Reviews by Chicsarah
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171464
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Bella!  I wonder what it was like to live with Renee.  I like the way you have split up the POVs.  I wonder when we will hear from Bella.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am seriously loving this story and the Cullens are universally awesome.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am glad that Bella can at least see that life can be different.  And even if she isn't "all better" she has to be getting a little better!  

More Edward please!!!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Rose isn't such a bad person.  Its very cannon that she stuck up for Bella when she was really needed.  I hope she can work on whatever issues she has so that she and Emmett can get back together.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I was so worried about what Bella alluded to a little while ago.  I am sorry she had to see Renee again, but its nice to know that Renee is starting to get some of her just desserts.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I can't believe that Bella didn't realize it was a date.  I am glad she wised up.  Hand-holding and dances!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That was a very creative date.  Very romantic -- just what I would expect of young Edward.  I hope they practice kissing some more soon!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

You are very brave to share that with all of us. This story does read like it comes from a very real place.  Thank you for writing it!

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great chapter length -- a lot of information, but it was done w/o getting long winded.  I like cocky Edward, but I have a feeling that the date is either going to be a disaster, or we see another side of him!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved seeing the other side of Edward.  I am glad that Bella opened up to him -- that has to mean she sees something more in him, too!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooh, I loved that he showed up unannounced.  I am glad that he is including Seth.  It seems like he is also trying to make things easier for her.  Its sweet.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I knew he was trying to take care of her -- I love it, it is so sweet.  I hope there is lots more where that came from!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow -- that was unexpected, but very welcome!  I also loved how he went from an animal to really taking care of her afterwards.  Love that they are going to have a sleep over!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Renee is so nutty!  The funny thing is that my father and step mother are weekend nudist, so I know how Bella feels. (Although, I should say, they do not live on a commune or have group sex...well, at least that I know of). ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :0) My step Dad's first wife is an nudist, I've never met her but I've heard some stories from my step brother about trying to bring friends home from school only to find Mom naked in the kitchen cooking or doing something else.

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Edward's POV
"Yea?" I grab my brand fucking new cell phone off the hotel nightstand. The fucker woke me up, this better be important.
"Ed, you awake?" Em's voice comes down the line.
"I am now fucktard." I grumble looking at the 3:30 am flashing on the clock.
"Dude Bella and Rose are wasted, I mean drunk off their asses. I had to carry them out of the bar." He laughs.
"What the fuck Em?" I'm not sure if I'm mad that he called me about drinking women, or that he let them get drunk.
"So we go to Bella's bio Mom's nudist commune cult place, and I mean her Mom greats us butt ass naked. Then we meet this guy with a monster cock, wearing a leather loin cloth. All these people were chanting and dancing naked. It was wild. They tried to get us to get naked and we declined. Well any fucking way..."I interrupt his ass.
"You fucking let them stay there? What the fuck Emmett, you should have loaded them back into the fucking car, and gone back to fucking Seattle!" I yell.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Gah, the nanny?  That is so not going to work out.  I think that Bella and Seth and Edward and Faith will make a nice little family...who do not need a nanny!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought chapter 1 was very well written.  I am very eager to see what kind of conversation Bella and Edward have and how their relationship will progress.  I am glad that Edward correctly sussed out Bella and Jacob's relationship.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OK, its official, I'm hooked!



Author's Response:

Well Good!! and welcome to my story...

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Whew!  That was hot! And Edward say "No masturbating allowed," well, that was hot too!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Excellent chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I liked this scene.  I wish I could see what the collar looks like!



Author's Response:

i posted on my extra's page, under the chapter heading photos ...it's just the front of it but you'll get the idea...I love to keep my readers happy...lml

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I liked that Bella felt comfortable using her submissive role in the restaurant.  I like your story very much!



Author's Response:

Thank you...Bella just fell into her sub-mode without thinking ....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...lml

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Again, another good chapter!  I can't wait to find out what was said that made Bella react that way! Edward's Dom moments are SO hot...especially the ones where he is correcting her.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I have a teaser for you. BTW...I like the correction moments myself...lol

“You know what I think?” He raised his eyebrows “No I don’t but I would love to know love to hear it”

 

“I think you are wrong …“ Edward raised his eyebrows in disbelief, but I went on to explain before he could interrupt my train of thought. “ …about us needing to go to the club more often just to let people see us. I think we should go as you have already planned but not any extra times just to appease your adoring public.” Edward got that perplexed look on his face again.

 

“Think about it. All anyone really knows is that I showed up one night with Aro’s card. You yourself were kind of intrigued about how I knew him.” Edward nodded

 

“Your right I was, Aro doesn’t give them out.” I went on with my theory, while Edward’s hands moved down to rub my bottom.

