Reviews by Twhylitelvr77
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315744
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm

Awesome, I was just checking for a new chapter and low and behold...bonus!! This chapter was a big batch of fuckery ala Edward, but we'll see what's up next one...hope they pull their heads out of their respective asses and talk!

Thanks for sharing...

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

Suuuppp???? I was so pissed that I totally missed this update, I'm trying to get the hang of this site...I thought I had this story marked so that I'd get updates...apparently not...FAIL..but I love this story and I'll be sad when it's fin. So, hope you update soon since I have no idea when this chapter came thru...thanks for sharing chica!

Corina

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

LoVe It!!!! I'm all doing happy dances when I see that you've updated....awesome chapter...can't wait to see what's gonna happen now...

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366589
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: First Date Insanity

Nice! I was freaking out there for a minute, and who in the heck is Aaron? Did I miss something or was the first time he was brought up? Its midnight where I'm from and I'm a bit dazed, but I love this chapter and I love this story...I'd follow you anywhere to ready this bitch...thanks for the posting on FF to let readers know you updated...this site does not do that...and that blows!



Author's Response:

No prob. I'll do that for all chapters that come here only. Chapter 6 will be another that's only here.  Aaron was mentioned in the very first chapter (the original one shot). He's the little boy who died from heart troubles.

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Cry

I'm sorry that I don't reply as often as I should. I love this story and I'm sitting here bawling as I type this...aww....I can totally feel the jacked up emotions that both of them have and I would do anything to have Jasper holding me right now while I cry. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Teacher's Pet Banner

 

Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Back to School

Ok, so I totally sat and read every single chapter. I'm surprised I never found this story on FF. I followed a few others to this site after the drama. I really liked this story, I could so visualize the story line with the actual characters and see this happening. I hope that you update again soon, I am putting you on the fave list and subscribing to you. Thanks for sharing!

Corina

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Every move you make

AHHHHH, I hate cliffies...please update soon. I was scooting closer and closer to the edge of my chair and DENIED. It was an intense chapter...although I'm starting to wonder if Bella has some kind of bone deficiency, she breaks way too easily. :P j/j.

Thanks for sharing, hope to read from you soon!

Corina

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really like this story! I'm all caught up and wishing for another update. I so want to know whats going on...love it!!

Great job,

Thanks for sharing...

Me

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh how I love this story, it's awesome to imagine being in that girls shoes! The secrecy sucks butt, but I'm sure it's a "it is what it is" situation. I was so happy to see an update...thanks!! Hope you find the time to update again soon!

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens when bad girl Bella is forced to attend church when her newly saved mother forces her to go? What happens when the handsome Youth Pastor, Edward, catches Bella's eye? She puts into effect Operation Seduce Mr. Innocent. Will Edward fall from grace or will Bella be his saving Grace?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143297 Read Count: 48613
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 13 May 2010
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Outtake 2 Home

Aww, I know exactly how she feels in this chapter. My husband is a fireman and works at two departments, he'd be gone for days and while I had our newborn I was ready to pull my hair out a few times! Glad Jasper was able to get to her and help. I remember saying a few times that I now understood why some animals eat their young! Ha ha...Great chapter...thanks for sharing. I thought this story was over, it was awesome to see an update.

:)

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ok, I hate cliffies but I understand. I am seriously wondering "what the hell" but I'm sure you'll remedy that soon. Thanks for sharing...great chapter...loved the part where Esme called Edward "emo"...ha ha!

till next time...

:)

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm really hooked on this story, I read all seven chapters today...I hope that you can update soon. Its really well written and I love the story line. Thanks so much for sharing!

Corina

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow! That was hawt! Personally, I'm a chicken shit when it comes to that...but you make me wonder?? Of course...I'm NOT married to Edward and I may be wrong but I think that has A LOT to do with it! Ha ha...shh, don't tell my husband that...he'll get all pissy! Great chapter, I love this story...I'm so glad that I found it...I'm hooked!!

Hope you can update soon, and I'd love a teaser! :)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!! I made a thread over at Twilighted for the story, it has a teaser for the next chapter! Come say hello! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9789

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMG, reading about my worst fear is so scary. I won't kill you...but I hope this gets fixed soon....how sad! Great chapter, it was awesome that you were able to update so fast...I thought I was seeing things!

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

tc

Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204605
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

:) This is a "aww" chapter if I ever read one. Sweet. Hope all is getting better with your family. Can't wait for another update. Happy Holidays.

