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Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255154
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Marathon doesn't even begin to describe it!

PHEW!!! Dunno how Edward does it! Love being inside of his mind BTW!

I love that he loves and cares for Bella so much!!! Really magical! Thanks

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Tanya broke in???

The cop, dunno??? Thanks so much! Poor Bella, all that drama and still no real release! 

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Love the banter...and Masterteaseward! Thanks.

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving this, especially a NO B.S Edward!!!

Sparks and interest already, that's what I love to read! Thanks!



Author's Response:

oh you will find he is a no Bull Shit kind of guy ...BTW... welcome to the story ...louise

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Cool! Love Aro!!! What a matchmaker! Thanks!

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

As long as your husband gets to "sample" the lemonade you're making I'm sure he'll be all good! Tell him thanks from all of us!!!

It is fate huh? Carlisle is gonna be the new Dr. and is Aro's brother-in-law, all fate! Thanks!

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmmmmm! The plot thickens! Thanks.

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

She's getter bolder, esp with Alice & Rose. Thanks!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Way to go Edward!!! Giving our girl her FIRST real orgasm!!! Good on you!!! 

Edwards family really are perfect for Bella!!! Your plot is so oRiginal and the way you've woven all the characters in. Tanya vapid for Edward & James trying to hunt down Bella, love it-thanks!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

The whole wax your entire body is...different! Edward and a Harley? HELL YES!!! Amazing! Emmett is a honey too, with heaps of knowledge-love it, thanks so much!!!

Theyre both exceptionally blessed to have found one another! Thanks!



Author's Response:

there is some types of 'Play' that require all body hair to be gone "Wax play being one of them" ...well i guess you could keep it .. but it would hurt like hell when the wax comes off ... anyway .. there are others "Fire play" hair needs to be gone or it would be singed ..(ouch and it stinks...lol..) ummm ...it also (removal of hair) heightens the sensations on the skin ... rather then the hair folical causing a reaction from the submissive from her Dom using a feather flogger or a fur mit on her.. her skin will react directly ...hense a full body wax is requested. That's a person request made by Bella's Master, not all Dom's require it ....ok .. there you go more information then you might have been expecting ... but you got it anyway ... thanks for reading ..louise

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

On a Harley with Edward, sex on wheels that's what that is!!! Great stuff, thanks.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward is so wonderful to her/for her!!! Thanks so much for showing how a fantastic man truly treats a woman!!! I love it!!! Next chapter will be kick-ass!!! Thanks!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

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Death...by overwhealming MINDBLOWING ORGASM!!!

The "freezer" comment and dildo action...oh my goodness...

Hottest "Dom on-the-fly lemon I've ever read!!! EVA!!! 

Thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

I'm going to take that as one of the Best Compliments i have ever recieved ...

"Hottest "Dom on-the-fly lemon I ever read!! Ever!!!"

Dang .. you just made my day ... lol ...thanks girlfriend ...

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Nothing "slow" about your story honey!!! It's all BURN with the I the with of a forest fire!!!

Was that James in the car??? Gagghhh!

Hes an awesome Dom how fully he explains everything to Bella!!! Her next orgasm is going to be off the richter scale!!!! Thanks!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Gonna go and listen to those songs! What a fantastic first playtime for her! Thanks so much, learning more about her life before!!! Edward is amazing to/for her-thanks!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Bella's gonna have a permanent orgasim induced look on her face!!! Hot Az!!! Thanks!!! Awesome shizzle!!!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Her speech was...Like her collar... No words, sniff sniff! 

Cant wait to read Edwards thoughts on what she said!!! Everything she said was absolutely true and perfect-thanks!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Poor Bella at the end, she had done so well...but now she knows! That's James huh? HoPe he ain't breaking into her house!!!

Emmett is like honest Abe...but with no filter!!! Gotta love that! Thanks so much!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thanks so much that Bella did so well, so proud of her and happy for Edward!!!

Tanya...of course that was gonna happen -I'm assuming there will be more like that from her and others, still so glad how Bella and Edward handled it, plus she he's Aro on her side...all good! Loved it, thanks!!!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great family fun chp!!! Edward is hilarious!!! For a man that knows so much about a woman's body, he showed how much he doesn't know about women!!! Thanks!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

She's getting skanks coming at her from all sides!!! Way to handle it Bella! I've said it before but...Edward really "gets" Bella!!! He's an excellent Dom who is teaching her through her insecurities and only wants the best for her!!! Thanks so much for your wonderful version of these characters!!! Thanks that Jane is nice!!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

She's gone through absolute HELL...but has now been blessed with her own personal heaven via Edward...he loves her-YAY!!!, his family and Leah and Jacob, great support!

Hideous doesnt even begin to describe what she went through. Amazing writing skills!!! Thanks!!! Loved her spiel about them controlling their life too!

 

 

 

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'd be anxious too! James is lurking huh?!?!

