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Bio:
I am a single mom and teacher. I love being both.
I am not an author. My writing is.....ya, just not gonna go there!Ü
I love Twilight Fan Fiction...and although "others" may think differently, I DO NOT HAVE A PROBLEM (she says in her snarkiest and most sarcastic voice possible).
The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into. NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.
This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.
Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;
http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com
Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.
I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme copyrightbabylou23@2010.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Please Remember Me
I really like the story so far. Is Tanya the little girl that Edward saved that was taken by the loan sharks?
Hmmm. Who did Edward call? My guess is Alice...who I am thinking was/is Bella's best girl friend and also friends with Edward. I also assume she hasn't given up in the hope of finding Bella alive and well.
Author's Response:
You will find out about Tanya later, He is not calling Alice but the relationship between him and the person, you are correct about. thank you for reviewing
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Please Remember Me
Why does it seem that everyone but Rose has abandoned him? He tried to kill himself and she's the only one who was there? I understand that he has probably pushed everyone away because they have probably tried to urge him to move on and get help, but still? It makes me sad for him. I am sad for Rose too.
Author's Response:
I guess time will tell, thank you
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I don't hate Edward...he is lost, completely and utterly lost. His behavioar is self destructive and totally understandable. However, Rose is right-he needs help, badly! He's swirling around above the drain ready to go down.
Question: I assumed that Emmett and Edward were brothers. However, when Rose was thinking about Emmett and Edward growing apart and Edward being "like another son to Charlie" I got the feeling that Emmett is Bella's brother/Charlie's son. Who does Emmett belong to?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you can see how lost he is. Most reader don't understand his action right now, I'm happy you do. Emmett is Bella's brother, charlies son. We will find out about him as we go on. I hope I answered your questions enough :-)
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
Do you want to hear from Bella pov? And what she has been up to or do you want the entire story told through Edwards’s pov. Let me know.
Um, I'd like to vote a, "Hell Ya," on getting a Bella POV... sneaky girl throwing that in there, but I still love ya... ;)
Author's Response:
lol, thanks,
Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.
This story is about how the strength that family love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.
check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com
Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.
I do not own twilight but I do own Speak copyrightbabylou23@2010.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27210
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 -
I really like this story, too. I don't know how you're writing two at the same time.!
I do have some confusion that maybe you could clear up. I wasn't sure of some things and when I went back into the story I still couldn't quite get my answers, so...
Bella was in Phoenix for 6 years. Leah is 5. Bella mentions that Em came and helped her after Jacob was murdered. She also mentions that Em was there in Jacob's place when Leah was born. Also, Rose has made Jacob's garage prosper after her purchase, but that seems like it would take longer than 6 months to buy and be successful. That had me wondering about the timeline of Jacob's actual death.
DOES ALL THAT MEAN JACOB WAS KILLED BEFORE LEAH WAS BORN?
I assumed that the tragic event that has made Leah stop speaking was seeing Jacob's murder, but if he died before she was born, then something else has happened that we are yet to find out? Hmm...
Author's Response:
Lol brillant,I guess only time will tell.
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Hmm, differnce in Edward and Anthony's relationship compared to Bella and Leah's? I don't think Bella loves Leah any less/more than Edward does Anthony...they both seem like loving parents that would do anything for their child, but there is a huge difference in Anthony and Leah. It seems that while Leah is traumatized and not speaking, Anthony is happy and loved. However, that last line makes me think that Edward is worried about either something happening to Anthony or something that did happen to him before he got him at six months (both in regards to something that Anthony's birth bitch may/did do). There is a huge difference in Edward and Bella too. Bella is broken and while Edward may have been hurt (again, by the birth bitch), he doesn't seem broken, just yearning for something more.
