Reviews by lilypad1588
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Sins of the Past-Carlisle's Outtake

Wow now it makes sense!  why Carlisle was so upset that Edard mated.



Author's Response:

Thought that might help.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

whatis gong on?  how is it possible?



Author's Response:

Be sure to read Carlisle's pov in the outtake. Bella is developing some of the characteristics, but she is still human...

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33

oh ni!  A fight will be brewing!  Bella is Edwards mate and now all hell is going to break lose.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I was so happy to see this update .  My heart breaks for Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174120
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....

I was so taken with this story that I read almost non stop.  I wish I would have followed when you were writing it because I had a lot to say about the chapters.  This story is awesome and I am so glad I found it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

I am so in love with this story.  I found it just looking for something new to read and I found this gem.  Once I statted I could hot stop.  The whole story from start to finish was beautiful.  My favorite part was when they realized that they were each others true love when they where getting married.

The Faith by TwilightDramaTeach Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

The Faith BannerThe Faith BannerIsabella Swan lives a solitary existence.  She is the only child of a single parent father.  Bella is also a daughter of The Faith.  She is isolated and segregated, but all that is about to change.  Today is September 13.  It’s Bella’s sixteenth birthday, and at 11:58 pm, the time of her birth, things will never be the same.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8920 Read Count: 2581
[Report This] Published: 16 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Faith

This is crazy but I am so interested. 

Summary:

 

Heartbroken when Tanya told him she cheated on him with his best friend after he proposed to her, Edward vowed to give up on love and women. Bella Swan, they shy freshman at the Univ of Wash, catches his eye.  He fights to stay away, but can he? Love can heal many wounds if you give it a chance.  Travel with Edward to see if he gives into temptation while dealing with his tainted past.

 

Rated NC-17 for language, dark themes, adult content and future lemons! Enjoy

Stephanie Meyers owns everything Twilight, but I own the plot! This is my first story I hope you all like it!!

There is now a group site for my story on facebook.  If you want to keep with with updates and fellow groupies, feel free to come find me... ;)

http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_152421278164462&ap=1

The first few chapters were reviewed by the Project Team Beta, Betas - thank you to them for their assistance.  But I am very proud and excited to have Woodlily and itsange helping me with revisions and future chapters.....THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146797 Read Count: 15151
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 12 Aug 2015
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Author Update

Congratulations  on your baby and also  on finishing  school. I will  be waiting as long as it takes.  

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 16 - Moving Forward?

I can understand why readers get upset with you when you update every few weeks.  Its because your story is freakin fantastic!  It took me 1 day to read it all to this point because RL with being a mom and all but I could not stop.  From start to now I was hooked and I did not want to stop.  I will review every chapter from here on out so here I go.  I am so happy that Edward has opened his heart to Bella and letting her inside a little.  What Tanys did was unexcusable and downright hateful!  I have a bad feeling that Edward does not have closure with his Tanya situation and I am afraid that he might do something that will cause Bella to flee even if it will be by accident.  His dream meant something and that something to me is unfinished business.  I am guessing that James met up with Tanya at the resturant and that is who Edward saw at Starbucks.  I am wondering what happened to the baby?  I am in awe with this story and I can not wait to read the next chapter!  Awesome story!!



Author's Response:

Wow...you've kind of left me a little speechless by this comment - and that usually doesn't happen to me.  I am very thankful and pleased by your comments, it means a lot to know that my readers are enjoying my story so much.  This is my first published story (where people can actually read my stuff - most of what I have ever written has been for my own benefit), and I'm still learning as I go - so again, thank you.  

As for the chapter...what can I say, Edward is still having his doubts, even if they're subconscious, and yes - he hasn't really had his closure with Tanya, so that will be a meeting that no one will forget.  There is still so much in store for everyone, please stay tuned....my next few chapters will be in EPOC, Bella will make her way back soon, she has a lot to deal with since she's become friends with the Cullens and her possible connection with Edward.  

This is going to end up being more than the 35 chapters I had planned out.  20 chapters and it's only been two weeks for the characters, lol.  Thank you again!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17-Baby?What do you mean baby?

I am so glad that things in your life are going great!  I was so excited to see the update and so much has happened and going to happen.  If the baby is Edwards , I do not think Bella would leave Edward.  That would truly kill him.  I am happy that he has stronge feelings for her but I have a bad feeling that James will harm Bella just because she is with Edward.  Great chapter.



Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with me....I truly appreciate it. So much more is due to come up and unfortunately I need to keep quiet about it :) I'm glad to see that you are enjoying the story so much. I hope to have an update soon....just don't quote me on that, lol.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129735
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

what the hell is going on?  I am glad to see that Edward is trewting her better then before.



Author's Response:

Everything will come together soon. Pwomise lol

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Grand Funk

huh!  What is up with this chapter and the date?



Author's Response:

*giggles* It was an April Fool's joke.

 

We're working on the actual chapter, should have it finished in a bit.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Taken

This fucking great!  Edward was like WOW!!  I cannot wait until he meets up with Bella again and finds out she is human and his mate!  Oh shit this is getting great!



Author's Response: Wow, thank you =) Glad you ejoyed it! Yeah, Edward was acting purely on instinct. He wanted his mate, and now! lol Thanks for reading and commenting. We appreciate it! ~Jells

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

Loved it!  Loved it!  WOW he finally got Bella and wait until he figures out that she is a human!  He is so mean to Jasper, but I am sure once Alice comes into the picture and he mates with her he will all this and that and a bag of chips!  Can't wait for the next chapter!  Kisses!1



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you liked =)

We'll post more soon.

thanks for reading and commenting

~Jells

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Gauntlet Pt 2

What can I say but, Fucking Bravo!  Excellent chapter.  You left me wanting more and I am going crazy waiting for the next chapter.  I feel for Bella because she has no choice but to go where she told to go.  If there was some way for her to escape and go back to her vampire parents.  I wonder how in the hell will Edward realize that Bella is his true soulmate even before he was born.  Awesome!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late reply!!

Thank you so much!!

I'm working on the next chapter, the wait won't be too much longer.

Thanks again,

Jells

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

oh shit!  

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

shit is going to hit the fan now!  Emmett is on the war path.



Author's Response:

You'll see ;)

 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Unbelievable Right?

You girls are so badass that dumbass people have to copy and take credit for your awesome story.  It pisses me off and I will be teloing them to take it down.  I hate dumbass people.



Author's Response:

Aww thank you. =D

 

Thankfully to you and others, the story was removed by ff.net admins. 

 

Thanks again for your support. We'll have another chapter up asap. 

 

Jells n Tyggy

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Is Edward going though the change because he does have real royal blood in him?  Or do all male vampire go though itt when real blood come to visit.  Poor Dem, his ther was taken then killed but he is a crafty one that is for sure.  Next chapter is going to be a great one.  huggs and kisses to you both.



Author's Response:

You'll find out soon ;)

 

Thank you so much, we read your previous review and your support means a lot to us.

 

Thanks again,

 

*hugs n smooches*

 

Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427897
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 **Plans**

This is going to destroy Bella!  She is going to blame herself and retreat back to her quite and sad self.

Master to you by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 188]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After Isabella's transformation into a vampire, her life changed as well. Edward changed and her whole world changed. Sweet Edward is no more and Bella has a potty mouth. Sit back and enjoy the ride between Bella and Edward. This is a BDSM story, if that offends you, don't read it. You have been warned, there are also a lot of lemons. E & B will have a HEA.

 

new banna with bella

wonderful banners both are made by:  soapymayhem

 

Beta'd by RAH07890

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43263 Read Count: 84213
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 16 May 2013
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter1 Prologue Bella's POV

Hello!  Fisrt off great story!  I really like dom/sub Edward and Bella stories just as mush as Bella/Edward dom sub stories.  I was going to review tomorrow but I couldn't wait to get this out of my chest.  I have real issues with Edward. 

 He asked for honesty in his agreement with Bella and he was not honest with her at all.  He never told her he was with many other women, that at one point in his life he was a sub and most importantly that he was bi sexual.  That is something he should have disclosed to Bella at least when he got engaged to Bella.  How can he keep nsuch a thing from her.  Not only does she have to be aware of women going after her man but men too or Edward leaving her for one or the other. 

I am glad Bella left because she really needs to figure out if this is the life she wants to lead.  Will Edward marry her or is he just going to keep her as a sub forever?  He does not even tell Bella to her face about his past! How fucked up is that? I promise you I will review everything to put up a chapter because I want to see how Edwrad is going to react wothout Bella for a while. 

 



Author's Response:

Master Edward in my story well he's a bit messed up ya know !

things will get going and you will see were this is  going I hope you

like it in the end I have put alot of thought into this!

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 I just don't understand

Ok let me start with the picture!  AWESOME! 

