Reviews by mflow
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reconstructing Bella

When are we getting a new chapter, I'm dying to know what's going to happen! :)

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Tale of the Broken Hearted

So glad that he was able to clear it all out between them now they can start working it out

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Tale of the Broken Hearted part 2

Wow! So good! So glad your back :)

Summary:

Isabella Swan is forced to seek out protection from the very family that abandoned her a century ago.  How will the love of her life react in finding her alive and well after one hundred years of believing she was dead.

**Written as a One-Shot/ My Entry for Darkward Vamp Contest**

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10894 Read Count: 1770
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Totally unexpected and completely wicked! I was so blindsided. Great material and a great story to expand on! It totally rocked!!! I felt her fear at the end, awesome story!

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 384]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77153
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2021
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rest

Ugh! Get together already! Lol, good story so far, I love it!!

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Sextet

So glad you came back to continue with the story. I love it!

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Treble-clef

I keep checking back and hoping that there is a new chapter. Please say that you'll finish it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

I just found this story today and already I'm hooked! I'm really enjoying the story line and can't wait to see the characers grow. Great story hun

Love and Obsession by michelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 284]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Things were just starting to calm down for Emmett and Bella since the death of their parents, when the new kid James comes to town and shakes up Bella’s world.

Her crush had turned into love, his love turned into obsession. His obsession became Bella’s nightmare.

B/Jms at first then B/E


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230732 Read Count: 36438
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I loved it! Brought back great memories :) I so love Carlisle and Esme!!! And of course Edward!

Author's Response:

lol.. thank you!

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Awesome storyline. The twists are brilliant, this is by far my fav story!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I love hearing that people like my story.

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ahhh! It keeps getting better! James is even more evil than I presumed and now it seems it has all the corrupted power to back him up, ugh!

Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it!!! james is an evil bastard...

Reviewer: mflow Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Greatness! Man Bella just can't catch a break!! James is truley demented.

Author's Response:

I know!! james is truely sick in the head.

Reviewer: mflow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not sure why on my previous post it gave the wrong rating! Anyway this is the right rating!

Author's Response:

well thank you!!

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Omg!!!! What?! I can't believe it. What a cliffhanger, your not right for that...lol! Great chapter though. This would make an awesome movie!

Author's Response:

Sorry about the cliffy... I am working on the next chatper. So glad to know you like my story!!!! Makes me all giddy. lol

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32994
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Pretty good so far. I'm following the storyline, it's got my attention! Poor Bella!!!

Summary:

Yellow Porsche

Who was the owner of the yellow Porsche that Alice stole to get to Volterra? Why was he also going to Seattle the next day? And did he notice among his fellow travelers three young Americans who looked exhausted?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1622 Read Count: 162
[Report This] Published: 06 May 2010 Updated: 06 May 2010
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would love to believe that he saw what a fool he's been and recieves a second chance and Lil also gets a chance at real love with him :)

Author's Response:

My wish exactly.  Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420890
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Don't feed the bears

Lol@Edward, he's so cute!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Oh how I love thee! Lol, absolutely loved this chapter. Loved how the date came together.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Edward is so romantic! *swoon* I'm loving the way it's all tying together.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

I absolutley loved it! The timing was perfect and the ending couldn't have been better. I can't wait for the epil. maybe a baby sister/brother added to the mix would be sweet :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Awesome chapter and I have to say I never saw that coming. Wpw is all I can say! Btw I liked the officer's pov.

Author's Response:

thanks...a little Charlie angst is something we rarely see..but it was appropriate. 

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Oh I couldn't have imagined it any better! I love it, even though you left us hanging :)

Author's Response:

sorry about that...does it help to know that the next chap is almost halfway written?   I think i'm going to post it before another chap of LRM to make everyone happy.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge

Bella's revenge was perfect! I totally cracked up on Rose being compared to Jezabel, poor Emmet!! I am so trying to figure out who is sending these yellow carnations...

Author's Response:

a lot going on huh?  It's going to get crazier before it gets calmer...if that helps..lol  THanks!

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

I really enjoyed Christopher in this chapter, he was too funny!

Author's Response:

thanks!  I'm glad you liked it!

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ok I'm intrigued. 



Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you are ;). See you next chapter with a "Surprise!".

Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Labor Day

I loved this chapter!!! 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you did. See you next chapter.

Summary:

Isabella, desperate for a job after college agrees to move across the country to apply to be governess for two young children. She soon finds out that the Cullen Estate and the Master that resides within are dark and frightening. For the sake of her charges, she must attempt to find a way to reach the heart of the man who looks at her as no more than a servant. Read warning!    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81972 Read Count: 48030
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Jun 2018
Reviewer: mflow Signed
Date: 15 May 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I've been waiting for this! Can't wait to find out what her headstone is all about.