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Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Great chapter cant wait to read more update soon I love this story .. the story is so unlike any other i have read .. love it love it love it !!!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Oh this cant be good.....YIKES!!!!!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

humm i smell a set up ..lol very clever i might add,love love love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

i love this story and cant wait for an update your talent is amazing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

wow...i wanted her to kick her ass



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

nice chapter but i was hoping for more action



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

WOW....not sure what to say ,everytime i see this story has been updated i get all jittery,silly I know but i love this story,

Not sure why Bella is keeping the recording to herself,The thing i have always liked about this bella is that she doesnt hold things back.and for her to do thi seems a little out of charactor but i will see where it goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

oh that was evil........to be honest as ballsy as Bella is in this story I'm supprised that when she was outside Edwards off ice when he gave her the papers she didnt rush into his office and demand to know what was going on...I didnt take her to turn tail and run .now here she is in a pickle,Glad she she atleast got a good shot in on james.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Happy B-day to Bella ..whoo hoooooo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

i hae to say this was one of those stories that everytime you got the alert that it was updated you would stop what you are reading and go read the update,*aleast I did*

It had just the right amount of drama and it also had the right amount of romance,I liked that you didnt drag out the conflicts chapter after chapter

you allowed them to face the conflicts straight away and not drag them out,that always irritates me when conflicts get drug out forever.

Anyway i look fwd to the next story ,Thank you for sharing this story with us.



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary:

Bella, Alice, and Rosalie Swan are looking for the person who shot their father, Charlie, and left him for dead. The Cullen boys, Edward, Emmett, and Jasper, help them but will the person they're after get to them first? AH&MA E/B,J/A,EM/R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102591 Read Count: 42550
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

uggggggggggggggggggg....there she goes running off again



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I knew there was going to be some big show by Jacob



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

INTERESTING... good 1



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

the plot thickens



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

hummm... ya think it sunk in?

good story ..ty



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

ut oh.... get the scooby snacks for larent he has cracked the code...... and they would of got away with it oo if it wasnt for those pesky kids..lol

sorry had to get that out of my system........good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I was chuckling at the scooby doo reference:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

yikes.......*ties the rope around my waist and anchors it to the rock and hopes for a rescue soon*



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I promise not to keep you dangling too long :)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

very creeped out and the hair on my arms is standing on end.. update soon this crazy sucker needs found.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

whewww glad they caught up to her ... ok now lets catch these suckers and have it done with



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

omg ... plz plz let the boys find her and kill those freaks that did this... i will be on the edge of my chair until i get another chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

omg ... *picks self up off the floor*    you have to let the boys get to her in time.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

this was a good chapter but i so want her and edard to be closer



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

ok i get what she has been through ..but why is it no one is forcing her to see a therapist? She cant be that uninteligent to know that she is not dealing with this ... and I am sure she doesnt want to feel this way. sorry but she is beginning to get on my nerves she needs to go seek help weather she likes it or not. it's like she is torn up inside and she is trying to tear everyone else up along with her. I say get her some help and quickly this wounded animal act of hers is getting tirsome



Author's Response:

Thank you. Here's the thing. It's not easy to trust yourself when you've been through something like this. If Bella isn't willing to seek help, then forcing her into it is only going to make things worse. I promise that things are going to start getting better for her. Just trust me a little:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

*sigh* i would marry Edward



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255186
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

good one



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, here is this weeks teaser...

Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.

 

“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”

 

Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”

 

“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.”  I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention. 

 

Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”

 

I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”

 

Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”

 

“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”

 

“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”

 

“Well I don’t know about carefree…”

 

Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

good story ,keep up the good work.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have to say for a bit i was thinking this is progressing quite slow but i must say that it still kept me reading.

I hope you update soon

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

good chapter

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

i am so scared for bella ...update soon plz

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

good chapter hopoe to read more soon

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

damn.......better call the lone ranger to save her,edward is taking tooo long.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Hi ho silver ..AWAY>>>>

I still say call the lone ranger cause i still feel that Edward is taking to long.lol

I am just ready for them to be reunited.....I get inpatient

I love this story can't wait for more updates.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

hummmmm

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Whooo hooo and YEEE hawwwww   they done got hitched and now Esmom is gonna pop

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183823
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to!)

ok just gonna throw this out there and by no means is this ment in a bad way.

Why in the world did you have them stop mid sex to have that dicussion? and why in the world woud they have these dicussions on their Honeymoon? Honeymoons are for romance and intamacy not delving into heavy issues.

Just didnt follow your reasoning there.

I guess i just felt those issues should of happened b4 the wedding or at least when the honeymoon was over.

Life's Journey by JoeMomma1214 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

LJ_Banner2.jpg Life's Journey Banner 3 picture by joemomma1214

Bella is left with a baby that's not hers. What happens when she meets Edward the Pediatrician? Follow us on Life's Journey.

Rating for language, violence, and citrus...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34843 Read Count: 31444
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Epilogue

This was a nice story  with just the right amount of drama, But I gotta tell ya I didnt care much for  this version of Bella ,I felt she cried if the wind blew .but the over all story I enjoyed



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate your honesty about not liking Bella! :) I didn't like KStew's Bella in Twilight... she's gotten better though.

