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Married for eight years to wonderful guy that accepts my Twilight addiction and even my love for Jake, Emmett, Jasper and Charlie.
I love to read, review, beta fanfiction stories. I am picky as hell but will review every chapter with passion and try to be helpful and not hurtful with my reviews but also honest.
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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171538
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I loved it! I got my Noell and Jake fix. All is right in the world and Bella is about to be kissed by Edward. Rose is getting help and should be back with Em in the future no soon but yay still. I love Esme's company name its cool. Until next time.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Yay no cliffie next chapter! I am kinda scared about what Bella is going to say next but I hope she will be okay once she says it. I loved the chapter as always. Until next time. That was a quick update not that I mind but wow that was super fast.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Beginning of the chapter was hard to read but necessary but the middle of the chapter was so damn funny I spit out my milk while reading and I love milk. I should have cut and pasted but I got to in to it and I'm being lazy today. Okay i should start beta'ing now. Until next time. Noel, Em, Rose, TI, CC, Bella, Papa drama, dates oh its gonna be good I can feel it.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Omg I remember my few favorite parts. Which are: "Yeah, poor Bella, I wish I could just take my tire iron to Renee." Jasper says seriously.
Charlie as Papa Bear. Ahh... he's going to be the first to break, I can smell his fear with my cop spidy-sences.
Ditto from TI Whitlock and the rules, Em as always too funny. Okay that about covers it oh and Edward maning up after he looked up and saw Bella. Too cute.
Until next time.
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
OMG poor Rose. Damn it Emmett we couldn't you just a little more longer? In reality guys move on quicker especially in high school. Alice was giving Vicky the death glare. I loved the ending of the chapter you go Edward with your bad self. Until next time.
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Man I was sad reading the abuse but that is what she has to overcome to break the link in the chain of abuse that renee picked up. She will benefit greatly from the therapy. What was the deal with alice that one time where bella was worried? I love the Edward look interpretation from Em. Now Rose is going to tell her story and I don't know if I can take it. Oh yeah vicki got on my nerves this chapter just because she was with em and pouting. Poor rose I feel bad for her but I think they will get back together eventually but she needs to take care of herself first. Until next time and I love the re-vamped blog!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I loved my dose of Noel aw! Poor Rose that is so sad. Poor Em damn it he needs time for real its to fresh. Man and Edward at the zoo that made my heart hurt so bad. I could so see Edward with a bat camped out in Alice's room on the floor. He's good boy/man. That took guts plus it helped Bella get to therapy so triple yay! Until next time.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I loved it. Especially Bella & Charlie time that was so special. Poor Em damn I feel so bad for him. Vicky just wants to spend time with Em who wouldn't? Anyway, I hope everything works out for Rose and the gang plus Em of course. I had my dose of Noel's cute self so until next time.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Dang and just like that ice ice baby is back in my head! why? Lord why? I loved the scene between Vicky and Em it was raw but if I was Vicky I would have laid into but she was more classy about it than I would have been. Poor Jake get a clue or Vanessa Wolf aka Nessie haha. I got my Noel fix and Charlie fix he tries so hard. Until next time. I would love for all the outtakes to be in one place but if you want to put into the story I think it works better than having to go elsewhere to find them that's annoying but that's me. *waving* to baby Alex who's the baby? You're the baby, Alex, yes you are! Man I need fucking help I know. Don't mind me. see ya!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
"Why don't we talk about something lighter for the last bit of today's session. Bella, why don't you tell about something in your life that makes you truly happy?"
"Noel." I say softly.
"And who is Noel?"
"My baby." I sigh a little happy. "She is cute and fluffy and she loves me no matter what." I pull out my cell phone and show her the picture of Noel that I have as my wallpaper.
Where Bella is quietly excited, Alice on the other hand has been going nuts around the house in happy overdrive. She dances at random moments and squeals with delight that she is going to see Jasper in a suit. I'm worried about my sister's mental state.
I love just holding Bella quietly. She's warm in my arms and smells of her sweet pea scented body wash from Bath and Body Works. I close my eyes and breathe in the calming scent of Bella. I can feel her relaxing in my arms and I squeeze a little tighter and she squeezes me back. It's a perfect moment. Just Bella and I.
My tongue thanks God that she no longer bites down on it, while I thank God for the woman in my arms.
"Eww! Shit people, some of us have to eat in here!" Emmett exclaims coming into the kitchen. "My eyes, I need bleach, my eyes!" He yells. Bella does what I expect least from her, she starts giggling. Then it turns to a full on laugh.
"Wow, Bells, I bet a sample bowl wouldn't be missed from that pot of good smelling food..." Emmett uses puppy dog eyes on her and she giggles again.
"One bowl." She puts her hands on her little hips and stares at him sternly, but with a beautiful smile on her face.
"Promise, sis, one big bowl." She rolls her eyes and fills him a healthy sized portion.
"Anyone else?" She offers and both Charlie and I agree.
Charlie tells us about his day, which includes breaking up Jessica Stanley and Mike Newton having a fight in front of Newton Outfitters. He didn't go into details, but did warn us that Mike has a black eye now.
"I can't believe how many people wanted my chili recipe." Bella says shyly.
"It went over well." I agree. The girl cooked like a dream, something I know for a fact she didn't get from her Mother. I'd like to think it was my own late Mom's genes that gave her that little something extra that makes her such a wonderful cook.
And I'll never forget the day she went to address me after therapy and she went, 'Da... Charlie...' So close to being called Dad. I can't wait for that day. And if she ever calls me Daddy, I know I will die a happy man.
These were my favorite parts. It took awhile to do but so worth. *waves to baby Alex* you know I couldn't review without giving him a shout out. Until next time I even got my Noell fix well kind of you know what I mean lol!
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Omg poor Charlie he went through it big time. That was such a sweet story about Em putting toys in Edward's crib aw I'll say it again aw! So freaking cute. Tanya and Renee is crazy I hope like Em does that it skips over Bella. Until next time.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I learned the hard way never to let her have caffeine, Edward refers to it as The Red Bull Incident. I call it the day Alice went insane.
