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Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Nice to see you back...I was spoiled with your frequent updates so I was curious as to the delay...so now their son is born, I can't wait to read what happens next

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue

What a great ending to this tale, that is too funny.  Great job

Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)

Great chapter...I am so happy to have recently found your story and look forward to future updates.  Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...

*raises hand* I mean, how could you not think its Bella with that title...excited to read what happens on Thanksgiving, so don't keep us in suspense too long.  Oh, and great chapter as always

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?

Man, who is the biggest bitch in this chapter....Renee, Mrs. Cope, or Jessica? Tough call on that one, but great chapter and can't wait to see what happens next....also loving the Bella and Edward kink you have going on throughout this story!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming

awww, I love a Cullen family Christmas!!!  They are so great together and I love how they all tag team each other to get what they want.  And Merci on the French Maid lemon, that was great too!  Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

Wow, this is turning into a Christmas nightmare...First off, Jessica has some nerve trying to petition for custody after giving up all rights, and 2 people living together is hardly a legal issue in my opinion.  Edward and Bella do seem to have some communication issues, and they keep emotions bottled up until they snap and overreact...I hope they can calm down and get back together.

Bella is absolutely right in being upset at what he said and for not letting her in, but leaving without telling anyone on Christmas seems irresponsible, even if she is mad at Edward.  Good news is that it definitely Edward know how bad he messed up and how serious it was.  So I was happy the Cullens found and brought her back, but wasn't expecting her to be so cold to Edward once he apologized

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues

Jeez, if it's not Edward then it's Emmett acting a fool. One always seems to be apologizing...but I loved that he included his daughter in both the decision and the proposal...so sweet!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

Okay, I started to read this chapter expecting to read about some great post-engagement loving and other bedroom antics, but instead you completely rip them apart.  I am sure I am not the only one wondering what happened?

So Jessica is going to use the BDSM argument in her custody battle.  First off, whether Bella is there or not, wouldn't she still be able to bring his sexual history up in court.  Also, unless she has proof that Edward still practices that lifestyle, he could simply say he experimented in the past but is now focused on being the best father for Carlie.  Again, this would have nothing to do with Bella.

Isn't it worse for him to go to court single instead of in a loving relationship heading towards marriage with a spouse intent on adopting Carlie?  And how was it explained to Carlie that Bella is suddenly gone and she has to transfer schools...I am sure Carlie feels like this is partially her fault that she is at a new school and Bella is gone from their life.  And how could Edward not fight for Bella and just quietly take his ring back, after all the drama it took to get engaged.  I understand that Carlie is a child and must be a top priority, but he didn't attempt to find a way to make Bella a priority too.  And to me the most unforgivable part is all the Cullens stopped talking to her, not just Edward...She went from family to nothing, and I really don't know how it can be fixed.

Sorry about the rant above.  Obviously I love this story and will keep reading to see what happens next, but I had to get some of my frustration off my chest, and now I will hope that better things are to come for Bella.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

Poor Bella, her life is quite a mess.  I am glad she is back in town and with the Cullens, especially for Carlie's sake.  I also thought it was sweet that Edward saved her last 3 voicemails, but I think they still have a long way to go.  It's good that are going to couples therapy and being honest about the BDSM stuff.

I really like what you did in this chapter to mark the passage of time.  Now I am excited to see what happens on date night

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase

Yikes, being compared to Renee for running away must have been really tough for Bella to hear, that she essentially did to Carlie what her mom did to her.  I am glad they are in therapy and realizing all the mistakes they made along the way.  I didn't realize she was so bothered by the D/s aspect of the relationship and how it makes her uncomfortable [from memory, I haven't gone back to reread]...also I understand Bella's issue with money, but I don't get why Edward is so reluctant to share info on it, so maybe we will find out why soon...I can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow, 16 months with no sex...I can't remember exactly how long they were apart, but they have been living together for awhile, so I am shocked they have kept everything so PG-13.

Edward is such a dumbass.  He finally gets his woman back and successfully proposes, is promised a wild night of sex with a freshly waxed Bella hoohah, yet he gets stupid drunk, passes out alone, and pisses Bella off, again.  When will that boy ever learn.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Ewww.... I am glad Carlie was just tricking Caius, and not really a submissive, that might have sent Bella and Edward over the edge.

And too funny with the Jack "experiments"...Nair, that has got to burn...I guess the olive oil makes sense, but Edward should probably get the kid some lube before he hurts himself.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Glad to see that life goes on, and they had a nice time away from the kids. 

Now, I am a bit confused why Bella would be so mad at Edward because of Carmen's will.  He had no knowledge of it and didn't ask for it, so why can she blame him for it and be mean to him...it is pretty much out of his hands...of course she may be upset when she finds out he is keeping the money, but it sounds like he has good things planned to use it on.

On a sidenote, what the heck did Carmen do for a living to leave that kind of estate behind...wowza

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

Death happens, I can accept that if it makes sense for the story.  What is hard to believe is that Esme knew she had cancer and ignored it - even being married to a doctor...that must have almost felt like a betrayal to poor Carlisle, once it was too late to treat.

Glad that Bella was able to step up and assume her role in the family, even if Edward is dumb enough to initiate a sexbargo to prove a point...hint, hint - nobody wins!

It has been quite fun watching this family and all their quirks interact over the years, and I look forward to see how you wind it down, just please don't kill Bella or Edward - the readers might stone you if that occurs

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87538
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Good to see Emmett and Edward getting along better and looks like Jacob is a dead man walking - can't wait to see what happens next

 



Author's Response:

Thanks. =D

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Good chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Hope you stick with this story. =)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Nice Ciffie, can't wait to see who it is.  Hopefully Emmett will come around to Edward, but probably not anytime soon



Author's Response:

Yeah, you're right there. Emmett and Edward have a long way to go before they become friends. Anyway, thanks! =)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I can't believe Leah was so dilusional about Jacob and Bella, that she would resort to the extreme measures she attempted.  I am glad they took care of her, even if it was a bit gruesome.  Good chapter!

PS - enjoyed your one-shot as well, I think it would make a great full story if you find the time.



