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Bio:
Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland. After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship. Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94835
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center
I have never left a review on this site beore - but I absolutely must review this story. I'd read the description and passed by this so many times, thinking it was about some guy in love with his exwife keeping on an office affair. It would end up being angsty and just not my cup of tea.
Last night I decied to give it a chance and stayed up until 4AM to finish this. The relationship was well paced and this entire story was fawlessly written. You had the meddeling ex and an angry teenager but it all came together perfectly, with out any dragged out drama. It was just beautifully written and i'm sure I shall re-read this in the near future since I enjoyed it SO much!
Now i'm off to read your other stories. Thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the great review. Glad you gave it a chance even though you weren't sure if you'd like it. Thrilled that you liked the pacing and the amount of drama. I definitely hoped I'd be able to pull that off. It's such a sweet compliment to hear that you would want to re-read it. So thrilled that you enjoyed the story! I appreciate that you took the time to review!