Reviews by fanette
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: fanette Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

This story is GREAT!!!!! I can't wait for more.

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Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Y'all are some CRAZY girls!! Love it, keep it up!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

How well do Bella and Jacob know the other, she has not said anything about him?



Author's Response:

you'll find out next chapter

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

wow, Poor Bella, i have a feeling this is going to be hard on her!

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

SOOO cool, i can't wait to see how this turns out!

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

so good ! More PLease!!!!!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well, lil Bella is full of surprises! I LOVE this story!!1

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Love it!

Last Wish by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Three men... One had her. One has her. One wants her. What happens when the one who has everything he could want and more loses it? Can she over come her grief and confusion about wanting someone else? Will she give way to the man that gave her pleasure in the past or find out what she can have with someone new?

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This is AU/AH. There is both Canon and Non-Canon couples in this story. Multiple POV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50741 Read Count: 5743
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Forward

great chap!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue

GREAT STORY! Thanks for sharing it with me!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk

keep it up!



Author's Response:

I'm trying....

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: fanette Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am soooooo glad to see your stories over here. Please update soon!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Love it write more soon!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

love it!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

 hummmmm???????

You Belong to Me by IrishLove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 150]
Summary:

Living in the small town of Forks, Bella Swan has a normal life, boyfriend, and best friend. Everything starts to change when people mysteriously disappear. What is happening to them? Why does she have the feeling that someone is watching her? AU/OOC Dark Cullens.

 

You Belong to Me

 

You Belong to Me 2

Banners made by MarianneNorthmanCullen


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70150 Read Count: 37860
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Oct 2010
Reviewer: fanette Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Beginning

love the story ! keep it up



Author's Response:

Thank you! and thanks for reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373217
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

This is a great story! The end was beautiful!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: fanette Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

You did a great job on this story! I really enjoyed it. Can't wait to read what you do next!

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: My December

You, mam, are one sick and twisted lil girl! And I LOVE it!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

OmG, that girl is stupid sometimes! I sure hope they find out where she is soon

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

OMG!!!! hurry with more!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the coffee Cups! Same time next week I hope. Im off to start the next one now!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

WOW! I hope they talk this out o the way home!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

That was sooo good! I'm so happy you are back, and I hope things are better for you now! Merry Christmas to you and yours!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: fanette Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Family

Happy Birthday!!! I can't wait to see them meet. I bet Edward can kick James ass, and i hope he does! 



Author's Response:

Thanks fanette for the review and the bday wishes. I am completely Team Edward so there is no way that I can allow his beloved character to get killed. He may get hurt, but hes not going to die, lol. James deserves whats coming to him. Thanks for supporting MD =)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76145
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

great to see you back

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle Cullen has been the object of Bella Swans fantasies for years. The problem with that is he’s a very bad boy. Hot tempered and tortured by his past. Can Bella break through his cold, hard mask and warm his icy heart? What secrets are hidden inside the home and hearts of Carlisle and his Brother and sister?

Story starts out light with some humor becomes more intense in later chapters.

 

All human characters….contains underage drinking, drugs, sex, abuse. 

 

 I'd like to thank Moonlit Wishes for making me an awesome banner for this story.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55668 Read Count: 23163
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice

no,no,no,no, he can't die!!!!!!  He has to get better, and get James out of the way, and help with future babies. 

 



Author's Response:

Hi Fanette....Now you know I might put the boys through hell and close calls.....but kill Carlisle off...no way, don't worry!  :) I'm one of his biggest fans.

Thanks for the coffee cups, you know how much I love them. ttyl.....Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Carlisle's memories Good and Bad

I just started this story today, and i think it is really good. I LOVE bad boys, I have one, but all bad boys have to give up a little bit of their ways after a bit.   



Author's Response:

I couldn't have said it better myself....Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Jasper's Plea for Help

Oh, I HATE James, and hope he gets what is coming to him SOON! 



