I'm hoping that Bella doesn't get an abortion.  doen't she know that would be murdering their baby.  I think it would be something that she would regret doing.  I agree with Edward it's not up to just her but the both of them. 

I don't think Bella has a right to be angry at Emmett and Edward to suggesting the punishment to her parents.  I thought she deserved it.  As for Seth I think he should have been under arrest for being under the influece of drugs and drinking while driving, and he's underage.  Seth is obviously not a good friend if he'd lie about not have been drinking/drugs, because of him Bella was badly hurt, I don't think she should be friends with him.  Because he obviously doesn't care about her. 

I thought Edward was a jerk, but I also thought that Bella was a bitch in this chapter.  I'm hoping that Tanya isn't pregnant.

Tanya better not be pregnant!

You just posted chapter 14 twice.  Can't wait to read chapter 15.

I am starting to get tired of Bella always cockblocking Edward. 

I just read the whole story and I think you are doing an amazing job.  I think Tanya and Gianna should both get in trouble too.  What Tanya did was stealing and that's illegal, taking something from someone's house is wrong.  I'm hoping that all three Collin, Gianna and Tanya get the punishment that they deserve.   Rose is a real bitch saying that the rubies were cheap, she's just jealous.  Early on in this story when they were at the mall Rose said something to Bella about her only being with Edward because of his money.  That's wrong, she's with him because she loves him.  Rose on the other hand is a selfish bitch.  I can't see how Emmett puts up with her.  I know he loves her, but sometimes love isn't enough.  I think he deserves better. I really like this story and I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.  Please update soon.

I thought those were cute names that they chose for the babies.  I don't think Bella should be friends with Rose anymore.  She and Alice were never true friends to Bella if they were they would have accepted Bella being with Edward.  If I was in Bella's position I wouldn't be friends with someone like Rose.  I don't care if Rose apologizes, it still doesn't make up for what happened to their 'friendship'.

You did a great job with this chapter, Iloved the way that Bella told Esme about Tanya.  If I was in Bella's position I don't think I would have had Edward bail out Esme with the way Esme has treated Bella.  Is Bella going to press charges against Tanya and Carmen for hitting her?  I'm glad that Bella's heart is alright and that it was nothing serious.  I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.

Can you please update soon?

Can you please update soon?

I hope nothing happens to them while their in Portland.  They deserve to be happy.

I thought the flashback was really cute.  I loved when the baby said 'love you daddy' and when Edward told her he loved her too.  I'm hoping that Jake won't be causing too much problems in any of the upcoming chapters.  I can't want to read what's going to happen next.  Please update soon.

Aww Edward is such a good dad, I can't believe he ever doubted his abilities about being a good parent.  Edward, Bella, and Renesmee are such a cute family.  I found it pretty funny when Edward ended up falling in the river because Bella never jumped. 

I think Sam is being a great leader, and I hope the council can see that and not let Jake become the leader.  Billy knows how obessed his son is with Bella and he should know that Jake only wants to be a leader because he wasn't happy with Sam's decissions. 

I don't think Jake should be a leader, he's not mature enough.  He's acting like a kid.  I think most of the people who live on the Reservation are the monsters.  I can't believe they are making Sam leave La Push.  I feel so bad for him.  How can Billy make the promise about the pack not attacking the Cullens.  You know that's exactly what  Jake's going to want to do if he becomes leader, which I sincerely hope he doesn't.  Hopefully the council will see That Jake isn't mature enough to handle it and give the position to someone else more worthy of it or decide to keep Sam.

I thought that was hot! I also thought that Edward was way to easy on Esme, I don't think he should ever forgive her.  What she did is not something that's forgiveable, even if she was minipulated.  Frankly I don't see how anyone in the family could forgive her either, like Rose, with how she was raped before becoming a vampire.  I can't see myself ever liking Esme at all in this story.  I really don't like her. 

I don't think Edward should forgive Esme, I'm glad he moved out and is now living with Bella.  I wonder if Carlisle yelled at Esme after Edward left, she deserves it. Any woman that will have another woman rape someone especially her son is a bitch.  I hope Edward never forgives Esme, she doesn't deserve it. 

I'm really tired of Jake, he is so stupid can't he just take the hint that Bella is just not intrested in him.  You would think he would get it when she is always turning him down and trying to avoid him.

I don't think it's fair that Edward and Bella can't have sex while in the house but Emmett and Rose can.  I really liked that speech that Edward gave to Emmett, hopefully now he will be alright with them dating. 

