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Bio:
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96
Is Alice pregnant again? She's acting like she is. Either she's pregnant or she's being VERY manipulative. I hate that. I've dealt with too many people that were stuck up, spoiled, manipulative "princesses" in my life. I wanted to go through the computer and back hand Alice until she gets it through her head that not everything is about her.
Author's Response:
I've had my share of those kinds of people too...LOL about the back-handing ..lol...
These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Alice in her own Wonderland
You're right when you said some people would think she's a "Self-centered, Self-serving, Self-righteous, Bitch." That's exactly what she is. She wants everything said and done to her approval and in life, that's just not feesible.
I also think it's laughable that Alice said that Edward didn't care that he was upsetting her when he spoke to her that way, but little does she realize (all because she's an OCD, control freak) that what she was saying was in turn hurting Edward. hypocritical much? Do as I say, not as I do, Alice?
She reminds me of my cousin. She blames everything on her sister, (in this case, Alice blames everything on Bella), even when they didn't do anything. She needs to start taking responsibility for her own actions! Like getting pregnant. If she didn't want to have another kid, she should have been using birth control, condoms or gone in to get her tubes tied, or even had Jasper get a vasectomy. No! It's all Bella's fault.
My cousin it a self centered, self righteous, raging bitch who thinks she can manipulate everyone around her into getting her way and having them do, say and dress how she wants them to. It gets real annoying, real fast. I can't stand people like this!
On the flip side, I understand that Alice just wants to protect her brother. Though, it's not really her brother she's trying to protect here, is it? It's his money, his reputation and in turn, the reputation of her family and herself. It's deplorable.
If she just stops to take a second to actually talk to Bella and see where she's coming from, she might be able to understand Bella's position. I doubt it, but it can't hurt to try.
I hope Edward tells Jasper what is going on. The truth. Alice is bending things and ommiting things to make herself sound better to her husband. If she's not careful, he's going to divorce her sorry ass. I almost hope he does just to put her in her place. She doesn't deserve someone as good as Jasper.
I'm all for Alice, but a nicer one who knows when to stop and when she's wrong. This is clearly not that character I've known and grown to love. I commend you on actually tweeking a few things about the characters, like Rose and Bella getting along immediately. Bella and Alice like oil and water. it's intriguing! Keep up the good work!
Okay, I think I've ranted enough. Sorry about the long message/review. I didn't mean to be that long winded. Great writing, I can't wait to see where this goes and turns. I'm awaiting the next chapter eagerly!
Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives. But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl. Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family. Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124856
Banner by Kyndall Viscia
What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
Really? Really? Wow! you're going to leave us hanging there? How evil!
Update soon, please.
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
great chapter! Please,please, please update soon. I want to know who it is!
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
PLease, Please don't leave us hanging like this. I need more! The sooner the better. I need more! Now! :)
Thank you so much in advance!
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
Please update soon! I absolutely love this story! It's so off the wall and out there that it works. It's hilarious and heart wrenching at the same time. Great story and great work!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
First of all, Really? Really? Wow!
Second, it's the sympathetic pregnancy symptoms for Edward, which caused him to throw up all over Bella. Just my guess...
Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Hey, read over this chapter, and I understand why you want to keep the identification of her a mystery, but in real life, there are databases set up for identification of missing persons. It would be quick to ID her with a simple DNA swab or a fingerprint match in the missing person's database.
Author's Response:
I am such a fail at responding to reviews. :) If you read the backstory, you'll see that no one's looking for her (no family, anyway), so she's not in any database. Thanks!
Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.
Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 178: Chapter 178
Beautiful chapter. Every elegant and eloquent.
The entire chapter gave me shivers! So good!
Update soon so I can see where it goes...Please?
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 187: Chapter 187
Go back and try again!
Loved it. Loved the visual too. Update soon, please. I loved every aspect of it.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140
No...no...no cumming? Well, that's just mean! I mean, come on! That's just cruel and unusual punishment right there! How can he do that?
I love your work. It's unlike any other I've read. Please keep up the wonderful writing and unleash it on all of us! Another update is coming right? I would sooooooooo love you if you did! :)
Author's Response:
of course.. coming up!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 173
Good luck with the internet! You need it working good so you can feed all of our addictions! I will not stand for not having regular (and sometimes surprise) updates. :)
Thank you for the wonderful update! I'll be waiting right here by the computer, sitting on my hands impatiently for the next update. The chapter was superb and I hope you need to update soon. (Please.) No, really, you do...