 

“Then the next thing anyone knows is that sometime within the next week, you and I got together and then when they see us I’m sporting your collar around my neck. Now in order to justify why that happened they come up with all sorts of circumstances that would explain it. Which is alright but then like an arrogant child who is looking for attention from their daddy, they start spouting it to others, knowing it’s going to get back to you”

 

“Is that the psychologist talking? Because let me get this straight. They…” he pointed to my computer “… are the arrogant child and I am the daddy, and they are doing this to get a rise out of me?” I nodded.

 

“And it’s working”

 

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

That was a good chapter -- I am so glad that Bella stood up to Tanya!  I can't wait to see what Edward has to say about it!



Author's Response:

Sadly I don't believe that Bella has heard the last from Tanya...lml

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Wow, poor Bella.  She is so strong to have survived that.  It is really surprising that having been through something so horrific, that she is OK with bondage but not OK w/ the sound of the caning.  I suppose that she finds some comfort in overcoming those fears.  I hope that James really gets what is coming to him.



Author's Response:

The differance is in the consent...Bella allows Edward to do those kinky things to her..lml

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the start of this. I am looking forward to seeing what happens when she and Emmett meet again.  

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aw, I am so glad their reunion was so sweet.  Back off Jasper -- where's Edward???

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't wait to find out what Alice did...I love that Jasper was in love at first sight.  I also want to know more about Emmett/Edward/Bella.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor Alice and Jasper...I hope that Emmett realizes that it wouldn't work sooner than later.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good for Carmen for telling Edward that he had embarrassed Bella.  I really want them to start talking again.  Also, it would be nice if Edward brought her a kitten as a piece offering.  I know you have already written most of this story, so I will read on to see if it happens.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Poor Rosalie!  I feel so bad for her.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yeah!  Great story so far -- I can't wait to read more about Edward and Bella getting to know each other.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Its really sweet to think of Bella nestled all nice and snuggly against Edward on a horse.  Wish it was me!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Good for Bella -- she had every right to go looking for Emmett!  I am glad that Emmett had that epiphany!    

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Yay!  I can't wait to read more about Alice and Jasper -- I hope she's not stubborn or has silly ideas in her head that would keep them apart!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I am so glad that is all resolved.  Now we have to make things good between Emmett and Rose.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Oh no, poor cows!  I hope that James and Laurent are strung up for this!  I am glad to be caught up now! 

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I can't wait for Edward's surprise!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

You did have me fooled.  I can't believe that Emmett just ruined Alice and Jasper's news though...I hope they get a little celebration, too!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Oh no!  Now that Bella has heard their names, they are not going to be content to leave her.  I hope that the boys see the smoke from the barn fire and rush off to the rescue!  

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

I hope they get those horses soon -- I am in almost as much of a hurry as Edward to rescue her and string up James and Laurent!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

I am so glad that Emmett sent for Rosie!  Now she won't have to go back, he can just keep her.  I hope they catch up to Bella soon!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Poor Rosie, Carmen shouldn't have said that.  I hope Rose takes charge!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

I tried to send a comment from the last chapter, but was having computer issues:

First, I love that Rosie just stepped in and really took charge.  I hope that this shows her that she belongs with Emmett and on his ranch.

 

Second, James is super creepy.  I don't know what Bella is screaming about, but I hope that Edward hears her too!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

James is just nasty!  I hope rescue comes really soon.  Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

I guess I understand better where Carmen is coming from.  I hope that their fight and having to show a united front against Mr. Mallory will let them put it behind them.  Good for Jenks!  I hope Bella is rescued in the next chapter!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Haha!  Good for Rosie -- I hope she kills him!  And I knew that food fight would bring the two women together...now, if we could just rescue Bella!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

You totally freaked me out!  I am glad alls well that ends well.  I will definitely read the sequel!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue

This was a great story!  Thank you for sharing with us -- I look forward to your sequel!

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183776
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

I have been trolling this website all day trying to find something to spark my interest...and here it is!  I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One

Squee!  So cute!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan

I am so glad she went to the BBQ.  I am also glad that they aren't pussyfooting around -- good for Edward for pursuing things.  

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

Wow -- talk about saying thank you!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating

I am glad that Rose told Edward that it was Bella's birthday -- still, she did get quite the present the night before!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)

I am really enjoying your story.  It will be interesting to see what Bella says since there is still the teacher issue, and I bet  Jessica becomes more of a problem.  I can't wait for your next update!

