't think about how much Edward was suffering too! Not just Angela, but okay consider this. Angela and Bella were friends before all the SHIT STORM of love and lust with Spartan, infidelity, stalking and kidnappings. It stands to reason they bonded during their time of darkness and not knowing if they were going to live, then you top that off with Angela just discovered during this ordeal that Esme was her biological mother, to only have "Said person shoot's herself right in front of her", well HELL that would be enough to make even ME (a total Ang hater) want to hug her. So.... I think that given time and hopefully alot of wonderful creative writing on the illustirous part of writing genius that are DLIR & ARI, I am hopeful that our Hearth Stopping Gorgeous Hunk of a Man Edward aka Spartan will come to his senses and forgive Bella... Holy Hell what a Damn ending to that chapter.
May I just say I was sitting here stunned I couldnt seem to move the page and read the A/N and when I saw it I just fell over laughing..... that is why I started this off with telling you I was laughing... Seriously You BOTH are way way toooooo Much... Love ya though that's for sure..... Have a good one.... TTFN.... Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
hahahahh i had sooooooooooo much fun writing the A/N hehehehe
I know killing carlisle and having bella go to Angela pissed a few readers but we have our reasonings..........hope u like where we bring our story for its finale
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Weeping Willow
Well I can't say that I am over joyed with Edward right now! But!!!!! I understand that he is just completely torn up right now.... I have to say I didn't think I was going to be able to find humor in this chapter, but HELL IF I DIDN'T you all are incredible writers!!! That was some funny assed shit with his dream!!!!
I know that he will come to his senses eventually, and I'm still not convinced that Bella's not preggers... wouldn't that be a lovely twist for him to find out that he left her pregnant and not allowing himself all the happiness that they could be sharing together as a family... After all his Mother and Father didn't take life for granted they loved fiercely while they could..... Just saying that I love this story and we all know our Spartan can think out of his ASS sometimes and NOT necessarily in the best way.
So glad your back writing and posting again and hope all is well with the two of you!!! Good to hear from your wicked minds.... :-) TTFN Kathy xoxoxo
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Weeping Willow part 2
okay i will say it DLIR whoop whoop two chapters in two days....
well thank all the powers that be he finally got over his spoilt hurt childish behavior and woke up sweet jumping tree frogs FINALLY!!!!
Love to you both have a wonderful one!!!!!!
TTFN Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Good Lawyer
Em is too funny and Tony hey he is the new bomb of teasin, right!! Finally, he asked her... Yay!!! Kitten should make him sweat with the answer... NOT!! I'm joking... hey how about a theme engagement party.. get it Spartan and Kitten... LOL!!!! So bittersweet that we are getting closer to the end of the story.. but what an amazing story it has been.. so till next chapter hope you both are well... much love...and appreciation.... Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Hey Kathy!
I know we don't want to see the story end :( Tony is the man LOL. I know he finally asked her. I was starting to think we would need to smack him around a few times. Next chap will be up soon!
Thank you soooo much BB for your review!
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