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Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
SHIT SHE DIED?
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
THANK GOD SHE IS ALIVE
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
WILL CHARLIE BE UP SET THAT EDWARD'S IN HER ROON ALONE? WILL EDWARD BE UP SET HE HAS TO LEAVE BELLA'S ROOM WHILE CHARLIE IS THERE?
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I HOPE THERE REAL HOPE FOR BELLA. MY HEART IS HURTING FOR EDWARD HE LOVES HER.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
I HOPE SHE WAKES UP SOON IF FOR NOTHING MORE THEN TO SEE HER ANGLE ( EDWARD )
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I THOUGHT HE WAS GOING TO KISS HER AGAIN BUT I WAS WRONG WOULD THAT HAVE HELPED HER TO STAY WITH HIM?
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
SO IS SHE REALLY MOVING OR IS IT JUST IN HER HEAD THAT SHE THINKS SHE IS MOVING.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
SHIT IT FEELS HOPELESS LIKE SHE WILL NEVER WAKE UP
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
BUT IS SHE TALKING IN HER HEAD OR IN REAL TIME OUT LOAD SO JASPER AND EDWARD CAN HERE HER?
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
DAMN CARLISLE REACHING OUT TO TOUCH HER AND EDWARD TELLING HIM NOT TO TOUCH HER BROKE THERE CONNECTION HOW SAD.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
SO IS THE SEAT BELT AROUND HER IS THAT PART OF WHY SHE CAN'T MOVE TO GET OUT OF HER MIND BECAUSE SHE IS OUT OF THE CARBUT SHE DOESN'T KNOW THAT YET.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
DO YOU MIND IF I TELL YOU MY FEAR ABOUT YOUR STORY EVEN THOUGH I LOVE IT SO FAR. I FEAR THE WHOLE THING IS GOING TO BE BELLA IN HER MIND AND EDWARD TRYING TO GET HER OUT IN THE OPEN AND WHEN SHE WAKE UP THE STORY ENDS NO REAL TIME WITH EDWARD OR CHARLIE OR EDWARD'S FAMILY NO TIME WITH HIM MATE HIM LOVING HER AND HER LOVING HIM, THATS MY FEAR I HOPE I'M WRONG.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
THERE FOR A SECOND I THOUGHT SHE WAS GOING TO KISS EDWARD AKA HER ANGLE
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
WHERE DID THE CHAIR COME FROM?
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
WOW ALL THEY HAVE TO DO IS WISH FOR SOMETHING AND THEY HAVE IT TO BAD LIFE ISN'T LIKE THAT.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
WELL IT'S A WAITING GAME NOW I HAVE TO WAIT LIKE EVERYONE ELSO DOES NOW I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY BUT HOPE WHEN SHE WAKES UP THAT WON'T BE THE END.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
WILL EDWARD BE BACK FROM HIS HUNTING TRIP WHEN BELLA IS IN THE WHITE ROOM?
Set in England mid 1800's. Edward and Bella live in different worlds, ruled by class and money, where prejudices influence and dictate who you can love. Can they overcome the stigma and gossip to be together?
We can’t help who we fall in love with; however we are responsible for how we react to that knowledge or how we treat that person.
Thanks to fab betas RAH07890 & js18
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: To Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78582 Read Count: 45740
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I'M SO GLAD EDWARD GOT OUT OF THERE
Author's Response:
My first attempt at this chapter, he stayed and took part....I couldn't sleep properly until I re-wrote, so glad I changed my mind
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
OMG I'M SO GLAD HE CAME BACK I HOPE HE AND BELLA CAN TALK AND SHE CAN FORGIVE HIM FOR LEAVING HER. AND I'M SURE HE JUST MAYBE A BIT PISSED OFF WITH HIS MOTHER WILL HE FORGIVE HER WILL SHE FORGIVE HERSELF. CAN BELLA FORGIVE HER FOR TALKING EDWARD INTO LEAVING HER.
Author's Response:
I'm sure he has ways of making her forgive him...he's Edward Cullen;)
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
WILL BELLA BELIEVE EDWARD WHEN HE TELLS HER HE DIDN'T KNOW LEAH WAS IN HIS ROOM. I HOPE SO, IF SHE DOESN'T IT WILL BREAK HIS HEART AND BELLA'S HEART WILL BE BROKEN AS WELL BECAUSE HER THINKING EDWARD LIED TO HER WILL BE BAD.
