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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3520]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1582671
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

What a chapter. So much drama is unfolded.

I can't believe Carlisle is so cruel, to his son, to his wife and the females in general.

I just hope, that Edward behaves and doesn't go overbroad with Bella.

Poor Bella. She landed in this mess without real option of a way out.

Somehow I think, that Edward, Jasper and Emmett should put Carlisle in the basement without food and a good beating, that he learns his place in the world and knows how cruel it is. That would be fun to see, him breaking.

Anyway, really good chapter as always.

 

Marrojeanne

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I was so scared for Bella, with what would Edward do to her. But he handled the situation quite well. I just hope that her locking away, will keep Carlisle and the other really away from her.

Apart from that, it was again a great chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

What an intense chapter. With this twist of events I am pretty speechless, what to write.

In the first half of the chapter I thought, that is is time for Edward to get his head in the game again, but than the kidnapping of Bella. The way you write you can make your reader really fear for Bella. I just hope, that Edward arrives in time to save Bella.

I am also thinking about a possible ending. At the moment I can imagine/wish for  endings:

  1. Carlisle becomes normal and sees that his actions were just wrong and everyone has their HEA.
  2. Carlisle dies and everyone is free from his clutches and can live the HEA
  3. Edward, Bella, Jasper, Alice, Emmet, Rose and Esme can escape and start living somewhere different with new identities.
  4. Or something entirely different.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 122037
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Really nice chapter and the growling  is really nice, that so two mates can call each other. It seems that Bellas shield ability is quite potent, even as a human. Can't imagine how strong it will be, when she is turned. dIt's great to see Bella help Edward calm down, when he is ready to attack everyone to keep her save. I guess it would be nice for Bella to get some sleep, it can't be good to be awake for this long time. Especially with what happened in this time.

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Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Wow, you definetely know, how to place a cliff-hanger. If it wasn't enough that the arrival of Bellas Mom is highly awaited, now the Volturi are also there. Probably to know, what happened to their experiment.

Pretty excited what will happen next. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Thank god she didn't need to go with Paul! It is so great, that Edward and Bella are reunited. It was really cool, that you found/invented an equivalent to imprinting for wolfs with our favorite vampires.



Author's Response:

I wanted to try out something new with the mating call. I'm glad it's being well recieved. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ha, Edwards gift is turned "against" him. That is funny. Especially when you have to read this paragraph for 5 times or so, to completely get the meaning (as a not native english speaker).

It is definetly an interesting thing, that Bella as a human is perhaps able to use Edwards gift on him. The question is, if this works just when they are intimate or if it works on a regular basis, and if the other (Cullen) have experienced this too. But I don't think, because, if they got the gift of their mate it would have been mentioned.

Now the question is, when Bella is finally turned, what extra ability she has, the same as in twilight or something new? Although I like her shield-abilty.

Like I said in a previous commet, I like that you give your story a new extra within the whole vampire universe.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Seems like Bella's shield works a little bit different than in Twilight. Probably blocking everything out, like Alice and her visions, while allowing Edward thoughts to enter her mind and also blocking Edwards ability when he is in her "bubble".

That it really cool, I can't imagine how strong or potent this ability will be, when she is turned.



Author's Response:

I'm tweaking things a bit...

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

And so the hunt begins. Somehow it is funny, to see an Edward who embraces his inner-beast that much like your Edward. He is much more animalistic.

I just hopes he accepts that Bella might (probably) has a special gift/ability, which is already manifestered in her human life. It is the opposite of Edwards. I am curious, when Bella is turned, if she has more power/gifts or just her shield from Edward and other mental attacks from other vampires?



Author's Response:

She will not be a "super" vampire. Just the one gift. There's a reason it's manifesting early...

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow, what a hunt. That was really great, especially the maze. Somehow I imagined the maze from the 4th Harry Potter movie :)

Bella had let out her inner beast also, to claim Edwards, that is so great. For being a human she has extraordenairy strength, but with a vampire mate it should be expected. Now they can communicate with each other via thoughts (probably on special occasions, when one of them feels like it ?!)

I really like the growl, that is such a unique detail to the story. I guess I mentioned it earlier in one (or more) reviews.

I am excited, what will happen next.



Author's Response:

The ability to communicate will be explained soon. It's not normal, but Edward is too caught up in the hunt to care right now. He's enjoying the extra layer of intimacy it's giving them.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Now we have a purr and a growl to call each others mate. How cute ^___^

And in Edwards presence it is normal that Bella gets hot, so with her very own and personall cooler at hand, Edward shouldn't be surprised that Bella seeks hes cold skin out.

 

Nice chapter.



Author's Response:

You'll begin getting a few answers in the next chapter...

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Nice chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

As long as this story is being finished, I don't mind the long wait between the chapters much. 

The little background information was also really helpfull to understand how the Swan-Family is involved in the whole thing between werewolves and vampires.



Author's Response:

I started this story for my youngest daughter, so I have to finish it. Trust me, she stays on my back about updates worse than anyone. :)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33

Bella the mate of Felix?! Are you crazy? The poor girl could now be the mate for Paul, Felix and Edward. OMG. fortunately she is mated with Edward, who will do everything in his power to protect her. And of course the Cullens too.

