Reviews by Natsar
Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143214
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Man Bella sure is harsh with him. I know Edward was a complete ass in the beginning but even when he is really trying Bella  won't cut him any slack. Strange behavior for someone when they have said they forgive a person...

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Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Thanks so much for the update! I was beginning to think you were done...lol :~)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thanks for the update! :~)

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Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love your chapters but do wish they were a little longer. It seems just when they are getting good, they end. So each chapter makes very little progress in the story. They may be how you intend it to be. I am not saying this is good or bad, just that I prefer to have a little more progress. But I can always just wait and read 2-3 chapters at once. It is a very good story so far. Thanks for the update! :~)

Slither by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

    

Banner by the wonderful Mehek18. Check her other amazing banners on Mehek18.tumblr.com

OOC. AH. An outcast who had everything, but eventually lost the one thing that was truly important to him. She was back and her presence would turn his world upside down again. 'He needed her but she left him.' Mature content. E/B    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46224 Read Count: 8034
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2011 Updated: 01 Mar 2012
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Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

I am guessing she saw him cheating on her but???



Author's Response:

Something like that. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. ;)

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Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Wake up to the truth

Still not sure why Edward thought it was a good idea to dry hump Tayna...Then he actually got pissed at Bella because she humiliated him??? What an ass!!! LOL!



Author's Response:

If you read the chapter closely, T did the dry humping not E. He just kissed T...but still that doesn't excuse his behavior.

He is one stupid asshole, that's for sure.

Thanks. ;)

The Breakers by les16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 308]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great start - going to check out the blog.

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Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Good Grief! OK, I am going to trust you til next week...lol! But seriously, Bella is a freaking basket case, and not a very nice one at that. I believe you that she will get better and quit making Edward feel like he has something contagious...lol! :~)

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Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Yikes! Not sure what is up with Edward showing up in the pouring rain... Thanks for the update! :~)

Summary:

 

 

Banner by lovely and talented  Mehek18!

Checkout her awesome work: Mehek18.tumblr.com -

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Summary: 33 yr old billionaire tycoon, Edward Cullen is engaged to his childhood sweetheart and Chicago´s cutthroat DA, Isabella Swan; it would appear they were the perfect power couple, but everyone has secrets, some a little darker than others.  Enter 17 yr old Jasper Whitlock, recently orphaned and emotionally troubled he leaves his home in Texas and moves in with his cousin Rosalie and her husband Emmett McCarty, he too has a few skeletons in his closet.  As a favor to his friends; Edward hires Jasper to be his yard boy for the summer. What happens when just after two weeks more than just the hedges are being trimmed at the Cullen/Swan Esate?  And just how does DA Swan fit into all of this? Poly/Slash/Kink, OOC, E/B, E/J, E/BJ

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45044 Read Count: 36400
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
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Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

Awesome story so far! Can't wait to see where this goes! Totally LOVE the blog! Thanks for the quick update and all the hard work on the blog... :~)



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Two´s Company... Three´s So Much Better...

Please, by all means continue... I am curious as too Bella's role in Edward's life. Are they married? In a relationship? Is Bella older than Edward?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  Be sure to check out the blog for teasers and picspiration!

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Krazi

xoxo


Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 It´s Not Easy... Being Me...

Yes! Finally, an update! Thanks! :~)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  Be sure to check out the blog for teasers and picspiration!  Chapter three's teaser has already been posted!

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Krazi

xoxo

Summary:

Four year old Isabella Swan has recently moved to America from Australia for her father's job. It is here where she encounters the one boy who will never let her get away.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 471 Read Count: 1438
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2011 Updated: 04 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Edward's Girl

Awe. I think it is sweet. Thanks for the update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

She waited with bated breath for each post card she would receive.  Each month it would come from a different locale.  Each time she would hope that it would bring her news that he was headed back to her and to all of the dreams that he sold her.

Banner made by the amazing Beautiful Liar

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19313 Read Count: 2552
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

Thinking Bella is a little too upset about him having a different job. I thought he was going to confess to having a wife and kids in London...lol!