After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined.
Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....
This story will eventually contain character death.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I REALLY DO LOVE THIS STORY IN PART IT IS SO SAD ALL THE DEATH BUT THE STORY IS REAL LIFE THESE THINGS REALLY HAPPENED MAYBE NOT IN OUR TIME BUT IT DID HAPPEN. I HOPE EDWARD AND BELLA MEET SOON SHE GOING TO MEET HIM AS EDWAED CULLEN ISN'T SHE THAT WAY WILL SHE NOT KNOW WHO HE IS I MEAN SHE HAS HIS PICTURE SO SHE SHOULD KNOW IT'S HIM RIGHT OFF THE BAD RIGHT? I GUESS YOU CAN TELL I'M GETTING A HEAD OF YOUR STORY SORRY IT HARD TO WAIT SOMETIMES. YOU ALWAYS LEAVE ME WANTING MORE.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like it! The pictures Edward took are at the developers, no such thing as just press print in 1918. He intends to send them to her when he gets them back, but she doesn't have them yet.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I THINK IT'S A GREAT CHAPTER BUT IS BELLA HURT SO BAD THAT EDWARD NEEDS TO CHANGE HER? I'M ON THE EDGE ON MY SEAT WAITING TO FIND OUT WHAT IS IN YOUR NEXT CHAPTER.
Author's Response:
A teaser for chapter 31 has been submitted to Fictionators - Teaser Mondays, Twi fic central - Wednesdays, Twi & VD Fic Recs - Tuesday, and Twilight Fic Zone - Saturday (I think this may have been switched to Sunday). I will also try to visit the Sneak Peek campfire on A Different Forest on Monday night. It's the same teaser regardless of which site you see it on. I have to warn you though, it won't really answer any questions. You didn't think I'd give too much away, did you?
Thanks for reviewing!
One night at a club when two people meet and their attraction is instant. No names, no numbers, no regrets. But what happens when their paths cross again and there are consequences to face.
Nominated for Best Kiss in Fandom Choice Awards.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19462 Read Count: 5668
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OH GOD THIS IS GOOD I CAN TELL I'M GOING TO LOVE IT HELL WHAT AM I SAYING I LOVE IT NOW I HOPE YOU KEEP WRITING IT.
Author's Response:
OMG! I LOVE LOVE LOVE your screen name, its fantastic! Thanks for R&R
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
WELL THREE CHEERS FOR BELLA SHE TOLD HIM BUT GOOD. GOD I LOVE IT.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
SHIT WHAT KIND OF ACCIDENT? DID SHE FALL DOWN THE STAIRS? SHE HEARD PART OF WHAT EDWARD SAID BUT NOT THE GOOD PART SO SHE WAS UP SET RIGHT. DAMN WHEN DO YOU UP DATE AGAIN HOW OFFTEN DO YOU PLAN TO UP DATE?
Author's Response:
Hey! She had an accident, that is all I can say *GRINS* She did hear part but not all that he said. Update should be soon, there will not be alot of chapters, but the epilogue is already written so the end is in place x
Updates... hmm no set schedule I'm afraid!
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What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421236
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
IT'S EATHER BELLA OR IT'S ALICE, I THINK IT ALICE BECAUSE BELLA MADE HER SEE SHE WAS BEING UNFAIR TO EDWARD ALL THIS TIME NOT GIVING HIM THE BENIFIT OF THE DOUBT AND THAT WASN'T FAIR MAYBE THERE'S HOPE FOR THEM AFTER ALL. WILL EDWARD GO AND FIND BELLA AFTER THIS?