Author's Response:

Oh James always does in the end.....he's a great villian. Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Experiencing that Cullen Temper

Poor Bella, i hope they work it out. I sure hope drunk carlisle is going to be nicer. 



Author's Response:

Well, as long as he isn't a crying drunk I guess she'll be okay....lol. Thanks fanette, for taking the time to read and review.....Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Pressure can be relieved with Phone sex.

Great job on a first lemon, i cant wait for them to have the real one!  I love your Carlisle he is HOT.

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey there fanette....I never knew how difficult writing a lemon was....lol. I have so much respect for people who do it now and manage to give me that warm and fuzzy feeling. My Carlisle thanks you for thinking he's hot. :)

 

 Thanks for the coffee that always makes my day. Hope to hear from you again next chapter....I might put another one out this week. Later, Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 I Just Wanted Some Time with my Girl

Poor Guys, and Jasper is getting it worse that Carlisle thought! Man Jamse is such a ass. I hope he dies a slow painful death. hehe  



Author's Response:

We can arrange that I bet....or I know someone who can....he he. Thanks Fanette...laters, Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!

 You have great squeezing skills! That was great,and sweet and i am so glad that he said that he loves her.  Hope there is more squeezing soon.   



Author's Response:

I have no choice but to squeeze more soon. I just hope they end up with a better flavor to them...lol. Thanks for the review and the coffee cups... I love them.....Diane.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Caveman Carlisle

Great happy chapter! i think we all need that.  Have a wonderful vacation, and be safe! Where are yall going, anywhere fun, or just quiet and relaxing? Both sound great to me!



Author's Response:

Hey there, we went to PA to visit family and we did have a nice time. But there's no place as wonderful as home. I wanted to kiss the ground and do cartwheels...lol. Thanks for the coffee cups! Later, tater, Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bella Loves Sex

im glad your back and writing, and hope you had a great time!  That ass hurt Jasper again, i cant wait for you to kill him. Slow and painful i hope!



Author's Response:

Thanks Fanette, I'm glad to be back home and writing. I had a nice time on vacation-but there's no place like home sweet home afterwards. James will get his, I'm just not sure who is going to do it yet. I'm open to opinions...thanks for the coffee. I love seeing those things, they make my day and I don't even drink it. Later, Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Jasper Remembers How and Why his Mother Died.

poor baby!  That evil sob.  I would love all the kids to get a part in killing that ass!



Author's Response:

I know I hate hurting Jasper after seeing him in 'Eclipse' he seems so much more real to me now. Thanks for the coffee and for caring enough to read and review this story. :) Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Time to Talk

wow Bella is prego! Whats her dad going to say? i can't wait to see them get James!



Author's Response:

Um, I haven't figured out what Charlie will say just yet. So the planning begins, I wonder if James will throw a wrench into it and things will turn into chaos....hum. Thanks Fanette I love the coffee and encouragement. Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Plan in Action

OMG!!Thats where you are leaving off!!!!! What a cliffy, I need the next chapter STAT!



Author's Response:

I can get you that chapter on Thursday, stat....lol. You are awesome Fanette....coffee is gooooood. Thank You!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Total Confusion

Sure hope next chapter is where he dies a slow death!!!!! Alice is a bad ass! Whats up with the cops, they can't hit shit.



Author's Response:

Hi Fanette....yeah the cops can't shoot a lick.....but it has to be that way for the new ending to come out right. James doesn't die next chapter....we have to check on Carlisle. Thanks for the coffee and the reviews you continue to support me with...Take Care, Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Bella and Alice

Go Uncle Cass! Im glad Rose steped in and stratened those bitches out!



Author's Response:

Hi Fanette,

 I could really understand how both of those girls felt. But Rose, she hit the nail on the head. That was a 'James' head game to the fullest extent. I'm happy that everyone seems to like Unlce Cass as well. I guess he's going to clean house, so to speak...lol.

Thanks for being a faithful reviewer for this story. I am sure going to miss you all whenever this story closes. Take Care, Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 First Jail Then Bail

Man Charlie is pissed and being a huge Ass!! I can't belive that he arested Alice too. When is Carlisle going to tell Bella that she is having two babies? Im so glad they are going to find there mom.



Author's Response:

I actually meant to put that it was twins in this chapter, but I keep getting distracted, I'm sorry. Next Chapter they go to find mom and then one more chapter after that one. :) Thanks for the coffee and I love hearing from ya. Take Care, Diane.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 The Cave

Wow girl, that was sooo good! I have really enjoyed this story! You are a very good writer, and i cant wait for the last chapter! Thanks for sharing your story with me !

;)



Author's Response:

Thank You Fanette,

 I am so glad you have enjoyed this story. I can tell the difference in whenever I first started writing it and now. I have learned so much. Thanks for always sharing your coffee with me, I never liked coffee until I started writing. :) I have most of the last chapter written already I just need to add a few things and clean up my mistakes. I will be looking forward to hearing from you again on Monday. Diane

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thank you! This was a great ending!



Author's Response:

Thank You sweetie...and for once again filling up my coffee cups. ;) Take Care, Diane

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I just started reading your fic. Ilike it! It is very diffrent . Would love the read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review... New Chapter will be up soon

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

great!



Author's Response:

Thank you... Thank you... thank you

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

;) Great!



Author's Response:

YAY!!!! Thanks for pushing that button

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Wow !



Author's Response:

YAY!!!!!! Thanks a bunch

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I can't wait for the games to begin!!!!



Author's Response:

YAY!!!! Thanks so much for reviewing, make sure you check your email for the link, MWAH!!!!

My Jacob by dearjae Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:


 

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What if Bella never jumped from the cliff?  What if Alice hadn't come back as quickly as she did?  What if Jacob kissed Bella in the kitchen?

Bella faces tough decisions as she finally claims Jacob's love.  Edward comes back, but is he too late?

I was always disappointed that Jacob didn't have a fair shot at Bella.  This is my way of trying to even the playing ground for him...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18797 Read Count: 2950
[Report This] Published: 29 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 Aug 2010
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i just started reading your story, and i really like it. Now you can't make warnings about HOt SEX chapters and make me wait, that is not fair!!!!! Please hurry!



Author's Response:

I'll have it up tomorrow!  It will be worth the wait!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Nice!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

wow, its going to get ugly in that cave!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

go EMMETT!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Thnks for the story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

wtdk

Preface: Renesmee Cullen is a typical junior in college visiting her grandfather Charlie Swan on Spring Break. At a Forks diner one night, she meets her mother's high school friend Jacob Black, owner of a local garage and the new Chief of the Quileute tribe. The events that follow soon thrust her into a world of the unknown—a world of danger, mystery, and ultimate tragedy as she and Jacob race to unearth secrets of the past before it's too late.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73300 Read Count: 1221
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2010 Updated: 19 Oct 2010
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Mea Culpa

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, fanette! :)

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: One Step Closer

dun dun du.......  Great Job!



Author's Response:

Thanks again, fanette! Hope you like what's to come. :)

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Theories

hummm.....  well lets hope he is a good guy!



Author's Response:

LOL! I hope so too. Thanks, fanette! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

WOW, poor Bella has no clue!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love all your stories! I have bought both your books, and loved them. You are so very talented! I can't wait to see how Bella gets out of this monsters clutches!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for reading my novels as well! I'm working on a new series to come out sometime next year and the sequel for Darkness.

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

GREAT!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I think Edward is still just thinking about himself, he feel sorry because he has no one left. Great Job!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Love it, as always!

tHirTeEn by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 16139
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

umm a little pissed thats where you left off!!!! i will get over it if you hurry with the next chap! hurry



Author's Response:

I'm writing the next lemon filled chapter now hun. HEHE

Thanks for reading.

