Reviews by lluvy21
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to see what happened to Elizabeth (Bella)!

Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

Like it (except Aro creeps me out to the extreme!) but come on, when is Aro gonna talk to Bella???

Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

Can't wait for the next update! I like it!

Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! Your back! I was looking to see if this story was updated like every day lol things are getting sooooooooooo good! I bet Aro has Elizabeth (Bella) in that room! Can't wait to see what Elizabeths thinking! great job =)

Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Gosh I can't wait for the next update!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153117
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

Ok so I have no problen with polygamy as long as its consensual with the people in the relationship. BUT idk it's just so weird to read this (its good don't get me wrong!) and see Edward try to get Roasalie and Alice to get on his side with wanting to bring Bella into the family then just turn around and sleep with Rosalie. Idk I guess I just favor Edward and Bella to only be together. But it's a good story keep up the good work!!!



Author's Response:

I know it weird and I am sorry about that. I am totally team Edward and I love him and Bella, but I just got the idea for the story and went with it. And I hate to say it but sometimes sex is just sex and I hate to admit that in this chapter that is exactly what it was.

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: abandon and sacrifice

Ok so I first started reading this story and liking it but then it was like she was just getting raped and raped and raped and edward just wasn't getting and and years went by, shouldn't they be kinda old now? And she abandon her kids absolutely no  relationship w/ them and edward is abusive to them and there ALL Fudged up now. I dont understand why your writing this. I mean it's like it's not even a beginning, middle,end story but just something to goddamn depressing.



Author's Response:

trust me there is a piont to this and if u remember the chapter where the kids were all fudged up it was a look into the future and right there, edward is 36, they had there kids young remember in the last chapter bella is only gone from the house for 3 years, this edward is one obsessive mofo who cant get enough of the chase he gets from bella. now i definantly do have this whole story figured out and in the end you'll figure out y this story is like it is.

thnx 4 the review

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Preface: Renesmee Cullen is a typical junior in college visiting her grandfather Charlie Swan on Spring Break. At a Forks diner one night, she meets her mother's high school friend Jacob Black, owner of a local garage and the new Chief of the Quileute tribe. The events that follow soon thrust her into a world of the unknown—a world of danger, mystery, and ultimate tragedy as she and Jacob race to unearth secrets of the past before it's too late.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73300 Read Count: 1221
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2010 Updated: 19 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Say Goodnight

Love this story! Cant' wait until the next update! You did a good job of creepy James I feel like he's right outside  my door lol



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! I should update tomorrow. I have 12 chapters written so far.  Glad you like my James. :)))

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238934
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loves it! Can't wait until the next update. Keep up the good work. =)



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Pets: Bebe by Maren Smith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade.  But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.

Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters.  She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life.  She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves.  And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Ok so first, I LOVE THIS STORY! But... I'm kinda confused,so hopefully you can help me out.

1st: I've heard about your stories Pets: Bach and Pani's story but I havent been able to read them so maybe that why I'm kinda confused. But who are Bach and Pani to Bebe?

2nd: Does Tral even like Bebe? Like as in being in a relationship.

3rd: Is Tral the only guy that did any thing w/ Bebe?

4th: So will Tral be going to jail because he slept w/ Bebe? even though she's human and not like a dog or anything?

5th: And lastly is this story something you thought of by yourself? Or is it like something that is already known and you make your own stories out of them? Kinda like Across The Universe. Omg please don't hate me I read that story first because I didn't know that they like stole the idea from you but I think I undestood that one better because the names and stuff and I could picture them because it was the twilight cast.

Well I really hope this helps you help me lol. And great job keep up the good work, can't wait for the next update! ;)

 



Author's Response:

Okay, since you read Across the Universe, you've actually read the beginning of Pets: Bach's Story and Pets 2: Pani's Story.  ATU was the exact same stories of Bach and Pani with only the names changed to Edward and Bella.  Hopefully, that will help with the confusion.  Bach and Pani aren't anything more than a call-back to the original story.  Bach is Tral's uncle.  There is no relationship to Bebe at all.

Yes, I thought of this story myself (well, my parrot helped).  I have been writing under the name Darla Phelps for years. 

Tral will not be going to jail. 

Bebe hints in previous chapters of sexual abuse suffered at the hands of guards in the Awful Place. 

Tral has been alone a very long time and is a very decent guy.  He is only just coming to terms with Bebe being people.  He would not have had sex with an animal, but once that switch was thrown in his brain, the loneliness crept in and he reacted.

Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Ohhhhh. Ok that helped me out alot lol thanks and great job love the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Awwwwwwwwwwwww! I loved that she picked the guy! I'm sure there very happy together! So sad to see it's ended though. And idk what Sir and Ma'am were smoking thinking she was gonna go back with them lol but anywho great job! ;)

Life In The Balance by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

Bella’s hopes, dreams, life and future were violently ripped away. She finally finds the strength to do what it takes to save her sanity but at what price? Can the man hired to help her remain professional long enough to save her life?

Warning:  This story contains violence, abuse and death. If you are sensitive to those issues, this isn’t the story for you.

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Awesome banner made by Rosalynn (Rosalynn7885)

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 266053 Read Count: 14118
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2010 Updated: 31 Aug 2014
Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - How I Got Here

Ok love this story! Great begining, great everything! Can't wait for the next update!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it.  I hope to hear from you more as new chapters post.  Thanks so much for the review - D

Summary:

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Edward Cullen is a hematologist by day and a serial killer by night. Because of mysterious circumstances surrounding the death of his mother, Edward is raised by Carlisle Cullen, legendary former F.B.I. agent. Sensing his dark tendencies at an early age, Carlisle molds Edward into a weapon for justice. Edward believes he is unfeeling and emotionless, so he hides behind the facade of a happy-go-lucky family man. Bella, a recovering alcoholic with a dark past, wants to know the real Edward. Can she ever face the monster within in him without being devoured herself? Will a new serial killer in town give Edward the most exciting game of his life?

 


 

Thanks to my beta Twimarti for her superb help in getting this fic ready! This story is a slight Dexter crossover, in storyline and character behaviors. No characters from Dexter will appear. All pairings are canon. Story genre is Horror/Romance/Mystery  Warning This story is going to be very violent, and in a later chapter will have a non-sensational depiction of rape. NC-17 for a reason, but will have a HEA.

Banner by me and the awesome blinkie is by Betti Gefecht

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42561 Read Count: 6949
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2011
Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 ** Beginnings **

just reviewed because i didnt want edward to get me lol keep up the good work!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129742
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Hate

Like it I've never really been creeped out when reading somthing but this i actually was until the end when i the female monster had a heart and saved bella. Anywho loved the story keep up the good work, update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Wow that's great you were creeped out! LOL  Thaiger Lillie is  the mastermind behind everything creepy!

Thanks for reading and commenting!