Reviews by pennycocktail
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

OMG, I just started reading this a day or so ago and didn't realize it's not complete.  For some reason, I thought it was... so now I'm on the edge... must know what's going to happen next... please keep writing!!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Another cliffie... your chapters are too short... must know what's going to happen next!

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Love Aro, his insanity is really pretty fun... hope something truly awful happens to him soon.

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

Hey, Happy New Year!!

Sure hope we don't have to wait long to find out what's next.

Thanks for writing

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

So glad to finally get a new chapter, when's the next one coming?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514680
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A

I don't usually comment on fics when I start reading them and there are still so many chapters to read, but I just have to say at this point that you've developed a really pathological character in James, he's really quite frightening.  On the flip side, I love your version of Edward, so far he's been so caring and nurturing with Bella, it's really cool.  Sure hope when I get to the end of this fic that B and E are together.  I'm sure they are, or this story would be rather pointless.  One other thing, you don't seem to make much use of the various implements that are typically used in the BDSM world...  although I like what you've written a lot, your portrayal does seem sort of vanilla for that culture.

Anyway, love the fic... thanks for writing...

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B

So, can you really chip someone?  I'm sure the technology exists, but is it used on people??  I think it's so cool that you used it in this fic.  

This is really a great fic, I'm down for it... don't know if it's finished or not, but I'll be reading it until it's complete.

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

LOL oh yeah it is finished.. I am glad you are enjoying it.. I am currently writing an original version of it.. which is way better.. but you have to unfortunetly wait for that one :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Lips of An Angel Banner

Edward and Bella were in love, but graduation from college and their new careers split them apart. It's been five years since their break up. They have each moved on with other people. Will a tragedy bring these soul mates back together? My entry for the Lyrical Melodrama Story Contest.  Inspired by Lips of an Angel by Hinder.

Rated M for mature themes and attempted sexual and physical abuse.

Lips of an Angel Avitar

Lips of an Angel Book Cover


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16577 Read Count: 6597
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2010 Updated: 24 Jan 2010
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - BPOV

Wow, I think Bella needs to get out of there fast!  Looks like circumstances may allow them to reunite.  Good story!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - EPOV

You know, had he talked to Bella initially and made sure they decided together where they wanted to live before either accepted job offers, they could have eliminated a lot of heartache.  Edward was pretty worried about himself when those early decisions were made... he told her what to do, then made a telling choice for himself... sure hope he's evolved...

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - EPOV

I guess that's it... sweet story...

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995723
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I love your long chapters, so thanks!  Hope you're in the mood to write because I really want to know where the story will go next!

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I know that this was written a long time ago, so it doesn't really matter what I have to say about this chapter, but, just for the record, I thought Edward was a dick and Bella let him off too easily.  He's not just her dom, he's her boyfriend, and he had no business kissing other women, or flirting with the subs, it doesn't matter that they might be gay.  In what world would a girlfriend allow a boyfriend to act that way?  You've pushed it too far... she shouldn't be apologizing to him... like I said, he's a dick... a selfish dick...



Author's Response:

I agree with you completely, but the D/s lifestyle is just not that easy. Yes, he should have warned her, but the lifestyle ISN'T a fair one.  Not really, the D has the s's COMPLETE submission.  By the same token, the s holds the power to stop ALL activities and scenes by using her safe words - which is why they are so important.

 

Thank you for reviewing and I hope that you read the next few chapters.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Hi Michele,

Another great chapter, thanks for making them long, hate the short ones I've read from other writers.  Hope you're in a writing mood, you've set up some really interesting situations... Christmas with Charley, the VF interview... the Academy Awards... Can't wait to see how Bella copes with all of these major events.  And my thoughts go out to your sister... hope she gets through this sad time...

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for the great review and yes, I have LOTS to write about but I wouldn't have it any other way.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

Always like your chapters, although I'm not a fan of your version of Charlie... but love how you've written everyone else.  I guess I would have let Charlie go, thinking B is better off without him... just too much drama.  And am glad that E&B are having some time away from the BDSM lifestyle.  Not that I don't find that to be an interesting facet of their relationship, but it does get to be somewhat oppressive after a while... always seems like a good idea to take a break at times and regroup.  Anyway, looking forward to Christmas with the Cullens.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your honest review. Hmmm, Charlie is a bit of an enigma for me. This Charlie fitted the story, but as Bella developed I realised that SHE would never just let him go. Avoidance is one of both her and Charlie's ways of NOT dealing with life and in order for Bella to grow stronger in her relationship with Edward, she HAS to go back and deal with her unresolved past. 