Author's Response:

LOL - yeah, no wife or kids in London.  I'm not much for writing them cheating on one another.  There is a little more to his story, but you'll have to wait until Part 3 for all of that.  LOL   I hope to have it posted in the next week or so.  Thanks so much for taking the time to review.  I really appreciate it.

Here's the teaser I promised.

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The last two months had been a tornado of unexpected events.  Events that had completely changed my future.  Gone was the naïve shy girl from northwestern Washington, instead a confident and on my way to being worldly woman sprang in to take her place.  I wasn’t sure where this new persona had been hiding, but I sensed that she’d been inside me all along, just waiting for the right moment to break free of the chains that I had shackled myself to.  

When I got a call from Alice a week after Edward had broken my heart into smithereens, I thought it was a joke.  She dialed into my office line direct, a number I’d never given Edward.  When she told me who she was, I almost hung up on her thinking she was calling to make excuses for her brother.  Instead she promised not to even breathe his name until I gave her permission.  And as of yet, I never had.

We’d had lunch later that week and the bomb that fell out of her mouth, sent my world spinning off axis and the shrapnel flying into every aspect of my life. 

 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Part 3 - Conclusion

Wow! I will have to go back and read the end of this chapter later after I have had time to calm down. Bella is such a fucking bitch! I hope her pride and attitude keep her warm at night...lol! Hope the end of this chapter is better than the beginning...



Author's Response:

Well, I hope you've read the end by now???   Sorry you didn't like the beginning.  Thanks for taking the time to leave me your thoughts though.  I do appreciate it.

 

Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
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Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Evidence

Oh, great! So no one knows about Jessica's ex-boyfriend???

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77 Tyler

Lee needs his ass fired! Starting to think he is working for Victoria and James!

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Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67 Duty

Just hope Jessica doesn't claim Edward did it just to get money from him...

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Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)

This sucks. Guess Edward should have told her how he felt instead of making comments like, "This is why I love New York."



Author's Response:

True, so true.  He should have told her how he felt!

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Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Run (L)

OMG! Bella is such a fool! Edward was faithful to her for 4yrs. Man, she really fucked up.



Author's Response:

That's what happens when people don't jus talk to each other!  Thanks for leaving a review!

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Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Shopping

I would shoot him too...lol!

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Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53 Blackmail

Seriously! Eddie boy needs to STOP all this PDA with his Angie girl cause it is REALLY NOT helping his case with Jessica in any way!!! Even if Bella is that stupid, him kissing on, hugging, and having coffee dates with another girl he works with is not a smart move when he already has one girl screaming about sexual harrassment... Can he just not keep his loving focused on Bella? Is it necessary for him to be kissing and hugging fellow female employees??? I am guessing his parents would have a problem with this. And his wife should but we all know how she is...



Author's Response:

Good point, but they are just being friends . . . it will work out, you'll see soon . . .

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Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 No Doubt

Yes! Don't we all!!! LOL! :~)

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Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 Bonus

WOW! That was a totally fun morning activity...lol! Thanks for the update! :~)



Author's Response:

It certainaly seemed as though Edward was blown away by it! lol

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78 Toy

With days like that, I find it better to just laugh... Some might think I have gone over the edge and lost it but it is always better than the alternative of crying or screaming...lol! Thanks for the update! ;~)

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

A Kingdom Reborn Banner 1

Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102064
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Resolving

"I wish you would not call Lady Lauren my whore's daughter. It makes it seem wrong that I had ever considered her in the first place."

LOL! I love how Jasper put things in perspective for the great king...