Life's Journey by JoeMomma1214 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

LJ_Banner2.jpg Life's Journey Banner 3 picture by joemomma1214

Bella is left with a baby that's not hers. What happens when she meets Edward the Pediatrician? Follow us on Life's Journey.

Rating for language, violence, and citrus...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34843 Read Count: 31444
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

He was so nice.  I wonder how they will meet again...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I hope you have enjoyed the story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Enchiladas & Store Bought Ta Ta's

Wow -- Edward is working fast!  I bet Alice has "the perfect dress" for Bella for the wedding!



Author's Response:

Never bet against Alice!  Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Dude & Dirty Harry

Very cute!  I love that Charlie is willing to sacrifice his stern Dad/Sheriff thing for a chance to meet Clint.  Edward passes with flying colors!



Author's Response:

Clint is da man.  Although if we're speaking of geriatric actors, my personal pref would be Sean Connery.  Ever since seeing him as James Bond in a dinner jacket...ooooohhhhh....yum....what was I saying?  sorry...i'm distracted too easily...thanks for your review! 

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Armpits & Coffee Stains

I like the way they met...I wonder what Edward will have Bella do for him, or will it just be to keep him company...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Edward is a bit of a puzzle at this point.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk Ironing & Snark

Edward was so polite!  I am glad, when he first picked her up for lunch, I was afraid he was being a little pervy.  I bet he shows up for dinner tonight!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Edward defines 'gentleman'.

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Red Roses & Burst Bubbles

He was breaking off the fake relationship, wasn't he?  I hope he high tails it to Seattle for their talk!



Author's Response:

um, maybe.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Bourbon & Epitaphs

I think its sweet -- for Bella's sake though, I hope he's a natural!



Author's Response:

Lol...they actually have that conversation in a few chappys.  thanks!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

Thanks for all the updates!  I am glad the Edward and Bella seem to be on track -- I am looking forward to Aspen and Bella meeting some of Edward's Hollywood friends.



Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chipmunks & Oscars

I love all the updates!  I bet Tanya is pregnant -- lets just hope that she comes clean about being married and Edward isn't accused of knocking her up!



Author's Response: all will be resolved fairly quickly. Thanks!

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Makeup Kisses & Confessions

Good for Tonya.  I am glad she finally came clean -- not only do Edward and Bella feel better, but she has to, too.  I can't wait to find out what happens next!



Author's Response:

I should be adding a chapter tonight.  Thanks for the review!

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47177
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I am very intrigued!  Can you tell me what year this story takes place?



Author's Response:

1837

Summary:

Edward is a geeky comic book writer who has been secretly in love with his over-protective best friend Bella for years. He's too shy to admit his feelings, so he secretly starts writing a comic book inspired by Bella called 'Solar Eclipse.' 

After an embarrassing incident, Edward is forced to reveal his love for Bella to his friends. While Bella spends the summer before senior year with her mother, Edward, at the behest of Alice and Rosalie, goes through an extreme makeover.

 

Will Edward learn that unlike beauty, geeky isn't skin deep, it's the core of who he is? Will Bella finally see the love that has been in front of her for the last 8 years of her life.

 

 

 

 

 


Story is AU-Human and B/E (Jacob is only involved in flashbacks.) Themes are Romance/Humor/Awkwardness

Story is rated NC-17 for language, future lemons, and depictions of teen bullying. Story will alternate from EPOV to BPOV

 

Banner by ViiolentDelight, Evenstar, and Blinkie by Rason


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72778 Read Count: 23874
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 27 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*

I am enjoying your story.  I love that Alice and Rose gave Edward a makeover.  I can't wait to see what Bella thinks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

tc

Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204605
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is a really cute, happy story.  Just what I was looking for!  I love that Edward and Bella having been living parallel lives -- I can't wait until they merge...



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love it when children get these "crazy" ideas!



Author's Response: Aren't they fun?

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I know I should be reviewing more, but I can't stop reading!  I am really enjoying your story!



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wonderful and the boys are so cute..



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Izzy's a successful woman in her own right. She's also a Hollywood heiress whose life gets flipped upside down as a result of an unfortunate event. Tired of the paparazzi, she flees from the limelight in search of who she is on her own. Sometimes you have to leave the world of make believe behind to find a snowmobiling prince you never knew you needed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79271 Read Count: 44106
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2013 Updated: 22 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Happy Endings

I really enjoyed your story. There were times I wished you would have used more dialogue, but the plot was great and ups and downs were believable and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. 

Hugs, Dee

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 9 Part 1

Ok, I'm hooked!  I just blew through 51 chapters in about an hour. I'm loving it!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you love it!