 

T

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

HOT!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!

 

 

T

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OMG girl, that chap was hotter than the last!!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it certainly fogged up my glasses! lol

 

Thanks for reading hun.

 

T

Reviewer: fanette Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

so good!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!

 

T

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

That was not very nice stopping there! Love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading hun, stay tuned for more!

 

 

T

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

wow, jake??? Is he ok with her even tho she is a vamp?



Author's Response:

We shall see. Stay tuned for more!

 

 

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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129742
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1

Glad to see you back! Love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! We'll post more asap.

Thanks again! =)

Summary:

Sequel to Sex on the Beach. Rated XXX for violence, language and even hotter lemons. I recommend reading Sex on the Beach first. No one likes a cheater. :P


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325974 Read Count: 68252
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 26 Dec 2012
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Confrontation

Love it !

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Trying Not to Love You

Sooooo good

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Get it together

Oh my goodness!  I loved everything about this chapter. You rocked it girl! I can't wait for more.

Ruthless and Ivory by MujerN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.

–Ruthless and Ivory
The full story to the Red Ribbon assassin. Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest




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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251248 Read Count: 40671
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Cool!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One

Great! please hurry!

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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This awesome banner made by the awesome DivineInspiration


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Poor Garrett! I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Love it!



Author's Response:

I do hate that I had to kill Garrett. I wanted to keep him in the story but it just wasn't going to work with Edward coming back into Bella's life. Thanks for your review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Love you tons - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Edward's next chapter which will be up later today:

Sitting alone watching the sky change colors, I thought of Bella and our lives together growing up. I replayed every moment and let the love we felt back then wash over me. I knew I couldn't, but I wanted to feel that again.

I wanted to look into her eyes again and see the love I used to see when she looked at me. I wanted to wrap my arms around her and promise that I would never let her go again. Assure her that if she still wanted me, if she still loved me, we could be together forever. It was possible now and I could take her with me.

As the sky above me grew dark, I made my decision. I had to see her and if she was happy, I would leave quietly and never return. I would find Carlisle and Esme and live my life with them.

But if happiness had not found her in all these years, I would go to her in the night, take her someplace where I could explain everything and beg for her forgiveness. And if by some miracle she still loved me, I would take her back to Carlisle so he could change her and I could keep her with me for the rest of eternity.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Omg girl, Garrett ! Great job did not see that one coming. Hope she finds Edward soon so he can tame Bella! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Garrett. I know everyone expected it to be James but he didn't fit in that role. He needed to be a companion to Bella and since I'm keeping this as close to canon as I can, there was no way James could have been. And they're close, just not quite close enough. It's coming though...I promise. A major jump in time in the next two chapters will bring them closer to finding each other again. Thanks for the review, darlin. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at the next chapter to be posted later today:

In the six years we'd been together, I'd never seen Carlisle so happy. Finally finding love had changed him completely and he was a whole new man. He actually reminded me of myself years ago when I was with Bella. She simply brought out the best in me and it was exactly what Esme did for Carlisle.

They could barely contain their love for each other so, after years of posing as husband and wife, they made the decision to make their relationship official. As they readied themselves to take this step together, Esme pulled me aside for a quick word.

"My dear Edward, for years you've played the role of brother to us and I have been proud to accept you in that role, but I want something more." She gripped my hand tightly as she spoke.

"Esme, you've brought so much happiness to Carlisle's life and I am grateful to you for making him the man he is today. So please, ask for anything you wish."

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love it! Who turned Bella?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Bella's creator will remain a mystery for now. You'll meet him in the next chapter but she never asks and he never tells her his name. So she won't know who he is until she wakes up. Sorry for that but he'll do his best to explain when they are able to have a conversation. Thanks for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love to you - D

Until next time...let's sneak a peek at Bella's life:

"Bella." Lizzy's voice and touch startled me.