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
WHO WAS THAT AT THE DOOR ROSE RIGHT? I HOPE SHE TAKES BELLA TO SEE EDWARD SO THEY CAN REALLY TALK IT OUT.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
OMG THAT WAS HER ANSWER RIGHT THERE HE HAS OR WILL BE GIVING HER ALL THE APERM SHE WANTS OR ALL HE CAN MAKE TO POUR INTO HER. OH HAPPY DAYS ARE HERE.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
OK SO DID THEY BOTH EAT SOMETHING BAD OR IS THERE SOMETHING IN ROSE'S HOUSE THAT SMELLS BAD OR IS THERE A BABY ON THE WAY AND EDWARD IS SICK FROM THE SMELL OF BELLA'S VOMIT?
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
WHAT HAPPENED TO THIS STORY WHY ARN'T YOU UP DATING ANYMORE I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
I LOVE IT BUT DON'T YOU THINK BELLA SHOULD BE TELLING EDWARD THERE'S A BABY ON THE WAY AND WHAT THE HELL ISN'T SHE GOING BACK TO BE WITH HIM SHE IS IN LOVE WITH HIM RIGHT? AND HE'S IN LOVE WITH HER AS WELL. I'D LIKE TO SEE SOME HAPPY TIMES AND SOME GOOD LOVE MAKING THATS WHAT GOT TO BABY COMMING RIGHT?
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
SO SORRY TO HERE ABOUT YOUR MOTHERI DON'T KNOW WHAT SHE PASSED FROM BUT I AM FIGHTING CANCER MYSELF RIGHT NOW WITH TWO TREATMENTS OF CHEMO DONE ONE MORE AND A SCAN WILL TELL US IF I SHOULD KEEP FIGHTING OR GIVE UP OF COURSE I HOPING TO KEEP FIGHTING BUT IF IT BAD NEWS I HAVE A DIEING WISH TO MEET ROBERT PATTINSON IN PERSON IT'S SOMETHING I REALLY WANT MORE THEN ANYTHING.
I LOVED THE CHAPTER AND SO GLAD EDWARD ASK BELLA TO MARRY HIM AND THAT SHE SAID YES. I HOPE TO BE READING MORE SOON.
I am a vampire. He is a human. I am designed to kill. He is my ultimate prey. But can I make him mine?
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 163034 Read Count: 48919
Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
i love this story and i feel like i can't wait for your next chapter.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I REALLY DON'T LIKE THE IDEA OF ANY OF THE CULLEN'S GETTING KILLED IT JUST HURTS ME TO THINK OF IT. I HOPE THE CULLEN'S CAN BEAT JAMES AND ALL OF THE ONES WHO IS WORKING WITH HIM.
Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491646
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ANSWERING MY QUESTION ABOUT THE FBI I DO WISH MORE WOULD COME OUT ABOUT HOW BELLA'S MOTHER COULD WANT BELLA TO BE WITH JAKE THAT WOULD MAKE THEM BROTHER AND SISTER THATS SICK. OR DID I MISS SOMETHING?
Author's Response:
Bella's father wanted her with Jake, he never knew that Jake was renee's son.
Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97
i have a question something that has been bothering me for sometime now why can't the cullen family call the FBI for help i mean bella's mother wants bella dead the FBI'S job is to stop that shit right i know they are a mob family so what they still have rights.
Author's Response:
i never really thought of involving the feds, i really just think that the Cullen's want to take cre of their own stuff. they don't really trust the fbi.. or other institutions like them.
Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115
WELL IT SOUNDS LIKE BILLY WANTS TO HURT BELLA BUT I KEEP REMEMBERING BELLA'S DREAM WHERE EDWARD GOT SHOT IS THAT GOING TO HAPPEN IS HE GOING TO DIE SAVING HIS BELLA?
Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114
please tell me this story is a HEA it would just kill me if edward dies in this story
Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119
i'm still loving your story but i fear i wont get to finish it i'm so sick with cancer but good luck
Author's Response:
I'm really sorry to hear that you are sick. My mom passed away from cancer about two years ago. I truly have no words, I will keep you in my prayers.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134
A VERY SAD CHAPTER I'M SORRY TO SEE ARO GO IN YOU STORY HE WAS OK I DIDN'T HATE HIM IN THIS STORY LIKE SO MANY OTHERS HE WAS A VERY BAD PERSON. I HOPE EDWARD WILL BE OK TAKING OVER THE HEAD OF THE FAMILY AND RUNNING EVERYTHING ARO DID.