Corina



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Great chapter...thanks for sharing. :)

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Whoa...what an ending. Dayum!

Dont live in regret by DLIR Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

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Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?  

E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 33801
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Happy Valentines Day

Why do I get the feeling that this is the ride up the roller coaster and it's going to go crashing down when she realizes that he "broke up" with her and that's why she was chasing him? Will she be reasonable and understand why he did it? Will she flip out at Charlie for the threat that led to Edward being Doucheward and breaking up with her to begin with? So many questions, I just have a feeling drama is on the horizon...blah. I'm digging that the two of them are back together and she is remembering some of their lives together. I'm just waiting for the bottom to fall out. :(



Author's Response:

awwwww i dont want u to be upset...xoxo.....Bella will learn what happened but i promise u the worst of the story already happened when she was in coma xoxoxooxoxox

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 144897
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Hi,

Great chapter...it was very detailed and I liked getting the POV's from other characters. The whole discussion on BJs cracked me up...that was hilarious. I really found the guide calling Alice a boy effing funny too...that's a burn!

As for my opinion on Esme, it sounds like she really isn't Carlisle's mate after all..I wonder who she should be with? Hmm? Only time will tell...

Thanks for sharing...

Corina



Author's Response:

Poor Alice--she wasn't blessed with "assets" like the other women in the family.

There's a ton going on with Esme.  We'll delve a bit more into her next chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

This was an awesome chapter. There was SO much going on, I don't even know where to start in this review. I am satisfied with the way that Jasper removed his head from his ass and realized what he and the others were doing to everyone. As for the Major coming out to play after the fight with Bella and Amber, that was border line hawt and freaky. How weird. I think Bella handled it as best as she could, and despite not know what the next move was going to be, she went with it knowing that Jasper was in there too. As for Jasper going all emo when he realized that the real Major and Bella had met, at least he didn't get jealous that "someone" else had marked Bella, does Jasper even remember what he does when he slips into the mind set? Is it like split personality? I think Amber is a going to be a good double agent, she's seems easily gullible, just wondering if that newborn that Maria has can erase that bond Chelsea created and cause Amber to fold and dish the dirt on Jasper? I don't see why Chelsea is freaking out, if there is a newborn that can neutralize powers, can't she sneak up on this mofo and break their bond with Maria and create another with Jasper? Hmm?



Author's Response:

Thanks to Sushmita and Esme's efforts, Jasper finally realized that listening to your mate goes a long way.  Sush also forced Bella to at least talk to Jasper.  I think it's important to note that in no way is Bella placing all of the blame on Jasper.  She understands that she is partly to blame for their situation, however most of the blame falls on Jasper's shoulders for shunning Bella's and the rest of the family's opinions and for putting too much stock in Alice and Peter's visions.  Bella didn't instantly forgive Jasper either, it took him a month after their initial talk until she allowed him to have any physical contact with her.  This time, they worked on it slowly through daily conversations which didn't end with them in bed together.  
 
Amber's arrival was significant in two ways.  First, it proved that Bella is capable of handling herself.  No, she absolutely should not have alerted anyone because, as she pointed out, it would have placed her in danger.  Two, it brought the Major to surface.  Bella has never met him and her reaction to him was exactly what Jasper's dominant personality needed.  The Major is not exactly an emotionally secure creature, he's wrought with insecurities and Jasper knew this.  That's why he suppressed him for so long in front of Bella.  Bella, on the other hand, instantly understood that both Jasper and the Major had to cohesively work as one in order for his soul to be able to conquer all demons so that they can stay alive when the time comes to face Maria.  Remember how Bella mentioned that, in the past, everyone had told her that she should fear the Major?  Bella refused to cower to him and that, in itself, explains why she alone is capable of being the Major's mate.  She is mentally and emotionally stronger than he is.

Also, with Amber's arrival, you were able to witness just how significant Chelsea's power is.  She was able to turn Amber's loyalties with a snap of her fingers.  She is truly a vampire to be feared.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We draw closer to the battle next chapter and Vicky runs into some trouble.  XOXO

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

OMG! I hate cliffies...this was a good chapter, it really moved things along. I'm going to be sitting here wondering what happened when I should be focusing on my finals...lol. Ok, well I seriously hope that you can update again soon...even just a teaser that will squash the uncertainty of what Peter was talking about..or rather screaming about. Oh, I'd also like to thank you for the awesome response, I've never had an author take the time to respond to a review in such detail, I appreciate it!

Take care and hope to read from you again soon!