Author's Response:

Lol! Glad you enjoyed that O/S. Thanks bb! =) hugs!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

whew, you start us off with a hot lemon right off the bat; even Jasper couldn't interrupt their happy time.

hmm, worrying about babies...maybe a premonition of things to come.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

It has been a while since I've written some good loving between these two. Glad you liked it. ;)

Bella won't be getting pregnant anytime soon so no need for you to worry about it...yet. lol! Anyway, thanks! ;D

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ding, Dong - Jacob's finally dead, and he soooo deserved what he got, gruesome as it may have been.  Glad that Edward and Emmett found something to bond over :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467363
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue

Wow, your story is so fantastic!!!  I am late to this party and just spent the past week propping my eyes open with toothpicks every night just so I could keep reading.  Your characters are so fun and I love how much you developed them; I don't want to say goodbye to them yet! I think you should consider one more story of this family, and make it an even trilogy :)

EJ is such a man-whore I have trouble liking him some of the time, but I LOVE CC and I want to see Alex and Michael all grown up.  And Edward could finally have his hood of the car sex!!! (poor guy).  If not a full story, then at least we get a few outtakes (soon I hope, hint hint).

You are one of my new favorite authors, off to read more of your stories....Love you!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

FBI psychologist Bella Swan is being stalked by one of criminals she helped put behind bars. When she is forced to leave her home town to lay low for a while, she meets the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. Is he really who he says he is, or is he working for the stalker?

Thank you NoelleSeven for the banner!!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277257 Read Count: 40875
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 May 2011
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Secrets

Good chapter, really enjoying the story...hopefully they figure out all the secrets and miscommunications are bad and fess up to each other.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story so much. Up next our favorite couple as a little but of fun as well as they finally have that long awaited talk they need to have.

Thanks for reading, there is a teaser for the chapter up on my blog now.

EA~

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Never Say Never

Good to see that Edward suvived Charlie...can't wait to get back to the mystery, so keep up the good writing!

Author's Response:

We have just a couple more confessions from these two in the next chapter along with Bella getting to meet E's parents. But soon we will get back to the mystery.

As promised here is your teaser for chapter 15. I hope to post it this weekend. Thanks for reading, EA~

"Mmmm, why are you awake?" Edward rasped, while burying his face in the crook of my neck. "Did you have another bad dream?"

"No, you must have scared all the bad dreams away. I slept just fine once you were here," I admitted to him because it was the truth. It was the best I had slept in a long time.

"Is that so?"

"Yep. I guess you're like my personal dream catcher or something," I teased.

"Well I'll happily perform that duty anytime," he said placing a kiss just behind my ear.

I stretched before rolling over to face him. "I'm gonna hold you to that, ya know," I whispered as I scooted as close to him as I could get.

"I have no doubt you will, Sweetness. In fact, I'm looking forward it," he said softly as his arms tightened around me, holding me. "You sure you're ok?"

"Yeah I was just thinking," I answered after placing a kiss on the side of his neck.

"Penny for your thoughts," he offered.

"Just a little nervous about meeting your parents," I murmured against his neck.

"Don't be," he said.

"How can you be so sure they won't think I am messing up your life? Look at all you've had to give up because of me. I've just recently realized how much being here with me all the time has disrupted your normal life."

"Bella, first of all, it doesn't matter to me what they think. Or maybe I should say it's not going to change anything. Not how I feel or the fact I want to be here. What you are failing to see is that I haven't had to give up anything. I chose to do it and I have no regrets about it at all whatsoever. No one forced me to take on the task of keeping you safe. I volunteered. And given the choice again, I'd do it in a heartbeat."

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Love You Out Loud

Very revealing chapter, I was wondering what caused Bella's trust issues, so like Edward says, it all makes more sense now.  Can't wait for the next Chapter!



Author's Response:

So glad that you understand her hesitancy better now. I hope to have chapter 16 up on Sunday. Thanks so much for reading. Here is your teaser.

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"I don't know, Bella," Emmett said as he debated whether or not to agree to my visiting Reynolds. I had spent the whole morning in my office contemplating what I would say to him in order to have the best shot at him agreeing. I knew if I couldn't convince Emmett, there was no way of convincing Edward. So I worked on my boss and good friend first, knowing he was completely aware of the number of times I had already come face to face with the monster who was locked up just two hours south of here.

"Look, Emmett, I haven't come face to face with him since all of this bullshit with the apples and the notes began. I need to see that he is still in that prison with my own eyes. I know it's a bit ridiculous and the rational side of my brain knows he is. But there's the other side that was scared shitless by what took place in that house and the nightmares I've been having since then that needs to do this. I need it for my own sanity. Besides I want the opportunity to confront him about the apples and letters and see if I can catch him off guard. Get a read on him and see if I can make him slip up and give us some information."

"You've been having nightmares?" Emmett asked, surprised by my admission.

"Yes, which only increases my desire to make sure he is still in that prison. And I've had enough training and experience dealing with Reynolds that I know I can go in there and keep my cool around him. I want to make him see he is not getting to me even if he has to some degree."

"I hear what you're saying, Bella. I get it, I really do. But do you really think you might be able to get him to admit something?" Emmett asked quizzically.

"I got him to confess to the crimes he was being accused of didn't I?" I retorted.

"Yes you did. But this is personal, Bella. Can you really go in there and not let him rattle you?"

"Emmett, what he is doing to me is nothing compared to what he did to those other women. I had to sit there and listen to him tell me about what he did. So yeah, I think I can. I didn't let the gruesome vulgarity of what he'd done to them get to me when I'd convinced Reynolds that I understood him and empathized with him in order to get a confession. I won't let it bother me now either. If it will make you happy, you and Edward can both come with me. I know that either you or Seth would have to go anyways, so why not take Edward too? He won't like it anymore than you, so I figure he'll insist on going. Might as well just avert the argument and set it up that way," I said as I continued to argue my case with him.

"You should have been a fucking attorney, Swan," Emmett huffed.

"Oh, but then I wouldn't have the pleasure of working with you," I added sarcastically before painting a fake pout on my face that had Emmett rolling with laughter the second he saw it.

"Fine, I'll call down to Stafford and let them know we'll be there tomorrow. In the mean time, you get to call lover boy and make sure he is available to go then.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Monsters

James is so creepy, and I am pretty sure he is going to feel betrayed by Bella now that he saw her with Edward...this does not look good for them.  Can't wait to see what happens next and who the mole is - Thanks



Author's Response:

Yes James is super creepy. Soon things with the case will begin to unravel and you will learn it all. Until then here is the teaser for chaper 17.

