Definitely creepy enough...

I got my post!

Wow. I can't believe this story has only one chapter left to go and then its journey is finished. I've been around since almost the beginning, its seeped into my dreams, inspiring the weirdest dream/nightmares (I'm pretty sure I at least told you about one of them). I'm interested in the publishing house!

Wow, that was pretty intense. I'm so glad Edward explained himself to Bella, I was really hoping he would. Now the real question is if Carlisle will give up that easily...

Wow. I never doubted that you had a happily ever after in store, but its incredible to finally get to this point. I'm sure its amazing for you, too. I've loved every minute of this story, even the parts that made me cry my eyes out and become so mad that I wanted to kill the characters. You've created an incredible story, and I would absolutely LOVE it if you turned it into an original novel. I would love that. Seriously. Go for it. I can't wait to read the epilogue!!

Thank you for letting me know. I will frequent these forums now, and catch up with what I've missed. I wish you all the luck in completing your book and getting it published, and I look forward to the new material. Even if there wasn't new material, it would definitely be worth purchasing in my eyes.

I happened to stumble upon you're story, and I just had to tell you that I absolutely love it. It is very well written and well developed, and it feels so possible, had Edward not return in the book's reality. It just feels like something Steph could have written. I love how you have every chapter in both POVs, too. You're doing a great job.

I love your story. I have to say, a bit of caveward is hot, but I could never deal with it in a real relationship. Which is why I have to read fics to get my pervy fix of dominance :) Can't wait to read more! (Oh, and if the poll is still open on longer vs. shorter chapters, I vote shorter chapters like you've been doing with frequent updates.)

I love your story so far. But I have to point out that at only 11 weeks pregnant, there is no way to tell the gender of the baby via ultrasound.

I love your story so far. Its very well written, and I can't wait to read more.

The first half of Charlie telling Bella how much he loves her when she finally decides to try therapy had me all misty eyed and sniffly. And I suspected something terrible had happened to Rose, I just wasn't sure what. Now I know. :(

Aw, man, bad timing there...

Ugh, I am so disgusted with Edward. I'd like to say I'm suprised Bella forgave him so quickly, but its just like her. Its who she is. She's a better woman than I am...

LOL, mattress shopping can be fun! Hm...I"m in need of a new mattress...where's Edward when you need him?

I love your story so far! I can't wait to read more. It is very well written, and I was hooked right away.

Normally I don't review until I've read all posted chapters, but I just had to say that this chapter moved me to tears. I have tears streaming down my face. It takes an incredible writer to evoke that kind of emotion in a reader. You've done an amazing job on this story.

Incredible story. I loved every bit of it. You did an amazing job.

This chapter made me cry :(

That was pretty hot...maybe I'll have to start breaking into "haunted" houses...

Very interesting story. I'm definitely excited to read more!!

I think you're doing perfectly! Very interesting story, horrifyingly frightening. You've captured the girls' attitudes and behaviors so well. I look forward to reading more!!

I like that Jasper opened up to Bella, I wonder how long it'll take her to do the same...

Seriously? That has got to be the most honest, responsible response from a teenage boy who just found out the chick he likes has a toddler. I don't know why someone would be mad about that. I'd be pissed if a guy told me straight up that he's ready to deal with my son and be a part of his life after only knowing him a few hours. Jasper's answer was perfect.

And the way they've been interacting is just so cute! Makes me smile :) And I love how Gavin is the messenger for dad threats, lol.

Well, I surely can't fault Bella for her bitchyness. I would've done the same thing. It was so cute to read about Gavin helping the boys in the yard :) Small kids seem to always like to help. My little guy loves to work in the yard.

Will do! I can't seem to find any like that, though...guess I'm looking in the wrong places, huh?

Yep, I've got my son, mom, and grandparents. Without them, I'd definitely go crazy.

Well, it definitely needed to come out. It helps the readers understand more, and it helps Bella better understand him. So its good that you told his tale.

Very intense reaction, but we can't pretend that after all Bella has gone through that she can enter into a normal relationship. Its heartbreaking to read her reaction, though.

Ooh, they're the therapists...

And you're so evil! Ending it right there...I'll be bouncing around waiting for an update...

Good to know :) Have fun writing. Happy Mother's Day, by the way!

Rose's parents sure are a couple pieces of work, huh? I can't imagine Bella will take that sitting down.

And that flashback was...horrifying. Just horrifying.

Infinite patience, or they're certifiably insane...or they will be after enough time has passed, lol. I couldn't do it...

Oh, hun, I am so sorry to hear about all of that. Of course you shouldn't worry about writing right now, you need to focus on yourself and your family. My thoughts and prayers will be with you and your family, and know that if you ever need a shoulder or an ear to listen, I'm here.

Wow. Great chapter, I think we all needed those answers. I feel like Bella is a much stronger woman now, able to stand on her own two feet rather than being half of a couple. If she gives Edward a second chance, I think she'll be in a much better place to have a relationship.

I loved the whole story! This was the perfect ending. I look forward to reading more stories written by you!