"Let's go beautify!" She fist pumps reminding me of Emmett and I relieve Carlisle of the makeup cases.
Aw!: At the bottom of the stairs Edward is standing tall, looking extremely handsome in his black suit, and sapphire blue and black striped tie. He smiles up at me and the flutter in my tummy changes, increases, but not from nerves, from something more. It feels good, I feel good and warm. I smile back and walk towards my beautiful boy.
Lol: "Alright Romeo let's go get our dance on." Em interrupts our sweet moment and before I can glare at him I notice Bella doing it for me.
"Pictures!" Chief Swan runs out with his camera. "Esme threatened my life if I don't get pictures." He grumbles.
OMG poor Vick but so damn funny for real: "Please, she could have gotten something with more taste from the Goodwill or Target. That dress screams hoochie momma." Angela over hears us and looks.
"Is she trying to pick up some extra cash in the hooker garb?" Angela, sweet Angela shocks me. "I mean my dress was cheap, but I don't look cheap in it." She argues with my raised eyebrow.
"Maybe she didn't realize it looks ummm..." Bella trails off, trying to be nice.
"Like a hooker dress?" Alice fills in.
That is so cute and sweet aw Edward: "This is a special dedication going out from Edward to his Bella." The fast music fades and the soft strands begin to play. Bella's blush takes over and I pull her into my arms.
"Who is this?" She asks softly.
"Death Cab for Cutie." She nods into my shoulder, squeezing me tightly. We sway as the words flow over us.
Lmfao x2: I rush over and see Jasper and Emmett trying to break up the fight. When I get a good look at the participants I'm mildly shocked. Rosalie and Victoria are choking each other, pulling hair, and throwing punches. Emmett's arms keep trying to pull Rose back, while Jasper is grabbing for Vicky. Alice is no help at all, she's busyscreaming 'kick her ass Rose!'
"Dude be careful, it's a fucking war zone." He warns me.
cute lol: "Tattle tale." She taunts like a small child.
Tough talking Jasper hot: "Calm your ass down." Jasper is warning Victoria.
"Bite me asshole, that bitch is going to pay." She growls at him.
"Bitch? I'd rather be a bitch than a skanky ass hoe like you!" Rose yells at Vicky.
I agree Bella: "Thank God we remembered to take Noel with us." I say out loud. We had gotten down the street earlier when I remembered to go back for my baby. She had been napping on my bed oblivious to being left alone.
"Whoever did this, I'm going to kick their ass." Emmett tells me.
Omg lol: "Even if we have to go all Scooby gang, we'll figure it out." Emmett says and Alice laughs.
"Jasper, you are so Shaggy." She starts giggling, pointing at his blond curls.
"You're lucky I love you short stuff." He says and she stops and looks at him.
"I love you too Shaggy."
These were my favorite parts until next time.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
OMG I love cyber Monday its the best! I'm just saying!: So, I introduced her to cyber Monday, the time that I did most of my Christmas shopping.
OMG LOL: Mark nods and pulls his a camera out of his cop bag, aka 'fanny pack'.
LMFAO this is too funny: "Alright then, I'll have the confession typed up so you can sign it." Shoot, I feel like super cop, my mad interrogation skills clearly beating this teeny bopper.
Holy shit I wasn't expecting this: "Why did you do it?" I ask in a bored tone, trying not to encourage her.
"Your little slut of a daughter stole Edward from me, that is true. It sealed her fate, Charlie." Ice is dripping from her words. "What set this in motion though, Charlie boy, is all you, though. Tell me, Chief, how is it going to sound when I go to trial and I tell the good citizens of Forks about how their beloved Police Chief fucked my big sister, when she was just sixteen years old and left her pregnant? How you didn't do right by her? How she had to go out into this cold lonely world and fend for herself and her baby? I might go to jail, Charlie, but you will finally pay for your crimes as well."
I sit looking at her stunned there is no way... I never knew.
"Renee is your sister?" I ask shocked.
"Ding, ding, ding. Score one for the pedophile!" She laughs maniacally. "and Renee said you'd take forever to catch on." She taunts.
Wow! Until next time I loved it!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
lol & cute: "Alright, I have some notes on what happened in the past with Renee and I just wanted to go over a few things with all of you." We nod in unison. Huh, maybe it's a genetic nod.
aw so freaking sweet: "He's right, Bella. Renee is the guilty party. That's why she is in jail. Hell, if we wanted to play the blame game we could find ways for us all to be guilty somehow I'm sure. The bad guy is Renee and now, Tanya, and probably that Jean woman too. You, Dad and I? We're a family, baby sis, we love each other, unconditionally. The three wicked bitches can go to hell, because they will never be happy, they will always be miserable and mean because they will never know and never have that unconditional love that we do."
"That was profound, Emmett." Liz says with a smile.
"You love me?"
"Haven't we've said that before, Bella?" Charlie says with his own smile.
"Yes." I blush, "I umm... you know, love you both too." Emmett jumps up and pulls me into a hug, Charlie wraps his arms around us as well.
"Good, good I think we've made a lot of progress today, Swan family," Liz exclaims, "now if you need me, call my cell, you have the number. For now, I'm going to go and let the three of you spend time as a family." Charlie pulls out of our hug first to walk Liz to the door.
lol: "Wouldn't be the same without you and that pornstash of yours." Emmett laughs as he claps Charlie on the shoulder.
Until next time I got my Noel fix and some sweet goodness.
One Bet. One Week. No Rules.
Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.
A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315856
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Local God
I loved it. It lives up to the hype I have been hearing about on twitter. Mary and the rest of the pack said it reminds them of her writing and I can see why. I'm going to keep reading and see what happens. Then I have to finishe reading closer so I can be in the know with Mary again.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
Oh Edward is an absolute bastard but I love ain't that sad? Anyway, I loved it and I'm going to keep reading.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
I'm liking it so far. These two need a release pronto.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
I loved all the cockblocking Bella was doing. I mean Edward didn't offer to finish where Mike failed how rude! I'm loving it. Poor Em zi hope he doesn't get a complex or turn because he is to fine for that to happen.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
That was so good and hot. Go Bella. Edward's dick never stood a chance. Payback is a bitch though. Edward will get you back I'm sure.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
I loved your super sexy jake. Bella has a challenge on her hands with mr. cullen. I would love for jake to shake his junk in front of my face like now especially since he's legal.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Closer
OMFJ I loved it! Go Bella she tore his ass out of the frame. Edward didn't know what to do with himself. Bella's death glare had me LMAO!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
Shower head was fucking hot! I loved it! Keep the smut coming or should I say cumming!?