Thanks for reading, EA~

I went back downstairs and tried to occupy myself and not think about the fact that Bella was upstairs in my bathroom naked and wet. It wasn't an easy thing to do. Thoughts of her in my tub caused images of the day she had sprayed herself down after she'd washed her car to fill my mind. My head and my heart were telling me it was too soon to jump back into a physical relationship with her, that I had to take things at her pace, but my body was screaming just the opposite. Sleeping next to her every night and feeling her body pressed up against mine was bliss and torture all at the same time. I loved being there with her, having her in my arms all night long, but I was also yearning to touch her and make love to her again.

My thoughts shifted to the conversation we'd had the other day. I'd been sleeping in her room with her ever since the night we came back from her parent's house. After the first few days of me going back and forth between the two rooms to get what I needed, Bella said there was no way she was sleeping without me again so I should just move all of my stuff into her room. I was a little concerned that she was using me as a security blanket of sorts. I tried to not make a big deal about it but in the end I had to know if it was because she wanted me there for me or because of the bad dreams she'd been having, since it was the dreams that instigated my being there in the first place. Once we talked about it she assured me that while it may have started out because of the dreams, she loved having me in bed next to her and wanted me there because she loved me and didn't want to be away from me. Bella also told me that she'd only had one nightmare since we'd been out to the prison and it wasn't as intense as the others. Her explanation came as a relief to me. If she had been keeping me there because of the dreams, I would have stayed. But I would have also suggested that she talk to someone about her dreams, that they may be bothering her more than they should. It appeared that confronting Reynolds and seeing he was indeed still locked up gave her the result she had hoped it would.

Not wanting to be away from her any longer and thinking she'd be done with her bath soon, I made sure the loft was locked up, the alarm was set and then grabbed her bag, taking it upstairs to my room with me. I snickered to myself when it dawned on me that she'd been so excited to get in the tub, she'd forgotten to take her bag with her, meaning she wouldn't have anything to wear with her in the bathroom.

I got undressed and slipped into a pair of gym shorts and a t-shirt. Lounging across my bed I turned on the TV and caught up on all the local news while I waited for Bella to be finished with her bath. I was only slightly disappointed when she emerged from the bathroom, wearing one of my button-down shirts. And I say only slightly because even though I had hoped she'd be in nothing more than a towel, she was damn sexy wearing my clothes.

"Um… I hope you don't mind. It seems in my haste to try out your tub, I forgot my bag downstairs." She had a hint of pink on her cheeks as she pulled her bottom lip in between her teeth while she leaned against the doorway, waiting for my reply.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Lady in Red

Damn, the apples are back, and on her bed no less....how very creepy to come home to that.

Another great chapter...that Chelsea is a piece of work, some people are so delusional and self-absorbed that they can't relate to anyone, so I feel sorry for her husband, but also giggled that Rose scared her off with Bella's threat of carrying a gun.



Author's Response:

HI, I know it’s been a while since the last update, but the wait will soon come to an end. I hope you all had an awesome Christmas is you celebrated it. I know I had a great time with my family. So even though it’s a little late, here is a little gift from me in the form of a teaser form the next chapter of TLA. 

 

The next chapter will post on Friday morning and we will then get back to our regular routine.

 

I can’t begin to tell you how much your support and love of this story means to me and how much I appreciate your patience while I took this short break.

 

~Eternally Addicted~

 

Here’s your teaser.

 

“What are you up to, Cullen?”

 

“Just wanna help my girl relax before she goes to bed. I know this has been hard for you and I want to take care of you. Is that so bad?” he asked as he took my hand and pulled me up off the bed and held me tightly against him.

 

“Mmm, nothing wrong with it at all,” I said as I reached up and placed a soft kiss where his jaw and neck met. “I just have one request though.”

 

“And what would that be, Sweetness?”

 

“That you join me.”

 

“I think I can arrange that,” he said lowering his face and covering my lips with his. Without breaking the kiss, he picked me up and carried me to the bathroom.

 

Setting me back down on my feet, we began to undress each other, taking our time and savoring every moment as we kissed and touched until we were both bare. Edward had dimmed the light in the room, giving it a soft glow similar to that of candle light.

 

“No candles?” I teased, leaning my head back, allowing him better access to the spot on my neck where he was currently placing languid open mouthed kisses.

 

“Nope. Remember you are the only woman who has ever been here. So I am totally unprepared for setting up romantic moments. But you can be sure I will rectify that as soon as I can because I plan to have plenty of them here with you.”

 

“You’re gonna spoil me, Edward.”

 

“That’s the plan, Sweetness. Now let’s get you in the water before it gets cold.”

 

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Univited

Another great post.  I understand Edward's guilt as he is a security expert, so it does reflect poorly that someone got in, even if the explanation about waiting makes sense.  I wonder if Mike was in on it, or just unlucky coincidence.

Jessica defnitely sounds suspicious with the transfer, so I can't wait to see what happens next, or what Seth is up to.



Author's Response:

You will get some more clues in chapter 20 which will post in just a little bit. Then by the end of chapter 21 which I hope to have up later this week, you will know exactly who the accomplice is by the end.

Thanks for reading,

EA~

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 I Will Not Bow

Jessica still looks mighty suspicious, and her findings on Lauren were interesting yet make sense if she was disinherited for being a lesbian. In the back of my mind, a part of me thinks she may too obvious so we will see what you reveal in the next chapter and can't wait for what happens next!

  James cannot get transferred soon enough.  I hope it isn't like on Silence of the Lambs where he escapes in transit, he just needs to be put down for good.  Was James extremely wealthy prior to his incarceration?  It seems like he would need lots of money for all the trouble he is causing.



Author's Response:

I promise all the answers are coming in the next few chapters. Tomorrow you will find out exactly who the accoplice is. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

 

EA

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Bless the Broken Road

Nice chapter to let everyone regroup after the craziness of James and Jacob.  And Edward could go caveman on me anytime he wants :)



Author's Response:

Yes, the craziness is over and now its time for them to move on and put their lives back together. And I am right there with ya on wanting Edward to go caveman on me too.