So many twists and turns, that nobody would have thought.

I am excited, how everything will play out.



Author's Response:

Her life does seem a bit complicated doesn't it? Don't worry it's still an E/B story with a HEA.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Bella struggels to understad what had happened to her and tries to get her feelings in order as well as how others might feel, regarding of the "experimentation". Do they love her because of despite of this. But fortunately Edward was able to get to her and convince her, that he loves her unconditionally and that they were made for each other.

I am excited, to see, what will happen next.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Bella needs to feel that same level of trust and confidence that Edward does that their love is real and rock solid. She's going to need that faith...

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Wow, slowly Bella is becoming a vampire, without knowing it. At least it is a less painfull method, than the usual bite. And she gets more pleasure from it. I mean, who wouldn't want to be kissed by Edward ;)

Well I am curious, what light Renee's arrival will shed to the whole vampire experimenting with humans/mystique legends.

 

Until the next chapter.

 

And good luck for you and and your family.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it. There's more going on than they know...

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Yes, I am till with you and the story ;)

 

I wouldn't be surprised, if the gentlemen, that Bella met, was Aro from the Volturi. But than I am curious, why Alice has not seen him in her visions.

The story of Renee was very heartbreaking, but at least it enlightens her decisions and hopefully Bella can understand her a little bit more. Very tragic the whole episode was.

With the last sentence I would assume, that maybe Paul followed Renee and Bella in his wolf-form and now, that he heard the whole story is even more angry, that Bella is not his imprint.

But I guess I have to see until the next chapter is out. :)

 

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 295045 Read Count: 65024
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Rhapsody

Finally they talked before it got too heated between them. and now there is mostly everything said for these two about their fears and the rumors around them. Hopefully Bella will believe that Edward just wants to protect her from the media and let her in his family. The meeting of the families should also be interesting in the future.

Very heartwretching chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you... I'm sorry for the dealy in responding to this review. I hope you forgive once I post the next chapter (posting very soon) xx

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Suite

Wow with something like this I didn't count to happening.Just when I think, that Bella will meet "Hurricane Alice" ( ;-) ), you are putting Eedward in a hospital. I just hope, that when Edward will wake up, he doesn't have anamnesia, that would be really cruel for Bella.

Hopefully Alice can help Bella to see things a little bit more positiv.

Somehow I am curious, what happened to Rosalie. Is she worse than Edward are better? Well at least she got probably some kind of attention from Emmett.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review... yes, Hurricane Alice lol and Edward... 

Next chapter is almost ready for me to post, I won't say anything about that (tee-hee), except, he won't lose him memory, that would be really, really cruel and horrible for them both!

Sorry it's taken me so long to update...I hope to see you back here soon.

 

Luv BBxx

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Crescendo

Finally they are really going to talk to each other and hopefully not leaving anything unsaid or with just half truths.

Kate's idea is really great, that way it gives them a chance to talk without interruption and they can just focus on themselfs.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Coda

When Bella is with Edwad she believes him, but as soon as she is alone she begins to doubt his intensions again. She should start to believe him and stop second guessing him. I mean it is understandable that he wants to keep their relationship quiet/secret for now. I is a famous actor with no real private live. Doesn't she understands this, that he also wants to protect her????

I just hope that the confrontation between Edward and Rosalie will be good and that he also tells his publicists what he wants and not be a puppet in their game.

I am curious, which friend Bella will visit. Hopefully this one will make her see reason. I mean she doubts Edward constantly. He doesn't want to have sex (because there is no condom) and she doubt his intentions, when he is just responsible. I would say it would not be good if Bella gets pregnant. She is not really ready for this step. Although Edward would be there for her.

When they meet in the restaurant, they definetly need to talk more without making out.

Till the next chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Sextet

Wow, finally the happy ever after is in reach.

Bella is officially now Edwards girlfriend, they get married and they have a house to live in.

Probably Bella will find her muse again in the new house and become known for her work with her book instead of known because of association.

Even Rosalie might get her happily ever after, with Emmett at her site.

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Unison

Nice chapter. Nearly all walls within Bella are down, now the happily ever after can happen. But I guess some more small obstacles are in their way.

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Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Addendum

Such a worse part for the cliff hanger.

Somehow now Riley seems not to be such a bad guy, but he broke Bellas heart for his own selfish reasons. Although his reasons are understandable, I hope Bella will stay with Edward and that he can convince her, that they should be together forever.

There will be probably a great turmoil, when Riley arrives in Canada and sees Bella with Edward. Can't wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Turmoil, is a great word, can I use it? lol

 

Next chapter is written and with my beta, so posting as soon as she comes back to me :)

 

Thanks for reading, luv BBxx

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Grace Note

Finally they could sort their feelings out and nothing is standing between them due to miscommunication, misunderstanding and misinterpretation.

Well now only Edward has to thell her the story of alice and her gift and everything is going to be okay.

When Edward entered Bellas room and the luggage of charlie and Elaine was there. It would have been pretty funny, when these two were getting their freak on and Edward would have heard it. First making the wrong assumptions again, until Elaine moanded the name of Charlie. With wich Edward would be totally confused. Than Bella would enter the room, because she thought her dad and future step-mother would be else where. than the moaning continues and everything is just slightly surreal for Bella and Edward.

 

Than the "Meet the parents" would be pretty interesting. ;)

 

Anyway, I am glad, that Bella and Edward could get past their issues and can go forward now.



Author's Response:

That would have been a very interesting scene to write! Lol

Next up, Efward Meryl g Charlie (fully clothed) in the VIP bar! LoL

 

hugs and kisses,

 

luv BBxx

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Nocturne

Shortly I thought that Bella lets her doubts get the best of her, but fortunaltely she believed, what her heart said and believed in herself and Edward.

It is great that Charlie was so welcoming to Edward. Now nothing can go wrong. And Riley is finally also out of the picture. He will probably also get his "happily ever after", just without Bella.



Author's Response:

Hmmm, you would think it would be smooth sailing from here? Riley is out of the picture...Edward has met Charlie and Elaine...now on to Bella meeting Alice :)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Serenade

Really nice chapters the last two ones.

 

Bella took control of the situation and hopefully everything will work out for Edward and Bella. It would be interesting to see the reactions of fans and press about her reveal.

 

I am curious, what will Emmett tell Edward about his talk with Rosalie, must have been quiet a (sap-)story, to turn Emmett to Rosalie.

 

And a proposal will be there in the future, I am so excited, what will Edward to to ask Bella the question of all question. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 362232
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

Great story so far. And it is nice to have a look of Edwards mind.

I can't wait to see the first meeting between Edward and Bella. But this will take some time.

A funny thing would be a random meeting between those two.

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

Bella loves Tony (Edward) truly. I can't imagine how her reaction will be, when she meets her husband the prince at her wedding day and realize it is her "lost" love!

The chapter was nice. I am looking forward for the next one.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

What a bad boy prince Edward is. Tries to cheat to get a glimpse of the princess. *tsk tsk tsk*

Thats so cool, can't wait to see that Bella tries something similar.

Apart from this, I think you did a very good job in expressing Edwards aversion towards Charlies behaviour. It is a good thing, that Bella has a chance to escape such a treatment.

I just hope that the king will permitt, that Angela travels with Bella.

 

Otherwise I really liked the chapter. Keep going.

 

See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

Aw, finally they got together!

And with the way you described it, was it very romantic and heartrendering. Also the anticipation to the final moment when Bella and Edward could see each other and the reaction of both was so great.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

Like always a great chapter.

I must say you are doing a very good job with writing in third person narration. It is unusual for a twi-fic, but it is a welcomed alternation.

Another thing that I really like is, that you try to write in old english, which means your use of words is not like we talk today and also not so vulgar or foul-mouthed, especially during the lemon. That was quite nice to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks...it's difficult at times to keep the language right.  I slip often into my modern colloquialisms and have to catch myself.  At first the third person was hard to write, but now I'm having a hard time getting out of it.  My other currently updating story, The Wallflower and The Flyboy is first person and I've had to go back and edit several chapters because I kept slipping back into third...lol.  I'm finding I really enjoy writing in third person.  It opens you up to so much more development of the understanding of what is going on around the characters when you can take sneak peeks into each of their thoughts as you develop the chapter.  It's so much better than having to try to write the scene from another POV later if something important was happening in someone else's head and removes that repetitive feel.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

It was great to have a glimpse in the mind of Charlie. Now his actions towards Bella are a little bit understandable.

 

I cant wait, what Bella and Edward will experience in England and what obstacles they have to endure.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

So they are in England.

I really liked the history lesson in this chapter, whether it is actual history or fake doesn't matter. It is good to see that you look beyond the rim of your teacup to create an overall picture of the story.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

Like you said, a little fluff chapter, which was great. It is good to see the love of Edward and Bella to each other. I can't wait what kind of "adventures" those two will experience in the future.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

I would say, let the fun begin. ;)

The upcoming life at court will probably be a rollercoaster of emotions for both, Edward and Bella. It seems, that his previous conquests will roughen the life of them, especially with Tanya in the picture. But it appears, that she (Tanya) was a little desillusioned that she could become the Queen of England.

The secret code was a great idea. So they can always connect in a way without everyone else to know. So sweet.

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

So the three men must leave to France. It is really sad, but they have no other choice.

I wonder, when Emmett will meet his soul mate, because he seems really lonely without a wife at his side. Perhaps in France he gets to meet Rosalie?

Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

It is great, that Bella gets the chance to sit by the council and that her view will be valued.

I really liked, that Bella tries to ignore the rumors about her relationship with Edward, because she knows the truth.

I really enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

It was a great chapter. The whole family starts preparing to ensure the safety of each other. The blade for Edward was a great idea and will probably be very usefull in the future.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

Such a sweet chapter, especially the ending. I would say, this will be a great christmas.

Good job!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

Such a dramatic chapter. But very good descripted.

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

So sad, but such a great ending. Finally they are united in heaven again.