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
I loved it. Bells you lose but that did suck I hate to lose too. Get him back so it can at least be 2-2 instead 2-1 Edward leading. Damn girl step your game up.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Situations
I love it. He's whipped and doesn't even know it. I'm pretty sure girl wonder is under boy wonders dick powers as well. They finally fucked well bring on the next four days, yay! Does that make me a perv yet I don't care!? Until next time.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
Aw Jakey you are going down for the skank Bella not the girl she was before she got her upgrade. Poor Edward I know he is pissed off and I look forward to reading the shit. Em cracked me up with the clowns they scare the shit out of me but I try to keep that on the low but 'It' I will pull a bitch move on you and dip out. I have to cut the review short I'm about to throw the fuck up. This bug is killing me. I had so much more to say but damn I need some nyquil. TMI? my bad. Until next time.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
yeah I bite the hubby so no need for a week for me that's a standard. I loved chapter so much going on and so much sex. bring it on only a few more days until the bet is over.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
I loved it. I really fucking loved it. Edward coming to the rescue and not in a embarrassing way either. Jasper love him. This was a deep chapter but it was needed it.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
I loved it. Except jasper jumping in their convo. that was some bullshit.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
loving it! I'm not really a fan of A/J stories there too lovey dovey and just straight too romantic like those two can do no wrong I love your twist on their relationship.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Its getting deeper and I love it.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Team Jacob here! I'm just glad Jake is trying to get Ness back and keep Bella as a friend thank God! I love that Edward finely manned the fuck up since Bella couldn't do it but it was fun times in the closet that was hot as always. I was very entertained and can't wait for Edward's POV. I love your story and that Jake's not a jerk yay! Until next time!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
This cracked me up:
Giving up on my mental plans of turning into a fucking emo-tarded romantic lead, I made my way to the bar. As I waved my hand at the usual barman, I was quickly greeted by another pair of shiny, surgically enhanced tits.
This wasn’t my father, this was Mike fucking Brady.
Team Douche had to stop off two times for chicken wings, once for another beer run and three times for a piss.
It meant that I could close my eyes and at least try to focus on the beat, instead of Emmett and his band of douches pondering the usual sex queries: Shaved or not shaved? Tits or ass? Ass to mouth?
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
I loved it. Hot, sweet and down right just good! Bella is starting to freak out a little bit. I wonder what Alice is going to do to Edward about him stealing her phone? Watch your back Edward. I wouldn't think you are getting off easy. Jasper won't be able to save your ass. Until next time. Oh I hope we get to met Ness somewhere in the future. She has Jake whipped and I like it.
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
About freaking time join the coupleville with Alice & Jasper! I love your emotastic thinking bring it on. I knew you were going to bring the heat and you wait until the end to serve it up. Yeah it was fucking awesome and I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter. Until next time.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
I loved it.
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Bella tells herself being with Edward is wrong because he's to young for her though it doesn't stop her from wanting him in every way including her biological clock picturing green eyed babies. And if it is wrong why does he feel so right?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48225 Read Count: 35966
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
OMFJ! This is so good I don't know what to do. I'm supposed be beta'ing chapter 21 of Through His Eyes but you are making it really hard to do. Damn you!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
OMG I love your Edward & Bella. Usually Bella gets on my nerves but I love your Bella. This story rocks my tube socks! I think The Cullens all know Bella is done for since Edward has her in his sights aka cross hairs. I love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the great reviews, lol you might not like Bella so much in later chapters, I even wanted to smack her some, but she does redeem herself. Glad you are enjoying this though :0)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
OMFJ Charlie had me laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes him and the gay duo. Edward is so hot but borderline stalkerish with a dash of I will kill anyone in your area that is a heterosexual male without my permission you got it! Yes, fucking sir! My bad for taking so long my hubby is watching tropical thunder which is so fucking funny so I am hearing that in the background and reading next to him. I love the chapter BTW!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Wow! I loved Edward's POV! I love Jasper he is the man. I knew the Cullens knew about Edward's obsession with Bella at least they are going to help him get his girl. Yay! I loved this chapter go Edward go!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
What can I say? I loved it. The chapter was just great and it went by so fast. It was so sweet, funny, hot and just plain good.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Damn she didn't tell him that she was a virgin? Em was so excited he almost split the beans he means well. I loved as always.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Damn Edward got catty there watch out Angela. I don't think Angela would do that though. Wow Edward is packing for real yikes! I liked it as usual Bella needs to stop fighting it she is beginning to make me sick just a little. She ready to bolt already and they are just getting started. I loved Edward's POV as usual.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Wow Angela got dealt with by Daddy C and Edward. I wonder what is going to happen to Jessica. Hold on Bella don't bail out on Edward. She looks ready to run folks. Poor Em finding out Bella was a virgin like that plus I liked how the women were all older than their men except Alice.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Oh shit this is what you were talking about in your reply to my review. This is booty son! Bella is on the run. Poor Edward and Ian he didn't even get a chance but those are the breaks. Oh shit I am about to strangle Bella's ass!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Damn that was a trip but so good and sad at the same time. I loved it!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
I loved it! But what is new about that, nothing! Interesting very interesting. I can't wait to find out Edward's deal.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Well okay that was good but I have to say I just read almost an exact same cancer story with Daniel Gale Cumming to America except it was Emmett so it was like okay because I just read last week. I loved it though. Do you happen to help on that story or something? I love the Edward/Bella banter, So good!