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/23069/images/MafiaPrincess.jpg

Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87548
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

good one



Author's Response:

Thanks sweets! =)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

ok ..you got my attention... not sure who it is.

Author's Response:

Don't worry, next chapter will reveal who's responsible. 

Summary:

SEQUEL TO A Different Kind of Moon.  Fifteen years have passed since the fateful day that Angela Cullen (formerly Weber) was turned.  Follow her story as she recounts her adjustments to her new life as a vampire as well as becoming the newest member of the Cullen clan.  How does she really feel about her new life? Her family?  What does she want to do with the eternity that now lays before her?  Did Edward and Bella find their happily ever after?  Will Angela find love?  All this and more will be answered in Careful What You Wish For!

Many thanks to JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56150 Read Count: 4832
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Feb 2013
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: By Myself

of course they are right or you wouldnt have much of a story ..*giggle*

but so far I am lovin this one as much as the first.



Author's Response: Hehehe...so true! Thanks for sticking with me and the review! Much appreciated!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Fly Away

very sad indeed..thank you 4 giving her father a little closer .. still a little to emotional to give a better review



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments!  Glad you enjoyed it and I promise it won't all be sad!! More coming soon!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Peace

great chapter and I would love a J&A outtake.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: What Might Have Been

hummmmm

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Tough Talk

humm and the plot thickens...cant wait for more

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

;)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: It Should Happen This Way

WOW

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Remember Me

oh how i wish this chapter was longer

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Darkness Falls

yikes

Summary:

Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 58330
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i loved the last story and i hope you stay with the same theme as last one.... i love the nice easy flow .. that is what makes  me enjoy reading it so much,I read all the angsty updates then i would read my boys just to make my self have a feel good moment and your writing is excelent.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

*sigh* i just love this story it always makes me feel good after along day . I too work in health care and it can be draining.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

*sigh* i want  to have Edwards baby. .. aww who am i kidding i just want to have  wild animal S%X with him ..*giggle*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

*sigh* i just love my boys : )

I like your writing as well.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oh i love these two .. i hope all 3 come back from honeymoons preggers.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

*SIGH* I want to be in the sand with Edward *pout* oh well at oeast i can read about it ..lol..Thank you for this light hearted story ..i always look fwd to your updates..



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

*sigh*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

ok now her sisters need to be preggers too and I think they all need to have twins ..LOL Just kidding .. but i do want them all to be preggers... I love this story it makes me feel good .

one thing about this story is its different then most you read , this is a nice feel good story ,I think that is why i like it so much . I work in health care and I see death and the dieing everday so its nice to escape with this feel good story. thank you for your gift



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG didnt see that comming



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

UGGGG how can you take charlie?



Author's Response:

I'm sorry. I feel horrible about it.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

not gonna lie .. not liking where this is going



Author's Response:

I know but trust me.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I cried all the way through this chapter...I have lost both my parents now,one from cancer one from a heart attack,I know what it's like to misscarrage a baby also, I also know what it's like to feel like the world is closing in on you . I hope things start looking up soon cause I love all these charactors ,you said to trust you so I am trusting you.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

loved the prank and the Edward luvin....keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstar
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I gotta tell ya this story is beginning to depress me.. i think they have been through enough it's time for you to lay all their demons to rest and get them to the HEA they deserve *TOGETHER* I have lost a baby and a parent and i didnt even have as stong a support system as she does and I dont recall taken it all out on those around me trying to help. It feels like she is just dragging it all out. Anyway this chapter has me depressed.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I promise they will get their HEA, eventually. I did take it out on alot of people when I went through this.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

still keeping the faith.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I have to say a few times I didnt know if I could keep reading this, it was so depressing at times, I felt through alot of this Bella was irational . But I am glad they worked out ,I hope the final stage will not be so depressing.

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/be_my_sub_banner.gif

 

   

Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

ty 4 chapter..good one

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

ut oh....what are they up to?

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

Umm where do i find a pole? he he he

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I just began reading this story yesterday ,I have skipped over it many times but thought i would give it a chance.glad I did

I like the premis of the story my only complaint is that when writing a period story you should kind of stick to the tone of their dialect. for instance: someone of that time would not say twenty four seven. see what I am saying here?

you can still write the period with out all the thee and thou crap but the slang is what kind of throws the story  off.

but i do like the story and will keep reading.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I would of put money on Jasper being the father ..Glad I didnt bet the farm on that one .lol

I'm glad for once that Victoria is not a bad person. it gets predictable in most stories that she will be the bd guy, so i am glad for  your twist on it.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

omg.....they have to get her away from him

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

i knew his ass wasnt gone for good..grrrrrrrrr

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

wow

Prophecy by VampaliciousCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Prophecy

Can Bella overcome the destiny that has been laid out for her and find the Promised One in time?

The Prophecy

The one with balance will seek out the Promised one.
She shall find him in a forest of rock and steel.
This warrior is a child of the Goddess, yet will be raised far away.
He will return and aid his people in sweeping the darkness from the land.
He will place the one with balance upon her throne and will stand by her side for many years.