Corina



Author's Response:

Hi Corina,

After a bit of persuading from Vicky and Chelsea, Violetta Fisher gave away an important bit of information to our group of vampires--Maria's location.  Now Violetta wasn't much of a problem, but Jeanine Ratson proved to be trouble for Vicky.  Poor thing.  What Jeanine Ratson did accomplish was to prove Bella's prowess as an efficient fighter.  

Rex and his breakdown led to Tony persuading Jasper that a short furlough was necessary.  It's a good thing that they all took a break because it helped to clear their frazzled minds.  It also led Bella to unearth an extremely important tidbit of information regarding Maria--she's been playing them all along.  Jasper and his crew have realized that they've made a massive strategic error.  Did this realization come too late, though?

Also with Rex's breakdown, did you notice how accepting Tanya is about Rex's close bond with Bella?  She understands, much more than Jasper, that the two of them need each other and that there's nothing lascivious going on between the two of them.  Fortunately, I think Bella finally got through to Jasper by comparing her bond with Rex to Jasper's bond with Vicky.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Rex and Bella visit Boston next.  XOXO

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Wow, very sorry to hear how you were affected by the hurricane. Glad that your home and loved ones are all well. I was shocked by how this story ended. I really enjoyed it and you did a great job writing it. I look forward to more writing from you. :)

Take care and thanks for sharing with us all...

Losing It by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After years of saving herself for that one special guy only to have him turn her down, Bella is on a mission to lose her virginity. Can the lucky guy she chooses hang on to her, or will he lose everything in her game?

High School Drama
E/B

Banner by MDealsWithIt and Blinkie by Angedelaube


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37171 Read Count: 39751
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 **Misconceptions**

Wow, Edward handled that rather well I think. This was a good chapter, I liked the way Bella realized that James was a shit head and that Edward was more than a convenient booty call..I hope things work out. :) I'm going to go tweet now..I'm more of a facebook person, but if you ever give snippets on upcoming chapters...I'll follow you and be all :) I love this story. Thanks for sharing.

 

Summary:

Bella has always lived in the shadow of her twin brother, Edward. But on a graduation trip with their friends to a secluded cabin, she starts to develop feelings for his roommate Jasper. How long can they explore their feelings while keeping Edward in the dark? Non-canon pairing.

 

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Banner featuring pictures of the cosplay group, The Olympic Coven, used with permission. Photo credit for Rose and Emmett photo to @andywryly

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25705 Read Count: 13721
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aww, I love this story. I'm all about Jasper as a cowboy...thanks so much for sharing your characters with us. 

Corina

Summary:

Left alone to wait, Bella is a little frustrated, a lot bored, and finds herself reading one of those heaving bosom bodice ripper romances. Jasper conveniently wanders into the room and maybe Bella isn't so bored any more. Lemons. Jasper/Bella


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8850 Read Count: 2001
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 28 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bodice Ripper Oh Mercy

I read this a long time ago and never realized it was yours. I just re-read it.. I love this one shot too! And yet another that you can continue if you ever feel the urge...I'm just throwing that out there. LOL...

Thanks again..I really love your writing..the inner monologues are the best... ;)

 

 



Author's Response:

Bodice Ripper Oh Mercy

Thank you so much! Glad you have enjoyed them.

Thank you for reviewing, too!

Rick

I Live by GeezerWench Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 94]
Summary:

 

Rebelling against Edward's crushing protectiveness, Bella raced for La Push. Goal in sight, she crashed, shattering her truck and her body. Jasper, discovering Bella gravely injured and bleeding profusely, pulled her from the wreckage. Fighting the lust for her blood was only the first battle. Violence, language, adult themes. Jasper/Bella

Disclaimer: Derivative work. I make no money.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Alice/None, Bella/Jasper, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Peter/Charlotte
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 374713 Read Count: 56488
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2013 Updated: 06 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 49: I Train

Hey there. It took me a while but I am all caught up and still very much digging this story and your characters. I was reading every chance I had. So glad this was a rec! Thanks for sharing. Can't wait for more chapters. 



Author's Response:

ch 49, I Train

Thank you so much. Glad you caught up!

Now you get the teaser. LOL

~Rick~

 

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Here's a little bit of:

 

Chapter 50, I Find

 

Jasper's POV

 

"Major, you're gonna have company."

 

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Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: I Flee

OMG...I'm hooked! I love Jasper in all varities. You've done a great job incorporating the original parts of the story into your own version. 

I'm glad I saw the rec for this on FB. I'm stoked to keep going. 

thanks for sharing...

