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love reading fanfictions but with them starting to get rid of the smut filled ones i feel i need to start to read others on different sites cant wait to read them on this site now !
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
well edward lost his son and got him back i would be highly upset about it ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!
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Shel
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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.
"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."
"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."
"Duly noted, Alice."
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
well both of those boys are very stubbared and its awful cant wait to see edwards reaction and jaspers attitude ! keep it comming
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified!
Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!
XoXo
Shel
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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.
"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.
He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."
Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.
"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
im happy that her and edward are working it out and jasper being the protective brother and all i would be worried also! cant wait till the next chatper to see the budding love between the 2 of them
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.
Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!
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Shel
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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks."
Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.
"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.
"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.
"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
they are getting along for now! i think you should do an outtake about jake to tell us what happened! cant wati till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.
Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!
<3 Shel
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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.
"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."
Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.
"What is your problem?"
"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.
"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
well thats intresting ! cant wait till the next chapter to see what the proposition is!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!
<3 Shel
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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.
'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'
His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.
The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
well i thought it would of been worse ! cant wait to see what esme has to say about it all ! keep up the good work !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!
Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance!
<3 Shel
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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.
"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.
"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.
"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
well i hope tanya isnt one to cause problem with her ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!
<3
Shel
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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit."
"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.
"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
welll i think the love is in the air ! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming and i have feeling victoria will be back around soon enough!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Thanks for all of the love and support!
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Shel
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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.
"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."
Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."
Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."
"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."
Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.
"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
well i have a feeling that next chapter brings back victoria ! cant wait to see what happens next !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"
Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."
Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."
She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
she was bound to come back eventually ! cant wait to see what she says to her ! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!
The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!
♥ Shel ♥
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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."
Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.
"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
well i hope in the long run that they figure out what part james has in all of this ! its goign to be a bumpy road ahead! keep the chatpers comming
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!
I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!
Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.
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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?"
Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."
"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself.
"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."
Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
well thats good that edward is still alive ! keep it up
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?
I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.
"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.
"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.
"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"
Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."
The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.
"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"
"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
well im glad that hes making the decision and not making her make one! cant wait to see what victoria has up her sleeve next!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!
Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me!
♥ Shel ♥
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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.
Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.
"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
well i hope with reuniting with her mom she dosnt just let her bcak in right away! and also i hope4 that not telling edward about the call he dosnt break up with her about it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition!
Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1!
♥ Shel ♥
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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!"
Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully. She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.
"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen.
She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store?
Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
well i hope for her sake her un easy feeling she has because i think something is going to happen when the boys go back to chicago cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.
Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!
Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.
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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."
"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."
Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.
The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "
What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.
"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.
Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.
"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31
well i hope for her sake that she talks to edward about it all ! and i hope that what ever happens in the elevator! hurry wp with the update i cant wait !!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)
I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*
Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.
♥ Shel ♥
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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.
"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."
Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.
"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."
"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.
Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32
im glad that they both are out of the picture
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!
♥ Shel ♥
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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."
She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."
The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"
Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.
"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.
Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33
well i have a feeling that shes starting to reconsider him moving in ! im also happy that everyone is alright !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
In other news, Bella and Jack both won the Avant Garde Awards that they were up for! I simply can not thank everyone enough! You guys are the single biggest reason that this story has been as successful as it has! I adore each and every one of you! And not just for voting or reviewing, but for continuing on this journey with me and loving Jack as much as I do!
I'm shooting to have the EPOV up soon, but he's been difficult. I'm also in the process of writing a Victoria POV for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence compilation. It should be interesting to see how well I can channel bat-shit crazy!
♥ Shel ♥
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"Edward, can I ask you something?" she asked in a quiet voice.
He shifted slightly and brushed a piece of hair from her face. "Anything, baby."
She swallowed nervously, worried about what his response would be to her question. "The documents that James showed me, were they real?"
He took a deep breath and nodded hesitantly. Betrayal pierced her heart and she felt tears spring to her eyes.
"Ssh, don't cry," he whispered, brushing thumbed across her cheeks. "It's not like it sounds."
"Then how is it? Why were you petitioning for custody if you're moving across the country? Or was that a lie?" she replied with a small sob, her body beginning to shake.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34
well im glad she didnt get too upset about the whole thing! im sad with them but in the end they will gonly gorw stronger
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.
The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!
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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"
She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."
Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"
Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"
"That you have a dad now."
"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."
"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"
Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35
im glad that it didnt take him that long! lets get hitched!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^
That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:
Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.
"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"
She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"
They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.
"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."
When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.
"Come on, let's get dry."
Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."
His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.
"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.