Have a great day and try not to get (too) frustrated with your internet connection and provider. I know how that is. I changed it not too long ago too.
Author's Response:
my actual router is shot. New one, and new company on Wed.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95
he's jealous? of her fingers? talk about issues....
i wouldn't mind helping him with that trail either....
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100
*thud*
You're teasing us again! Naughty naughty! :)
Keep up the good work, please. I love it, love it, love it! and update soon, please.
Author's Response:
awww u asked so nice... here's the next chapter!
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99
ooooo! Can she do it? We'll find out!
Loved it, loved it, loved it. Thank you for making my day!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97
More, please. What's he going to ask of her now? I need to know these things!
:)
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96
Either way, waiting with the phone calls or skipping ahead would work. Personally, I like the slow burn, but that's just me.
Great work as usual. I don't know where you're getting your ideas from, but keep at it. i love this story! Thank you for writing it!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98
Can I have my own Edward? He sounds too good to be true.
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172
And get ready to stay kneeling there, B. A Masterpiece takes time to create... :)
Loved, loved, loved, loved, loved this chapter. It keeps me smiling today and I really needed that right now. You have no idea. I hope you're having fun writing this story because I'm having a blast reading it!
Update soon to feed my addiction, please!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 170
Every woman has that one cologne that just makes their toes curl and their hearts start pumping fast. Each person is different too. Some people may like axe, some Calvine Klein, so forth and so on.
If I were writing this, (boo hoo, I'm not :( ), I would write about old spice. That one is the one that makes me weak in the knees, my weakness. But then again, if I were writing this, the three things I would have said he smelled like (you stated three so I'll just carry on in that fashion), are Old Spice, cause I'm such a sucker for it, the scent of the first rain of the season (mostly just the way wet pavement smells. don't ask me why, but I absolutely love that smell. I know, I'm a freak of nature... hehe, literally!) and either the scent of honeydew melon (whch would be more for a girl...?) or the smell of butter-mints.
Thank you for the update! I'll be (im)patiently waiting for the next! Don't keep me waiting too long, or I might start getting the shakes from the withdrawls!
Author's Response:
I'm not sure why you don't write. It almost seems a sin. And I'm not sure why you aren't part of the fandom on facebook. I'd love to see you caption pictures. I have an entire room dedicated to darkest desires where people post the most delicious pictures :)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169
I'm loving all this anonymous sex and the connection they have, but when are they going to meet? That's what I want to know.
Good luck on the writing! Well, you don't need any luck, you are perfect all on your own. :) Keep up the good writing. Have a great weekend! Don't have too much fun. ;)
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 186: Chapter 186
Poor girl. He took her to the end of her rope. What else did he think she would do?
Wonderful chapter. I would have loved to know a little bit more about what Butterfly thought of Sub space and whatnot, but I still loved the chapter.
Thank you for the third update today, or, well, I guess it's the first of the day. Huh, I guess I should go to bed now. It's way early in the morning here.
Update soon, please?
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 171
I soooo would! He could paint me any time he wants! I wouldn't mind!
How do you do it? How can you write that well? That quickly. Granted, I know it's just drabble chapters, but added up, you write so much! I don't know how you do it. More power to you! You're awesome! Give me more...please? Update soon!
And in response to your last AN to me, I do write. It's a small little story called Mafia Bargains. It's not much, but it's mine.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94
ooooh! i wonder what she's going to do next... update soon! I want more of this amazing writing!
Author's Response:
you are too kind!
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 177
I like it. I like it. I like! Elegantly written and perfectly described.
Update soon, please? I want more! :)
The pic is a good visual. Thanks for the hard work! It's great!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136
Awwww! Eddies starting to fall for her!
Great update! Please, can I have one more? :)
Author's Response:
yes, before I go to bed!
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109
I love it! Update soon, Please!
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 243: Chapter 243
Oooooooo! can't wait to read the next chapter! It's going to be so exciting! I wonder whose POV it's going to be in. BPOV would be good, but then again, so would EPOV. Either one would be fine with me.
Thank you for the amazing update, and I'm eagerly anticipating the next one! :)
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Love it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
with this fic, there's always more!