Emmett is a hoot, just not on the money! Yay for Bella but safety first honey before you charge off to save the world!!!

Good on ya Edward! U both need the "usual" I reckon!!! Thanks.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Naaa, Edward is all good!!! She fully realizes now and I don't think she'll forget that lesson too quickly! He had to do that, no brainer!!! Thing I love about Edward is that he fully explains everything along the way! Thanks so much that I think Bella totally understands.

His recording them...creepy to me at first cause I was thinking about all the others he would have recorded, and if he still has those recordings...but so hot...and instructional the way he uses them!!! You've got an amazing writing brain, plus yOur betas are kick-ass, thanks!

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Love jane&Aro!!! Thanks that they are wonderfully supportive!!! 

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Bella is really understanding  & soaking it all in!!! Awesome!!! Thanks!!!

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

A man of his word...a man with mad skills...one mighty fine man!!! Thanks so much, Bella is back on track!!! 



Author's Response:

Edward is the type of man who Says what he means and means what he says ... there is no guessing when it comes to him .... and that is the best kind of man to have ....thanks for reading ,,,louise

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

The different POV are always really eye-opening and give a different perspective. Thanks so much! 

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Another great chapter. I'm glad that Bella and Edward are voicing their concerns and feel like something is up!!!

The "deep-throat" lesson-HILARIOUS!!!! Thanks so much!

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

He's such a tease!!! Love it! Thanks!!! Next chapter sounds epic!!!

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Awesome! I love any story where a nasty Tanya gets slapped, literally or figuratively! Thanks so much!

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Great way to joke around with Bella!

Mmmm Edward and Mr. Harley...a match made in Heaven!!! Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and i agree, Edward on a Harley makes me want to go for a ride ...lol...

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Keeps getting better! Thanks.

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Yay! Irena knows Edward is serious! Thanks!

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I'm confused why Edward entertained Jessica's whinging because Bella didn't break the rules but cleverly negotiated them. Byartchthat those witches at the club are!!!

Glad Bella did really well overall! Am trying to visualize that scene with Jane and Rose! Thanks!



Author's Response:

It was an oversight on Edward's part ...  Bella explains the way she feels but you ahve to remember that he's trying to get to the bottome of what happned and also as much as I love him, and he's so insighted into Bella's feelings...he's still a man, and sometimes men just don't get it ...

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Fantastic insights in this chapter!!! Aro is so observant and intuitive! Funny those two worlds colliding alright! I like how he regrets his former "lifestyle choices", such maturity! Sounds like fun is on the way! Thanks!

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Ooh...Jealousward! Really??? That was a bit freaky! Thanks for Aro and Janes support & honesty! Emmett is such a sucker!!! Way to go Bella! Thanks!

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

What? Why can't we have everything!!! Jokes! Love how they're opening up to one another! Thanks!

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

It'll be all good! I love how he pushes her rather than treat her like a china doll! Thanks.

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923479
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
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Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Yay for those two! Thanks!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Involuntary Rapture

Thanks for explaining, I was worried!

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Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Nice...interesting...explains a lot about Tanya! Thanks!

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Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Thanks 100,000,000 for Alice & Jasper's perfect timing!!! 

Please let someone waste James soon! Thanks!

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


banner by SoapyMayhem



banner by JA Mash


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 44071
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prom Night

Awesome! Happy to have caught up with ya over here thanks to you AN!!

I love me some DarkDomward! Thanks Soapy!!!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Always Be Prepared

She's all of the above...but I love her courage and planning! Hope it comes off ok and that she keeps her nerve! Thanks for writing this!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Dr. Cullen's Office

Hot Damn!!! Loved that! Thanks!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Wishes Granted?

Hope you're updating soon honey!!! Can't wait, anticipation is one Byartch of a killa! Thanks!

Summary:

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A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my  banner!  

Was it wrong to want you...for so long, watch you mature from the sidelines…ripening for my pleasure? I have no right to...want...need...desire...crave your beautiful body, but I do. Fantasizing, hours about the things I could…want…need to do to you. Sugar and Spice, and everything nice…that s what Isabella Swan was made of... B&E Drabble, Canon pairings...

 

Beta´d by the Dream Team: jess2002, RAH07890, jdonovan, & famaggiolo...pre-reader: TeamAllTwilight, thanks for all your help ladies!

DISCLAIMER: I OWN NOTHING!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4090 Read Count: 19770
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2012 Updated: 25 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Kiwisrock Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Thanks for posting here!!!

yay! Thanks!

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Oh hell! This is way better/different/awesome from the FF version!

thanks for the pre-Christmas treat!!!

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Slow burn...painful erection...trying to kill us much! LoL! Thanks!!!

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

I like her teenage inner Edwardlogue!!!

thanks! 

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Home sweet homeward!!!

thanks!

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

MmmmmHmmmmm! You go girl!!! Thanks!