Thanks for reading a new chapter will post this weekend. Until then here is a teaser for ya.

 

“Damn it, Bella,” he sighed in annoyance while tugging on his hair. “I want you to listen and listen good.”

I slowly nodded letting him know that I was.

“First you need to know I am not upset with you. Second, you need to know that my life has been forever changed because you are in it and I wouldn’t have it any other way. I love you so much and I would do anything for you and no matter what it might be that I do, I do it because I want to. I could have chosen to walk away at any time. But I didn’t then and I won’t now. You could never be a burden to me. As far as I am concerned you are perfect to me and for me. Tell me something and you have to be completely honest with me. Will you do that?”

“Yes,” I answered softly. I could see a fire and determination burning in his eyes.

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238937
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

awwww, Bella finally got marked with the Mating venom.  Can't wait to read more, and to see why hybrids are so forbidden, other than Aro wanting to keep his race pure, so to speak.  Keep up the good work.

PS - these vampires sound a bit drooly sometimes, don't they :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm not sure what chapter I reveal the truth about why hybrids are not allowed to be created, but it will be soon. =)  Yes, they do sound drooly a bit. lol

Thank you for reading and commenting! I appreciate it.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Welcome back - I have been reading your other work Living Amongst Hell so I wasn't sure when you would get a chance to get back to this one.  I really love this story and I love how in depth your chapters are!

It was great to see Bella have some human time with Angela, and I can't wait to see what happens if Angela comes back for Ben's party, hopefully they will have some non-blood refreshments for the human.  Although I can't picture Edward letting Bella attend a vamp party knowing there is a killer on the loose targeting victims that look like her.

And Whew, Edward has been making up for lost time with his marking and mating scents, amongst all the lemons in this chapter, I love it! He is so hot when he is being the dominant vampire.

A visit from Aro doesn't sound good, so can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I'm trying to switch back and forth between the two fics LAH and LAV. lol And thank you, I''m glad you are enjoying this story.

Ben is sweet, he'll make sure that Angela and Bella will have some human refreshments. Yes, very true. Good point. Edward feels like attending the vamp party wouldn't be a problem, since most vamps that will attend are good friends of Ben's and don't have anything against humans-but you never know...lol . And....there may be a few party crashers...lol

Thank you. Glad you like Edward dominant.

Yes, Aro is coming up really soon. I wonder what you will think. Hmmm..

Thank you for your comments. I appreciate them very much. And hopefully, you will like the next chapter as well.

~Jells

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105129
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

I enjoyed this chapter very much.  It was nice to see the conversation between Edward and Carlisle...oh, and the first playroom scene was HOT!  I love Master Edward :)



Author's Response:

I am glad to hear that you enjoyed it! Carlisle and Edward needed that rebonding time. Thank you for reading it!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology

Good chapter, I love their time together, and Bella always has the best thoughts in her head.  It was good to see Esme apologize but I still would have trouble forgiving her after what they pulled, so can't wait to see what happnens next. Thanks

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's

Yea, I am glad that Edward is finally admitting that Bella is his mate and is thinking about turning her.  She is so worried about being alone I wonder how she will respond to being with Edward "forever".  And you are right, Edward is a tad bit jealous there, love it!



Author's Response:

yeah it was time for him to see what life was like without her, but we know and love edward but he can be an idiot when it comes to giving in!

Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233

Summary:

 

Bella, Rose and Alice are all off at Northwestern going to med school.  They are venturing out of the dorm life into a newly build buidling of condos.  Bella is stalked by someone. Who is doing it and how much will they get away with before they are caught? Can a new friend help her overcome the violent things happening to her? Can she ever trust a man?  Can she survive this or will it break her? Story contains violent actions, stalking, abuse, rape, agnst, and is not geared for everyone.  If these things bother you please pass over those items. *warning will be given* AH/

 

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Thank you so much for reading my story, I look forward to your reviews.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113884 Read Count: 55095
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: A Captured Man

That was a nice chapter. I am glad to see that Bella is safe and I am curious to see who this stalker really is...even though he is caught, I have a feeling that Bella's recovery is far from over...any idea how many chapters are left on this story. Anyways, keep up the good work and update soon!

Author's Response:

well the next chapter is the big reveal however the story is not over.  There are a few things that are going to happen yet. Not sure on how many chapters are yet to come but the story is not over.  I would say about half way over maybe.  The stalker may be in custody but who knows what is going to happen.  Things will get interesting for sure and parts of this story are based on true events and there is more story to tell.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: What a Wedding

Good chapter -they finally said "I do"!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing I am greatful for the reviews!  I am glad that you like the story!

I hope that you like the next chapter I sent the preview to you via the contact button on your profile!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Chip It and Travel

Wow, isn't technology great...I have heard of chipping pets and knew it existed for humans, but had no idea of some of the alert features and vibrating functions it displays when triggered, so that was very interesting.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Manolomel9~

Thanks for reading and reviewing I am greatful for all the reviews I get!  I did a lot od reasearch on the chips, and those are actual features you can get I think it is totally cool.  they are very cool and when carlisle was talkign abotu the nonotech I got all of that off line by google'ing: gps chipping a human.  They are state of the art and way cool IMO

:) Kasi~

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: About That Box

ohh, that Alec is so creepy, I really hope he goes down soon...the baby blanket gift was beyond creepy.  yuck! Please kill him off soon, okay...and bring on some more Bella and Edward lovin --- keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Yes he is creepy and no worries he will get his, I will work ont he edward and bell aloving, even though she is currently feeling a big as a HOUSE.  LOL

Thanks for the story love!

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Kasi

Preview sent via contact me button on your profile so go check your email.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Birthday Text

Good chapter, that Alec is sneaky, for sure...I can't believe she is having twins and I am suprised they didn't hear 2 heartbeats as well, but I don't know much about twins.  Hope they can keep Bella and the babies safe!



