Reviews by shiloh8
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514888
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

I like the way things are working out. Keep up the good work.

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29. Kidnapped

I liked this chapter a lot. Can't wait for the next one.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Irrevocable

This chapter must belong with one of your other stories.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995728
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Great chapter! Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review shiloh

xoxo

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm enjoying this story. Good writing!

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Another good chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad you liked it!

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like it a lot so far.



Author's Response:

I hope you continue to like it! Thanks for reading it and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184002
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The trap

WOW! I wonder what they will do to Bella now. Good chapter!

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Heart Attack

Wow! Great chapter! Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl

This chapter was awesome. Glad they are making progress.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Sometimes, it's the simplest wishes that can change your life forever.

 

"Any change, even a change for the better, is accompanied by drawbacks and discomforts." Can Eric and Sookie survive the drawbacks of their changing future? Set after DitF

 

A Change Is Gonna Come

A Change Is Gonna Come


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe, Canon
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119483 Read Count: 13150
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Some Things Never Change

I just finished reading Dead in the Family so I was happy to find your story continuing where the last one left off. Good job!

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Change In the Making

So it sounds like Sookie might be p.g. cause of her magic. Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Change Don't Come Easy

I really like the direction the story is going.

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: I Don't Want Anything to Change

Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry I can't reply to everyone individually like I normally do, buy I’m working on the next chapter and I don’t want to break the flow.

 

But thanks for the reviews guys! They keep me motivated!

 

 

 

Thanks for reading,

 

 

 

Sarifina

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Seasons Change

Wow! What an ending. Can't wait to see if it's Eric at the door. I love this story!



Author's Response:

It could be anyone!  ;)

 

Thanks for reading,

 

Sarifina

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Change Your Mind

This was a great chapter too. Can't wait for Eric's point of view.

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Nothing Can Change This Love

I was so happy for the update and wasn't dissapointed. Am looking forward to the next part of the sory. Good job!

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: We Change, We Wait

I'm glad to see that Eric doesn't hate her and seems to still care. I'm wondering how the birth will go with vampire babies and will they have to sleep during the day? Will the sun burn them? It will be interesting to see how it all plays out. Good chapter!

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Waiting On the World to Change

Wow! This chapter was Fantastic! I enjoyed every moment of it. Happy Birthday and thanks for the update. I'll try to be patient for the next. 

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Men Don’t Change

It was a good chapter. Can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: I Can Change

Good chapter. Thanks for the update and not making us wait too long.

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: A Change In Me

Very exciying chapter. I am a fan of the book series and your writing meshes so well with that.

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: It’s Too Late to Change the Time

Wow! It was intence but I loved it. Hope she gets away or uses her magic. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Tides of Change

Very exciting chapter! Keep up the good writing and I'll be waiting for an update.

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I like your story but the chapters are still pretty short. Just as it gets interesting, the chapter ends.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing.... I am glad you like it.... I could write longer ch but then it would take me longer to post... I try and post every few days but if I made the chapters longer it would be a week or 2 between posts... Sorry but there is a special longer ch coming soon which I hope you love

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

This is a great story!  Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

I like this story even though the chapters seem really short. I'm guessing that the story will be over once Bella is rescued or shortly after since this is already chapter 79. Your writing is very good! Maybe you'll write a sequel telling more about their future.

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

A very good chapter! It has the right balance of everything.



Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks bb for that very nice compliment. ;) *muahz*

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good story!



Author's Response:

Thanks

tHirTeEn by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 16139
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This is a very good chapter. I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun, glad that you liked it.

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Dead On New Years by Missus T Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Eric invites Sookie to New Years at Fangtasia and danger and intrigue follow. Time Frame: Post From Dead to Worse

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66648 Read Count: 7474
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2011
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 3: Rallying the Troops

Very good writing! You've got the characters down pat.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478801
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I think that Bella is actually the biological mother of the twins. I also imagine she posed as Tanya and also gave birth to the twins. One hint was that Cassie has doe eyes and bites her lip. The kids felt a connection to her from the beginning. I think the Black family had her dad killed and that she is hiding from them. I don't know why she would donate her eggs to Edward unless she had a secret crush on him or thought that was the only way she would ever preserve her own blood line. Maybe she needed the money. In that case, she doesn't hint at knowing the kids are biologically hers. It's a puzzle but I'm wondering if any of my predictions are spot on. Can't wait to find out.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Going on horrible dates was something that Bella always did well at. Nothing made her happier then to see the back of a man as he fled to get away from her. She was having so much fun until she ended up on a date with the most chauvinistic man in New York. How could one date have gone so wrong? Now her little tricks maybe the reason she is forced to stay with a man she loathes.    

THANK YOU TO IPSITA CHAUDHURI FOR HER AMAZING BANNER!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81908 Read Count: 36614
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2014 Updated: 19 Dec 2018
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It's one of the best stories I've read in a while. Anxious to reads more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella is an English woman, trying to escape a marriage she doesn't want. Edward is a Scottish Laird, with a soft spot for a damsel in distress and a hate for the English Redcoats that pursue her, but what does he do with her now that he has saved her? He has no choice, other than to bring her home, but he wasn't counting on falling for the lass on the journey to Castle Menzies.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32098 Read Count: 136771
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2015 Updated: 07 Jun 2015
Reviewer: shiloh8 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I love the time period and chsracters. I look forward to your daily updates as the story gets more interesting.