Author's Response:

Glad that gave you a laugh! Sir Jasper definitely helps clear King Edward's fogged up and rose-tinted vision and that will definitely be important in later chapters to come ;) Thank you for reviewing!
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Coercing

WOW~ My youngest daughter would love to live in either Ireland or Scottland. We live in Oklahoma right now and hate it....Lucky for us, we do get to do some traveling but have not made it to where you live yet. Thanks for the update and I wish you well with university. :~)



Author's Response:

Scotland is a lovely place and I live in Northern Ireland so I don't really see the appeal of visiting it but lots of people love it. Thank you for the well wishes. I'm sorry you'll have to wait for the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427989
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 **History**

Thanks for the update! Not sure what Charlie's deal is other than being money hungry. ;~)

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Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Expectations

Thanks for the update! Edward's little meltdown made him a bit more human...lol. Would love to hear what Bella is thinking. :~)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31184
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
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Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Connections

Totally loving the 'connection' these two seem to have!

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

I think Bella has a right to be pissed. Seriously, Edward should not have waited 9 months but I also hope that Bella doesn't make everyone at the wedding feel bad. Hope she will realize they belong together and forgive Edward for being stupid. Thanks for the update! :~)

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103462
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
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Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 : Illicit Behavior

I don't get why guys think it is ever to put girls through that than to just confess the feelings they have...dumb boys...lol!

Author's Response:

That they are! Thanks for making me laugh :)

Summary:

Jasper missed his chance in college, but when Bella and Edward's marriage falls apart 15 years later and he helps pick up the pieces, will Jasper finally get the chance at happiness he always longed for? J&B Eventually.  Fair warning, this is major heartfail in the beginning, but will end up with a typical ACW ending.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42200 Read Count: 16464
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2011
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Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Seriously, any person who knows they are being cheated on and still stays with that person, deserves what they get... they are setting themselves up for faliure.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263192
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
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Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches

"It almost felt like I was cheating on, or betraying Edw...his memory." I don't understand this... I thought Tayna was not really pregnant or is he talking about someone else? Loved this chapter. They are making progress it seems. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Well we knew that you all would have some sharp feelings about the behavior of Alice, Rose, and Siobhan.  We were excited to see that a few of you mentioned the seemingly difference in Esme and her attitude.   Have faith in Jasper and Emmett, they will be having words with their wives.  As for Siobhan, I think she has worn out her welcome around the table completely.  So what did you all think of Charlotte?  She will be important in the coming story.  A lot of you are guessing that the witch in the next chapter will be Sue Swan, but I assure you that it is not her.  There is a lot of super exciting chapters coming soon.  We want to tell you all just how much you reading and reviewing our story means to us.  This is the first story for either of us, that is getting this kind of attention.  It is completely amazing to us that we are averaging over 100 reviews per chapter.  We want to be very clear in saying that each and every review you have left for us mean so very much to us.  Thank you for taking time to not only read our story, but to also leave us your thoughts.   Thanks, Nikky (&Kasi)

Teaser for Chapter 14: Subject to changes, during Beta Process.

She looks perplexed. “Edward, aren’t you expected to be at the college; I mean, I thought you have classes today?”

I chuckle.  “Yes I do, but I got this morning off.  I am using some of my vacation time.  I would like to take you to see Charlotte today.  She is the one that sells the girl stuff; remember I told you I would take you to see her?  She was sitting on my right at the ball.”  Bella nods her head at my explanation, but I see she is biting her lip again.  I know she is worried, so I do my best to reassure her.  “I will be there with you. I am not going to leave you, I promise.”  Bella nods again as we begin walking to the bus stop.  We take the bus and arrive at Charlotte’s store a little after half past nine.  Charlotte had texted me earlier and asked that we enter through the back entrance.  She was going to leave it open for us, as she had the front locked up so that no unexpected customers arrived.  I hold onto Bella’s hand as we walk thought the door. 

Charlotte sees us as soon as we enter; she smiles and makes her way toward us.  “Edward, Isabella; come on in.  I already have a bunch of stuff laid out for you.  I have done this for a few years, so I am pretty good at guessing sizes.”  I rub Bella’s hand and smile at Charlotte’s obvious excitement.  “Isabella, I am so sorry, sometimes my mouth runs away with me.  It’s very nice to meet you.  My name is Charlotte, but you can call me Chas; all my friends do.”  Charlotte gives Bella a big smile, but keeps her distance from Bella for now.

