Reviews by lanigirl96003
Summary: Past Featured Story

FBI psychologist Bella Swan is being stalked by one of criminals she helped put behind bars. When she is forced to leave her home town to lay low for a while, she meets the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. Is he really who he says he is, or is he working for the stalker?

Thank you NoelleSeven for the banner!!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277257 Read Count: 40875
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 May 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 No More Sorrow

well i hope she can run and fast! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

Next update is coming real soon. I think you will like it very much. Thanks so much for reading!!  EA

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 When You're Gone

well im glad that hes dead and bella and edward is alright! cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Run To You

i hope she chooses right! cant wait to see what happens next 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Bless the Broken Road

im glad that everything has worked out in the end! 



Author's Response:

Yes, now they can put their lives back together and move on. Thanks so much for reading, a new chapter will post this weekend. Until then here is a teaser for ya.

“Damn it, Bella,” he sighed in annoyance while tugging on his hair. “I want you to listen and listen good.”

I slowly nodded letting him know that I was.

“First you need to know I am not upset with you. Second, you need to know that my life has been forever changed because you are in it and I wouldn’t have it any other way. I love you so much and I would do anything for you and no matter what it might be that I do, I do it because I want to. I could have chosen to walk away at any time. But I didn’t then and I won’t now. You could never be a burden to me. As far as I am concerned you are perfect to me and for me. Tell me something and you have to be completely honest with me. Will you do that?”

“Yes,” I answered softly. I could see a fire and determination burning in his eyes.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Marching On

well i hope for his sake that they move on and move in with eachother soon ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Chapter 29 will post soon and we will get to see what kind of a surprise Bella has in store for Edward. What Bella doesn’t know is Edward has one of his own planned as well.  In the mean time there is a picture teaser on my blog and twitter. I am edward620 on Twitter and my blog is

www.eternallyaddicted.blogspot.com

 

See ya Friday,

 

EA

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Just Say Yes

excited for them cant wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

HI and thanks for reading. I am so glad that you enjoyed Bella’s gift for Edward and the proposal as much as I did.  Up next we have the big day for our favorite couple. So pack your bikini and your wedding outfit then hop a plane to Capri and join Edward and Bella for their special day.

 

EA

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Marry Me

they are so cute together and im happy that they are preggo! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

Hi, Happy Easter if you who celebrate it. I know it’s been a bit of a wait for the next chapter of TLA, but I promise it won’t be much longer, just a couple of days at the most. In the meantime here is a teaser to get ya by.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I will never be able to express just how much it is appreciated.

 

~Eternally Addicted~

 

 

Chapter 31 teaser…

 

Bella was just about to ring for the nurse and beg to use the bathroom when there was a knock on the door to her room followed by it swinging open to reveal Dr. Cooper pushing in an ultrasound machine.

 

“Thank God,” Bella said a little louder than I think she meant to.

 

“Is everything ok?” Dr. Cooper asked when he heard Bella’s remark. Bella promptly turned various different shades of red upon realizing she had been heard.

 

Trying not to laugh at my wife’s embarrassment, because she was damn cute when she was, I answered for her, “Yes.” I couldn’t stop the soft chuckle that escaped as I finished my answer. “I just think Bella is starting to feel a bit water logged and ready to explode.”

 

“Well then let’s get this done before she does,” he said to me with a slight smile on his face and then turned to look at Bella and said. “Now, I know you are probably pretty uncomfortable having a full bladder combined with the pressure from the baby. The test is easier to do while you have a full bladder, however if it becomes too hard for you to wait or it becomes painful let me know.”

 

“Ok,” Bella said and nodded.

 

“Last thing before we get started,” Dr. Cooper said,” is that I need to apply some gel on your stomach for the transducer to move across it easily. It is supposed to be warmed, but sometimes if it’s a new bottle it can be quite cold. So I wanted to warn you in case.”

 

Bella nodded once again and he squirted the gel on her.  It must have been warm since she didn’t seem to react at all to it being on her. I glanced at Bella and saw her chewing nervously on her bottom lip. But I quickly turned my head in the direction of the machine’s monitor as soon as I heard the familiar thump of my and Bella’s baby’s heartbeat. We had heard it at each one of her previous doctor appointments and had become very attached to its sound and became more and more eager to hear it again at each of her visits.