You know that saying, 'If you don't deal with life, it will deal with you'? This is only too true. I hope you enjoy the next chapter - sorry Charlie is in it, but things are looking up.

Thanks so much for reading and let me know what you think of the next chapter.

xoxo

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I love that you write really nice, long chapters... and I really laughed about Emmett being compelled to open other's presents...

I'm very fortunate, my Dad is still around, and we are very close... I spend a lot of time with him.  I'm sorry about your Dad, but it's nice to know that you two had such a close connection... and I've also had to deal with alcoholism, my ex-husband and former mother in law both dealt with it... one survived it with AA and the other didn't.  So, bless you... and thanks for writing such a compelling story.



Author's Response:

thank you so much and thank you for sharing - yeah Dads are special.

xoxo

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I don't know... I don't hate you, but does bdsm have to be so heartless?  I know that the sub has to submit, but really, at the cost of her self worth...?  I have no problem with anyone who practices bdsm... it's all good... but I don't think I can support people who are selfish, inhumane and heartless.  Jeez, Alice is fearful of her own brother... even in a bdsm world, that's GOT to be wrong, right?  The whole "lack of trust" issue in this chapter is bullshit.  And Esme's support of E and J... it's sick (and not the good definition of sick).  So, I'm wondering, is Carlisle's support of Bella at the end of the chapter, and his obvious lack of respect for B and J's behavior, a sign that the 2 assholes will become a bit more respectful of their partners in future chapters?  Hope so, they're cold and heartless... and I think you need to bring a major spank down on them... they need to apologize to B and A for being so disrespectful...

Still love this fic... thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for reading and I hope that you feel better after reading the next chapter that is up. 

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Wow... what a chapter.  Sorry to say this, but Edward is a total dick.  The only thing Bella did wrong was to be rude to Kate and Garret when they were guests in her home.  

And Esme... can't believe how awful she was to B... was she feeling a bit competitive for E's attention?  B let her off way too easy...  

Don't get me wrong, I LOVE this fic and I'll read every last chapter.  You're a good writer, it's a great story and you've created a world that really draws the reader in.  And that's why I have such strong opinions about the storyline.

That said, I hope you don't mind if I share some more of my impressions with you.  

I was kind of bothered by the way Kate makes excuses for E... she says he's just a man.  Well, hell yeah he's just a man, and one who should be a LOT more responsible for B if he's taking on the Dom role.  She's probably suffering post traumatic stress disorder, and all he can do is worry about himself.  

Even Jasper is a jerk when he tells Ali not to interfere and puts his "game face" on.  She knows her brother better than he does... Jasper's so dismissive...  And the 30 day punishment... no contact between the girls for 30 days (?)... it's too much...

Can't Edward have more respect for B's feelings and/or self-esteem, even though it's a Dom/Sub relationship?  I don't participate in the BDSM world, so I probably don't get it...

Anyway, B and A need to cut their guys loose until E and J can get their heads out of their asses.  I'm just sayin'...

Love this fic, thanks for the other fic recommendations, and mostly, thanks for writing.

 

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Hi,

Loved the confrontation between Bella and the subs, will there be more in the future?  And what will they decide re Bella's wish to engage in exhibitionistic activities?

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

more questions than answers right now - but there are some suggestions from their friends and mentors (shhh)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Hey, Edward and Jasper are way too immature and self-absorbed to be doms... the whole Bella/Alice month separation is ridiculous... just shows that E&J are not worthy of controlling someone else's life, 'cuz that's what a dom does, and they aren't doing it well.  And although they may have been forgiven for going along with Emmett's bad idea of staying away from the girls for a night at Cullen Crest, it's still another example of gross negligence on their part.  Maybe they should get their shit together before they mess with the lives of others, whadda' ya' think?  They're too arrogant, they need a MAJOR dressing down.  And someone needs to kick Esme's ass super hard, jeez, whatever happened to maternal instincts... she's not a mom I'd want in my life... why did she have it out for her own daughter??  Really cold...

Edward seems to be trying to get better, but he's got a ways to go...

Can't wait to see what happens with the whole Jacob situation.

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Thanks for writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42788
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Broken

Great cliffie... and sure hope E comes thru the surgery ok.

Thanks for writing



Author's Response:

glad you liked the chapter!  and edward will make it.  i just can't kill him off.  and thank YOU for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Regret

I love this fic, really love your version of Edward.  Great story, love all the sh*t with James... am looking forward to the HEA.