Edward is a selfish, cheating piece of shit.  Not only did he keep very important information about his life and life style from Bella, he also cheated on her!  They are engaged to be married!  Does the commentment he made to her and the ring she wears mean nothing to him?  Now Zed want part of the fun, Hell no!  Please make our Bella stronge and tell these fuckers Fuck you and get out!  It would be cool to see Bella get it on with Jessie and have Edwrad endure the pain Bella is going though.  Or better yet Zed and Bella can both punish Edward by having sex with each other and not allowing Edward be a part of it and make him watch.  Edward does not deserve Bella and he has to earn her trust and love back.  How could he think that Bella would allow him to be her Dom and then allow another man be her Dom aswell.  She would be a slave to them both and she would get to pleasure them both and maybe she would get something out of it.  Please give our Bella a backbone and make her their Mistress!  Oh yes!!!



Author's Response:

yes Edward was wrong he knows it  I hope you like it just a bit

and remember it is a Hea thanks for reading

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 "The Playroom"

Now thats what I am talking about!  Go Bella!  I am loving Misstress Bella big time.  I am glad she put him in his place and her demands are prefect!  She gave him herself 100% and he took advantage of it and he needed to be punished.  I loved the last whipping right on his peter!  Excellent!  Well done and I can not wait to read who Zen met up with.  I hope Edward keeps his promise to Bella!



Author's Response:

Thanks alot 

I would bet his "peter "

will remember not to go

into any holes that are

not on Bella don't you agree !!!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Close Encounters

was he secret wervice and died protecting Edward?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation

Poor Bella!  were tyey a couple or best friends with benefits?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Handling Things

Wow!  Rose should have known better then tongive orders like that and not notify the President.  I was surprised by Bella reaction to seeing Edward.  I am hoping only good things hapoen between them now.  I hope all goes well with your family.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Demands

I found this story on the homw page and after reading the first chapter I was hooked.  I laughed so hard when Bella threw the shoe at Edward.  I have no idea why Bella hates Edward so much.  Great story!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Searching for Connections

holy crap!  could Seth be his son?  how the hell could he not remember her?  Is that why Bella really hates him?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Sisterly Conversations

bOval office sex would be wonderful!  I think Alice is right and Edward has to be careful with his feelings for Bella. I think Rose just wants the people to love Edward ans does not want him tinted.  I did think she had feelings for him but not anymore. 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

This was a great chapter!  Carlisle has some nerve treating Bella like trash but she got him back good.  Seth calling Edward dada was priceless.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession

Geez what a web!  These guys were some shitty people.  You never know sometimes.

The Western by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward's a hit-man with one rule; he doesn't do women.  When he learns his next target is Bella, he makes a decision that changes his life - and hers.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84930 Read Count: 22880
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

Loved it! Loved it.  Got this beauty from Ms.Swans bookstore.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324404
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes

I am sorry about your grnadmother.

 

I just happened to find this story and boy am I glad I did.  It is awesome and different form other stories I have read.  

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - His Life

Wow!  I wonder what else will be coming out of the workwork.  I feel bad for Bella, it is like they have no personnel space.  Love this story to pieces and I can wait for the nexr chapter.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness

I don't think Edward has done anything to make things right!  She does not feel at home in that house where he fucked Maggie and she seems to be getting in all the time.  He told her he would take care of Maggie and he never did.  Edward expected too much fromBella and by him not speaking to her and explaining the lifestyle he fed her to the wolves.  Some reviews blame Bella for not speaking to him, but how was she suppose to when a. he was never home b. his job was his number and c. everything Bella tried to spend time with him he would cancel.  What the hell was she suppose to do?  Sit there and hope he will show up to dinner or even come home?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving

I think ruining her reputation would be fitting since that is all that truly matters to her.  

I feel so bad for Edward and what he went though and I kinda am upset that Charlie played him to do so.  Did Charlie know found out beforehand and what Bella to know too?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall

He is being an ass and a selfish one too.  How can be get upset with her about not understanding his lifestlye when he really never prepped her for it. She is only 18 and had no idea who he really was until she went to Cal.  Why is he so mean to her?  Is he using her to get Maggie back?  It seems that he wants nothing to do with Bella and makes all the time in the world to have lunch with Maggie and spend all his time with her.  I get that they work together but damn he needs to make time for his wife too.  I really think she should go back home and think about her life and if it is worth all this heartbreak.  Great chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 298: Chapter 298

UM..... YEAH....

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 294: Chapter 294

HIT DAMN!  WILL HR TURN HER WHEN THEY HAVE SEX?  IS THAT WHAT ALICE SAW?



