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Hiya!
I've been on fanfiction longer and use it obsessively so if you want to review or chat you're best to do it over there. I am going to eventually post what I've done of my current story here too. It's just hard to maintain so many accounts and I forget. Link to my ff page is below.
Happy reading :)
One Bet. One Week. No Rules.
Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.
A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315708
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Aww; as fucked up as they are, you've created likable, relatable characters that make you care for them. You're a talented writer and it obviously shows in your work.
So, what's Edward's proposition exactly? He's cryptic and it's confused me, LOL. Relationship, bet, fuck buddies etc. ?
And: 'My eyes rolled into the back of my head as I let my mind take it in; his smell, his taste, his touch.'
Do her eyes roll back because she is enjoying Jacob?
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Ch 18:
'I was severely fucked, but, ironically, not as hard as I wanted to be.'
When B is thinking that after her almost sex with J and she realizes that E is everywhere for her, did she wanna be fucked by J or E? And did B find the short amount of time with J pleasurable and by feeling wrong, was that like it made her wanna throw up cause it felt wrong being with somebody but E or just a bad feeling? And what was B's motivation to seducing Jacob, in retaliation to what she thought was unreturned feelings with E?
Also, I'm so sorry but I didn't favourite this properly when you first moved here and I was never alerted consequently so could you please remind me about James? Did B love him? What was so bad that he did? Is that why she's a slut, did she lose her virginity to him etc.? The whole shebang!?
Thanks so much, xoxo.
Ch 19: At the end did she chase after him? I'm confused as to where the last paragraph sits on the humping timeline of this chapter?
Please reply. I need to know.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
hi :)
great chapter as usual but i have a few q's:
-when B says she told E everything about J did that include the almost sex and why it stopped and E's part in that and etc.?
-'Edward had unwittingly taught me something about myself that I didn’t know. ' What did E teach her? She thinks that quote when she walks into his room and sees everything left as it was.
xo.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Awwww indeed. They are so cute. And you are such a fantastic writer. But you already knew that ;)
QUESTION TIME:
Isn't it an omen or something that neither of them seems to know whether they're together or not and that E has to give her a reason/label to tell other guys to fuck off a little more forcefully according to Jas? B seems to think they're casual while E thinks they are together (before the kiss at the end) or is B playing the game with a face? And shouldn't B tell guys to fuck off and be a bitch to them more than ever based on B and E's feelings alone? Why should there need a label and is B in love with E? She seemed genuinely shocked at A's question or is she in denial or something? And why didn't B push Emmett away? Does B honestly have no feelings for the guys she's slept with and same with E, but especially the ones they chill with? (Jas, Em, Ro)
XO.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Heya!
Tonnes of questions:
-Is B's understanding of no happy endings stemming from James? Is she still at that place where she grieves for her unhappy ending with James? If she does it means she wants that happy ending with James which worries me as to her feelings for Edward?
-Why is it that B seems to have to force herself to kiss Edward? Why does she have to prove to herself that she cares for E? Why is she so unenthusiastic for a life with him?
-At the end of last chapter why was she worried about herself and not everyone else? Did she think she was going to fuck up?
-Relating to the thoughts about breaking each other and the tenses that you used them in makes me think that B breaking E is inevitable!?
-When B says she likes girls, is that in a romantic connotation? Is she bi? The threesome thing and James really has me worried for B leading E on and not really reciprocating his feelings.
-Why does B always lie to E or tell half-truths?
-When B says that thing about PDA's and thinks of James, what is the uncomfortable comparison she comments on afterwards?
-Why is it that she always thinks about James around E? Was she heartbroken because she was in love with James (if so is she still?) or because she cared for him as a friend and he was her first real relationship and it made her feel unworthy of being loved etc.? I really, really need to know the answer to that question the most.
I feel like B doesn't think E is special and it angers me for him :(
Looking forward to having things clarified, xo.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram
One question: If B hadn't run into James would she have cheated on E? Is she actually capable of that, whether she thought E was cheating on her or not? Is she actually wondering why she didn't gey in their first? (referring to the cheating). and if B really loved E how come she flirted with guys and grinded on them, did she kiss anyone? Flirting is cheating and I hope E finds out, dumps her arse and she commits suicide. I hate her. If she really loved E how was it possible for her to leave him, pick fights (knowing she was hurting him) and flirt with people that won't Edward? It should be impossible if it's not his face or body she grinds to or flirts with. How is it possible?