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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:
I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.
My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36
happy that shes getting her happy ending!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.
"Understood," he chuckled softly.
"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."
Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."
Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.
"Hello?" he asked softly.
"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.
"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.
"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"
"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue
well im glad that they got everything that wanted in life!
Author's Response:
Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!
The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:
The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.
She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.
"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.
The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.
"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"
"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.
Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.
This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!
Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!
This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......
I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never
argh cliffie endings i hate them keep the chapters comming please!
Author's Response: hehehehehe.... I know sorry.... but thanks so much for reviewing, I don't think I have seen you review before so Thanks a bunch.... I won't keep you waiting long for the next ch...
One tragic night, the world changes for Edward and Bella Cullen. The life they've struggle to build over the last decade is threatened and Edward is left with nothing but his memories as he tries to will his love back to him. This couple has handled a decade of lifes bumps, but can they survive a fork in the road?
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13987 Read Count: 1723
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: It's What You Beget
well i hope for is sake that she wakes up! cant wiat till the next chatper keep them comming
Author's Response:
this is a HEA, don't worry, its just a long journey. thanks for the nice review and I'm so happy you enjoyed the update!
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: An Unexpected Triple
well shes getting better i hope she wakes up soon!
Author's Response:
it's a long road to recovery for them both but they are working their way there.
What are the chances of meeting your soulmate? What if you meet them at the age of 4? Edward and Bella have known each other since kindergarten. A fateful late night call opens their eyes to potentials they never thought of. AU, B/E, A/J, R/Em. Lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62958 Read Count: 27936
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Karma
well thats intresting cant wait till the next chapter
Takes place after Edward leaves in NM.
Follow Bella as life takes her through twists and turns that eventually lead her back to a strangley different Edward. Can true love overcome all lifes jagged twists and sharp turns?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119541 Read Count: 24756
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: If you love something, run away, right?
well i hope we know what happend to edward ... cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Of course. I wouldn't keep that from you :-)
Here's a teaser until then....
I flew through the window and immediately saw Bella’s broken body sprawled out on the floor in a pool of blood. I dropped to her side and pulled her into my arms, carefully looking her over to see where the blood was coming from. I noticed a small piece of her ribcage sticking grotesquely out of her skin and grimaced at the sight. My poor Bella. I quickly checked for a pulse as I rose from the floor with her in my arms ready to take her back to Carlisle.
Pulse –check.
Breathing –check.
Heart beat – check.
WAIT! What was that?
I stopped short and listened intently to the distinct sounds of a rapidly fluttering heart beat. Was someone else in the house? I quickly scanned the near area for any thoughts. Nothing!
Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? Adult language/Violence/Lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42788
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Fallout
i hope some one comes to help them
Author's Response:
they're on their way!! ;) hang in there. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Release
im glad that they are all alright and in the end they have a family
Author's Response:
yep, everything worked out... finally. they have their family and friends now. stay tuned for the epi... lots of HEA in store for these kids. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Full Circle
im glad that they got their happy ending
Author's Response:
yep, everybody got their HEAs. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.
how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.
nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.
warning: dark edward and sexual abuse
Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why. Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see!
-Love Sinister :D
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 18: A Beginning
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: so close but so far away
cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: lost
well i like that you speed it up ! cant wait till they find her!
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: a life
well i hope she runs again! and her and alice stay together ! keep the chatpers comming
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: head start
well i hope they both can run ! keep the chapters comming
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: abandon and sacrifice
well i would eventually think that he would give up! but i dont think he wont! keep the chapters and updates comming
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: leaving hatred
well im glad that they are starting to go out and find their mother! keep the chatpers comming
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
well i hope he finds her and she kills him! cant wait till charlie and alana find bella ! i hope the kids believe her!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: another path
well i hope that she dosent do anything stupid! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: tired of it
well im excited for the next chatper
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: reversed
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
looking forward to more
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
looking forward to mroe
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
looking forward to more
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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.
Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?
Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.
Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q
Teaser Trailer #2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir
im gladthat hes alright ! looking fowardto dinner with the parents !
Author's Response:
Awe, thanks. Me too. It should be very entertaining. Thanks for reading!!
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Twenty Nine- When it rains, it pours
looking fwoard to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Aww! Thannks for reading!! *mwah*
~K
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty Six - Plan B
loved the chapter looking forard to more
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go
well at least she is the one that said girlfirend!
Author's Response:
Exactly!! That answers that question....now, how to explain a broken dick...
Thanks for reading!!