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 214: Chapter 214
So hot! Pic too! I would die if someone did that to me. I don't think I would be able to stay quiet, especially with an ice tongue? Holy shit!
Thanks for the update! It's amazing as usual!
The only beta issue I saw with this chapter (and don't worry, it's uuber small,) is an 's' to make stockings plural in the first sentence
Thank you again!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Carlisle? Edward? Carlisle AND Edward? Are you trying to kill me here? That's like my ultimate dream right there. Make a me sandwich and I'd die a happy girl!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174
Never tried it, but I would so love to do that. I'd also love to have as much fun time as Butterfly is having lately. She must be a very satisfied woman indeed. I want to be too!
I'm so happy to see you've updated even with the faulty internet. We had similar issues when we were switching. First the router went caput, then we decided since the service from our provider was crappy, we switched. So we got the router on a Tuesday and by Friday we had switched providers completely. I understand how you feel
Thank you for the update! I so love them! I love this story!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
No! Don't just end it! I'm loving this. I know I've been failing epically with the reviews, biut that doesn't mean I'm not reading it! I look forward to these updates every day!
It's a wonderfully written drabble about a topic I haven't seen done this well, ever. Please keep going with it. I promise to start writing reviews each chapter!
Author's Response:
wow, that is one hell of a complement!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks :)
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
Aw, poor Eddie. He's so lost and confused right now. I just hope he doesn't take it all out on the little butterfly.
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
Awww, poor eddie, he sounds so lost and confused. I hope things start to look up for him.
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
More please... I can't get enough of this story. I smile every time I see the story has updated. :)
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86
No! Please not Tanya! I've never liked her. She always rubbed me the wrong way, even in the Twilight books. Eddie! Why?
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87
That's just evil, not telling us what the conversation was with Tanya! Really? Really? Wow! So evil! :)
I absolutely love this story! Keep up the good work! Keep writing! i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm loving writing it! Thanks soooo much for the review!
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88
You like to tease your readers, don't you? You're an evil little thing, I tell you. Evil.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210
You are not letting us down. Please! if writing isn't fun anymore, I wouldn't push you to write. If you need to get your life a bit more organized and under control, then please do. All the loyal readers will understand and wait.
I'm doing NaNoWriMo too. I'm up to 11K words so far. You can do it. Keep going!
Thank you for putting this out to begin with and when you can, you'll update. We all get that. And if someone doesn't, they don't matter.
Thanks for the update!
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89
There's probably nothing I wouldn't do for Edward...or Rob... just saying.
Update soon, please! Your chapters are great, but I always feel like you're teasing with just the one at a time.
Love it!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90
Always such a tease with the well written chapters leaving off right when you get absorbed. How dare you? :) Thanks for the update!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91
Evil, teasing little person you. You always do this to me! ;)
Loved it as always. Writign is superb and the idea is even more original. I haven't seen this idea on any of the other sites I'm on. Bravo and kudos!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92
unf! You're trying to kill me! This story is so freaking hot!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93
I wat my own Edward! Where might I locate one?
Author's Response:
this Edward is modeled after my Master. Though we didn't meet quite this way, there was quite a bit of watching going on. :P
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I don't know if I'd ever be able to be the one that's watched. (Too many self esteem issues) I'd rather do the watching.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101
Dun Dun Dunnnnnnn! oh no! What is tanya going to pull?
Anymore updates tonight? Update soon! I love your writing!
*Smoochies*
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102
Tanya, don't do anything! Edward will kill you if you do!
Excellent writing as usual. I can't wait to see what you do with this story! It's really good. Please update soon!
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103
Smooth as a baby's bottom...so smack it! :)
Wonderful writing! Update soon, please?
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104
Sir's nickname for you is an unusual one, but still beautiful. I don't think I've ever heard that as a nickname before.
Wonderful writing. I can't wait to see what happens next. You always leave us with just enough to get us going, expecting to scroll down and see more and then it's like....well that sucks. I have to wait until you update. I guess that's the suspense.
I think this story would have done well in a regualr non-drabble-ish story, but the way you write, it's drabble, but you still protray all the details and emotions and everything in just a few words. I guess I'm long winded. I could never do that; a drabble fic.
Please, please, please, please update soon!
Author's Response:
You do know that there is a 14K word one shot of this right? No Sir POV, but it is what got the thing going. He calls me butterfly because he said i change before his eyes this last year.
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105
It all goes by so quickly.... Even if it were a million words per chapter, I'd still want more.
And it's so cute he calls you his butterfly. You were an itty bitty caterpillar and changed into an even more beautiful butterfly right before his eyes. That's so cute!
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106
Uh oh... don't do anything stupid, tanya. You won't live long if you do...
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107
It almost sounds like she thinks she's a prostitute or something, recieving monetary gain for sexual favors. Then again, I think she might like it if she spins it the right way in her mind.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108
I love this story. It's beautiful.
Quick question, why does Sir refer to himself in the third person and not first?
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110
Good luck with school!
Amazing writing. I can't wait to see what you do with the characters. I want more, so please update soon. Please?
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111
Hot, hot, hot hot hot! I love it! It's like I'm living through your character. I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Love it! Update soon, please!
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112
Tanya needs to learn what NO means. This can only end badly. It's like a train wreck waiting to happen, going in slow motion and you can't take your eyes off of it. I want to see the wreck!
Update your wonderful story soon, please? I'm anxiously awaiting what happens to Tanya next.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113
Aw! Completely repulsed by Tanya, the ho. Who wouldn't be? Her attitude is a turn off.
Thank you for the extra long chapter! It was great, but no matter how long it is, it always leaves us wanting more... :)
Update soon, please!
Author's Response:
Joce.... u make me laugh... would you like to be a pre reader sometime?
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114
When I find a story I really like, I usually hit the favorite author and favorite story. That seems to help the best.
Spectacular as usual. Pleas keep up the good work! I live for these updates! :)
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 209: Chapter 209
Everything's possible if you just believe! Great chapter! I loved it! I just got home and I remembered you had updated yesterday and I jumped on the computer and poof, there was another update too! I feel so special!
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115
Tiring work, getting all purdy. But do you think Eddie boy is going to allow you to talk, and probably flirt with some other guy? I don't think so Bella. You should know by now Edward is always watching somehow, someway. Don't even try it.
Great work. I look forward to another installment soon!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116
You're so welcome for that...
I flove this story. Very well written and the concept is something I haven't seen written this well, ever. I can't wait for more! I know I'm being greedy,but, update soon, please?
Thank you for this story!
Author's Response:
can u message me on fb?
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117
Awwww! So, when is she going to figure it out?
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118
Edward needs to just jump in there and show his cards to Bella. With all the cloaks and daggers going on, it'll just be worse in the end for him.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119
Oooooh! Fun times behind the red door! I wonder what's going to be used first?
Great job! I love it all!
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120
I can't wait to see what happens to little butterfly in the red room. You've got me all excited and anxious over here. Please update soon so I can see what happens?
You're writing is so beautiful. There's an elegance to it that most writers don't have. Even with a...shall we say naughty?... writing subject, it pulls you in despite if it's your cup of tea or not and doesn't let go until you've consumed every single word of it.
Thank you for putting yourself out there with this story and allowing all of us to read what is close to you. I appreciate the gesture!
One last time, I LOVE it!
Author's Response:
I practically cried when I read this. It's so sweet :) Thanks so much!
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121
You surprise me. I thought you might be done updating for the day. Clearly I was wrong. And thank goodness I was! You are certainly trying to feed my addiction, arent you?
I'm not too knowledgable in this realm, even though, I kinda wish I was, anyway...I have limited knowledge about wha toys are out there, but, maybe one of those frozen glass ones and a vibrating butt plug at the same time, or something? I know, it's relatively tame, but what can you do?
Personally, I really don't mind what toy or toys, but I would love to see her go into subspace eventually. It's a beautiful thing, subspace.
Author's Response:
those are some wild toys actually... it would be hard to handle both at once. Have u ever had something frozen in u? and I just bout die with any butt plug... anyway, i should come up with a posting schedule, but its kinda like... oh don't laugh, when I get between ten and twenty reviews, I figure its old and I need a new chapter....
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122
Ah! Always with the cutting off right before the good parts! Evil little person you!
Thanks for the update. I'm just about to go to sleep, so now, hopefully, I'll have lots and lots of good dreams. Oh the things Edward would do to me... yum.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123
*Thud*
That's all I can say. You killed me!