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think
So B had once upon a time been in love with James? I don't buy it though, if shehad been in love she wouldn't have gotten over it and him.. so was it just lust? Then why was she so broken up by the end of it.. was it more so a self-worth issue? Was it the idea of being in love?
How can B stand to leave Edward? If she's in love and crap. She's so selfish. I wish there wasn't a HEA and she had to suffer while E fell in love. But what I'm most disturbed by: Bella's comments on James and her reactions and behaviour:
-Why did she let him get so close? His breath there and hand up her shirt? Was she in shock? Edward and Bella's love can't be real if she expected herself to sleep with James? I don't understand that. If you love someone you can't even look at another whether you are finished- as E and B had fought- or not (that's why I don't buy that she was in love with James)
I'm still pissed that she was in my opinion cheating on E, rubbing up on all those guys.. and WTF, she would 'willingly' fall for James and into that trap just cause it was habit.. why would she want to? How could she when she has Edward?
Did B seriously expect herself to sleep with James as well? What does she mean 'why wouldn't I hace fucked James?' ? Is she thinking about the rep she has or is she legitly wondering "how come"?
If James' touch had the same power would she have seriously been able to sleep with him? And do that to Edward?
KikiBlue especially, please answer these burning questions.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo
Okie dokie. Another good chapter. I really enjoyed it. Of all the story alerts I subscribe to, yours would probably be in the top 5 that make me squeal.
I know, I promised not to ask questions until the end, if they're still not clarified but to be clear, there's 3 things that absolutely can't wait or I'll drive myself crazy:
-Was B doing it any harder without E as he was her? He seemed more broken but we had less time with B and she always hides emotions, y'know? So, I was just wondering.
-When B says she was a little jealous that A & J were still together, it wasn't cause she wanted J but cause she wished her and E were still together like them, yeah!?
-When B says that Ange was sweet and unlike her and that she didn't go 'cockhungry crazy', what exactly does that term mean and is she saying that she herself is like that or used to be or the people of Forks are? Has B fell back into her old lifestyle, in terms of sleeping around and partying and dating this time round?
Speaking of I was wondering, B never really fucked guys or girls or whatever cause she was that horny or promiscuous, was it more like a desperate cry for help or attention or because she didn't know how to cope in a life she hated or something? That's never really been answered though we know E's reasons. Was she ever even attracted- wanting the guys she slept with- or was it just boredom? Obviously, like E did, she enjoyed random sex while doing it but..?
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This isn't really a question, per se, but I'm a little puzzled. B slept around with her best friends- Jasper and Em. E never liked R so that doesn't matter. But J, especially was really close to B and I'm just wondering how you can go from sleeping with someone to having no feelings for them- even sexual feelings. Even finding Edward doesn't make that go away, right?
Remember, I'm not questioning your writing or characters, just looking for clarification. It's in no way meant as offensive.
Sincerely,
youngandmature
*PS. I'll post this onto the Twilighted thread too as I know you don't really check this one :)
Author's Response:
LOL. I do check these ones, I just don't get around to replying to all of them- but i will answer this on the thread!!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
It's been a good ride. It's obviously sad to see it end but I did very much enjoy seeing them get their HEA. Now, you know me.. Question time!
-Would E have been okay if B had cheated on him with James then? That bit confused me.. how could you be okay with that?
-Why is B angry at the start and later on saying she's confused about what she feels... she always knew, didn't she?
-Essentially they both have never liked someone else romantically yeah? Did they hook up with anyone while separated?
-Was B purposely trying to torture E by not telling him what went on with James for ages? Eg. how she kept saying it would't make a difference and that she still fucked him around..
-Will B come clean 100% about her run-in with James.. her initial not pulling away, their convo, how she expected herself to cheat, her epiphany of never loving James etcetera? Will she tell about dancing all up on other guys? Would she have cheated?
-Has B been miserable? Cause sometimes it seems so and sometimes not..?
-If B was guaranteed that she'd lose E would she still have left Forks and thought it was the right thing etc.?
-Did E say 'I love you' at the end? Why does B describe them as words that could mean nothing but in their case meant everything? Was she saying that he was sincere with the 3 words where as the words are often tossed around carelessly and without meaning these days?
Really enjoyable ride. Thanks for writing! And please do check out my fic. Your opinion would mean a lot. It's on my ff profile.
Xooo.
Edward and Bella have loved each other since they were kids but never said anything. When circumstance brings them back to Forks will they get their chance at forever or will the memory of the past be too much to live up to? Originally written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44128 Read Count: 16278
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Where Do I Go From Here?
Does B like anyone besides E? What about E liking someone else? Why was B all quiet and reluctant on the phone when he first called her? Is she cheating or hiding something etc.?
Is she suffering as much as he?
x.
Author's Response:
It's her insecurity...when things got hard in her relationship with James, he wasn't there and she left when it got too bad with her dad and he wasn't even concerned for her. She knows Edward is a guy who could get someone else, but she can't be the doormat again and stay until neither one of them cares for the other...he said he'd call, but she didn't know when or how he;d act so she was letting him set the tone. Whenever they got together she was happy to see him becuase she saw that it was different and he was fighting for them. Thanks for making the jump from ffn!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Remember When
No problem. In response to your response:
-Quoting you 'It's her insecurity...when things got hard in her relationship with James, he wasn't there and she left when it got too bad with her dad and he wasn't even concerned for her.'
Are you referring to Edward or James not being there and not being concerned?
So B hasn't hooked up with Emmett or anyone..? Is she attracted to anyone besides Edward? But B never even liked James, romantically did she?
Author's Response:
There are two James in this story...James her ex-fiance and James the stage manager...I used the name twice without realizing it. Bella is attracted to Edward and only Edward. She loves him, but she's seen a relationship where you're little more than roommates end with apathy and she doesn't want that for her and E. Thats why she's pushing him. The reference is to her ex-fiance not being concerned when Charlie was first sick.
Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Confidence Found
Glad to see you return.
Fitz is so cute in the story.. his little cry at the end... naw!
In one of the poems B said she'll let love happen again but she never loved Jake or had romantic feelings for him, did she? Even before he went psycho?
And sorry, 'cause it's been so long could you please remind me why Bella never dumped Jake?
Author's Response:
thanks for the fitz love...he's strutting this morning so i think he hears u...as for the love comment in the poem although Jake was her last relationship, he wasn't her first so Bella was talking about putting herself out there in a relationship as love has hurt her in the past, just look at her relationship with Charlie and Renee. If you look back in the earlier chapters Bella went to him more than once to break up and he would overpower her, when you're in a relationship with someone who shows physical violence towards you it becomes difficult to assert yourself, which is why it took his absence for her to summon the courage to do it.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Better Than Expected
Aww. Were you talking hypothetical Fitz strut or is he moulded off your own cat or something?
Yeah, I just don't get why B didn't do it over the phone, if she knew she'd be raped or at least hurt by Jake? Was every time a rape or was there ever a time where B wanted to have sex with Jake? The very first time when she was piss drunk, was that rape cause she can't remember what happened?
Did B ever have a serious relationship before E or is he her first? And she's only been hurt by familial love.. speaking of what happened with Renee and Charlie? Sorry, I just don't remember.
Thanks for writing :) And your Edward is so sweet and patient! Props to him.
Author's Response:
Fitz is my real cat...those pics are of the real Fitz...
Jake didn't even acknowledge the end of the relationship when it happened. When she ignored him and stopped seeing him altogether that just made him come looking for her. The first time she was drunk so she didn't realize how rough he was with her, but at that point there were feelings there so it wasn't rape. Bella was trying to find love with Jake but it just never developed that way because of who he was and how he acted.
Bella's been in a serious relationship before Edward, so familial love isn't the only one to hurt her.
Renee and Charlie played pass the kids, every time she felt secure she was sent to live with her othe parernt, most notably when Charlie sent her off after her friend committed suicide. He didn't want to deal with a depressed daughter and having to worry about her killing herself with his gun so he sent her to Renee. There has never been an ablity to discuss emotions with Charlie and Renee is the kind of person who doesn't understand why she can't work past it. She can't be happy just to please them adn they won't deal with her real feelings, it makes for hard times.
Thanks for the E love too...he's got a special place in my heart.
Set in high school. Friends since childhood, Edward has always loved Bella. When he finally musters the courage to tell her how he feels the result is unexpected.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7431 Read Count: 795
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
So did B like J romantically as she sounds bitter when she says that he liked his bikes more than her.. regardless of bikes did B like J as more than a friend?
Great story btw. Very romantic. Though I do wish Bella suffered more and who was she to be all angry and like you care about my feelings. Geez.