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

wow!!!  yay!  i'm so glad you're enjoying my story.  and thank you for reading and reviewing!!!  ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Emotions

Looking forward to James arriving back on the scene.  Is anything going to happen with B and Jacob?  Although I would never want those two to hook up, I wondered if Jacob would become interested in B.

Thanks for writing



Author's Response:

james will be back soon.  and nothing will happend with bella and jake. fbi agents will never step out of line unless they want their balls ripped off, so he'll never go for bella.  he's purely there as a protector... and eye candy for the girls.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Safe

They make me happy-sigh, too.

And re Jacob, I hate him in the book, so good riddance, he was the perfect character to sacrifice.

One more real chapter and an epilogue???  Will that be enough to provide the deets for the HEA?  Sure hope so, gotta' know about college, weddings, kids, etc.



Author's Response:

aww, i kinda liked my jake.  he was a good guy, but out of everyone else, he was a better choice to kick the bucket than others.  and i will include as much info as i can in what's left.  i promise i'll make it worth your while!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Complications

I knew you were going to end this with a cliffie... hope the next chapter is posted soon!



Author's Response:

yep, you know me well.  i do have a thing for suspense.  i hope to have the next chapter off to the betas by tonight.  hopefully, i'll post by the end of the week.  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Fallout

I'm kind of confused, the pounding on the bedroom door could be James' cohorts trying to get to them... yes?  But, the pounding at the foyer door must mean it's someone outside the room???  Like NOT one of James' friends??!  And if that's the case, then where are James' friends??  Why aren't they on this?  They're right there!!  And how would anyone outside the room know what's going on???  The gunshots, maybe, but you can never count on random witnesses who hear a loud noise to take action.  This is very confusing.  It can't go smoothly, but it's your story, and if you make it happen this way, I guess I have to go along with it.  Just sayin', it's always nice for things to go down in a credible way.  That said, I sure hope Bella, E and A are going to be ok.  And I look forward to the next post.

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

i'm sorry it's confusing.  it's meant to be that way.  explanations for everything will be in next chapter, so everything should make sense.  hang in there!  help is on the way and all should be answered soon.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Full Circle

I'll miss this story, although I wish you'd gone a bit more into E and Bs relationship when they were finally able to get back on track, like dates, first time for sex, stuff like that, but it's a great fic. Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

i'll miss it, too.  i wanted to leave some things to the imagination.  going too in depth ruins some of the excitement for me.  but thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner created by xrxdanixrx

 

Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter Thirty Nine - Technicalities

Uh oh, I'm worried about Edward... hope he and Bella are able to work everything out!  Please update again soon!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-One - What Comes Around

Thanks for another chapter!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Four - Chutzpah

Doesn't Edward have money?

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty Three- Purgatory

It's Bella.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter Thirty Eight- The Proposal

Nice cliffie, hope more's coming soon...

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty Six - Plan B

Thanks for another chapter.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter Forty - The Reckoning

Yup, still reading and wondering where this is gonna' go... please update again soon!



Author's Response:

Hi!! I'm glad I still have you, babe...and it's slowly leading to a some sort of a resoluation. An end, I hope ;) Thanks for reviewing, have a great weekend.

~K

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 26 May 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter Forty-Two - Morbidity is the Omission of Sorrow

You did the right thing, Edward deserves better...



Author's Response:

Right? So, sad, I write the worst Bella in the history of fanfic...Hopefully she redeems herself. Thanks for the review, babe!!!

 

~K

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Three - Shell-shocked

I don't know... I'm WAY over Bella... ef her!  Write someone better for E...

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Four - Moving Forward While Standing Still

"He looks like he writes Starwars fanfiction"... LOL!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Five - Desire The Fire

Wow, can't believe it's almost over...



Author's Response:

I know..I thought I'd be writing this story forever. Thanks for following from Twilighted and thanks for reading :))

~K

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Epilogue

It's been a fun ride... thanks!



Author's Response:

Awe, thanks for reading!!

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105125
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

Wow, this is going to be good!  Do you update often?  I hope so... I really like your characterizations of Bella and Edward... can't wait to see where this is going to go...

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

I try to update at least weekly when life doesn't get in the way. Some stories bi weekly depending on how quickly my beta can plow through my contastant onslaught of chapters. The moment I get them I update. I do not wait for a special day. Thank you so much for reading it. Next three chapters are in the works so as soon as I get them you will have them!