Author's Response:
*takes a bow*
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124
What panties? I don't wear any....jk! Jk! I swear I do!
Thank you for the update! I can't wait to see what he asks of her on the dining table.
Careful, Edward, the steam and heavy breathing in the apartment might begin to fog the windows. What will you do if you can't see her?
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125
Oh! Really? Really? You leave us there? How evil can you be? I want to hear what she does with the candle. I have a feeling, a very good feeling i know what it is, but still. Evil, evil woman! How could you?
Even though I'm reeling at where you left off, I love the chapter. I agree, people who don't read the AN miss a whole other world.
Please update soon! i need my next hit!
Author's Response:
One hour... I'll update in an hour :)
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126
Oo, la la! I wouldnt mind that view. Or the one of Edward across the way.
Thank you for the extra update today! I loved it! Keep up the wonderful writing!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127
Much better. Now it's time for work for our Edward and Bella. Will they have that afterglow? Will Jessica see that? Will Emmett? Or for that matter, will Bella see that?
Great writing! I loved it! Update soon. You got me all excited! I hope there's some interaction next chapter at work between the two of them. That would be priceless!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128
I wouldn't dream going anywhere without anothershower, especially after that. Whoooo, boy! hot! Yes Ma'am.
Excellent always! Keep up the great work and I'll see you at your next update! (which is soon hopefully, right?)
Have a great day!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129
Such little faith Emmett has in his "brother."
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130
Oooo! Emmett, you'd better be careful! one wrong move, one wrong word, one wrong thought and I don't think Edward would care that he tore you from limb to limb. I don't think Edward would care if he did it in front of humans either. Emmett better get his act together, because Edward doesn't share!
Excellent work! It just keeps getting better and better!
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132
Awww! They're bonding! Jessica is such a dipshit. Yes everything's about me, I'm the greatest, bow before me. Little does she know, she's not the shit she thinks she is. When is Bella going to find out Edward is the guy?
You have no idea how happy I was to find the update in my inbox when I woke up this morning. I just got around to reading it though (stupid chores...)
Please keep up the wonderful work! I'm so excited about this piece! It's so well written and it makes my heart pump faster. You have no idea how rare that is when I read fan fiction these days...
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 175
Yes please! I wouldn't mind some of that. Where can I sign up?
Thank you fr the update! I enjoyed it immensly!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133
It's nice to see what's going on in Emmett's mind every now and then, especially when he's the one that so close to both Bella and Edward. He'd be able to see more of what's going on day to day.
You updated! For me? You shouldn't have! I'm just kidding. I love your updates! They make me smile! :) See, that's me!
I could never write a drabble. I'm too wordy and descriptive. Yet you, with very little, are able to portray the story, the surroundings, the emotions and everything in so few words and still get it across the way you wanted it. It's beautiful! It's a true gift you have.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134
Are you sure it's going to be sir? That would be bad if it wasn't him on the other side of the line. And if it truely is sir on the other end, I'm not sure I want to guess. You have the imagination, we'll see what comes out of it. :)
Excellent writing as always. Some of the drabbles I have read in the past are nothing but sex, sex, sex, all the time. And although that's great, it's not a true story. I like how you're furthering the story along with a chapter here and a chapter there of nonsex. I like how you're showing us the furtherment of the characters every now and then.
Great writing, as always. I look forward to your next update! Please don't keep us waiting too long! :)
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135
I think it would be interesting if they both gave their thoughts. Edward with how much he wants her and how he's not allowed to actually have her...that way. And Bella with how she's thinking about how she never would of done that or something along those lines. I like to see it from both PoV's, but that's just me.
This is me giving you hugs since you updated! *hug* *hug* *hug*. You have no clue how happy you just made me! Update soon please! I want to continue reading your masterpiece!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137
Beautiful as always! Keep up the good work!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138
So freaking hot! I want to be teased like that...
Wonderful writing. It's amazing if I may say. Each chapter gdts better and better. I look forward to reading the next update!
Author's Response:
You are an amazing cheerleader.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139
Big, big, big loves to you for not breaking it in two.
THANK YOU for sharing your wonderful story. I smile each and every time you update. You are a beautiful writer. Please don't stop.
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141
So Fucking Hot! Havig him worked up so much he wouldn't be able to wait until he got merely across the street. Hamina, hamina. Yum yum.