~K
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: BPOV - Inescapable Devastation
well aro kinda creeps me out
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six- White Knighters
that was hott even though it was a dream! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine~Play With Me~
well if thats all he got then i would hope he could die a happy man! cant wait till the next chatper
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten- Relevations
well edward is an idiot! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
well i hope that he knows what hes getting into cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
well i hope that he keeps his balls after his wax
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
shes has some moods! cant wait to see what happens next!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
i hope for his sake that he will live ! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
well i hope for his sake that he dosnt mess up!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
well i hope he didnt make a mistake! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, hun. ;)
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details
well i think shes falling for him too !
Author's Response:
*whispers* I do too ;)
Thanks for the review!!!
~K
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Eighteen - The Plane of Ecliptic
i think he will crack first!
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Nineteen- The Hale Inquisition
well im intrested in his response
Author's Response:
"I did it! I shot the sheriff!" Wait, wrong story ;)
Um, I think deflect is a keyword in Edward's vocab. LOL
Thanks for the review :))
xoxoxo
K
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty One - Show and Tell
well thats not good im excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty Two - Risky Business
well im excited for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Yay!!! I am excited to get it updated. I always am, though ;)) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Much love,
~Krazy
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty Three- Deuces Are Wild
cute chatper im excited to see how their relationship goes on
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries
well im excited to see how this plays out
Author's Response:
:)) Thanks, Hun!!!!
~K
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter Thirty Nine - Technicalities
looking forward to bella hanging edward up by his nuts .... looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!!!! :)
~K
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty Five- The Harder They Fall
she opened up a little ! excited to see whats instore for them next
Author's Response:
Hey, babe!! Thanks for the review!! Heres a little sneak peek into the next chapter :)
Chapter Twenty Six
~Around and Around We Go~
Bella led me upstairs towards her room, and as I stared at her swaying ass in front of me, I wondered what she was planning. When we were down in the living room, the tone of her voice and the way she grabbed me had led me to believe that she had some naughty things on her mind.
However, when she overshot her bed and took me straight to her closet, I was a little disappointed by her turn of direction...albeit confused.
Keeping quiet, I watched as she reached in behind some of her hanging cloths and pulled out a little step ladder. She then brought it to the other side of her walk-in and unfolded it. After she positioned the ladder where she wanted it, I looked up and saw where her main focus lied.
There in the far left of her closet were countless shoeboxes, stacked high to the ceilings, and what seemed like a chaotic system to me was, somehow, oddly uniformed.
The questions were now just rolling through my mind at an endless succession and planting themselves on my tongue...
What is she doing?
Bella gave me a sideways glance as she climbed to the top step and reached up to one of the plentiful boxes. She looked unsteady as she raised herself to her tippy toes, and I was suddenly overcome with panic as I imagined her losing her balance and crashing to the floor. So, I walked over to her, casually, and situated myself directly under her...just in case she fell.
Finally after a few worrisome minutes, Bella obtained what she was looking for and pulled down a large Steve Madden shoebox.
"Here, take this," she instructed as she handed the box to me.
The weight of it was slightly heavy, and I could only imagine what sort of hidden secrets were stored in there...Well, that was if they were secrets at all. Hell, for all I knew, this box could be filled with cuffs and vibrating dildos.
However, the way she was looking at me, all nervous and uneasy like, I had a feeling that it was something else entirely.
"What is this?" I asked, curious.
"It's everything you asked for, Edward," she replied somberly. "It's the good and the bad."
"Should I be scared?" I joked to ease the tension.
"I don't know," she said cocking her eyebrow at me. "Do you scare easily?"
I shook my head. "Not usually."
"I think you just open it and find out," she said encouragingly. "This is the good."
"Okay," I said as I flicked the top of the box off with my thumb.
As I stared down at the inner contents, I realized that I wasn't going to get time in the playroom like I originally hoped; instead I was going to get something far more lasting...
I was getting her.
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly
looking foward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks for reading, Hun!!! Have a great weekend!!
xoxo
~K
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Seven Auld Lang Syne
loved the chapter looking forward to mroe
Author's Response:
Awesome!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! Have a great weekend!!! xoxoxxxooo
~K
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, sweets!!!
xoxo
~K
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty One- Dante's Infereno
loved the chapter looking forward to the enxt chapter
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty Two- Redemption
loved the chapter looking forward to the next one
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty Three- Purgatory
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Four - Chutzpah
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 15 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty-five - Four To One
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 14 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter Thirty Eight- The Proposal
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter Forty - The Reckoning
wow i didnt see that one comming ... looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, hun!!! *mwah*
~K
Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-One - What Comes Around
looking forward to more
Date: 26 May 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter Forty-Two - Morbidity is the Omission of Sorrow
loved the chapter looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, doll!!