I lifted my head to see her kneeling in front of me. She handed me the handkerchief I always kept in my bag. Edward's handkerchief. It added further guilt to rest upon my heart.

"Are you okay?" she whispered.

I shook my head. "I can't stop thinking about him."

"Me either." She hugged me. "It's hard enough for me to handle. I can't imagine what you must be going through. You two cared about each other so much."

I pulled away. "What?"

"The two of you really had something good, but me and Johnny will make sure to get you through this."

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

James? Wow did not see that one coming. Did he mean to change her? Love it 



Author's Response:

Come now, darlin. You know I can't give away all my secrets. I'm not going to tell you yet who changed Bella. I can tell you, though, that he had no intention of changing her. He was just on a hunting trip remember? He smelled her blood and wanted it. So he lured her far enough away to take what he wanted. Thanks for the review. I love hearing what you think. Much love to you - D

Until next time...let's take a peek at what Edward and Carlisle have been up to:

Henry was regretting his decision to talk to me so I quickly continued, keeping the smile on my face to keep him from feeling guilty.

"One word of advice from someone who's been there before. Whatever you do, do not let them know that you think they've gone crazy." I chuckled. "We'll keep that between you and me. All you have to do is sit back and enjoy this time while it lasts. Oh and one more thing, make sure you learn what my father used to call 'the three magic words.'"

I stopped walking and held his shoulder, staring at him as if this was of some great importance.

"You must learn to say 'yes my dear' and leave it at that."

That had him laughing again. "I think your father was a smart man, Edward."

"Yes he was," I said, remembering the great man my father was.

Henry and I spoke of safer topics as he finished his route for the day. It was a great morning and after we had said our goodbyes, I realized that Carlisle's shift was scheduled to end at least an hour ago and he should have found me by now. As I made my way to the hospital to find him, I caught his frantic thoughts.

Please let her live. Please let her live. She can't die, not like this. This can't happen. I won't let it happen.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awwwww so sweet! Esme joins the fam. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. It was definitely time to move the story along and bring mamma Cullen into the mix. She's going to make them a real family. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...let's take a peek at the next chapter which will be posted soon:

I gripped my head harder, heard a crack and screamed in pain. Fingers clamped around my wrists, pulling my hands away. Struggling against the hold, my eyes finally opened. The blond man was standing over me and the instant his face came into view, my vision clouded red.

Using his grip on me, I pulled an arm closer and bit his wrist. My teeth nearly met before he ripped his hand from me. He stumbled back and I lunged for him. My body crashed into his and knocked him through a tree.

We tumbled to the ground, rolling until I had the advantage. The thunderous cracking sounds meant nothing to me as I slammed my fists into his chest.

"Murderer!" I shrieked. "You killed them!"

His hand came up to block my assault but I couldn't stop. I wouldn't stop. He killed them and I wanted him dead. His howls of pain were like music to my ears and I swung faster and harder, hitting him with everything I had.

As my hand came down again, he caught my left wrist before I could hit him. Out of reflex, my right hand punched his arm to get myself free. I froze when his arm broke at the elbow and flew towards the trees.

"Oh God!" I screamed. "What are you?"

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh I can't wait!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Love it! 



Author's Response:

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'm sooooo glad they are together, and so sad that Bella is so messed up!



Author's Response:

Bella's been in a lot of pain for a very long time. It's gonna take some time and a lot of love from Edward to get over that. Have faith. He'll do his best to bring his girl back. Thanks for the review. I really, really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Bella's next chapter, which will be up later today:

A growl rumbled deep in my chest as Edward's scent pulled me from my thoughts. Turning my back to the shed, I scanned the darkness. I couldn't see him but I knew he was close.

"Don't take another step, Edward," I warned, knowing he could hear me.

I heard his footsteps come to a halt as silence hung in the air. A few minutes passed as I searched the area around me. He was nowhere to be seen but I could feel him out there.

"Please let me help, Bella." His voice sliced through the darkness.

"I don't need your help."

"Don't shut me out, Angel."

My eyes closed for a split second as the old name brought more memories of our lives together.

"I watched my father die, Bella," he continued. "I know how you feel."

"How long have you known, Edward?" I hissed, ignoring his last comment. "How long did you watch my father suffer before you came to find me?"

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427918
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Touch

Poor Alice! Cello was hot hot hot! Love it as always!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Discipline

Ung so hot!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 **Plans**

Poor Bella! I'm so glad Edward will be there for her!

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is the story of Pierce. She used to think she was a normal girl, but normal is not the norm in her family. She is a freak among freaks, almost unnatural...

To put it mildly, with out giving anything away... she doesn't fit in with the family business, or half her town.

She thought that after she left for college, things were going to get better. She couldn't be any more wrong.
Instead of going to medical school, she should have been a Vet.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77148 Read Count: 11950
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 28 Feb 2014
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

😍 thanks for the update! More please

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Fire

Oh my! Jasper knows! It's about to get hot in there. Love it! 

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Dirty

Yes! He is done fighting it! To bad jasper is not! Love it

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Nice and Not

Woohoo Edward is here to stay! I love that japer hates Alice, fo now! He will be eating those words soon! Hahah love it

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drafted

Tell them all to stick it! I love it! 



Author's Response:

I would LOVE to. ;)

Thanks, hon.

xo, Mel

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: For Her

What a bitch! I Hope jasper gets her good! I can't wait for the back story to find out what happened to bellas dad and brother. How can jasper not see that bar and Edward are ment to be? Love it 



Author's Response:

Isn't she horrible? I hope it sheds a bit of light on why Jasper is the way he is with Isabella. As for 'seeing'... maybe she can open his eyes ;)

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Value

Hi hon! I just wanted to tell u that I love your stories, and will read them no matter how long it takes for u to update.  I hope things start looking up for u soon!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Closer

Awwww,! That was sooo good! Alice is kicking ass! And jasper is starting to see! 

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong

Oh no! Poor Bella, I hope she is not hurt to bad!

Summary:

Clear and Bright banner

Just a taste : "Control, sweetheart. I like it. I won't have mercy on you when I want it. I want you to learn how to endure it for me. I promise you will be rewarded for your efforts. When I see fit, of course."


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 243560 Read Count: 35216
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Feb 2014
Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Welcome Home

This is one of my favorite stories! Great job. I can't wait for him to give it up!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! 

And, good Lord, me either! At least he isn't selfish while he makes her wait. *sigh*

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Switch

He can be such an ass! But I would take him any day!



Author's Response:

Hmmm... I suppose he is, though I find it hard to be too mad at him. I'm powerless...

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Oatmeal

 Only you could make oatmeal sound like the most romantic meal ever! Great job!  I would also love to know what jaimin and Claire look like to you. Like who you envision when you write about them. If you dont mind sharing.



Author's Response:

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond, I get lost with replies with so many stories going at once. 

*giggle* at Oatmeal :) As for how they look... I'm terrible at certain descriptive details. It's as if I forget that the readers can'tsee what I see in my head, so I apologize for that. And since they're just faces I've dreamed up, I can't really give you any examples, but I can try to describe thm. Claire is fairly petite, yet womanly in figure, with long, dark brown hair, big brown eyes, pale porcelain-like skin, full pouty mouth... very doll-like and very naturally beautiful. I hope that gives you some kind of picture? Jaimin is tall, about 6'2" - I would compare him to a Bruce Wayne Christian Bale in body/stature. He has very dark, short hair, nearly black eyes, and strong, chisled features. A few people recognized Eric Bana from the banner, and even though I did use his eyes, please know that Eric is not the face of Jaimin. Christian would be a closer example, but with much darker features (and shorter hair). If that helps at all? I'd be more than willing to answer any other questions if you have them. :)