Author's Response:
My story was written before Daniel Fale Cumming to America, it was published first on FF.net. Though I am friends with teh author of DGCtA, we didn't share story ideas.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
Oh I forgot I loved this part from two chapters ago: no matter what *except abuse cause that shit is not cool no matter how sexy he is and how much I love his ass*. I loved the six month flash forward it was so good. Rose pregnant with twins yikes plus Alice & Jasper getting married yay plus Charlie gave Alice away priceless. I freaking loved it!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue
Aw! I loved it they had twins yay! Now Rose had two sets of twins plus Brady good Lord! Jasper & Alice didn't have a baby I always thought those two would be excellent parents especially Alice with all her energy. I had a good night with this story even though I was on the verge of throwing up for the last couple of hours. Thanks for the distraction. My author gave me a reprieve so I can beta chapter 21 of Through His Eyes today sometime. I love her its-rpattz-baby is my sister from another mother. Anyway I love your writing style and I really enjoyed this story way too much.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
Too funny that Bella & Alice were in on the balloons poor Emmett. I loved it but Rose was right he needed his man bits snipped she would have a football team on her hands.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
Aw that was so damn sweet. I need more outtakes. Yes I'm greedy and want more but at least I'm being honest about it. Thanks for the long ass chapter. I appreciated it. Until next time.
This is a Bella/Emmett story. It's all human and a little OOC. Its AU/AH. Rated M for a reason. Bella and Alice work at a fancy hotel in down town Seattle. Alice is dating Jasper and living with Bella. Emmett is a pro football player and they meet at a party at the hotel. They have fun but will a long distance romance ensue or will there be other challenges along the road.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115126 Read Count: 12393
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Men in Tight Pants
I like it except the double POV it repeats info but other than that I like where its going so far.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: And All That Jazz
I loved it! Jasper I love his swagger he didn't care if Em was bigger or a celebrity he would give him the business if he hurt Bella. Em cracks me up.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: When Life Hands You Lemons
I love it sir snore a lot funny. I like where this is heading plus the lemon was hot good job ladies.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: 43,200 Minutes and Counting
I loved it. Bella let down gently and didn't string him along letting him no he had no chance so hopefully he gets with Rose or someone else. Em's coming back yeah go Bella get your freak on. I can't wait for Em's POV.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: 720+ Hours and Counting
I loved it especially the end of the chapter it was so sweet and cute.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Emmettland is Candyland
Omg I loved this chapter! The movies they selected are some of my favorites and my hubby and I do movie quotes but no one knows where they have heard them before. Yeah its bad but so fun. They are just kicking it and I love it!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Two Can Play That Game
I liked it a lot. So hot and funny.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Life is Beautiful
I liked it. I'm so sad he had to leave but he should be soon I hope. That's the problem when will Bella see him again. I loved all the food and tourist stuff even though you never been I haven't either. Until next time.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Inner Monologue
Awwwwwwww! Its so cute. Esme has his back with Edward and Carlisle. I glad Carlisle and Esme are so touchy & loving with each other. I can't wait to read more. Until next time.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Two Months Too Long
I loved it James is totally freaking me out too! This past few chapters he's been all weird. Until next time.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: 8 Letters and 3 Syllables
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! It was about time and so worth it!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: This Year's Love
Loved it Emmett is the man! He gets his grub on but doesn't pig out. Poor Bella she gonna cry again in the bathroom later I would.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Heirloom
I'm still loving it! I hope Em gets the chance or the girls get to get James out the picture where's victoria when you need her?
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: 'Tis The Season
I loved it nobody was all starry eyed seeing Em with Bella just cool. Plus the whole Jake thing with Bianca was funny Bianca is a hater.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Permission, Presents and New Beginnings
No I was hoping he introduced her to the family at least met Edward and let them get to know her too then pop the question. Yeah I know to realistic huh?
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Stranger, Junior and the Game
Now I excuses the broncos losing since I'm from the mile high city but my steelers losing oh Lord are you guys crazy? Seriously you put the cowboys in the superbowl with bears Lord why? O loved it Jazz's superbowl anxiety its very real and I appreciate it. Until next time. One more chapter and I'm caught up plus I have to beta 27 pages today ugh but yay!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Devious Intentions
Aw shit the drama I fucking love it. Yikes its gonna be going down these next few chapters I can feel it! Until next time.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Whole Nine Yards
Of course, like always, security pulled me aside and started going through my bag. I think they got a rush out of being able to look through a celebrity’s private bag on the pretenses of “protecting our country”. The 40-something officer standing in front of me had a big cheesy grin as he unzipped my bag. I buried the Tiffany’s box on the bottom but that didn’t stop him from seeing it. He locked his eyes on it and suddenly he looked up and locked his eyes on mine. The camera men stood just far enough back behind us that they couldn’t fully see the exchange as I stood there pleading with my eyes. “No worries son. I think you are good to go.” The smile he projected at me set me at ease and I felt as if I could trust him. I let out a breath I didn’t realize I was holding and I mouthed a quick ‘thank you’ as I continued on to my gate.
“What’s with the hat man?” I asked trying to stifle the laugh threatening to escape my throat.
“Don’t ever tell Alice you need me to ‘look the part’ again.” He jokingly growled at me.
“But where did you get a chauffeurs hat in a moment’s notice? Start driving limo’s in your spare time?” I couldn’t help but let out a huge laugh when his cheeks turned a telling shade of red. “Wait, I don’t think I want to know the answer to that.”
“Oh just shut it Emmett. Just wait, I am sure I’ll get you back for this one day.” We pulled up in front of Bella and Alice’s apartment not too long after. Thankfully with Jasper’s knowledge of this city, we were able to out-maneuver any of the paparazzi that decided to try and follow us.
“Hello… James is it?” I mumbled to him when Bella pulled away. I glanced at the clock behind her and then down at her again. “Ready to go, babe?”
“Let me just go grab my purse.” She hurried off and I just stood there and watched as James sized me up. The guy is delusional.
I saw her glance at my jacket, glance at me and then glance back at the jacket. In a blur she dove for the jacket and I dove for her. I manage to catch her right when she reached the chair; unfortunately she had my jacket in hand already. She felt around until she reached the pocket I put the box in. Her eyes widened and her mouth literally dropped open. I snatched the jacket back up and threw it back over the chair. Bella decided that moment to walk out the door.
