Reviews by mselyn28
Summary: Past Featured Story

Teacher's Pet Banner

 

Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Late for Class

Awesome start.

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble

Great twist!

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672713
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Antipasto

Another wonderful chapter, but why is Bella such careless, spastic,self-centered biotch? It's real good when a writer can make a character a palpable nuisance.  Thank you!  

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

That was funky! I Love the head noddin feel of it and I'm sorry I just learned about this story. Off to read the rest!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Awesome chapter! Are we going to see Edward be more ruthless?

 

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Bella

I love Mr. Sprinkles! Please change your Facebook settings Bella! Alice driving the Hummer was hilarious! I love how she can drop it and make it clap in thigh high boots one moment, and be totally inept in stilettos in the next. Thank you!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427900
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Welcome to your new location! Great chapter can't wait to see how Senator Cullen gets down!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533069
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: The Twilight Zone

Loved this chap! The whole bedroom scene and Bella fake snoring was hilarious! Unexpected reaction. This entire series has been soo good! I'm sorry for all the drama I'm reading about after the fact 'cuz it such a good story. 

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: NuMb

Awesome chapter!

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


banner by SoapyMayhem



banner by JA Mash


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 44071
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Awakening

That was HOT!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324422
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion

Wonderful, that was hot! I'm just not sure about Bella confiding in Charlotte. I can't wait to see the outcome of that! Thank you.

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes

Thank you! Welcome back!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?

Thank you!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - My Confessions

Thank you! 

 

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

That was heartbreaking and incredibly mature on Bella's part to make a rational decision  like that given the extraordinary circumstances. I would love to see it from epov and how Maggie is put in her place.  

I don't review as often as I should, but its a great fic. Looking forward to the update! Thank you. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028764
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 271: Chapter 271

Awwe! That great seeing Rose's pov. Thank you.

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 223: Chapter 223

Thanks for the intermission!

 

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 208: Chapter 208

Awe! Great pics. Cool snippet, can't wait for the convo between Alice and Edward. Thank you.

 

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

Bwaah! Cute ;D

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

Oh wow! Soo good! Thank you!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

Wow! Super Seminal Spunky Powers! Woo hoo! Lol!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 293: Chapter 293

Woo hoo! Finally revealed and admitting their love! Wonderful thank you!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 251: Chapter 251

Yess! She's finally putting it together!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 312: Chapter 312

Oh thank you! I've missed it also!

Higher by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary: Past Featured Story

higher

Summer of 1994: Dial-up internet. Pagers. Walkmans. AOL chat rooms. O.J in a white Bronco. And blazingly hot weather in Brooklyn where eighteen-year-old Bella Swan is filling her days making ice cream sundaes before she starts college. But one long night – full of Ecstasy, subway rides, dark dance clubs, and a boy she doesn't want to stay away from – may change everything. ExB, mostly canon. AH. HEA. 

Banners by KrisMkyStitch and Deebelle1

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155380 Read Count: 127035
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2013 Updated: 01 May 2013
Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: The Tunnel

Such a good story. Thanks for the music! Do you remember Paper boy? And the Luniz?

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Swan: Ice Cream Scooper

Awesome! Totally into it! 

 

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Dial Up

You are taking me back! With the roach stompers! LOL

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Future

The Friday reference was hysterical! RIP Yvette Wilson! While a sequel would be greatly appreciated, I really love trip down memory lane! Psst... Could please put Edward in some Karl Kani, FuBu, or CrossColors pleasssee?!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Egg Rolls

Wow. Where do you go there? I'm glad Bella clocked Rose, but I hope they are not playin on her vulnerability.  I hope she gets to eat sometime soon too. Food that is. LOL

 

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: A New Day

My heart is racing! That was sooo amazing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm sooo glad that Bella chose to remain with Edward!  I want to know what kind of damage was done to the pool house that cost 7k! I can not wait to see the redemption for them both. Because you can't continue having them turnthe other cheek. Thank you for another good chapter!



Author's Response:

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That's just awwfull! I wish esme would have used the pitcher to hit Renee in the head! I hope Bella doesn't fall for that spiel her mother was spouting! Thank you for another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Incredible! It's crazy that jake and Paul continue to get away! But was surprised when bella and Edward got the news about the baby. Was not expecting the proposal either! I hope she doesn't go to see Charlie now that she's pregnant! Another good chapter!



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awesome! Everyone is finally getting what's coming to them! Is Phil bringing a reformed Renee to the wedding? Also, how did Jacob know about the "bastard" ? Did Tanya know that Bella is pregnant too? I loved how broke down she appeared, that trash dumpster scene was funny! It reminds me trading places! Thanks for another great chapter !



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thank you for a wonderful story! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 4 (Part 5)

Thank you!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 5 (part 2)

Nooooooo! I can't take it with the  morsels anymore, but thank you none the less!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

I am rolling! That was hilarious! Thank you! Can't wait til the next update!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 8 Part 2

I sure hope he heard her comment! Thanks! Can't wait for the update. 

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 16 Part 8

I love this story!

Wow! How did Edward go from being angry at the photo shoot, concerned for his kid's wellbeing, having a (firm) talk with Tanya, to not showing up at home when he knows his son is ill? It think I got lost between the studio to the house. What's missing?

 

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 17 Part 13

Whaaat?! Omg! I wondered about Charlie's paternity from the Git-go! Awesome, can't wait for more!

Mate by she_viking Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

mate

“His gaze travels up and down my body, and I watch as he palms himself through his jeans, almost as if he’s unaware of it, but I can tell he’s straining against the button fly. Then, he leans over me again, and this time I don’t shut my eyes.

 

“Mate.”

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15277 Read Count: 8399
[Report This] Published: 05 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Feb 2016
Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thank you! Can you suggest other stories that are similar to this style? I just don't want it to end.

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I absolutely loved this story! I would love to see it continue a little longer.  It was raw, and didn't sugarcoat. It was so well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter!