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The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31. Escape

Very interesting story.  I've gotten into this and can't wait for your next update.

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

enjoying this story.  looking forward to updates.  Your vamps are different but still good vamps :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you like.

I'll post more soon.

~Jells

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105125
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

This is bit different than the other BDSM stories with Edward being a vamp but I like it.  You've made Edward a grwon up as well as his morals still in tact example not doing the nasty Tayna etc to learn.  So I am assuming that Edward is a virgin since his first erraction was when he saw Bella, but Bella is not a virgin?  Can't wait for an update.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes Edward is a virgin and no he didn't do the nasty Tanya. He spent decades looking for his first sub so he will be differant from alot of dom's who have had many.

Bella Swan is sort of a mystery, not everything is as it appears, but it will be fun learning about her as the story progresses.

So I hope you hang in there with us and figure her out!

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
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France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47177
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue

I just finished your story and enjoyed it very much.  :-)

Summary:

A Bella/Edward Story

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Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH

The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.

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Warning:

This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.   

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 31054
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Need a Hero

I normally read at FF but it's down.  Glad to see the white of his eyes.  I really really hope that Esme and Bella work it out.  Everyone deals differently I know first hand about that ::::::::sigh:::::::::::::  I can't wait for Bella to take down Alice and I'm so very proud of Emmett.  Rose is a first class b*tch.  I'm glad Emmett and Bella have each other to lean on and all.

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

Well NOPE did not see that coming.  But I must say I LOVE having these updates and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Glad you like them although with things coming to begin this semester I doubt it's going to comtinue this way. 

Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Wow 3 updates in the last few days.  Loved them.  Now it's getting good and into things now.  Jasper sure is a devil in this one not sure I can I blame him but..........Looking forward to the updatess.  I know you guys are busy with school maybe this semester your load is not as heavy?  Thanks again for the wonderful updates you have given us!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. We're happy that you're enjoying the story so far.

 

We're hoping the workload won't be too heavy. We'll continue with as many updates as we can even if they are mini chapters.

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532861
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am actualy re-reading this fic.  I'm surprised (as I don't read a lot of other's comments) that people are freaked out over this mob story.  Your doing a great job.  I normally read at FF but wanted all unedited verions and catch up with where we are at.  So yeah I finished QS again and now this one.  Should be done by the next update :-)!  I missed a few things and rememberd a few things so this is good.

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Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

Glad the storm is settling. Great chap and looki g forward to next week. 

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Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

Wow okay that was a good wild chapter!  So much and Edward was crazy LOL.  Can't wait for the next chapter to come up. 

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Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

Loved it. Took a couple of days with RL but just finished

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

Not boring at all. After the shit storm they went through this was perfect. And it was early!!!!  Thanks for the update

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

Lol. Glad Bella finally kicked Lauren's ass!!!!!  Loved it. Glad Bella finally gave her mom what she deserved. Don't really understand how your ending this but I trust you. So looking forward it :-)

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

Nice chapter. I like Alex but I guess I have issues with her maturIty level. I hoPe Hannah gets on board soon. 

Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

Looking forward to the future. Sad about Alex. At first I thought maybe she aborted. I hope that's not the case. Since she went through with the wedding. I assume she didn't. 

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Teenagers. Great chap lexi. Going for the next now :-)

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Damion is the bad ass killer wow!  Very good chapter. Looking forward to more

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Awe not so bad. She is young. Made perfect sense. At least she admitted how she treated her parents and why. In some ways that was very mature. 

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: marysway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper

Just getting started and hope to get caught up on both by the end of the weekend.  You as always have got a good thing going here Loving it already

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717313
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
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Date: 18 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I had to catch up again.  I'm not getting your updates for some reasons.  As always very good reads Lexi.  Glad to see we are going to get some action coming up.  I love your Mafia action.  rubbing hands together.  Yours are the best. 

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm starting your story Miss Lexi.  So far so good.  Sorry if I don't review each chapter I have a whole bunch to catch up on but I'll do my best! :-).  As I said so far so good.  I'm not normally one for drabbles  but it's you what can I say XOXO

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Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Finally Hes born.  :-)  I thought he'd never get here.  

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Good ole Eddie getting the job done.  Again sorry I'm not reviewing every chap getting here late in the game and just keep on hitting next but you can never go wrong with you.................loving this story.

Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

This crazy little story has sunk me in even though this Bella bugs the hell out of me but 18 is young and you must be doing something right with your writing for me to want to slap some sense into her.  LOL

Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

All caught up.  Looking forward to updates.

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Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Love getting ino the drama too.  It's nice to mix it up.  What's a Mob story without the drama.  Got to have a plot and you always do.  Haven't read all your reviews but it's not always a bad thing to hate all the characters even B or E.  This Bella is young and immaure so it's kind of expected.  I bet at some point we'll hate Edward too.  LOL  But you don't see this girl running away from your fics.  IF I want to read rainbows and unicorns I'll go find a K+ story to read. ;-)

Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

This getting pretty damn interesting........So many people involved in this triangle of crime

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Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

I had a feeling this was going to happen but this getting more interesting.  Can't wait to see where this is going.  This is worse than waiting for the next week night time drama TV like Revenge or something.  I'm being patient Lexi.  I promise

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Date: 27 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

OMG I hope Jasper does not mess this up.  I can't wait to hear this story from Jasper

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Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

This should be good.  LOL

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Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Wow.  So I'm assuming those two work for one of the made bosses and they wanted to kill Edward so he is not in the running for the job?  That is messed up.  Bella was really brave.  I was really proud.

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Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Jasper's first kill and first go with a gun.  They sure are toughing him up.  He also seems to be up for the whole boss thing now.  Great chapter.

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Date: 30 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

hmmmmm Daddy C is picking up Elizabeth.  That does not sound good.  Sounds like some good things coming up LOL

Higher by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summer of 1994: Dial-up internet. Pagers. Walkmans. AOL chat rooms. O.J in a white Bronco. And blazingly hot weather in Brooklyn where eighteen-year-old Bella Swan is filling her days making ice cream sundaes before she starts college. But one long night – full of Ecstasy, subway rides, dark dance clubs, and a boy she doesn't want to stay away from – may change everything. ExB, mostly canon. AH. HEA. 

Banners by KrisMkyStitch and Deebelle1

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155380 Read Count: 126962
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2013 Updated: 01 May 2013
Reviewer: marysway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: A New Day

Actually Good move Lexi.  She was getting on my nerves.  Lets see where this takes us though.  LOL  

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"Young women can act silly, but men... Men make bold gestures." I opened the trunk for Bella. The man inside ended up on the pavement. Bella's eyes widened, and she covered her mouth.

 

* Period fic. Takes place in 1958/GangsterWard. 

 

*Not so canon couples, but a few are. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115343 Read Count: 76900
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2013 Updated: 20 Sep 2013
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Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

Lexi you did it again. This was a great story.  You know how to write them. :-).  Sorry for lack of reviews I just dug right in until I was done.  Even took it with me to the dentist office while I waited.  Thank you for your talent and sharing it.  XOXO

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281063
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
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Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I actually appreciate you not dragging the months they were apart on for chapters on in. :-).  So far so good.  Sometimes less is better.  You can only take so much angst before you cut your own wrist.  So a big thanks to you.

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Date: 11 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This is my 2nd time around.  Great story.  I did notice though that Edward is still 28 years old after 4 years.  LOL.  Uh, is he a vampire ;-) Just joking.  I actually thought this story got pulled, so I was glad to see it's still around. 

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Edward Cullen is the unacknowledged grandson of Harry Houdini from whom he’s inherited strong psychic abilities. Together with his closest friends: a Hoodoo man, two Witches from the Louisiana Swamps and an honest to God Guardian Angel, they work to solve crimes that ordinary law enforcement is unable to solve.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44432 Read Count: 31370
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 21 Feb 2014
Reviewer: marysway Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I just started reading this.  It has a great story line. I'm horrible at reviews sorry.  But I wanted to let you know I'm reading and enjoying your story. I love stories like this. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  You'll be happy to know that there will be two more stories with the same characters waiting in the wings when you finish this one!  They are Edward Cullen & Friends - Down On The Bayou and The Down On the Bayou Detective Agency -Case Files.  All are completed.  :)

Looking forward to hearing how you like the last two also!  I gotta admit I do have some special friends who were a great help to me in writing all 3 of these.  :)

Hard Hugs

Dinia