well, she can always safework, can't see? i really like this aspect of this fic. she might be innocent and naive but she is there because she wants to.

Oh :O edward is a student too??? that will be interesting..

And Mike... just ewwwww!

disgusting prick! nothing against the lifestyle (at all) but clearly he doesn't give a shit if bella will be happy or not... 

i am glad he is at least not having fun.. the pig.

Oh! I had my suspicious that she was a virgin because she seemed so afraid. But she made me so very curious! What would make a virgin to sleep with a guy like james, like that?

the funny thing is that james must just fall in love. She seems perfect for him...

God, they were made for each other! Though I feel sorry for Victoria but then again, i didn't hear her complaining...

i am just wondering what is laurent's job at the school....

god, for a miute there i thought bella would be in deep shit at the end of the night. .. that was close!

but we have so much progress this chapter...

I tried to read your story a few moths ago but it was too strong for me. But I came across it again and decided to give it another try... i hope I can manage now.. i think since i know more or less what expect, it will be easier. :) I like your writing so it would be a pitty to give up again. I am not a fan of skeeping chapters so it is all or nothing... wish me good luck haha!

OK, I don't need to say all this creeps me out because this is a given so i will refrain from now on and just comment on other aspects of the chapters.

Anyway, Charlie's training confuses me.. there are lessons that are pretty obvious but what was that about rubbing her back and kissing her shoulders? is he teaching her about intimacy and being comfortable while a man touches her?? huh!

Well, i am not necessarily surprised by carlisle's behavior but it is still shocking.... and what was that that he was saying aobut Renee, he tried what?

He also said edward wasn't quite ready... is he training edward to be the perfect husband too? wonder what that would mean.... and I also wonder whether edward is aware of what is going on..... so many questios...

well, what can I say? there are just no words. At least not about the lesson...

I think bella is a natural submissive, although she doesn't see it but she didn't put much of a fight, did her? it was an act of self-preservation, sure. But there was more there...

It is going to be hard for her to forget that she was going through this all and edward not only approved but was the one who in the end was responsible for all the torture and humiliation. Though, chances are that very soon charlie will succeed in reprogramming her and by the time he is done there will be nothing left of the innocent child that came to live in forks, just the perfect wife... I remember bella's first words in this fic... that there were no heros there, only different kinds of villains... so true.

sick sick sick sicksicksick sick sick motherfucker!!!!! i want to literally rip his balls off and feed them to him... LITERALLY.

hmmm i wonder what he would do if he knew what james did the night before...

awwwww she is lovely, isnt she? I hope they dont manage to change her so much she will lose this part of her personality..

Rosalie can be so weird.. she is sorry for bella and that is the way she treats her?

it is good that the cullen women are united... that indeed will help bella out.. now, that outburst was beyond stupid!! i wonder how bad her punishment will be... ouch!

there are few things that makes me laugh: like edward emphasis that they were not white trash. I snortted. haha! And now carslile's statement, the best of the chapter: "Let's eat before it gets cold and your mother has to start over. I don't want to wait."

I mean, seriously??? hahaha! Gosh, I repeat.. what the hell is in the water in that fucking town?

well, there might be hope for Cullen Fucker no. 4.... maybe... one can hope

oh god.. will this woman have no time off??? she will become suicidal soon..

they are both doing very well with the aftermath of the attach.. I just dont understand carlisle's attitude towards bella. it just seems funny that he lost all his interest... go figure.. who can really understand what goes through his sick mind...

so, edward will put in a fight... well, i guess it makes sense. it would be unrealistic if just out of the blue he'd become the perfect husbad...

and what is bella going to do about carlisle? and why edward asks his father to check on bella? is he an ass specialist? isn't edward a bloody doctor too? If he can't take care of his own woman, she shouldn't be allowed to take care of other people;...

awwww jasper is the sweetest man ever... i am glad alice got the best cullen after all the horror she's been through.

edward is all twistted still but he is trying, and he is going to the best source to look for advise so there is hope.. it is only going to be a long painful way ahead...

i wonder wny carlisle was worse with edward..