Author's Response: Most times when they find the one they do not search for the other and the second is not always noticable depending on babies placements as well. I actually personally know a woman who when I was like 12 (Almost 30 years ago) had a sonogram because she was so HUGE they thought twins but the sonogram only saw one baby they could not see a second baby and she ended up having twins. They were just one on top of the other and could not be seen. Nowadays it would be harder for such a slip being that we have the 3d ultrasounds and what not. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I have sent you the teaser via the contact button. More sneaky Alec on the side soon! Kasi~

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Hold On, Don’t Let Go

I can't believe he shot at them, but I was pretty sure Edward would be okay, but poor Sasha, hope she is okay eventually.  Alec is seriously unstable and I can't wait for him to go down.  It is obvious how delusional he is and I don't think he really cares for Bella, she is just the prize; otherwise he would know the stress he is putting on her and the babies with all his drama. They need to find their leak and stop him fast!

At this point if I was Bella I would not leave the house for anything until crazy is caught.  Not practical, but it would be safer



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing...It means a lot to me believe me!

Part of being unstable is not being able to see clearly between reality and delusion.  Alec lives in a serious amount of delusion and I do nto think would know reality if it bit him in the butt.  There will a total of 47 chapters of story and a chapter for the epilog.  So you do nto have to stress too much it will all come to an end soon.  I promise it will be a HEA ending.  See ya very soon with an update!

Kasi~

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: October

Yeah, I figured she would get tired of being on lockdown, but at least it keeps her safe.  That being said, I don't know if a costume party is the best place to make an appearance with a psycho-killer stalking you.  Guess we will wait and see, huh.



Author's Response:

I just wanted them to have some fun she is always so locked up in the homestead you know???  anyway  the next chapter will post soon and then you will have all the answers as to if it was a good idea or a bad mistake.

 

thank you for reading and reviewing.

Kasi~

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Love at First Sight

Great job, Alec is dead, by Bella's hand no less, she is not his victim anymore. And they have their babies and Edward is offically the father, thank god.  Definitely enjoyed your story, but am equally excited for your new one on the Sub Edward, so don't keep us waiting long :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the wonderful reviews and for reading my story!  I promise to do my best to not keep you waiting much on A Sub Search (A.S.S.  ...  LOL)  (sorry it is my inner 3 year old coming out.) I am writing it as fast as I can but it is involving a HUGE amount of research.  So please be patient I assure you it will be worth it.

Kasi~

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue: Thirteen Years, Down the Road

Thanks, it is always nice to see what everyone is up to down the road...but man, that is a LOT of kiddos.  Good Job



Author's Response:

yeah it is....but it was fun to imagine it and write it and I chose the number of kids a long time ago because I have 7 myself.  Oh and I was an only child.

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hmmm...Edward seems a bit more shady in this chapter compared to earlier ones...and sounds like an ominous cliffy of what is to come. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61968
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

awww, Edward is so sweet and romantic, can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wow, what a great proposal setup...sounds like Edward really thought of everything and made it special...now who is the jerk at the end, can't wait to see who is revealed next chapter.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Should have known it was Jacob trying to ruin the perfect proposal...I am glad they got rid of him quickly enough. And nice lemon there at the end :)

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Nice to see them get away for one night as a normal happy couple...and that was one nice long lemon to enjoy!  Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

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Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Vcards & Vows

Finally, after 70+ chapters of UST, we finally get to the sexin', and man was it good.  Never fear your lemon skills, that was hot, and I hope to read more going forward.  For both being virgins, I have to say Edward is the man for lasting that long and getting her off twice - Way to Go!

PS - can't wait to read about this night from his point of view :)

PPS - the wedding and all the speeches were nice too [see, I did read the whole thing, promise]

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Pool Tables & Revelations

Poor Edward, the secret is out...can't wait to read the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It's coming.  Eventually.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Creme Eggs & Welcome Distractions

Good chapter, we knew Edward would have to eventually leave for England, but it was still sad to see them part.  Can't wait for the next chapter...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Some Justice & Escargot

wow, that lady really did self-destruct and on live TV, no political career in her future, thank goodness...I like the sexward phone call as well, thanks for another entertaining chapter



Author's Response:

the good news is she's gone for good...i do not foresee Geri returning.  THanks! 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

aww, I like how Bella can drive him crazy skyping while wearing a pink nightie...is it time for her to head to London yet?  Can't wait!



Author's Response:

soon,,,you will love what happens when they skype next chap.  Thanks!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

I love this Bella and Edward, they are so cute together, even though poor Edward must have the worst case of blue balls ever.

Not sure about the cliffie, but I think it may have something to do with Emmett and his ad campaign :)

Author's Response:

as i said before i have offered time and again to help Edward with his 'problem'...he just won't hear of it.  oh well.  yeah yeah..i'm married...hubs would just have to understand...It EDWARD for cripes sake.  lol.  Thanks!   (as for your guess...everyone will find out very soon....still tweaking the next chapter.)  Thanks so much! 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Good chapter...even though he is an actor and the sex scenes are fake and unromantic, it would still be uncomfortable to watch someone you love pretend almost naked...so I don't blame her for leaving.

My one and only trip to England we went to Stratford upon Avon and I went to most of the places mentioned in this chapter, so that was really cool to read about.  The gardens are simply gorgeous.  And nice proposal cliffy, can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

i've heard stories about the 'significant others' of actors or actresses DEMANDING to be present during those scenes, so they can make sure everything is handled in a professional manner.  In this particular case, i don't think Bella overreacted.  Seeing Edward like that would be VERY hard to take.  Glad E keeps it covered..lol.

As you can tell, i love England...very much.  Thanks!

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

Awesome job with the proposal.  Good to see they are getting closer to lemon-time, let's just hope for a quick engagement



Author's Response:

are we getting impatient?  lol   Thanks!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge

Bella's obsession with Edwards' ass is hilarious, I love the idea that he could have shown up to work sporting a bite mark on his ass.  That would be too funny.

I am almost as sad as Bella that she had to return home to the crazy paps and apparently a crazy stalker.  Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks!



Author's Response:

she likes his rear..but is afraid of his peen.  Before too much longer i will have her say the line:  'i'm allergic to penis'  I swear.  watch for it.  lol.  THanks!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Good chapter, I love me some Skypeward, but I have to admit I am soo ready for them to tie the knot and hopefully end some of the sexual frustration :)



Author's Response:

everyone probably agrees with you...even me...but sometimes(all the time) i just get wordy...we will get there eventually.  Thanks!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

I was hoping Edward could make it home in time to be there for her mom's anniversary, and you did not disappoint.