“It is nice to meet you. I am Isabella, but you can call me Bella.”  I squeeze Bella’s hand, trying hard not to jump for joy.  This is the first time that she has openly asked someone, apart from me, to call her Bella. 

Charlotte smiles at her.  “Well, I was thinking that this stuff would be perfect for you.”  I look at the collection of bras and panties that Charlotte has picked out.  They are mostly plain white ones.  There are some with lace, but none them are overly sexy like the stuff that was in Alice’s bag.  I am both relieved and somewhat disappointed about that.  “Come with me, Bella, so I can take your measurements to ensure that we will have the correct size.” 

Bella looks at me and I nod my head at her.  “Bella…” I clasp her face between my hands.  “Baby, I’ll be right here. I will not leave you.” Bella whispers a low thank you, and strokes my hand before giving it a squeeze at the end.  I watch as she walks away with Charlotte.  

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Legal Side of Things

So sad that Tayna kept his son from him. Maybe he and Bella will have a baby together. It will never replace the son he lost but I think he should get to experience going through the pregnancy and birth of his own child. Thanks for the update! :~)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Each week I read the reviews for like the first 3-4 hours to see what kind of questions you all want answers to, and this time there are hardly any questions at all. 

So I thought we could touch base on some comments.  We have gotten a lot of Great chapter, sad ending, but it was needed...stuff (and it was needed).  ‘Edward had to allow the pain to flow out instead if keeping it locked inside of him.’

We have had a few diabolical people suggest that Edward would maybe recognize Sue and Charlie Swan, or Harry Clearwater.  ‘This is an interesting theory.’

A lot of you would love to lynch Sue.  ‘But first she has to make an appearance.’ 

Some of you have noted that you for see Gina as being a problem.  ‘Ummm…YEAH!’

A few have wondered if Tanya and little Edward are in fact dead and buried.  ‘In the graves in Port Angeles are in fact the bodies of Tanya Denali, and her son known to all as Edward Anthony Masen Jr.’

The comments people have made on the complexity of our characters though is what I want to touch on the most.  The fact that we have made the characters so out of character in most cases is what I am enjoying so much.  I personally love Alice in the books, I think she is WAY underplayed in the movies.  I love Alice she is one of my favorite characters, but to make her this unlikeable character is hard, yet I think it really gives so much to this storyline.  Alice will learn some very valuable lessons in this story and that old saying a leopard can’t change his spots, does not apply to Ali-cats. 

I like Rose and if I (Kasi) had to compare myself to a character from Twilight that I am most like it would be her.  I am not a royal bi*ch, but I am pretty outspoken and tend to say exactly what is on my mind, and that is how I see Rose in the books and movies.  The Rose in this story though goes above and beyond the snippy, and stuck in her ways bitchy Rose from the books or movies.  Our Rose is a downright spoiled rotten mean girl, who will never grow up because she wants to remain that rich girl who has everyone surrounding themselves in her light to better their standings.  Edward could have married the high class daughter of some billionaire tycoon, and Rose would have issue unless she bowed down to Rose. 

Jasper in this story is one of the most in character, characters we have.  Very smart and laid back, goes with the flow and yet is always there to help calm matters that need attention. 

Emmett, God I love Emmett.  He is so fun loving and wild, but he is so very smart and he can step up and show it when the time is called on him to do so.  You will be seeing a lot more of this intellectual and loving Emmett as the story progresses. 

I hope that you have enjoyed this little insight we have shared with you this week.  Feel free to join us on Facebook, where there are tons of discussions and theories shared daily.  Just search for TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will pop up.  Thanks everyone for making us feel so great, we are proud to bring this story to you and so happy you are enjoying it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Nikky).

 

Chapter 20: Snow Storms Teaser...Subject to changes during beta process.