Author's Response:
i think your spot on so far :-)
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Welllll...it's hard to say Edward did the wrong thing when Leah responded to him and the piano so well, butttt, he should've made sure that Leah's parent(s) knew where she was. He is after all a Dad and a Police Officer...however, he is a man first. ;)
I am so confused about what happened to Jacob and Leah. Cuz now it seems that Jacob may be the bad guy if Leah was so frightened that she had a panic attack because of Seth. Hopefully Em will enlighten us when he talks to Edward.
Author's Response:
I'm sure Em will help Edward see the way. I will also say the Jacob is a good guy in this story. thanks for reviewing
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Connections....like Em calling Rose "Rosie? or Esme and Carlise already knowing who Bella is? (I wonder what would have happened if Esme actually came out to get Ant that first day he meet Bella and Leah, instead of just calling him in?)
I can't help but feel that something really awful must have happened to Leah, or Bella, or both of them while they were with douchbag, er, I mean James. I understand that just being taken can cause the kind of trauma Leah is going through, but her voluntary muteness makes me think even worse things occurred...I hope not! :(. I didn't realize that Leah never knew her father, poor Bella! I guess Leah's panic attack with Seth must have been because he was a strange man. I am wondering if her being comfortable with Edward is because he's a daddy and that makes him different than other men? or Is it because Edward looks like Anthony to her and she really likes Ant?
Loving this story...and, I feel better knowing I am not the only one that CAN'T hold a child and bend down to pick something up without being able to get back up before falling on my ass!
Author's Response:
The hard part of understanding what Leah went through, is that she the fact that she doesn't talk about it. I wanted a story where is about more than just Edward and Bella, so Leah is a major role in this story, Anthony also has a role to play and I'm happy that peopel are generally enjoying the children's relationships.
Thank you
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Newton *she snears likje they did on Sienfeld when they said Newman*! Poor Bella. I love Anthony. I can't wait for him to bring Leah around.
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
It took me a minute to realize that this chapter was really an update, I kept thinking, "Didn't I already read this?" Finally I realized it was just EPOV of some of the events of chapter 6. Duh-I'm a dork! I really liked you doing that though-having the thoughts of both Edward and Bella about the same events really makes you understand their developing relationship.Ü
Author's Response:
thank you, I'm glad your liking each pov. I might try to do more since people like that.
EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.
Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77199
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 50: On The Road Part 1
Sometimes the chapters are just sooo much better from EPOV... I'm Just Sayin.
I think Bella better watch out because Edward is one horny fucker and I don't think he's gonna come up for air for weeks after they are married... again, I'm Just Sayin! ;)
Author's Response:
I think you may be correct. lol. Thanks so much!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Return To The Scene Of The Crime
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha!!! LOL!!! Can't wait for more...Ü
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed that!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: The Ugly Truths
Hee hee! Now I can't wait for the conversation Edward has with Charlie in the backyard...goodtimes.
Author's Response:
that's coming up next! THanks very much!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler
After getting Edward's POV on the first day he's gone to London I realize that he's got it much worse than Bella...at least she has Em, Rose & her Dad. Poor Edward has Alec (and Jasper & Alice); hopefully the work will keep him from brooding too much. I can't wait until his POV for the proposal...*sigh*!!!
On another note...I started Parma High (the rec you gave at the end of V&V last chap). I love it!!! I did tell Lady Gwynedd how I stumbled onto her story ;).
Author's Response:
Edward is in a bad way. At least back in L.A. Alice keeps him from being too much of a hermit...in London he's just sad. Parma High is great. If you have a chance, read some of her other stories....I enjoy her writing. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
So, the end of this chapter...much more intimate in EPOV. I don't know why that is, it's not like he's any more experienced than she is. Hmm... ;)
Author's Response:
horndogs rule! lol. Thanks! Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
It's love having Edward's POV after reading in V&V. Now the whole part when Bella arrives to the hotel suite in England and encounters Alec (and um a "friend") is much more interesting...hee hee!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
any probs, let me know.
