Reviews by SammyJo
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123471
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Third Year the Second Six Months

Edward is not a child or even a younger man, but a full grown man that is being making his own decisions for years.  Esme needs to realize that he is not a teenager, because that is exactly how she is treating him.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

Small towns are a blessing and a curse.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes they are - I grew up in one.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

That woman needs to go away.  She has no right to judge them, she should just back the F off.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76150
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I've been reading on fanfiction waiting for it to catch up on this site.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Does Emmett know about Edward's lifestyle?

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like Bella's parting shot.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Can we say sexual harrassment and labor laws?  Good chapter, obviously Edward is at the door.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I wonder is Tanya really gone for good?

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

She went to the library to study.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yes it was short, but I'm glad your back.  I look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm so glad your continuing with this story, I really do enjoy it.  Ha ha Loved the part of Bella using her truck as a battering ram.  Cannot wait to read more.

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 33003
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looks very promising.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Getting back to themselves is going to be a long road.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good chapter.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good chapter, poor Charlie that has to be devastating.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good chapter.  When do we find out for sure who Bree hooked up with and wouldn't they have checked her background before putting her back in that horrid situation?



Author's Response:

soon next chapter is about what charlie and the pack find so it will be after that one. as for a background check, abusers are very good at hiding it. so if it goes unreported it tends to stay that way. but no worries this is a very smart charlie and he will be paying a visit to bree's old home in his investigation.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good chapter.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Good chapter.  Poor Edward and Bella this is not going to be easy.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Good chapter.  If Edward doesn't change her she is always going to feel like he doesn't want her enough.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Good chapter.  Will she ask Charlie about Renee her real mother?



Author's Response:

Yes next time Charlie see Bella he's bring along something to help her remember places and people.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good chapter.  Why would Bree think that Bella was the protected one and not Stella?

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good chapter, but a little confused at the end.



Author's Response:

Sorry about that! it was meant to be that way because right now they're confused too. All will be straightened out next chapter

 

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

Glad to see Carlisle changing and supporting his son.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

It was probably James trying to secure his spot for the Chase.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184002
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The ship wreck.

Shame I don't know French.  Story looks good though.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The harem

Good chapter.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Edward meets Bella

How did the Cullen's get to be there and does being Asses come naturally to them?



Author's Response:

Not all the Cullen are asses; Doctor Carlisle Cullen is a pretty decent guy actually. You'll get to see more of him later on in the story.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The training room

I would say she is beyond pissed now.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The trap

Good for Bella!!!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple

OMG!  That sucks.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

OK the first place I would head to would be court for an annulment.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but Bella has other things on her mind. Plus she doesn't even know she can get it annulled.

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

Good chapter, but yeah can't see why Jacob refuses to let go of his grudge if Bella is happy.  Nice putting Jessica in her place.



Author's Response:

Thank you, hopefully you'll get your answers in the next few chapters : )

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

The quote is from Princess Diaries 2.  Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Sorry. I don't even think I've seen that movie. I can't remember it anyways.

 

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

It would probably be easier to text or say the words over the phone the first time that way by the time she sees him she is used to it.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but that's not very personal. But she'll say them to him eventually ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date

Quote is from Cinderella Story.  "Maybe you were looking, but you weren't really seeing."

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

Good chapter, but what does Alice have to talk to Bella about.  I would kill my husband if he had ever kept something like that from me.  You don't just make plans or agree to plans withoht checking with your significant other first.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

She didn't want anything special. It was just a 'distraction' I put in.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving

Quote is from Pretty Woman:  Can I call you Eddie?  Not if you expect me to answer.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter

Welcome to married life Edward!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, haha. But he's such a good husband! :)

xx
Gelix

Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Weird

He's screwing around. 
Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Pushing

Good chapter, I still think Edward is fooling around or James has something on Edward and is using it to blackmail him in some way, cause James has the hots for Bella.



Author's Response:

Interesting theory! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Signature

I knew it, thats how I caught my husband was the credit card statement.  Men really are stupid!



Author's Response:

Wow, really? Men are stupid though. Let's see how Edward explains this one! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Confrontation

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Aftermath

The good news is they didn't have kids.  Even if you get be together after a seperation it still takes and toll and has lingering effects on the kids.  Good chapter, I believe you got her emotions down pat.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Yes, thank God there are no children involved!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Surprises

I wouldn't be surprised if James had a hand in getting Edward to cheat so that he could have a chance with Bella.



Author's Response:

That would be interesting huh? Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions

Good chapter, but are we ever going to get an Edward POV?



Author's Response:

I have plans for an EPOV but not until close to the end.  His secrets are about to start flooding out though. Don't worry!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Unexpected Turn

I don't like the idea of James and Bella, but good chapter.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: What He Said

Good chapter, but I still wonder if James and Tanya were in it together to break up Edward and Tanya so they could be with them.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Eyewall


Good chapter.  She should have kneed both the guys and punched Tanya on the way out though.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Music

Ok I can understand completely about being upset and not wanting to deal with the person who caused it, but months of avoiding really doesn't help anyone.  Its time to take a stand and face it.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Dance

Well if that didn't just play out like a Alantis Morrisette song.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64701
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39-Harlot

Good chapter, but I still don't think she is telling him everything.  I think Julian is using this time as an excuse to try and woo Bella back.



Author's Response:

And am I correct in presuming you don't want J to succeed? LOL. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38-Hanging On

OK I can see where Edward would be upset, she is messing with him.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

LOL, you gotta LOVE Emmett!



Author's Response: Sammyjo: if you like Emmett, stay tuned. He kinds steals the show in the next chappie. Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?

I LOVE Emmett!!!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23-Reconnections

OMG, LOL!!!



Author's Response: I'm glad you r laughing :)

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36-Goodbye Orlando

The boy has got to stop jumping to conclusions.



Author's Response:

I know...you would have thought he would have already learned his lesson that one with the rescue thing!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37-And It All Comes Tumbling Down

Wasn't exactly exprecting that.  I don't think Bella knows what she wants, I understand she has feelings for Julian but the way she is treating Edward woudl have me questioning if she really loved him.



Author's Response:

It's a mess....please don't give up on our fav couple yet.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40-Thank You Alice

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you SJ

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41-Safe Car Sex

Good chapter, but I really don't think that Julian is just going to let Bella go he is going to manipulate the situation somehow.



Author's Response:

SJ: thanks for reading and reviewing.  I think we will be hearing from Julian in some future chapters.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella

That pie is going to be horrible.



Author's Response:

Turkey innards and prune juice horrible?  Maybe....lol.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43-Don't Talk About My Mom's Pie

OMG you have got to LOVE Emmett.



Author's Response:

Em just can't help himself...glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44-Not Again

Good chapter, but I am glad you didn't have her as pregnant.



Author's Response: Sammyjo: thx for reading and reviewing!

Author's Response: Sammyjo: thx for reading and reviewing!

Summary:

These are various outtakes, written in various points of view..all related to my story How To Win Back the Love of Your Existence, which is a NM alternative ending story. Edward never came back but runs into Bella four years later....


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11944 Read Count: 1807
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 27 Jul 2010
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Talk Dirty to Me (EPOV)

Great Outtake!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-What Carlisle Saw (CPOV)

OMG Emmett is a riot!!!! LOL funny.



Author's Response:

Sammy:  Was it funny enough to win Best Comedy at the Vampire Awards, you think?  If you want, you can now vote.

 

The link is: http(colon)//twificpics(dot)com(slash)vampawards(slash)?page_id=198.


ps--Chapter 44 was just posted

She Sleeps by Bcullen1026 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 88]
Summary:

What if when the Cullens left Bella never recovered? What if when they meet again Edward's worst nightmare was real? **Warning: This story contains graphic sexual abuse. Please do not read if this offends you. It is rated NC-17 for a reason.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65223 Read Count: 21938
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good, intense story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Can someone please give Matt what he truly deserves, I want that SOB to be tortured continually WITHOUT a break for months and months before you finally do him in. 



Author's Response:

You are not alone in that feeling...Thanks for the review!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Looks to have the makings of a really good story.  I look forward to reading more. 