Every year Edward and Bella hope to meet the love of their lives, but every year love eludes them. With any luck, this will be the year that they find each other and discover that love was always right in front of them.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Want to read
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5449 Read Count: 5656
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I LOVED THIS STORY BUT IT'S A BIT SHORT
Let down by her boyfriend, again, Bella decides a night on the town is just what she needs. Unexpected events unravel, leading her to a new love. AH. M for lemons.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2648 Read Count: 1055
Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
SHIT I LOVE THIS ONE BUT I REALLY WANTED MORE OF IT , IT WAS HOT
After the death of her father, Bella inherits the Seattle Mariners. Does she have the strength to run the team? Can Edward and the gang help her? Can they fight their feelings long enough to play the game and win? AH Canon Couples..M for Lang/Lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31124 Read Count: 25240
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Will
WHAT EDWARD NEVER FIND OUT SHE IS DREAMING HE WILL FIND OUT I'M SURE OF THAT.
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
BELLA SAID CHARLIE WAS HER ONLY FAMILY THEN CALLS EMMETT HER BROTHER ISN'T THAT HER FAMILY?
Author's Response:
Emmett is not her brother. More of a surrogate brother. Charlie was her last living relative, but the players become a sudo family.
Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.
Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923197
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
POOR BELLA SHE IS SUFFERING SO MUCH TO THINK THERE ARE REALLY PEOPLE IN THE WORLD WHO LIKE MAKING WOMEN HURT THE WAY JAMES IT HURTING BELLA AND DAMN ARO IS JUST AS NUTS AS THEY COME.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
FUCK IT CAN'T BE GOOD GETTING DRUGED SO MUCH AND THEM ASSHOLES TOUCHING BELLA AFTER DRUGING HER WHAT THE HELL WHAT WOULD ARO SAY IF HE KNEW THE ASSHOLES WERE TOUCHING HER.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE ALL BELLA IS GOING THROUGH THAT POOR GIRL. I WISH SHE COULD FIND EDWARD MAYBE HE CAN HELP HER IN SOME SMALL WAY. HE ALSO IS BEING DRUGED SO I DON'T KNOW WHAT HE CAN DO TO HELP HER BUT MAYBE SOMETHING CAN BE DONE.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
OK I THINK I GET IT THEY ALL FOUR HAVE BEEN DRUGED RIGHT BUT WHY AND IS THE PLAIN GOING TO CRASH? THE PILOTS LEFT RIGHT?
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I'M NOT MAD AT ALL ABOUT WHAT YOU WROTE IT'S A DAMN GOOD STORY AND WHAT EDWARD IT WAS BECAUSE OF EVERYONE ELSE BEING ABLE TO TOUCH HIS WOMEN BUT NOT HIM I MEAN HELL HE'S GOING TO MARRY BELLA SO WHY COULDN'T HE BE THE ONE SUCKING ON HER BREAST AND NOT ALL THE OTHERS IT'S JUST THE MEN ARE ALL SICK MOTHER FUCKERS EXCEPT JASPER AND EDWARD I'M WONDERING ABOUT THE WEDDING NIGHT ARE ALL OF THE MEN REALLY GOING TO BE IN THE ROOM WITH BELLA AND EDWARD WHEN THEY HAVE SEX? HOW COULD EATHER ONE OF THEM CUM WITH ALL THE OTHERS IN THE ROOM WATCHING THEM.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
OMG POOR BELLA HOW IS SHE EVER GOING TO GET OUT OF THERE THEM PEOPLE ARE CRAZY WHERE IS EDWARD THAT HE CAN'T HERE BELLA SCREAMING? HE COULDN'T HAVE NOT HEARD HER SCREAM. THEY NEED TO GET OUT OF THERE AND FAST.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
SHIT IS ROSE GOING TO BE PREGNAT NOW AT THE SAME TIME AS BELLA RIGHT?