It was good how you wrapped everything up and mentioned what happend to the rest of the family.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 59591
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This story looks quite promising and interesting.

It looks as if Edward now wants to be a part of Bellas and the childs life.

I am curious how the story will develop.

 

Marrojeanne

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You

Edward is such an asshole.

But it is a nice change of plot, because in the typical Bella/Edward stories there is always Edward the nice guy, who picks Bella up after being shattered by some other guy, preferable James, Mike or Jacob.

 

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart

It is nice to see, that Edward is changing. Even with baby steps.

It is quite obvious to me, that he overthinks everything too much but therefore comes to all the wrong conclusions.

Lets see, what you have else in store.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Friends

The chapter was so sweet, especially the last part. *wipes tears away*

Edwards redeems with Bella, but I fear, that there will be a next blow-up from him.

As I said, great chapter and great story.

Diamond Man by SatansDarkAngel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.

 

banner was made by Wickedlovely731

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 62983
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This chapter was again, really good, especially the atmosphere you create with the characters and setting. The songs of Christina Aguilera that Bella sings fit the story perfectly. It is so much fun to read it and to imagine the show.

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by xrxdanixrx

Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 69426
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This story as well as this chapter are great. I just read the whole in one rush and it is very good. I really like the story-line and also where this could probably lead. The end of this chapter is really an interesting cliff hanger, I can't wait to find out, how things will continue.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I can imagine, that Rosalie might have a few problems with dating Emmett, because she is his supervisor. So it seems, that Bella and Rosalie (and Alice?) are in the same boat. But Rosalie can be a very good addition to team "Ball Crushers".

It will be interessting, how things will go on in and out of school.

Good chapter, I enjoyed reading.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Pretty intense chapter, especially the end. I just hope for Bella that her effort with James will pay off and not be a dead end, this would be really cruel.

Off to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Quick bonding time for the boys over beer and sports. Quite funny. You did a good job with describing Edwards anxiety for Bella. It will be very interesting, how te next chapters are. I mean James will not back off so easily.

It is funny, that Emmett always keeps tabs on Bella when she is meeting a suspect without her knowledge.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter12

I am really looking forward how Bella will try to keep her relationship with Edward under cover, now that James know. Too bad he had to see them. But he is really sick in his mind with his regard of the hole situation.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Such a sweet chapter and reunion. At least Bella will not let go of Edward and I am positive that they sort things out.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

You really know, how to keep the readers. So much suspence, so many unexpected turns of events. During this chapter I thought, that Agent Reed is somehow involved with Aro and it looks like he is.

Really cool chapter.

Summary:

Bella thinks Edward hates her. Edward knows sometimes things never go as planned, especially with distractions like Bella Swan to deal with. Can these two turn a heap of wrongs into a right?confoundedcourtship" alt="counfounded courtship" />


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12397 Read Count: 912
[Report This] Published: 23 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is so funny, with the whole misscommunication and missinterpretation. Bella and Edward could really be pitied. But in the end the finally got together. All the pain pays off.

Anyway, I just wanted to add, that I really liked this story, because the emotions, thoughts, motives etc. came really good across. It was a joy to read. also the switching of POVs was cool, whenever something happened to one of them the other (of course) interpreted it differently. So cool!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 120023
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Third Year - The First Six Months

Cool chapter. I think it is the first time, that I read a story, in which Alice and Rosalie are so unsupportive. Normally they are always on cloud nine with Bella, but here they act totally stupid. They should give Bella and Edward the benefit of a doubt and try to be happy for them.

The "love triangle" of Charlie, Sue and Edward is kind of funny, especially that there is none and Edward is dating Bella ^____^



Author's Response:

Alice & Rosalie have issues of their own and with their boyfriends, but mostly they are used to Bella just going along with whatever they want and now that she and Edward are starting to go public that is changing and they don't like it.

Also, the 3 of them had huge crushes on Edward in high school and they used to talk about him - a lot.  They are shocked to see that she is actually with him considering they all used to fantaize about him.

Tanya loves to stir the pot and likes to give Edward hell, the love triangle is one example. 

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

What a sweet chapter. Their time in England was just great. I didn't know that some german aspects of christmas markets are adopted outside Germany like the Glühwein. So cool.

And the proposel with the following wedding was also a great moment in this chapter.

Can't wait for the reaction of Edwards mom. That should be "funny".



Author's Response:

I didn't realize Dickens had a German influence either until I started researching this.  I took some liberty with the dates - the festival is acutally in early December.

Thanks for reading - Beth

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 74532
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Really cool chapter, especially to see, that Edward cared for Bellas well being and that he got rid of Tanya. Her behaviour was inexcusable.

And Edward enjoyed a "simple" dinner at burger joint, what is probably not really his scene for dinning at all.

I just hope that Bella just slept in another room and not left Edwards home at all.

I am excited for the next chapter.

Summary:

 

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Bella is not supposed to date a cop like her father, but when she meets Deputy Cullen, that all goes out the window. They try to keep their relationship a secret while they can't keep their hands off each other.

My o/s entry in the FML contest from FF.net that made it into the top 20. Originally posted on FF.net 1/31/10.