~K
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Three - Shell-shocked
looking forward to mroe
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Four - Moving Forward While Standing Still
loved the chapter looking forward to mroe
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, hun!!! Have a great weekend :))
~K
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Five - Desire The Fire
looking forward to more
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Epilogue
great ending
Author's Response:
Awwwe, thanks for reading and I hope I did it justice. ;))
~K
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
well it was hott till she had her night mare but thats what to expect cant wati till the next chapter !!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...lml
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
well in the end she will eventually realize that she has to start asking him everything
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
im glad that they duked it out and now everything is alright betwee them! im intrested to see how the rest of their weekend will turn out
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
i hope that they start to figure out whats going on! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml
I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”
“Don’t say that!”
I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”
Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”
Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”
“No…” why the hell would I think that?
“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
im liking this story cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, here’s your treat
a little teaser
“Baby, I’m going to have to hear all your shit. I need to know. Because I need to be able to know what’s ok and what’s not. I need to know how far to push you, without causing damage either physically or emotionally and I don’t ever want to hurt you. You are going to have to trust me with everything you have in you. It’s a process, we start out slow, when I can trust you, and you can trust me, without any doubt” He smiled “Baby, that’s when we made it to the top. But it’s a long way up there. There’s going to be lots of tears and letting go.” He took a deep breath, glanced around the street then looked back into my eyes “My question for you is, do you want to climb up that ladder with me?”
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
well im glad that they are getting a long a bit better but the ball is going to drop with her and its going to end bad! catn wait till the next chatper
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Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.
“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.
“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.
“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.
“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
well ium excited for the both of them. cant wait to see this relationship between bella and jane cant wati till the next chapter
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Jane is going to be very good for Bella...you'll see...thanks for the comment ...lml
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
well i cant wait till the next chapter wouldnt mind know what happend when she left the room
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You'll find out Thursday ...Thanks for reading ...lml
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
cant wiat till the next chapter !
Author's Response: Because it's thursday i do have a teaser for you...thanks for the comment...lmlx8 I listened to what he said and then a thought occured to me. “You know what I think?” He raised his eyebrows, “No I don’t, but I would love to hear it.” “I think you are wrong…” Edward raised his eyebrows in disbelief, but I went on to explain before he could interrupt my train of thought. “ …about us needing to go to the club more often just to let people see us. I think we should go as you have already planned, but not any extra times just to appease your adoring public.” Edward got that perplexed look on his face again. “Think about it. All anyone really knows is that I showed up one night with Aro’s card. You yourself were kind of intrigued about how I knew him.” Edward nodded, “You’re right I was. Aro doesn’t give them out.” I went on with my theory while Edward’s hands moved down to rub my bottom. “Then the next thing anyone knows is that sometime within the next week you and I got together, and then when they see us I’m sporting your collar around my neck. Now, in order to justify why that happened they come up with all sorts of circumstances that would explain it. Which is alright, but then like an arrogant child who is looking for attention from their daddy, they start spouting it to others, knowing it’s going to get back to you.” “Is that the psychologist talking? Because let me get this straight. They…” he pointed to my computer “… are the arrogant child and I am the daddy, and they are doing this to get a rise out of me?” I nodded. “And it’s working.”
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
well i keep thinking that the ball is goign to drop and their happyiness is going to disappear cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
hmmm...as I said before, I'm not an angst person, it makes me nausous...seriously..lol However my story is slow to boil...thanks for reading and leaving a comment ..lml
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
well im glad shes starting to open up even more cant wait till the next chapter
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“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.
“I turned it off”
“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.
“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.
“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
well i hope that she starts to learn becuase i dont think shes going to deal like this for much longer! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
i hope she learns too, becasue poor Edward won't be able to take it either, which you will read on thursday...lml
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
cant wait to see what happens next with these 2! its such a up and down road with them both ! i think an out take with him sitting there in the ob office would be great !
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lol ..on the ob...thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you..lml
Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”
“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.
“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”
“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
well im glad that shes relizing that she has to give her self to him and trust him! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
She knew, she just needed a reminder. Jane helped her see that...lml
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
well hopefuly she wont regress back to what she was doing cant wait till the next chatper
Author's Response:
I think the lesson was learned ...lml
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
well cant wait to see if she can do this ! keep the chapters comming
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While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.
“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.
“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”
“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”
I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.
“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.
“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
loved the chapter looking forward to more