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Here's a little teaser for the next chapter! I hope to have it out on Friday. ^_^


Bella sat, swinging on the Swan's back porch, watching as Jack and Charlie played with his new pool and water slide. She smiled as she got to see a side of her father that she had never really seen before. She didn't remember much when she was Jack's age and when she was older, it was all of the arguments and tension in the house that she recalled, none of the fun times. After Renee left, Charlie continued to throw himself into his work. 

Now, it was like he was getting a second chance. It was amazing how much this little boy had changed all of their lives.

Just then, Bella felt something whiz past her head and then splatter against the wall, wetting her slightly. She looked back at the pool to see Charlie doubled over in laughter and Jack grinning.

"Nice one, Jack," Charlie managed to get out through his laughter. She watched as Jack reached down into the water and pick up another water balloon.

"Don't do it, Jack," she tried to say in a warning tone, but could barely hold back her own giggles. She was up and squealing as he let the balloon fly towards her. 




Also, just to let you know, I submitted a pic from this part of the chapter on http://pictease.blogspot.com, which get put up on Mondays! 

There should also be something completely different from this story on Teaser Mondays at http://www.fictionators.com/

Thanks again for your review and giving my baby a chance!    <3

 

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Good chapter.  Glad to see Leah has come around and that her and Bella are getting along.



Author's Response:

Hello, loves! Thank you to those of you new to reading, as well as my lovelies who have been here from the beginning! Here's a snippet from the next chapter.


Also, don't forget to check out http://pictease.blogspot.com/ and http://www.fictionators.com  for a couple of more teasers from the next chapter! PicTease is up now and Fictionators will be up tomorrow sometime!

 

Love y'all! 

 

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Bella stared in shock at the envelope in her hands. She looked up at Alice, who merely smiled and nodded for her to open it. 

"Alice," she asked, her voice thick with emotion. "This is from HarperCollins Publishing. What did you do?" 


Allie clapped her hands in excitement. "Just open the damn thing and see what they said!" 


With shaking fingers, she ripped open the flap and pulled out the paper. Alice bounced in nervousness and tried to peer over her shoulder.


"Holy shit," Bella breathed out, her wide eyes shot up to Allie's. 


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Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oh come on that was mean, we have waited all this time for them to meet and you cut it off there????  Anxiously waiting the next chapter.  By the way if I haven't said so lately, great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I can understand that Edward is over-whelmed, but he should be angry at Victoria not nasty to Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!


XoXo

Shel


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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.

"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."

"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."

"Duly noted, Alice."

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Great chapter.  Glad to see Edward trying to get himself under control and not take everything out on  Bella.  Can we not bring Victoria up on criminal charges?  Also was James the one she was sleeping with?



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Great chapter, looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Fracture by KatieJane4815 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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What are the chances of meeting your soulmate? What if you meet them at the age of 4? Edward and Bella have known each other since kindergarten. A fateful late night call opens their eyes to potentials they never thought of. AU, B/E, A/J, R/Em. Lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62958 Read Count: 27936
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Oct 2010
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Cooties

Good chapter, can't wait to find out what her problem with Bella is.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Let This Go

Why didn't he try to get out what happened. Couldn't Jasper and Esme back up his story?

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255213
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, and thanks for leaving a comment...lml

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter, but I REALLY REALLY hope you have something devious to take care of James later on.



Author's Response:

lololol ....I guess you will have to wait and see...lml

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

The only real probelm I have is her having to tell him what they were doing.  There are somethings that are JUST girl things, that is just normal. 



Author's Response:

Come on now ---if you walked in and saw them all kneeling on the floor wouldn't you be like ..."What the hell are you doing??" ...and the Alice comes up with the most unbelievable excuse...that Edward knows is a damn lie...lol ... your telling me you wouldn't be curious?? ...lol ...not because you have to know everything but because your just fucking wondering...what the hell they are doing....((human curiosity, that's all it is. And since he is in a posistion to find out,,,damn straight he's going to pull the trummp card....I would too...lol ....thanks for reading ,,, see ya later in the week ...lml

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Good chapter.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Good chapter, but I bet Emmett is about ready to string Alice up for pulling that stunt.  LOL

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I was thinking that Emmett was snoring.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I think it is very much a tell tale sign and Alice and Emmett can't set a date.  Neither one wants to be married to the other, they are acting more like brother and sister instead of how a husband and wife should be.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Emmett needs to man up and strong arm Rosie to be with him.

