Reviews by sarahlynn81
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

This is one of the most intesnce stories I have ever read!! I can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

OMG More more more!! I need more!! great work you guys! and PS NICE pick for Felix!! I loved him in X-men!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

oh I can't wait to read more!! keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

WOW!! This shit is crazy! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

yay!! an update!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

What a freak!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

Great Chap! So glad to hear from Esme! Can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

great chapter ladies!! Aro is bloody nuts!!! I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

omg!! Great chap I feel so bad for Charlie! I knew it would be Felix!!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

I bet Aro is watching her every move! he is soooo creepy!! Can't wait for the next chap!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

great chap! can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

that was wow... just wow... Aro is one sick fucker!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

he is bat shit crazy!!! wow! Poor Edward and Bella!! I hope Charlie and Carlise can help them soon!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

wow... was a fucker! wow...

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

love it! I can't wait for the next chap!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

OOOOOO I wonder if he will run into Charlie!!! I hope so! :) Can't wait for the next chap!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

wow thanks for giving us a look into Carlisle life before! I can't wait for the next chap to see what happened to Bella!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

OMG Poor Bella! :( Damn Phil!! I can't wait to read about Edward's day out! Did he run into Charlie?!? Oh I can't wait to find out!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

I hope it is someone that is going to help them!! Hopefully Esme? Jas? Carlise? Oh Maybe Charlie got in there?!!! I can't wait to read!!! Merry Christmas ladies!!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

yay for an update!! You ladies are going such a great job!! I can't wait to hear from Bella again!! I hope she is ok! I can't wait for truth to come out and everyone know what Aro is all about!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Wow!! Aro is one sick fucker!! gross!! I hope it is someone else at the door so they can save Bella!! Can't wait for the next chap! hang on Bella Charlie and Edward will save you!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMG DUN DUN DUN!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!! OMG OMG OMG!!!! I hope that someone stops Aro from going into the room!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

oooooooooooooooo what a great chapter!!!!!! I can't wait for the next one!! Ladies you rock!!! super duper amazing!!!! I love it that Felix is going to help Charlie!! Can't wait for the next one!!!!! I hope Edward and Bella are ok!!!!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

I was so happy to see this updated!!! Great Chap!! I can't wait to see what is going to happen next! I hope they all get out of there quick!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

OMG!! you left us here?? cant wait too read more!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

Holy shit!!! This mother fucker is crazy!!! Keep up the great writing!! can't wait for the next update Edward is going to freak!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO you are evil by leaving us there!! EVIL I SAY!!! :) Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I am so sad this is over! But what a perfect ending!! Can't wait to read more from you guys!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

omg! he just needs to tell her to play along!!!!!! damn it!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I am so glad he told her and didn't keep up the act for long! Can't wait to hear about Esme's garden!!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

:( still nothing :(

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

wow oh wow oh wow!!! great chapter!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! and what esme did with the ashes!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Aw what a great chapter! I had  a feeling it would be Edward :) So sad that there is only the epilogue left!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

I am so sad this story is over!!! I think I may have to read it again! thank you so much for the amazing story and I can't wait untill this is published!

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMG I need more!! Great Chapter!!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yay! I am glad Bella is Safe.... for now I am sure :)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

holy shit! I need a cold shower after that!! lol thanks for the update! can't wait for the next one!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that chapter. I thought I'd never finish it (I change my mind like I change my clothes -- never can decide).  Thanks for reading & reviewing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303550
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

This story is crazy! I love it! YAY for Free Love :) I would love to love to read the parents 1st time!



Author's Response:

lol, I know, right? Thanks. I will start the outtake's in a bit:)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Harleys?? Oh HOT!!



Author's Response:

I know, right?

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

hahahaha oh Sam! I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

dun dun dun! Can't wait for tomorrow!!



Author's Response:

thank:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41877
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Shaken to the Core

wow!! wow!! I can't wait for the next chap!!! keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Torture

Holy Shit! that was... wow... I don't even know what that was lol... can't wait to read the next chapter!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Reality Check

Great Chapter!! Cant wait for the next one!!

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161902
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

WOW this is a great story! I can't wait to read more! I just started it at 3pm... it's now 5:30! I couldn't stop!!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

:) Love it GO BELLA!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Poorp Bella can the girl catch a break! love the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

damn Rene! ugh!



Author's Response:

I know!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

great chapter! good for Bella :) Edward is so sweet!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Aw :) Great story I really enjoyed it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Victim by tima Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, but then he became abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future sexy times, some scenes of violence, abuse, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166331 Read Count: 17131
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2011
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Inevitabilities

Oh shit! damn I knew that picture was going to come back and bite her in the ass! ugh! Can't wait for the next chap!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Christmas with the Cullens

Love it!

James is a dirty SOB! UGH! Can't wait to read more from him and the next chap!

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

Banner by IllicitWriter

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Center of Attention

great story!! I hope there is an update soon! :)

Summary:

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Rockstar Isabella Whitlock seems to have everything but after an altercation with her agent, she realizes she needs to find her music again. So she goes back home and finds exactly what, or who, she needs. The question now is, will she let them in? NC-17 for lemons & language


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91606 Read Count: 117417
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 May 2010
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

:) Glad Tyler didn't try anything and I really hope he doesn't break her trust!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love it!! :) tho I am waiting for some drama... where or where is James??