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I'M SO GLAD BELLA FOUND A FREIND IN ALICE AND JASPER AND OF COURSE EDWARD WHEN THEY SEE ONE ANOTHER.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
HE'S BEING FORCED JUST LIKE BELLA I KNOW HE FEELS BAD FOR WHAT HE HAS TO DO BUT IF HE DOESN'T DO IT JAMES WILL RAPE HER OVER AND OVER AGAIN AND I KNOW EDWARD DOESN'T WANT THAT TO HAPPEN. ANY WAYS EDWARD WANTS BELLA JUST LIKE SHE WANTS HIM THEY JUST DON'T KNOW THAT THE OTHER FEELS THAT WAY ABOUT EACH OTHER.
Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
I LOVE THIS STORY AND I HAD GUESSED ALICE WAS EDWARD'S SISTER SOMETIME AGO. I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER'S TO COME.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
OK THIS IS A LITTLE ON THE WEIRD SIDE.
Author's Response:
just a little...lmao... give it time, gets weirder..
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
WHAT THE HELL EDWARD WANTS BELLA AND SHE WANTS HIM BUT THEY DON'T MOVE ON IT AND ARE WITH OTHER PEOPLE EDWARD IS LIVING WITH ROSE BUT ITS JUST A GAME TO THEM HE HAS TO JERK OFF THEY ARE NUTS IF YOU ASK ME, DON'T GET ME WRONG I LIKE YOUR STORY ITS JUST SO WRONG I BELIEVE ITS REAL.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
HOW SAD FOR BELLA SHE WANTS EDWARD AND HE IS SO INTO FUCKING EVERYOTHER GIRL HE DOESN'T EVEN KNOW SHE IS ALIVE.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
JAMES AND ARO ARE SICK MOTHER FUCKERS. I REALLY FEEL FOR WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO BELLA THAT POOR GIRL AND EDWARD ALSO HE WILL BE FORCED TO TREAT HER THE SAME WAY JAMES JUST TREATED TANYA AND EDWARD DOESN'T KNOW YET ARO AND JAMES HAS TOUCHED BELLA ALREADY DAMN I THOUGHT WHAT HAPPENED TO ME WHEN I WAS 12 WAS BAD BUT THIS I KNOW I WOULD NOT HAVE LIVED AFTER BEING TREATED LIKE I WOULD HAVE ENDED MY LIFE FOR SURE. I WAS RAPED AT 12 YEARS THE FUNNY THING WAS I DIDN'T KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT SEX I MEAN NOTHING BUT WHEN MY UNCLE GRABED ME I KNEW ENOUGH TO KNOW IT WAS WRONG AND I PUT UP A FIGHT SO HARD EVERY PART OF MY BODY HURT FOR 2 WEEKS IT TOOK ME THREE YEARS TO TELL MY MOTHER HER BROTHER RAPED ME. IT FUCKED ME UP SO BAD THAT I HAVE NEVER BEEN ABLE TO CUM HAVING SEX, I WAS 12 AND I AM 68 NOW. THAT FUCKEN ASSHOLE IS DEAD NOW AND HIM BEING DEAD DIDN'T EVEN HELP ME GET OVER ANY OF IT, I HAVE LEARNED THERE ARE VERY GOOD MEN IN THE WORLD THAT WOULD NEVER DO THINGS LIKE WHAT YOUR BELLA AND TANYA OR EVEN MYSELF HAS GONE THROUGH. SORRY TO DUMP MY SHIT ON YOU I DO LOVE THE STORY THANK GOD I CAN SEE IT AS A STORY IT NOT FREAK ME OUT.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I THINK EDWARD WOULD BE OUT RAGED TO KNOW ARO AND JAMES ARE TOUCHING AND CUMMING ON BELLA.
Author's Response:
yes he will be
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
GOD IS EVERYONE THERE EXCEPT ARO AND JAMES BEING FOURCED TO DO WHAT ARO WANTS OR WHAT JAMES WANTS. I CAN'T BELIEVE ARO WANTS EDWARD TO GET BELLA PREGNAT AND HE STILL OK WITH FUCKING THE OTHER WOMEN THERE AFTER EDWARD MERRAGE
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
ARO WONT LET BELLA GO HE WILL LET JAME JUCK HER HARD AND HE WILL NEVER LET HER GO.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
WHAT A GOOD PAY BACK EDWARD DID VERY GOOD AND HE DIDN'T CUM A BIG SLAP IN THE FACE FOR JAMES AND VICTORIA I HOPE JAMES DOESN'T DO ANYTHING TO HURT BELLA AGAIN.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I AM SURE BELLA IS UP SET THAT EDWARD SAW HER GET SPANKED AND HE SAW HER ASS AS WELL. POOR THING I CAN SEE EDWARD IS WORRIED ABOUT HER BEING SAFE. I'M ALSO GLAD JASPER IS SO SMART HE HAS TO HAVE SEEN EDWARD WAS TRYING TO HELP BELLA. I HOPE BELLA CAN SEE THAT AS WELL.