Awesome banner by Robrator for thetwilightawards.com


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4554 Read Count: 1322
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2010 Updated: 23 May 2010
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That story might be interesting to see, how the conversation between Bella and Charlie went after he picked her up and how she and Edward will explain everything.

But somehow really funny, that they were lucky for a year and than the great coming out. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 244821
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow this story is great! I just started this evening and I couldn't stop reading. The relationship between Bella and Edward is so intense and emotional. They had truely not an easy way for their relationship.

It is so cool, that Edward finally mans up to stand besides Isabella and wants to be a part of her life and his son. There is so much drama around them, I just hope they are strong enough to survive this.

Whenever I thought it couldn't get worse the next problem knocked at the door.

The next chapter I will read tomorrow (or today, as it is past midnight here ;) ) and I can't wait.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

They finally talked about their issues. I am really glad that both want to start new. That is so great.

Lets see, what will happen next. Cool chapter!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Give them a rest. They deserve to be at least happy for a while. It could also be a longer while.

But the whole family sticks together and fights for their beloved. That is great. Lets see, what Charles has to say. It is good that he finally accepts Bella as a part of the family.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...

Bella is truli a part of the family now. It is good, that Charles finally sees that too.

Such a sweet chapter. Everyone is so loving now. The switching of POVs of Charles and Bella was good, because to motives especially of Charles were very good descripted. It is also good to see, that Edward forgives himself at least a little bit.

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 382135
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Dunn dunn din.. Some more drama will enfold, after the whole Jacob/Leah issue is (probably) finished now on with ex-girlfriends, who can't take a hint. (or was Tanya an ex-sub? I can't remember anymore).

Anyway, great chatper with lots of great Bella and Edward moments and also funny Edward and Mojo moments. These two are becoming brothers ;)

I just looked at the pictures in your blog, for this chapter and also for the next one. It looks pretty promising, can't wait for the next one.

The one with the title "Esme's dog brownie" is sooooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute, really lovely.

Can't wait till the chapter is out to read.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What┤s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

An update after so long. Great.

Anyway the chapter was fun to read, with the sexy time between Bella and Edward and also the activities with Seth. My guess is, that the next chapter is going to be funny, now that Leah and Jacob are back in the picture.

Also the pictures help very much for a visiual impression :)

See you next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  Checkout the blog for a teaser to chapter 18!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...

Edwards and Mojo/Cojo's interaction was soo funny. One minute best buddies and than when Bella is near they fight for her attention, real frenemies ;).

It is great that Bella want to move in with Edward but also wants to wait some time. Although her cautiousness is great it is totally anwarrant, because Edward is not going anywhere without her.

Probably Charlie busted them, because they took so long to come in, when they arrived. But I am not sure, I just hope, that whoever it was, didn't get to see to much of Edwards and Bellas activities. She would be mortified and embaressed.

Thanks for the chapter and until the next one.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

I just read the 4 chapters in one go and I must say this story has me hooked. I am really curious, how Edward and Bella will react, when they meet for the first time (in the play room).

As for the chapter: To see Bella and Alice plan the "destruction" of Jacob was kind of funny.

All in all a really great chapter and story.

As for the question, who safeworded, my guess is Edward because Tanya was enjoying herself to much, as that she would safeword.



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

Wow, Tanya seems to be really psycho. I guess she will be a problem in the future, but at least Edward is rid of her (for now).

The part with Esme was really sweet, especially her cryptic remarks to wait, I hope he will take the advice.

It seems that Edward is very demanding in this chapter, especially if he "forces" you to write the scene in the playroom even when you were safewording ;-)

It is going to very interesting. Keep going!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I´m glad your enjoying it. Edward is my Dom too, so I´ve gotta obey my Master... but he´s just so darn sexy! lol! We´ll see what happens.


Have a Happy Thanksgiving!!


Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

It's getting interesting. Both have it so bad for each other. I can't wait to find out, what will happen, when they realize, that the other is the one that tey want. Alice is a genius with her plan that both can communicate.

The internal dialogs of Bella (Edward) with themselves are so funny to read.



Author's Response:

  Lol!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Wow, the world seems so be very small. Halfway in the chapter I had a slightly suspicion that Leahs baby is Jacobs but that he introduced himself to her with is second name was just priceless.

The Bella/Seth moments were just sweet. It is good to see that Seth has now one real sister.

The phone date between sir and pet is probably going to be interesting, I am excited.



Author's Response:

You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing!  The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming!  For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter!  Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...

An interesting evening lies ahead of Bella, I would say. Probably also very informative for Edward too, seeing, that Peter and Charlotte are also in a vanilla relationship and not only Dom/Sub.

I am curious what kind of punishment Edward is inflicting on Bella.

That was probably just the first stop of the evening for them.

 

Nice images also. They complement the chapter very good.



Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay, but I took a much needed vacation, and my parents wouldn't allow me to write any smut while I was visiting them! Lol... Here's a peek at the next chapter! See you Tuesday!