Author's Response:

James is coming:) I promise!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I knew James would come back!



Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

YAY Glad Bella is awake!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by xrxdanixrx

Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OH I FIGURED IT WAS HIM!!!! Can't wait for the next chap!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

oh shit! I can't wait to see what happens!!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

yay! I am glad Bella is safe! Can't wait for the next chap!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

great chap!! can't wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

great chap!! can't wait for the next one :) Oh Seth!

Summary:

Bella Swan is starting a new job with the FBI. Not only does she have to prove to the boys that she belongs but she has to face the demons from her past before they find her. NC-17 for language and lemons B/E, R/Em, A/J, Es/C

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga, to read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95413 Read Count: 135417
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I fucking love Esme!!! Way to go!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

lol, I do too! Thank you:)

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Poor B/E I hope she goes and sees someone for her PPD

Love and Obsession by michelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 284]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Things were just starting to calm down for Emmett and Bella since the death of their parents, when the new kid James comes to town and shakes up Bella’s world.

Her crush had turned into love, his love turned into obsession. His obsession became Bella’s nightmare.

B/Jms at first then B/E


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230732 Read Count: 36438
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

HOLY SHIT THIS CHAP WAS INTENSE!!! THIS STORY KINDA REMINDS ME OF THE MOVIE FEAR! I LOVE IT!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

great story!!! I can't wait for the next chap!! I am hooked!!

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 159067
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh I can't wait to read more!!! love it!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh Snap Jessica who would have thought?! not me!! tho her and lauren did get busy :) lol



Author's Response:

lmao, gross!! but funny!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

yay!! baby steps! so happy for Jas!! Can't wait till tomorrow!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76140
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

love this story! Glad I found it! Can't wait for more!! Hope there is an update soon!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

great chap!!! Well we know it isn't Edward hmmm.... Jasper maybe found her?? Damn I am not sure! Can't wait to find out tho!! :)

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32994
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great story!! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

love this story!! can't wait for the next chap!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

holy cow! That is crazy!! I hope they change that! maybe Bella will get changed and use her shield??



Author's Response:

only time will tell what they all do to fix it. Thanks for reading it!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

loved this chap!! Vicki what a bitch!! ugh! Can't wait for Bella/Edward interaction!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

OMG!! Loved it! Can't wait to read Edward's reaction! I can't even imagine what my reaction would be. I know I want to hunt down Victoria that is for sure!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I love this story!! can't wait till next friday!! I would love to hear some of edward's thoughts on what he thinks (in his mind) of Bella and the whole story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!


XoXo

Shel


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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.

"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."

"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."

"Duly noted, Alice."

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

How heartbreaking! I am now sitting here at work crying! I can't wait for the next chap!!:)



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

what a great chapter! I loved reading a little about the Cullen's history! Can't wait for the next!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I kinda love how protective Jas is! But I hope he doesn't over do it! Great chap! can't wait for the next!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

They are getting closer!! yipeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!! I kinda like protective Jas... nope not kinda I do! :) He reminds me of my brother :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

dun dun dun!!! Here is the Drama I was waiting for when is ole Vicki going to make an entrance! can't wait to find out :)



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I still don't know if I trust Marcus... I just don't know if he had the power to rope her into this Gala you would think he knows about Jack... hmmm... I just don't know... I can't wait to read what Esme says!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!

Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance! 

 <3 Shel

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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.

"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.

"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.

"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

oh! yay!!! I am so glad Tre asked Bella out... Car and Es are pretty sneeky ;) Can't wait for next Friday!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

love love love it!!! :) Can't wait for the next chap!! :) This is such a great story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Love it!!! can't wait for the nect chap! tho something Tells me Vicki is going to show up! Or something is going to happen!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

I knew she would come into play soon!!! ugh! I can't wait to see Bella beat the ever living shit out of Victoria!!!! and James!!!! WTF he is Edward's friend and Lawyer?! can't wait for the next chap!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Oh I can't wait till James and Icky Vicky go down!!! Edward and Bella are sooo sweet!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

loved the chap!! can't wait for the next one!! I can't wait to see what Edward is going to do to James when he finds out!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Vicki is a crazy bitch!!! wow!! I can't wait for the next chap!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

OMG Jack you had me worried there for a sec too buddy! I thought James and Vicki got you! oh! I can't wait for the next chap!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that is all I can say right now!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chap!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

aw love love love it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I can't believe the story is almost over :( but what a great ride it has been! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

AW!! What a great chapter!!! Jack was too cute!! I am going to miss this story!! can't wait to see what happens in the epiloue!!! I also am excited about what you are working on next!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

This was such a great story!!! I am so sad that it is over! :'( BUT I can't wait to read what you have for us next!!



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42788
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Regret

OMG I love this story!!! I just found it yesterday and I have not been able to stop reading it!! Can't wait for more!!!! :)



Author's Response:

wow!!  i'm so glad you're enjoying it so much!  that makes me very happy.  i hope to update soon.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45276
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch 4 Game Fucking On

nice! go get her edward! lol! I would love to see Bella's PVO tho!!

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

Loved it! You followed what happened in midnight sun :) Can't wait for the next chap!!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

love where this is going!! Can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading it! More to come soon!