Emmett has filed papers with the court, getting Bella temporary custody for Seth and Leah.  Angela, Ben’s wife, who is a social worker, is making case notes on Bella’s behalf.  She is also talking to each of the kids, and doing a home study to make sure that they are having all of their needs met. 

It was not an easy task to get Bella to agree to all of this, but when Emmett explained that if her stepmom came back, she could take Seth and Leah and Bella might never see them again. He also explained that because Bella was now of age, she could keep it from happening by letting us help her.

I didn’t like scaring her, but it worked.  She thinks that if her mother gets them, she would not allow her to see them anymore.  She is afraid that Sue would then leave them with someone else, and they would end up getting hurt.  She said she would rather be there for them to keep them safe, so she finally agreed to sign the proper paperwork.  We all told her there was no way that she would lose the kids. 

Angela sat her down and explained to her that with her support system, it would be in Seth and Leah’s best interest to become their legal guardian.  It took us all a while to convince her that, since she was now a legal adult, and she had been taking such great care of them, that the court would be on her side.  Carlisle, Rev. Weber, Jasper, Peter, Marcus, Samantha - who is another worker at Jasper and Peter’s office, Chas, Esme, Aro, Zafrina, and myself, were finally able to convince her.  So far, quite a few people from the church and Sunday school program have written out statements, all in Bella’s favor.  Aro and Zafrina have documented files that they have kept; all of which have been copied and sent to Emmett.  Aro has documentation of all of the work she has done over the years.  With Aro’s help, and Bella’s social security number, I have paid all of her back Social Security taxes, so she has documented earned income. Bella is also now a real employee of the college. She is no longer paid under the table. 

Because Bella has had no education, we have set up a verbal IQ test for her to take. Since she is so smart in mathematics alone, I know her scores will be quite high.  Once she can fully read, we are going to have her take the GED test and get her a diploma.  Angela said that because the kids are in school, her inability to read will not be held against her.  Angela was also quick to point out, that with the substantial support system that Bella has, DCFS would recommend that the children be placed with her at this point anyway. 

Emmett says that at this point, he is ninety-nine point nine percent certain that Bella will be granted full legal guardianship of Seth and Leah in court. Until the hearing, there is a temporary order of guardianship filed, and unless they take Bella to court, neither Sue nor Harry can come in and take the kids away from her.  The case has been booked for the second week in February, which gives us eight weeks to prepare.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Confessions

Thank God Edward pulled it out! I seriously just wanted to beat him!



Author's Response:

WOW...the responses are so awesome that Nikky and I are both giddy.  There haven’t been many questions asked in the first 60 reviews, so I am going to answer a few non questions I noticed.  Bella was never kidnapped by Sue and Charlie.  Charlie Swan is Bella’s biological father, and Bella was sent to live with him after her mother died of cancer.  Aro honestly never knew of Bella’s real age, he had suspicions that she was not raised correctly and was acting younger than the 18 he thought her to be, because of the inept social skills.  Zafrina did not know either, but again had those same social skill thoughts that her son had.  We in no way were bashing DCFS or DHS or any other social workers, by saying that the kids would be taken by the state.  If anyone had turned Sue in for abandoning the kids the almost 6 years ago now she has been gone, the kids would have become wards of the state, because at 13 no state official or judge would have deemed Bella capable of fully caring for 2 yr old twins alone.  Just want to say that we both believe that it takes a special kind of person to be a social worker, and we both give those of you who are in the field of social work a round of applause because the things you have to see and or deal with can’t always be fun.  I have to say that the wonderful response to this story is more than either Nikky or myself could have hoped for, and we owe that all to you the readers.  THANK YOU!  If there is any questions or discussions you would like to have or read about past discussions, feel free to join us at TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction on Facebook.  Kasi (& Nikky)

Teaser for Chapter 19: The Legal Side of Things.  Subjected to changes during beta process.

