Reviews by BethyBooW
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625246
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Great chapter. I really love this story.

 

And I am DEFINITELY interested in your idea for TPW.

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19232
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Please, please, please update soon! I really like this story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth

Why on earth did I not find this story sooner? Oh well, I'm reading it now. Seriously though, I think I'm gonna be totally into this...

Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

This chapter only intrigues me more! :)

Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

Oh, I was also gonna say that it bothered me a little bit that after Edward said he forgave her he still spanked her twice more and her punishment continued for another half an hour. It just seemed kinda wrong. Like he didn't really forgive her or something. Just my thoughts!

Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Most Basic Facts

HAHAHAHA. That bit with them finding Rose and Edward was so funny!! And how awkward that Edward grabbed Bella's hand like that. I would have been SO uncomfortable. But you gotta love Eddie anyways, lol.

Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Family Ties

Naughty, naughty Alice. Though I disagree with how their family handles such things. I wonder how Bella will react when she finds out about the whole spanking thing. Hmm.

On the other hand, it was nice getting a peak into Edward's past.

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 33003
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

O.M.G. this story is A-Freakin-Mazing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! i am glad you like it! thanks for reading it,   michele

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I was seriously checking for this update a few times a day. This story is sooo much better than I thought it would be. You have no ideah how many times I skipped over it, and I have no idea why I finally decided to give it a chance, but I'm so glad I did.



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Yay, such an awesome chapter from an awesome author! Thanks for the update, dear.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

You're doing a great job with this story. Thanks you for sharing it with us! I'm wondering when the action with Edward's ex wife will start, though.



Author's Response:

{Sorry this didn't get to you sooner! The next chapter will be in a few hours! XoXo}

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!

Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance! 

 <3 Shel

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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.

"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.

"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.

"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ROFL. I need the laugh this gave me today. Thanks.

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Definitely the best lemons I've read in several months. Good job.

And I'm interested to see where the plot is headed.



Author's Response:

Thank you! ;) I hope you stick around for this. See yah next update.

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238932
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is seriously the best story of this type that I have ever read - and I don't say that lightly. I will be EXTREMELY disappointed if you don't continue this story. This chapter was excellent. Good job. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I really appreciate the compliment. And yes, I plan to continue. Chapter 2 is almost completed. Thanks =)

Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You're awesome - thanks so much for the fast update! I really appreciate it, since this is one of the main stories I'm looking out for right now. Super job on this chapter. Poor Bella!

And I like the details you're giving us so far on how your vamps are different than SM's. I've always thought that they should be tall, too.



Author's Response:

Thank you...and thanks for reading too. =)

Poor Bella indeed. She's trying to cope.

I hope you'll like my vamps, you'll learn more about them as time goes by through Bella's POV. And yes, the tall characteristic was a must. LOL In all the vamp books that I have read so far, esp The Black Dagger Brotherhood, they've all been really tall.

Thanks again.

Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wrote a nice long review for this chapter a few days ago, but when I went to post it, my log in time had expired.

Basically though, I loved it and I cannot wait for the next chapter! WooHoo!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm working on ch 4 now. Hopefully, I will be able to post in a few days. =)

Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ahh, I've been checking for this update like twice a day, lol. Thank you!

I'm curious if Tanya is just full of hot air or if she really thinks she could do something....



Author's Response:

Aww..thank you =) Yeah, I wanted to update sooner but  RL kept me away =( I'll try to update once a week.

You'll see about Tanya. She does have friends in low places tho...lol.

Thanks for reading/commenting. =)

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105129
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Continue, continue, continue!



Author's Response:

I will,

I will,

I will,

Thank you so much for your encouragement and for reading it!