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

My Other Brother animated banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: My Other Brother

Good for Bella, glad she was able to stand up to the skanks.  Have they given up, or will they continue to terrorize her?

Thanks for writing

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'll miss this story.

Summary:

Edward is a geeky comic book writer who has been secretly in love with his over-protective best friend Bella for years. He's too shy to admit his feelings, so he secretly starts writing a comic book inspired by Bella called 'Solar Eclipse.' 

After an embarrassing incident, Edward is forced to reveal his love for Bella to his friends. While Bella spends the summer before senior year with her mother, Edward, at the behest of Alice and Rosalie, goes through an extreme makeover.

 

Will Edward learn that unlike beauty, geeky isn't skin deep, it's the core of who he is? Will Bella finally see the love that has been in front of her for the last 8 years of her life.

 

 

 

 

 


Story is AU-Human and B/E (Jacob is only involved in flashbacks.) Themes are Romance/Humor/Awkwardness

Story is rated NC-17 for language, future lemons, and depictions of teen bullying. Story will alternate from EPOV to BPOV

 

Banner by ViiolentDelight, Evenstar, and Blinkie by Rason


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72778 Read Count: 23874
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 27 Jun 2011
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 *~ The Chapter Where They Finally Do It!*~

Please post soon.

The Cut by Thaigher Lillie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary:

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Re-write Of Not So Average.

Isabella Swans' Life at home is no fairytale. She struggles with her weight, depression and family. Eager to get away from her verbally abusive mother and start afresh, Isabella journeys to her first year of college, where she experiences hardships, friendships and Greeks. After seeing her first  Greek step-show and eyeing the most popular guy on campus Edward Cullen for the first time, the burn inside her to belong boils to the surface, but there is one obsticle in her way. Rosalie Hale...

Warning: This fic contains: Hazing, Bulimia, Sex,teasing, child abuse, Negligance, suicidal thoughts,OOC, and angst.

All actions that occur in this story are purely fictional.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13368 Read Count: 3341
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2010 Updated: 14 Nov 2011
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Somewhere I rather be…

Good to see Jasper on the scene... thanks for writing!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Somewhere I'm Placed

I like this chapter, makes me want to stick around and see what happens next.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: I know you guys won't be pissed at me lmao

Thanks, I'll wait patiently for the next post...



Author's Response:

aww thanks babes

Summerboy by Little Miss Mionie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Every summer vacation, Edward was Bella’s annual secret escape. At school, Bella can’t hide from the whispers that she deserved what happened during “the incident”. Her summery and wintry worlds collide. AH, E/B. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44754 Read Count: 5418
[Report This] Published: 19 Jan 2011 Updated: 02 Jan 2012
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Clearing Skies

Glad Bella's feeling better.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Sunshine

Sweet ending, thanks for writing.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Blue Skies

Hi, just read all the chapters posted so far... what a great story.  When are you going to post again... soon, I hope.



Author's Response:

Sorry penny, it took me ages to update! But Summerboy is now complete with all the chapters up here for you to read. I'm very glad that you are enjoying Summerboy- thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Cool Breeze

Thanks so much for another chapter... it's a really good story.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Freak Storm

Is anything bad going to surface re Tanya and Edward?

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Hail Damage

It's a good chapter, Bella's breakdown is really effective.

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

It's a good twist...

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Cool story, please post soon.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Pretty intense... gotta' know what happens next, please post again soon!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Alright, I know you wanted to leave us hanging, but I sure hope you deliver after this major build... you've really worked it hard, really hard... and I can't imagine what you're plannin' after all this (well, I have a feeling where you want it to go eventually), but after such an extremely agonizing and all-consuming story arc, well, it just better be good...  

Thanks for writing...

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

"You don't need to do that. I can hold my own door." "I'm sure you can. You'll have to show me some time."

That made me laugh out loud... please post again soon.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Looks like she's caving...

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Wow, I had given up on FYW, so glad it's back!  There are so many unanswered questions, looking forward to getting them answered.  Thanks for writing!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thanks for the chapter, keep 'em coming!!

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mli

After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

He should have one of the others do the tattoo, feels like things are gonna' start happening soon.



Author's Response:

Maybe he should. And you'd be right, things are about to take off! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

So, obviously the Cullens are being targeted... sure hope Bella gets those earrings back to Alice or there'll be hell to pay...

Could the intruder have set up hidden cameras??