~Corina



Author's Response:

I Live, ch 1

Chapter 1 and you're hooked already? Wow. Thanks! I sure hope you like the rest of it.

A recommendation on FB? Facebook? That's a nice thing!

Thank YOU for taking time to read and write a review.

Rick

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: I Chase

Ahhh...she's finally awake. I kind of liked the slow build up to her awakening. I was surprised that she didn't remember everyone, at that rate it seems that she may be forgetting her family as well? I'm going to keep on reading. I really like the story. The inner mono is hilarous! ;) Thanks for the reply as well. Yes, I saw a rec for this on facebook. I love all versions of Jasper! I saw Jackson play twice in Chicago with his former band...they were sweet. I like reading versions in which Jasper is described as tall and broad because the real version is SO not the case. ;) LOL...off to the next chapter. 

Corina



Author's Response:

I Live: Ch 13 I Chase

She remembers some things little by little as she connects memories.

 

"I like reading versions in which Jasper is described as tall and broad because the real version is SO not the case."

LOL I've heard that from others who have seen him in person. I've never seen him. Why burst the bubble? My Jasper follows along with canon Jasper. About 6'3", muscular, but not muscle-bound. Not completely "ripped", though defined.

My former boss had a nice build that he actually complained about. He had very wide shoulders and slim hips, but he reminded me of my little (younger) brother. His complaint was he couldn't buy suits for church (he was a deacon at the time). He had to buy separate jacket and pants because he was two different sizes.

That's how I see Jasper.

I love Jasper. He's a cowboy AND a soldier. *whew* I like most versions of him except wimpy-whiny ones

 

Thanks for taking time to review!

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 50: I Discover

I finally got to read this update. Love it. Thanks so much. I can't wait for the next one to see what is going to happen with these guys. Something tells me that harem plan is going to go to crap when the other two get back. Yikes. 



Author's Response:

I Live, Ch 50

Thanks, Sweetie. I'm still working on chapter 51. Dialog—it's kicking my butt. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Rick

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From about page 3, here's a bit of:

 

Chapter 51, I Talk (maybe. Might change that title.)

 

Jasper's POV

 

It was gratifying to see that Bella's second bite was causing him pain, though I wasn't thrilled about her getting more venom into him.

 

Peter sent me a shot of curiosity, and I knew he wanted to ask his own question. He crouched down beside Bella, and his eyes met mine. "It's clear around us," he said quietly.

 

I gave him a short nod and dipped my head to catch Bella's eye. "Bella."

 

She looked at me from the corner of her eye and growled, not wanting to let go.

 

"Ahhhh, newborns. Always so ... contumacious." Demetri murmured.

 

Perversely, he seemed delighted.

 

Bella yanked her teeth from Demetri's arm, swiped the venom from her mouth, and smeared it on the leg that was still kneeling on his stomach. "What?"

 

Peter's hard gaze caught Bella's. "Pigheaded and stubborn, Bubba."

 

She took in a breath to make some retort, thought better of it, and snapped her mouth shut.  

 

 

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Peaches by GeezerWench Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

New-kid-in-school Bella is on a delicate, yet highly dangerous, mission. A mission to break and seduce one of the members of the Cullen-Collective - those pretty, pale, (possibly extraterrestrial) rich kids at Forks High. Her target? The mysteriously silent, stone-faced, long-tall-and-lickable, Mr. Crankypants - AKA Jasper Hale. AU, language, adult situations. 1st Pl Best One Shot in the 2014 Non-Canon Awards!

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15331 Read Count: 1728
[Report This] Published: 29 Jul 2013 Updated: 29 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Peaches

Wow! This was the best one shot I've read in a long time...I wish it went further...there is so much potential for a multi chapter story here...I'm full of questions!! But fear not, my pervy mind is great at filling me blanks..although your mind is better at it...if you ever get bored..by all means please add to this one! 

Thanks so much for sharing! 

Cori



Author's Response:

Peaches

Um, well, they go off and live happily ever after, right?

I had fun with this one, but wouldn't know where I would take it.

Thanks! thanks for reaing and writing a review! And five coffee cups—wow!

Rick

My Pereche by ggf83 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Past Featured Story

pereche

 

Since the days when the Romanian Coven ruled the vampire world, Sufletul Pereche was a common vampire myth -- a vampire fairy tale.

When Jasper's own Pereche moves to Forks, he is torn. He already has a mate he loves, but how can you stay away from the other half of your soul?