“What’s going on out here?” She looked between my nervous stance and Alice’s shocked face. Alice answered before I could really hear the question.
“I told him I was going to buy him a better looking jacket and he threatened my Manolo Blahnik’s if I did.” She briefly quipped at her. I was saying a silent thanks to the heavens for Alice’s ability to think quickly on her feet.
“Oh, jacket. That’s what I forgot.” Bella turned around and hurriedly walked back in her room.
“I know what that is mister!” She angrily whispered at me. “It’s the size of a Tiffany’s box if I am not mistaken. And if it is…” She looked at the Bella’s door and then back at me. “It’s about freaking time.”
“I thought about asking Jazz if he wanted to work with me here. If he does this will be his office.” Her face lit up with an even bigger smile at that thought.
“Bella. Give me a chance at forever with you. I want it all. The whole nine yards. The house, the white picket fence, the yard full of kids, picnics on Saturdays, your father with a gun at Christmas…” She let out a louder laugh at that. “Most of all, I want to experience all that life will offer with you.” She finally looked away from the box and up into my eyes. “Will you marry me?”
She let out a soft chuckle and a huge smile. “You know…” She wiped away another tear. “My father really is gonna shoot you now.” She laughed.
I smiled and just shook my head. “He didn’t shoot me when I asked.” I retorted.
“No, no, I mean…” She smiled and pulled the ring out of the box handing it to me. I quickly slipped it on her finger and I was the happiest man alive. “I mean…” Bella continued with a huge smile on her face too. “He is going to shoot you dead in your tracks whenever you knock me up to start that future of a yard full of kids.” I laughed along with her for a second before I pulled her into me and quickly took her lips with mine.
Jasper was sitting next to her with an almost sullen look on his face and I could only imagine it was because his previous plans were cancelled when Alice stumbled across mine. Bella wasted no time in flashing her hand forward at Alice and announcing we were engaged. Alice about bounced to death on the spot from excitement. Jasper’s demeanor did a complete 180 when he heard what she said. He jumped up off the couch and shook my hand clapping me on the back saying congratulations. We all had a quick drink together to celebrate the impending marriage. Bella glowed the entire time and I couldn’t get my eyes away from her. Mainly because I wanted that ring to be the only thing she was wearing about ten minutes from now.
Jasper made a comment about the apartment being too crowded, probably for our benefit, and grabbed his coat. Alice was looking back and forth between Bella and Jasper trying to decide if she should stay or go. Jasper made up her mind by dragging her out the door. “Let’s leave the newly engaged here so they can…um…engage.” He said suggestively and laughed as they walked out the door.
Twenty minutes later, four orgasms by her and one by me and I felt like a cocky bastard. We fell asleep not too long later.
because in one day all of our friends and family along with millions of people are going to watch me play the last football game of my professional career. None of that matters though because the career of husband and eventually father far surpasses any football game I could ever have played in - even the coveted Super Bowl.
These were my favorite parts wow that took a long time to do! Until next time.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Touch Down
I could tell Alice was eager to ask me something all night but she never said anything. Only sat there vibrating in her seat with the biggest smile on her face. Jasper had to basically hold her down by putting one arm around her shoulders and the other on her left knee. It calmed her a little bit but I was still wondering what was up with her. I guess she would tell me in due time.
So no nookie for us tonight. We would probably end up falling asleep during the sex and no one getting their ending. If you know what I mean.
Let me tell you. Emmett is a total bed hog. I had a little sliver of the bed all night. I finally had to elbow him in the ribs to scoot over.
I woke up to the sound of his horrendous snores and jabbed him in the ribs again. I had a hangover from hell and didn’t want to listen to his loud snores anymore. “Ugh remind me to never go drinking with you and the team again.”
We spent the rest of the morning in sheer bliss, sexin’ each other up in his parent’s guest bedroom. I would have to remember to change the sheets before we left today.
These were my favorite parts until next time.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Aloha
No you didn't shock me I expected it. Now Edward's inner dialog cracked me the hell up and that surprised me. I can't wait for everything to come out even though Edward is trying to turn it around. Good luck James is a freaking psycho. Until next time.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Truths of Reasons and Facts
I like it! You go Edward. What is James doing on the side outside of the hotel? I can't wait to know! Until next time.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Dirty Deeds
I liked it! I liked the APOV. Jazz he's so sweet and commanding yikes! Okay they need to take James down but how? I can't wait to see. Just don't make it too easy James is a sneaky bastard after all. Until next time.
Bella's perfect world is crumbling around her. She feels as though she's drowning when she meets an angry, broken Edward. Can he save her while living in an abusive nightmare of his own? Can they save each other?
"Growing up is hard. It's hard for everyone,however, some are luckier than others. I always thought I was one of those lucky ones, but as I sat there, I realized how wrong I was."
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138890 Read Count: 29516
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Goodnight, Travel Well
omg I cried so much during this chapter. sorry for my lack of reviews but bella got on my nerves for awhile plus everyone being afraid of edward even jasper threw me off. my favorite outside of jake is usually emmett and he is a big pussy in this fic. i love jasper btw so funny. edwards parents suck. charlie and renee rock. this chapte was very good and so were the other 19 chapters. until next time.
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Searching for the Truth
I must say bella is getting on my nerves. how are you going to be talking shit to em when you need his help? He doesn't have to help her ass. also the sun does not rise amd set on your ass take it down a notch. I understand that your mad bella but everyone handles things differently eveyone is not edward. i wish em would kick his ass one time because the way I read this he has been getting bullied by edward. I love jasper and alice but bella is being a drama princess. dan is cool too. until next time. sorry I couldn't sleep since heavy d died so I maybe a little emotional riht now.