I dropped Bella of at Seth and Leah’s school. Before leaving her, I told her I would pick her up from the college when she got off.  It was so fucking hard to leave her; I just wanted to stay with her forever.  I knew the minute she was away from me, my old doubts would come back.  I knew that I had to talk with Jasper about her upbringing.  It’s that thought that makes me leave, even though I want to wait with her, take them home and stay with them. I am really at a loss for what I should do.  What can I do?  What do I do?  How do I help her?  How can someone so pure and good, come from people so evil?  The questions are killing me, but I know one thing for certain: if that bitch doesn’t stay the fuck away on her own, I will make her.  That sorry excuse of a parent will never get her hands on my Bella, Seth, or Leah again.  I will protect them with my very last breath, and deplete every cent I have, if need be.

I sit at my piano and just start playing.  I let the music guide me, keeping Bella in my thoughts as a play.  I let out all the feelings I have been denying myself. I haven’t been at it long before I find myself playing ‘Angel Eyes’ by The Jeff Healey Band, and I begin to sing along with my playing.

Girl, you're looking, fine tonight,

and every guy has got you in his sights.

What you're doing, with a clown like me,

is surely one of life's little, mysteries

 

So tonight I'll ask the stars above,

"How did I ever win your love?"

What did I do?

What did I say,

to turn your angel eyes my way?

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thoughts... I really hope Edward can help Bella. I don't want to ever be in her place. Thanks for the update! :~)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Guess Edward is going to have to wait for Bella to grow up and at like an adult before he can actually try to date/court her as an equal. Right now, she is still acting too much like a child. Thanks for the update. Even if it is soooo frustrating... but I am sure it would be even more so to be Edward. LOL!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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While on a much needed vacation, Bella discovers that it's not easy to leave work behind... and that this time, she doesn't really mind.

An endearing tale of trust, growth and love... all because of one special little girl and one little word.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18941 Read Count: 146957
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 20 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

LOL! Lazy much? Oh, it's too hard to think of someone beside myself... Ummm really?

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324474
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

Yes, Edward is a real ass for telling Bella not to come to his office and letting Magpie kiss him without pushing her away. And yes, Bella should not keep letting Mike paw all over her. Hope they can work this out... Thanks for the update!

Unexpected by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

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Edward's life has been a series of possibly wrong choices. What will he do when his life takes an unexpected turn? Can he find true love? Or will he be stuck in his past mistakes?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38965 Read Count: 18461
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 18 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Not really sure how he can blame Tayna for everything when he seems to have a pretty good time fucking Esme. I think he is just upset he got caught. I also don't believe he loves Bella because if he did, he might go through the motions with other women because he was being blackmailed but he wouldn't enjoy it so much... Thanks for the update! :~)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yea! About time! Now if he can just keep it in his pants! Except for Bella of course... Although, I think family holidays will be very strange for awhile...LOL!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Tell her to fuck off! You can't seriously want to have a relationship with Bella and still be a whore....

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153196
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Edward is being such an ass!!! Even if he does just see Bella as a ward, he shouldn't lie to her or invite her out to watch him hang all over some whore in a bar. That is just rude!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Stupid, Stupid boy! For someone soooo smart Edward is not very intellegent...lol!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Poor Edward's probably going to get condoms... LOL! But what did Rose mean by he was going to break Bella's heart soon enough???

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

OK, got to say, you lost me on this chapter. What kind of fucking ass is Edward to be flirting with some blonde in a bar while his new wife is upstairs waiting for him. He doesn't even come close to deserving that sweet girl and I feel sooooo sorry for Bella.

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Fifteen

Awe! Poor Bella. She is really gonna start feeling bad about herself if Edward blows her off to fuck Tayna. I totally understand her, I have a touch of OCD myself. It is a lot worse when you are under stress. I am sure she was very upset thinking she was going to see the freak that kidnapped her. Thanks for updating! :~)

Summary:

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“The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature Daddykink.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162463 Read Count: 135546
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2012 Updated: 15 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome, as always! Can't wait for the update!

