Reviews by Erica Neese
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625419
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Sorry to see it end but very glad that it was finished.  Great story!!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: New Body

Excellent!  I cant wait unyil next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87592
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love it!!



Author's Response:

Good to hear. :) Next chapter will have some revelations that I am sure will be interesting.

Anyway, thanks for this review. Really appreciate it!

Things Least Expected by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 477]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty.  She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog.  Instead at twenty eight she breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family.  With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.

 

I have a banner!!  I want to give a shout out to Mehek18 for creating it.  I think it's pretty nice.  You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com and take a look around. She is amazing and I want to thank her for taking the time to create my banner!  Thank you!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty Five

This story is very good I am excited about the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment.  I am almost done with the next chapter now.  It'll be posted in a day or so.  Thanks again for reading!

-Lisa

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143215
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Love it!!

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Im obsessed!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533724
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Thou Mayest

I LIKED IT CANT WAIT FOR EDWARD

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Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

I loved it!  I like Edwards POV. 

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Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Rolling in the Deep

OH MY I WAS SCARED TO READ THE NEXT SENTENCE EACH TIME.  OH MY!  I LOVE THE DRAMA BUT I JUST CANT HANDLE IT AT THE SAME TIME.  EXCELLENT JOB!

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Indemnity

I love this!!  I have read QUIET STORM 4 times everytime I cant find a good story to read I go back an reread it!!  You are very talented!

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

LOL I LOVE EDWARDS CRAZY MIND.  SOMETIMES I DONT LOVE THE OLDER VERSION OF THESE TOO BUT THEN YOU HIT ME AGAIN AND I LOVE THEM ALL OVER AGAIN.  CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT!!!

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Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Misery Loves Company

OH MY HELL THAT WAS SO AWESOME BUT I AM SAD TO SAY I WANTED BELLA TO THROW DOWN!!  LAUREN HAS A NASTY MOUTH AN BELLA NEEDS TO PUT HER IN HER PLACE!

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chasing Regret

WOW! I LOVE GETTING BACK TO THE ACTION! I JUST WISH BELLA WAS OUT KICKING ASS AN BEING BEBELLA!!

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Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Bucked Up

Oh wow!!  Cant wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

OMFG I was crying in this one but not over Aro an I wasnt scared that Bella was going be hurt badly but it was the emotions when he was on her all the stuff she was thinking.  This was so real.  I love all the chapters of quiet storm an this but this on takes them all.  I cant even come up with the right words to explain how this chapter left me.  Wow great job I wish I had your ability with words to explain how good this was.

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Eclipse

I hope you just ignore the shameless people and just move on and continue to do the great work you do!!

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Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

You know what I think is sad is that you have to write these Authors Notes like you feel you need to defend yourself.  No one is holding a gun to these readers heads making them read.  I HATE!! I hate people who do this to writers if you dont like the story dont read it.  I do it all the time.  Just start a new story move on there are people who like somethings while others may not.  Get a life you spineless reviewers an flounce the story if you dont like.  I am so over these freaks trolling around fanfic land hating on authors!  This is Breaking Dawn week we shouldnt have to be worried one of our favorite authors is going to quit on us!  Now for my review of the story.  As soon as his coffee tasted off I knew what she did.  I swear it.  I love reading about different relationships and situations this is one of the reasons I enjoy this world of fanfiction.  It is like an escape an you have so many different things to choose from I love it!!  Keep Going Lexi an please dont defend yourself there is nothing to defend you are very talented.  I choose to read this story and I am staying til the end.  Although I hope it doesnt end!  LOL  Oh.. I am so loving the mulitple updates too!!

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Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Intricate Dance

Finally Bella got that Bitch!  I wanted a beat down but I will take it!  Great work!

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Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Long Drive

I love it!  I love this story never want it to end!

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Great Adventure

Great chapter!  Cant wait until the next chapter!

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Love and Happiness

Oh this is just too much I love the whole Alley scene KILLED ME!  I needed a good laugh thanks so much great chapter cant wait for the next!

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

Wow so much going on!  I feel like I know who may be involved but I am not sure.  I am thinking her step, half brother whatever DJ.  I guess I wait and find out!!

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Riders of the Storm Part One

Aww  man this chapter is like I dont know!!  I want to to be pissed at Bella because she knew what she was getting into why have the kids?  But then I feel sorry for Edward because he feels the guilt of the whole situation and not get his Bella.  I just dont know feel lots of emotions about this chapter but it was great very great!

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

WOW THAT IS ALL I CAN SAY!!   I cannot wait until the next chapter.  Will we get the part where bella is in the room from EPOV?

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

This day started out so great and then my FN air goes out and it is hotter then hell up in here and now you tell me there is only maybe 10 chaps left of this story!  I may need a drink after all this LOL!  I love it when Bella gets a crazy and hits a bitch!  Sad we didnt see it more!  Great chapter!

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

I am so sad for this to be ending!  I mean 16 years into the future is he even gonna be our Skip anymore and we know our Bebella cant really still be a badass I am depressed LOL  I guess it couldnt last forever. I am gonna have to reread all over again from the beginning!  I love this story great chapter

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Aww man I wanna know if Dame gets the girl!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421236
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Love it!