Author's Response:

oh ur gonna kill me, but I don't write until the change... just this night... we are almost at the end

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 297: Chapter 297

ALL RIGHTY THEN!  I JUST LL THE BLOW JOBS ARE GOING TO BR BETTER THEN THE LAST. LOL

 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So Edward desires to punish Bella?



Author's Response:

Edward desires a submissive to teach, test, and yes punish. He wants to watch her respond to his touch. 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

oh hell no!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

there is nothing wrong with this story!  I find extremely hot and sexy and I wait for a couple of chapters so I do not have to wait to read.  please continue !

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

He is not being very fair to her.  He even said it that this is her first time and now he is going to spank her?  I have a question.  Are his feelings for Bella only D/s or does his feelings go beyond that and more of a reltionship?



Author's Response:

he doesn't have feelings for women, so this is all new to him. He's not in as much control as he thinks he is. 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

THIS SHOULD BE VERY INTERESTING 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 190: Chapter 190

I oove your pics but reading the story is worth more.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 207: Chapter 207

First, I love the pics you have for the story second, I am excited that Edward has fupinally opened his heart and mind to Bella.  love this story!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

well, hot damn!  I wonder if is dom side will change since he loves her.

 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 214: Chapter 214

well hot damn if that is jot an awesome picture!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

I wonder if he broke her arm?  I do not think she disobeyed him.  I wonder how he is going to react now?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

She needs to tell him how she feels.  Edward has no idea and I think if she did their relationship would be stronger and she will not need to use the blinfold anymore.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 229: Chapter 229

I wonder what hapoens that changes everything?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 233: Chapter 233

VERY INTERESTING! I WONDER WHAT HAPPENS THAT CHANGES EDWARD?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 234: Chapter 234

WHATS THE BIG DEAL?  THERE ARE MANY HUMANS THERE WHY SHOULD THIS ONE BE ANY DIFFERENT?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 237: Chapter 237

hmm... Edward has options now!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 238: Chapter 238

I LOVE THIS PICTURE!  I CWN NOT WAIT FOR EDWARD TO GIVE IN A LITTLE MORE.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

I WANT A JOB THERE!

 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

I REALLY HOPE THAT EDWARD KICKS HIS ASS FOR WHAT HE WAS DOING.  POOR BELLA.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 247: Chapter 247

I BET HE WILL GIVE IT TO HER!

 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

this is new!  I guess it heightens her senses.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 251: Chapter 251

LOVE THE PICS!  I CAN NOT WAIT UNTIL BELLA FINDS OUT THAT SIR AND EDWARD ARE ONE IN THE SAME.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 252: Chapter 252

HE NEEDS TO TELL HER THE TRUE BECAUSE IT WILL CHANGE HIS LIFE.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 254: Chapter 254

GOTTA LOVE SOAPY!  I WONDER IF SOMETHING HAPPENS FOR HIM TO CHANGE HER SOONER THAN HE WANTS?

 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 255: Chapter 255

WELL HOT DAMN!  

 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 259: Chapter 259

Edward has some odd training! Why in the world would someone report this story!  It is beautifully and tastfully written.  The build up to the main event is driving me insane and when she finds out its Edward I wonder if she will be mad because it kept it a secret. Love this stor!  Happy holidays to you!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 262: Chapter 262

A treat indeed!  like Edward would share Bella with anyone!  yeah right!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 263: Chapter 263

i want a Sir like him!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 268: Chapter 268

Wow! That was some chapter and pic!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 276: Chapter 276

IS IT HOT IN HERE OR IS IT ME?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 277: Chapter 277

I THINK HE IS BEING VERY UNFAIR TO BELLA.  HE HAS BEEN LYING TO HER SINCE THE BEGINNING AND SHE ONLY TOLD A HALF TRUTH BECAUSE SHE DOES NOT SEE HERSELF LIKE EDWARD DOES.  SHE SEES HERSELF AN ORDINARY AND IN EDWARDS EYES SHE IS EXTROADARY!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 278: Chapter 278

THERE, SHE SAID IT BUT WILL HE BE HONEST AND TELL HER THE TRUTH?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 279: Chapter 279

I AM SOI EXCITED!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 282: Chapter 282

Alice is s good sister!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 283: Chapter 283

very hot!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 286: Chapter 286

EDWARD NEED TO PUT BELLA OUT OF HER MISERY AND SHIE HIMSELF.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 288: Chapter 288

He really needs to put her are of her misery and mine.  I want to rsd her reaction when she sees it is  Edward.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 291: Chapter 291

I AM GO GIDDY! I LOVE IT.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 299: Chapter 299

OH MY HEART!

