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love reading fanfictions but with them starting to get rid of the smut filled ones i feel i need to start to read others on different sites cant wait to read them on this site now !
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
well she just needs to be honest with him cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Author's Response:
honesty is always best, but (((lol)))) I think I would be mortified telling him what my part was in the bananagate...lml
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
well at least she got over the panic attack kinda quick
Author's Response:
Time constraints in writing make it seem that way..by my estimation Edward was with Bella about an hour and Rose and Alice another hour,,,so she calmed down by then ,,,Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you...lml
The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.
“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on.
Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”
She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”
Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”
Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
finally ! i just hope she dosent do anything stupid again! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
So does Edward ....lol
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
that was hott! cant wait to see if she expains more about why the cainning is a hard limit since she reacted to badly to it !
Author's Response:
I'm sure she will,,,thanks for reading and the comments...lml
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
well i hope that in the end that they can help eachother out and she can get better and better
Author's Response:
I think it is going to get worse before it gets better ,,,,Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment ...I have a teaser for you....lml
After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.
Fucking great…
She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.
“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.
“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.
“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
well i hope she finally starts to talk to him! he is her dom and its getting ridiclous that she not being truthful about everything i understand that shes been thru some awful shit but come on! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
She is scared and not sure how to tell him ...
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
well it seams that its festering too much and i have a feeling shes going to crack if something happnens again in the next chapter! keep them comming
Author's Response:
She's not going to be able to keep it all in very much longer, she will crack ....I have a teaser for you...lml
We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.
“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.
“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed
“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”
“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.
“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”
What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?
“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
well at least shes starting to break! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
something tells me it's not over ...
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
well i hope in the end that she finally tells him what happened to her! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml
Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”
“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”
“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.
“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.
“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed.
While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
well i think that more is goign to be comming out soon! cant wait to see waht happen next
Author's Response:
well you know there is always another storm brewing ...
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
well i hope for her sake the next breakdown is the biggest one and lets everything out becuse its horrible to have all these little ones! cant wait till the next chatper
Author's Response:
thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml
A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.
The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.
A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”
I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”
“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
well i hope that it stay like this for a whilel keep the chtatpters comming
Author's Response:
They do need some happy time to be together
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
looking foward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
The next posting will be in EPOV and you'll see what he was thinking throughout all this...thanks for reading...louise
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
well i have a feeling something bads about to happen! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
it should be just the two of them for a few days... and they are always fun together...thanks for reading, here is your teaser...
Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.
“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.
“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish
“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”
“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment
“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
its so difficult for her and shes still learning! but i hope she starts to get it soon or her ass is going to be red all the time
Author's Response:
she was naughty...
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
god shes such a subbard women! its infurating i think leahs jealous of all the time that hes taking up! keep the chatpers comming
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
can she never catch a break! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
well... she has a small vacation coming. that should give her some kind of a break...lol... thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....
“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.
“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.
“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed
“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.
“You talked to Charlie?”
“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.
“What did he want?”
As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”
“And?” I knew there had to be more
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
well i hope hes not back! i cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml
Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.
“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.
“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.
“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”
“My Officer Hawk?”
He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.
“I could have Charlie do it.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
well i hope that they figure it out! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
cant wait to see whats going to happen in the next chapter !
Author's Response:
They go to the club .. and something happens that will take Bella one step closer to her fantasy ...do you remember what it was? If not email me and I will remind you...
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml
Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”
I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”
His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”
“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face.
“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”
“Yes Sir”
“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.
“Tyler, how is the night going?”
“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”
Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”
Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
these 2 give me wiplash! cant wait t osee what hes up to next !
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading ...I have this weeks teaser for you..lml
Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.
“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”
He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”
“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”
Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”
I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
i think he needs to put jess in her place! cant wait to see what happens next to them!
Author's Response:
Something tells me that Jess is not going to get off scot-free...thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, here is this weeks teaser...
Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.
“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”
Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”
“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.” I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention.
Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”
I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”
Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”
“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”
“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”
“Well I don’t know about carefree…”
Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
i hope bella rips her a new one! im excited t osee what happens next
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
well i hope that they get down to what jessica wants and i cant wait to see what happens next to these 2
Author's Response:
yes I meant tete-a-tete...do I say it alot? Now come on you don't really think that I would have them go to Forks in full swing D/s.?...lol...that was a joke. Although here are several who would like to see it...lol...Bella is in no way ready for that and Charlie would be ...I can't even imagine what his reaction whould be. He is going to have enough of a problem with the tattoo...lol.....When was Jane around Alice? I think the only mention was when Alice said about coming to dinner at B&E's and Alice said about Jane's talk and that she calls Aro Master....did she say that happened in person? or did she say that she just doesn't like it ...((you know like it is common knowledge that Jane behaves that way ))...Because even in Bella's room, Jane talked in 1st person because she thought it would make Bella more comfortable I can't imagine that she wouldn't do that in front of Alice...or Esme....(just a thought)
I'm trying to tell this story as true to life as posssible. I know that I take some liberites and I did rush their relationship (( but that was due to time restraints and my day-by-day intent to tell my story))...Ok, I wouldn't say that it was a wasted chapter. There was more information about Aro and Bella's relationship then might have been needed, but thrown into the conversation was some tid-bits of information that was important. Such as people were mad that Edward didn't do something to Jess...well he doesn't have the power to do that. However Aro does and I think he will and I also think that Jess is not going to be happy about that...also Aro is taking care of the Mike situation. (why?) he said he didn't care about Jess but does he really? Jess is signing in under his name and then he has a few weeks where it was clear that someone erased a guest that signed in under him ((did that just make sense?)) that is what Aro wants to talk to Mike about....hmmm....and there were a few other pieces of information in the chapter... so no, I don't agree that it was a waste...besides as I said it was a requested conversation and they needed to have some dinner conversation anyway...lol.....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.
“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting.
“W..Why? You said I could keep it”
Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”
“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.
“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”
Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”
My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”
“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
hes totally hot ! canat wait till the next chapter
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
well i hope in the end that she starts to open up even more ! every chapter we learn more about her horrible past
Author's Response:
I think in order to understand where she is going, we have to have a full picture of where she has been ....as a thank you for leaving a review I sent you a seperate e-mail...lml
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
well excited to see what happens next with these 2! wonder what that dream was all about
Author's Response:
glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.
“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.
“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”
Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”
She shrugged “Someone had too”
I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.
The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
i think you should do an outtake of those 2 going at it! cant wait to see what charlie has to say about edward and to see what else happens
Author's Response:
What 2?
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.
“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.
Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”
“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”
“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
well i hope that he scrams pretty fast or i think jake and edward will take care of him
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
well im glad that hes making happy memories with bella in her hometown! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
well im intrested to see what her reason will be ! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
Edward wants to hear the story and I think he will....
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
thats funny hes pimping out her dog!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
let the dog have a little and its all over iwth ! im excited to see what happens next chapter
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
cant wiat to see what he has instore for her! i hope that they get the truth about james soon!
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
they are just so cute together ! i cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
well im excited to see what she writes !
Author's Response:
Me too...lol...what kind of goals would you go for??? thanks for reading and leaving a comment, until next time..lml
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
well im glad htat the familys getting along but i hope he takes her opionion to heart !
Author's Response:
I think Edward doesn't want to really believe what Bella has suggested, and I also think that he is keeping an open mind until Mr.Weiss meets with them. Besides what on earth would Mike want in Edward's house anyway??? Thanks for reading...louise
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
well im glad taht everyone is getting along im excited for the next chapter
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 (1st half)
looking foward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and leaving a comment...louise
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
love it and that she finally realized what hes there for
Author's Response:
She's getting it...
Date: 15 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
loved it looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
loved the chapter looking forward to seeing the outcome of it all !
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
loved the chapter ! looking forward to mroe
Author's Response:
Thank you ..louise
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
im looking forward to the next chapter !
Author's Response:
thanks for reading...louise
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
loved the chapter looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
loved the chapter looking forward to the next one
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
looking forward t othe next chapter
New banner by Julie C.
Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths. She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.
