Reviews by sprazinko
Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211509
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: sprazinko Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

That was sweet that he proposed on her birthday



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Summary:

Taking Bella swim wear shopping was suppose to be easy. But what happens when Charlotte gets more than she bargained for? One Shot for now

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2849 Read Count: 1663
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2010
Reviewer: sprazinko Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was incredible

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner created by xrxdanixrx

 

Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: sprazinko Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One- Theory of Relativity

Sounds good so far, like it when bella isnt so mousy

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45276
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: sprazinko Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

This is good cant wait to see what she is going to say to him

Summary:

Alice is hosting a Criminal Minds marathon, and Jasper's a little flustered when he learns that his crush will be attending. Awkward, slashy fun ensues. Written for Yogagal's birthday. AH/OOC


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2821 Read Count: 179
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: sprazinko Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was great

The Bronze Prince by TwiBoy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

(banner/avatar artwork provided by Zigster: www.fanfiction.net/~zigster)

Where one would think he gave me death by taking away my humanity, I knew the exact opposite; that he gave me life. - Vamps AU OOC Slash


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10282 Read Count: 309
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: sprazinko Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was really good

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255105
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: sprazinko Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really good cant wait to see what happens next

Summary:

Jasper, Bella, brownies and Nutella. Fun in the kitchen! NC-17 for lemons.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3657 Read Count: 442
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: sprazinko Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was so sweet

Time of Dying by KitsuShel Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Summary: A madman breaks into Bella's home on Halloween and destroys her life.

~My entry in the All Hallow's Eve Contest~

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3208 Read Count: 485
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: sprazinko Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Time of Dying

That was really good do you plan to continue it after the contest

Summary:

Isabella Swan visits the wrong side of La Push Beach. Jacob and Paul have something lemony to say about it. But when their little three-some games continue, and feelings are caught, what couple is left standing? Rated XXX. My first threesome.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166105 Read Count: 96110
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2010 Updated: 19 Nov 2010
Reviewer: sprazinko Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Sex on the Beach Outtake 2

Wonder what laurens news was and if it had to do with tanya and edward, cant wait til next week

Summary:

A month after the battle, the Whitlocks, Denali's, The Pack and rest think it's finally over. But little do they know that something bigger is on the horizon and gunning for them. Ra: M Human Elemental Sequel


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Elemental Series, The Elemental Series
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36381 Read Count: 8261
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 08 Aug 2012
Reviewer: sprazinko Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Not sure bit it seems like there is a chapter missing between 14 and 15, but otherwise this story is great.