Reviews by DaShadow_Kissed
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella was a shell after Edward left her.  She hated men.  She was disgusted by them.  She wanted revenge.  What better way to get revenge than to use them?  The plan works well…until Edward comes back.  Bella’s POV. 

Bella's Revenge

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68969
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Cameron

:o I have no idea who that might be but.... I think it could be Jacob or Edward. Just that Edward wouldn't text something like Lol, maybe 'love' but not lol. LOL, anyhoo. Enjoyed the chapter.

Hate Cameron, he sounds like he just needs an opening to trust his member in so he can get off... ugh! totally disgusting guy. Don't know why Bella is just now scratching him off her list xD

Anyhoo. goona read some more!

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Alex

OMD *oh my dracula* Is it Eddy boy!? Is it? or is Bella of her bunker??? LOL, not gonna lie, Bella comes off as a total bitch and I love it. She's using men as many men use women, I like that.

Alex came off as cocky and I think Bella enjoyed herself more with Jacob than with that dude. But what the heck, let Bella have fun.. even with married man, they're the most fun when it comes to cheating xD. And she doesn't care about him, yep let Bella use the sucker xD.

But what if it's Edward that's come back.. OmD

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Bella

.. is it Edward? GAH! this is so frustrating... I NEED TO KNOW o.O

 

Gonna keep reading xD

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chris

.. oh my.. is Bella crazy? LOL, is it really Eddy boy? GAH! I hate not knowing if it was him...

Chris sounds like a good guy but I don't think he's the guy for Bella, if Edward hadn't come back I'd say give them a chance.. but now... now things are diff. But I have to say if Edward left again or is just a hallucination, then I'd say Chris would be the guy to start a relatioship with :)



Author's Response:

Lol.  I hope you are enjoying this story.  :)

Pets: Bebe by Maren Smith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade.  But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.

Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters.  She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life.  She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves.  And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

I really like this story.. it's something entirely new to anything else I've read.. can't wait to find out more .



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

this is addicting! can't stop  reading... o.O



Author's Response:

LOL, thanks!

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Will he give Bebe up? Trial i like.. the Uncle Bach I like also.. his fondness for his pet is kind... I love the chappy :)

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

I effing love BACH! He's smart and he gets the human race. and Peni is just hilarious.. i marvel at the relationship she has with a male such as Bach.

Anyhoo. I liked the humor and the smack that went on during the chapter.. kept giggling.. now what happened to Bebe? gonna keep reading

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Wow.. *muted of all words* let's just say I loved the chapter ;))

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

What a mean cliffie xD I'm not feeling any love towards the guys.. but it's understandable b/c they've been monks too damn long. Wanna punch Will a little though.. lol, anyhoo great chappy :)

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Oh holy mother of Skywalker! This story has made a turn around.. i don't know what i expected but believe me.. this wasn't it.. all the while i kept thinking.. HOLY DAMN!

Anyhoo, will Tral have anything to do with Bebe? and the part where Bach and Peni had sexual intercourse wasn't really weird.. just sort of enlightning as i wondered if that was possible from the onstart of the story.. anyhoo, great chappy!

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Wow.. I think I'm in love with Tral.. *wipes tear* what he did.. man, it must have taken real cajones to do that.. my heart and admiration go out to him..

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Bravo! if you had thrown some b/s about the two kinds of people being thrown together and the human miracoulsy liberated I would have yelled out FOUL! as it was you really put deep thought into it.. there were prons and cons.. no easy liable way out of the wrong doings of one race to the other..

I also enjoyed what Peni said... "That's just it, Ben. Can't you see? Because of this, now we all have a choice."... it sounded sincere.. believable though I cannot lie.. i felt confused about Bebe feeling that throb of regret. I mean.. I understand it.. but i was hard to see the dissapointment of Ben.. He really cared for Bebe.

Aw i've enjoyed this story immensly.. and will thank Thyger Lillie for reccomending it.



Author's Response:

Good heavens, you stayed up all night to read this?!?  Wow, thank you for the compliment!  And thank you Thaigher (Thyger?  Are there two Lillies?) Lillie!

Summary:

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Edward Cullen is a hematologist by day and a serial killer by night. Because of mysterious circumstances surrounding the death of his mother, Edward is raised by Carlisle Cullen, legendary former F.B.I. agent. Sensing his dark tendencies at an early age, Carlisle molds Edward into a weapon for justice. Edward believes he is unfeeling and emotionless, so he hides behind the facade of a happy-go-lucky family man. Bella, a recovering alcoholic with a dark past, wants to know the real Edward. Can she ever face the monster within in him without being devoured herself? Will a new serial killer in town give Edward the most exciting game of his life?

 


 

Thanks to my beta Twimarti for her superb help in getting this fic ready! This story is a slight Dexter crossover, in storyline and character behaviors. No characters from Dexter will appear. All pairings are canon. Story genre is Horror/Romance/Mystery  Warning This story is going to be very violent, and in a later chapter will have a non-sensational depiction of rape. NC-17 for a reason, but will have a HEA.

Banner by me and the awesome blinkie is by Betti Gefecht

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42561 Read Count: 6949
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2011
Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well I'm new at this so I might just add that I've enjoyed reading it tremendously. I'm very intrigued about Edward, the prologue does nothing, if not feed my curiosity about this Edward, lol.

So far I'm very impressed and I love him, love a dark Eddy boy. Anyhoo, hope you continue it and if you do then I'll be here to follow this story.

Awesome start, SK~