Visually Challenged by Velley Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyone in town views Bella as the perfect teenager. She never gets into trouble and always seems to do the right thing. What happens when she starts falling for the towns visually challenged recluse? How will her strict parents react?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51475 Read Count: 24098
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Glad to see Edward finally open up at least a little. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I am reading but have not really formed an opinion yet. Thanks for updating. I am looking forward to reading this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

I plan on updating vey soon and I hope you like what I have in store.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Their voices once sang in harmony, but a misunderstanding pulled them apart. Can two broken hearts be healed and sing a new song? AH M for future lemons. E/B A/J Em/R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51857 Read Count: 32108
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 21 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

That was totally stupid on Edward's part. He had already been encouraging the groupies, then Bella sees that shit. He should have taken the girl to Kate, Rose or Alice if he wanted to be nice. Not been in a locked bus alone with her wearing his shirt. Some men just have no brains.... lol!

Raising Ashlynn by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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thanks to teamalltwilight and le crepuscule for the awesome banners!

 

Bella meets a man who in one night leaves her body humming for more. What should she do when the next time she sees him, he is dropping off his daughter, begging her to keep her. With an odd sense of obligation, a person who never saw herself as a parent—is now moving across country with a child who thinks Bella is her mother.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30699 Read Count: 32027
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Of course I will stick with this story. It sounds great so far. I can't believe you are making us wait a week for an update... :~(  LOL!

Summary:

Edward is an eighteen year old man, who has been blind since the age of ten. This happened in a car accident in which his father was killed and his mother, Esme and his twin sister, Alice had taken care of him since then. They live in Miami, Florida, where Edward and Alice are both enrolling in college as freshmen.

Edward will be going into music and literature, while Alice will be taking business management and fashion design courses, since fashion has been her interest her whole life. Their mother, Esme has been a widow since the accident, but that is about to change when Dr. Carlisle Cullen starts treating Edward.

Bella has lived with her father, Charlie for four years since her mother remarried a man named Phil. She received a scholarship for a university in Miami, so she decided to move back in with her mother.

What will happen when Bella returns to Florida? Will Bella meet Edward? Will they fall in love?

All human story

"You don't have to see the one you love to know that the one."

 

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Link for the blog:  http://theblindsideofloveff.wordpress.com


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69656 Read Count: 17796
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2013 Updated: 21 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday

Excited to read this!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I will update soon! 

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146715
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Accidentally on Purpose

Not sure Edward can blame Aro for being a coward when he is doing the same thing... LOL! He and Bella say Em and Rose won't commit... Seriously?



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Edward doesn't blame Aro for anyhting. He symply realized that Aro waited too long. E and B's relationship will make progress soon. Let's say next chapter will end with a bang ;). See you then.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - Fever

Oh, Good Lord! Bella seriously needs to pull her head out before she loses Edward completely. Yea, like that didn't already happen in real life but you know what I mean. LOL! She is WAY overthinking this. Thanks for the update. ;~)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a review. Bella will have to make a choice: either lose Edward for sure or taking a chance and maybe losing him later. Which do you think she'll choose? See you next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113997
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 13 Part 4

Can we please just kill Tayna off yet? She gives me such a headache... LOL! Thanks for the update! ;~)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

I think Edward will be a bit pissed when he finds out Charlie is in the hospital and Tayna knew all along. Just hope Bella isn't too hurt by him and they can work something out. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 18 Part 8

So glad they are finally getting together! I love it! Thanks for the update! ;~)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99372
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

Don't let the hater get you down. I love this story and can't wait for an update! I really liked seeing Edward's point of view. Hope the next update will be longer... hint, hint. LOL!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  

Guns and Pies by acullengirl40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella a bakery owner in a small mountain town where she grew up has sworn off men as most of the men she comes in contact with every day are tourists, until one day a sexy bearded man walks into her bakery wearing camo. Will he end up being her prince charming or will another summer tourist win her heart.

