Reviews by JGM1721
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 12: The New VIP

This story rocks.  You have a great story plot going here and I am just reading away to find out what happens next.  Kind of like a good cheesy movie-- I absolutely can not pass one of those up.  This story is adorable.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick

Love it when the bad boys get their comeuppance!  Can't wait to see what's next in store!

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

Great chapter!!  And I was surprised at the baby's sex.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

The slow communication and the lack of technology that we take for granted today, must have truly made lives miserable during this time.  You have done a great job of staying with the historical period here.  Cigarette advertisements in women's magazines promised benefits to digestive health with smoking!  I have a few of those old magazines in my collection and they are a hoot to read.  LOL.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

What a neat and precious tale.  I am a bit sad here to see that Esne and Carlisle were stolen away much too soon.  This story was so well-written and done in a way that transports the reader back in time. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174120
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Infinity

Transferred over here from the "other site."  I guess I like to read about it all and not the "watered down" version!  LOL.  This story is fanfastic.  I am really enjoying it.  This chapter was really beautiful too.  

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....

The story is fantastic.  Great love story-- wonderful read.

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

This story is really good.  It is well-written and as a NASCAR fan myself a few years back-- very well done.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

Wow!!  This story is fantastic.  It is hard to believe you write fanfiction.  This was so well-written-- and the plot was exciting.

I have been power-tripping through all your stories this week.  You are a spectacular writer, and I thank you so much for sharing with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the awesome reviews.  YOu know, I've been lucky too...by doing this fanfiction writing, I ended up getting published through the TWCS Publishing House as well.  I still write FF for fun and to write the things I come up that would mortify my Mom to read...LOL.  Thanks for your words of encouragement.  I know I took a lot of creative license, so I'm glad it rang relatively true for a real fan :)  Thanks again for taking the time to let me know what you thought!

 

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

Only one review per chapter-- so I am having to back track a chapter:

You really nailed the NASCAR world.  As a racing fan, I found your story so relatable in many ways.  This story is well worth reading again as are your other stories as well.  Phenomenal writer!

Summary: Past Featured Story

A year ago, Isabella Swan was new at school and instantly gained acceptance. Unfortunately, a certain bronze haired new kid isn't so lucky. Hidden friendships slowly build and blossom into more. Will it be social suicide? Rated M for language, will eventually go up.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90319 Read Count: 21077
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Lovely story!!  I loved this.  Thank you!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42788
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Full Circle

Absolutely wonderful story!!  Full of action-- great plot and characters



Author's Response:

yay! i'm so glad you enjoyed it.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wonderful story.  And I managed to read it at just the right time as Christmas season is just starting to kick off.  The story is as your others- well-written with great fleshed-out characters.  Such a short sweet tale.

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Bella was a teacher at San Bernardino High. What started as a class project slowly becomes something more. Edward is fighting in Afghanistan when he receives a letter that will change his life. What happens when love blooms through letters?

This story has over 800 reviews on FanFiction.net!

thanks to LissyLock for the beautiful banner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39298 Read Count: 47010
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 23 Oct 2011
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

This was such a neat little story.  Lots of action to carry the plot.  It is a fast read and well worth it.  Thanks for sharing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 How I Got Here

LOL.  Yeah she sure has a bit of explaining to do!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419191
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loving this story!  Charlie is horrible, poor Bella has had to endure lots of abuse from those around her.  But in case, it has been worth a bit of pain-- especially if she ends up with Edward.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter: Two

Oh wow!  Charlie and Renee are horrible parents.  This poor girl.  At least Edward is taking an interest in her.  No one else seems to give a rip about her.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The last Bella that I read of yours was crapped on just like this Bella is.  I feel really badly for her.  She's so sweet and no one cares about her.  Jessica is the bitch in this story.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

I can't believe how this girl literally gets kicked to the curb at every turn by all the idiots surrounding her.  She just takes it.  Her parents are horrible.  This Charlie is a really bad one.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I always wonder about this lifestyle.  I have only read of it in fanfiction which always has classy, good-looking people.  I just wonder how it compares to real life BDSM.  LOL.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am a big one for payback.  These people in her life are horrible to her.  They need to suffer the consequences of their actions.  I can't believe how mean they are to her.  Jessica is a slutty little wench who needs to be beat into submission.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

These people need to be smacked down-- they are horrible.  What on earth did Bella ever do to deserve this sort of treatment?

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh, I know the cruelty towards her hasn't stopped yet.  Jacob and crew are sure to have something planned and this will add to the drama.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That stupid Tanya will probably hook up with Jake and crew and do something terrible to Bella.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

It is nigh time that we have a good James and Victoria!  The karma was fantastic.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Very good story, girls.  Thanks for putting it out here.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159748
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That poor girl-- being so brave and asking him out-- only to be turned down.

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This Bella I feel sorry for-- she seems to be all alone- both parents dead and she doesn't have a high opinion of herself.

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

My heart goes out to her-- she is a glutton for punishment.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

For the sake of the story-- his reading that journal was necessary.  I think in reality most people would read it, but they would never own up to that!

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

She really shouldn't have agreed to be in that wedding.  Those two are just taking advantage of her and will probably make a joke of her at the wedding.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Why that girl seems to think she even needs to give them the time of day is beyond me.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Seriously-- it is well beyond time she was done with that bunch.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Starting out as friends is always a good thing, I think.

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

He's got some weird ideas.

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Pushy friends, eh?

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

He is a bit thick-headed, isn't he?  He doesn't realize that not all women are going to be like that last girlfriend of his.  Bella understands it because her dad lived that life.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Jacob and Leah are such losers.  Edward has a thick head, it seems.  His thinking is skewed.

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward is so stupid.

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Looks like he finally learned how to think rationally.  I wonder what she's going to say.  Maybe she doesn't know about the baby either. Hmmm

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I would hope she believes him, but she was sort of dense when it came to Jacob-- I just hope she finally sees things the way they are.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

He is a changed man!  LOL

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am happy for Bella.  Things weren't going well for her and her only friend was that stinking Jacob who treated her worse than dirt.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I hate the way Mike talked about her.  That is just plain cruel.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh boy, I can't wait to read about Jacob and Leah again.  They just talk smack.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This was a very lovely story and I enjoyed reading it.  It was a different Bella for a change and different dynamics.  I ended up really liking the good characters-- the bad asses?  Not so much!

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great story!  Karma sure is a bitch, isn't it Jacob?  LOL.  Loved what Bella said to both Jacob and Emily at the end.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478781
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Jasper probably should be suspicious, but it's only because she is obviously way smarter than he is. LOL.  I just lauged when she admitted to Edward that his security was bad and that she could get around it.  That's hilarious.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love this Bella too!  She is hilarious, and Donkey for Jessica?  Priceless.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I haven't a clue as to who she is and I could guess anyone of the ones already out there.  I am clueless.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Who is she really?  She is smarter than anyone around her and is a technology genius-- which is a huge talent to have, I would say.

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Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Between keeping all the nicknames straight and trying to figure out who and what Bella really is, my head is sort of spinning.  LOL.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yeah that reaction was sort of weird.  One would think that would cause him to deflate, but I guess not.  LOL.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Holy Hannah!!  My head is literally spinning!

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

She has got some kick ass technology!