 

The screen remained blank for a minute or two as the doctor moved the device back and forth over Bella’s abdomen. Suddenly there was what appeared to be what almost looked like a…

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 With Arms Wide Open

well that was a cute chapter i hope that they have more kids a boy for him to carry on his name! keep the updates comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Epilogue...Ever Ever After

well that was a great ending! 



Author's Response:

Hi,

 

Thanks so much for sticking with through the whole story. It really meant a lot to me. It was hard for me to let them go, but at the same time I thought it was time to let them have their happy ever after.   I will be working on some new stuff, but not exactly sure when I will begin posting it.

 

Thanks again,

EA~Mary

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

well im looking foward to seeing what happens next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

looking forward to more 

The Path We Choose by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: This is an AH story with an older Edward who is a single father of 7 year old twins. Bella is a 24 year old model with a heartbreaking past. She’s given up everything to help those she loves and when she and Edward cross paths in Central Park; will they each have found exactly what they both have been longing for?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Single parents , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 627008 Read Count: 148711
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

well im intrested cant wait to keep on reading! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a review. I have 38 chapters of this story done and up on FFN and I hope to post over here every day, or other day at the most. I am so glad you like what you have read so far!

les16~~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

her mom is just so sad !@ cant wait to read the next chapter



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks for reading! Yes, Renee is a piece of work, that is for sure! She comes into play in a big way again later on in the story! In case I haven't told you, there is a blog for this story with pictures and all kinds of other cool things! Check it out if you get a second.

www(.)les16-thepathwechoose(.)blogspot(.)com (just take out the brackets and use only the dots!) I would love to hear what you think of it. We worked really hard on it. Be sure to add yourself as a follower too!

Thank you for the review, I'm so glad you like what you've read so far!

les16~~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well with a kid like that and a daddy like him i would be out of words too cant wait till the next chpater 



Author's Response:

Ha Ha! No kidding! Masen is adorable, I love writing him so much...Maddie too. Can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter. Lots more Bella/Edward interaction as well as more kid time, too. Be sure you let me know what you think. Thanks for reading!

les16~~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i so hate lauren! but at least the got the 2 most adorible kids out of it! cant wait till the next chatper



Author's Response:

Hi there! Yeah, Lauren is a piece of work, you will definitely see her again farther on in the story. I am really glad you like what you have read so far. There are 39 chapters of this story posted over on FFN and I hope to update over here regularly to get you caught up. Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to leave a review. Hope to hear from you again soon!

les16~~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

im happy hes falling for her he needs happness and the kids need someone to love 



Author's Response:

Hey there~

So glad you liked the chapter! Things will definitely be moving along for our Edward and Bella. I have 39 chapters of this story already done and posted on FFN so I'll post here regularly to get you caught up. More to come really soon! Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review. I really enjoy hearing from you!

les16~~

The Reunion by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 254]
Summary:

Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79236
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 25 Sep 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this could be intresting cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

thats hella funny thats what you get for assuming! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

and that must be leah! cant wait to see what instore for the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well if knowing its from a visit from sf it has to be a drag queen! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

lol., thanks:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

well charlie is starting to realize that she hid a lot when she lived with him! cant wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

im so happy for rose! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

well cant wait till the next chatper thanks for the cliffee! 



Author's Response:

You're welcome! Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

well im not lilking jacob but im very happy the finally did the deed ! im just wondering how they are going to deal with a long distance relationship ? cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

well im glad they talked it out cant wati till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

aww im liking the sweet and innocent side to the both of them but whats brewing on the horizon?



Author's Response:

What makes you think I have anything brewing? Oh, who am I kidding. There isn't much, I promise:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

its about time she thinks about the distance! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

well at least they are on the same page! now whos moving where? cant wait till the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

aww how cute! im happy for the both of them! cant wait till the next  chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

i have a feeling that they will go down to vegas or the court house and get married! cant wati till the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

well im happy they finally decided where they are goign and i cant wati to see the out come of it all ! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

well that was a sad chatper but the sooner they leave the faster hell be in sf! cant wati till the next chapter 



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

well soon enough they will be back together ! cant wati till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

how cute he knew what she needed exactly! 



Author's Response:

She really would be lost without him:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

that was totally hot and worth it for bella cant wait till the next chapter ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

im happy that they are back together again and not moping around cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

excited for them! 