Bella, the beautiful, bi-racial, Director of her church's Afterschool Program, has been faithful to her commitment to remain a virgin until she is married. Tallahassee Police Officer, Edward Cullen's charm and sex appeal severely challenges her resolve. AU/AH Rated NC-17 Adult Content
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242523 Read Count: 16568
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Passion and Synchronicity
I agree Felix is hot and he looked good in Eclipse I'm just saying the new hair cut did him good! Also these were my favorite parts this chapter: lol: Oh. My. God. Edward is offering to go to church with me. This is epic.
omg aw you go Edward: Having endured about twenty minutes of singing, which was by far his favorite part of the service, a few announcements, and then a thirty-minute sermon, he was anxious to see the woman who gave him the courage to end his self-imposed exile from church. Her solo was tantamount to perfection. Edward smiled as he remembered watching Bella sing. Her eyes had returned to his again and again. He'd been so proud that he felt like leaning forward to the people in the pew in front of him and telling them, "That's my girlfriend."
I must say Bella did Edward dirty not introducing him as her boyfriend that hurt my feelings reading that part to be honest. I was disappointed in her for real: He hated himself for shutting down on her like that, but he was oddly pissed off that she hadn't made it clear to her parents that he was more than just some guy she'd decided to invite to church. For her, he wanted to be more than just a co-worker, more than just the cop who protected her, more than just a friend. Was there something she was afraid to say to her parents, her father in particular? The entire thing weirded him out because he'd never even cared to meet any woman's parents before, let alone hope that one would introduce him as someone important to them. He'd never wanted to be that for anyone before, and the first time that he did, it didn't happen.
omg Edward's so whipped: His heart melted completely then, and he could not help himself. He cupped her cheeks in his hands, leaned down, and kissed her in a way that he hoped conveyed everything he wanted to say but was unable to articulate at that moment. Suddenly he was kissing her with a fervor that threatened to sap his strength. It must have done the same to her because he felt her knees give way just a bit, and she relaxed against him completely, a low moan escaping her gorgeous, dusky rose lips. Frantic and seeking, he plundered deeper and deeper into her mouth, as he tightened his arms around her. He could feel her giving way to his mastery completely, and for a few fleeting seconds, he was glad they were in Alice and Jasper's driveway. Had they been back at his apartment, this kiss might have been their undoing, stripping them bare and leaving them vulnerable—almost too vulnerable.
omg lol: "Ooh, little Bellarina had a big 'O,'" Alice teased. "I thought you looked different today—not so uptight."
Bella turned red as a beet. "Would you stop it, Alice?"
Until next time.
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I'm interested and can't wait to catch up on this story tomorrow. You peeked my interest! I love all the issues they are going to have to deal with it makes it more real. Until tomorrow.
Author's Response:
Thanks for giving TLC a shot!
Can't wait to hear what you think about the rest of the story.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Love Yet Eludes Me
I love it. I can relate to the story and I love it all but my Jakey being gay but at least he isn't the drug dealer having the kids sell for him I would have stopped reading then that's a hard limit just kidding! Not really but anyway I love this story we need more of them. Until next time.
Author's Response:
I should have known from your penname that Jake is your fave! I promise, I do not disparage Jake in this story at all. I just kinda made him gay, but a nice gay guy and one of Bella's friends from childhood.
Thank you for loving the story and especially your reading and reviews!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Commitment Is A Promise
I laughed so much I love that Jake was a drum major and can get his dance on. I love how this story is shaping up it keeps getting better each chapter. I'm loving Edward and Bella usually Bella gets on my nerves but I can actually understand her a little bit more. Until next time.
Author's Response:
Yes, this story is a slow burn and builds and builds into a crescendo!
Most of the character traits are really OOC. I think Edward has more canon traits than any of the characters.
So glad you're enjoying it.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Crazy On An Ordinary Day
I'm always on the verge of copying and pasting what I love about this fic but I don't want to scare you so I'm holding back. I love it. This story rocks my tube socks. Until next time.
Author's Response:
Feel free to copy and paste what you love. I love that! Nothing about love for TLC will scare me, believe that.
I'm glad this story is resonating with you!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: In Keeping With Repentance
I liked James' story plus this chapter was great it was a quick read.
Author's Response:
I didn't know that people had such strong feelings about James until I wrote him in as a sympathetic/maybe character. People believe his is intrinsically evil because he was in Twilight.
Glad you liked it.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: My Cup Overflows
I liked it James and Edward drama and such. I loved the references to Cam and his movie roles cracked me up for real.
Author's Response:
I just had to throw the Cam references in there. I'm such a movie buff!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Music Never Ends
I liked it. Its starting to go there and I like it.
Author's Response:
Yay!
I'm so glad it's getting there for you. Hope to post a couple more chapters soon.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: In The Face of The Unexpected
Liked it yay Elizabeth and Edward for both getting help.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the dysfunctional family gets help. Love those two.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: A Time For Everything
I want James to be good but a little bitter for awhile then back to his normal self. A mixture of the two.
Author's Response:
I think I read your mind on this in advance. This is exactly the James you will have :)
Bev
xoxo
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Imagined Secrets and Things Left Unsaid
Grey's fan here. I have all 5 seasons on dvd waiting for the sixth. S3 was the best ever! I liked Edward/James show down it was cool and hot. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh James threatening Edward on the low was awesome. Edward met his match. James would jack him up. Until next time.
Author's Response:
Ooh, I love you, already. Anybody who loves Grey's is my friend. And Season Three is my all time fave, too!
Oh, yeah, Edward and James would be a brawl for the century. See you next Chapter.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ain't Understanding Mellow
Hey I just put something together James is Fin aka the to Edward's McDreamy. That is what I was thinking when I read this it screamed S2 Grey's to me or maybe its because my hubby has me watching S1 again since we finished S5 via dvd last week and can't watch S6 because its not available. Anyway I loved the chapter. Its getting interesting and I love Ang she's the bestest. Yep that's what I said. Until next time.
Author's Response:
You are absolutely right. I must have been channeling Fin and McDreamy when I wrote this ;) Yeah, Angela is like a sister to Bella.
See you next chapter.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Conquering The Demons
Aw you go Edward saving your momma. James is all in and I love what he said about love not having brakes that was so cute and true. There were a lot things I wanted to copy and paster into my review but I held back this time. I loved the operation going down this chapter. Bella is a lucky girl having two decent men trying to capture her heart. I loved it. Oh yeah I'm recommending your story on my blog at http://luv4jake.blogspot.com/ I'm hoping it brings you more readers but who knows! I love this story so I want others to read it too. Until next time. I should be caught by the end of the day. see ya.