Author's Response:

glad you liked it!  just finished the next chap it will post soon.  Thanks!

tHirTeEn by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 16139
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am really enjoying your story so far...and I do not usually like non canon pairings so good job with a different take regarding the plot...look forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for giving my little fic a try. I'm glad that you're liking it. T

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue

Wow, I wasn't expecting to go from a gunshot to fifteen years later, but was happy to read it was Edwarad that survived [like there was any doubt though, right].  Given that their son Phillip has family obligations in England, I thought it was a nice touch to give the vineyard to Kate and her husband.  Good story, sorry that all good things must come to an end at some point, but I am already hooked on your new story - Good luck!

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Bella is divorced and heartbroken. Lonely and broken four years later she is in a tragic accident. Can her Greek god heal ALL of her wounds? OOC/Cannon pairings. Rated M for lemons! Lots of lemons...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 111950 Read Count: 47924
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ha, I love how he is severly injured until he find out she doesn't mind doing it again, then he magically heals to be able to perform...Men!

Loved it!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

oh, I can't believe they finally did it and she sliced his dick open...talk about bad luck, I hope Eddie Jr. recovers soon :)

Also glad she got some of her questions answered, but this highlights how little they still know each other, I can't wait for them to move in and learn more.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Whoa, probably not the right time to ask her to move in as drunk and mad as she is...can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Crap, she finally gets closure from Jake then loses Edward to a stupid misunderstanding...please don't break them up over this...

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Awww, they finally said "I love you" to each other, got rid of Jake [I hope] and found out a bit more of Edwards past...great chapter!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love how she calls him out for being pretentous, too funny.  And so cute they are still cuddle buddies :)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I don't know if Carlisle is helping more or hurting them more, but I thinks its great that he is stepping up to be their matchmaker...usually it's one of the ladies like Alice that does that...

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter...I love that she knows she is his inspiration for new music and that he couldn't stay away from her...how much longer until they move back in together :)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's so sweet that he stuck around for weeks while Bella was unconscious and he didn't even know anything about her...Talk about an instant connection, can't wait to see what happens next!

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27210
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 part 1

Wow, what are the odds that the same James attacked both Alice and Bella?  They need to band together and destroy these evil men [James and Royce] and live HEA with their good men [Jazz, Em, and Edward].  At least that is what I hope happens, so can't wait to see what happens next :)

Things Least Expected by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 477]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty.  She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog.  Instead at twenty eight she breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family.  With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2012
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love your story so far... Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  The next chapter will be posted soon!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Esme is such a disappointing mom so it is nice to see how warm and loving Edward's parents are...and love the twist from canon regarding the parents. The ending makes me nervous about his sister, so I can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response:

I wanted a huge contrast between Esme and Renee.  it'll be relevent later in the story.  The next chapter will posted in a few minutes!

-Lisa

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow, very surprised by this chapter...I knew they would have challenges with his fame, his sister's attitude, and her mom - but it never crossed my mind that they would be on such different paths...I mean, those are both dealbreakers in most relationships so I can't wait to see where you take us from here.



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading and reviewing.

I thought this chapter would kind of catch people off guard.   I hope you enjoy what is coming up for them!

-Lisa

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

awww, that sucks that Charlie didn't make it.  Bella is pretty brave to fly out there, and I don't like the sound of Jacob's premonition...how much more can she take.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Bella's heart is in the right place.  Renee and Charlie were supportive of her and there for her when their son wasn't.  She feels she is doing the right thing to be there for Renee, even if that means she is going to face not only Edward but the joyous Jane too.

Next chapter will be posted soon!
-Lisa

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

well, at least his aversion to marriage and kids makes more sense...but correct me if I am wrong cause I haven't had a chance to go back and read this from the beginning, but did he discuss Tanya with Bella or is she completely in the dark on this [not that it matters because Edward is essentially punishing Bella for Tanya's mistakes].

I am Team Bella for sure!



Author's Response:

He has never talked to Bella about Tanya.  All that he said about her way back when (after Bella told Edward she googled him and her name came up) was they were friends.  Bella is completly in the dark about their history. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Going to try and post soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Can't wait to find out if they regret the angry sex. I also found it humorous that Edward cannot hear the word baby or look at her belly unless they are having sex, then he doesn't seem to mind. I really hope he confesses his past with Tanya soon, but not sure if that would do any good at this point. Can't blame Bella for being upset...Love your story, please update soon!

Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading/reviewing.

Bella and Edward will be talking soon.  Edward is being stupid and selfish right now.  He's afraid of getting hurt, but as we all know nothing is certian when it comes to love. 

I'm actually working on the next chapter as we speak.  It should be posted ina day or so.

-Lisa

 



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading/reviewing.

Bella and Edward will be talking soon.  Edward is being stupid and selfish right now.  He's afraid of getting hurt, but as we all know nothing is certian when it comes to love. 

I'm actually working on the next chapter as we speak.  It should be posted ina day or so.

-Lisa

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

She looked Edward directly in the eyes when she spoke.  “Can we make this clear for the last time?  You don’t want me, right?  You don’t want me or the baby?”

 Edward had tears fill his eyes.  He looked away from her and at the table in front of him as he spoke quietly.  “No, I don’t

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As soon as i read this exchange I knew it was done, as did Bella.  That was the dealbreaker.  I know Edward is hurting over his past and the recent loss of his father, but I held hope he would snap out of it, especially when he saw Bella in person and they had sex.  But that one sentence was so powerful in ending their relationship.  It is not really something you can work on from here, and Bella should just cut her losses and keep her family support.  She doesn't need this stress in her life.  I know, easier said than done.

Not sure what to make of the Jane situation, she annoys me and to do a 180 seemed too sudden, so I wouldn't trust her if I were Bella.  Time to get the heck out of Forks and move on...Renee is pretty awesome, but I have to ask what Emmett thinks about Edward...because I imagine knockin Bella up and leaving her would not make her overprotective brother happy, at all. 



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for r/r.

 

I'm trying to work on an out take of Edward's point of view (I have never done one before.  I'm working on that and the next chapter as we speak, so it  might be a little longer for an update).  I want to show what he was thinking/feeling during the whole scene (not that will make things right).  