AH. Canon Couples.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
well i hope that shes able to get away from him soon or they finally get to her to save her from james ! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
well thats intresting cant wait till the next chatper
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
hope for the best for bella ! cant wait till the next chpater
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
well i think that im happy hes finally realized that alice isnt who he wants to marry! hate the cliffe but cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
well thats an intreting turn of events! cant wait to see what happened with him loosing the land! keep the chapters comming
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
im happy that they are getting along very well and that was hot even with the clothes on! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
well i think it would b4e difficult to discuss sex with my brother but he shouldnt reaqlly talk hes been doin it with rosie! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
intresting cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
excited to see what happens next on the ranch ! keep the chapters comming
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
well i think its her dad! cant wait till the next hcapter
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
im happy hes finally asking her for her hand in marrage i cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
well i hope that they figure out whos doing all of this cant wsait till hte next chapter
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
well i hope they get to her in time cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
well i hope emmette will put carmen in her place ! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
thats horrible! and i cant wait till edward and emmett get her back and beat the living shit out of james and his possy!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
well carmen is one stubbared broad! cant wait till the next chapter to see what happens next !
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
i would shoot his ass dead or shoot him and make hims suffer! cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
well i hope that they get to bella before anything happens to her ! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
well i hope they get to her in time ! keep the chapters comming
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
well i hope that she makes it for the sake of edward keep the chapter comming
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
well i hope that in the end that everything turns out alright fort he both of them
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
well sucks to get caught ! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87
well at least they finally got married! cant wait till the next chapter keep thme comming
***NOW COMPLETE***
Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life. She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl. After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart. The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief. She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband? Only time will tell. What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them?
AH/OOC. Canon pairings, with twists. NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness. If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
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Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183776
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
well im glad they got it all out in the open but i have a a feeling that is not over yet! keep the chaptes comming
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
well im happy that she found a friend from back home cant wait to see how thatt goes ! cant wat itill the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
well im sad that they dont get a nice quiet weekend ! i cant wait to see whats instore for them
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
well i hope that bellas mom takes to edward alirght cnat wait till the next chatper keep them comming
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
i just hope in the end she dosent loose her job because of her relationship! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
well im happy that they are all moved in ! cant wait to see how emmett steps it up
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
well in the end i would of done the samething! renee was a piece of work its awful! i hope in the long run that she dosent loose her job! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
well i hope she lets him take her with it sounds great!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
i hope for her sake that he finally talks to her! keep the chapters comming
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
well i would of said that right back and i could imagine how heart broken and hurt she is about it all ! cant wait to see waht happens next chatper
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...
well i hope it goes well for her! i want her to keep her job! keep the chapters comming
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Unexpected Surprises
cant wait to see her reaction! keep the chapters comming
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues
well i hope for her sake the way shes talking iisnt like she wants to get married1 keep the chapters comming
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain
well i hope that after that conversation with esme he goes after her! as im upset about her leaving him but i hope he draged her ass thru court to keep custody of carlie! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache
well i hope for bellas sake that she starts to see some one about what happened! cant wait to see what happens next and i think that you should do an out take of some of the family durring these months that we will not speak of any more ! keep the chapters comming
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
i think that they are not ready to get engaged again. they still need to work thru everything. i just hope he dosent make a mistaake .... cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase
well i would be upset that he got drunk enough to not remember anything and then do what he did! thats funny ! cant wait to see what happnes next
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
well if thats all they have then they match everone else in the world! keep the chapters comming
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
well i hope her mom dosent die and she dosent even bat a lash! excited that shes preggo its goign to be another wild ride for these 2!
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to!)
well im glad that they finally talked about it! cant wait to see what happens next!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed
well that was a great ending! im sorry to see them go!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Kind of Horse You Can Only Find in Bora Bora
well in the end shes been the baby forever and now she wont! all kids are jealous! cant wait to see what ahppens next
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Great Car Caper
well shes a fighter! i hope she just dosent get depressed from all of this! keep the updates commign
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Viscosity
well that was a trip! and all those reasons for his helpers i totally could see my son telling me that ! cant wait to see what ahppens next
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip
well i hope that hes ready for puerbity! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
leave it to emmett to teach that! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
well i hope he made the right decision cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
well im glad that you are making it kind of like real life! cant till the next chapter