Author's Response:

Me too:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

well im sad that it ended but happy that they finally got what they wanted ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

The Dive by dna2679 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Bella Masen, after a bad break up with her boyfriend James meets Carlisle. He helps her in more ways than he can know and she does the same for him. Their lives seem to revolve around where Carlisle works, a bar called The Dive. Carlisle, Bella and the owner of the bar Charlie are their own little family and protect one another. Eventually things get complicated and danger will arise. They will need one another to pull through everything life and others will throw at them. They will face any and all trouble together and hope that they all make it out. Will they be able to or will they face tragedy?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 133291 Read Count: 5723
[Report This] Published: 21 Aug 2010 Updated: 26 Nov 2016
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

good so far will keep on reading i think its funny that they re created hbo porn! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

thank you!!! lmfao me too. i mean come on now, hbo porn is just so damn cheesy and sad. but yet you still watch it lol

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well thats what happens when you have drunken sex! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

i know right. but drunken sex is great sex!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

im happy charlie took the news good! and im excited to see what happens with bella and carlisle! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

yeah Charlie is all excited about being a grandpa. i mean who wouldn't want a grandpa Charlie

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

im so happy for them! they are going to be so happy with 2 babies! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

oh i know.. makes me want twins lol

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

well with all the preggo hormones and adding a new boy into the dynamic ! i would cry too! cant believe that he would forget about her! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

oh yeah. i had some major hormonal moments when i was pregnant so it's only fair that Bella have them too. lol. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

yeah being hormonal is horrible and im glad emmett was able to bond with her to make her fell better! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

yeah it is. hell when i was pregnant i would go from  tears to hyserical laughter in the blink of an eye lol... working on the next chapter now.. will be up today

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

aww they are so cute ! cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

well i think as the time goes on shes going to get more and more jealous becuase she dosent have a man ! cant wait to see how she deals with his new love life and being preggo with his kids! keep them comming 



Author's Response:

i know.. me too. although i already know what will happen. but i could change it up.. keep myself on my toes lol

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well its going to be intresting to see how this relationship develops! and espically how bella takes it ! keep it up ! 



Author's Response:

thanks for the review. you rock

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

well it looks like shes already starting to feel the seperation from carlisle !  cant wait to see what happens next and hopefuly she will meet the best man for her! 



Author's Response:

yeah it was to be expected. and with her being pregnant it was going to be over something small

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

im happy that she finally got her man! cant wait to see what happens next and who shows back up ! 



Author's Response:

me too.. she deserved her happily ever after

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well carlisle seams to have a temper problem! cant believe that he yelled at her like that ! cant wait till the next chapter! also i think that you should do a split pov of carlisle and emmett about this whole thing ! keep them comming



Author's Response:

oh that is in the works as i type lol.... first Carlisle's pov will come and then Emmett's.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

thanks both were great! its amazing that carlisle screwed up huge and now emmett now has to repair his realtionship with him and with bella! cant wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

thank you!!!!!  he over reacted and now he's left with a huge mess and pissed off the wrong person, Peter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

well its hard on one had you want to see your best friend an baby daddy but then on the other hand you dont want to be treated like he has been. he can be happy but not her. and shes not a child shes a grown adult! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

exactly!!!!!!  like a man, he didn't stop to think before he spoke and now he's dug himself into a huge hole

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

im happy shes going home but i have a feeling that hes going to sick his head back in his ass again! cant wait til lthe next chapter 



Author's Response:

me too.. let's hope that he doesn't lodge his head up there again. if it happens again i have a feeling that Peter will take Bella and the boys far away

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

glad that they are back to normal for now ! but i have a feeling its not going to be for very long



Author's Response:

you just never know....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

excited that shes found her forever just thinking that carlisle is going to get more and more jealous when she wants her own life out side of the apartment cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

i'm sure they both will have their moments

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

well i hope that they catch james and edward before something happens to bella and carlisle! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

i know right. let's hope those monsters don't hurt any of them

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

well at least peter knows or feel like james is behind those songs! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

yeah. no one but him and Bella think it's him behind every thing. the others know some one is up to no good but Peter can see things for what they are