How can he give up Alice to be with Bella, and how can he protect Bella from his brother who thirsts for her blood?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59848 Read Count: 20727
[Report This] Published: 11 Aug 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ahhhh! Another well placed cliffie...oh how I love those. ;) I'm trying to figure out what has her panties in a bunch? Was it the actual fighting or the fact that Edweird was trying to eat her? I guess I just thought she'd be more "OMG, you're my hero!" instead of  all emo in the fetal position..but I guess that will come next. Thanks for these quick updates...moving right along. Great story! 

~Corina



Author's Response:

Hehe. Maybe it's just me putting myself into the character, but Bella is very introverted and I know that my reaction to something traumatic would be to turn in on myself and try to work things out in my head. No real mystery with her quietness, really. SHe's just overwhelmed. :)

No cliffie in the next chapter! :) :)

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ahhh...you know I was a greedy whore and went to FF to read this story in completion...I LOVED IT. Thanks so much for sharing...I'm glad that I stumbled upon this gem...it would be awesome if you continued it...(cough, cough, wink, wink) Love your style of writing...and your vision of Jasper...I puffy heart him. ;) 

Corina



Author's Response:

Haha. I figured you might do that :)

Yeah.... while I'm not keeping this story going (except for a potential one-shot because I realised something I missed out), I'm keeping the characters alive with the companion fics -- My Faith in Fate, which is already posted on ffn, and My Morality, which I'll be posting in a few months (want to get a bit ahead so I don't leave people waiting too long). Different relationships, but part of the same world....

-- Louise

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awww! What a sweet ending. It was nice that she didn't spazz out when she found out the truth, but I suppose she may of been coming up with some other options like the Bella in the movie had considered super powers or radio-active spiders. lol. Thanks once again for the speedy update. Looking forward to another update soon..you're spoiling me...wish all authors cranked them out daily. Do you have this posted somewhere else complete? Just wondering...

~Corina



Author's Response:

I don't think that even Bella knows exactly why she is so accepting of what Jasper is -- it has a lot to do with their unusual bond.

Yup -- the whole fic is posted on fanfiction.net. Haha -- yeah, you have it a lot better than those people did. They had to wait months between updates :) :)

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awww, I really love this story. Its both sad and hopeful. I'm for sure adding this to my favorites, and I hope that you can update again soon. Thank you so much for sharing. 

Corina



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It makes all the hard work so worth it when I see people enjoying the story. Hopefully when things change and get a bit more action-y you'll still stick with me! :)

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Gah!! Cliffies are the worst! Thanks for responding to my last review. I felt so special :) super cute chapter...how often do you update? 



Author's Response:

Haha. If you don't like cliffies, then you might not like the next couple of chapters :P Although I think of the 24 chaps, there are about ten cliffies or something (I haven't actually counted). I'm trying to update once a day, but that isn't always happening -- sometimes it's been two days.

I am SO happy that you're enjoying the fic :)

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Uh oh! It seems that those explanations are coming up soon. Poor jasper - so much to deal with. Great chapter. Thanks for the fast updates. This is like a movie on pause. Thanks for sharing. 



Author's Response:

Yup, explanations of a sort are close! Bella's a smart girl, after all! :)

Since everything is all written, it's just RL that keeps me from posting chapters (seriously -- my BF is getting annoyed because I'm never home. Like he can talk).

Thank you SOO much for the review (and the rating!). I get so excited when I see them come through!

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aww...what a sweet chapter. Glad to read that Bella isn't freaked out. "I know what you are" and all that...or that she isn't being a biotch for him not telling her straight out. I can so picture that conversation in my head and his uber cute face making those facial expressions...too much yum in my head when I think of Jasper. 

I skipped a chapter because I just read them in succession...I couldn't take the time to stop!! I loved them both....fo'sho

 



Author's Response:

:) Thanks so much! :) I've always liked that chapter, too. One of my favourites. Well.... not quite as much as I love chapter 11. And chapter 21. :) :)

I might post another chapter sometime tonight (it's middle of the afternoon here right now). We'll see how it goes.... :)

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh boy! So, I "should" be reading these tantilizing chapters for my "Employee Development" class (snore), but I cannot help it. These chapters of yours are good...wish I was getting  graded on this story! I liked this chapter too, it was sweet with the whole kissy kissy deal...and then you dropped that Edweird bomb...hoping Jasper gets there in time...yikes. 

 



Author's Response:

I fully agree -- reading fic is much more interesting than work stuff! :) I want to clap excitedly like a little kid every time I re-read the kissing bit :)