OOC for some characters

Some Human, Many Mythological creatures, not the world you are used to.

Complete 01/07/2011: Prophecy; Part One

Up Now: Part Two; True North

Character List for Part One & Two

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103125 Read Count: 31122
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: C22 Aching Muscles

I can see that Edward is smitten with Bella and so is Jas,

When will Alice show up ,She left her behind and she told her she woul.d take her with her?



Author's Response:

Don't fret, Bella wont forget about Alice, but she cant go back just yet. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: C16 Promising Future

good chapter



Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, happy u liked the chapter.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: C19 Welcome to Forks

IS she in love with J ?

i am a ExB kinda reader  ...I like cannon couples

but i do love this story and will read it no matter



Author's Response:

hmm now that is a great question and i am real sorry but i cant actually answer it yet, part of the story is not knowing who Bella is ment for. Thanks for sticking around and i hope you enjoy the rest :)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: C20 Seduction Techniques

Glad I buckled up my seatbelt i get the feeling we are in for a bumpy ride



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, hope your in for the long haul :)

Please Remember Me by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

stories/10761/images/Bannerpleaserememberme1.jpg

 

The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into.  NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.

This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.

 Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;

http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme  copyrightbabylou23@2010.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I gotta say i do like the story and cant wait for him to find her.

I also have read a few of the reviews and I am with alot of the other readers when i say having Edward be a manwhore is not to my liking if he is so much in love with Bella,doesnt realy make alot of sense. and your answer of boys will be boys?

on another note, I think tanya is the girl he found not his lover. hope I am right.



Author's Response:

I can't tell you if your right about Tanya but you will find out soon. The reason I answered that comment for Edwards behavior is that I don't really want to change or influence others opitions right now. I want you to have your own view and if i'm successful, then most people's view and understanding will change as Edward changes himself. I also don't want to give to much away, I know some things are confusing right now but it will all make sense the further we get into the story. I hope my answer makes sense, sorry for rambling and thank you for reviewing. 

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35495
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

yikes!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

YIKES!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Remember Me by NoelleSeven Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary: Past Featured Story

remembermebanner

 

One love.  One destiny.  Can you change what's meant to be?  AU/OOC NOT related to Rob Pattinson's movie of the same name.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126600 Read Count: 8254
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 25 Aug 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue

I loved this story sooo much .. thank you

cant wait to see what yu will write next and i could handle a out take .. or two ..*giggle*

Summary: Past Featured Story

Picks up at the end of Eclipse, where Bella is kissing Jacob and instead of discovering some love for him, she finds him just a friend.  This is my version of Breaking Dawn, wherein sacrifices have to be made for eternity with the one you love.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Bella's Must Reads!, Gelesen
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271871 Read Count: 43047
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

interesting



Author's Response:

Haha thanks, interesting is good I think.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

awwwww sexy times



Author's Response:

Plenty of those, but a lot of stuff ahead :)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

high 5 to Bella



Author's Response:

High 5 back!  I really loved the way this chapter went and her flow of thoughts were my flow of thoughts in her situation and it really worked well I think :)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

so sad



Author's Response:

Very, but things perk up soon, I promise!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

hummmm ....interesting that Rose couldnt speak until Bella told her she could...Is this another power?



Author's Response:

Another? :)  You'll have the answer to that very soon!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

yikes



Author's Response:

Haha yeah the action is amping up now :)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

interesting



Author's Response:

Haha thanks :)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

On pins and needles here cant wait



Author's Response:

;) I'm glad you're so excited!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

uggg another cliff you left me hanging on...ugg *anyone got a rope?

 



Author's Response:

:) Not for long!  I will post the final 3 regular chapters at intervals today, starting now :)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

very good ending and the rest was good too...... I hope to read more of your work



Author's Response:

Thank you!  There's plenty to read if you're so inclined!  Taste will be done shortly and First is about midway through!

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389629
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

oh god dont let her ruin it by getting freaked out



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ok I'm just gonna say it WTF?

Where is the logic here? This part of the story has just gone all wrong ..perhaps some prozac for Eddie boy is in order.

All We Knew by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Summary:

Bella Swan returns home after ten years and a bad marriage. Will she be able to find herself? What if her past catches up to her? AH & NC-17 for language and possible lemons. B/E, A/J,R/EM

 

awk


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143567 Read Count: 114661
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2012
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I always hate it when they wait to tell  anyone ,I think they should marry b4 the baby comes. I think they should elope. it's romantic that way.

Love this story. it breaks my heat alot but i do like it.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*sigh* ya sucked me into another story ..But i am loving every bit of it........I almost didnt read this story, I guess cause so many of the stories I read are very angsty (is that even a word?) and i get a little depressed reading them, yours has the right amount of calm mixed into the drama so to speak. not sure I am explaining this right but i try.



Author's Response:

I do understand, and yes, I do think Angsty is a word:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

And the tangled web becomes even more tangled



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Yup Edward can fight my fever anytime



Author's Response:

I know, right????

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

ugg cliffy

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

uggggggggggggggggggg

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

tc

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204643
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

good one



Author's Response:

Thank you:)