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

this isnt good ! she trys to do something nice and it kicks her in the ass! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

oh the next chapter is on it's way and it will be longer.... it has to be. there's too much to put in for it not to be...... and thank you so much for all your reviews!!!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

i hope they get to her sooner than later because i have a bad feeling about james! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

me too.. i had intended to make that last chapter longer but i didn't want to overwhelm anyone. some times chapters can be too long.. ya know.. thanks again for your reply. they keep me going

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

well i hope for her sake that they arrest james in walmart for kidnapping ! cant wait til lthe next chaper 



Author's Response:

thanks... yeah there are twists and turns every where.... next chapter is in progress

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

well at least he killed him self and i hope for her sake that everyone that she loves leaves that room alive! and i hope that the boys will live! cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

well that was an intresting turn of events a girl! thats totally exciting cant wait till the next chatper to see what charlie has left her! keep it up! 



Author's Response:

aww thank you so much!!!! i hated to kill charlie but it was necessary for the story line.... 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

well i hope that they will be totoally happy together! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

i know....  and the next chapter is half done, let's just hope that my computer lets me post when i want to because it seems that this site tends to have major issues with it when i want to post....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

thats hella funny! god shes pumping out an army! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

i know right.. she's a baby factory.. but you had to admit, all of those kids would have more love than they would know what to do with

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

well i hope that they get what they all want! 



Author's Response:

me too!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

well they can never have an easy time togehter! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

they just can't catch a break. but at least they stick together

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

im gald that she made it back to them!



Author's Response:

me too!!! i'm so excited for the next chapter... it's in progress so hopefully it will be ready in time for mothers day

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

well in  the end i hope that she and the baby will be alright and they figure out were and who took her 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

i hope that evreything is alright and in the end that she dosent get preggo by him! keep the updates comming ! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

im excited to see what ahpepns next 



Author's Response:

ME TOO.. THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

well im glad that they are gone but i hope that bella can handle everthing that is handed to her ! 



Author's Response:

thanks for your review!! let's hope she can

Summary:

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Banner by: edwards_girl_1918... Author & Co-Author of some great Fics... check ´em out!!!

4yrs After leaving Forks Bella is ready to face the past. Faithful to her true love she sacrificed her happiness for his future. Now she s returning to Seatle in hopes to soon practice law. He`s moved on sort of, but can Edward forgive Bella´ s secret or is it to late for their ´Happily Ever After´ rated for languge and very lemony lemons!!!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44252 Read Count: 6166
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2010 Updated: 23 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Dirty Little Secrets

liking the story so far looking foward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks.. it means alot to me that you like it..I actually started the story on Fanfiction.net, but I´m in the process of changing things hopefully for the better.... With luck I can have the next chapter revamped by tonight.. thanks for reading!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: What the.... Didn´t See that Coming

well i cant wait till the next chapter ! keep them comming! ducheward is such an ass ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.. i promise not to leave you for to long.. let´s see if doucheward can redeem himself!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

looking forward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Hopefully next chapter will come quickly. It's in my head. I just need to get it on the computer now. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

well i hope that she can get help

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

looking forward to the enxt chapter 



Author's Response:

Glad you like!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

loved the chapter except the bad part.... looking forward to seeing what happens enxt chapgter 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

I appreciate how patient everyone has been. I promise it won't be so long for the next chapter.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

looking forward to mroe

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. More soon!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

More will be coming!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Amazing Grace

it had to have been edward ! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this could be an intresting story ill read the next chatper! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

i dont think hes telling the truth ! cant wait till thenext chatper keep them comming 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well at least shes comfortable! cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

well i think he did it and is just trying to make her think that it wasnt him! and why would there be sand in his hair! cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

well i hope michael is wrong! cant wait to see what twists and turns will come up next! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

well i hope that she remembers more! cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well at least she found out some more from that night! cant wait till the next chaptet

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

i would of kicked him in the  balls! cant wait til lthe next chapter keep them comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

well i hope in the end she can get away from him! keep  the chapters comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i hope in  the end that she gets out of this situation! keep the chatpers comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

well i hope in the long run she kicks his ass! keep the chapters comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

i hope she can stay away! cant wait till the next chatper 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

well i hope that she can get away and stay away next time! keep the chapters comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

well its about time but we shall see what happens when daddy comes to bail out him ! cant wait till the next chatper 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

well im happy shes getting away from the  cullens! keep the chapters comming