Krazi

xoxo

 

 

Before knocking on the door, I took a moment to get in the right headspace. Once I walked through that door, I would no longer be the confident Dom I professed to be, my submission would belong to my mentor and former Master. Resigned and ready, I wrapped the heavy wooden door three times. “Come in,” Master Peter’s deep voice called from inside the room.

 

As if walking before a firing squad, all three of us entered the room with our heads tucked to our chests, and our hands clasped behind our backs. At first glance, one would think that we were three naughty students summoned to the headmaster’s office.

 

“Edward,” Master Peter said solemnly. “As good as it is to see you again; I am by no means pleased at the circumstances. Do you have anything to say for yourself?” Master Peter and I had already had this conversation, but he was still following protocol for the sake of the others that were present.

 

“Master Peter,” I started, swallowing around the sudden lump in my throat. “This one has failed to remember his teachings, and in doing so, has failed his collared submissive. This one comes before you fully aware of the ramifications of such an offense, ready to receive whatever punishment Master sees fit to dole out upon him.”

 

Try as she might, Isabella could not help but to react to my revelation. Her sharp intake of air came as no surprise, and did not go unnoticed by Master Peter. “Isabella,” Master Peter asked, addressing my submissive for the first time. “Is there something you’d like to say?” Just like I knew she would, Isabella remained as quiet as a church mouse. Peter, who had yet to get up from his chair, hummed in appreciation of her obedience before saying, “Well, Edward, you haven’t failed her too bad, she’s quite the respectful little one.” He then returned his attention to my girl. “Thank you for your obedience and respect for this Dom Isabella. Now, little one, you may look at me and speak. Having heard your Master’s declaration, do you have anything you’d like to to say?”

 

“Yes, Sir, Master Peter,” Isabella said in a quiet yet respectful tone. “This girl would simply like to say that she trusts her Master blindly, and if Master has chosen to bring this girl here with him tonight, for this purpose, then so be it. Master knows best, and would never knowingly or purposely put his girl in harm’s way. Master knows what is needed for me to become a better submissive, and this is it.”

 

“After hearing that, Edward, there should be no doubt in your mind that this little one is meant for you.” My heart clenched at his words, I couldn’t have said it better myself. “Come; let us not waste any more time.” With that, Master Peter led us all downstairs to his dungeon.

 

No stranger to Master Peter’s playroom, I made my way to the large ensuite bathroom to change. A modest black leather thong that would leave my ass bare was lying on the counter, and I wasted no time shedding my clothes and encasing my now deflated dick in the less than comfortable black pouch. As I made my way to the whipping bench, I could see Isabella and Charlotte kneeling on each side of the room.

 

Master Peter didn’t speak a word as he tended to the cuffs that would hold my wrists and ankles. Since we previously discussed what my punishment would be, Master Peter’s explanation was for his audience’s ears only.  “First, I will warm up the flesh with my leather paddle, and then the real punishment will commence. Edward has already chosen a rattan cane for his punishment, so once the skin is warmed and ready, I will administer ten licks which Edward will count out loud.” Returning his attention to Isabella, Master Peter gave her a command. “Isabella, for no reason are you to take your eyes off of this whipping bench. If at any point and time you feel unable to continue, you are to use your safe words. And they are…”

 

“Red, yellow, and green, Sir,” was Isabella’s quiet response.

 

“And what color are you now, Isabella?”

 

Silence hung thick in the air and for a moment, I thought she was going to say red.

 

Trust me, Isabella!

 

You need this!

 

I need this!

 

We need this!

 

I was having a mini meltdown when a sudden calm washed over me, almost as if I could feel Isabella touching me from the other side of the room. But it was her strong and steady voice that sealed the deal. “Green. I’m green, Sir. My Master knows exactly what we need.”

 

My girl was fucking awesome, and would rival any seasoned submissive with the way she carried herself. There was nothing left to do, but take our punishment and put this whole unfortunate ordeal behind us; if nothing else, Isabella and I had definitely grown in our relationship, both vanilla and D/s.

 

“Very well,” Master Peter said matter-of-factly. “Shall we get on with it?”

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

First of all:

Thank you for the teaser from this chapter. It was really good and a mean part to stop it. ;)

This chapter was really great, especially the "conversation" of Edward with his ... privates was really, really funny.

When Edward and Bella are together in the playroom it will be probably epic. I mean it was now just wow with them apart and through a phone.

I am curious, what will Edward has planned for Bellas training sessions with Rosalie and what he will think of Bellas limits for their first scene.



Author's Response:

All will be revealed soon, I promise! Lol! Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

Great chapter as always. Funny that Bella is making unconsciously the connection between sir and Edward. Although she is now (kind of) fixated on her dom.
It was great, that it was not only a retelling of the previous chapter just from her mind, because that might have been boring, but it was great to see how outgoing Bella is now or how daring. Because I don't think the Bella from the beginning would have the courage to do these things while shopping.

Can't wait for the next chapter. The teaser gives a nice snippet of the "alone time" between sir and pet (aka Edward and Bella).



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It┤s Playtime...