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
Kayso... I have learned my lesson: Always read the updates to LRM when they post! If I had read this before the llast update to V&V, I soooo totally would've understood Edward's behavior in pushing Bella away in the last chapter. Unfortunately, I think Edward's fears have merit... I keep waiting for something with the anon flower douche to happen too. I am very egar to read Edward's perspective of the prom, the time he spent during the obligation to the Katie girls b-day party (with gropin grandma-lmao), and all that went down with the phone call from Jasper that left the last chappie of V&V with some tension.
Author's Response:
thank you very much. I've been getting a little grief over the latest V&V... but that means readers are passionate about the story. it's all good! Thanks again!
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 46: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star
I so hope Emmett shows up in a Grandmaster Edward t-shirt! ;) I am eager to she Bella's side of things in V&V...I guess I want to see why she feels so guilty about taking the ranger's life, because I wouldn't if I was in her shoes, but it does fit her character. I also can't wait until Edward gives her the mustang... she does need a new car after all... even if it was just a broken window the reminder of what happened with that car would be too much.
Author's Response:
lol. she has guilt trips about everything anyway....you touched on an issue (the car) that is addressed in the chapter I just posted. Thanks so much!
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After
The naughty pic to Edward in his POV was priceless!! Bella would die if she knew Jasper saw it... so the next time Jasper & Bella are together in V&V I am totally going to wonder if Jasper is thinking about seeing it and I sure he would be acting more embarassed than anything...hee hee. Unless he tells Alice, then it's a matter of time before Bella finds out, ;) I was also dying at the nighttime "cope a feel" scene from EPOV (or should I say dream),,, I wonder if Bella will ever tell him? I am so glad you're writing both POV!Ü
Author's Response:
lol. Thanks glad you liked the chapter. poor Jasper...but then again he knows how to play it cool.
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 45: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated
Wow, just wow! So much more heart renching reading it from Edward's perspective. I really LOVE how you had Bella at the hospital and waking up in EPOV...the wait for V&V for this part would have been too long ;). Also, with Bella being unconscious, how would you write all that good stuff?Ü
Author's Response:
he's feeling more emotions than B. She's just feeling a lot of pain. Thanks so much! next LRM now posted.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)
I've been away on vacation without internet access- LRM was the first update I read. So glad....it made my day! I think it was a tie between the Tantra chair and Edward/Chris when Edward called the woman in Pennsylvania as my favorite parts!
Author's Response:
i liked Chris hiding in the closet myself...and Edward's inner drunk musings. lol. Thanks so much! the next chapter is up now.
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389629
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
I can't wait to read on...This is going to be crazy fun!Ü
Author's Response:
Thanks, I´m glad you´re enjoying it so far! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
Yes, Seth is a cutie. Jacob is beyond stupid-and Leah kinda deserves him-Bella's right, they are perfect for each other! ;)
I am not a very patient person, therefore, I am dying to get to the point where we are at the prologue in the story. I hope with all this character building that Edward and Bella won't have to wait too long to figure out that Sir is Edward and Pet is Bella...*sigh*...after we finally get caught up to the prologue. Which will be in how many chapters, exactly? Not that I am eagar or counting or anything like that!Ü
Author's Response:
Haha! you are too funny! Patience will get you rewarded! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Happy New Year!
Laterzz:)
Krazi & Mojo
xoxo
One last treat before I go... I give you chapter 8's title: Twas a Night with Sir... and All Through the House..
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
That was, um, ya, *insert gulp here*, a very good chapter. ;)
I cannot wait for them to meet. The anticipation is killing me.Ü
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee! So here´s to TGIF! Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers! Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!
Laterzzzz:)
Krazi and Mojo
xoxo
www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!Ü
Author's Response:
Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
I love how much Edward loves her...and I can't wait for him to find out that she's always felt the same way. ;)
One wee little question: Were they in Bella's sub room? I thought that her sub room was a "free zone" and he couldn't go all Dom on her there...or is that only if Bella doesn't want him to?