Jane was only intersted in protecting her brother, that's why she didn't like Bella.  She was from a world that Jane didn't know and immeditly thought she was after Edward fo rhis money.  Once Bella had it out with her and proved that she didn't care about his money Jane was more at ease.  Now she knows that Bella didn't get pregnant on purpose, she would like to help her.  I had more dialoug between Bella and Jane but edited it out (it didn't flow right).  Bella is on the first flight from Seattle to Boston in the next chapter.

There maybe a conversation with Emmett coming up soon, we'll see.

-Lisa

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Yeah, overprotective Emmett is back, and I am glad that he is just as pissed as we readers are at Edward. I didn't even think about the flowers in the airport trash until another reviewer mentioned it, but now I could totally see Edward running to the airport to stop her and seeing Jake.  Of course instead of fighting for her, he turned tail and ran again. That would explain the difference in the messages between the first 2 deliveries and the last one.

 I know that emotionally Edward is all over the place, but he needs to quit being such an emo-bitch and make a grand jesture to Bella.  Sending flowers are ok, but so impersonal after everything they have been through. I still have hope that he will come around and hopefully it won't be too late, but I am starting to wonder how long it will take him to get there.

On a sidenote, I don't understand after all that Tanya did to him how he can even speak to her much less still consider her a friend.  Edward doesn't make very good decisions about relationships, does he?



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading/commenting.

 

Emmett loves his little sister and hates to see her upset.  He is pissed. He might come back and revisit his emotions at some point.  We'll see about that.  Edward does not make good decisions when it comes to friends.  i hope the next chapter, which is the outake from Edward's POV will let you inside his brain a little.

 

On a side note, I won't be updating for at least 2-3 weeks.  i am having computer issues and the nice geeks at Best Buy told me it would take that long to fix it.  Grrr....however, I am writing the story so when I get my computer back all I will have to do is type the chapters up (keep your fingers crossed that it will be quickly).  i hope that you are still interested in the story then!

-Lisa

 

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Yea! you got your computer fixed, welcome back!

I loved the surprise baby shower, and especially that Renee and Jane attended.  I am glad that Renee put Esme in her place - maybe that will wake her up on how she treats her daughter.

I was surprised knowing how loving Renee is that she is refusing to speak to her own son.  Not that he doesn't deserve it.  I was also glad to hear he has been calling and sending flowers, but agree with Bella that it is not enough.  It is time for the grand gesture.  Why has he not jumped on a place and sat outside her porch if he is serious about this.  He needs to show up in person, even if he takes his licks from Emmett or Jacob...can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks fo reading (and yah for my computer being fixed!).  I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  The next update will be in a day or so, possibly followed by an out take from Edward' spoint of view.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29

Finally, Edward steps up...I still think Bella is awesomely forgiving but I do understand putting your child before your needs now that Edward wants to be involved.

Jake is in a no-win situation.  He has been there in Edward's absence, but is not the father as much as he wishes he was, and now that Edward is back he is feeling pushed aside now. But he was wrong to not let Bella handle things and to delete those messages from the phone was pretty uncalled for, so good for Bella there.

Now that the baby is here, we have seen Renee and Edward show up, but where are the Cullens, I am interested to see if Esme has come around yet.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and commenting. 

Bella really, really wants to get back with Edward, but knows he has to prove himself to her and the baby. Above all else, she is trying to think of one person, Charlotte.  She is her life now and has to take care of her and act responsibly. 

Jacob loves Bella, but only as a friend/sister.  He acted as he thought was right. He's mad that Bella, who was so hurt before, is so willing to let Edward be there and he feels like she is asking him to not to help her, which isn't what Bella said or thinks at all.  She is greatful for everything Jacob as done and he needs to realize that.  heknows he is wrong, which is one reason he leaves immeditly when Bella asks him to.

About Dr. and Mrs. Cullen, they have been around.  I'm working on the next chapter, which I will post hopefully today some time.  The chapter following that I think is going to be another outake form Edward. My notes for that page are really long, so that might be a two parter.  i dont' like having the story interrupted with outakes, however his take on things will shed a little light on things adn will include the doctor and his mrs.

-Lisa

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty

Yea, thank you for explaining Emmett's absence since the baby's birth.  I knew he would not be happy to learn Edward was back in Bella's life, but go figure all men need is a few beers to work out their differences.  I guess we will be seeing what was discussed in your next outtake.

I am glad that Edward is trying and I liked the way you ended this chapter with her admitting she still loves him and wants an 'us' eventually.  Now that Edward overhears that I can't wait to hear what he wants to discuss with her.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  I am working on the next chapter, which should be posted in a day or so.  It's funnt to see the power of a beer or two between two men holds.

-Lisa

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter Forty One

Damn, I knew that secret would come back and bite him in the ass.  Edward just doesn't seem to learn his lesson.  I was just hopeful that they could get thru the oscars before everything hits the fan.

Actually, I was surprised with how devious Tanya is, she just can't let it go, and I am sure her being at the spa at the same time as Bella was not a coincidence.  Ugh, she is gross...

I hope Bella can find a way to forgive Edward for lying, but I don't see it happening easily since she asked him point blank a while back and he got defensive about it and continued to hide the truth.  He may have to propose to her just to get her back for good after this...

 



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

Edward wanted to protect Bella.  Emmett seemed to think not telling her the whole truth was a good idea.  Tanya wants what she wants when she wants it and doens't care who gets hurt.  She is gross.  Bella and Edward will be duking it out in the next chapter.  I don't think at this point there is a way to get on her good side right now.

Next update should be by Saturday.

-Lisa

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Out Take Four-Edward's POV Part One

Ewww...I hate that skanky Tanya, she is so gross and desperate...not really a fan of Seth's either so glad that Edward gave them both the boot.

However, I am nervous about his Tanya lies coming back to bite him in the ass with his relationship with Bella.  They are happy together but still seem so fragile, and I don't want to think about what will happen if Bella knows that Edward went to Tanya while they were apart and tried to get with him in NY.  Emmett's advice may not have been the best thing to follow...

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Out Take Four- Edward's Point of VIew Part Two

I have to agree with Renee and Esme [can't believe I am typing that]...His earlier fears about babies and marriage stem from his past...well, Tanya is gone from his life and he has been in counseling for the rest...he has a baby that he loves and claims he loves Bella, so why it is such a big deal for him to man up and marry Bella...It doesn't have to be tomorrow, but to know it is in the future for them would be nice.