Author's Response:

Yes, you are correct. The earrings will turn up eventually. Thank you for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Looks like it's on with Renee...



Author's Response:

Oh, it is... Thanks for reading and reviewing-I do appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So... who's following them??



Author's Response:

Who's following who? I dont know what you're talking about. But thank you!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Will we see more of Tanya?  

Please post again soon.



Author's Response:

I really can't tell you if Tanya will make another appearance....might spoil the surprise  :)  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Please post again soon.



Author's Response:

I hope that means you like it  lol   I am doing my best to stay on a weekly posting schedule!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Will E revert back to his former self??



Author's Response:

I can honestly tell you 'no'.  But, that's it! Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

So, what's lurking behind a corner??



Author's Response:

Hmm...that's a good question. We'll find out in the next couple of chapters! Thanks for reading & reviewing, I love the feedback!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Where's Edward's lighter?



Author's Response:

Wow. You are the only person who mentioned that little tid bit. Good eye! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

So, when does the bad stuff start?



Author's Response:

Umm...soon. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Sounds like E&B need to talk...



Author's Response:

They sure do! Thanks for reading & reviewing!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

When are we gonna find out who messed up the paint on E's car?



Author's Response:

All shall be revealed. Soon. ish.  :) Yes, you will find out! Thanks for reading & reviewing!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

I wanna' know what happened to Jimmy... please post again soon!



Author's Response:

I'm trying to stay on schedule!! :)  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Yeah, I'm interested in "Walk"...



Author's Response:
Awesome! I probably won't be posting anything til after the first of the year-too much going on right now. Thanks! ;)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Exciting chapter, please post again soon!



Author's Response:
Thank you!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Sweet, will you write more?



Author's Response:

I will and have. When I get these reviews caught up, I will post the outtake I wrote, and I am working on the new one now! :) Thanks for your interest!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thanks for the final chapter, and I'm glad you're on the mend!



Author's Response:
I appreciate that, I really am feeling fantastic. Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts!

Losing It by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After years of saving herself for that one special guy only to have him turn her down, Bella is on a mission to lose her virginity. Can the lucky guy she chooses hang on to her, or will he lose everything in her game?

High School Drama
E/B

Banner by MDealsWithIt and Blinkie by Angedelaube


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37171 Read Count: 39751
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I thought Alice would be friendlier by now.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 **Misconceptions**

He's right where he's suposed to be.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 **Best Laid Plans**

I liked Alice's analogies and Beatles quote.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 **Rushing It**

Aww, he's so sweet.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 ** Disappointment**

Bella's conscience is catching up with her.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 **Interaction**

And so it begins...

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~* The Park *~

I like the relationship between Alice and Edward.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ** The Proposition **

I liked the glimpse of cocky Edward.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 **His Conditions**

Oh, they are SO going to do it!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 **A New Plan**

Alice is badass!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~*Lost*~

It's  a great start.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 **A Plan**

I love the checklist.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 **Not Invisible**

They're so cute together!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 **Prince-Motherfucking-Charming**

I don't get what she sees in James, but I guess in high school I was attracted to similar guys, too.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 **Absence and Fondness*

Tanya certainly suffers a lot of abuse at your hands, I'll have to read your other stories.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 **The Twilight Zone Pt. 1**

Caveman, definitely!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 **Revelations**

I hope Bella drags Renee's ass to rehab!  She sounds way beyond recreational use...

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 **The Twilight Zone Pt. 2**

She better not go to the boiler room... glad Edward is listening in.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Finally, thought they'd never get together!  So glad you were able to post again, and three chapters at once!!  I feel spoiled.

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thanks for writing, look forward to more stories from you!

Summary:

This is a collection of short stories based on a picture or series of pictures. It doesn't have to be read in order. Find a chapter you like and enjoy.  It includes some non consentual sex and some aspects of horror. This is heavy BDSM. Please don't read if it isn't your thing. 18 and up please.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5000 Read Count: 49712
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 22 Sep 2014
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: A Master's Training

The animated gif's really add to the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks. That's the idea for this project. Just doing pics and short stories.

Summary:

Rosalie Hale is a single mother trying to escape her past. After moving away and getting a fresh start she thinks she's done just that until she gets a mysterious envelope. Someone knows her secrets and is threatening to reveal them unless she does everything he says. (This story contains adult themes, and may contain rape or other forced sexual situations)


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2530 Read Count: 13393
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2015 Updated: 13 Jun 2015
Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looks like a good start...