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
Wow, um, ya, that was quite intense...and f*c%awesome!!! ;)
I guess that you may redo the last chapter from Bella's POV, so that means they prolly won't discover their true identities for awhile, huh? Well, that's just mean so you know! ;)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
Don't you dare fuckin quit this story!!!! And hopefully you're drinking that Kettle One in celebration of a job well done!!! Please tell me we are going to get an EPOV of the dinner party?! ;) OMG, I am so happy that they know. Yay, yay, yay, yay!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Best chapter yet! I love when it's EPOV...he reacted just the way I thought he would. Although, I am not sure how to take his last words? Was he shocked, surprised, angry, mad, totally fucking exctited? Of course we all know Bella will take it the wrong way... I am sure she's been chanting, "Please don't make me go, please don't make me go," since leaving the Cullen's! ;)
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Poor Edward-left hanging by Bella...at least we all know she loves him too...I just hope she's honest with him. Awesome chapter!!!Ü
BTW-I love, love, love the pictures in the story. Glad you're keeping them there. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...
The wait for this chapter was worth it! I loved every part of it. I am kinda hoping that Mojo doesn't "love" Edward right away. I think it would be hysterical to have Edward fighting to win Mojo over... hee hee. ;)
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...
Doobie, Doobie, Doobie... Doobie, Doobie, Doobie...Agent P! Sorry, but I couldn't resist... I think that's why I love this story so much: even with all the sexiness, love, and angst, you make me lmao with things like "Perry the platypus" and Mojo vs. Edward. Awesome chappie! ;)
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...
Sooo glad that you have the Blog...cause I love the pics. I actually looked at them first so that I didn't have to stop reading... it worked out nicely (hee hee).
I can't believe that Leah is saying this shit to Bella? Wasn't the anulment done and sent to Jacob as well? Obviously Jacob didn't bother to tell Leah about the Pre-nup that was done between Bella and him with the "cheating" clause.... So VERY happy the Edward punched him... I just hope he didn't hurt his hand (you know being a surgeon and doctor). Don't think Charlie will arrest Edward... in fact I think he'll be secretly elated that Edward was able to do what he couldn't do. I feel soooo badly for Sue and little Seth having that vial bitch around... I can only imagine what kind of "Satan Spawn" Leah and Jacob are going to produce *insert willys here*... ;)
I can't wait to see what is in the contract and to see if Bella will move in with Edward when they get back to Seattle. I also hope that Bella sets Edward, once and for all, straight about her feelings towards him and hoe they are both on the same page...... When you think about it, they've been in love with each other for over half their lives...so why things may seem to be moving fast, it's really just the physical part they had left to develop, the emotional attachment has been there for a very long time. I guess that's my way of saying, that for this story, they can move as fast as they want!Ü
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! Checkout the blog for a teaser to chapter 18! Krazi xoxo
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...
Hee Hee... is Mojo gonna get some doggy lovin going on now? With his horny mom and new dad he's got to feel left out... I only hope Edward got him a girlfriend, unless Mojo doesn't swing that way. ;) God, I love that dog. He must've tols his new "friend" all about mommy since they both went running to her. Can't wait to read about the "deal" Edward made with him... no wonder Mojo snuggled with his shirt... he was dreaming of his new campainion.
Leah and Jacob deserve each other as far as I'm concerned- she's just as shallow as he is; how can she be so freakin clueless? I was worried that Edward would screw up his hand, so' "phew" on that one. Poor little Seth- to be so frightened of his own sister.