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I'M WONDERING IF EDWARD IS GOING TO KEEP FUCKING TANYA AFTER HE MARRIES BELLA IF HE DOES HE'S A PIG. HE CAN HAVE BELLA ANYTIME HE WANTS HER SO HE DOESN'T NEED TANYA ANY MORE RIGHT?
Author's Response:
yes u are right. and he wont
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I REALLY LIKED THE TALK TANYA AND BELLA AND EDWARD HAD IN BELLA'S ROOM TALKING ABOUT HOW BIG EDWARDS DICK IN WAS KIND OF FUNNY AND THEN AFTER TANYA LEFT THE KISSING EDWARD AND BELLA LIKED THAT TO THEN WHEN BELLA SAID HE COULS SUCK HER BREAST I WAS KIND OF SHOCKED AND IF JASPER DOES IT AS WELL I HOPE IT WILL WORK TO GET THE MILK IN HER BREAST.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
OH MAN WHAT WILL JASPER DO WILL HE TELL ARO? OR WILL HE TELL EDWARD I BET HE DOESN'T TELL EDWARD, EDWARD WOULD LOSE IT FOR SURE AND IS JAMES ALOAD TO BE FUCKING BELLA ASS DOES ARO KNOW THIS.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
SO JASPER CALLED TO TELL THEM EDWARD AND BELLA IS ALIVE AND EMMETT DIDN'T BELIEVE HIM HOW SAD.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
IT'S NOT BECAUSE OF BELLA AND EDWARD IT'S BECAUSE OF ALL THE SHIT HE DID WITH BELLA THAT ARO DIDN'T TELL HIM TO DO. I THINK THEY BOTH GOT OFF EASY.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
I LOVE THERE TRIP TO THE BEACH BUT I DON'T GET WHY EDWARD DOESN'T TELL BELLA HOW HE FEELS ABOUT HER I THINK IT WOULD MAKE THINGS BETTER FOR THEM BOTH. EDWARD WAS SHOCKED HE WAS BELLA'S FIRST KISS, DOESN'T HE KNOW HE IS HURTING HER JUST BY NOT TELLING HER HOW HE FEEL ABOUT HER IF HER KNEW HE HAS FEELING FOR HER IT WOULD MAKE ALL THE DIFERANCE IN THE WORLD TO HER.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
JAMES IS REALLY SCARING ME THE THINGS HE SAID TO BELLA HE REALLY WANTS TO HURT BELLA AND EDWARD I HOPE ARO FINDS OUT SO HE CAN DO SOMETHING TO JAMES LIKE SEND HIM AWAY
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
WOW THEY SHARED A LOT DIDN'T THEY I REALLY THOUGHT HE WAS GOING TO GO DOWN ON HER BUT HE DIDN'T I GUESS HE HAS TO SAVE SOME THINGS FOR THE WEDDING NIGHT I WAS THINKING IF THEY MADE LOVE BEFORE THE WEDDING THEN THEY COULD ENJOY THERE FIRST TIME WITH OUT ANYONE LOOKING ON AT THEM.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
IT REALLY BOTHERS ME THAT EDWARD HASN'T TOLD BELLA HOW HE FEELS ABOUT HER AND BELLA NEEDS TO TELL HIM HOW SHE FEELS ABOUT HIM ALSO. IT WOULD MAKE WHAT THEY DO TOGETHER FEEL SO MUCH BETTER.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
OH YES I LOVE PICTURES WITH THE STORY'S AND I HAVE TO ASK WAS BELLA ACTING THAT WAY BECAUSE OF THE FALL IN THE SHOWER YOU KNOW WHEN EDWARD CUM ON HER THIGH SHE KIND OF FREAKED OUT A LITTLE. YOU LEFT ME WANTING MORE SO I WILL BE WAITING FOR MORE CHAPTERS.