Author's Response:
I absolutely adore you for recommending TLC on your blog! Makes me want to do a fangirl squeal. I'll definitely check it out and post it on my profile. :)
E had to save his mom despite their history, because he really loves to old broad. There was a lot of action this chapter and I enjoyed writing it.
I have had more traffic on the site for several days, so I believe some of the people from your blog have been checking it out. Thanks so very much.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Crisis Aftermath
I loved it as usual. I had to kill a bee so I'm not in the best mood right now but I do agree with Bella I'm grouchy when I'm hungry or sleepy and I'm not a morning person. Until next time I love what's happening with the story so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for faithfully reading and reviewing each chapter.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Without You, Baby
I loved it. Bella & James' lunch was all that! James didn't go psycho but he was pissed and hurt as he should have been. I loved this whole chapter especially the Tony part. I can't wait for the concert something tells me Tanya is going to show up or something bad maybe before or after the concert I thinking after. I can feel something a brewing and I like it. Until next time.
Author's Response:
luv4jake:
I am so happy that you're pleased with the story and reading and reviewing it. James was hurt, this is why he reacted the way he did and Bella knows this, but expected him to bow out gracefully. Sometimes our hearts won't allow us to.
Looking forward to seeing your review next chapter.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: You and Me
I loved it. It was perfect and adding Edward's mother to the mix was great. I loved all the sexual tension but the romance as well. The night was just beautiful but cue in the big bad wolf I can feel the drama coming. Until next time.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your faithfulness to read and review. I'm not sure all readers know how to award the coffee cups, but you have single-handedly given my little story some ratings. Drama is coming. You are so right!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Action In The Affirmative
It started off really funny. I actually was going to copy and paste but then I kept on reading and it got very deep. So deep I didn't feel right copying the funny stuff. I love how you are tackling the issues that they have and not sugar coating it. I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Until next time.
Author's Response:
Aww, sorry that it got so deep you didn't feel like cutting and pasting. :)
Glad you're still enjoying the story. Yeah, they needed to talk about the deep issues.
See you next chapter.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Things Happen For A Reason
Okay I liked this chapter and these are my favorite parts:
He then decided he needed to do something to keep his mind off what was going on in the other room, because he did not want to embarrass himself or anger her by acting on his overwhelming desire to go in there and join her.
He had never hummed "Taps" so much in his life, but he would do it for her for as long as he had to.
"You did all the prep work, so this was a piece of cake," he said with a wry smile. "Besides, now we can sit down and eat." He carried both plates to the table where the toast, fresh fruit, and orange juice were already waiting for them. He held out a chair for Bella, and she smiled up at him.
"Hey, I could get used to this," she said, taking the proffered seat and placing the napkin in her lap.
Edward took his own seat and mimicked her actions. "I could do this as often as you'd like—that is, until you get tired of omelettes, pasta, steak and potatoes. That's the extent of my cooking repertoire."
"I love pasta. Bring it on, baby." She ate a forkful of omelette, not taking her eyes off of him. "Mmm, this is perfect."
It didn't go unnoticed that she'd called him "baby." His lips turned up into a smile. "I make a mean lasagna, but I don't do it often because I get tired of eating it for days on end. I could make it for us tonight."
"You always smell so good," she said, reaching up and touching his clean shaven cheek with her hand. "What cologne do you wear?"
"L'eau D'Issey Pour Homme. Glad you like it." He wrapped his arms around her and gave her a slight squeeze, dragging his nose along an exposed part of her neck. "I cheated, " he confessed. "I read the name of your fragrance on your shower gel this morning." He moved her hair across the back of her neck to one shoulder to have unhindered access and laid a generous kiss on her neck. Then he whispered against her silky skin, "I thank Mr. Dolce and Mr. Gabana for making you even more irresistible than you already are."
Bella giggled, and he felt the vibration of her body in his chest. "And I thank Mr. Miyake for enhancing that wonderful Edward smell you've got going on," she said.
He chuckled. "While you're at it let's thank soap and water for keeping that Edward smell pleasant. I never appreciated it more until I spent several years in the Middle East."
"And I complained when we did gymnastics drills in the summer. Sweat and humidity is not a friend to any woman's hair, especially women of my ethnicity. I personally thank my African American and European ancestors for a mixture that is tolerable."
He buried his nose in her hair. "Your hair feels like silk and smells like honeysuckle."
"I owe that to my mother, her ambiguous ethnic background, and great shampoo. Alice likes to call us beautiful mutts."
"I'm glad you swam, because hearing you speak French is extremely sexy. I feel like Gomez Addams. 'Speak French to me, baby,' he'd say, then Morticia would say something mundane in French and he would get absolutely amorous with her arm." He kissed a trail down her arm in demonstration.
Bella giggled. "That tickles. How did Morticia ever keep a straight face?"
"She was a monster with unbelievable self-control," he answered.
"I kind of envy her that," Bella said, turning to face him. "I forget what that is when I'm around you."
"Me, too," he whispered, pressing his lips firmly against hers and losing himself in her once again.
"Does your lackluster affection for James have anything to do with a bronze-haired, green-eyed cop who escorted you around the concert last weekend?"
Much like the defendant being interrogated by her mother, Bella attempted to resist. "Why do you ask that?"
"Because any observant mother could see that you two were oddly oriented toward one another. That young man couldn't keep his eyes off you and neither could you keep yours off him."
Cornered by her mother's skillful questioning, Bella found herself spilling her guts. "Okay, yes... Edward has become extremely important to me in the month we've worked together at the Center. Was it really that obvious Saturday?"
"Do bees make honey?" Renee asked sardonically.
"Daddy Swan, you've only known Ben for three years," Angela complained.
"Knowing him and him wanting to marry my surrogate daughter are two separate things," Charlie said. "I promise not to make him squirm too much… I'm saving that for Bella's fiancé."
Bella whipped her head around, stunned by her father's sudden pronouncement. She and Angela then looked pleadingly to Renee.