 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 301: Chapter 301

SHE IS GOING TO KILL HIM WITH HER PUSSY! 

 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 304: Chapter 304

OH MY!

 

 

Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

Thanks to Christag for the banner!

Thanks to Stepaine Mason for the other banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 59807
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What te hell!  She needs to escape and be free of this monster.  She would be better off on her own on the streets.  She is getting punished because of a nightmare she had no control over.  She did not chose to have her past in her dreams.  Gos only inows what kind of punishment Carlisle is going to guve her.  I don't want her to have a hea with Edward.  I want her to be free of him that life.  Even if she loved him which she was brainwashed to do, she will still live as a slave.  Look at Esme, waht kind of life is that. 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Why the hell was he so angry with her in the beginning?  Did she talk in her sleep?  The girl can not catch  a break.  I really hate this Edward and I really want her to escape and leave his crazy ass!

Summary:

 

 

Edward is a loner of sorts, who thrives in his life, striving for perfection.  What happens when he finds attraction in a broken woman?  When she rejects his normal advances, how far will he go to make sure he has the perfect plan in place?  Will she let him control everything in her life? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20753 Read Count: 5189
[Report This] Published: 16 Jan 2013 Updated: 05 Feb 2013
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I WOULD HAVE HEADED TO THE HILLS AS WELL. DUDE WAS CREEPY!



Author's Response:

Wow the reviews we have gotten for this have just blown us away.  First thanks to all of you who reviewed or pm’d us saying you can’t believe we didn’t place in the contest.  We were sad that our story seemed to not get the attention that some did however there were a lot of great entries.  The next chapter is being worked on for this story.  We are planning to wrap things with this story in the next chapter.  It will obviously be a future-take and show things over a period of time.  I like the plotted out plan that Nikky and I have for it and we think you will too.  Thanks again for being such wonderful fans and great reviewers.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Ps.. sorry for the timely manner in which this review reply arrived to you, PI’s wrap up chapter is just about ready to go off to the beta and will be posting soon.  Thanks again for all your patience and thanks for reading and reviewing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ddkc

 

ddkc

Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814520
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

please let us into his mind!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

why do I have a feeling that those rules only apply to Bella.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

DUDE IS SO CONFUSSING!

Summary:

 

Dark desires and deep-seated fantasies. Edward watches the one he covets the most…with another man. Anger rages and plans are acted out. Will Bella survive the night he has in store for her? GRAPHIC SCENES DEPICTED

 

mdd 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3479 Read Count: 7978
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2013 Updated: 04 Feb 2013
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: My Darkest Desire - Black as Night

Wow!  This Edward  is truly crazy!

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is a "What if" story-What if Ana said "No" to Christian immediately after seeing the Playroom for the first time. Would they find their way together or live their lives in different worlds?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72556 Read Count: 30609
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2013 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Perfectly Imperfect

Oh boy!  This should he interesting! 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Double Jeopardy

Very exciting to read this type of veiw.



Author's Response:

Thank you  :)

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Better Than Nice

Ana is slowly  breaking down his walls and he is still fighting  his true feelings for her.

Portal by ordlas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Why was the house on the Sound put on the market? Christian learns the reason, with profound ramifications for him and his family.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52319 Read Count: 4675
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2014 Updated: 27 Oct 2014
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Cat and Mouse

Oh crap!

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

dl

Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97745
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I read both stories  in 2 days.  I couldn't  stop reading .  Excellent  story and I hope Bella and Ronnie  are ok.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

No, no, noooooo!  She has to be alright .   Edward  is going to kills Dimitri  and maybe even little Eddie . 

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

silence

Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94710
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

That was perfectly them.  

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

She bets the best of both worlds they they deserve it.  What an amazing story and I am so sad that it is ending.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I have to start reading from here for now on. This is such an incredible story and I get all giddy when you update.  Bella was hard when they both met but all she had was her work.  I am glad that Alice helped her pull her head out of her ass and is really living. I hope all 3.5 men meet up at the cocktail party.  It will be interesting to her Edward/Anthony react to other men pinning for Bella's attention. 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This can not be good.  Anything concerning Victoria.  Why hasn't Edward made any moves to go forward with Bella?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

What a mess! How the hell can he explain this?



Author's Response:

He can't, really. Let's see how he does though. xoxo

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Congrats on publishing!  I loved that story.  He did break her heart twice and it's going to take him 3 times the effort to win her trust and heart back.

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yes you do Edward! It's easy fkr someone else so say, oh just forgive him.  Buts it is not.  She feels humiliated and he needs to reassure his love to her.