At the beginning I really thought, that I have to wait another chapter for the meeting between Sir and pet but they finally did their test scene. It is really funny, that Edward hopes that his pet will take his mind off of Bella. Bella takes his mind off of her by being herself.
They seem to get along, but I am really curious, how they will react, when they find out, who the other is. It is going to be interesting.
That Edward and Bella are perfect for each other was obvious, he didn't want to leave her and she didn't want him to leave her.
Also the description of their scene was pretty intense and great written.
To my mind it was great, that you included so many pictures within the chapter and not only as teasers on your blog, they were great visuals. In generall are all pictures great choosen.
I am excited for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

The bomb dropped.   o.O

That was unexpected for Edward, but they are finally together (it took them long enough). Not really together but on their best way to be a couple. I guess there is more talk needed in this situation.
In my opinion a little more talking about their situation would have been better but I guess it will be in the next chapter, because they were a little bit interrupted with the blow-job and their passion/lust for each other ;)

Perhaps in the future can Edward forgive Alice for her meddling ways. She had good intentions.

Can't wait for the next adventure of these two.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who┤s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I was so so excited to see/read their reunion. I couldn't imagine how it will go without feeling betrayed for either of them. But your solution was really great. I can't wait for the talk between Edward and Bella about how this all happend, what happend to her wedding and perphaps admitting some feelings for each other.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

The L-Bomb has fallen. At least one was concious when saying it and the other half concious. I wonder how Bella will now react to this. I just hope she accepts his confession and does not think it is a trick or something like that.

Also the "date" that Edward planned for them was really sweet. He is such a great guy, who just needed a chance to show someone worth his affection.

The pictures in between the paragraphes are really cool and give great visuals for the story and also enhance the chapter atmosphere.

I am looking forward for the next one!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

Really great chapter, as always and the pictures within the chapter are also greatly choosen. It must be fun, to search for them ;)

I really liked, that the could balance their interaction between real couple and D/s-relation. The ratio between kind and kinky was well balanced.

And now Edward wants to win some points with Mojo because he wants Bella to move in with him, that is so funny. I can't imagine, what he will do.

Jacob is out of the picture (at least for now) for Bella. Her reaction to that info was funny, especially Edwards concentration on her boobs, hilarious.

Until the next chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

It seems like Bella is welcomed open armed by the group of Ladies, whereas Tanya was left outside. Bella with her gentle personality probably fits better than a social ladder climbing person.

I wouldn't be surprised, if James is causing some trouble for Edward and Bella in the near future. maybe even in combination with Tanya...

Anyway, until the next chapter.

Long December by JustJo94 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Long December

While facing the height of tension in their marrage, Bella wonders if she will be able to make it through the holiday season with out her husband. Holiday o/s AU/AH

This beautiful banner was constructed by the AMAZING Evenstar! Thank you, sweeheart! Merry X-mas!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6291 Read Count: 651
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Long December (One Shot)

Such a sweet story with the right focus on the holidays. It was nice to see, that Bella and Edward have found each other again.

I liked, that you were able to make this story feel warm and loving.



Author's Response:

When I first sat down to write this, it was a WC challenge between a great group of ladies. My goal for the writing was to focus on the emotion and the details. I wanted to see if I could really write a piece that stirred something within me. I love stories that have an emotional anchor, not just angst but true emotions.

I'm glad that you enjoyed this piece. That gives me hope for the one that I am currently redoing. Have a great holiday!

Summary:

Best selling author Edward Cullen gets roped into being on The Bachelor. He feels a connection with a reluctant bachelorette on the first night, but what are the odds it will sustain itself until the final rose ceremony? (Pick a Pic Entry) M, AH. Fabulous banner that was the inspiration by Belindella.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16818 Read Count: 1380
[Report This] Published: 03 Jan 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: What Are the Odds?

I read this story a while ago and now found it again, after reading your new story. And I just had to reread it.

Great story and so much fun to read it. The characters are also really great.

Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17186
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Sixth chapter

At least they are on the same page now. Sometimes a little time-out apart from everything can be really helpfull.

I just hope, that Bella will also be truthfull to her friends about what happened.

Great chapter and story so far.

Summary:

 

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Banner by: edwards_girl_1918.. Author & Co-Author of some great fics... check ´em out!!!! Thanks Ari!!!

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5311 Read Count: 4373
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Outtake #1: Submission 101... Playtime with Mistress Rose...

This outtake was a great view to see Bellas training before the real training will begin.

Midnight Carnival by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

AU vampire twoshot. Edward finds himself trapped, caged like an animal by the proprietors of the Midnight Carnival. They're starving him and he needs to find a way out. A mysterious, quiet girl, also kept captive, may just hold the key to his salvation.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39244 Read Count: 4295
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2011 Updated: 06 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

After just strumbling in this story, I am hooked from the beginning. It is a really interesting story and plot. It was a great idea, that Edward was captured in an electric cage, but still fought agains his blood-lust.

Poor Bella, she has suffered in this chapter/story really much from James and Victoria. But it is good to see, that althogh such horrible things happened to her, she is still strong (and also fighting against her fears).

I also really liked, your writing. Nothing was too rushed or too long with extended explainations. It had a nice flow, when reading.



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for the amazing review! This plot bunny just popped into my head and I wrote it very quickly. I'm happy it resulted in "good flow"!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward took such great care of Bella. It was really very lofing and he came prepared for anything, when he went shopping.