And lets face it, after he was such a dick and completely absent from her entire pregnancy, I think he owes one to Bella, and making one of her dreams a reality is the way to go...he even claims he wants to spend the rest of his life with her and knows she is it for him, so its really only a title at this point....Man up Edward!



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading,

Esme made a few valid points with Bella.  You'd think all of his fears would be gone, however they are not.  He is at least thinking about marriage.

I am hoping to have the next chapter by the end of the weekend, but I have a busy one lined up so who knows!

-Lisa

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77199
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist

Great Chapter, I was glad Bella was able to surprise Edward.  And that is too funny how Edward threatened about Alec about bringing skanks into the hotel [given that we know what happens in BPOV of the other story].

I love reading both of these stories and have no idea how you find the time and energy to write distinctly from 2 different POVs.  But I really enjoy seeing these events from Edward's eyes, and I like his more sexual thoughts and emotions, because let's face it, he may be a virgin, but he is still a boy :)



Author's Response:

absolutely true!   glad you appreciate that...poor frustrated boy. lol.  Thanks very much for your lovely review!

Summary:

A Bella/Edward Story

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Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH

The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.

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Warning:

This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.   

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 31054
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Love-Hate-Sex-Pain

I don't mind a little angst, so I thought it was a good chapter and frankly a long time coming...although Bella is right that the person with the addition has to want to quit for themselves, not someone else, it doesn't mean she has to sit around and witness it - so I totally agreed with finally ending it with him...however, she probably should have waited until he was not under the influence, because you cannot have a reasonable conversation when under the influence, especially with his temper.  Can't wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

I couldn't get to the juicy stuff right off the bat, now could I? You're right, and it will be a theme for Bella for a while, regarding her choice to end things while he was mentally compromised.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Talk Box

Based off your summary I had assumed it would be a DUI car wreck that caused the coma, or maybe a drug-induced coma...but I wasn't expecting a fall-off-the-car-and-hit-your-head coma. I also thought it might be a long coma, but this sounds like he will be waking up soon, then poor Bella will have to break up with him again...at least he will hopefully be sober this time and will take it seriously...can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Actually, he's not really in a coma at all right now. He's technically sleeping off his buzz, but the fall knocked him unconscious. Make sense? If not, it will soon. I've got all kinds of things up my sleeve.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Faultline

Glad they caught the swelling in time...that nurse was not doing her job by being judgmental instead of taking care of the patient no matter the circumstances.  Can't wait to see what happens when he wakes up alert.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately some people can't let go of their prejudices, even when they work in a place where a misjudgment means life and death. That little tid-bit actually happened, but I wasn't as quiet as Bella. 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Breath

Good that she got out of the hospital for a bit, and I like seeing some of their flashbacks, but I am also hopeful Edward will wake up soon.  Thanks for another great chapter



Author's Response:

I think that it was good for Bella to get out, too. She really needed the break. 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Soma

Another good chapter...man, there is such distrust between E/B and his family.  I hope Edward wakes up soon and what his memories are of what happened.

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Edward has been avoiding sexual contact with his wife for six weeks. What happens when she lays it all on the line? After Edward and Bella reconnect she finds out she is pregnant what happens during her pregnancy?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25980 Read Count: 22357
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2011
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 30 Weeks

That's some pretty hot loving for being so far along in the pregnancy...good for them, and for getting to show up Jessica at the party.

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

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Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389620
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Tanya is certifiable, that's for sure.  It has been awhile since I read the earlier chapters, have they had any contact since he shredded her contract and left for Europe?  I have a feeling she is going to cause some trouble for our favorite couple :)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Wow, that was quite a dream....can't wait to read more, especially when they find our their real identities

Author's Response:

wow... I am so honored and humbled by all the love this story is getting.. I´m really blown away.. I´m glad you like it and I hope I can keep the momentum going...lol... Thanks for reading and taking the time to review... it means alot...

Laterzz

Krazi

xoxo


Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

I though this was a great transitional chapter to get us to hhe present day setting...however, I am tired of these 2 being apart and look forward to some hot Bella and Edward interaction... So bring it on!

Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

Tanya sounds like a delusional piece of work, and a problem that is probably going to come back and haunt Edward...I am ready for the present day Bella and Edward, so here's hoping you get these 2 kiddos together soon!



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

Damn, Bella and Alice must be related in another life - they both have funny, arguing inner-monologues and they both skirt around the issues and don't communicate well unless they are forced to  It was fun to see some girl-time and the strength of their friendship.  Now I know you are using these chapters to set up Edward and Bella's backstories. which I apprecaite, but I am so excited to get to finally see these 2 characters interact together that I am hopeful you will update really soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Ohh, we are getting close to the Sir/Pet meeting, I can't wait!!!

This was an interesting chapter.  I was glad to see Bella with Charlie and their relationship, but can't believe with the wedding and all she wouldn't have learned about Sue and Seth sooner.

And what an unlucky coincidence that Leah's man is Bella's ex Jacob...man, he is nasty, but actually sounds perfect for Leah so far.

I loved Seth and thought he sounded so cute and was happy to see Bella build a realationship with him...and even offering to skype to stay in touch was great.

As much as I love your family time, it's back to Edward and Bella, so let's get these 2 together now....please!!!



Author's Response:

You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing!  The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming!  For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter!  Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

oh damn, the cat is finally out of the bag.  I loved seeing the scene from her POV, and am glad they finally figured it out over dinner.  Loved how he kept sniffing the air because of her shampoo.

Hopefully they won't be too mad at Alice in the end...and I can't believe you left us hanging at the end...I can't wait for the next update and am dying to read their conversation with each other...and I hope they have a nice long discussion and don't just immediately run to the playroom to fuck like bunnies :)

Surely Sir will have some questions for Pet about her soon-to-be-ex-husband.  Can't wait!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Tanya is completely mental and I don't think she cares about the NDA.  Edward is very smart to document everything she does with witnesses around.  She is likely not going away quietly.

Loved their hot sex weekend.  Also, those pics of the new puppies are TOO Adorable, I love them :)