I think Carlisle and Esme are awful parents, and I think if Emmetts should tell them that Edward would be better off with Bella.  They gave up on him for years, and now all of a sudden they want to make things better.  Edward is going to be so angry when he finds out that he has to stay at his parents.  I would love to Emmett to stand up to his parents.  When are we going to see Bella confront Alice?

I am loving this story already, and I can't wait to see how the dinner is going to go.  I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.

I think Bella should be punished for what she did, and I'm glad that she got her car taken away.  Edward should have called the police and gotten Mike in trouble for serving alchahol.  Edward was being nice, he didn't have to let Bella go out with Angela, but he did.  Edward's probably never going to let Bella hang out with anyone but family from now on.  Which is her fault.  She knew she would be in trouble if she were to get caught but chose to drink.  I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.  Please update soon.

I can understand why Edward is so mad at his dad and the rest of his family.  What they did was wrong.  That's not very good parenting of Carlisle and Esme.  They all made him look like a fool.  Bella has no right to try to get Edward to talk to his dad when she won't even talk to her own dad.  I think if Edward talks to Carlisle then she has to talk to her dad.  When Bella said their situation wasn't the same I think she's wrong.  Sure Edward's dad was always there but the ways he's be treated over the years is just as bad.  At least I think so.  I think it's good that their going to ignore the Cullens for the two weeks and let them sweat it out.  They deserve it.  I think they all need to apolgize to Edward. 

This chapter really sucked.  So unless they back together soon then I'm finished with this story.

Bella is a mega bitch! I'm not liking her at all.  Edward is trying, and she can't give him a fucking break.  She can forgive Edward's family but not him.  They are the reason why he's the way he is.  That is seriously messed up.  Bella's gotta learn to respect him at work, you don't treat your boss like that.  Any other place she would have been fired for the way she was talking. 

I just finished reading this story over at a ff.net and I think you are doing an amazing job.  I like that Bella is going to give him cooking lessons.  Is this something that he will be find to be easy to do or will he be as bad as Bella had said when she said to Charlie that he is worse than him.  I'm hoping that Jacob won't be a problem in this story.  I am glad that Edward had talked to Charlie because he seems to not hate him as much as he did.  I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.  Please update soon.

I'm sad to see that this story is almost over.  I really enjoyed it.  Are you thinking about writing a sequel to this?

I think Bella is Bella is beinga selfish bitch.  She is willing to bring a kid into a house where she is on the outs with her husband, and that she wants to work things out with him.  I understand that she wants to help everyone, but Edward is right, she can't help everyone.  He does have a point they have to work on themselves before even thinking about if they want to adopt Jane.  So I don't think taking in Jane is the right thing for them.  They have a lot of things to work out between their marriage and with the baby on the way.

I thought you did an amazing job with it.  Do you think you can make this into a full story?  I would like to see what happens when Bella gets pregnant, and when they finally get their baby. 

I think Esme is an awful mom.  I really can't stand her.  I can't believe she still thinks Bella is good person, and not believer Rose, her own daughter.  That is f*cked up.   I would love to give Esme a smack in the face, and tell her that Bella is the reason that her son is in the hospital. 

I just found this story, and I think you are doing a great job.  I know it was Emmett who sent that one letter to Bella.  Emmett is an asshole.  I'm not liking him AT ALL.  I think Bella should call Edward and tell him about that letter.  I would love to see Edward kick Emmetts ass, like he deserves.  How long do we have to wait before they meet each other? I can't wait to read whats going to happen next.  Please update soon.

This chapter was really heartbreaking, my heart broke for everyone.  Is Ashleigh going to be going to jail? But I'm really glad that James is now dead and and that they found Bella.  I hope she is going to be alright.  She will be surrounded by everyone that loves her and cares about her.  She will get through this. 

I'm so glad that you are continuing with the story over here.  I hate whats going on over at ffn, twcs is very popular now.  I can't wait to read the rest.

I'm glad that the meeting between Bella and Edward's family went pretty well.  But I hope that Alice and Jasper won't be telling their friends.

I think Alice is an awful friend to Bella.  A friend is supposed to accept a friend for who she is and that sure isn't Alice.  But I liked that Edward and Bella got together. 

I want to read more of this story.  I thought it was great.

Ana is really being inconsiderate of Christian's feelings.  He's rightt, she has no clue what it was like for him thinking she was going to die.  I wanted to smack her.  She was being a birch.  

I'm hoping for Jasper to win.

I thought Edward was very cruel to say that to Bella, if he's not going to follow through. This guy is such a wimp, and needs to grow some balls.  All I see is a spineless little boy who can't make decisions for himself.   Just not liking Edward.

Edward is becoming really unlikable.