I hope that the (free) werewolf will not make any trouble for the happy couple.

I am looking forward to the last chapter.



Author's Response:

THanks for the sweet review! Unfortunately the werewolf did make another appearance, as I'm sure you know by now! Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, so much happened in this chapter and in the end Edward had to change Bella. This end is really cruel, because the question remains, how will Bella take her "after-human-life".


Will there be a sequel? Because if yes, it will probably also great, because the story-telling was exquisite and also your style kept me (and probably the other reader) hooked.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the sweet review! I'm actually in talks with someone right now who is interested in writing a sequel for this fic, and if it happens I'll let everyone know.  Thanks again for the kind words, and for reading!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 83097
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Prick

They are definitely having fun. And the night should be very interersting. I can't wait to find out, who will not be able to keep their hands to themselves. But I think both will cuddle in the end. I mean, Edward likes to cuddle.

Fun chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - The Present

They came clean. Wohoo. Now that mostly everything is out of their chests, they can start living (loving). It was really great the chapter.

I guess there will be more talking in the future for them.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - OUTTAKE

And so the circle closes. I can't believe, that now this story is finished. But it was a great journey to follow Edward and Bella fall in love.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Proposal

So sweet that Edwards book was published and now he also wrote a book about their love story. That will probably be the next New York Times bestseller.

 

Great way to end the story.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - The Perfection

Bella meets the family and they love her, just as Edward loves Bella.

These two are so great to watch, it is so sad, that this story is coming to an end.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Proposition

So far a great start and for the story line it seems to be interesting. It will be funny, with Bella and Edward somehow fighting against each other and then "loving" each other the other second to appear to be a real couple.

I am curious, where this goes.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Ploy

I hope that all will play out, the way Bella wants it, but I doubt it. The whole deal with Edward will probably work for a few days until her parents find out the truth about their relationship (or lack of) or Edward will know about his manuscript and then be really pissed of Bella.

And in the mean-time the fell in love with each other ;)

But what is a cool story without a little bit of drama. I just hope that everything will work in the end for Bella and Edward.



Author's Response: Let's hope I'm still able to surprise you yet! ;) Although all love stories seem to have the same basic structure, I guess it's all about how you play with the characters...and play I will! :) Thank you for reviewing - honest feedback is always appreciated!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Practice

Wow, just a few hours gone and already a new chapter is there. You're pretty fast.

Anyway, the chapter was pretty funny, especially the verbal sparring. It will be definetly interesting, when her parents will arrive.



Author's Response:

Chapter seven ready and waiting... ;)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Prepared

Well the day started rather well but I guess the meeting of Bellas parents will be be more interesting.

Personally I think Edward should stay with 'baby' as a petname for Bella. It sounds nice.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One

Drama baby, drama!

I would say Edward got somehow the little information, that Aro was informed about his book before Bellas telephone call.

I just hope that Bella opens up a little to Edward after this conversation and he is her shoulder to cry on ;-)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Player

Seems that Edward is trying to play dirty, I hope his ploy doesn't bite him in his ass. The same works for Bella aswell with her double agenda of Edwards book. But I can imagine, that they will have lots of real fun during the activities with Bellas parents. Perhaps they are really in love already when they visit the wedding. That should be fun.



Author's Response: You're so good at this! ;)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Paragon

A sleep-over for these two "love birds" is coming, that should be fun, especially when they are not really together. More and more UST is programmed ^-^

There must me some feelings for Edward from Bella, if not she wouldn't have become so jealous over the waitress.

 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid

I wouldn't put it past Edward to be awake during the whole stunt. Probably to just prove a point, that she is attracted to him. But it seems, that their bodies already know what both of them try to deny with their heads.

I am excited to see who crackes first to realizing that there are romantic feelings involved.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Pretender

At least he was honest with Bella that he was awake. I guess to see the evening unfold from Edwards POV would have been funny. The reunion with Jasper and the arm wrestling of Charlie and Emmett.
I am curious how long they want to deny their feelings to each other and perhaps talk about it or their arrangement. Because I don't think that they want to end being in a "relation" with each other anytime soon.
See you next chapter.
As for fanfiction-recommondations, it depends, what you like to read:
- a nice family story would be "Parachute" by KitsuShel (on coffeshop, fanfiction.net)
- "The Blizzard" by SheViking of an ex-soldier trying to go back in his live after the army (on fanfiction.net)
- "if we ever meet again" by bkrumova (on coffeshop)

There are so many more, but it all depends on what you prefer.



Author's Response: Mhhh... I hear you. Maybe I should do an outtake in EPOV of Chapter 14??? It would be fun to see what happened at the bar and to maybe reveal some of the things Jasper told Edward about Bella. Although,I have to tell you my initial idea was to have B think E knows more than he actually does... I'll give it some thought,though! Thanks for the rec's! I've read parachute...great fic! I'm going to try the other two now! :) I generally like story's with some meat to the bone, well developed characters and a story line that hasn't been done over,and over, and... You get the idea. :) Thanks for your thoughts!