Edward an Ex Army sharp shooter is sick of his current situation with his demanding vegan girlfriend. He is on the verge of breaking up with the green monster as he likes to call her. Will walking though Bella's bakery door make him see that he needs more sweetness in his life and finaly cut his girlfriend lose or will he keep her around out of fear of being alone

Will these two let their hearts finally decide their path in life or will they both let fear drive their hearts away from what they both need, each other.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44255 Read Count: 20431
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2015 Updated: 09 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Natsar Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 country drives with a hot man

I had to re-read the whole story, it has been too long. Hopefully, the next update will be soon. I totally understand though. Soccer mom, Choir mom and Class mom here, so I get it... LOL!!!

The Faint Of Heart by vmal1992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

 

I awoke in a cold sweat and swallowed hard as all of the different smells in the small room slammed into me. Blood. Fear. Decay. I could hear a buzz saw going off somewhere nearby me cutting into something and catching every now and then. What the hell happened? Last thing I can remember is him telling me-My breath caught in my throat and I felt a prickliness work its way up my spine. I felt my body quaking as I tried to turn my head towards where the buzz saw was coming from. My blood ran cold and tears sprang to my eyes. I should have known better. CANON PAIRINGS, OOC, THIS STORY IS NOT FOR THE FAINT OF HEART DESPITE THE TITLE, THERE ARE SOME ROUGH SITUATIONS AND A LOT OF CURSING, BUT ALSO SOME LEMONY GOODNESS AS WELL.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19492 Read Count: 3744
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2015 Updated: 20 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

One of my brother's name is Danny, so I am really interested to find out who or what he is... LOL!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

No worries. I am looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am really interested in your story. It said that it was completed but I hope that is just an error. Thanks! ;~)



Author's Response:

Yeah it was an error i had so much trouble figuring out how to upload lol

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307438
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Thanks for the update! The first thing I do every morning is look for one. ;~)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Pretty sure Bella has enough money to help Edward get away from that crazy Esme... They just need to talk.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A girl, damaged and lost. A boy, scarred and rejected.

 

"You are confined only by the walls you build yourself." Anonymous

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6257 Read Count: 1356
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2015 Updated: 08 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for finishing and sharing this story! I loved it! ;~)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much :)

Jenn

Summary:



Banner by: AstridGreenEyes-Banners

Summary: Being born into a made family has both advantages and disadvantages. Sometimes a man has to reflect on which relationships he involves himself in.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98617 Read Count: 229012
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2015 Updated: 23 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

This should be interesting... LOL!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 171365
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

This is what happens when you spoil your children to this point... LOL! They become very bad adults. Oh well, hope she grows up before she gets herself and others killed by acting like a brat.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

LOL! She could probably benifit from a few spankings... ;~)

Deprivation by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is deprived of Intimacy and Bella something far more private  can fate bring them together or not ?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160365 Read Count: 98052
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2015 Updated: 03 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I think Bella is in the wrong. Like she said herself, how do you bring something like that up? Oh, by the way, I might know you from the sex club... LOL!



Author's Response:

I agree bella is all over the place at the moment and please remember discretion is the key regarding my weekend activities 😜

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 135077
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I hope they figure out who the daddy is before the birth. I am sure he wants to be even more envolved. ;~)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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AU in 1950s Paris. Celebrated private detective Charlie Swan is hired to investigate wealthy playboy Edward Cullen who is suspected of having an affair with a rich businessman's wife. Charlie's innocent but overly curious daughter Bella gets too involved with the case. Based on the plot of the 1957 Billy Wilder movie "Love in the Afternoon." Drabble. Updates EVERY DAY. AH, HEA.

Banner by Rita01tx. Beta'd by Frannie Walsh.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15056 Read Count: 20431
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am not sure what Edward could ask of her. Maybe to say she just checked in. She will need to be very careful or risk putting her father in danger because Aro may think he didn't get the correct information. And hide behind a curtain...really? LOL! Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Haha, good points! Loved your comments. Don't worry, her father is not in danger. Aro will realize the truth after he has calmed down.

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68368
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Natsar Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

I seriously was worried the Covid got you! Thanks for the update! Please update again soon! 😊