Bella just needs to move in with Edward... I'm Just Sayin. I can't wait for him to give her a collar to wear all the time. I'm very happy where things are headed with these two.Ü
Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house
Esme POV...gah, ew, ick, *shivers at the thought of being in Esme's mind*! Wow! So, Ang's is Esme's spawn? That is some sick shit...but I have to wonder if Ang is even aware of this. She acted like she had other parents...hmmm
Author's Response:
Hhahhahaha ohh u want to read Esme Pov...I had fun writing it :D yah Ang doesnt know about it....Esme dirty little secret
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's
I just finished reading all 12 chaps(started this morning-too bad I had to stop frequently to tend to RL). I love this story...and surprisingly I think that Edward and Bella's situation is pretty realistic. (I've known lots of people in loveless and miserable marragies that have found each other-doing the cheating and all...maybe not the best course to follow, but it is what it is.)
OMG...love your Emmett!!! I have lmao throughout this story, but always when Em is involved...*sigh*
Looking forward to an update
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reviewing. And yes it can be realistic as we all know people who have gone through it. Emmett is hilarious and thats my Ari's doing...She awesome. Hope u like the update I just posted...happy new year
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Swing My Way
OMG! So, let me guess: Angela thinks Bella told Edward about Ben and is yelling at Bella to "get the fuck out of my house" about that; but Bella is most likely going to think that Ang has found out about her and Edward's realationship... this playing out should be good! ;)
O what a tangled web we weave when...
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick
Note to self...If the ice machine says "Out of Order" go back to the room and call room service! Ya, I had a feeling there was some sneaky shit happening after the second ice machine was out of order. Then the power goes out (isn't Eric an electrician?). Stupid psycho, soon to be in jail wackadoodle, ex-wife!!
O, btw... the first 3/4 of the chapter was quite intense...damn girls!!
Author's Response:
yes run back if u encounter the signs lol....wackadodle ex wife oh my...........lol
and 3/4 of the chapter was meant to be hot....steamy.............passionate lovin....xoxoxox
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2
So glad they are finally able to be together. So... is seems that Ang is the Queen of Denile. How sad that she is so f*c%ing stupid. Then there's the mysteriously creepy phone calls...Eric or Ang doing the stalking??? Or both teaming together...*insert shiver here*?
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2
Eric has got to be plotting sumfin...it seems like he's had some kind of psychotic break the way he trashed the house and Bella's things (ya, I am convinced it's him that did it...not enough evidence? bah! alibi...who, Ang??). I still think scary things are coming...yikes?
Author's Response:
I hope not....*huddles with you* oh im scared now.......Ari is something bad gonna happen??? :( ohhh ok...not yet she said.....xoxoxoox thank you doll for ur review....u want a teaser???
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period
Why, for the love of all that is Holy, didn't Bella DESTROY that damn tape?!? Well, okay, I'd totally want to watch it too...cause that sh*t was hawt...but is it worth keeping it around so that Ang or Eric gets ahold of it? I am really kinda stressed about this. Sooo glad Rose was with Edward to buy the ring...it is beautiful.Ü I really hope that Bella and Edward don't start to hide things (all in the name of "not wanting to stress the other out more") because that is no way to start their lives together. They need to communicate...silly kids.
BTW...love this story ;)
Author's Response:
dont worry...these chapters were supposed to be one soo we had a lot going on and didnt mean to have u guys worry for so long...xxoxo and the tape...at the moment that is the safest place until she can tell edward
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies
I can't wait for Edward to face his Mom, I was so hoping we'd get a chance to experience that! I've been wondering if Ang has been lying and buttering up to Edward's parents?
So we're being led to believe that the phone calls are coming from Eric, but we still don't really have confirmation on that yet, do we? I'm with Jessica, I think soumfin very bad is about to "hit the fan"...
Author's Response:
Edward will have him mommy time in the next chapter :) Eric that lil creep will be up soon yikes he gives me cold chills. And not in a good way LOL.
Thank you so much for your review.
x0x0x0x0xx0
Ari & DLIR
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
I am soooo glad that Esme is NOT is mother! She is an evil bitch...no wonder she is so close to Ang (and Ang has probably known this whole time that Esme isn't really Edward's mom). Grrrrrrrrr.