"Now honey, give the girls a break," Renee encouraged. "Bring Ben, Angela. I'll rein Daddy Swan in, I promise. Bella, you should bring a date, too," Renee said, winking when she saw that Charlie was busy cutting his chicken.
Bella practically choked on her wine, and her dad commenced to patting her firmly yet gently on her back.
"You probably shouldn't breathe in while you're swallowing, Bells," Charlie teased. "We know you're not going out with James anymore. Maybe you should bring Officer Cullen—you two dance really well together."
Bella gasped and fell into another coughing jag. Renee's eyes got as big as saucers, and Angela started coughing, too, in a desperate attempt to disguise her desire to laugh out loud.
he doorbell rang once, and then the door swung open. Edward had a wild look about him, but he calmed visibly when he saw everything was under control. He looked pointedly at the doorknob still in his hand.
"Locks, Bella?" he asked.
"I knew you were coming," she explained.
Edward rolled his eyes laboriously and said to James under his breath, "Eat fast, Hall. You've got fifteen minutes."
James just sighed and leaned back into the sofa, both arms resting across the back of it, kind of gloating at Edward.
Edward scowled at him and stood up. "You need help in there, babe?" he called out.
James narrowed his eyes at Edward, picked up the mug and took another swig of coffee.
In answer, Bella came out of the kitchen carrying two plates heaping with food and set them on the dining table. "All right boys," she said. "Renee Swan's Lime Garlic Chicken is now served. Eat up."
Good Lord that took forever to do but I'm done now! Until next time.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Someone Stop The Word
Aw so sweet and funny: "It's perfect because I have an alarm system in my apartment, and if you're not going to stay with your dad, who has police training, then I am your next best option. I mean, I love Jasper, but he's a youth pastor for goodness sake. I know you and Angela would give your lives for one another, but I prefer it not be on my watch or at all, for that matter."
I love her playfulness: "What, um, corrective action will I be subjected to for mussing up the bed?"
OMG LOL: "Good. You never know with these two. They've had a bromance going on for years." Rosalie laughed heartily as Emmett protested in the background. "What time do you want us to show up?"
OMG I love this movie & the outtakes are funny too: Emmett had chosen the movie "Role Models." Edward thought that Bella and Rosalie would find the movie choice asinine, but they all found it oddly hilarious, even the potty-mouthed little kid. Mood restored, they really got into the movie. They were deep in the final medieval reenactment scene where the characters were dressed as members of KISS and going to help Augie win the Battle Royale, when the doorbell rang again.
Aw snap Bella was about to go all gansta on hoochie lol: Bella, at this point, sprung up off the sofa and headed toward the door. From all indications, she looked calm, but in the blink of an eye, she methodically divested herself of her earrings and twisted her hair up, ready to come to blows with the woman if necessary. Emmett saw her intentions and grabbed her around the waist, but Bella strained to get to the woman who touched Edward. Rosalie moved behind Bella, picked up her earrings, and set them on the coffee table.
OMG LOL I love Rose: "Okay, Bella might be too nice to say it, but I'm not. Bitches, if you don't get your cunt-trary asses out of this damn door right now, I will personally stomp the skank out of both of you." Rosalie rushed them, and the ho-bags bolted. Apparently, they didn't like their odds against the Amazonian blonde.
OMG I love star wars: "Okay, young Padawan learner, we'll give you a chance to get used to that technique first," Rosalie teased.
"Thank you, Obi-Wan Kenobi." Bella laughed. "I love 'Star Wars,' too."
OMG LOL I love Emmett & he's right!: "You broke a cardinal player's rule, bro. Never have more than one chick in the same vicinity. You should have diversified." Emmett shrugged his shoulders, then a light seemed to go off in his head. "Wait. You and Bella were planning on having a sleepover? Tonight?"
AW: "Good luck with all that. I'm a selfish son of a bitch. I don't think I can go more than three days without it. But I do understand that when you believe you've found the one, recreational sex doesn't have the appeal it once had. I don't want any other woman but Rosalie now." Emmett was in one of his serious conversational moods now.
OMG: "Then, there you go. It's time to get away from the riff-raff, dude, especially if you don't want their presence to undermine Bella's confidence in you. Also, buy a new bed when you move. The symbolism alone will get you major points with her. She'll love the idea that you've never done the horizontal mambo on it with anyone else except her. That is, if she ever takes enough pity on your sorry ass to put you out of your misery."
OMG LOL: Also, buy a new bed when you move. The symbolism alone will get you major points with her. She'll love the idea that you've never done the horizontal mambo on it with anyone else except her.
AW you go Edward: "I'm so sorry. They were looking for the guy I used to be. You are my life now, Bella. I promise I am going to make it comfortable for you to be with me without worrying about skeletons jumping out of my closets."
OMG LOL: "So, let's see if KISS-My-Anthia is going to win the Battle Royale."
OMG aw but lol: "That skank reunion is old news. I want to talk—about us."
LOL: "Baby, it's been hard for me since the first day I met you," Edward confessed readily, laughing easily at himself and the unintended double-entendre.
LOL OMG: His little virginal vamp then kicked it into high gear and gave him a pseudo-lap dance that would have put a pro to shame. Using all the gymnastics moves that she could modify to tantalize him with, she created enough friction that when he came, he was almost sure he'd burned a hole in his boxer briefs straight through to his pajama bottoms.
OMG: He decided to ask her a question he'd wondered about, but never had an opportunity to ask before. "Was that your first orgasm?"
"Yep, while I was awake, anyway," she murmured dreamily.
"Bella, if we can do this to each other and not even have sex, I don't think waiting will be as big a problem as we anticipated."
These were my favorite parts! Until next time and sorry for the delay!
Author's Response:
Ooh, I love when readers tell me what their favorite parts are in the story. This is awesome!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Wild Is The Wind, Part 1
Sorry it's been so long but I wanted to finish your story and life happened plus I get distracted very easily lol. Edward going to have a chat with Charlie good luck Edward. Until next time.
Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106345
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I like it. Its getting interesting and funny!
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I was hoping Jake wouldn't be a jerk but I don't think that's not going to happen. Damn it! I liked it that's the only thing I'm concerned about right now.