Relative Humidity by kimmrz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Bella Swan runs a public relations firm. She reconnects with her college room mate Alice who has also through the years tried, without success, to push her two favorite people into a dating relationship. Little does Bella know that soon fate will intervene. Bella is soon to find out that "relative humidity" has a whole new meaning.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165318 Read Count: 19378
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 02 Jan 2011
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Plum Crazy and Coincidental

Good story, I have enjoyed reading it so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it. 8o)

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

Looks to be a pretty good story.  I'm not sure I like the fact that he can read her mind though.



Author's Response:

It peaked my interest, about what if he could? So I thought this would be a good time to try it. Thank you for giving it a shot.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Firsts by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary: Past Featured Story

first

 Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 104701
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

That was a great chapter I almost wish Edward had punched the good doctor.  He is giving me the creeps and I'm just reading about him.  Have a nice vacation and I'll be looking forward to your next update.

Intimate Ties by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary:

Edward is a self-proclaimed Dominant and P.I. with a grudge. Bella and her brother are his target for revenge. Will he adhere to his mission for revenge, or fall in love with the one woman he shouldn't and bring forth her deepest desires?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95232 Read Count: 141815
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2016
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389631
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Looks to be reaaly good.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review... I really appreciate it..


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Oh you can't stop NOW!!!!!  This is way too good.  I'm greedy, if it was at all possible I would prefer daily updates.  You have a really good story going here.  I apologize for not commenting earlier but I read your story faithfully and look forward to future updates.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman.  A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH

First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning. 

 

image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138749
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2016
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Surprise! Or not.

That does not bode well for Edward at all. He expects honesty but does not give it in return.  There have been plenty of times he could have brought it up.  When she talked about having kids or when he said he always kept himself covered.  Not good, not good at all.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ltwyl

"There are times in our lives when we have to take a step back and evaluate where we are and how we got where we are. How events in our lives shape who we are and how we see the world" This is a story of sadness and strength. More importantly it's a story of survival. Four women are trapped by their choices and their situations. When all hope seems lost will they find salvation or will they be burnt by the flames of their own personal hells?

 

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Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the beautiful banner.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10727 Read Count: 2771
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2011 Updated: 08 May 2013
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Part Two: Isabella Swan

I believe you are doing a good job in telling this story.  You were right in the beginning stating that unless you've actually been in that situation you really don't know how you would react.  Good job.



Author's Response:

Thank you. It's hard writing a story like this because I don't want people to judge my female characters to sevearly for their actions and their choices, especially when it comes to these next two sections of the story. I try to stay as close to the truth of the matter as possible but even my beta was saying that she wanted to shake Bella by the end. I felt the need to slightly defend her and cut off any Bella bashing that might have occured. Again thanks for the review.

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143215
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Great chapter, cannot wait for the next one.  I am really enjoying your story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Has the makings to be a very interesting story and yes longer chapters would be nice.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I still see the possibilities with this story and look forward to the future chapters and longer chapters.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Personally I think it is more liek Edward has only taken one step forward and about five steps back.  He is such an ASS!  Hopefully one of these days he will get his comupins adn Bella will be the one to hand them to him.  ;)  Cannot wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

You're right.  It is more like one step forward and five back.  He is an ass ... he's not use to the 'real world' only getting everything he wants and not taking others feelings into account.  I'm glad you are liking my story, and thanks for reviewing. :)

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281133
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Very good!  I think Roger should have gone after the mother also for letting it continue, I have never been in that situation and I do understand she was a victim also.  What I cannot understand is not fighting for your child.  I told my husband once after he had a bad dream about hurting us that he really didn't need to worry about that cause if he ever went after the kids that I would kill him first.

 

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Very good.  I liked your ending, yeah there were still some questions but in clearing those up more were bound to crop up.  This was a good place to end.  Good Job.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159804
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: SammyJo Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really enjoying your new story. 

Thank you ladies!