Kayso-VERY worried about Bella at this point. When is Edward gonna realize that, um, ya, she'd headed to disaster?
Author's Response:
hahahah is she????
teaser
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2
Um, ya, that was, whew! ;)
Author's Response:
LOL keepin fingers crossed thats a good whew :) We were sweetin writing it (if ya know what we mean!) LOL
Thank you so so so much for your review BB.
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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted
Well, now I have guilt about all the horrible things I said about Ang!!! Mmkay, guilts over! ;) I always knew it was Eric, but how the hell did he hook up with Laurant. Sooo...He threw the phone down on the ground as he steered the car with the other hand. "Fucking bitch thinks she's calling the shots."...is the she, Esme? Cuz she's even more of a waxkadoodle than Ang...I'm Just Sayin!!! ;)
O, Edward! Why o why didn't he listen to Ang? I mean, I know why he didn't listen to Ang, but damn it!
Author's Response:
LOL your guilt didn't last very long :)
LOL waxkadoodle??? I love that it's awesome.
Eric is a creepy lil loser it will come out how Eric and Laurent hooked up in this crazy plan. Can't tell ya if you're right or not. Edward is hard headed. All he wanted was to find out why she took Bella
Thank you for your review BB!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl
I never would have guessed Esme would do it... I figured she was way too self absorbed and selfish. I didn't realize Carlise was already hurt, so I thought he was the second shot. Thanks god this fuckery is almost over and these two can start their HEA... right?
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world
Well, I guess the good news is that you still plan on writing from a Bella POV- that should me she isn't walking into the light right about now! ;) Esme is freakin pathetic... two words- Karma, Bitch! Hope Ari is doing well, and you too, of course.Ü
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance
It's Carlise, isn't it? If it was Ang, then Bella wouldn't have said, "Oh shit Edward is that...oh God Edward, I'm so sorr..." I hope to God that Esme gets charged with murder. And where exactly did the lastest gunshot come from? WTF, you two are just mean- even if you make me lmao with your little lines before the story ;).
Author's Response:
hahahah We love to make u laugh and hate in the same chapter.that awesome.........sooooo is it carlsile........i cant say. but the next chapter is written sooooo not to long for an update
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale
Okay... a bit intense, ladies! ;) I understand why Edward is so pissed at Bella right now- I even understand Rose agreeing- but, "HELLO" Bella was the one kidnapped and tortured WITH ANGELA... I totally get how she went to Angela first having experienced that shit with her. I just hope that Edward can calm down enough to understand. So, that HEA I thought they'd get, finally, not feelin it so much now! >:(
Author's Response:
hahah sooooorryyyy but we delayed the HEA just a smidge.....promise.......it will get there
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Weeping Willow
Why don't you want reviews? Afraid of the ass chewing about Edward's irrational behavior? Meh, it is what it is... I just hope that he and Bella can get past this whole fuckery and "communicate".
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Good Lawyer
Awesome! Like she'd ever say, "No." Damn, Edward's words were like wedding vows...they were beautiful. Nice job ladies.
Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company
WTF? Are you kidding me. The nerve of these two wackadoodles!!!!! Grrrrr.
I love how Edward stood up for Bella to Renee.
Author's Response:
wakadoodles... my new favorite word.lmao. thankyou so much for your review
Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman. A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH
First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138749
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: I Want My Daughter Back!
Just started reading this fic... I wasn't going to review until after I was caught up, but Carmen's behavior needed reviewing.
Off her rocker doesn't begin to explain Carmen. She's a fuckin wackadoodle! And I think she's always been that way- who uses a 15 year old boy to get you pregnant? I hope it doesn't take long for Edward to gain full custody of Claire.
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Hmmmm... I think Edward may be right about Jacob having alterior motives. Jacob had seemed so disgusted by what "the Cullen's" did before. And, really, how did Jacob just happen to meet Tanya? Bella & Claire's therapist. Too much hinkiness happening here.