Author's Response:
nothing to do with the fall. If you know people who have suffered traumatic events, sometimes one thing will trigger a response like that, while other times it will be fine. It was just it was too much like James.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
i'm really excited for the next chapter i hoping it's the one where bella tell's edward her idea of them making love before the wedding the way they want to and not the way aro wants. i wish they would try each other how they feel about one another.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 66
great chapter when is bella going to tell edward she's having twins and keeping the baby's
Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 71
OMG IS JAMES GOING TO HURT BELLA OR IS EDWARD GOING TO GET TO HER IN TIME TO SAVE HER?
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 72
I HOPE THE DOCTOR IS RIGHT ABOUT JAMES NOT BEING ABLE TO HURT THEM ANYMORE. GREAT CHAPTER.
Date: 29 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 73
I'M SO GLAD JAMES GOT WHAT WAS COMMING TO HIM HE HAS LOST HIS MAN HOOD THE ONE THING HE USED TO HURT WOMEN WILL HE DIE LIKE THE DOCTORS THINK HE WILL OR WILL HE LIVE TO HURT BELLA AND EDWARD SOMEMORE? GOOD CHAPTER I LIKE THAT BELLA FORGAVE EDWARD THEY WILL BE OK NOW.
Born to parents living a rich and glamorous lifestyle, Bella had never felt as if she belonged in their world where life often felt fake and pretentious. Wanting more out of life and wanting to make a worthwhile difference, Bella assumes a fake identity and heads off to spend her last summer before college doing something real and meaningful. Her journey starts with meeting a handsome stranger, raised to help those in need—and to detest the rich. What happens when he finds out her secret?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202993 Read Count: 68922
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: I'll Stand By You
I REALLY LOVED THIS CHAPTER THE LOVE THEY HAVE FOR EACH OTHER MAKES MY HEART HAPPY.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 In The Jungle
I'D BE BROKEN HEARTED TO IF I HAD EDWARD AND WE HAD TO PART LIKE THAT I FEEL BAD FOR BOTH OF THEM I AM WORRIED HOWEVER THAT NEVER TOLD EDWARD ABOUT HER NAME IT'S WRONG AND SHE SHOULD HAVE TOLD HIM BEFORE HE LEAVES.
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Mississippi
I'M SO HAPPY TO SEE EDWARD AND BELLA BEING TRUTHFUL WITH EACH OTHER AND THEY ARE GETTING ALONG SO WELL THEY SEEM TO BE SO HAPPY AND I LIKE THAT A LOT. SO FAR IT SEEMS LIKE EDWARD REALLY RESPECTS BELLA HE HASN'T MADE A MOVE TO PUSH FOR SEX OR TOUCHING WHERE HE SHOULDN'T AS YET HE REALLY LOVES HER AND SHE HIM AND YES I'M STICKING WITH YOU I JUST HAPPEN TO BE CRAZY ABOUT THIS STORY I'LL STICK TO THE END.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue
I'M SO GLAD I GOT TO SEE YOUR STORY TO THE END, I HAVEN'T MUCH TIME LEFT MYSELF BUT I STILL TRY TO READ SOME NOT DOING MUCH OF IT LATELY I JUST GOT HOME FROM A 9 DAY STAY IN THE HOSPITAL I HOPE TO STILL BE AROUND FOR YOUR NEXT STORY.
Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412097
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
HELL I'D NEVER GIVE IT UP
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
THIS CHAPTER HAD EVERYTHING PACKED FULL OF EXCITMENT FOR ME ANYWAYS I CAN'T THINK OF BUT ONE THING I'D CHANGE AND THATS FOR ME TO BE THE ONE IN BELLA'S PLACE.