please... tell me edward is not going to be stupid enough to ask carlisle why bella would be afraid of him? even if bella's fear was irrational he knows better than say something like that to his monster of a father..

edward sometimes can be such a moron...  

i weep for esme.. how unfair that such a sweet person can go through so much shit??

but i am glad that one by one she is getting her boys back.. 2 done. 1 to go now.

awwwwwwww what can i say? i am crying again.... but i am afraid of what is coming next too.. i have a feeling that HEA is still far away for these two :s

awwww it is so good to see bella with her edward... but it is easy while they are in Phoenix.. they still have to talk about how they are going to behave back in forks, under the scrutiny of carlisle.

they surely will keep pretences, right?

edward has to remember that bella is still under carlisle's care since she is a minor. he can be very very detrimental if he things his edward is losing the war... i hope they are going to play the same pretences as alice and jasper

he is such a lost little boy, trying to make his momma proud.. awwwww! he is this close to be perfect.. thhiiiiiisss close!

I am in so much shock right now that i dont know what to say.. God, what is carlisle planning to do? And what does he mean by " I’m not ready to reveal everything to him yet" ?? Yet? So he plans to reveal whatever is "everything" eventually???

He is so fucked up it is not even funny! It was clear that he has been paying Embry for the past 10 year to spy on Renee. That also explains why he punished esme so severely for helping Renee to escape. And maybe, the whole reason why he asked charlie to help to "train" esme was because he wanted to have his share of Renee...

He wished bella was his little princess but since she is not, he will settle for having anal sex with her, against her will, of course... ????  :O   What the fuck???

But what i dont get is how come the fact that he didnt get the woman he wanted made him become so bitter towards all women.. he says he'd have treated Renee and Bella like royalty but i think he is beig delusional. You are what you are. A good man would never treat a great woman like esme the way has been doing for the past 30 years...

I am very much afraid of what he is capable of doing. I hope bella tells edward soon...

And couldn't these two be a bit more discrete about their new found love?? they are being stupid and careless. they should know better...

i am both in panick for what is there to come and giddy because of how lovely was their moment in the restaurant!!!  oh l'amour!

as lovely as their first time was, this just makes me more worried... i hope carlisle doesn't get to know that she is no longer a virgin.. he might think that now he is allowed to have his go too...

and let the new torment begins... i am dreading what is coming.....

Whew! Woman you are so cruel! You almost gave me a heart attach! Damn you and your brilliant mind!

I get very involved with a good fic... i heart is still beating so hard it is hurting...

WOW! has edward imprinted on bella or something?? these feelings are just so intense and he had what? one glance at her... i don't know, i am confused...

And has edward caught esme in some compromising... position?

i  dreading what is coming next. though, after reading The Perfect Wife nothing should shock me anymore.. OK, here goes nothing...

did they chop his dick? It would have been a complete service if they didn't...

I asked for slow and painful and didn't you deliver??? ;)

huh! I guess bella did not make a first good impression with her potential father-in-law... (understatement much?)

awesome! i am not against religion but i am totally pro-hot-sex-and-love!

wow! what happened to edward for him to be such a dick?

let's find out!

well it is hard not to hate edward as much as he hates himself. i think he was spot on, as far as the way he is treating his daughter goes.

while i was reading i thought, well he is clearly depressed, really depressed, not the meaninless use people use everytime to this very serious illness -- so maybe this all makes sense. he needs help.

but then he said "After what happened, I couldn´t bring myself to open my heart up to my baby girl for fear of having it broken again",

Seriously? Open my heart to your own daughter?? you shouldnt need to. she should already have a captive place, huge place, in your heart you jackass!

he talks about her as if he never really had a connection with her, like the only thing that connect them was Claire and that is so messed up i have no words..

and if he is not in a good place to rase his daughter let someone else do that until he can pull his shit together! that is all i am saying...

yes, he is a failure not only as a father but as a man. 

ok, now i am done hahaa!

i just love kids and get very protective of them, eve the fictional ones hahaha!

I surely enjoyed it! not as much as Miss Swan, but oh well...

it wqs dreamy! so sweet ...