If you wish to update again tonight, I'll love you long time, but if you wait for tomorrow, I'll love you just the same.
Keep up the great work. I freaking love you and your updates. The story is so well written and it keeps you coming back for more. Bravo! Encore! Encore!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142
Reds are anything that draws blood, anything that may leave marks- perminent or not, and any sort of breath play.
Yellows are various sorts of bondage and gags, whips, floggers, etc.
That's all I can think of right now. There's so many things I would love to try but am waaaaaay too scared to even ask for.
I'm into the older men, other than that, I think I'm fairly open minded. I'll try almost anything once.
Great update! I absolutely love this story! The update was so long and SO good! I love it! I love you! Keep up the wonderful, amazing work! Bravo! Encore!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143
There are no words that I can tell you that would express just how much I love this story. Those words, those four little words, have no way to express just how much I love this story. The words are so small and inconsequential it seems.
Your writing is beautiful and flows wonderfully onto the page. Please keep up the beautiful work.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144
Edward's soooooo good to her, still taking care of her needs atop everything that's going on. He sounds like the perfect guy.
Thank you for the update! I was worried yesterday when I didn't see an update from you. Is everything going ok with you?
Amazing as always!
Author's Response:
Everything is going well, had too much to do and didn't budget my time well.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145
I wonder what she'll find.... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
I know what you mean about budgeting time. Yesterday I didn't exactly do a good job of that either. Oh well, today's a new day.
Great job on the new chapter! I love it!
Author's Response:
I'm writing now, though I'm torn between this and IR
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151
Hey, sorry for not reviewing. I've been out of town and haven't had internet. I'm actually reading this on my friend's computer right now...I hope she doesn't catch me. I need to be quick about this!
I LOVE THIS STORY! You have a way with words and making the kink seem elegant (I think I mispelled that) and eloquent. I have been going through withdrawls all week because I have been missing your updates.
I love in the last chapter how she wipes the seat clean of her...fluids. It was so creative. I would have never thought of that in a million years. And having Edward right outside the door? Hot!
I assume this chapter, the P in PBOV at the top of the chapter is refferng to Pet? Correct me if I'm wrong.
You have to keep up the great work! I'll review the other chapters when I get a few more minutes this weekend. Just know that I so look forward to each of your chapters. They put a wide smile on my face when I get the email.
Lets see if we can't get some more readers. This story deserves more than six or seven! Way more!
Author's Response:
The PBOV was me typing at two am so ya'll could get another chapter... my bad... thanks for the review....
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155
I'm back and I was so happy to see an update to my inbox!
Thank you for the long chapter and the wonderful product. I appreciate all the hard work, the time and effort you put into this story. It's amazing.
Author's Response:
awww thanks. It doesn't feel like worth though :)
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153
That is sooooo cute. I never would have thought to use flower names. And the descriptions of how and why, it was beautiful.
Wonderful Work!
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Midnight Caller
Suckling? Are you freaking trying to kill me? I want someone to suckle me!
You have a beautiful way with words. I'm sure they just jump out at you and tell you what to write, don't they?
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158
That's where you leave us? Just when we were getting into the hot part. Don't get me wrong, it's all hot, but he's going to insert something? I wanna read!
Please, please, please,please, please update soon. I really want to see that.
Wonderful update,just like always. I love your work!
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160
Oh My. Can you say hot to the nth degree?
You just made my sexually frustrated day! :)
Well written and well exicuted. Wonderful!
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161
Freaking unbelievable. I want that!!!!! I think you're secretly reading my mind, snatching things out of there I want and then putting then down in writing. How are you doing that?
Thank you for posting tonight. I wasn't expecting another one, but I'm SO willing to review on two. It's amazing. Thank you!
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162
oh, why not six as my guess? For the first time, she did a good job. My only question is why didn't she go into subspace? Was it because it was her first time with Edward?
Perfect chapter. Please tell me you're going to update at least one more time today. I would love to see Sir's reaction to the playtime and afterwards.
It's well written and descriptive. I don't think I could do that in the short chapters you manage. You do it wonderfully though.
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163
H.O.T.
How do you come up with all this stuff? It's amazing. Keep up the wonderful work!
Author's Response:
Thanks, i needed that.. im writing chapter 167 right now and panicking....