After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.Ü
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
Yep, tissues were needed. I really didn't expect Emmett to react the way he did- I worry that he's going to confront Edward and do or say something unforgiveable. I also wonder how Rose, ALice, and Jasper are reacting to this news. I don't even want to think about how Xavier is going to handle it- maybe he'll surprise us all?
Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Just started this little fic yesterday and haven't been able to stop reading it when ever I get a spare moment. I am loving this story. I have my thoughts on what Edward did to end up in prison after he spoke with Charlie; as far as Bella goes... I'm still not sure what role (if any) she had to play in Evan's death. I checked out the blog too- I love it.Ü
Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
What IS wrong with Edward? My thoughts: (1) Seth mentions to Edward that Bella gets really scared and freaked out by storms and Edward panics, but then Seth tells him that Xav is there with her- which then makes Edward's panic worse. Edward is pissed and jealous that Bella didn't ask him to comfort her. OR (2) Edward finally told Emmett and Jasper the truth about his past and now that they know, Edward has his mind reeling and thinking that Bella is not going to take it well and say "bye bye"; so he braves the storm because he just has to see her and talk to her becuase he's about to lose his mind. Hmmm???
Can't wait for the teaser and the update!
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
The deep breaths aren't really helping. Just Sayin. That was incredibly gut wrenching and I just can't believe Edward spent 7 years in prison for that (I mean I can, but I can't). Bella does need to think because of Peyton. As a single Mom, I don't care how much I liked someone, if he dropped a bomb like that on me, I'd have to do some thinking too. I just hope Edward realizes that Bella's tears mean that she's upset by what's happened to him, not disgusted.(At least that is what I think). Did Edward tell Emmett and Jasper while out the 3-days fishing (or is it lobstering?)?
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
I assumed Peyton would totally be on Edward's side when he told her...kids are like that- they see the simplicity of something we adults think is so complex and make us realize it really is simple when seeing it through their eyes. I just love Peyton! Looking forward to Bella and Edward moving forward.Ü
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
This was one of my favorite chapters so far...so good. I'm nervous about Alexski now...never even thought about the fact he was still out there. It makes me wonder if Alexski has anything to do with Edward being in trouble in the prologue?
Edward's life is changed when he and his family move to the small town of Forks, Washington. Being a teacher as a vampire proves to be a bit more difficult than he'd once imagined. Join Edward and the gang as they move to this new town and meet the chief of police's lovely daughter that will forever affect their lives.
Disclaimer: I Do not own Twilight or it's Characters.
Beta'ed by RAH70890
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107008 Read Count: 67318
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I just started this story yesterday, and now I'm all caught up. I really like it so far. This was a great chapter. I was laughing at Edward & Bella making fun of the "fiction vampire story".. hee hee. I really like the twist here at the end with Rebekah... I am eager to hear her story and why she has chosen a "vegetarian" diet as well.
Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!
Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia
Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM
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Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427989
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 *>Proposition
I am loving this story!!! So, Edward, cocky SOB isn't he? I love it, though ;). I can't help but wonder if our dear "Isabella" is going to tame him a bit?
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 **History**
Really, wtf IS up with Charlie? I have this creepy feeling when it comes to him...
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Conversation
Hmmm...I think that since Bella "read" a bit before their "talk" she had a better understanding of what Edward was trying to say; she still seems more knowledgable than I would expect if from someone who is a virgin and seemed to have a pretty sheltered life growing up. It makes me wonder if Bella didn't already have some knowledge about the BDSM world. Emmett cracks me up, he seems supportive of Edward being with Bella, as does Alice (she totally knows). Even if the Cullen clan is understanding, I don't think the "public" is going to take Edward's relationship with Bella too well; I don't think Edward will give a shit though, and that makes me happy. I love how he was on his knees for her and didn't mind. ;)
Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312761
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Yep...that's an "I Love You" for sure. Awesome...