School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661145
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 114: Edward
I THINK BELLA IS GOING TO BE DOING A LOT OF CRYING WHEN THEY HAVE TO LEAVE AND ALICE AND ROSE TO IT'S GOING TO BE SO HARD ON ALL OF THEM. THREE MONTHS IS A LONG TIME. MY HUSBAND LEFT AND WAS GONE FOR 13 MONTH. THAT WAS VERY HARD TO DO I HAD OUR THREE KIDS TO LOOK AFTER ON MY OWN I GAVE BIRTH ONE MONTH AFTER HE LEFT A DAUGHTER WAS BORN MY OTHER TWO WERE BOYS.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 40: Edward
THIS IS A VERY GOOD STORY I JUST NEED TO TELL YOU I HAVE BEEN DOING REVIEWS ALL ALONG BUT I WAS ON IMTERNET EXPLORER AND FOR SOME REASON THE REVIEWS WOULDN'T GO THROUGH SO I HAD TO CHANGE TO FIREFOX SO MY REVIEWS ARE RECIVED I HOPE I GET SOME ANSWERS TO SOME OF THEM AS I NEVER DID BEFORE AND WONDERED WHY NOW I KNOW.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 41: Bella
WHY CAN'T I REVIEW
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 42: Edward
GOTA LOVE YOUR EDWARD HE SO SWEET TO BELLA
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 43: Bella
I LIKE HOW THE GUYS LOOK OUT FOR BELLA EVEN SO FAR AWAY AND THE FLOWERS EDWARD SENT WAS SO SWEET.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 44: Edward
IT'S TRUE WHEN WE GET HURT WE WANT THE PEOPLE WE LOVE SO THEY CAN SHOW US THEY LOVE US AND GIVE US CONFORT. SURE BELLA WILL BE SCARED EDWARD GOING TO GET HURT AGAIN AND MAYBE NOT MAKE IT HOME BUT THEY CAN'T THINK THAT WAY.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45: Bella
TALKING TO ONE ANOTHER WILL MAKE THEM FEEL BETTER. DAMN I WISH I KNEW IF YOUR GETTING ME REVIEWS
Author's Response:
Hehe Yes, your reviews are posting fine. :) We aren't replying to reviews personally because it would just take so much time that it would be overwhelming. (Just a side note... No need for all caps. ;) In online speak, that's if you're shouting. :) ) We're glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 46: Edward
I'M SO GLAD THEY BOTH SAID THEY LOVE EACH OTHER, DON'T LIKE YOUR EDWARD GETTING HURT BUT I KNOW IT ADD'S TO THE STORY
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 47: Bella
I HOPE EDWARD DOESN'T RE-UP WHEN MY HUSBAND WAS IN THE MARINES I DIDN'T WANT HIM TO RE-UP BUT WE DIDN'T TALK ABOUT IT AND HE DID WHAT HE WANTED TO DO IT WAS UP TO HIM AND HIM ALONE HE PUT IN 20 YEARS AND WAS SENT OVER SEA'S ONLY ONCE TO V.N. I STOPPED WATCHING THE NEWS I COULDN'T TAKE IT I WAS EXSPECTING OUR THIRD CHILD AND IT WAS VERY HARD ON ME HAVING HIM LEAVE ME WHEN I WAS 8 MONTHS ALONG YEA IT MADE ME CARRY HER 10 MONTHS AND THE DOC. HAD TO TAKE HER BY FORCE SHE JUST DIDN'T WANT TO LEAVE MY BODYSO WE ENDED UP WITH 2 BOYS AND 1 GIRL YEA IT WAS VERY HARD.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 49: Bella
OH SHIT EDWARD'S GOING TO HIT THE SHOWERS I BET AFTER HE SEE'S BELLA'S PICTURES
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 51: Bella
OMG SHE REALLY ASK HIM THAT WOW LOL
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 52: Edward
OMG WHAT I'D DO TO HAVE A MAN LIKE THAT
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 57: Bella
HAPPY GETTING OFF TOGETHER BUT SO SAD HAVING TO HANG UP
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 58: Edward
SO ARE THEY GOING TO GET CARELESS AND ONE OF THEM GET HURT? GOD I HOPE NOT.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 64: Edward
DAMN I LOVE YOUR EDWARD AND ALL HE SAID TO BELLA
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 66: Edward
WELL I HAVE MADE IT TO YOUR LAST CHAPTER UP AT LAST I READ SO SLOW BUT I DID IT AND I DO LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH